Let's get a great creepypasta thread going!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-3iCr1HLEIE
>>17478625
The Canadian dialect in this video is really grinding my nerves. He also reads waaay too fast.
Here's how it's done:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TFN400r5R0k
>with ambient music
>slow, clear voice
>>17478625
I kinda' liked the story, but the guy needs to calm down.
>>17478625
This one has a few really good elements:
>the use of the elephant is original
>a guy who did the logical thing and actually got help for his clearly possessed shit was a nice touch
>making elephant noises is original and fitting
Negatives:
>blood and demon voices is terribly overdone
>mother character makes no sense
6/10 - pretty solid, but nothing exceptional. A few bright ideas held back by a few bad ones.
All I got, need to build up my collection again
+
>pretty realistic, in terms of setting and characters
>good choice of music, and soothing voice
>ends on a nice note
-
>starts interesting but the little girl is a little cliched
>falls off near the end in terms of story
7/10 - quite good, but not perfect. A slightly better choice of "villain" would have bumped it up a point.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xPcFXYFR3ec
>>17478901
Goodz:
>while not terribly clear in quality, more than makes up for it by adding voice effects
>Silent Hill soundtrack is always welcome
>cool and alternative setting
>surprisingly well written
Conz:
>poor ending
>while the spire was an interesting addition, the story ruined part of the mystery
>"black" is a terribly overused adjective
5/10 - functional, but nothing more. Could have been great, but it shat the bed in the last 20 seconds. Bonus points for actual voice-acting.
>>17478858
Pros:
>images are nice
>doesn't strain too far from reality
>gave me the desire to play Hotline Miami
>not too long
Cons:
>no real conclusion, as is often the case with the "non fictional" ones
>greentext is hit or miss
>though realistic, not really believable
7/10 - good. Gets a few extra points for hitting that sweet-spot between "short" and "not too long". The picture is a very nice touch. The story would have been 4/10 without it.
>>17478895
Was suppose to be for >>17478785. I don't know why I've taken it upon myself to review creepypasta ITT, but keep posting and I'll keep reviewing.
>>17478869
Positive:
>a little on the long side, but never gets downright boring to read
>original and believable setting
>the paranormal-hobo mystique is nice
Negatives:
>could have used better editing
>a few slightly unbelievable phenomenon, like how spoopy-hobo managed to get a hold of a untraceable phone
>a little too much focus on what I think the author interprets as "world building"
6/10 - solid. A little hard to say why this one just doesn't work for me, but gets a few points for original concept carried out with some flaws.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E0JPXoPBcOw
>>17478785
Used to really like the "aussie/brit" voice for stories but they don't do much for me anymore
KingSpook and CPJ are god-tier imo, MapleCreepypasta is also good
Personal favorite was Penpal series for a while until I found this one, love the jail setting, the group story telling, it was really immersive
2 Parts I believe, one of the best stories I've ever heard
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2oVo5gstTac
>>17479047
Pros:
>a little long, but never slackened on pacing which is essential for these longer ones
>realistic, with sprinkles of the paranormal
>good use of music and effects
Cons:
>sometimes a little vague in terms of where the protagonist is in the house
>a little mystery is good, but sometimes too MUCH mystery is bad
8/10 - great. Probably one of the better ones posted. There's a few things that needed a little tightening up to make it amazing, but it wasn't far off.
>>17479094
I'll check those out! And haven't heard that story either, so that'll be a new one for me!
Thanks for the recommendation.
>>17479094
>that picture
There is going to come a time when /x/ and /pol/ will put on earrings and merge into their final form.
>>17479047
>40 minutes
Jesus Christ.
>>17479130 was meant for >>17479094, ma bad
Howdy hey all, just dropping by, figured i'd post a bit. Let us start with something fun.
>>17479130
>>17479133
Yeah, most of the time I need really long one to listen to while I play a game because I'm too lazy to make a playlist
Recently been playing STALKER re-listening to this actually, its good for grinding in MMO's and shit
>>17479153
Alright, enough fun.
Keep in mind it has been awhile, so I am a little foggy on the content of most of these.
>>17479153
Pros:
>/k/
Cons:
>/k/
10/10 - best moment of my life. Will not be eclipsed by anything ever.
>>17479177
/k/ is always great fun. I guess that is why they are one of the immediate boards.
Also what is the issue with 'your image contains an embedded file'?
>>17479094
Things like this are great. Another personal favorite is the Advent of Baneposting
>>17479172
Pros:
>nice and shot, the way creepypasta should be, the more flavor-per-word, the better the pasta
>good pictures, especially the first one
>good attention to detail, though should have had more of it
Cons:
>a little inconsistent in tone, sometimes funny, sometimes spoopy
>second post seems a little dragged in
>poorly memetexted
6/10 - solid-to-great, but nothing grand. Could have used a little more detail, but hey, if it's all the guy remembered it's all the guy remembered.
>>17479190
Don't worry so much about the embedded file crap. It's something that tends to occur when posting very large images, in terms of resolution.
>>17479207
so I just can't post that pasta?
>>17479215
When I have something to dump, I usually just open said file in paint, and change the format from jpg to png, or png to jpg and then use that.
It's not the cleanest workaround but it works.
Time for a combo. I assume I've been talking to r8man, so what do you think of the stuff I've been posting?
>>17479190
Pros:
>very good pacing and literary skill, someone who's clearly written fiction before
>the attention to dates and times makes it feel a lot more official
>unique story with no real "monster"
Cons:
>gets a little stupid with the kid near the end
>almost too many dates and times, increments in dates would be easier to follow than the constant and specific times
9/10 - amazing. Very good story, told well, and presented well, with only a few flaws holding it back from brilliance.
Note to dumper: you're dumping a little quicker than I can read and review, so don't be upset if I don't catch all of them.
>>17479248
I ain't mad bro, I wasn't even planning on this being a rate thread, just wanted to share the spoops
>>17478785
Creepsmcpasta may be one of the best. Another good one is Mr.Nightmare. The worst of any spoopy story readers is by far Urmaker.
>>17479094
>>17478625
>>17478785
The black guy from Chilling tales for Dark Nights is pretty good imo.
>>17479195
Good sides:
>detailed, and told with "personality"
>lots of characters where only the good ones are actually focused on
>very realistic reaction to the situation they're in
>not the first tale I've read on the topic and it's nice to see continuity
Slightly less good sides:
>long as fuck, and unstructured, the latter could easily have been fixed
>lots of spelling errors and "dialect" - unsure if this is suppose to add to the tone
>a little poor pacing near the beginning
7/10 - good. Not bad in any sense, and quite close to an 8, but the poor spelling, the lack of a readable format and some odd literary choices drag it down from possible greatness.'
>>17479259
My nigga!
>>17479201
Pros:
>nice to see a story that doesn't BASK in the paranormal, spoopy can be spoopy without monsters
>consistent tone and feel throughout
>realistic
Cons:
>another long one, too many creepypastas don't grasp that "short and sweet" is usually better than "long and shit"
>this one isn't shit though, it's just not as unique as some of the monster-stories
>crazy people coming for you in the rain isn't really all that original
5/10 - solid. Nothing wrong with realism, but make it too realistic and it stops being scary. Murderers and psychos are all fun and good, but they rarely (IMO) make for incredibly pasta.
>>17479298
*incredibly tasty pasta
>>17479298
short and sweet it is
>>17478837
Really good, also never seen it before, bills a bad ass
>>17479305
Pros:
>aww, yeeeeah, now we're talking
>oddly well-phrased, proper punctuation and consistency in the memetexting
>weed lmano
Cons:
>sounds like something made up by someone stoned off their ass
>not really all that scary
>phones
7/10 - great. Short and sweet, with a good spook-per-word ratio for some tasty pasta! Biggest drawback is that it isn't really all that scary.
>>17479222
Pros:
>very detailed and well enough written to properly punctuate and spell, which is always nice
>one of the few that felt as if it really NEEDED to be a long pasta, and wouldn't have worked as well if cut down
>pictures are always a plus
Cons:
>still long as shit, but as mentioned, slightly forgivable in this case
>takes a while to build up
8/10 - great. A lot better than I expected from this long and drawn-out story, that ultimately turned out to be a worthy read.
>>17479222
I really would have preferred if this just ended when he left the house. Making it stalk him or whatever was kind of lame.
>>17479347
I agree. Some monstrous 6-legged horse-satan stalking someone doesn't really feel natural.
>>17479349
Yeah with it eating the dead kid it felt like some freakish raccoon not really the stalking type of animal.
>>17479205
I could hardly make it through this complete trash, literally fucking raged multiple times at the writing, as well as "mama stark".
Why would you even save this complete faggotry?
Anyone happen to have the one about a man entering the afterlife and a voice talks to him and it's a nightmarish hell land or a black void (forget which) and he asks if god isnt real and the voice tells him he is god?
>>17479217
God that was creepy af.
>>17479222
That filename tho
>>17478785
the best guy to listen to read spooky stories is Cry, he has the perfect voice for it.
>>17479222
Holy fucking shit, I live in the Shepherdstown area.
post stuff about Erratas pls
>>17479272
I used to like Otis Jiry for the kinda grandpa telling you a story vibe, but I get the feeling that he's overly smug now and always gets top billing over the actual writer which is total bullshit.
Anyway, Psychosis:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YugLGMYX030
Not really a creepypasta, but a great story nevertheless. .
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NhWdc0xS00s
>>17479153
Trying not to kek too hard because my wife and baby are asleep next to me. 10/10 would read again
does anyone have the greentext from the perspective of a skinwalker being pressured to move out of the woods by his dad? there's also a cat possibly called Jasper involved
>>17482854
Is it your wife's baby?
>>17479308
Bill is like /k/ personified.
Does anyone have the greentext of a Bulgarian/Eastern European tattooed badass killing a skinwalker? If so, post?
>>17483353
>>17478958
Burner phones are super common and easy to get. You can buy them at any super market, pay for a couple minutes of talk time, and then toss em. Not unbelievable at all
>>17478837
Good story :) I need a weird friend like Bill to go camping with.
>>17479176
I really want someone to record the voices these creatures? make, and not be a 10 year old yelling at the top of their lungs for LoLz.
>>17478958
That story was absolutely brilliant. You have shit taste in creepypasta.
>>17483902
wwhy is the cat there and not a fucking dog?
not exactly creepypasta
also author posting this story
winky face to anyone who knows my handle
i only have shortish ones but i'll post a few.
>>17486839
solid (stupid point)/(stupid point)
i like those short ritual stories.
>>17486948
>>17478869
As a former night shift pizza delivery guy, this one hit too close
>>17486970
>risking your life just to save money on a plane ticket
>>17478016
>the capsule went straight down but earth wasn't there
That's not how orbits work you retard. Started so promising...
>>17478858
Was this story before or after that miami hotline game? Cause the dude doesn't look like the pig psycho from manhunt.
>>17479205
>my boyfriend sam, REMEMBER HIS NAME FOR NO PARTICULAR REASON OTHER THAN FAGGOTRY
>me so nerdy because glasses i have nerdy friends too XD
>btw am a boy
>the fucking writing
ayy get this shit out of here man
>>17479217
And that my friends is why if you ever kill something you behead it as well, or at least cut its legs then bury it deep.
>>17479328
>it isn't really all that scary.
fuck off nigger; this is terrifying. Everyone has cellphones almost, the idea that you can hear something that makes you lose all your marbles instantly is bone chilling.
Kind of reminds me of the book by Stephen King.
>>17479217
Now this; ladies and gents. THIS, right here, is horror.
>>17487018
have you seen the fucking prices they charge for flights nowadays? i don't blame the guy
>>17479328
Can we fuck off with this review shit?
>>17478016
I'm looking for a particular screencap that is about someone taking a photo with spooky results. OP image has a black image with half of a distorted face in the lower left corner.
If someone could help, that'd be great. Googling and combing the archives hasn't turned up much of anything.
>>17478785
Here's how it's done
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3iZBH2rEops
>good reading
>good music
>reviewing creepypastas and giving them ratings
this is what /x/ has turned into, pay close attention mods, you allow this
>>17479711
Russian pasta is truly best pasta.
>>17486954
I love this one. Truly unsettling.
>>17491883
I don't really get it. Can you explain it for me?
>>17478785
Nobody in Canada speaks like that dumb shit. Get your facts right. Not replying to anybody.
>>17491409
>the little fears
>good
pick one
>>17483861
nigga why dont we talk about this on /x/. Any brave finland /x/files wanna check this out for us?
Looking for a pasta about a man living in the woods, he's a painter. In the end it turns out he was dreaming the entire time. any help?
>>17491416
Irked me aswell.
>>17492303
Because it's been talked about.
By the way. Does anyone have that pasta when a skinwalker litteraly rips someones grandpa to shreds?
>>17492632
This one?
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Portraits
>>17479259
I fucking lost it
Does anyone know of a pasta called "The Sidewalk" I believe? I found it in early 2012, it was a thread saved on the old chanarchive, now long defunct.
This pasta, I assume it was a work of fiction, detailed the experience of a group of friends as they explored a paved path seemingly leading nowhere in the wilderness. There was an urban myth about this "sidewalk" leading to a ruined old mental institution and these kids followed it with much creepiness ensuing. It was really well written and somewhat humerous too, best pasta ever.
Unfortunately I accidentally erased most of my saved archived threads in 2014 thus losing this masterpiece. Can't find it on Google, just a shitty YouTube pasta sharing the name.
All the best.
>>17494879
Man, that's a shame. I hope someone else has a copy.
>>17486631
its not his son faggot. jesus
>>17494879
bumping in hope
dont think anyone has posted this, kinda creepy..
>>17496242
>.gif
>>17496310
its just a picture, dont be fooled little fucker
>>17496242
I aint viewing no gifs fool
The quality of creepypasta here is hitting new levels of low. 99% of them goes with the camping outdoor theme, with strange sounds, SUDDEN SILENCE and a close encounter with the fucking skinwalker.
You can do better than this, /x/enos.
>>17491916
The POW camp let him send a letter back home but he was forced to say that they were treating him well and yadda yadda. He wrote the truth on the back of a stamp (that they had forcefully amputated his legs) and dropped subtle hints to his mother to remove the stamp and read the secret message on the back. The reference to "little Timmy" was just a way to make it seem less suspicious that she was being told to peel off the stamp.
>>17478016
>great thread
>creepypasta thread
pick one
>>17498075
What if it's a great thread making fun of garbage creepypasta.
>>17496413
Just open it in paint if you're that much of a pussy.
>>17479190
This is so similar to Welcome To Night Vale it's not even funny. Nicely written nonetheless.
Have enjoyed reading through a few experiences here. Most seem pretty fake to me though.
What always bothers me with these stories is the lack of evidence, detail of location, or anything with which we could investigate.
When I was 11 or 12, I swear my friends and I saw... something. Something big, and black, swoop into a tree. Like, fucking huge.
Not sure what it was, but three people I was with saw the same thing and could describe EXACTLY what I saw and heard with no prompting.
We were all edgy little faggots experimenting with Wicca. This was in broad daylight in a playground on hundreds of people.
Yet we all saw this, thing, and heard a really strange sound. Like, a whip being cracked next to my ear. A friend recoiled in pain and had a fuck huge headache. It was loud as fuck, yet nobody else in the playground heard it.
I am 24 now yet I still swear by this to this day.
Just wanted to get it off my chest.
>>17478837
5/7. Would watch this movie.
guess I'll post the only scary one ITT
>>17479217
finally something new! every thread the same shit is posted over and over again, thanks anon
>>17481138
him and the midnight sweeper
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ArZtA761Oio
>>17494879
bumping. hopefully someone has it.
>>17499527
That pasta's dumb as fuck mate.
>>17499797
Did we read the same pasta? It was fucking terrifying you batty cunt
>>17486789
goosebumps tier scare, fuckin good story
>>17479248
These rate posts are making me cringe. Please stop. No one asked for this.
>>17499838
Don't be a lightweight choker, little Rubio. It was a shit.
>>17499797
You didn't read it properly I don't think. Look carefully. That newspaper article is strangely similar to the described events, don't you think? So what happened??
>>17492142
LOL, they kinda do, buddy.
I created this thread and now regret it.. What a shit creepypasta thread, full of those gay ass skinwalker stories and then we got self righteous anons, tryna act like a well respected critic, fuck off anon, fuck you all. /x/ is a shit hole full of people rping and posting fucking skinwalker stories. fuck.
>>17500656
There's been some good stuff in this thread, OP. I hate skinwalker stories just as much as the next guy, but the entire thing hasn't been like that. Heck, the White Man thread one guy posted was pretty good, even though it was another "creature" story.
Don't feel bad about it. You've at least entertained me.
>>17498075
They're better than most threads on /x/. It's just a shame good new creepypastas are so rare.
>>17500362
It really happened tho
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=No22-2FY9cQ
OC from this channel, I like his style with the photos and quiet voice
>>17479094
Ebola virus has been around since long before the recent outbreak, both Breaking Bad and Cowboy Bebop referenced it before what happened recently.
Does anyone know or heard of a creepypasta named the Path or something similar? It's supposedly about a kid who kills his sister and is very graphic. Mr. Nightmare on youtube took it down because he said it was too intense. I'm just curious to read it and haven't been able to find it anywhere.
In return, a simple but effective one
>>17502980
Also this my new favorite. It's long but well worth it imo.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EbSM_prXe1o
Can't say I dig "le ebin spoopy skinwalker" stories myself. So I'll dump my meagre collection of non-skinwalker related ones.
>>17503058
>>17503061
>>17503064
I honestly can't remember what this one is. Maybe I'll re-read it when waiting for that timer to tick down.
>>17503067
Another one I can't remember. Clearly I don't read this folder enough.
>>17503069
>>17503071
I once ran a /tg/ session based on this creepypasta. Was surprisingly fun.
>>17503074
>>17503077
>>17503080
>>17503085
Here endeth the dump. I think this one is oddly heartwarming in a way, as I take it to mean whatever left the note at the end is some kind of benevolent spirit trying to cheer up a lost and confused child.
>>17479259
Quintessential /x/
>>17478837
I'm guessing this is the same Bill from Left 4 Dead
<iframe width="560" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/x7CIeGrVjhU" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe>
>>17503823
oops fucked that up.
https://youtu.be/x7CIeGrVjhU
>>17503738
spoopyspoopyspoopyspoopyspoopy
>>17503738
thats low man, on /b/ i expect it and dont click .gifs but i honestly expected more from /x/. You have proven yourself to be an ass.
>>17504009
>Pussy/dumbass detected
>>17478943
why are you trying to make this a cringe thread?
>>17504009
one of the rules for /x/ is open a .gif at your own risk
>>17503069
fuck nigga that one really spookd me for some reason
>>17503069
>hear voices all around me "jump jump jump JUMP JUMP
>MIGHT AS WELL JUMP JUMP
>GO AHEAD JUMP JUMP
>AAAOOOHH HEY YOU WHO SAID THAT, BABY HOW YOU BEEN?
>>17479094
what's with the green bed?
>>17487259
Hey man I live in Colorado and I can confirm this is the only way to travel.
>>17487174
kek
>>17491409
Her voice is honestly too sexy to do creepypastas, I can't be scared with a boner.
The most popular creepypasta reader (Mr. CreepyPasta) is the best.
>great music choices, sound work and voice
Maximum immersion with this nigga.
Here's a vidya related one I've always liked.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JOR8AQll1R8
>>17503738
You made me look retarded in the middle of class you bastard
>>17502120
>>17491409
Women need a neutral voice if they're doing creepypastas otherwise they're too feminine
>>17478785
you know, he's good in the sense he makes a lot of videos but he's so fucking repetitive its annoying. The mood is the same in all his videos and it really takes you out after the first 5 stories
>>17496242
>.gif
nice try
>>17479153
>YOU'RE FUCKIN DEAD KIDDO serenades the trees
fuckin kek
https://youtu.be/fmzz20cr23E
Not sure about this one, how old does she sound? I can't decide if its a younger girl or an older one with a girly voice.
>>17503738
lol
Asshole. I kind of liked the story as a harmless kid-friendly creepy story though. I'll have to tell my nephews that one.
>>17503090
Yeah, I think it can be taken as "monster stole the kid" or "kind spirit comforting kid" and the second option seems better. Its unusual in those kind of stories.
>>17503080
Nice
>>17499527
Classic
>>17503827
Are you the narrator anon?
>>17505356
Jesus, thank you anon! I've been searching for this story for a very long time, much appreciated.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tTLZ66qnGAQ
This is a must watch!
>>17479298
5/10 isn't solid, it's bad
>>17491180
FUUUUCK THAT SHIIIIIIIT
>>17478837
>any other 4chan board goes camping with /k/
>>17478858
Is that the fuckin Amityville house?
>>17499527
That's such a fuckin B horror movie
Does anyone have a story where something actually happens by the end? Like someone actually gets injured or their friend dies or something
>>17479217
> pale dog
> kills people without leaving a mark
> demonic
Good story and all, but still couldn't avoid thinking of pic related.
>>17488769
If we're going to do it, might as well make it better than this. Shit is cancer. Everything is apparently 7-9/10 and this story was pure ass.
>>17507247
Yeah. First time posting it anywhere. Kinda shit at the moment but I hope to make a good improvement over the next few months. Trying to post weekly at the moment, next one is going up tomorrow.
>>17503827
subbed, good work
>>17508038
Thank you! It means a lot!
>>17486839
These sort of 'handbook-y' creepypastas are the best.
>>17478930
>>17478943
>>17478958
>>17479116
Eat a bullet.
Pros:
>You're dead and we don't have scroll further to avoid your craptastic reviews.
Cons:
>You're dead. But that's only a con for you.
>>17499527
>dead corpses
I prefer mine live, thanks.
>>17503738
So annoying when you want to read the story but then a stupid face gets in the way
>>17508129
really? i dont see the appeal in them its just a how to article that reads like a cooking recipe
dont get vidja game pastas either
>>17486954
I don't understand the point of this one.
What drives her to steam the envelope? Does it make it easier to take the stamp off? Why would she do that, just a sixth sense?
Not troll, genuinely stupid.
>Select all pictures of street signs
>Watertower
>>17508739
i assume that's how you preserve a stamp for a stamp collection without damaging it? philatelists please advise
>>17508739
>>17509013
You hold the stamp part of the envelope over the spout of a boiling kettle. The steam affects the gum used to adhere the stamp and it comes away from the envelope so you can put it in your collection.
>>17479217
doggos have no evil in them
doggos are pure
>>17491180
Holllly shiiiit
>>17478837
That bit about Fred and "Banzai!" had me softly keking.
>>17503104
Fucking retarded.
>>17494506
Hot
>>17498714
>blood whistle
fucking love that one lmao
>>17503045
holy shit this afterlife things fucking scare me
>>17491180
-1 for incorrect grammar, the correct imperative form is "specta"
There's this one copypasta that story-wise goes kind of like pic related. I read it a few months ago, in fact this one was posted right after, does anyone know which one I'm talking about?
>>17479094
Somewhat less effective than it was now that we haven't all died of ebola.
>>17503085
I don't get this one
>>17507457
Found IGN, guys
We Could do Nothing but Lie Down
I remember the day the spider-like creatures swarmed out of their holes and covered the moon's surface. NASA telescopes captured high definition video of the masses of creatures, throbbing and heaving as far as the eye could see. They were as big as cars and I nearly lost my mind when I caught a glimpse of them on the news.
I remember the ensuing months as humanity reacted to the presence of new life in our solar system. Many wanted to nuke the lunar surface until it was glass. Others wanted to make peace. Some worshiped them as gods. Personally, whenever I looked up at the moon, brownish red with the skittering bodies of monsters, I could barely stop myself from shaking.
I remember when CNN broke footage of the creatures building massive ships on the surface. They were intelligent. This was enough to cause near panic. They were coming to us.
I remember the day they sent their first message. The sound was harsh and guttural and interspersed with a horrible clicking. Top linguists around the world were called in to translate.
I remember two weeks later when the brownish red tint of the moon gave way to the milky white we had almost forgotten as the monsters entered into their ships. Earth was on high alert, all nations’ armies prepared for assault. And then the ships took off and left in the opposite direction.
And I remember the next day, when the linguists finally decoded the strange message and played it for the whole world to hear: “If you value your lives, run.”
If you want to hear this spoken and not written, here's a link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yk7LJgo-h3k
>>17479217
gah just wasted 10 mins reading this horrible story.
tldr killer dawg. Breaks some things in the house. so scury
>>17513847
>10 minutes
Are you literally retarded?
>>17513864
>asking if someone is literally retarded
>literally.
back to english class you go.
>>17512650
Every time, that one line with "How could someone initiate the genesis--" makes my blood boil.
>>17513878
>I am so smart. S-M-R-T
no one cares fuckstick
>>17502980
Did you ever find that story?
>>17503738
For some reason the face was already there on the thumbnail and when I clicked it I was trying to read what was behind it and when it vanished it scared the shit out of me.
>>17513878
No, it's you who need to learn a few things about English, you dumb motherfucker. "Literally" can and always has had its meaning stretched to convey "virtually", it's an officially approved usage of the word that has existed forever. Why would IT be the only word that couldn't be used hyperbolically? People who try to sound smart by calling people out on their perfectly legitimate use of the word literally are nothing but memester faggots who want to sound smart by repeating what other people told them and never doing any research of their own. Fuck your cancer.
>>17499527
>>17478837
>FAL
>30 rounds CLIP
cringe
>>17479190
>1952
>helicopters
>>17514169
Helicopters go as far back as 1905 shithead
>>17514246
Show me a helicopter that was actually in service in 1905 you dicklicking highschool kid. Yeah, they were talking about flying around a fucking science experiment.
>>17486789
This is pretty great.
>>17486789
This couldve potentially been a really good story if it weren't for the capitalization errors. in a casual setting, grammar/spelling is not that important, but when you are writing a creepypasta, neglecting to proofread really takes the reader out of the story. It is a bit distracting. I did enjoy the content, though. just a suggestion
>>17514169
Jesus fuck. This board is really the lowest IQ board on this whole afghani anime image board. you fuckassed twit, helicopters were used regularly during the Korean War, which - you guessed asshat - took place during the early 1950s. Now leave your mom's basement and walk out onto the freeway shitstain.
>>17491409
>TheLittleFears
Mah nigga
>>17514427
>>17514315
>>17514169
Please, don't turn this into an argument on helicopters, due to one young high school kid who can't get his facts right.
You'll end up ruining an 6/10 creepypasta thread.
>>17514022
False.
>>17514487
Not an argument. Don't worry.
>>17514547
Fuck off grammarfag, go ruin a trap thread on /b/ or something. No one cares.
>>17514408
what part of "this isn't really a creepypasta" did you not understand?
also i proof read that shit like 15 times.
maybe it's you're inability to read english
>>17514566
creepypasta, story, whatever piece of writing. if you're trying to draw the reader in, proofread your work. you do not read a book and notice half the paragraphs start with lowercase letters. it's funny how defensive you're getting by something so minute. maybe you shouldn't post that you are the author if you will get so upset by the smallest of constructive criticism. Have a good night
>>17514566
Have you ever once even had sex in your entire life?
>>17514566
>>17514583
>>17514584
>>17514587
being this mad at me being this mad
how new are you guys?
>>17514597
>virginity intensifies
>>17514604
>virginty
>this board
>implying we aren't all virgins
go back to summoning succubi
>just learning how to use green text.
>>17514408
just because you're in 9th grade doesn't mean you're an authority on writing
Scary Story Time With Liam is a horror narrator I hardly see mentioned anywhere.
He mostly writes his own stories and has several ongoing series
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d0Bgj9K4xns&index=16&list=PLRY5gdjkXM_uu5cP5MIjjVr3An_PsfjIK
>>17496242
this is posted in almost every creepypasta thread as a gif- it's good and not a screamer... unless this guy edited it...
Hey, anyone remember a story that would get posted every now and then? It was 3 or 4 parts (separate images) and I'm positive it was white text on black. It wasn't a true pasta, with spooks and such.
The story was something about this virus infecting a town, the protagonist is in college and is immune to the virus. He lives with his professor and a younger girl. The city gets quarantined, the hospitals are packed, that's all I can remember.
If anyone has a link or could post it, that'd be amazing. I've been looking for a couple of years. Curious if I'll still like it, if it was as good as I remember it. Thanks in advance.
