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Last Thread >>2407246
This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make anime work in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, have tanoshi!

>Fresh off the boat? Get back on the boat and read THIS:
http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-draw-learn

https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/
>Proko
http://www.proko.com/videos/
>Ctrl+Paint
http://ctrlpaint.com/
>Hitokaku Index
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
>0033
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317
>List of active livestreams
http://livestreamstatuslist.appspot.com/
>fellowBro's books
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>Tutorial/Reference Collection
http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
>Risingsun Anime Tutorials
http://iradukai.com/
>Figures
http://reference.sketchdaily.net/
>Pose Practice
http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html

Remember the words of our good friend Glen Vilppu: “No rules, just tools.”

/ic/: "Daily reminder that one Artist can now make up to 25k biweekly"
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alt thread is dead as a motherfuck
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>>2427988
draw thread is pretty slow too

Isn't it because everyone is at the LAS thread these days?
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>>2427906
Who made this?
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Thoughts on this/CC before going any further.
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>>2428256
neck is connecting way too far to the right, also the clavicles are pointing the wrong direction, foreshortening on her right (our left) arm is mucked up to where it looks way too short, overall the pose and drawing feels very stiff, the boobs are facing toward the viewer while her ribcage is facing almost at a 3/4ths view, also look into arm anatomy, you're making a classic mistake on the shoulder muscle of the arm holding the whip handle, whole thing feels flat

tl;dr go and study how to think and draw in 3d as well as do more overall anatomy studies, also study faces, basically just keep studying everything, you've gotten this far, you will only become stronger still, and remember
NEVER GIVE UP
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also, i cleaned this up so i could hopefully post it hear and maybe get some feedback since the pron thread's gone nuclear
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original drawing ?
searching purposes
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>>2428164
>>2428293
anon from last thread
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I keep trying to over render simplistic kawaii anime faces and then it looks like nightmare fuel
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Is there any resource simmilar to that 0033 stuff but in english? I like the way it looks but I can't speak alien so it's hard to make much sense of it, sometimes I can get what it means from context but usually it's just random drawings with alien symbols next to it.
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>>2428164
tenhit.tumblr.com
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>>2428384
Some of those are translated to english
Anyone have them?
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>>2428352
You have the same problem that is and i'll tell you what we both need to do to fix it: Learn facial structure. It'll help. It's helping me already. Study that, study faces, then go back to stylization.

Cause your coloring itsself is not the problem here, your understanding of facial structure is what's giving the colored version that uncanny valley feeling.
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2 of the 6 protagonists from my future experimental comics.

Depending on their current appearance, is there any assumption you might have? and why? ( for example, right one has weird orange arm, she must be neo-nazi. )
Yes. I know they are muddy and generic, I'm working on it.
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>>2428421
I like your style. The one on the left is a slut because of the gym shorts and loose top. Right has some bs magic armor shit that makes her skin indestructible.
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>>2428421
The one on the right looks like she fisted a bag of cheetos
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Fuck snow, I'm done. Onto the next one.
>>2428421
First off, I've been a fan of your style since I saw the drawing with the girls gathered around the table playing poker or something, can't remember.
Anyways, the left one looks like your unlikely neet protagonist with hallucination problems that gets picked out of her zone of comfort zone.
The right one looks like a mercenary rave girl that's bout to detonate an EMP and take everything electronic [cyborg or w/e] down with her in an act of heroic insanity.
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well, whatever
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when did /ic/ became a rabid haven of circlejerking
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>>2428581
When you last posted and no one gave you any attention.
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>>2428605
poor little babby cant handle a slice of real life aww... ;-(
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studies were getting a bit boring, so i added some scale and a loli
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>>2428649
wow this is so amazing i have no critique its perfect like all the works here. id give you an ilama if /ic/ allows it
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>>2428652
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>>2428649

That's a intense fetish...
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>>2428649
Is it a city within a giant cave next to a giant loli, or is it a normal loli and cave with a miniature city and people?

Very interesting.
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>>2428649
She's about to have her way with those poor people and their cities, isn't she?
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drew a goombella
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>>2428677
this is the best in the thread one ilama for u
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>>2428649
the dept makes it look like it's a normal girl, in a normal sized cave, with a small town, and knowing you that's not what you wanted to show

look into some atmospheric dept, since I am not good enough to teach you, just to notice it
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I just want to say that I adore the header pic. It kind of reminds me of Dragons Crown.
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>>2428820
I'm pretty sure that's Odin's Sphere

Kamitani is pretty awesome
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>>2428827
anime style is so refreshing when there is actual dimension and movement in the pictures
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>>2428820
Thanks man :)
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>>2428878
very nice! do you just post here or do you have a blog somewhere?
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>>2428421
nice drawings, the only things that stick out to me is the rifles. The one on the left is a hk416, usually the ejection port should be on the right side. The one on the right the optics dont make sense. You drew the eotech then the magnifier, its should be the other way around, then again this can be a stylized choice. Its subjective but alot of gun and /k/ fags will notice the attention to realism. Little details will go a long way.
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>>2428427
>>2428466
lol. No!! but fair enough. thanks.

>>2428477
You are one of the very first fans of mine.
I'm not bragging about it and I'm not a pro, but knowing there's someone likes my stuff gives me chills.
I've been making fictional characters for comics but your assumption is very convincing and interesting.

>>2428966
Actually, the left one is HK416A5 16.5" + NcSTAR CPO + Magpul AFG.
the right one is M39 EMR + Holographic Hybrid Sight II™ EXPS2-2 with G33.STS Magnifier + Crimson Trace MVF-515.

So basically, you are correct. DEAD CENTER correct. even your eotech ref image is identical as mine. thought my drawing is not big enough to identify small things such as sight, but you did it.

My ref photo for HK416 was in wrong direction, so I mirrored image, then drew from that. without knowing that ejection port is also flipped. I know it's not generally correct to draw like that, but it's easy to miss. Also, HK416 in my drawing is little bit short. don't you think? too short.

I laughed myself that I've been misunderstanding how magnifier works in hybrid sight. so apparently, magnifier comes closer to my eye, not further. silly me. Thank you for mentioning.
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>>2429088
autism
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Shitfuck i give up.

When i was sketching it up i knew i will fuck up the background and so i did.
Nobody can stop me from fucking everything up.
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>>2429130
>Nobody can stop me from fucking everything up.

Atta boy.
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Whoever drew this is God. I hope they are still in this thread. I am an assistant recruiter for Ringling College of arts and design, and would like to see more of your work for a potential scholarship of up to $10,000
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>>2429376
>My dad works for Nintendo.
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>>2429376
$10,000 exactly? You arent willing to negotiate more?
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>>2429376
works perfect thanks I now earn 100 dollars from home every day!
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>>2427906
>that construction

What type of method was use to measure those face features?
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>>2429396
Probably just intuition and eyes at center of face, bottom of nose 1/2 between center and chin, bottom of lips at 1/2 that.
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>>2428393
Thank you.
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>>2427906
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>>2429418
also tried experimenting with random colors
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raw sketch lf any crit
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>>2429807
looks good my dude
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>>2428966
Thank you good spirit of /k/ for pointing out disgusting inaccuracies in gun drawings. You never fail to warm my heart.
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>>2429807
the muscles of the arms don't "flow" together too well, so when you tinker with it further I'd pay attention to that since they're a bit blocky right now.
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Done but in the monkeyhouse.
If there are any glaring mistakes lemme know.
(right hand is supposed to be much bigger)
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>>2429942
Even if you're going for big hands try and make a curvature more apparent in the wrist holding the mace.

Right now the hand is jutting out, but if you moved the tops of the knuckles down and to the right a bit, then adjusted the hand accordingly, it would look better.
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>>2429807
ankles could be a bit thinner
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>>2429948
Ty for feedback, this does feel a bit more natural. I realise I have a habit of drawing hands in the same angles. Gonna work on that for my next pic
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>>2428411
Thanks buddy, I'll get back to the grinding stone for faces.
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thx for the feedback

I might go for shadowing with a bit of hatching so forms don't get lost
any feedback?

>>2429968
make left hand giant too
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>>2429990
really cute, but i do think the hatching makes the flowers look a bit flat, especially the one in the background. I also feel like the flowers would look more realistic if you'd make the petals overlap a bit more with the brown middle part they're connected to
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>>2429968
I think the anon was talking about something like this. Like the rhythm that comes from the wrist to the thumb.
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>>2430009
SDhit fuck I messed that up cause it was mirrored in my drawing software.

That looks many times more fluid than either of the things I did.. Thanks for the extra effort on my part.
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>>2429990
your sketch was much better than this. Almost everything about it was more appealing, line wise.

Try experimenting with concave shapes for the arms, they'll make them look more feminine and the muscle transitions smoother (and again more feminine)
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thx senpaitachi
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>>2430037
will try that now
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>>2428701
is this better?
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>>2430273
I think she should be affected by atmospheric perspective more.
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>>2430273
That fucking CIA guy
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>>2430340
He wasn't alone.
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>when you're drawing a cute anime girl but you have to switch to boring landscape study every time your parents enter your room
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>>2430388

>not hanging up cute anime girl posters in your room to condition your parents it as a normal thing

Grow some balls.
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Last time, I screwed up my anatomy and my rendering was too flat. So I focused on those this time.

What should I work on for the sake of improvement? Also, how's the girl?
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>>2430388
>10 years later
>you are now a pro landscape artist
>oh and you still live with your parents
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>>2430388
mfw my family actually likes cute animu chicks
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other than the fact that it's not done, is there anything odd that stands out?
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>>2430461
the right boob for some reason
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>>2430458
your family might be autistic
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>>2430482

idk about that, but I know for sure one of them is gay
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>>2430273
Why is there so much empty/redundant space in this picture?
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>>2428677
If there was a book on Goomba anatomy then I would tell you how your drawing is complete shit, but there isn't, so I'll say that it's pretty good
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>>2430461
Yeah, somethings def wrong with the boobs
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>>2430473
>>2430533
Well fuck. I'll go back to the sketch with some reference then. Ty
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Finished my 1st stream. I will upload the video later.
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>>2430635
her left eye is drooping and her nose mouth isnt following the angle and need to be slightly separated
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>>2430495
Oh wow, I started this as an environment pic at first, but it never crossed my mind to do that. this is looking like a good idea, thank you, anon.
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I feel burnt out with this. I didn't have any particular direction to start with which might have something to do with it, but I've come to a point where I feel like now I'm just polishing a turd. Any thoughts or paintovers would be appreciated.
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>>2430495
how did you realize that mistake, is it even possible to get to your level
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>>2429418
Is there anything wrong with those proportions and anatomy?
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>>2430754
were you following a cyarin tutorial?
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>>2430795
no tutorials, started with painting the nose from imagination for practice then just kept going from there. And just checked out Cyarin, looks decent so thanks for the ref ^-^
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>>2430794
yes, plenty
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>>2430884
Which parts please
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How long did it take for you guys to finish Drawing on the Right Side?
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>>2431014
a couple days
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>>2430635
ily firez bby pls have my children.
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>>2430923
your drawing doesnt have a single correct aspect and its really annoying to go through works like that and say what is wrong. Thats the reason nobody bothers.

At your level, let go of extreme perspective and learn to draw things correctly at 0p
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>>2431117
Just general advice please, I need to see what youre seeing other than the arms
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>>2430546
I've been seeing your sketches for a little while now, do you have a blog anon? I like your buildings.
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>>2430461
Flip the image dude something's fucked in the face.
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>>2428649
giant loli anon is this you
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>>2431199
Yes hello
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>>2429942
>looking at this
>Huh, I kinda like that
>Go on my Tumblr later
>turns out Im following you
Small world
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>>2431211
can i have the link to your pixiv?
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>>2431281
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=304834
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>>2431289
How about a Tumblr?
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>>2428289
The upper leg is long af.
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>>2431293
ain't got a tumblr sorry.
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>>2431314
You wanna make one?
I follow U
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rate /ic/
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>>2431337
The Style I wish to emulate but still am learning to draw
Prettygood
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Got high and drew a purple dude last night
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there is my true problem. i dont like the chinese cartoons style at all, is too flat for me, BUT, my "semi-realistic kr0npr1nz wannabe style" is fuckin disgusting, how can i fix this, help me /ic/
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>>2431365
>Study fundamentals
>Study head and face
>Understand how the face works
>Stylize the face
>Look at other artist and understand how they stylize
>Replicate their style
>Study some more
>You can draw eyes now
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>>2430495
She's a big girl
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>>2431382
Bane?
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>>2431365
>i dont like the chinese cartoons style at all

Because your face is terribly done and looks like shit. The problem comes from you in both cases, not from the style.
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>>2431404
thats a chicken scratch lol
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>>2431415
Is that supposed to be an excuse? Because all I'm seeing is that you're complaining how you don't like "chinese cartoon style", then you show that you can't draw it for shit. Same for semi realistic.
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>>2431130
http://waxnova.tumblr.com/
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>>2428649
look at the size of people close to that cylinder bulding they are way too big compered to taht bulding.
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>>2431315
nope sorry.

>>2431460
i tried to follow >>2430495 's suggestions.
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>>2430707
It's quite subtle but you're right, I will try to be more careful

>>2431052
ily too anon <3.

I speed up the thing to 3 mins:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dl12flxAOd8

The music is also mine, sorry about that
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>>2431508
i like the prev version better it shows more environment knowldedge and loli is not the focus subject of the illustrat
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>>2431337
4.9/10?
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This stylization thing is really fucking hard. I've been trying to make a stylized drawing of a girl from the dorm that I sometimes see in the halls. She is small and cute, she's like a cute mouse: Her face is sorta squashe like an elipsoid shape or something with button nose and she has those frizzy hair like hermione did in the first hp movie but black. Also wears glassess that literally are the same shape like her head. I've already fucking tore through 6 pages of sketches and I either make her into a rodent or she's not cute enough. How do I deal? I did not think this would be so fucking hard especially since she already looks like a cartoon character irl.

Pic related are my closest sketches. Messy, I know, It was already an hour of sketching and I was kinda mad and tired. The one on the right is a bit too sexy and bold but it's nice and round. The left one is really closer in cuteness but it's not eound enough. I feel like her cheeks should be higher to make it rounder but all attempts fail.

I guess I'm asking for advice? I don't even know, I guess I just wanted to vent my frustrations to someone.
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>>2430495
Much better before sempai
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>>2431876

oh god this is terrifying
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somehow this >>2430495

looks better than

>>2430273
>>2431508
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>>2431907
Sorry... I'll try to work on it more.

I can't figure out why though...
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>>2431903
I much prefer the girl at a larger size, but is it perhaps the over-detailing of things that's making it look worse?
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>>2431614
how do i catch your streams bB? We should make a thread just for you so we can bump it when you're streaming, im sure that would go well with the community!
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>>2431337
would fug/10
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>>2431508

there's no way the water could be so deep that close to the shore, just saiyan, unless she's, you know, kneeling, in wich case it looks silly
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>>2431876

looks like the rugrats all grown up after meth
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>>2431903
>>2431907
Well, I did what I could quickly. Probably can figure out what to do with it more after work.
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>>2430546
It seems like you have a lot of trouble with hair and cloth, and I would soften the edge of the front plane of the face, considering it's a grill. Some line weight to make the image read better would do wonders here. I like this but it's hard to look at without line weight and anything to make it seem less crowded.
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>>2431876

what is this thing
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I want to build some kind of device that sends a signal to my computer the moment someone opens the door telling it to switch workspace or something like that
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>>2431876
Nice muscle elves :^)
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>>2432040
Now she looks like a cardboard cutout. Try increasing the contrast a bit and add more shadow or something.

>>2431876
Looks like something from a European cg cartoon
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>>2432016
I have my doubts, mostly due to the usual trolls but if I ever were to stream consistently I will post it on my blog.

<-Trying to find some good base colors
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>>2433104
I would like it to be a thing that exists, but i was obviously joking.
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How the fug do you start drawing animu? I can never think of how to simplify stuff. Should I just study other styles and just pick shit I like from them?
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>>2431876
Is she from whoville
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>>2431876
dude just learn your fundamentals, learn some character design theory, study other artists that have a style you like and you will have a better time
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>>2430479
Femurs as long as entire upper body
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>>2433104
make her pelvis bone show more hngg

her neck is too long right now, and her jaw is too big it seems jhon leno
draw a bee around
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>>2431299
they're both long, the bottom one is just experiencing some foreshortening
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>>2432040
What if she is hiding instead. The environment study is dope.
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>>2433129
Sorry, I meant the stream but I appreciate the sentiment <3

>>2433265
Thanks I will try to fix those later in the process, I don't want to mess with the layer mask at this moment.

Nice wolf btw, I just wish his fur looked softer
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>>2433267
To clarify, the upper part of both legs are long. Below the knees look fine
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I kinda want to finish this, any major problems?
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>>2432040
I don't know if this will work but maybe create a focal point by blurring the front plane a bit?
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>>2433151
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>>2431508
the cave just looks like a normal cave tho. it makes it seem like those are just really small people. also the lolis design doesnt fit the environment but thats just me
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>>2433738
I've always seen that being done, but I'm always not sure how much of blur is too little or too much.

>>2433271
It was one and then I added the girl lol

>>2432841
I'll try to define the left side of her form with a bit more light and add some more shadows to her body later.

I'm mainly trying to adjust the small city/her size so that she belivably fits in the body of water at the moment.
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>>2433695
her left hand is flat like paper, unless you are fixng it later when coloring
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>>2433870
C-coloring, yeah...
I'll definitely fix it up if/when I do finish it, thanks anon.
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>>2433797
oh I really like it this way
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>>2434157
i doubt even the largest bat would be visible at that distance
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>>2430546
really enjoying your drawings, keep it up!
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>>2428654
Quick and dirty, but it should be helpful.
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>>2431382
for you
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>>2431508
The cave is too bright.
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>>2435058
Shit, I replied to the wrong image.
>>2433797
Try This.
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>>2435033
i like the puffed cheek better desu
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I dont draw as much as I wish I did. But I am just coming here to say that these generals usually produce some of the most coolest, creative, original art on /ic/. I hope that one day I can join the ranks of you guys.
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>>2435072
>>2435058
fucks sake stop spamming
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Can we just move on to the next giant loli? This one is getting old.
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>>2435432
You cheeky little cunt,
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>>2435432
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>>2428649
>>2430273
>>2430495
>>2431508
>>2432040
>>2433797
>>2435058
>>2435072
>EIGHT FUCKING REVISIONS
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>>2435432
i was about to say retard here someone please explain then i realize when lolis age theyre not lolis anymore lmao
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>>2435511
You shut up your mouth I want the perfect giantesse loli showing her glorious scale and dominion.
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More alternative than anime, but could you guys rate my stuff?
1/3
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>>2435544
2/3
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>>2435545
3/3
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who up
hit that redline
pls
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Previously posted to /tg/ but thought Id give over here a shot for any more critique. I know the eyes and hairline are a little wonky but cant fix it just yet.
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>>2435544
>>2435545
>>2435548
get some glasses and a hard brush.
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oh wow this thread went to shit real fast after someone complained about the rinfag spam
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.
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>>2435719
firez, midline, nose. you also lost your above view not sure if intentional. I would also recommend you change your hip escalation area if you change the perspective.
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>>2435719
This isn't your best work, Firez. Nonspecific criticisms are basically useless, but I want to tell you that this is not pleasing to look at.
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>>2435719

the background???why???
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>>2435785
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Fist post here, can anyone help me with her pose? it just seems so rigid...especially the legs, I've been working on the legs for about an hour and I just can't seem to get them right, so i'd like to take a break from the piece for a while and get some feedback.

Also, any tips on painting? My web browser blocks ctrl+paint for some reason
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>>2435795

What is she supposed to be doing? Just posing with an attitude? Also, is it supposed to be a upshot or straight on?
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>>2435795
>>2435591
>>2433695
>>2429418

one foot in, one foot REEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>2430479
blog!
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>>2435798
I don`t know desu, I just felt like drawing Cammy since i`m not too good at people. I guess if anything it would be at a straight shot. I may just make this a portrait and see if I like it from there

>>2435804
I can only draw gundam-boots for feet :)
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>>2435809
you have no idea what "one foot in, one foot REEEEEEEEEEEEEE" means do you?
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>>2435815
nawww i`m pretty new but i figure your triggered from the position of the right foot being retarded?
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>>2435819
No he's triggered by himself being retarded. Apparently he thinks people need to be drawn with their feet parallel or some other stupid way that isn't the most common way people support their weight.
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Is something like this more interesting?
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>>2435829

If you're struggling with poses I'd recommend you to take off some pressure on yourself. Invent less and steal more, i.e. study the works of accomplished artists such as Bengus
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>>2435819
>>2435822
actually im against the use of one foot in one foot out as a way to give faux-dynamism as it is the most common cope out for people who cant draw poses.
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>>2435835
It's not a cop out, it's how people fucking stand when they're just standing around. If you're going to draw a character standing and not doing much it would look awkward and unbalanced if you didn't have the feet pointing slightly away from each other. There's no reason to make the drawing look retarded just to avoid using a common pose that's common because it's how people really stand. Even if you draw them running or a number of other poses you're going to end up with the feet pointing away from each other often. It looks better, it occurs naturally, get over it.
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>>2435804
Then I shall crop out my feet! because they were kind of unimportant to the neutral standing pose.
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>>2433797
The girl doesn't really fit in well with that pose. Might be because you just scalee her up and didn't change her pose. By the looks of it, she should be kneeling in the water instead of standing. Or if she is standing then we should see more from her legs.
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>>2435735
Sorry, you said something along those lines in the past thread, I forgot about it.

>>2435793
Is the tones/hues that bother you?

>>2435755
That is a real shame because I considerably revised it since the last time, I wish you could tell me why isn't pleasing too look at.
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from a couple days ago

also, does anyone know how to make a brush in manga studio that emulates photoshop behavior with regards to keeping opacity? i haven't really been able to get similar function through my own efforts but i'm also probably just retarded
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>>2436056
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>>2436092
wow wtf i've never even seen this option before, thanks family
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Thanks to anon that gave crits last upload. Adjusted a few things, New lines with new brush. Any other things that stand out before I carry on? Also, i know face is shit, will re-do.
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>>2435432
>>2435511
Sorry :( This is the last one of this piece that I'll upload I promise.

>>2435072
Definitely seems easier on the eyes, I took the suggestion.

>>2436021
I've tried to make the body of water seem deeper.

>>2436056
I really like this.
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>>2436265
I never seen a cave that big
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>>2435838
its really not that common, youll notice that people are always putting a 90 degree angle to it. its really just a cop out.
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>>2436306
i bet you havent seen a giant purple loli with horns either...
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hook me up with some sai pencil brushes famolgas, or anything pertaining to pressure curves and how to cop a real traditional pencil look (pic related)
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>>2435833
Thanks! Never knew his name was Bengus, you sure gave me a huge blast of nostalgia anon
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>>2436265
I really dont like how you have the light line all around the figure, it makes it suoer contrasting because the overall picture is going for realism when it comes to lighting, yet this is huge stylization thats out of place as its not repeated anywhere in the pic.

tldr: style inconsistency
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idk what am I doin
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>>2436578
Too symmetrical. Reeks of mirror tool.
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>>2436578
UNITINU
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Is my construction looking ok? I posted sometime ago and an anon mentioned that I kept drawing lowface. I tried to fix, but I'm not sure if I'm heading in the right direction.
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>>2436709
>okay, I made a nice construction
>now let's put some symbols on top of it
you make me sad, anon
I'd rather see no face than a flat one.
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>>2436709
nope.
you didn;t get a ball right, and the rest is based on a wrong ball. you need better fundamentals to start constructing faces.
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>>2435785
>>2435793

Firez listen to this anon man. He has a GOOD point.
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Designing a little deer character.
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>>2436709
Draw cubes+rectangles of various proportions from many angles. like, a thousand, seriously. You think in 2d, gotta think in both.
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I don't actually know where I'm going with this one, developing a style is a struggle for me.
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>>2436765
Head is too big for a more realistically-proportioned body.
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>>2436709
beg thread
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Operator-chan

>rip me a new one /ic/

And I'm aware of how messy it is. Pencil and paper for me tends to be that way and I'm not in the situation of digital art at the moment.
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Wip something random.

Any critique is welcome.
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>>2436928
i tried..

the gun looks a bit flat anon, try adding a little perspective maybe?
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tried some loomis

..i'm still not really sure about my skintones
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>>2436745
Frankly, I'm probably missing his point that is why I was asking if he meant that the values were off or if the issue with the bg is something else.

I know this is a revision in the same thread but I think I made some considerable changes
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>>2437284
I'm not feeling too great about the structure around the mouth area, it seems like it's too far back so the nose and mouth central lines look misaligned.
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why are anime chins inverted curves at a profile
am i missing something about real chins or is it just stylization
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>>2437300
It's not the values, it's the colors. She's in a totally different environment right now; his fixes make her more purple to fit the ambient light, or make the background more green to fit her.
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>>2437303
alright
does it look better now anon?
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>>2437284
Thought "good cartoon head" until you said Loomis

Anyway the biggest problem imo is you've placed the neck too far to the front, like it's in side profile, in this angle the back of the neck should be closer to the same vertical line with the back of the skull
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>>2437325
I'm horrible with color myself but I think the areas that are blue-gray need a little more red in them.
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>>2437325
i would say, learn to draw first before colors
have a solid drawing and then you could start with values, and after that with colours
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>>2437391
It looks to be about in the middle of the side plane of the head, behind the jaw, and in line with the brow and nose. What's wrong with it?
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>>2437409
Literally the only thing the blueline changed was the angle, as far as the ear goes, and how the ear relates to the rest of the head due to other changes. The issue wasn't the ear, it was the rest of the head.
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>>2437412
Not him but the entire structure of the head was wrong, just moving the ear wouldn't have helped anyway.
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>>2437417
I meant changes specifically pertaining to the ear. The sentiment I'm espousing is that the ear only looked wrong because of the structure being flawed fundamentally, and that if you were to use an ellipse for the cup/connection of the ear on the original and the edit, they would be placed more or less the same.
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>>2437317
It's stylization
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>>2437340
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>>2430635
Still using the note 4 to draw?
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>>2437604
?
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>>2436619
>>2436589
tried to avoid that effect a bit with overlays but w/e, it's obvious but not a disgrace
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>>2427906
how is my gay animu /ic/
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>>2437800
where is harry potters glasses and scar
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>>2437803
lol it's from Haikyuu
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>>2437275
Your try was a success (in my eyes). And ye I haven't really ever looked at how clothes work, and I've only spent minimal time on lower body studies, I need work.

Thx anon.

>scar a shit
It looks sexy though D;
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