Ask DNA

>>135424132
A sign of my indifference.

How about dem bandit girls.

>>135424835
I can't wait.

>>135424505
Gotta knock a little harder.

>>135424835
Glad he's back so we can dominate some female bandits.

>>135424835
I'm looking forward to them.

getting knocked up by inexperienced boys and watching them panic when you show up pregnant

>>135425993
Yeo,

>>135425543
>>135424132
>>135424505
I had to go listen to these songs fuck you.

>>135424835
I can't remember, are there any scenes with his male bandits?

>>135424835
I'm pretty excite.

Harpys

Was that thief ready for editing or is the writer still wanting to add stuff to him?

Mana drain spells when

Getting romanced by a buff king with a stupid hat

Quick, help me envision how to make a cactus girl sexy.

>>135441402
Nice, showy cactus flower in her hair, go with one of those cacti that just have short, hard to see bristles, and just have them accent her shoulders or anywhere else you don't have to touch. Though there are spineless cacti, that might not make it obvious she's a cactus girl From there it's just the normal stuff you see in dryads, green skin, green or brightly colored hair, stuff like that.

The scene could also get crazy if you want to reference the fact that many cacti contain psychoactive chemicals.

>>135441402
Wait, I should probably explain some of my ideas first.

1. Cactus-like spikey green hair with flowers in it, maybe some minor spines, and a 'normal' plant girl with green skin otherwise -

>>135441743
Well, I guess I was pretty much on the money. At least I've got a second opinion. Thanks, Sapros.

>>135441743
This is good.

Helping a bandit steal some treasure from a castle by seducing a guard when he comes to see what you're doing.

What's a good sex scene friendly term for perineum that's not taint?

>>135446106
jackie chan

>>135446106
Also can't be gooch because I'm p sure that's male only.
>>135446175
I don't think that's an actual term?

>>135446106
Maybe just say from below your genitals

>>135446258
In the lawless wasteland that is written erotica, we can make history and words from whole cloth. We can have a whole new term for it (perhaps a shortened form of perineum, like perni) or something else.

Another solution is >>135446331. Or just use the definition of it as the description.

>>135446331
Maybe but it's gonna get a little confusing when he starts eating your ass.
>>135446452
I dunno man, that sounds like a slippery slope. First you're using perni, then all of a sudden you're knee-deep in cunny and puss-puss.

>>135446679
Connect it to the action. Like say 'it slides down from your vagoo to your ass without ever getting up'. Or something, I dunno.

>>135436553
Ready for editing.

>now when you type in "how do" into the search bar it immediately suggests "how do I write about eating ass"
thanks googs
But it actually did offer some good stuff at least.

Virus girl

>>135441743
qt

>>135449220
It's rude of me to keep these links to myself with this dearth of booty-eating going on, desu.
http://www.laweekly.com/news/5-top-tips-for-expert-analingus-aka-rimming-salad-tossing-butt-eating-2530457

http://www.buzzfeed.com/iramadison/how-to-eat-an-ass#.ncRReJLMW
These 2 were the most informative, a majority of them were just "if you're going to get your ass ate wash with soap" which is pretty common sense and not very useful imo. The comic one was the best, and his matching jockstrap/sunglasses outfit they drew him with was cute.

>>135451868
Viral girl.

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>>135459005
I don't even know if he's still here, but I will never forgive that guy for doing that to me.

>>135441402
>>135441964
Well, anyway, I wrote this right before going to sleep so the quality suffered a bit, but I still like it. It's doggystyle fuck with a big assed, flat-chested cactus girl.
http://pastebin.com/6KpY2Xfu

>>135459174
What did he do to you, anon.
Come, lie down on the couch. Speak freely.

>>135459575
It doesn't really matter, it's boring meta stuff from years ago. You wouldn't care.

>>135460015
I care because I was in that thread but forgot what his deal was. All I remember is that it was very entertaining.

>>135460228
Wasn't it just that he was training his ass so he could be like that manga hero and fight evil monsters with his asshole?

>>135460228
I just didn't like him using a cute image I liked posting for his lewd blogging.

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>>135455049
>>135449220
I always thought I was struggling with this scene because it was taking so long but maybe I just keep forgetting how much I've already put into it.

>>135459297
Will this stuff get put up eventually?

>Just saw that glut of stuff last thread.
Man I hope some of this stuff ends up somewhere in the game, or at least fully fleshed out.

High fives

>>135467390
Low fives.

>>135469804
Something in the middle.

http://pastebin.com/BxCkKvFU
Who ordered almost 1500 words of oral and ass-eating?
What? Nobody did?
Damn it, I fucked up again. The boss is going to have my ass for this!
This version is the subpar version because you don't get to see my comments with stuff like "ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" and "aka your asshole"
Will probably go back and fix things/add things, I was reading that god awful script leak of FoodFight2 in between chunks of writing and that probably didn't help any.

Also if I ever linked this in the general before when it was half-written just pretend it's brand new and congratulate me on writing so much in one night.

Using invisibility to sneak into a womans public bath and banging some girl in front of them all.

>>135475350
I feel like there's a bit of misrepresentation. It's 2500 words overall, but if you skip down to the actual sex part it's only 1500.

Like every recruitable person has some reaction with a mount. Are there even any mounts implemented in yet?

>>135477562
There's supposed to be one you can find in the plains but someone the other day said they couldn't find it.

>>135467390
>>135469804
No fives.

>>135459297
based

Let me know when we have a dream vendor in Slablands because I want to be the first to write a dream where you go to fight Menhit but he's a handsome demon dude and you fuck instead.

>>135459005
>>135459174
kek

>>135458728
Mild girl

>>135455049
gross

>>135478009
It's in the countryside.

>>135449220
Disgusting.

flip

Just an anal variant on the big tits+ass farm girl fucking for people who are into that.
http://pastebin.com/tPnSEhft

>>135446258
>I don't think that's an actual term?
It is now.

Goddamnit japan

>>135494705
what is it this time

>>135459297
Hot.

>>135496202
What isn't it.

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We need more taverns/pubs. With wenches.

>>135494705
>>135497742
What did they do now?
It's always something silly or ridiculous going on over there.

Vaginal variant for the bunny woman encounter.
http://pastebin.com/NLnTCiT2

>>135439321
Grabbing a witch girl by the tits and draining her mana.

>>135500909
Then having her tits shrink as her mana gets drained until she's totally flat?

>>135432921
Then you had a good day.

>>135499608
>>135490992
Glad we're keeping up all that activity.

>>135499608
Awesome

>>135425993
>>135424835
Based bandit girl writer.

ambos

>>135498023
>We need more taverns/pubs. With wenches.
We so do.

>>135513676
Ham bones.

>>135423935
that demon is hot

>>135513676
Ambosanon, tell me, do you still have hope that one day you will be able to embrace the bosom of your dreams?

>>135518578
yes

>>135520607
I'm glad to see somebody fanning the flames of hope.

What is your most anticipated thing regarding Ambos? Breaking her, or rehabilitating her?

I don't even remember what Ambos was about. Was there ever a google doc?

>>135520808
later

Edgy explosion girl

>1-3 finish male parts of ass eating
>4-6 do male mobs
>7-9 just lay in bed and let the depression overtake me
>0 nap

>>135523358
Nice, 30+ days in a row.

Going on walks with a cute guy and holding hands, culminating in a passionate love-making session in the middle of a field of meadows.

Using a demon's horns for handlebars as he fucks you with you propped up against the wall.

>>135467390
>>135469804
>>135473131
I wonder where high fives came from.

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Horror stream 2 starting:
at Cytube, on the Doomhole channel

>>135527793
It seems like it originated from a sports team in the 70's as a variant of the low five that black people have been using since the 20's. They don't know where it came from before then.

>>135527531
Would make more sense during cowgirl.

I ask of you...
How do /you/ envision water elemental girls, anon?
Humanoid girls with control over water?
Perhaps girls made purely from water with a supreme control over it?
Or something else...?

Lewd lolis

>>135532347
Living water in the shape of a girl myself.

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>>135532347
I thought elementals were all just humanoid personifications of their element, like girls made of fire.
In any case, I usually let MGE do my thinking for me.

Stitching up a zombie boy with pretty thread that matches his eyes. Well, eye.

Lice girl

>>135523358
>>135523719
Alright, that's enough of that.
>1-3 male mobs
>4-6 male version ass eating
>7-9 shower then flip coin for male mobs or ass eating
>0 put on a show and write for whatever while you relax

>>135458728
Attention whore girl?

>>135537942
From TTGL

>>135533767
Stabbing his eye with thread?

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>>135458728

>>135540195
And making it so he has to rely on you for everything since he can't see, holding your hand on walks and being hand fed by you and panicking when you're not there?
Evil but I like it.

Spooky girl

If you browse this thread, Tats, sent you an email.

>>135541024
Infectious.

>>135458728
>>135544446

a'la Kansen game series

Doing it with a cute shepherd boy in his hut while the sheepboys he tends to all knock on the door and ask him what's taking so long.

>>135545372
>NTR
How about fuck no?

Buy warbonds

Getting pinned down and fucked by a pair of twins who use you all night. If you get impregnated and give birth they bicker over who gets to claim the kid.
They settle it with a coin flip and the loser fucks you until you get knocked up again.

>>135549461
What happens if you get a bear assisted abortion while pregnant?

>>135546453
The consequences of nukige genre games.
It's basically a virus that causes everybody in the vicinity to fuck everybody else in a big sex orgy. Not much of a plot, honestly.

One ending has the whole island getting a nuke dropped on it.

>>135549636
They don't know about it. You only run into them again after successfully having the kid. If they run into you after an abortion or miscarriage they just fuck you again like normal.

>>135549745
So they don't ask you what happened at all? They don't care about the fate of their unborn child? Is it just a game to them?

>>135549890
Yep.

>>135549960
These two sound like total psychopaths. How about neither one claims the kid?

>>135549665
It's NTR shit. That's not negotiable. It's trash.

>>135550125
I guess if you just keep the kid in your nursery and don't take it with you when you're adventuring they won't claim it.

>>135550308
But you do agree that the nuke ending is the best, right?

>>135550362
Why are you defending that game? Why are you so disgusting as to have played it?

>>135550335
How do they even know you had the kid? You could've had it anywhere, from the volcano to the ocean, or some remote mountain fortress. Are you telling me you think the PC would just carry the kid around?

>>135550461
I never played it, I 'watched' one of the anime adaptations for it. Big difference.

And the best possible ending is having the whole place getting nuked, taking the virus with it and saving humanity.

Do you not agree?

>>135550505
>Not learning the art of dwarf baby shields.

>>135550635
You viewed and enjoyed it. That means you're a repulsive NTRfag.

>>135550505
Yeah. If you bring the kid with you, maybe to show them or just to take the kid somewhere, they see it and say "oh, is that mine? thanks, yoink" and you're out a kid. That way you can clear out the nursery if need be (just of their kids tho). Of course they just knock you up again if you're not on contraceptives so it kind of evens out again unless you eat some herbs and miscarry.

>>135550828
Who said I enjoyed it?
The only good part was the ending.

>>135550889
What if you don't want them taking it? Do you need to fight them and then upon loss get raped and have them take the kid away from you? I certainly hope there's an option to kill these scumbags, even if you're a male PC. These guys are a threat to girls everywhere.

>>135551028
You watched it all the way through.

>>135551052
Maybe you just trick them like "nah, this kid with your same hair colors and eye colors is from someone else."
I guess if you do say it's theirs and don't want them to take it you fight and probably get raped on loss.

>>135551106
You're talking to a man who watched The Room and the Twilight "saga" movies all the way through and without rifftrax to dull the pain.

Just because you watch something doesn't mean you necessarily like it.

>>135551240
Sounds terrible. What happens to the baby after they capture it?
Also, what if it grows up into a full-fledged adult? Or is the baby just going to be some kind of immortal unaging being that exists as a trophy?

>>135551785
It's porn and you had no reason to finish watching it unless you enjoyed it.

>>135551917
Ever heard of being a completionest?

>>135551798
I don't know what they do with the baby desu. I think they just want it because they think it's theirs. That's why they fight over who gets it and the loser knocks you up again so his brother doesn't one up him.
Once they get it they probably just dump it in an orphanage somewhere and tick down another tally mark for whoever's kid it was.

>>135552075
But what about the baby? You didn't answer me about the baby itself.

>>135552012
I've never heard of one that makes themselves sit through porn they hate.

>>135552227
If you keep the baby and they never grab it? Just grows up like all the other babies you got knocked up with by bandits and thieves and mobs.
Unless you mean the baby they drop in the orphanage in which case it just grows up like normal with absolutely no idea who their parents are.

>>135552525
I don't recall any other PCpreg-dervied babies existing, and in the case of existing babies they just kind of stay in limbo. This would set a precedent. Does it grow up into an old person and die childless, what's its personality like, is it like a brother or a composite of both, is it actually a girl, what about them? Will there be an arc where they confront their now middle-aged father and disown him, perhaps even killing him in single combat?

>>135552865
You must dislike pregnancy and children in general if you're giving that anon this much grief over an idea.

>>135552340
I just have this weird thing where I have to know what happens at the end of something no matter what.

Even that terrible movie that my literature teacher in highschool tried to get us to watch that she cut off because nobody was watching it. Except me.

>>135553327
I don't believe you and I want to ask you why you thought bringing up something so utterly despised here and everywhere else other than in its fan circles would be a remotely good idea.

>>135552865
Well IIRC the PC's aging is all screwed up because they were out of the universe for a little bit. Baby shouldn't have this issue so the baby should grow up normal. As for personality either it could be RNG with a little bit of PC input (if you always acquiesce when they throw a fit they could end up spoiled etc.) or just pure RNG (so you could end up with all tsundere kids if you're lucky/unlucky enough).
And then I don't know about everyone else but I'd imagine once the kids hit adulthood they'd probably want to head out into the world on their own and they'd send you little letters every once in a while like "Dear Mom/Dad, I defeated a really bad guy today! The whole town threw me a party to celebrate and they gave me a new sword! I'm still keeping the one you gave me though, don't worry. The next time I'm in the area I'll try to swing home and give you some of the treasure I found. And no refusing this time, even if you have everything you could ever need I still want to give you some more stuff to help pay for food and other stuff! I love you very much, hope I can see you soon! Your son, Bradley #38" stuff like that.

>>135553426
I wasn't the one who brought it up though. I'm a 3rd wheel, as they say. Just somebody who passed by who saw somebody talking about something I happened to know about.

I thought me telling somebody who hated something for being NTR would appreciate knowing that the ending is explosive and kills all the filth involved in the 'story'.

Martial artist gazelle girl

>>135553671
I'm offended that people exist who enjoy it, what happens to the story characters doesn't really matter.

>>135553481
What you're describing sounds like it could be its own full fledged system that could help people who want to write pregnancy content but don't want to deal with the headache of writing out a new character like kids. You should consider writing it if you're this interested in it.

Personally, I like to assume that the PC was also rendered infertile and it takes something to make them impregnable.

>>135552865
I've got an even better idea. The soul of a mage reincarnates into the PC's kid, regardless of who you had it with. he's cute, affectionate, and a colossal tease with an incest fetish, who makes it his new life's goal to seduce you into fucking your... shit, what's the male equivalent of daughteru?
If you have another kid by someone else, he abandons the first child's body and reincarnates into the new one, growing steadily more desperate and clingy each time as he asks you if you like his body this time. Eventually goes yandere and attempts to rape the PC if scorned bluntly too many times, can also be let down more gently causing them to abandon their goal and run away from home, never to bother you again.
Doesn't particularly mind winding up in a girl's body either.

>>135554105
>daughteru
sonfu?

>>135554270
That sounds really dumb.

>>135554380
sonu?

>>135554502
Maybe there just shouldn't be an equivalent. It just doesn't seem to work for words that short.

>>135554053
You mean like a generi-kid system for people who want to write pregnant content but not bother for the stuff beyond it? That does sound pretty useful.
>>135554105
I like the idea. How about it happens as the result of doing some cursed shit so people have a way to avoid it?
Alongside that, maybe a way to keep him only possessing sons or daughters, and having a minimum age limit for the kids he possesses (I wouldn't want a baby I literally just popped out suddenly propositioning me).
Also would it just be blood related kids or could he jump in adopted kids or step kids? Because that would be nice so I wouldn't have to pop out the kid and wait 16-18 years to have the possessed son fucking I want.

>>135549665
Why would they write a story where their own fetish is bad and gets everyone killed?

>>135554665
Or better:
what if he possesses them when they handle some cursed item? So he inhabits one body, notices you don't like it and targets the kid you show the most affection to in front of him or some other way of choosing, tricks him into handling the item ("Hey big bro, check out this neat thing I found in the attic~") and hops to the new body that way? That way if people want to get rid of him more quickly than getting him to run away you can just find the cursed item and set it on fire or something.

>>135555118
I think the downside to that is that it's effectively killing a child while if the soul is like that from birth nobody died.

>>135553671
You should mention some good games now to dilute the salty mood.

>>135555281
But what happens to the old kid when he hops to the new body?
I'm thinking when he possesses them they're still stuck somewhere in their subconscious while he controls most everything else. So if you fuck him for a while and then get tired of him and get rid of him, maybe your kid develops some fetishes as well from prolonged exposure to watching himself fuck his mom's banging body.
Or is that too weird?

>>135554665
>a way to keep him only possessing sons or daughters
The first one would probably be random, of course, but once you could communicate it would make sense if you could say something along the lines of "That's cool and all, but I'd rather a dick/vag." Then they'd lock in the next go as the other sex (while also becoming a little more insecure and approval-seeking for a while afterwards).

>(I wouldn't want a baby I literally just popped out suddenly propositioning me).
Well, presumably they'd wait a while before trying that shit. I mean, at the very least they'd have to wait until they could speak.
God, now I'm thinking about how a baby that can't even talk would even attempt to get "eyy mama u wan sum fuck?" across and it's seriously wierding me out.

>Also would it just be blood related kids or could he jump in adopted kids or step kids?
Blood only. After all, you can't reincarnate into someone who's already been born. There's no real incest angle there.

>Because that would be nice so I wouldn't have to pop out the kid and wait 16-18 years to have the possessed son fucking I want.
I dunno. Personally, at least, if it's not blood related than it's really just fucking a wizard with no sense of right and wrong.
I guess you could have them accelerate their growth somehow (I imagine anybody who plans on reincarnating would want a way to skip the whole "helpless and incontinent for years" part), but that seems kind of like a copout, and it means you lose all the cute bonding scenes at various stages of life.

Astral projection maybe? While they wait for the day they can fug you for real, they seduce you in your dreams?

>>135555118
Yeah no, hold up. I never said anything about possessing your kids, I said reincarnating. Possession is taking the real kid out and sticking your soul in, reincarnating puts your soul in the baby right from the start, without technically murdering a newborn.

>>135554665
>You mean like a generi-kid system for people who want to write pregnant content but not bother for the stuff beyond it?
Yes, that's exactly what I meant. Maybe there could be things like baby traits. Let's say it takes traits from the PC and assigns random stuff to the kid based on that. So for instance, somebody with spiral shaped pupils could have their daughter/son get that, or heart shaped or star shaped pupils. Three points of randomization, in other words. It's a little wonky but I'm sure it could work with some finetuning. Plus maybe a few key traits of the mom/dad NPC like having an animal tail or something.

Then things like a personality list (could just grab from the standard bag of -deres and have generic scenes that play off of that personality, like the tsundere kid making soup for the PC and insisting it wasn't for them or a-anything) and a chart system for their growing up. Let's say for now it depended on whether the PC wants to raise them themselves or send them off to some remote academy to live out their childhood for. The latter would be automated but you could get the kid back in adequate shape.

Having them at home would have more risk (or just looking up a guide), but with more kid scenes and a greater chance of success. Success here meaning that they would be greater assets to your army or have a chance of finding/making more gold for you or something. Maybe in either case there could be a chance of a random event that would help age up the kid so you could get to your desired age range as soon as possible. This system could even include a 'from birth to death' age range, so kids (depending on species flags they were given) could die of old age or disease or fire or any other multitude of things.

>>135555734
>But what happens to the old kid when he hops to the new body?
They'd off themselves, of course.
I mean, the whole point of the interaction is that it only happens if you don't like the body they've been born into as a partner, so it's not like you'd really want the reject around anyway.

And being willing to kill themselves and be reborn over and over again so that mommy will love them is AA+ grade yandere fuel.

>>135555753
Sly loli daughter who keeps trying to get you to slip her the dick is golden.

>>135555753
>it's really just fucking a wizard with no sense of right and wrong
this is the best thing I've read in a while for some reason.
But no, yeah, I see what you're saying. I dunno, some aspects I like other aspects are kinda ehh.
>>135556240
I guess it's better than what I was imagining, which was they move to the next kid and you're suddenly stuck with your 4 or 5 year old acting like a newborn because the right soul was suddenly sucked back into their body.

>>135555753
What about if it can happen with a certain waifu's kids too for male PCs?

>>135556406
Well, except for the bit where we're talking about kids the PC gave birth to, so if you're implying futa then go write it somewhere else with my blessing.

Unless the dick is figurative and you meant /ll/, because that's all good nigga.

>>135556963
There's gender changing eventually. And also >>135556904

>>135556963
How would the mage handle it if his younger brother saw what he was doing with mom and wanted to do it too?

>>135556904
Depends. If you made a waifu just to have this kid with, then it seems like it'd be way to easy to wind up with the mother being a one scene wonder just to access the character. On the other hand, slotting it into somebody else's waifu is rape seems rude, and it kills the option of writing their own kids.
The alternative would be fleshing out the waifu, and now we're talking about two whole projects instead of just the one, and if the kid has an incest fetish then the mom's going to be just as much of a target, as it were.

I dunno. It just feels a lot more clunky to implement with a male PC. Granted I only had this idea half an hour ago so I might come up with something that'd work. Who knows.

Fuck. I wish I could actually write.

>>135549665
When will slab get nukes?

>>135558113
Menhit had a nuke spell (Turned an entire city in the desert to glass with it) and I'm sure the people in the Fortress of Northern Winds were cooking up something of their own. It's basically a formalized explosion spell, shouldn't be that hard really, though I'm sure not everyone is capable of summoning up the energy to use it.

>>135557787
You've got enough energy to flesh out an outline for this, I'm sure you could manage to write a one-scene wonder in the city of Skypoint. Do you have the energy to do more than that? Maybe not, but do you need to? That way you'd have contributed something to the game and could hold your head high.

Negative spells

>>135558779
What do you mean, anon? Like negative icebolt that's actually fire or something? What makes it unqiue from just a firebolt spell? Does it attack ice?

>>135558741
Man I can come up with ideas and chains of events all day, but I'm about as good at fleshing them out as a starving kid in africa. I write skin and bones. Even connective tissue's a stretch.

>>135558895
They have a dim outlook on life.

>>135555718
Now if you want me to tell you what I like in an eroge adaptation, I'd say Tentacles and Witches.

Despite the name it's completely lacking in any rape and is all baby making sex. Sometimes lovey sometimes silly and sometimes the MC changes into a tentacle monster because witch magic but it's all good fun.

>>135559110
You can try a little harder than that.

>>135559342
I've tried, trust me.
I think this will be the third time I've had a neat idea is this thread, attempting to do something with it, and quietly failed.

>>135559342
Anon, pushing people so much isn't going to lead to good results.

>>135559543
What helps for me is doing a little bit at a time.
I mean I have a million projects half written so don't fucking listen to me, but for the stuff I have IN Slab, I did a little bit at a time and did a really detailed outline before I even started on the intro or anything.

>>135559748
I can never work like that. I'm the kind of person who does things in one go, or I never end up doing them at all.

At any rate, the problem isn't running out of steam partway through, it's reaching a single line of dialog and realizing once again that I'm too autistic write a character that speaks from any perspective but my own.

>>135560167
Oh that's no problem, just go with it. Every character says stuff the way I'd say it and from my perspective and I've never gotten any complaints. Hell, they might as well be fucking me with how I've written them.

>>135559543
For the exact opposite of what >>135559748 said, what helps for me is having a loosely detailed outline that's maybe about a paragraph long, that sums up the character motivations and what I want to have play out with them, then writing out the scene as a draft and see how it plays out. Once I'm done with that, I tinker on the draft over time and from there I develop the whole thing.

>>135560167
Is that it? Is that really all that's stopping you? Dialogue? Don't worry about it one bit, especially on the first go. Professional scriptwriters don't worry about dialogue that soon, why should you? If all else fails, you can just narrate it at first and come back to it later.

>>135559215
The name makes me think of a Japanese D&D spinoff.

>Storming while I write dicks
Ah yes, perfect.

Why are yandere boys so perfect?

>>135559215
I might look into it.

spooky stuff

>>135565567
Dicks with little white handkerchiefs draped over them to look like ghosts, complete with wailing mouths drawn on with pen.

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>>135560397
>Hell, they might as well be fucking me with how I've written them.
Lewd.

>>135560446
>Is that it? Is that really all that's stopping you?
No, it's just the biggest thing. The rest of it is that I'm a shit writer.

In keeping with grand tradition, I'll give it a shot anyway, fail miserably, file it away and forget about it, rediscover it in my documents folder a couple weeks later, try again, fail some more, put it away again, and repeat the process until I'm so ashamed of the entire project that I dig my oldest external drive out from wherever I've left it and put everything on there alongside what's left of my other ideas, as a historical record of my incompetence.

>>135566923
>The rest of it is that I'm a shit writer.
If you have time to beat yourself up, you have time to improve.

Too tired right now. Look forward to water girl tomorrow.

>>135566923
bro, I absolutely guarantee you I'm worse than you are. And I have stuff in Slab, so no worries! If my stuff is in there, your stuff is probably super good by comparison and will get in in a flash.

>>135567078
>>135567275
F-fine then. I guess I'll just have to actually read the design doc.

If there's anything else you guys want taken into consideration, now's the time.

I hate Kayne west and his music is trash.

>>135567217
I will.

>100 words from finishing shortPC gay anal
please lend me your power even if it's only briefly

>>135423935
That's a cute tail.

Getting a dick in every orifice big enough to house one.

Robinhood girl

Happy birthday ZUN

Awoo's and girls with neato hats all around

>>135581080
Don't forget the alcohol.

>>135574694
Good for now, plus a little more for medium sized PC gay anal. All that's left is tall PC, fucking the guys (not receiving) and then the combat stuff. Then editing and ba-boom, two more guys to fuck in Slablands.

>>135581336
Just realized after I finish these two dudes I have another two dudes to finish. 4 dudes, nice.

My giant snake girl

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>black haired mafia guy meets the MC when she was a little girl (like 4/5), moves her from a rival mafia orphanage to his mafia's orphanage and watches her grow up, grooming her into being the kind of girl he'd want to date
>even the bad guys acknowledge how fucked up that is
I made a horrible mistake, I never should have done his route.
Red or Purple dude next?

>>135585515
Finish what you started.

>>135571442
You have good taste

drop the CoC from the op title
this general has nothing to do with it anymore

>>135585612
I did. At the very least I can say his route had less boob groping than blondie's (although that might be because his choices were harder. All of blondie's were stuff like "Go with Dulio", "Hug Dulio", "Agree with Dulio" so I always knew which was the good answer whereas pedoGerald had stuff like "Apologize (for no reason)", "Try to stop the Informant from escaping (which is the bad option somehow?), and "Stare into Space") Still got the Happy Ending tho.
Also Gerald's mom's name is Geraldine, which is enough to ruin the route for me.
So childhood friend red or asshole purple?

>>135585848
>asshole purple
End with the childhood friend. They can't possibly fuck that up. They probably will.

>>135585979
Good point.
The worst part is, I think pedoGerald is the true end guy because he's the one with the most involvement in the main storyline.

I love meeses to pieces.

That mouse loli was good stuff.

>>135586598
>mouse loli
What? Where?

>>135586779
http://pastebin.com/rmFdAZcx

An anon posted this the other day. It's not finished but what's there so far is excellent.

>>135586841
Guess I somehow missed it. Thanks.

Fuck it I give up, I can't isolate gold in cheatengine. Anyone want to fill me in?

>>135567217
neat.

Watching a bunch of knights fistfight each other for the pleasure of pulling out your chair and kissing your hand.

>>135559121
this

Cyclops crybaby that gets all flustered and teary-eyed when you hold his hand or hug him.

>>135558895
Opp of holy

>>135553684
That is ripped.

>>135538320
TTGL?

>>135535591
rice girl

Succubiutts

>>135602076
Eh, I don't think it works, anon. Stick with succubutts.

dolphinboy pretending to be nice and cute by retrieving your potions and weapons if you drop them in the water

>>135602742
no

>>135605576
Maybe

>>135608535
Yes

>>135523137
She's a mud slime girl. A girl made of mud.

>>135609003
Mud golem?

Reminds me of Aht from Kamidori Alchemy Master. I liked her. Very tank'y.

>>135532347
>>135567217
All right then, here, water elemental girl sex. Might be a bit too short right now but I did enjoy it, and I hope others do too.
http://pastebin.com/weGSVKuq

>>135513676
jambo

>>135587719
Use that dev mode someone did last thread.

What's your favorite project that got posted this week?

>>135611876
>Water milk

>>135615548
All of the female ones.

>>135518341
hot girl puns

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>>135616606
Red skinned oni's would be pretty hot, actually.

No seriously, red absorbs a lot of ultraviolet rays, their skin would get hot pretty quickly.

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>>135618748
I know something else I want their skin to absorb.

>>135619137
What could it be, anon?

>>135619137
Semen?
I heard from somewhere that's actually pretty good for your skin.

>>135619346
Something white and milky.

>>135619402
Sure, if you have to come out and just say it.

>>135619436
It's what I do anon-kun, I'm sorry.

>>135619402
Man, I was about to play dense and dance around saying what it was and you just had to go and say it outright. I can't believe you would deprive me of this.

>>135619542
Maybe that's their fetish?

>>135615548
Actual written stuff? Thief guy. General project idea? Reincarnating mage.

>>135498023
Wenches

>1-3 write gay anal
>4-6 go back to sleep for a little bit
>7-9 go back to sleep until the pizza arrives
>0 play games

>>135498023
A wench in Skypoint could work.