https://youtu.be/i8Y1sxd_tQw
this video is awful and the guy who made it has a very rough handle on the english language...
but the content itself was interesting.
>you can no longer report specifically for advertising
>>26895424
Not sure if you're looking for feedback, but here are a few thoughts:
>that cringy channel intro has to go
I don't think I'd be able to do much better at art, but it gives your videos a bad first impression. Either ask an artist to do one for you if you're able to, or just drop it altogether and go straight into the video.
>the background music is awfully distracting
The music is too dynamic for that kind of expository video, I sometimes lost track of what you were saying and started listening to the music instead. Also on that note, it's too loud in relation to your voice's volume.
>the fonts are okay
That first pink one was annoying to read, but the ones on the transition screens look good enough.
I'd have prefered if you kept the font choice consistent across all the titles, but that's more of a minor nitpick really.
>the accent isn't that much of a problem
I'm not a native English speaker, but I still understood you fine. You talk fluidly enough and don't make too many mistakes as far as I'm concerned.
Plus I think that's the kind of thing you're going to become better at naturally the more videos you make.
>as >>26895491 said, the content is interesting
I'd have prefered if you went a bit more in-depth, but it was pretty nice overall.
>be careful with the ragefaces and general reddit-speak
I personally don't mind too much as long as you don't go overboard with it, just know that it will put off part of your viewers.
Especially if you try to promote your channel here.
Overall, most of the problems come from form rather than substance.
You have a good niche being the only (that I know of) Japanese player making English commentaries. Work a bit more on presentation and try to make the most out of it.
