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Artificial Academy 2 General /aa2g/ #740

Bunny Edition

Welcome, this general is for the discussion of ILLUSION's Artificial Academy 2.

COPY ERROR MESSAGES WITH CTRL+C, PASTE THEM WITH CTRL+V INTO GOOGLE TRANSLATE. STOP ASKING US BEFORE DOING THAT. JUST CLICK THE WINDOW AND PRESS CTRL + C, IT WORKS.

For File Acquisition errors, do one of the following:
- switch all locale/system/region/date/time/everything settings to Japanese
- keep locale locale/system/region/everything settings and run with Applocale (Win7/Win8) or Locale Emulator (Win10)
Always run as admin.

>READ THE READMES OF EVERY MOD YOU DOWNLOAD. IT SOLVES 99% OF YOUR PROBLEMS.

>Information:
Main Site: http://www.illusion.jp/preview/jg2/index.html
Append I Info: http://www.illusion.jp/preview/jg2/append/index.html
Append II Info: http://www.illusion.jp/preview/jg2/append2/index.html
Purchase: http://www.amiami.com/top/detail/detail?gcode=LTD-PCG-03693
Download: http://sukebei.nyaa.se/?page=view&tid=481633
Download for All Updates: http://sukebei.nyaa.se/?page=view&tid=1189198
Character Database mirrors:
http://no-info.no-ip.info/aa2/index.html
http://aa2.is-fantabulo.us/aa2/index.html
http://178.140.224.56/aa2/index.html

Please read through the AA2 pastebin for mods and info (READ BEFORE ASKING):
http://pastebin.com/BhpfXqHP
FAQ Image (READ BEFORE ASKING): http://i.imgur.com/Yg5a9AF.jpg
Installation Guide (READ BEFORE ASKING): http://pastebin.com/YCrkrDh2
Supplement to the Install Guide, with Pictures: http://imgur.com/a/KZYsw

/aa2g/ Modder's Reference Guide (Slot lists for Hair/Clothes/Faces, List Guides, and more):
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1gwmoVpKuSuF0PtEPLEB17eK_dexPaKU106ShZEpBLhg/edit#gid=1751233129

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>>145597361
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Kind an absolute cutest!
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>>145706272
Anon an absolutest cutest!
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I'm still waiting for ratings.
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harsh and aa2 aloof the cutest!
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>>145706451
You're wasting your time.
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>>145705119
Take a break dude let that creative inspiration build up again
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So when are we stealing all the nip mods?
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raping kind a best
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Best Ends are real.
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Playful is still the best of the best.

>>145706706
Okay.
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>>145706451
Then you better convince the last guy to release his two cards or convince 2 people to take his place.
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>>145706393
You too.
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>>145706827
Maker May. Make one girl a day for the entire month. 10 people posted complete charts, and there were a bunch of partial completions along the way too.
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>>145706858
playful sure knows how to make anal penetration seem appealing
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>>145707198
Could be a limited edition dress.
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>>145707409
then her relationship wouldn't change to that bluish color
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You can tell she's smiling from head to toe
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>>145707732
>not letting her hair down
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>>145707021
We should have stayed with the color one instead of the full MM.
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>>145708518
oh! boi!!
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We should do another fun shop.
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>>145709652
what will we sell?
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>>145709652
>fun
>shop
pick one.
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>>145709652
>>145709756
>>145709763
>forgot suggestion
We should do some draw shop where we need to draw to add to the picture. Not everyone here is great at it so everyone would be on equal ground, and I think it would be sorta fun. Could have some conditions as to not go too crazy with it and anyone can join.
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>>145709652
Gladly, I'll let others shop in stuff first so I don't screw up porportions for everybody else though
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>>145709875
Fuck off, Cuck. Why don't you shop Kitty into a life where she is happy?
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>>145709998
>cuck suggesting something everyone can do
???
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>>145709998
That doesn't sound like cuck
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>>145709875
why don't we mod new clothing in and shop our girls wearing them onto a fashion show runway?
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>>145710335
>why don't we mod new clothing in
But not everyone can do that in the time needed.
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>>145709998
savage af bro
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fat girls should be removed or not?
fat girls aren't qts?
Post fat girls!!
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>>145709875
That sounds fun. Let's do it.

>>145709998
Nice meme. Do you blame cuck for when you run out of milk in your fridge too?
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>>145711478
remove fat
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You knew it would happen.
You knew all of my girls are best girl.
I will marry them all.
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>>145711478
Fat people have a place in society like anyone else I just think we need to utilize them better.

We should harvest fatpeople for their blubber. America would have an infinite supply of energy.
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>>145711478
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Big tiddy waifus a best.
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>>145711772
that depends on where the fat is located like >>145712476
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>>145711772
harvesting them would take more energy than their blubber would give
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>>145711478
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>>145711478
Keep fat but only sparingly.
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>>145712665
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>>145712476
Truly a best
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>>145708608
Some people did. Others did more. It was up to the individual to decide their own limits, and everyone who participated made a good showing. Not every girl was great, but there are a lot of great girls from this May.
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>>145709998
Wasn't me but I'm for both his suggestion and yours. (the shooping Kitty, not the fucking off)
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Rating of maker mays when
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>>145713817
do it yourself
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>>145713832
after they're all uploaded
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>>145713976
Yeah, that would be the idea...
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>>145713817
>copying Duckposting of his girls in wedding dress
Sasuga Cuck
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>>145714164
technically i posted salami first in a wedding dress last thread
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>>145714164
reminder that duck copied salami san first
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>>145714164
I first posted that image back in April when I got the outfit but potaytoe-potahtoe I guess.
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Speaking of salami, why is she so perfect?
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>>145713832
I'll do it if someone posts all the finished pictures
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>>145714458
so why did you reply with it now out of all of your other caps? To fit in?
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>>145714472
lel salami meme.
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>>145714532
challenge accepted
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>>145714472
Because all aa2g waifus are perfect. Their husbandos should treat them well like how their waifus love them.
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Reminder that new cards are on their way from your favorite.

http://store.steampowered.com/app/449830/
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>>145714830
>tfw everyone treats their waifu like trash
i want to make a waifu shelter and protect them from their husbandos.
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>>145714998
What would happen at this shelter? Who do you plan on saving?
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>>145714729
please upload
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>>145714998
>everyone treats their waifu like trash
Proofs?
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>>145714716
What's the problem?
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>>145715404
Copying my boi Duck for the memes is sad
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>>145715234
they get constant head pats and cosy blankets and ice cream. then we bring their hurtful husbandos for confrontation to change their ways. they they live happily ever after. and waifufags like cuck, brian, sponge will be the first.
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>>145715459
What meme? The outfit is publicly available.
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>>145714998
>salami, kurugaya, meat and suzu are the only waifus that have good husbandos

feels sad desu
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>>145715785
how about you? you don't have a waifu?
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>>145715785
Salami cheats on his waifus all the time
Kurugayer does as well
niku is best
suzu is duck
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>>145716728
>Suzu is Duck

Ducks don't gao.
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>>145716903
how do you know?
have you done science?
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Speaking of waifus,

Post em. Post cute girls too if waifus don't apply to you
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>>145717053
no but I have done SCIENCE!
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>>145717053
>>145718207
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BYvhhMjW32k
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>>145718181
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>>145718448
I dropped this series before getting this far

did i do the right thing
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>>145718908
No
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>>145714729
I'm missing Lesbianon's can someone post it
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>>145718698
cute
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Think I'll leave the shape at this and upload over the weekend. Tired. Sleep.

Dunno which personality to give her though.
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>>145719014
sorry I had to choose between that and durarara
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>>145718908
depends on how you like convoluted time travel plots
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>>145719441
>drrr
You poor soul
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>>145719441
>choosing drrr over s;g
you did well, anon
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>>145719297
From the source itself
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>>145719364
Hey there I'm looking for a person of your talents to help autistically make clothes for a Croatian gravel grinding porn game. You're gonna make it big, kid!
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>>145719364
whoa
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>>145719364
>>145719397
Looking good, you two.
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>>145719876
am i being contracted?
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>>145720352
>grinding porn game
he's trying to recruit you into /cm3dg/
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>>145719364
wew ...that's actually really good
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>>145720090
>>145720927
thank you
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>>145719364
nice photoshop
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>>145721465
that's all entirely achievable ingame
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>>145721465
what?
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>>145719364
>blue shadows on the headpiece
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>>145718181
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>>145721465
You have a keen eye! Correct, you need an external program to make the background transparent. Everything else is possible in-game.
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>>145721798
>you need an external program to make the background transparent
the japs have something
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>>145721854
can you proof it
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>>145721905
it's on 2chan
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>>145721854
They don't have anything to make the actual game transparent that I'm aware of, as that'd be a helluva thing. They do have files for a no-UI clothing selection screen, to aid people who pose in that, but that's just blank tgas.
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>>145719797
I'll do yours first (star indicates my favourite girl)

Overall pretty solid. You use many different faces and obviously try hard not to fall into the same-facing pattern, while still mainting a distinct style. You make very bold colour choices in a lot of your girls, which is pretty gutsy and I appreciate. Unfortunately, you use the same eye texture for every girl and it gets a bit bland. A downside of your risk-taking style is that you put together some weird hair combinations that just don't really work for me, but I appreciate the effort to remain unique.
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>>145721729
Card please?
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>>145723621
>actual, no-memes feedback
Sign me up.
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>>145723621
I prefer Le Nigger Baker desu
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>>145719364
oh lord i can't wait
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>>145723827
it's not getting released
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>>145721553
Nope. Stop lying out of your arse.
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>>145723892
i am most likely going to release her when she is finished
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>>145723621
woah honest feedback hot
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>>145723621
i can hardly await the savagery criticism
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>>145723929
>I'm too inept to replace files so it must be impossible
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>>145723621
I know you get a lot of shit for samefacing, but in some of your girls you can tell you tried to break your really long eye style sometimes, which is good. I think a big part of the problem is that you posed the majority of your girls with the same expression, which really amplifies the sameface tendecies (read: style) you have. Because of this I got a bit bored half way through and starting giving a lot of the girls 5/10 because they looked pretty similar to other girls that came before. This is just personal preference, but the oval irises bug me. You use colour and hair combinations well and came up with some pretty unique hairstyles because of that. An interesting thing about your girls is that the more I look at them the more I like them.

>>145723791
I'm doing everyone's in the order I found them in the archive. Don't worry, I'll get to you
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>>145724179
bigger mouth - fail
eye shape unreleased - fail
eyelashes that take priority over hair in front - fail
headshape unreleased - fail

get gud with your lies pleb
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>>145724550
again
>I can't do it so it must be impossible
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>>145724550
You just listed a bunch of things that were unreleased, not impossible. Clearly you don't know the history of this card.
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>>145724696
I bet she gives the most amazing blowies
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>>145724696
even though thats a different card im surprised someone saved that
thank you
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>>145723629
I'll snowflake her tomorrow
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>>145724428
Oops, thought you were only doing ones posted in this thread. Looking forward to it.
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>>145724696
unreleased = impossible
show me proofs it can happen on another card that isn't clearly shopped to hell and back.
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>>145724428
I actually only used personality specific expressions for more "uniqueness" than the lively/cheerful/ordinary/cadet expressions I often did in the past
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>>145724825
I save all the fun stuff.

>>145724924
You're an idiot. Spend some time playing with the game files and you'll learn what's actually impossible and what isn't.
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>>145725060
Stop having a tantrum for fucks sake and show proof instead of meme pictures from a year ago.
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>>145725060
>literal dishface
fukin lol m8
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Are you guys slow to recognize a shitposter or is it a mutual entertainment thing?
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>>145725156
Mutual entertainment and excuse to post images I can't find occasion to post otherwise.
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>>145725156
it's a 'mutual entertainment thing' for me but i can't speak for the others
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>>145725268
Dobby? Is that you? I thought you died.
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>>145724428
The harsher scores on this chart reflect a difference in taste between me and the card maker this time I think. I don't like long faces, small eyes, saturated colours, and fat faces, which a lot of your girls have. The extremely bright yellow uniform also didn't help. This was an interesting one though because I saw you grow as a cardmaker as the month went on moreso than any other Maker May chart. You experimented with a lot of different faces which is good, fresh, and encouraging.

>>145724957
Still, look at the variety of facial expressions/poses in the other charts. It's a lot more varied, which makes the girls look more varied. Every time I make a girl and put her in an aloof expression, I think it looks like one of your girls because you do it so often.
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>>145725156
shitposting is fun and should be mutual entertainment for everyone. unlike in real life, you have an excuse to completely braindead here. enjoy it! xD hahaha
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>>145725486
>Every time I make a girl and put her in an aloof expression, I think it looks like one of your girls because you do it so often.
I should start doing that.
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>>145725548
>unlike in real life, you have an excuse to completely braindead here
you're friends must be real sticks in the mud, huh? is that why you shitpost so egregiously here? you poor thing.
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>>145718181
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>>145725486
First of all what the fuck kind of skin mod are you using. I can never quite put my finger on what's different about your girls but I know something is. I think their faces are more red under the eyes? I have no idea. Anyway, you have a bit of a same-facing problem. These all look like face 9-13 to me, but I could be wrong. Stop that. Grow out of your comfort zone, the vanilla faces work well sometimes too (mostly 1 and 2). I really like your colour combinations most of the time. For hair combinations it's a bit more hit and miss (probably when you're trying new things, which is good, but how about trying new faces too). Usually though, your hairs are pretty nice. Also your waifu is cute.
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Wow, feedback is very well received. Thank you.
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>>145725486
You accidentally rated someone higher than your favorite on this one. Means day 31 should be a 7 or 8 does it not?
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>>145726320
As you can probably tell by the ratings, your girls are pretty hit and miss with me, but that's actually a good thing because it shows that you can be fairly diverse. Your comfort zone is definitely in dark colours though, so maybe try and push yourself out of that. You did it somewhat with your white hair girls, but you never really use light colours, like light pink or blue hair. You tried a variety of faces which is good and kept your girls unique. You also tried different things, like monster girls, older girls, lolis, that eye-patch one, etc. Your guys were pretty well done as well. I was particularly impressed with your two non-OC (?) bonus characters because you did a great job at them though they were pretty well out of your style.

>>145727187
You're absolutely right. I find it hard to keep my ratings consistent because I don't have a rubric to check it against, so they're very inconsistent and I'm sorry about that. Take the ratings with a grain of salt or whatever
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>>145725486
Most of the eyes were in the 60-80 range while the Irises where 75-100 range since I was aiming for bigger irises. I prefer using the default faces rather than DDH because I didn't want to overuse DDH (which 12 of my cards used) and I feel a little more comfortable with the default faces. No excuse for the fat faces, I see now they just don't work, adjustments will probably be made. The uniform I really wanted to use yellow. I like lots of bright color because I fucking love bright colors but in the future I'll try to tone down the saturation and brightness more. Thanks for the feedback.
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>>145727918
Just so you know, eye values well above 100 aren't uncommon, so even values like "100 width" can be considered small by some standards. It's all preference in the end though. Netta a cute. Cute!
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>>145728306
They are too common, really.
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>wasting time rating half baked oc trash
lmao
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3-15 eyes are simply the best
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The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents.
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>>145728797
any activity can be described as wasting time if it doesn't further your likelihood to survive

>wasting time playing a mediocre highschool fucksim and character creator
rofl
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>>145728797
I honestly don't get the point in rating helpful points are better than any rating can provide.
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>>145728803
Is that the number of eyes or values?
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>>145729229
values
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>>145727768
For some reason I see a lot of other cardmakers in your girls, and I'm not sure if that's because I've been looking at everyone's charts but it's not necessarily a bad thing. I like your colours a lot, especially when you use a different colour for the eyes and hair. Your hair combinations are very good. You use a lot (is it all of them) of meme faces, but your face sliders seem to be pretty varied so your girls don't look that samey. You stick to one skin tone (or very close to it) throughout, which is fine but something to kepe in mind to change for the future. Some of your girls have pretty long faces, which I don't like, but don't let that discourage you because I know the meme around here is to be squishy and DDH but breaking the mold is good to do every once in a while.
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>>145729090
>filename
show it to me
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>>145729480
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>>145729882
cute, but that's not what i asked for
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>>145729445
You really like DoLLS hair, which is neither good or bad, it just seems like you used all of them during the month. Similar to what I said about Lesbianon, you clearly go out of your way to avoid memes in most of your girls, which is admirable, but also results in unfavourable reviews of those girls. For instance, I can see you tried different face lengths and smaller eye spacing and smaller eyes, etc, which is good to try, but just doesn't sit right with me. You tried a bunch of different faces and skin colours and hair which is all good. Your hair combinations can be a bit weird sometimes and your colours a bit too saturated. You surprise me sometimes because some girls I'm like "literally what the fuck was he thinking" and then other girls I think "Oh she's pretty cute." Anyway, don't be afraid to use some memes every once in a while (which you do during Maker May but not always when you're making girls regularly). They're memes for a reason.
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>>145730071
You didn't ask.
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>>145730181
>>145729480
>>filename (Puffy_Vulva)
>show it to me
i certainly did ask
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>>145729090
WWWWWWHHHHOOOOOOOAAA

such a shitty bootleg hahah :)
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>>145730459
You didn't punctuate it correctly. What you wrote is a statement, not a question.

It's like the sentence 'I helped Uncle Jack off the horse', and 'I helped Uncle jack off the horse'.
They are different but similar.
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>>145730769
u cheeky cunt
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>>145730172
You had a theme of monster girls which was an interesting take on Maker May and it turned out pretty well and you made a lot of interesting girls. Overall, you are always very varied in your girls and its impressive because you somehow do it while still appealing to my tastes so I end up liking a lot of your girls. Of course, because you're trying weird things some of them missed for me, and some of them just felt pretty plain next to all the other monsters. I really like your colour and hair combinations, although you hardly ever make brown haired girls so do that. You also make good choices of eye texture and highlight combos. Your facial proportions are pretty samey, but you pull it off because of the drastically different hairs/colours/general ideas for the girls so I wouldn't really call it "sameface," if that makes sense. I'm not sure what you meant that your girls became uninspired because they were consistently imaginative and inspired to me.
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>>145730769
no, what i did was more like pointing toward an object and commanding you to bring that object to me
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>>145725869
lmaooooooo try reporting my comment again, bitch :))))
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>>145730950
Though you do use a lot of different faces, your general proportions are all very samey so you still come off a bit samefacey. You pretty consistently use the same skin tone for a lot of your girls so try to change that up a bit. Your hair combinations are pretty generic most of the time, and though it's keeping it pretty safe, they aren't particularly bad so that's okay. You started out almost the first half of the month with just brown/black haired girls, but I see that you tried to mix it up with anime colours after that, so just keep doing things like that and varying your style.
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>>145730982
That's not asking. Get your definitions right.
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>>145731102
Your uniform is very saturated so it doesn't go well with each girl, which might make me like them less, just a warning. What's impressive with you is that a lot of your girls use really thin eyes, which I usually don't really like, but you do it well and I like it. I think you change faces often but I can't really tell because they're eyes are so squinty. Your colours are a bit strange sometimes but it's not necessarily bad. Don't be afraid to try some brighter ones for the hair. I see that you sometimes don't put an eyelid, which is of course your choice, but it sometimes triggers me. But you do use them for some girls which is good, just don't be afraid to use them more often.

Anyway, like I mentioned before the ratings are pretty inconsistent. I've looked through all my pictures and I'd probably change a lot of them, but I just chose the first thing that came to mind when I saw the girl. Don't take it to heart. /aa2g/ girls are cute.
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>>145730172
>4.89 average
I give up. Thanks for the feedback.
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>>145731176
the words can be used interchangeably despite their differing meanings
now show me that fox vag
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>>145731550
Not to a filthy plebian mongoloid such as yourself.
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>>145731723
know your place, swine
grovel at my feet and i just might forgive your insolence
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>>145731850
Learn to construct a grammatically sound sentence like you are taught in first grade then get ask.
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meme maker literally tearing us apart
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>>145731506
Kill yout0drgl
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>>145732019
guards! take him away
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>>145731281
>not a single average score above 7
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>>145733174
Probably because 5 is average
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>>145733174
Tone down the autism, the actual critique was the important part anyway.
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>>145733221
How do you define average?
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>>145733174
>highest average is plastic
what a comeback!
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>>145733289
>implying
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>>145733289
The image illustrates that while his verbal critique said to try new things his numerical critique said the exact opposite.
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>>145733174
I fail to see the issue.

>>145733808
here's you're (You). spend it wisely.
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>>145718908
yes
starts slower than 2 snails fucking and plot advancement is based on pure convenience
only good twist is the last part before he fixes everything
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>>145733963
its not (You)-seeking to notice a dissonance between what he said and how he scored.
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>>145734264
aren't you greedy? this will be your last one kiddo.
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>>145733606
what did you mean by this
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>>145734391
On that page where do 1, 5, and 9 fall and what does the bell curve look like?
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>>145734391
He's saying that Sasami is equal in quality to Newton Lee, and that he considers both to be average quality cards.
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>>145734495
db scores are rigged and pointless
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>>145733606
what method did you use to make this selection?
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>>145734350
The scores clearly reflect a bias towards not trying new things, yet he told the top scorer to get out of his comfort zone. There's no reason to leave your comfort zone when your comfort zone is best in show.
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>he's still trying
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>>145734784
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>>145734619
>>145734637
Picked a random page and score wasn't considered. There are 25000 cards on the DB. Average should not mean based on the 15 people who post pictures in /aa2g/. When you smarmily say "5 is average" you should consider the quality of all cards in that average.
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>>145734710
doing the same thing over and over does not a bad thing make, its just boring
you can make two good girls and have them both be totally different, but making totally different girls doesn't necessarily make anything good
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>>145734910
Different is not always good, but boring is always bad imo.
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>>145735012
just because something is boring does not make it bad
but like you said, just because something is different doesnt mean it will be good, see: cuck's mm ratings
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>>145735079
But that contradicts the critic's advice to try new things. Why try new things if round meme faces are free points?
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>>145733174
generous. i'd put the majority below 4. much of it is just hastily made uninspired crap. i wouldn't think twice on skipping all this mediocrity on the db.

consider you fags lucky to have someone to even your unremarkable creations
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>he's out for more
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>>145734710
I'm sorry I failed to satisfy you. Like I said though, my ratings were completely off sometimes because I just put the first number that came to mind but I'd change a lot of them if I went back now. Everything is subjective. It's good to get out of your comfort zone but I can't guarantee that I'm going to like it. It doesn't matter what I think anyway and I am only one of many anons.

Feel free to do your own ratings of the ~300 girls in what you see as the right way.
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>>145735368
>he still hasn't posted anything he's made
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Keep sucking plastic dick degenerates ahahahahah
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>>145735278
why did man go to the moon?
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>>145735587
to stick it to the stinkin commies
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And this everybody is why voting and scores should not be a thing. But come on don't you guys make cards for yourselves? Or do you make them for approval? Either way it's all subjective I don't think rating of any sort should be a thing just whatever you think looks good to you. And before you say something I'm not him.
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>>145735587
Because fuck martians
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>>145735375
I'm saying you should drop the "it's good to get out of your comfort zone" advice when you don't actually rate based on variety. You have your preferences and that's cool but you gave advice for things that didn't factor into your ratings. That's my criticism for you.
Overall you're an 8/10 critic by /aa2g/ standards. You put effort into it, but your wires were crossed between what you said and what actually mattered to you. Looking forward to more ratings from you.
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>>145735720
rating based on variety is the dumbest shit ever
literally
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>>145735587
What man doesn't dream of slaying alien poon?
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>>145735770
Then don't give criticism based on variety. Problem solved.
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>>145733174
>not giving a single 10/10
Lol what even was your standard for your ratings?
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>he can't stop
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>>145735674
There is nothing wrong with discourse because that's is how people grow, and this has been profoundly civil by thread standards.
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>>145736076
No 10/10 unless it's smelly ass granny or redhed slut my son......................... ;]]]]]]]
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>he's replying to himself now
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voting and rating was a mistake.
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I r8 8/8
inb4 b8
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>>145736076
10/10 is stuff made by tmfag, dork, toy, ayakofag and sameeyetextureanon. make a shit per day fags can't hold a candle. xD))
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>>145734839
>smarmily
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>>145735835
you're more likely to get a good score if you do the same things and you're more likely to get a bad one trying something new
just because someone doesnt try something new doesnt mean that the cards aren't good, it just means that they're boring, you don't have to give someones girls terrible scores because he didnt try anything new but not telling them that their girls are very similar would be a painful mistake
on the flipside, just because someone tries something new all the time doesn't mean the cards are good, it just means they're varied, and some of those varieties can range from extremely bad, to painfully average or even incredibly good
tl;dr, just because someone isn't doing new things doesnt mean the thing is bad, but it shouldn't be ignored during critique either
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>>145736801
this
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>>145736569
i r8, go fuck your self/8 very solid, needs some improvement in the kill you self department. so get on that.
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>>145736947
https://mega.nz/#!uhlwxabS!vLBeIi9qC1gbXt5R6D6AAnk5gTbK7pTcDK3Jrrfg5eU

Make your own better girl, here is a surefire mod to that perfection :^)
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>>145736989
the absolute madman
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remember when this place was fun?
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>>145737473
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>>145737473
nope
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>>145737473
It has its moments.
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>>145737473
It was fun when old fat man was around.
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>>145737532
>pretending
>only 7 years
bitch please I am retarded. i once thought 3dpd could be as good as 2d.
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>>145718181

>>145727768
Wow, constructive criticism. I think I'm cumming.

But I agree - some of them are miss and hit. I really like some of my cards which I made in Maker May, but there are also a few which are "meh" for me.

>comfort zone is definitely in dark colors
You know that I noticed this just right now? I never was paying too much attention to it, it was more like "It's nice color" and that's it.

>Your guys were pretty well done as well.
Yeah, I really like how I made them to be honest. Especially that I suck at making guys.

>two non-OC
Yeah, they're non-OC which I easy to make I think. I will finish them. Someday.
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>>145738107
at least you live up to your name painfully avrage anon.
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I've been meaning to post my review of you, whoever you are, for a while now and now that someone else has posted ratings, I feel as if this is the perfect time. Your girls just make me so mad. You made literally one perfect girl, one girl who is sincerely one of the best girls I have ever seen on here, and then you consistently post crap. Even the girls' names, most of which I'm sure are randomly generated, are awful. Just think about that. You don't even know how to make have decent random names. For starters, the girl you started the month with has an awful navy blue. The saturation in her hair has gone too far. After starting off the month poorly, it seems as if you couldn't decide whether or not to make the girl's hair long (look at those god awful side hairs) or short. Even then you paired in with a hideous burgundy, almost maroon colour. On day three you made a slight improvement by going with a more standard brown colour, but holy shit are her eyes fucking pentagons? On day 5 you went with the "hey maybe if I pair a shitty hair colour with a shitty uniform colour it might work" but fuck me man, it just doesn't work. If nothing else, the thing that makes me the most mad about your girls is that you try to pair two awful colours together and it never ever works (See Days: 2, 3, 5, 6, 7, especially 9, 14, 16, 17, 20, 21, 23, 31, and bonus 3). Your inability to have an eye for colour triggers the living fuck out of me. You did, however, do it well with day 15. Unironically the best girl made in May. I just, don't know what else to say. What else is there to say?
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>>145737806
Good times.
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>>145738445
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>>145738445
kek. i like this one.
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>>145738445
Cuck has some strange and disgusting methods
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>>145738445
And so you don't have to fucking autistically do the average, it's 3.058823529411765.
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>high standard general
No wonder so many people commit suicide in competitive societies like japan and korea.
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>>145738345
I'm assuming that's a good thing.
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>>145730950
>Waking up to see this

Thanks for making me feel a lot better, thank you wholeheartedly.
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>>145738445
>that
>10
uhhhhh no????????????
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This rating meme must end.
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>>145739015
>actual nice colours used all around
>nice front hair
>cute hat
>cute lil uniform
????????????????
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>>145739068
better than voting meme
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This is a 10/10 girl.

Get on this level of perfect.
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>>145739375
literal meme
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>>145739375
Not possible, unfortunately.
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>>145739068
>actually fair ratings
>it must end
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