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This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make anime work in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.
Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, have tanoshi!
>Fresh off the boat? Get back on the boat and read THIS:
http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-draw-learn
https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/
>Proko
http://www.proko.com/videos/
>Ctrl+Paint
http://ctrlpaint.com/
>Hitokaku Index
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
>0033
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317
>List of active livestreams
http://livestreamstatuslist.appspot.com/
>fellowBro's books
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>Tutorial/Reference Collection
http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
>Risingsun Anime Tutorials
http://iradukai.com/
>Figures
http://reference.sketchdaily.net/
>Pose Practice
http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
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alt thread is dead as a motherfuck
>>2427988
draw thread is pretty slow too
Isn't it because everyone is at the LAS thread these days?
>>2427906
Who made this?
Thoughts on this/CC before going any further.
>>2428256
neck is connecting way too far to the right, also the clavicles are pointing the wrong direction, foreshortening on her right (our left) arm is mucked up to where it looks way too short, overall the pose and drawing feels very stiff, the boobs are facing toward the viewer while her ribcage is facing almost at a 3/4ths view, also look into arm anatomy, you're making a classic mistake on the shoulder muscle of the arm holding the whip handle, whole thing feels flat
tl;dr go and study how to think and draw in 3d as well as do more overall anatomy studies, also study faces, basically just keep studying everything, you've gotten this far, you will only become stronger still, and remember
NEVER GIVE UP
also, i cleaned this up so i could hopefully post it hear and maybe get some feedback since the pron thread's gone nuclear
original drawing ?
searching purposes
I keep trying to over render simplistic kawaii anime faces and then it looks like nightmare fuel
Is there any resource simmilar to that 0033 stuff but in english? I like the way it looks but I can't speak alien so it's hard to make much sense of it, sometimes I can get what it means from context but usually it's just random drawings with alien symbols next to it.
>>2428164
tenhit.tumblr.com
>>2428384
Some of those are translated to english
Anyone have them?
>>2428352
You have the same problem that is and i'll tell you what we both need to do to fix it: Learn facial structure. It'll help. It's helping me already. Study that, study faces, then go back to stylization.
Cause your coloring itsself is not the problem here, your understanding of facial structure is what's giving the colored version that uncanny valley feeling.
2 of the 6 protagonists from my future experimental comics.
Depending on their current appearance, is there any assumption you might have? and why? ( for example, right one has weird orange arm, she must be neo-nazi. )
Yes. I know they are muddy and generic, I'm working on it.
>>2428421
I like your style. The one on the left is a slut because of the gym shorts and loose top. Right has some bs magic armor shit that makes her skin indestructible.
>>2428421
The one on the right looks like she fisted a bag of cheetos
Fuck snow, I'm done. Onto the next one.
>>2428421
First off, I've been a fan of your style since I saw the drawing with the girls gathered around the table playing poker or something, can't remember.
Anyways, the left one looks like your unlikely neet protagonist with hallucination problems that gets picked out of her zone of comfort zone.
The right one looks like a mercenary rave girl that's bout to detonate an EMP and take everything electronic [cyborg or w/e] down with her in an act of heroic insanity.
well, whatever
when did /ic/ became a rabid haven of circlejerking
>>2428581
When you last posted and no one gave you any attention.
>>2428605
poor little babby cant handle a slice of real life aww... ;-(
studies were getting a bit boring, so i added some scale and a loli
>>2428649
wow this is so amazing i have no critique its perfect like all the works here. id give you an ilama if /ic/ allows it
>>2428649
That's a intense fetish...
>>2428649
Is it a city within a giant cave next to a giant loli, or is it a normal loli and cave with a miniature city and people?
Very interesting.
>>2428649
She's about to have her way with those poor people and their cities, isn't she?
drew a goombella
>>2428677
this is the best in the thread one ilama for u
>>2428649
the dept makes it look like it's a normal girl, in a normal sized cave, with a small town, and knowing you that's not what you wanted to show
look into some atmospheric dept, since I am not good enough to teach you, just to notice it
I just want to say that I adore the header pic. It kind of reminds me of Dragons Crown.
>>2428820
I'm pretty sure that's Odin's Sphere
Kamitani is pretty awesome
>>2428827
anime style is so refreshing when there is actual dimension and movement in the pictures
>>2428820
Thanks man :)
>>2428878
very nice! do you just post here or do you have a blog somewhere?
>>2428421
nice drawings, the only things that stick out to me is the rifles. The one on the left is a hk416, usually the ejection port should be on the right side. The one on the right the optics dont make sense. You drew the eotech then the magnifier, its should be the other way around, then again this can be a stylized choice. Its subjective but alot of gun and /k/ fags will notice the attention to realism. Little details will go a long way.
>>2428427
>>2428466
lol. No!! but fair enough. thanks.
>>2428477
You are one of the very first fans of mine.
I'm not bragging about it and I'm not a pro, but knowing there's someone likes my stuff gives me chills.
I've been making fictional characters for comics but your assumption is very convincing and interesting.
>>2428966
Actually, the left one is HK416A5 16.5" + NcSTAR CPO + Magpul AFG.
the right one is M39 EMR + Holographic Hybrid Sight II™ EXPS2-2 with G33.STS Magnifier + Crimson Trace MVF-515.
So basically, you are correct. DEAD CENTER correct. even your eotech ref image is identical as mine. thought my drawing is not big enough to identify small things such as sight, but you did it.
My ref photo for HK416 was in wrong direction, so I mirrored image, then drew from that. without knowing that ejection port is also flipped. I know it's not generally correct to draw like that, but it's easy to miss. Also, HK416 in my drawing is little bit short. don't you think? too short.
I laughed myself that I've been misunderstanding how magnifier works in hybrid sight. so apparently, magnifier comes closer to my eye, not further. silly me. Thank you for mentioning.
>>2429088
autism
Shitfuck i give up.
When i was sketching it up i knew i will fuck up the background and so i did.
Nobody can stop me from fucking everything up.
>>2429130
>Nobody can stop me from fucking everything up.
Atta boy.
Whoever drew this is God. I hope they are still in this thread. I am an assistant recruiter for Ringling College of arts and design, and would like to see more of your work for a potential scholarship of up to $10,000
>>2429376
>My dad works for Nintendo.
>>2429376
$10,000 exactly? You arent willing to negotiate more?
>>2429376
works perfect thanks I now earn 100 dollars from home every day!
>>2427906
>that construction
What type of method was use to measure those face features?
>>2429396
Probably just intuition and eyes at center of face, bottom of nose 1/2 between center and chin, bottom of lips at 1/2 that.
>>2428393
Thank you.
>>2429418
also tried experimenting with random colors
raw sketch lf any crit
>>2429807
looks good my dude
>>2428966
Thank you good spirit of /k/ for pointing out disgusting inaccuracies in gun drawings. You never fail to warm my heart.
>>2429807
the muscles of the arms don't "flow" together too well, so when you tinker with it further I'd pay attention to that since they're a bit blocky right now.
Done but in the monkeyhouse.
If there are any glaring mistakes lemme know.
(right hand is supposed to be much bigger)
>>2429942
Even if you're going for big hands try and make a curvature more apparent in the wrist holding the mace.
Right now the hand is jutting out, but if you moved the tops of the knuckles down and to the right a bit, then adjusted the hand accordingly, it would look better.
>>2429807
ankles could be a bit thinner
>>2429948
Ty for feedback, this does feel a bit more natural. I realise I have a habit of drawing hands in the same angles. Gonna work on that for my next pic
>>2428411
Thanks buddy, I'll get back to the grinding stone for faces.
thx for the feedback
I might go for shadowing with a bit of hatching so forms don't get lost
any feedback?
>>2429968
make left hand giant too
>>2429990
really cute, but i do think the hatching makes the flowers look a bit flat, especially the one in the background. I also feel like the flowers would look more realistic if you'd make the petals overlap a bit more with the brown middle part they're connected to
>>2429968
I think the anon was talking about something like this. Like the rhythm that comes from the wrist to the thumb.
>>2430009
SDhit fuck I messed that up cause it was mirrored in my drawing software.
That looks many times more fluid than either of the things I did.. Thanks for the extra effort on my part.
>>2429990
your sketch was much better than this. Almost everything about it was more appealing, line wise.
Try experimenting with concave shapes for the arms, they'll make them look more feminine and the muscle transitions smoother (and again more feminine)
thx senpaitachi
>>2430037
will try that now
>>2428701
is this better?
>>2430273
I think she should be affected by atmospheric perspective more.
>>2430273
That fucking CIA guy
>>2430340
He wasn't alone.
>when you're drawing a cute anime girl but you have to switch to boring landscape study every time your parents enter your room
>>2430388
>not hanging up cute anime girl posters in your room to condition your parents it as a normal thing
Grow some balls.
Last time, I screwed up my anatomy and my rendering was too flat. So I focused on those this time.
What should I work on for the sake of improvement? Also, how's the girl?
>>2430388
>10 years later
>you are now a pro landscape artist
>oh and you still live with your parents
>>2430388
mfw my family actually likes cute animu chicks
other than the fact that it's not done, is there anything odd that stands out?
>>2430461
the right boob for some reason
>>2430458
your family might be autistic
>>2430482
idk about that, but I know for sure one of them is gay
>>2430273
Why is there so much empty/redundant space in this picture?
>>2428677
If there was a book on Goomba anatomy then I would tell you how your drawing is complete shit, but there isn't, so I'll say that it's pretty good
>>2430461
Yeah, somethings def wrong with the boobs
Finished my 1st stream. I will upload the video later.
>>2430635
her left eye is drooping and her nose mouth isnt following the angle and need to be slightly separated
>>2430495
Oh wow, I started this as an environment pic at first, but it never crossed my mind to do that. this is looking like a good idea, thank you, anon.
I feel burnt out with this. I didn't have any particular direction to start with which might have something to do with it, but I've come to a point where I feel like now I'm just polishing a turd. Any thoughts or paintovers would be appreciated.
>>2430495
how did you realize that mistake, is it even possible to get to your level
>>2429418
Is there anything wrong with those proportions and anatomy?
>>2430754
were you following a cyarin tutorial?
>>2430795
no tutorials, started with painting the nose from imagination for practice then just kept going from there. And just checked out Cyarin, looks decent so thanks for the ref ^-^
>>2430794
yes, plenty
>>2430884
Which parts please
How long did it take for you guys to finish Drawing on the Right Side?
>>2431014
a couple days
>>2430635
ily firez bby pls have my children.
>>2430923
your drawing doesnt have a single correct aspect and its really annoying to go through works like that and say what is wrong. Thats the reason nobody bothers.
At your level, let go of extreme perspective and learn to draw things correctly at 0p
>>2431117
Just general advice please, I need to see what youre seeing other than the arms
>>2430546
I've been seeing your sketches for a little while now, do you have a blog anon? I like your buildings.
>>2430461
Flip the image dude something's fucked in the face.
>>2428649
giant loli anon is this you
>>2431199
Yes hello
>>2429942
>looking at this
>Huh, I kinda like that
>Go on my Tumblr later
>turns out Im following you
Small world
>>2431211
can i have the link to your pixiv?
>>2431281
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=304834
>>2431289
How about a Tumblr?
>>2428289
The upper leg is long af.
>>2431293
ain't got a tumblr sorry.
>>2431314
You wanna make one?
I follow U
rate /ic/
>>2431337
The Style I wish to emulate but still am learning to draw
Prettygood
Got high and drew a purple dude last night
there is my true problem. i dont like the chinese cartoons style at all, is too flat for me, BUT, my "semi-realistic kr0npr1nz wannabe style" is fuckin disgusting, how can i fix this, help me /ic/
>>2431365
>Study fundamentals
>Study head and face
>Understand how the face works
>Stylize the face
>Look at other artist and understand how they stylize
>Replicate their style
>Study some more
>You can draw eyes now
>>2430495
She's a big girl
>>2431382
Bane?
>>2431365
>i dont like the chinese cartoons style at all
Because your face is terribly done and looks like shit. The problem comes from you in both cases, not from the style.
>>2431404
thats a chicken scratch lol
>>2431415
Is that supposed to be an excuse? Because all I'm seeing is that you're complaining how you don't like "chinese cartoon style", then you show that you can't draw it for shit. Same for semi realistic.
>>2431130
http://waxnova.tumblr.com/
>>2428649
look at the size of people close to that cylinder bulding they are way too big compered to taht bulding.
>>2431315
nope sorry.
>>2431460
i tried to follow >>2430495 's suggestions.
>>2431508
i like the prev version better it shows more environment knowldedge and loli is not the focus subject of the illustrat
>>2431337
4.9/10?
This stylization thing is really fucking hard. I've been trying to make a stylized drawing of a girl from the dorm that I sometimes see in the halls. She is small and cute, she's like a cute mouse: Her face is sorta squashe like an elipsoid shape or something with button nose and she has those frizzy hair like hermione did in the first hp movie but black. Also wears glassess that literally are the same shape like her head. I've already fucking tore through 6 pages of sketches and I either make her into a rodent or she's not cute enough. How do I deal? I did not think this would be so fucking hard especially since she already looks like a cartoon character irl.
Pic related are my closest sketches. Messy, I know, It was already an hour of sketching and I was kinda mad and tired. The one on the right is a bit too sexy and bold but it's nice and round. The left one is really closer in cuteness but it's not eound enough. I feel like her cheeks should be higher to make it rounder but all attempts fail.
I guess I'm asking for advice? I don't even know, I guess I just wanted to vent my frustrations to someone.
>>2430495
Much better before sempai
>>2431876
oh god this is terrifying
>>2431907
Sorry... I'll try to work on it more.
I can't figure out why though...
>>2431903
I much prefer the girl at a larger size, but is it perhaps the over-detailing of things that's making it look worse?
>>2431614
how do i catch your streams bB? We should make a thread just for you so we can bump it when you're streaming, im sure that would go well with the community!
>>2431337
would fug/10
>>2431508
there's no way the water could be so deep that close to the shore, just saiyan, unless she's, you know, kneeling, in wich case it looks silly
>>2431876
looks like the rugrats all grown up after meth
>>2431903
>>2431907
Well, I did what I could quickly. Probably can figure out what to do with it more after work.
>>2430546
It seems like you have a lot of trouble with hair and cloth, and I would soften the edge of the front plane of the face, considering it's a grill. Some line weight to make the image read better would do wonders here. I like this but it's hard to look at without line weight and anything to make it seem less crowded.
>>2431876
what is this thing
I want to build some kind of device that sends a signal to my computer the moment someone opens the door telling it to switch workspace or something like that
>>2431876
Nice muscle elves :^)
>>2432016
I have my doubts, mostly due to the usual trolls but if I ever were to stream consistently I will post it on my blog.
<-Trying to find some good base colors
>>2433104
I would like it to be a thing that exists, but i was obviously joking.
How the fug do you start drawing animu? I can never think of how to simplify stuff. Should I just study other styles and just pick shit I like from them?
>>2431876
Is she from whoville
>>2431876
dude just learn your fundamentals, learn some character design theory, study other artists that have a style you like and you will have a better time
>>2430479
Femurs as long as entire upper body
>>2433104
make her pelvis bone show more hngg
her neck is too long right now, and her jaw is too big it seems jhon leno
draw a bee around
>>2431299
they're both long, the bottom one is just experiencing some foreshortening
>>2432040
What if she is hiding instead. The environment study is dope.
>>2433267
To clarify, the upper part of both legs are long. Below the knees look fine
I kinda want to finish this, any major problems?
>>2432040
I don't know if this will work but maybe create a focal point by blurring the front plane a bit?
>>2431508
the cave just looks like a normal cave tho. it makes it seem like those are just really small people. also the lolis design doesnt fit the environment but thats just me
>>2433738
I've always seen that being done, but I'm always not sure how much of blur is too little or too much.
>>2433271
It was one and then I added the girl lol
>>2432841
I'll try to define the left side of her form with a bit more light and add some more shadows to her body later.
I'm mainly trying to adjust the small city/her size so that she belivably fits in the body of water at the moment.
>>2433695
her left hand is flat like paper, unless you are fixng it later when coloring
>>2433870
C-coloring, yeah...
I'll definitely fix it up if/when I do finish it, thanks anon.
>>2433797
oh I really like it this way
>>2434157
i doubt even the largest bat would be visible at that distance
>>2430546
really enjoying your drawings, keep it up!
>>2428654
Quick and dirty, but it should be helpful.
>>2431382
for you
>>2431508
The cave is too bright.
>>2435058
Shit, I replied to the wrong image.
>>2433797
Try This.
>>2435033
i like the puffed cheek better desu
I dont draw as much as I wish I did. But I am just coming here to say that these generals usually produce some of the most coolest, creative, original art on /ic/. I hope that one day I can join the ranks of you guys.
Can we just move on to the next giant loli? This one is getting old.
>>2435432
You cheeky little cunt,
>>2435432
i was about to say retard here someone please explain then i realize when lolis age theyre not lolis anymore lmao
>>2435511
You shut up your mouth I want the perfect giantesse loli showing her glorious scale and dominion.
More alternative than anime, but could you guys rate my stuff?
1/3
who up
hit that redline
pls
Previously posted to /tg/ but thought Id give over here a shot for any more critique. I know the eyes and hairline are a little wonky but cant fix it just yet.
oh wow this thread went to shit real fast after someone complained about the rinfag spam
.
>>2435719
firez, midline, nose. you also lost your above view not sure if intentional. I would also recommend you change your hip escalation area if you change the perspective.
>>2435719
This isn't your best work, Firez. Nonspecific criticisms are basically useless, but I want to tell you that this is not pleasing to look at.
>>2435719
the background???why???
Fist post here, can anyone help me with her pose? it just seems so rigid...especially the legs, I've been working on the legs for about an hour and I just can't seem to get them right, so i'd like to take a break from the piece for a while and get some feedback.
Also, any tips on painting? My web browser blocks ctrl+paint for some reason
>>2435795
What is she supposed to be doing? Just posing with an attitude? Also, is it supposed to be a upshot or straight on?
>>2435809
you have no idea what "one foot in, one foot REEEEEEEEEEEEEE" means do you?
>>2435815
nawww i`m pretty new but i figure your triggered from the position of the right foot being retarded?
>>2435819
No he's triggered by himself being retarded. Apparently he thinks people need to be drawn with their feet parallel or some other stupid way that isn't the most common way people support their weight.
Is something like this more interesting?
>>2435829
If you're struggling with poses I'd recommend you to take off some pressure on yourself. Invent less and steal more, i.e. study the works of accomplished artists such as Bengus
>>2435835
It's not a cop out, it's how people fucking stand when they're just standing around. If you're going to draw a character standing and not doing much it would look awkward and unbalanced if you didn't have the feet pointing slightly away from each other. There's no reason to make the drawing look retarded just to avoid using a common pose that's common because it's how people really stand. Even if you draw them running or a number of other poses you're going to end up with the feet pointing away from each other often. It looks better, it occurs naturally, get over it.
>>2435804
Then I shall crop out my feet! because they were kind of unimportant to the neutral standing pose.
>>2433797
The girl doesn't really fit in well with that pose. Might be because you just scalee her up and didn't change her pose. By the looks of it, she should be kneeling in the water instead of standing. Or if she is standing then we should see more from her legs.
from a couple days ago
also, does anyone know how to make a brush in manga studio that emulates photoshop behavior with regards to keeping opacity? i haven't really been able to get similar function through my own efforts but i'm also probably just retarded
>>2436092
wow wtf i've never even seen this option before, thanks family
Thanks to anon that gave crits last upload. Adjusted a few things, New lines with new brush. Any other things that stand out before I carry on? Also, i know face is shit, will re-do.
>>2436265
I never seen a cave that big
>>2435838
its really not that common, youll notice that people are always putting a 90 degree angle to it. its really just a cop out.
>>2436306
i bet you havent seen a giant purple loli with horns either...
![tumblr_o3p356IWNb1rirvldo6_1280[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/XMoNfTa.jpg "tumblr o3p356IWNb1rirvldo6 1280[1]")
hook me up with some sai pencil brushes famolgas, or anything pertaining to pressure curves and how to cop a real traditional pencil look (pic related)
>>2435833
Thanks! Never knew his name was Bengus, you sure gave me a huge blast of nostalgia anon
>>2436265
I really dont like how you have the light line all around the figure, it makes it suoer contrasting because the overall picture is going for realism when it comes to lighting, yet this is huge stylization thats out of place as its not repeated anywhere in the pic.
tldr: style inconsistency
idk what am I doin
>>2436578
Too symmetrical. Reeks of mirror tool.
>>2436578
UNITINU
Is my construction looking ok? I posted sometime ago and an anon mentioned that I kept drawing lowface. I tried to fix, but I'm not sure if I'm heading in the right direction.
>>2436709
>okay, I made a nice construction
>now let's put some symbols on top of it
you make me sad, anon
I'd rather see no face than a flat one.
>>2436709
nope.
you didn;t get a ball right, and the rest is based on a wrong ball. you need better fundamentals to start constructing faces.
Designing a little deer character.
>>2436709
Draw cubes+rectangles of various proportions from many angles. like, a thousand, seriously. You think in 2d, gotta think in both.
I don't actually know where I'm going with this one, developing a style is a struggle for me.
>>2436765
Head is too big for a more realistically-proportioned body.
>>2436709
beg thread
Operator-chan
>rip me a new one /ic/
And I'm aware of how messy it is. Pencil and paper for me tends to be that way and I'm not in the situation of digital art at the moment.
Wip something random.
Any critique is welcome.
>>2436928
i tried..
the gun looks a bit flat anon, try adding a little perspective maybe?
tried some loomis
..i'm still not really sure about my skintones
>>2436745
Frankly, I'm probably missing his point that is why I was asking if he meant that the values were off or if the issue with the bg is something else.
I know this is a revision in the same thread but I think I made some considerable changes
>>2437284
I'm not feeling too great about the structure around the mouth area, it seems like it's too far back so the nose and mouth central lines look misaligned.
why are anime chins inverted curves at a profile
am i missing something about real chins or is it just stylization
>>2437300
It's not the values, it's the colors. She's in a totally different environment right now; his fixes make her more purple to fit the ambient light, or make the background more green to fit her.
>>2437303
alright
does it look better now anon?
>>2437284
Thought "good cartoon head" until you said Loomis
Anyway the biggest problem imo is you've placed the neck too far to the front, like it's in side profile, in this angle the back of the neck should be closer to the same vertical line with the back of the skull
>>2437325
I'm horrible with color myself but I think the areas that are blue-gray need a little more red in them.
>>2437325
i would say, learn to draw first before colors
have a solid drawing and then you could start with values, and after that with colours
>>2437391
It looks to be about in the middle of the side plane of the head, behind the jaw, and in line with the brow and nose. What's wrong with it?
>>2437409
Literally the only thing the blueline changed was the angle, as far as the ear goes, and how the ear relates to the rest of the head due to other changes. The issue wasn't the ear, it was the rest of the head.
>>2437412
Not him but the entire structure of the head was wrong, just moving the ear wouldn't have helped anyway.
>>2437417
I meant changes specifically pertaining to the ear. The sentiment I'm espousing is that the ear only looked wrong because of the structure being flawed fundamentally, and that if you were to use an ellipse for the cup/connection of the ear on the original and the edit, they would be placed more or less the same.
>>2437317
It's stylization
>>2430635
Still using the note 4 to draw?
>>2436619
>>2436589
tried to avoid that effect a bit with overlays but w/e, it's obvious but not a disgrace
>>2427906
how is my gay animu /ic/
>>2437800
where is harry potters glasses and scar
>>2437803
lol it's from Haikyuu
>>2437275
Your try was a success (in my eyes). And ye I haven't really ever looked at how clothes work, and I've only spent minimal time on lower body studies, I need work.
Thx anon.
>scar a shit
It looks sexy though D;
Something about it really fucking bothers me besides the weird foot. I can't figure it out. Is it bad? Fine? Mediocre? Help please?
>>2438092
Nose, proportions, etc
>>2437815
stop fucking with one of my favourite sports anime pleaseeeeeee
>>2438092
This reeks bad everything. During the construction phase, use basic shapes and the bean-bag method from vilppu.
>Vilppu
for gestures and an idea of human anatomy
>Hampton
For info on muscle groups
>Loomis
Every muscle for better anatomy and rendering
>>2438403
No. Brb going to draw Haikyuu gay porn just for you, anon.
>>2438438
gay
>>2438438
Please draw first years orgy.
Excluding Yachi.
i want /lgbt/ to leave
>>2437318
Thanks for clearing it up, for some reason it was not that obvious to me, in some ways I felt the hues worked but now I see what you guys mean
This is an sketch I decided to resume, I hope it looks more or less correct
My first time posting, p-please be gentle
It seems kind of boring? I know it's literally just a head in profile, but I feel like it could be made more interesting within that scope, and I don't know what's missing
>>2438692
Well you've drawn her with a snout for one.
>>2438692
>My first time posting, p-please be gentle
Fresh meat. It is boring because it is flat, learn how to draw in perspective. You will not achieve anything in that scope get out of your comfort zone stop drawing profile shots and front views nobody cares if you can draw perfect symmetry and stop copying anime and read the sticky and study loomis.
>>2438705
What can you even draw in perspective here? It's such a flat angle with no gesture.
>>2438705
Kek, echoing shit from /ic?
I bet I can draw better than you, punk ass faggot.
Can someone help me out with this anatomy?
>>2438750
the whole image has a lot of mistakes, first that right foot, fingers don't work on that way, i don't know where's the neck.
>>2438692
post more, I dig your lines.
>>2438753
The neck is inside the collar of the tabard. And what's wrong with the feet?
>>2438750
wtf anon skirt doesn't work that way
also
>chickenscratching
>>2438750
Not loving how big the head is
>>2438758
>he only noticed the lines/drapery and not everything else
lol
>>2438702
Is the nose too upturnt, or is it too sunken near the eyes?
>>2438705
I know that profile headshot by itself is just super boring (and also would be my comfort zone, were I good enough to have one) but I still feel like there's something in the scope I'm missing (it being a shitty scope aside). As >>2438711 said I'm also not sure how I would apply perspective here (on the scarf?).
>stop copying anime and read the sticky and study loomis
I-I actually did this one without a reference, but maybe that's not what you mean. I have read the sticky and a few loomis books but if it doesn't show I guess that's my own fault. I'll try not to disappoint you next time.
>>2438756
Thanks. I thought I would get fewer replies with how dead this thread is but I really appreciate it. I was feeling pretty good about this but those two anons took me down a peg, which I think is a good thing.
>>2438760
Idk why I can't see it as big even though everyone says my drawings of head are too big compared to head is there any cure for that.
>>2437602
thank you for good chin
>>2438750
the head should be about half the width of rib cage. 1.25 - 1.5 for animu. animus also have small necks so the head looks larger than it really is.
>>2438765
Yeah, do anatomical studies. Learn the rules of proportion before you try bending/breaking them for stylizing.
>>2438092
Every day someone comes in with a "help me with this foot guys" and the answer is always the same, it's too goddamn small. Why are people obsessed with drawing tiny baby feet?
>>2438775
I think it probably has something to do with the fact that people tend to assume feet are smaller than they actually are, because they're the furthest point of our bodies from our eyes when looking straight down at them. It sounds kind of stupid when you put it that way, but honestly, most people don't really think about it. If you tell someone their foot is the same length as their forearm, the most common response is surprise, and they try to check and see if it's true.
>>2438779
nah that's not true senpai
[spoiler]>tfw i actually tried it
i'm stupid aren't i?..[/spoiler]
>>2438788
It's pretty close for me. I have small feet.
>>2438775
>>2438779
>>2438788
It might be because of how you almost always see feet horizontally, so you won't really see it until you check it yourself, which people don't normally do unless they're really bored or curious.
>>2438775
Most people seem to forget that the ankle(bone) is a really big fucking wedge-like thing.
>>2438842
holy shit it works
>>2438842
cute feet anon
>>2438842
omffffggg this is like a religious revelation to me
my feet reaches to the back of hte elbow
feedback appreciated
>>2438878
The head looks a little bit detached from the neck, maybe change the angle and lower the head, like so?
>>2438886
Ear is placed too far it looks like she is missing too much skull and her neck doesn't attach to the head correctly. Your one mistake made you elongate her crown piece all the way to the error.
>>2438890
keep studying anatomy
the face/boobs needs better form
add reflections to the edges to show that the cloth material is reflective
>>2435833
Stealing sounds so dirty
I dont have money for a sketchbook so im using a random agenda i've found
