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Last thread : >>2312351

Post em now.

Rules:
-Do not rate or give critiques unless if the artist specifically requests it.
-If someone is RUDE tell them to not expect much from an hour's work.
-Posting WIP's, studies, "doodles", and random sketches are highly encouraged.
-The art must be fresh. Like you just drew it in the past hour.
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I drew this around hour ago,

got deleted by mod for being too shitty from other forum
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ic booru
http://ic.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=all
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some skeches
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>>2320435
i like this
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>>2320487
I rike it
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>>2320503
Those got potential, assuming they are your own design.
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>>2320435
>>2320500
please dont samefag, its really embarssing
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any tips on how to improve this?
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>>2320581

Shift+Del
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>>2320593
why
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>>2320559
It's actually good. What the fuck is your problem?
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>>2320607
hes just jealous he cant draw as good.
ignore the shitposting faggot.
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>>2320601

Bypasses the recycle bin.
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>>2320613
I mean why would I delete it when I want to improve it?
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>>2320507
Thanks.
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>>2320614

Honestly get some practice before you start any serious projects. Start again.
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>>2320607
>>2320610
are these people serious? anyone with two eyes and a brain can recognize the lack of skill and complete visual grotesqueness. just because you clusterfuck various doodles together and it looks detailed as a result, does not mean it is good.

samefag confirmed
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>>2320544

Yeah, maybe

I've been obsessed with robots in jackets ever since simon stålenhag and FLCL
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>>2320581
this is a class drawing lad.

idk why other ppl are criticising it. probably because they don't kno enough to be able to offer any advice.
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finished this old guy.
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>>2321049
How would he use this weapon?
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>>2321059
ffs
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>>2321053
by swinging it, blunt one one side sharp on the other. holding on to the bent part at the back allows for more powerful swings, but now that i think about it, that would only work with the edged side.
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>>2320943
youre just fucking stupid and salty as fuck.
if you dont have what op has dont shitpost here to vent your frustration. reported
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>>2321069
Stop responding to the shitposter. He's been doing this in the pornthread, drawthread and alt thread, shitting on people for no reason. Just keep on drawing and ignore the lonely faggot.
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posting what i drew in the past hour
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>>2321108
i see what you did there, very funny.
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>>2321082
>>2321069

i haven't posted in any other threads except for this one and the self portrait thread

i'm not frustrated, just puzzled and confused why op feels the need to compliment his own work. i am not salty in a ny way shape or form

>>>2320551
>>>2320534
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>>2321136
What the fuck?
Your shit doodles are about 10 times worse than the OP and you accuse him of samefagging his own work.

Are you mentally ill?
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>>2321136
OP's work has structure and lots of experimentation with various styles.
Its quite impressive that he cooked the whole page in an hour using traditional methods.
You however, are fucking delusional to think you're any better than him. Get help you poor example of human life.
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>>2321147
>>2321154
ssameeeeeeeeeefAAAAAAAAAAAG
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>>2321154
stop complimenting your own work dude
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>>2320500
>>2320607
>>2320610
>>2321069
>>2321082
your samefagging follows a pattern that is beyond easy to spot.
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>>2321136
fuck, i really am starting to hate women. i already suspected them to be trolls before, but now this confirms it.
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>>2321064

I don't know why but you look familiar.
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graff practice
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>>2321195
just report the missing mental patient and move on
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This thread is such a hugbox.
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>>2321232
>just report the missing mental patient and move on
Sometimes i go to /ic/ for the banter. You guys are more creative than aussies topkek
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I need to clean out my art folder, it took me like 5 minutes to find this
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>>2321200
what do you mean?
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Shit, I wasn't paying attention to how long I spent on this, but I think it was longer than an hour. Oh well, whatever. Crit welcome and sought after.
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>>2321541
He seems unbalanced, the pose
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got bored and spooky
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>>2321556
Unbalanced like leaning?
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>>2321557
what is that white thing you use for the otuline?
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Just starting to crawl down the Loomis hole. It's been 26 hours of adderall, nachos and circle drawing

Jesus Christ I have human needs to tend to but I just don't want to stop until I get gud
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>>2321571
its a white gel pen.
sakura gelly roll if i remeber right.

usually if i use it people end up saying the drawing looks somewhat like a sticker due to it lol.
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I like to draw out one page story concepts. Never named this one though.
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>>2321702
a bunch of random shitheads on a page is not a story concept
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>>2321712

Y-you too...
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>>2320482
do you go on /b/?
i feel like i've seen you draw besides on ic. though i might be mistaking you for another person who draws on paper~
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>>2321702
well I think it's cool
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>>2321614
huh it is? it seems rather rich for just a gel pen
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>>2321285
You're art style is how I would love to draw. Self-taught or did you learn through books and/or courses?
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MUH SHINKAWA
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Weak day.
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>>2321820

Thanks. :) You can do it, it just takes practice.

No formal art training or education. I learnt mostly through practice, observation, trial and error and a few books.

I'd definitely recommend to everyone reading up on perspective, anatomy, construction etc... but I personally think it's much more valuable to learn how to see and train your eye, than just technically how to draw.

I get much more out of looking at the work of other artists and trying to figure out for myself how they were made. Why they made the marks they did, how the paint is layered etc... and then incorporating those ideas into my own stuff.

Also spending lots of time looking at photography and getting an idea of how to break things down into simplified forms, shapes/patterns etc...
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>>2321817
it works pretty well for me. only thing is yoy need to move a bit slower so it the flow doesnt stop. if it does scribble on a different part of your sketchbook until it works again
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Meow, just a little doodle.
Don't care if you judge, I'm proud of it. :)
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These threads gets better and better art everytime
keep up the good work OP
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>>2321921
faggot

learn to draw better
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>chicken uses scratch
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>>2321739
no that wasnt me
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>>2321921
you dont even want to make it do you?
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>>2321924

Post work.
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>>2321936

Some people draw for fun. Either way this isn't even remotely a board for professional level artists, just elitists exercising their unwarranted superiority complexes.
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2 hours roughly clocked i think, critique much appreciated
Sorry i color picked
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>>2321958

I'm assuming the left side is a reference piece that you are working off digitally on the right.

Good rendering, but bad underlying drawing.

Little blunt but not trying to be insulting. The distances between features are accurate, but things like the curve/angle of the jaw, forehead slope, length and angle of nose is off, eyebrow arch is too softly curved and not sharp enough an angle, left cheek also bulges out too much.

Basically, your main issues seem to be angles here. Just make sure all your preliminary line-work/measurements are exact before laying down color. That seems to what I noticed straight away.

Colors seem fine, obviously much more simplified given the time worked on. If you want to get a closer replication to the original, note that there is an underlying wash of orange under-painting over the canvas that is being allowed to show through in a lot of places. Try also painting a little more transparently yourself, and letting the underlying layers show through.

Hope that helps some.
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>>2321958
are you that guy who is trying o look like ruan?
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from life today
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>>2322038
do you live in a dystopian noir film?
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I like Miley.
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>>2322014
100% right, i suck at copying stuff so it goes without saying that the drawing itself would be trash, big ups for the input buddy
>>2322034
nah
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>>232205Here is the photo reference.
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>>2322047
yes don't you?
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bit over an hour, paint needed to dry. critique me
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>>2322057
enjoying the decline, with sazz
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>>2322052
i like how the boobs are so accurate
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>>2321557
who ever u are mister regular i love ur style, and more furry gay porn please, i loved those for boner reasons
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not at home so doodling in my sketchbook
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>>2322079
love your retards did you doodle this hitler by anychance
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>>2322091
your jelly is palpable m8
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>>2322064
dunno anything about furries, but i'm trying to draw more things in general
http://bigfancynoodlings.tumblr.com/
but yeah. ~
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rate me pls.
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Didn't draw this in the past hour but I'm struggling with finishing this piece. Any advice would be welcome.
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>>2322137
its cool man i would make the background darker though
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>>2322079
blog?
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>>2322108
i fee like your vanishing points dont match up with parts of your drawing so it just feels off.

i like it so far though is a nice concept.
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This what i did for tower girl thread.

I never finish shiz this about as polished as i can get something. i dono o:
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>>2322137

Try studying music instead.
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The OP is the go to guy for these threads.
I like it a lot bro, please keep this up. You're making /ic/ great again.
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>>2322194
>trump slogan
>chen avatar
>praises OP

You're not fooling anyone, Mike.
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>>2320487
Do you have a blog?
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>>2322145
kalisdevals.tumblr.com
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>>2322199
Who the fuck are you, dipshit?
These threads are one of the greatest new additions to /ic/. OP is definitely a new addition to the great legends of 4chan.
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>>2322261
I have to admit. I check the catalog all the time for OP's thread. His style is easy to recognize. It's chaotic and have a certain uniqueness to it.
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I dont get why some people would antagonize OP's works.
Its definitely one of the better doodles you can find in /ic/.
And to think he spent an hour on it is astonishing.
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OH PLEASE critique my "art". im starting to like MSpaint, but it has it's limits. Dunno how to get SAI
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>>2322323
edgy
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>>2322325
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>>2322288
I knew him when he first started. He definitely got better. In a very short time as well.
do you know he's the guy who drew this rare pepe?
It has gone to many iterations all from this one OC.
Definitely one of the legendary drawfags.
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Just finished this for Tower girl thread.

I know i need lots of improvement. Mind pointing me in the right direction?

Also my art is really inconsistent. I also drew >>2322184
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>>2322333
The trips pretty much confirms his greatness.
Amen for OP
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This aesthetic and coloring is outside of my comfort zone, but better try now then never! Critique and advice appreciated!
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im trying to design an embroidery of a knight and a horse

im tired of doing other people lineart and i wanted something i did
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I tried making up an alien, I dunno. It's fucking hard designing things, but I want to get better at it so I'm open to crit.
>>2322456
Hah, nice, love the crazy proportions.
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>>2322410
I can give you some general suggestions. Practice drawing girls from a ¾ view, both nude and with underwear on. I suggest underwear as well because her panties and bra thing seem to be out of perspective and fairly formless.
She doesn't read as a moth, too, and I blame the fluff. Look at this picture. Notice how said fluff is mostly concentrated near the head, neck, and "torso" area, almost like a mane? Now notice how there's little to none around the leg/"arm" area. I know that the moth princess chibi thing has little blobs of fluff on her arms, like armbands/bracelets, but there's no rule that says a person needs to follow the chibi reference perfectly. Also, notice how the fluff on the real moth has very little variation in value? It has a blotch of extremely light orangey-yellow when it's near the body, but that's about it. There shouldn't be long streaks of darker values. On the same note, the fluff grows outwards, not in one straight direction like you have it.
I think you can get across the idea that she is a very soft and cute moth girl if you observe real moths and how the stuff on them works. Feel free to add your own personal touches, of course.
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>>2322466
Oh, and mind the antennae. You can get a really convincing moth girl if you make nice antennae.
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>>2322461
Thanks man! Finally somebody enjoys these.
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>>2322472
What do you mean, I see you get compliments all the time. I think I did at least once before too.
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>>2322472
do you erase/redo shit or is that one take?
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>>2322478
I haven't browsed in a while so I must've forgotten. Still though it's nice.

>>2322479
Depends really. Generally I usually edit stuff around. Other times I let it flow and keep the scratch lines.
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>>2322487
well, it looks to me like you might have sick line control
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20 minute speed paint in acrylic

because I don't really have the patience for anything longer

I burned out a while ago and haven't worked out how to come back

help
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>>2322498
I've been told that Aha. Thanks man.
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>>2322501
nice! i like it

i would recommend you to just chill, enjoy doing random shit, dont give up, jst do whatevs
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>>2322506
I might stick with speedpainting for a bit and go back into more detailed studies of all the things I should be drawing/painting etc later on then. Because I can't right now.
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>>2322466
Ooooh! thank you for the feedback!

Yeah i deff see what you mean with the not reading as a moth. I really just got ideas from various moth girls i saw but maybe i shoulda just did my own interpretation from the real subject matter.

Again thank you for the feed back and ima get to work on drawing that 3/4 view. Anything in particular i should be particularly aware of?
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Nothing to impressive but critique is appreciated.
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My time to shine. Im honestly proud with it. critique please
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This was a doodle that attempted to capture the style of Mattias Adolfsson. It is admittedly based upon one of his own doodles, though I was not viewing it directly at the time I drew it. I do however constantly see it around, as it is on the cover of one of my favorite albums.
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>>2320657
>>2320487
Those look pretty good. Can you spot me some of those original study photos?
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.
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>>2322713
blog?
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>>2322714
firez-tbr.tumblr.com
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>>2322614
Thanks!
First set:
>http://straydogmiaow.tumblr.com/post/135312573528
>http://straydogmiaow.tumblr.com/post/135312518773
Second set:
>http://straydogmiaow.tumblr.com/tagged/yukiko-hachisuga
Also, something is weird with the tagging system because I had to go directly to the original blog to find the tagged photosets because they weren't showing up in the site-wide tags/search.
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>>2322829
i posted the wrong one
heres a not hueg image
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>>2322194
>The OP is the go to guy for these threads. I like it a lot bro, please keep this up. You're making /ic/ great again.

But you are the OP

Just like your are the OP of the remade self promotion thread on ic shilling your own out of place pleb tier blog in the "must see" list and you are the OP of your daily pol thread shillling your blog against the rules and you are the 3 guys praising your self in every thread.
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Instead of studying
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>>2322904
lol It's fantastic, that's exactly how I feel like when I have to eat soup.
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i drew this like fortnights yonder
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I love drawing lips I need to get Better at them though to make them look more lush, I'll post the reference if anyones insterested
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doodling sneakily at work, trying to use this time to get better at drawing without photo reference
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>>2322934
the boobs look off
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>>2322928
interested
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>>2322964
you're right. boobs are hard.
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>>2322966
The tilt of the head is off a bit , it was to late to do anything though
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>>2322973
>>2323007
http://kinkfall.tumblr.com/

I don't post very often, thou. I don't feel confident enough to show most of my stuff.
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>>2322107
whats the point of this?
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>>2322456
is that a chibi red hood?
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Did a self portrait and realized i really need to work on my measuring, any good tooterals on the subject?
Critique always welcome
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>>2323231
Dude with retarded ayy-lashes and lips of a greek god
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>/ic/
>full of edgy teenagers

what a surprise
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a neighbor
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>>2320435
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>>2321577
Give up
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>>2323372
kek

>>2323373
neato
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>>2321577

Use references, only draw what you see, don't try to draw things that aren't visually measurable in your reference

You've got broken perspective bad proportions, symbol drawing. Fix all of these by grinding from reference once you've studied some more. Really study those facial proportions. Learn how to properly measure references as well for accurate drawing.

26 hours is barely any practice in the grand scheme of things, don't burn yourself out in a single session, you won't learn anything and you'll lose motivation. If you want to practice for a long time, that's fine, but it's more important to be practicing every single day consistently than to have one ridiculous session you can't mentally digest.
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>>2321921

>don't care if you judge, I'm proud
>posted on the art critique board
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>>2323387
i love saitama's face.
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>>2323408

You analyze the picture and try to learn from it.

Say you're studying faces, you would lay in the general shapes, building your head construction, constantly measuring with your pencil, using plumb lines, checking angles, etc. Practice a good method of construction like Loomis or Hampton to help you place the features accurately.

You should get lots of practice rendering simple 3D shapes like spheres, cubes, and cylinders, because you can use those to build the mass of anything you're drawing.

You really need to have a grasp on your fundamentals, form, construction, value, perspective. During your drawing, you're practicing applying these concepts, gaining experience with the form of the subject matter and building your ability to apply the knowledge you've learned.

Say you've never studied faces before, the first time you do an accurate, measured study, you're going to realize that the face is made up of many forms you don't have an immediate working knowledge of. The cylindrical protrusion of the dental area, the structure around the eyes, angle of the jaw, the way parts connect to one another, etc. You do hundreds, thousands of these studies, becoming intimately familiar with all the subtleties of the subject matter, building you ability to accurately draw and render them with depth.

The goal is in no way to copy things mindlessly. You're learning the fundamental skills of drawing, and then trying to apply those to a subject you want to study. Of course, you're not always trying to learn how to draw something as thoroughly as this, this is just a complex example, you can do other studies where you just practice accurate drawing and rendering with whatever subject matter. This is usually what's done in the beginner threads, where everyone will try to do an accurate drawing/rendering of an animal, a car, a face, etc. posted in the OP, just to build those basic measuring, rendering, and dexterity skills.
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>>2323405
his face is so easy to draw thats why I love it
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>context
>friends a cunt
>redraws his shitty drawings for satisfaction

I drew the right side
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>>2323460
Newsflash, both are pretty shitty.
Draw your own shit, man. At least then it's actually YOUR shit.
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I hate how I draw.
Sometimes I draw something decent, but then I can't follow it up. I have no style. Kill me.
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>>2323460
The only thing better in the right one is the guitar. It's funny, the left shows a little more awareness of the volume and space a body takes up while the guitar's drawn like a paper cut out, and the right body is drawn like a paper cutout but the guitar has form. I swear the one on the right looks like Medusa from Soul Eater to me, too.
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>>2323460
Well, you make good friends: You're both cunts, and can't draw for shit.
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>>2322461
That aliens fucking metal, love to see that shit finished.
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Sorry I'm uploading from my phone
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>>2323533
Really? Thanks anon. Is there anything you think I should do to it? I was thinking about moving the tusk things a little, so they would come out the back of his cheek bones then curve forward. Besides that I have no idea what else to do with his head or body.
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>>2323460 #
Why is hiding hands a thing? I never did it and altough i suck at hands i like to struggle with them.
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is it better with the text
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>>2323601
or without
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>>2323601
>>2323603
What in the flying fuck?
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>>2323603
Without

>>2323609
It's a crude sketch of a ship of some sort obviously
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is it worth it to just keep drawing shitty sketches until you're happy with your anatomy or do you just keep drawing fully finished portraits etc.
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trying to draw basic anatomy from memory
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>>2323637
I think it's best to go back and forth between sketchy doodles and studies. If you study too much, you become reliant on using reference. If you just draw from the imagination all the time, you may have trouble improving your drafting and your drawings will be uninformed so they'll not only look wonky they'll probably lack interesting detail.
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Shit and giggles
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>>2323614
>>2323609
>flying fuck

I was almost right then.
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>>2322108
I like this
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>>2323601
Looks like some kind of organic spaceship or some shit
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>>2323056
Nope, too inspiration from red hood though. I guess it's the look of the mask/face.
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>>2323656
ayy! hi there aunt-guy
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>>2323708

What's Gud bruthor
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having some fun
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>>2321702
got a blog? I like this.
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I was studying some of Sakai's books today. QT ninja girl
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>>2323741
My favorite monster girl dressed as Bayonetta.
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>>2323744
qt ghoul girl
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>>2323744
I like her hips
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>>2323744
the perspective on the guns is way off. they look way flat in the image
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>>2322107
why do i actually like this.
you should do some surreal work
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>>2322501
that looks good. what the other anon said. just chill.
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>>2322904
this is really good!
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>>2322973
wip + some sketches
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A lazy WIP I guess.
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>>2323813
Haha, Thanks! My first attempt at a full page.
Got a bit more work done on it tonight.
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>>2323857
It looks shittily flat but its pretty cool and the face at the bottom is great. study perspective and gestures and keep at it
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>>2323857
why does he have chillis and sausages for hair?
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>>2323906
Chili-sausage hair is in style on whatever world he's from.
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Quick doodle because I was bored. /ic/ pls help me get better with your wonderful advice
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>>2322550
Well the perspective on his arm is all fucked up. Even if it is as exaggerated angle he's too far away to justify his arm being that big. I would say maybe change the angle of the shot to be behind his back and much closer so that you can go for a more believable exaggeration. Overall though you need a lot more practice learning anatomy and perspective if you want to draw good action scenes.
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>>2323773
yeah, i kinda felt the same way. i need to study guns.
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>>2323920
There's no real advice to give, friend, you need the sticky desperately, do not take that as a joke even, read it, absorb it, internalize it, get the books and go get help in the beginner thread.
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>>2320482
Doot Doot
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>>2322323
the shadows on Jesus body are wrong. If the fire is beneath him, it should be the upper parts of his breasts and arms that are shadowed
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>>2322461
Bready good study some real animal anatomy.
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>>2323934
I got the books from Loomis didn;t start reading tho but yeah I should stop lazyassing everything and get my stuff together
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>>2323857
cool idea. reminds me a lot of Junji Ito
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Been working on this for more than an hour, but this is what i've been working on for the past hour

>>2322501
I really like this, would hang up on the dining room wall/10
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>>2320435
This.
WTF is wrong with me???
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>>2323994
?
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sketches
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>>2324001
What you think is good?
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1/2
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someone asked me to draw her.. I feel ashamed
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>>2323994
Read about anatomy.

Neck off, stomach off, leg too long,breasts too low, breasts facing wrong direction according to post, perspective in comparison to door needs fixing, leg positioning when you look at feet is uncomfortable.
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>>2324116

idk tried to fix stuff and had to erase eyes because I still feel like symbol drawing them ;-;
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>>2324120
Can't I'm still on kyes and perspective with Erick O.
This was a study.
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2nd realism piece I'm working on for my art class of my mom. Shit lightening and yes, I know her chin looks dark but I haven't put the values of her neck/face in just yet, so it'll be fixed.
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>>2324116
>>2324131
whos this supposed to be?
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>>2324144
friend of me
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>>2324145
not for long if you show her
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>>2324145
you have to start over, there's nothing you can do to save that picture. Read the sticky bla blabla, learn how to draw.
> ooor, post the reference and let me draw it and pretend you did
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>>2323928
I didnt notice until now but your totally right, thanks for the advice
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>>2322501
try creating an something with inverse color properties.
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>>2324109
She looks better without hair, damnit, doesn't she?
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>>2324393
It's because the hair and the face feel like two different parts! That's the problem with doing them separately. If you look, the skin underneath the bangs has no cast shadow from the hair, and the side of the face has no reflected light. Once you unify them more, It should start to come together.
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>>2320435
It's painful to look at
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>>2320435
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>>2324408
Good points all along, thank you! I forgot to shade the skin underneath the hair though I intended to do it. This comment really helped, though, in realizing what the heck I had been doing wrong for the last half an hour or so. Cheers.
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>>2322501
Your light source is all over the place is my only critique.
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>>2322461
Tried out more things. I think I like the reverse tusks more.
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>>2323944
Thanks for the input anon, although I'm not sure what animals I would look at for this. I think I kind of want some bug or insect influence maybe but I have no idea what direction this is going in. Maybe if I just browse through some I could pick up some inspiration.
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>>2323817
any critique on the left one would be appreciated btw, Is her scalp to small?
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>>2324459
Her eyes look flat, adding some shadowing on eye whites and some highlites might help
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>>2324337
Nah that's cheating I'm still busy with the sticky and Loomis so yeah progress takes time.
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quick doodley doo
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finally moving to landscapes.
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