I recently received some tips about my face and head proportions, and I want to know if there are any other issues that are presented within this piece.
>>2482955
you're welcome
>>2484178
Thanks?
>>2484148
>any other issues
Dude the whoke thing is an issue. The proportions are off, those tits are broken and the fat distribution would leave this woman in her back like a fucking tortoise.
>>2484815
The intention clearly was to have a somewhat sexy character, not a perfectly shaped human being.
How come you guys like to take shits on realism but then you also take shits on people who aren't realists ?
>>2485050
its not completely stylized and not completely realistic so its at a pretty ambiguous middle ground
you can keep telling yourself the proportions and anatomical issues are a stylistic choice, but you will also never improve.
maybe your style can appeal to some people including yourself, i dont think thats a bad thing since i like anime style and in essence its the same as what you are doing
if anything make sure you understand how shapes form on the human body. those tits have a strange shape and are representation of tits rather than drawn in a believable way, the arms are poorly constructed and i personally find the lower body to be way too big in all aspects
>>2485050
Because what you drew isn't even remotely sexy. How do you expect to properly accentuate the sexual features of a female body when your anatomy is completely fucked?
Go back and learn the basics.
>>2485608
Give up on this one mane, the artist decided online critiques are too mean for her and left.
Your advice helped me thoughl
