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Kekking at Pocket Gaster edition

Previous thread >>125169075

Spoilers ahead, proceed at your own Frisk.

-The Game
>http://store.steampowered.com/app/391540/
>http://undertale.com/

-The Game's Demo
>http://undertale.com/demo.htm

-Booru
>http://under.booru.org/

-Recommended Games
>http://pastebin.com/fsqd5Sa6

-Writebin
>http://pastebin.com/UCr5qFpc

-Steam Group
>http://steamcommunity.com/groups/undertalegen

-Flockdraw
>flockmod.com/undertale

-Cytube
>Channel: Undertale

-Shimeji Directory
>http://pastebin.com/YFEGhgxY
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EAT THE GOYS
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FISH
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Can some anons help me fill up my Sans folder?
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nth for BAD
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So who was most likely the one that killed the other five kids?

Sans, Undyne, or Asgore?
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Ghosts are for cuddling and smooching
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>>125185869
You actually made an OP.

Wowie.
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Flowey a best!
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nth for sleeping Goatdad and friends
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Nth for sexy robot ghost mom.
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nth for scalie gaylies
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>>125186035
lord help me if I can't spam images
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>>125186008
>Sans
How would anybody come even the tiniest bit close to this conclusion?
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>>125185869
I want to know more about the kekking meme

Something about sans and Anon kekking at random stuff amuses me.
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xth for Frisk lewds
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nth for gote
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Mettaton has ears
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>>125185994
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>>125186143
well at least I got a good kek out of it
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>>125185962
EAT THE GOYS
RACE WAR NOW
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>>125186308
nice meme
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>>125185962
i'd let chara eat me

just saying
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To the guy who writes and draws this series (assuming he does actually come on here)- Your art is seriously the best I've seen for Undertale. I love the series, I love your art. Thank you for making it, and continuing to do so.
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>>125186204
Man I wish I could be fucked like that. I don't even have a vag.
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>>125186008
Undyne is probably too young since its implied that Frisk is the first in a few decades and fuck what toby said on twitter it makes no sense that 6 other humans made is past all the monster only to die to Asgore, or that Asgore caught all 6 on random walks before other monsters got to them.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3WLS8nn5XA

UNSTUMPABLE
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>>125186154
Didn't he say if he hadn't promised Toriel he'd take care of Frisk he would've killed him on the spot?
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>>125186398
why
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>>125185994
I have more Sanses then I know what to do with.
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Kiss kiss
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>>125186159
then let us kek together
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EVERYONE POST YOUR TOP-LEVEL FOLDERS IN YOUR UNDERTALE FOLDER.

>>125186375
The artist didn't write it (I think), but yea it's some of my favorite art.
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>>125185962
Voracious demon loli Hitler when?

>>125186372
Demon can

Demon will
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For the anon that wanted to see the full version of this comic.

>>125186256
That might be a human AU.
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Is Sans having bad dreams canon or not? Sometimes its hard to tell what shit is canon or not with this game
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>>125186526
>>125186375
I'm 99% sure they did write it, and they do indeed come to /utg/.
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>>125186526
>EVERYONE POST YOUR TOP-LEVEL FOLDERS IN YOUR UNDERTALE FOLDER.

You want me to dump 320 Asgore pictures?
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3WLS8nn5XA
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>>125185962
>>125186372
>>125186540
What about magic soft vore?

That's the only kind I'm not offended by.
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>>125186398
>not "You can't stump the trump"

ONE JOB
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POST THE FUCKING GOAT
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>>125186008
my headcanon is that two were unambiguously killed by asgore, two were suicides, one died by illness, and one was killed by gerson

when you're talking about hypothetical child murder it's hard to keep things cheery
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>>125186661
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>>125186375

and it seems my little guess about the missing soul-heart is nullified. I did think it had been sold, which is what caused Frisk's change in attitude, the ribbon. Sans wouldn't know about it if he had been killed after all.
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>>125186003
His little face is so cute here. Is this the only time his sprite doesnt have crinkles at the corner of his mouth?
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>>125186398
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>>125186661
2 goats
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>>125186712
Are you saying Asgore cloned himself TWICE?
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>>125186540
Wouldn't it be reverse hitler, goy?
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>>125186586
It's just fan drivel. I like the concept though, personally.
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>>125185994
It'd be easier to just have all the Sansfags zip up their folders and upload them

But I'm way too lazy for that shit, and no one would want my stuff because I have a Soriel folder in there
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>>125186108
Not sure if you're in this new thread, but:
honestly, the reason that I personally do reader insert is because it's what popular and what gets read. People avoid OC fanfiction, probably bc most of it is shit and also bc for a lot of people self-insert is a lot more satisfying. Writing in second person actually really sucks, but if you actually want people to read your things and maybe give you some sort of critique on your writing, it's what you have to do (in the erotica/romance genre, anyway).
I also write it because I have a huge hard on for a fictional character and love self indulgence, but that's besides the point.
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>>125186642
No I mean, screenshot the actual folders.

Like this
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>>125186661
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>>125186061
I love him
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https://castingcall.club/projects/undertale-the-musical
How many of us can sing, /utg/?
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>you will never repeatedly hit frisk with your belt when they show you their report card filled with Cs and Ds
>you will never make frisk stand outside in the cold instead of letting them have dinner after you find out that they failed last week's math test
>you will never erode frisk's self-esteem by mocking them for all of their tastes in clothes, music and friends
>you will never yell at frisk in public over something trivial and inconsequential, with horrified bystanders watching as frisk apologizes to you profusely and tries desperately not to cry
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>>125186696
Radiation said all 6 made it to him and got killed.
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>>125186810
yeah and that's totally understandable, writing to an audience is just as valid as writing what appeals to you specifically and hoping others will follow along

i prefer to do the latter and that is why i will never ever ever ever make any money doing it, but that's what a day job's for
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>>125186760
Sans is cute throughout the entire game, nigga. Get outta here.
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>>125186642
Angel Asriel is my new favorite thing that will never catch on
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>>125186896
>Shoulder
>On a flower
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>>125186956

The end goal being to turn them into genocidal Chara right?
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>>125186956
I know. It makes me feel good that I will never be that much of a bitch
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Thick.
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>>125186972
radiation also said that asriel couldn't be saved but THAT DIDN'T STOP ME
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Spider ass?
More like best ass.
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>>125186557
Thanks.
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>>125186927
Holy jesus all of these are so horrible; and why a musical of all things?
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>>125187000
>Those giant chunks of missing numbers

Don't tell me you don't just automatically let it add the (number).
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>>125186974
Have you done any writing for /utg/? I'd be interested in reading some of your stuff.
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Hello everyone

What are we all listening to?
For me it's this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wPnhaGWBnys
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>>125185962
please do not eat the delicious monsters
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>>125187108

with guilt.
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>>125187124
thicc
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>>125186858
Fixed it.
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>>125187245
videogameshotdog.com
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>>125187173
well, they've already arranged for a long-form reading of the game, presumably this is the logical next step

good on them for being ambitious but i think i'll give it a miss, there's a boatload of His Theme lyrics out there and all of them are clunky as hell so if that's the general trend then no thanks
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>>125187124
Can't it be both, anon?

>>125187252
>666x666

Fitting.
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I want to hug Asriel! So I can take glee in his expression as I twist the knife deep into his back. I won't even give him enough time to scream as I grab his face to give him the facefucking of a lifetime. His essence will spread out on my dick so he will always be a part of me even in death.
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For whoever posted that kinsey scale last thread
>Score a 6 a long time ago
>About one year ago score a 5
>Score a 4 now

send help, please
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>>125187173
>>125187332
Now I remember the colab reading.

I wonder if they ever caught up or they quit.
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Enjoying your night so far /utg/?
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>>125186956
Didn't Frisk climb Mt. Ebott to run away from home?
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>>125186818
Oh uhh here I guess.
My organization is kinda shit
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>>125187252
>Poorly drawn vore
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>>125187423
I would hate to get his dust in my peehole.
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>>125186128
How the fuck did it not say that? It said "RIP 6 times".
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>>125187234
i'm CourierNew. hi!
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>>125187423
that's really edgy and should not receive a kek
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>>125187184
I havent bothered to make it number them in a while, and they were all in one big folder before I separated them, I don't want dupe filenames
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i want to give the flower candy
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>>125187470
It kind of blows. I'm tired. Didn't do anything.
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>>125187456
You're turning straight for gote, anon
Just accept it
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>>125187457
They're still doing stuff apparently.
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Alphys vore when

Give me my embarrassing trashlizard having embarrassing trash kinks.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=miJhqqbl8tw
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>>125186956
Yo what the fuck captain?
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>>125187497
>Two new folders
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>>125187497
GIT GUD
its a little outdated sorry
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>>125187245
I've got a couple different things going through my playlist at the moment but I keep putting this one on repeat. I kinda want to make a lyric comic with this but I can only think of a few scenes for some of the lyrics.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VEpMj-tqixs
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>>125187252
>>125187371
Does he make all of his pictures so small because he wants them at 666x666? That's nifty, but I'd rather have them bigger.
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>>125186956
dude what's wrong with you
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>>125187470
I'm working, and it's makes me go through a couple of existential crisis, though I always get those around this time of year.... wish I could be playing Wasteland.
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>>125187584
that doesnt make any sense, wouldnt that mean I would be turning gayer?
who the fuck has even heard of someone gay picking up straight tendencies
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>>125187486
frisk's motivations are another thing that kind of get screwed up by undertale's meta aspect

mt. ebott and his ambiguous reasons for going there are an obvious player analogue (why did you climb this mountain/why did you play this game) but remove the player from the equation and you're left with a quiet little kid who climbed a death mountain all alone and then presumably went off to live with a grandma goat, it doesn't paint a happy picture
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>>125187794
apparantly he was fitting them into one big canvas

was that ever finished?
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>>125187689
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zv1446FOAhY
God why do these people exist

This seems like a cool mod but I don't want to suffer through this guy's cancer.
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>>125187768
Why git gud when you can get the best.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mQdzqtpnGf8
Here's something for the assholes out there.
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>>125187526
Holy fucking shit, I read One by One and absolutely loved it. Your writing style is amazing, and the way you capture characterizations is brilliant. Do you have any tips for poor amateurs like myself?
can I somehow contact you on Ao3
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>>125187332
Yeah I mean, good on them for wanting to create content but damn. Not my cup of tea at all.

>>125187470
My night has been pretty cool, although right now I'm struggling with a certain part in my story so I'm taking a little break to think.
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>>125187794
Sorry, that's how big they are at 100% size

I'd need to draw them bigger but my monitor's resolution is pretty terrible
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>>125187852
What kind of scale are you looking at?
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Why does Undyne have an eyepatch?
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Posting cleanliness.
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>>125187518
>How the fuck did it not say that? It said "RIP 6 times".
Probably cause it doesn't really make sense that all six humans could make it to Asgore without being attacked and killed by other monsters and him just happening to find all six while talking a walk seems....unlikely
>>125187760
Those are filled with comic parts that I was stitching together. Im just going to delete the whole folder at some point so I didn't bother to name them.
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>>125187982
She thinks it looks cool.

That's actually why.
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>>125187245
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQIBTDwNapw
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>>125187982
Gerson never finished her eye.
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>>125187979
that scale
the kinsey scale
or is there some trick to it?
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>>125187857
They both probably tried to kill themselves.

>>125188045
>Probably cause it doesn't really make sense that all six humans could make it to Asgore without being attacked and killed by other monsters
Why not?
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>>125188071
did toby actually say this
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>Playing T.Hawk against Elena
>Elena gets bodied by T.Hawk, think it will be easy
>Get's close in the last round
>Do my cross up dive that would hit every other character
>She blocks it and punishes me for the win

/utg/ help me hold my L
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>>125188178
I think it's confirmed in a phone call or something. Either way it wouldn't be out of character for her.
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>>125188148
You're acting less and less gay if you went from a 6 to a 4 like you said.
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>>125188159
>Why not?
Because doing a no kill run without ever dying is hard? Also their equipment is all over the fucking place? Also the monsters were probably a lot more active in searching for humans back in the day? Only reason Frisk is able to get by most monsters is that they don't realize that their human.
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>>125188178
I think it's at some point in game, her eyepatch is flipped up briefly.

Like, when you're hanging out with her or while doing the thing with Alphys.
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>>125186974
Well for whatever it's worth I agree with you, especially how it's not conducive to good writing skills. It's not only disproportionately likely to produce low-quality cringe due to the inherent limitations but unfortunately it's what's popular for this fandom, which increases the disproportionate quantity of badfic. Kind of a shame too, at least third-person mary sue fanfiction is amusing in a so bad it's good kind of way.
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>>125187768
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>>125188285
and thats what is happening
I just find it weird, thats all.
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>>125188353
>Because doing a no kill run without ever dying is hard?
Who says they all went no-kill? The tutu is "Dusty" and the gun is empty.
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What do you think, /utg/?
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>>125188285
Do you mean you're a lesbianon falling for gote? Interesting.
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>>125188573
Well then he was justified in taking them out since they were probably a significant threat both to the kingdom and his own life
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>>125188604
>transformation fetish
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>>125187930
the only real universal tip (and every writer will tell you this, always apologetically) is write a lot/read a lot. keep grinding your face against the work and you will improve, despite everything else. doesn't matter what you're doing or what genre it's in, write a lot of it and read a lot of it and always compare your work to that of others and try to gauge where they went right or you went wrong or vice-versa, and eventually your intuition will improve and your language will smooth out

this goes double if you want to go into erotica or romance, i lurk in a couple of those communities (mostly because i'm dumbfounded at the money some of them make) and a lot of those people churn out a novel every other week, it's insane. obviously they're edge cases - they view themselves as marketers and manufacturers rather than sensitive artists, which is presumably why so many of them are able to actually make a living at what they do - but they follow the same principle as everyone else. write a lot, read a lot

in more personal advice, i'd advise to watch out for easy cliches you might find yourself leaning on and correct them as needed. writing is a tiring process, and as the brain gets fatigued it tends to go for rote or obvious lines or images as a way of limping to the next sentence. staying aware of your own repetitions or weaknesses in your prose will eventually give you an "ear" for the rhythm of a sentence and help you identify mistakes even as they're happening.

and always edit. famous agent line - "everyone makes a first draft. then they write." the editing process is where most of the work lies and it's one of the bits that's hardest to improve. give yourself a minimum one-day cooldown on anything you do, read it back over, and correct as needed. some people recommend reading it out loud to get a feel for clunky lines, and while i've never done it myself it's certainly not bad advice.
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>>125187920
is the name of that hydrus client?

>>125188353
>Because doing a no kill run without ever dying is hard?
Why would you assume none of them killed monsters?
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>>125188604
I want to be him
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>>125187245
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UylPrMcurB8
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>>125188485
I imagine losing both of your children at the same time throws quite the wrench into a relationship
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>>125188556
TIP TOP KEK
SAVED
Thanks so much, Anon!
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>>125188553
NOT GOOD ENOUGH
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>>125188604
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Oh my god I just finished One By One

I can't handle it that was so good

I cried
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>>125188604
What I think is who the fuck are they waving at in the last panel?

You don't just instantly swap to 'I drew this character' for the last panel of this shit, it's a sequence, which means each thing is connected to the next and previous.

GAWD.
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dr. gaster, i'm royal guard!
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>>125188387
>>125188178
It's during the Undyne date, when she turns left, her left eye is visible. It's because toby was lazy and mirrored the sprite, though, she still has one facing forward.
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I'm amazed how quickly he guessed
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Made this while waiting for the new thread to come up. Enjoy ya big lugs.
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>>125188761
Link?
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>>125188781
You don't get to bring friends.
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>>125188781
>Not papyrus

you FUCKED UP, CIA
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>>125188604
>>125188680
This kind of thing is my fetish but this pic really fucking sucks
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>>125188870
SARLOS!
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>>125188908
http://archiveofourown.org/works/4942816/chapters/11345293

Have fun
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>>125188709
Except that not what broke their marriage. What did was Asgore response to the barrier.
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>>125188870
that looks awesomes
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>>125188761
SAME
>that perfect characterization
>that humor
>that plot
It's so great. I really look up to that person's writing.
I can't find any other Undertale fics that are that good. Any recs?
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>>125188761
I feel you

I almost wish I could read One By One again like it was new more than I wish I could play Undertale again like it was new
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>>125188963
TG TF is a big thing for me too

Not too into the toriel bit, maybe someone turning into a temmie or someone turning into a girl Frisk/Chara.
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>>125188963
At least you don't have a paw/feet fetish

Do you know how hard it is to find decent shit of that
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Post candidates for alternate character theme songs.

Mettaton: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WYvji5AXOfk
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"how much chocolate can i eat before i throw up"
"nearest chocolate factory"
"how to rob a chocolate factory"
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>>125188687
Thank you so much for responding. I'll keep all this in mind.
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>>125186526
who else /disorganised/ here
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>>125189232
>you will never have a chocolate orgy with Chara
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>>125189232
I'VE BEEN FOUND
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>>125189061
>You will never have as much determination as Frisk
>You will never make your way, through convolutions of space and time, to a happy ending with a goat husband through sheer DETERMINATION
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>>125186696
>one was killed by gerson
Choke on a crab apple? Allergic reaction to sea tea?
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>>125189341
I spent ~$600 on chocolate yesterday.
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>>125189139
>Someone turning into a temmie

That'd be too hilarious to be sexy, anon
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>>125189419
are you serious

how the hell do you buy $600 worth of fucking chocolate
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>>125189419
>~$600
You sure you didn't add an extra zero in there?
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>>125189419
I swear to god if you say you were doing it for Chara..
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>>125189531
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>>125189419
How are you gonna eat all that? Is it gonna go to waste?
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>>125189534
Easy. Imported chocolates and truffles.
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>>125189534
>>125189678
I get $1000 in scholarship money for the university bookstore and I normally spend it on video games.

I was gonna just buy one of every amiibo and get an extra 3ds but they changed the rules so that you couldn't order shit on the last day.

So I just went to their candy section and started bringing the boxes to the counter.

I also bought a bunch of random shit for me and my family for christmas.

>>125189680
It wasn't something I thought of but I might do one of those "dinner with your waifu" things. I've got literal boxes of chocolate bars.

>>125189714
Me and my friend will eat it over the coming months.
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>>125189330
Haven't actually organized my shit at all yet.

They're just sitting in my pictures folder.
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>>125189726
Richfag?
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>>125189652
Is this the part where Chara shows him the wonders of molestation?
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>>125189534
inadvisably
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>>125189714
>>125189680
>>125189678
>Regulating how much chocolate a guy can acquire

Please.
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The Monster is a vile, despicable creature. It wishes nothing but the eradication of Humanity. On the surface, it sits there, biding it's time until it can enact it's sinister agenda. The Monster seeks to divide and conquer Humanity and turn us against each other. While we're too busy fighting each other for pointless causes, we will be too distracted to fight our common enemy. Show the monster no mercy, for it will show you none.
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>>125189007
This thing is roughly the same length of The Sun Also Rises.
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>>125189698
>Already a fucking sneasel

Why is TF such an autist-infested fetish?
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>>125189801
I'm not OP, I'm just someone who really loves european chocolate but can't afford it.
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>>125189776
>1000 dollar scholarship
>buying on useless shit, instead of books.
Just like my brother.
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>>125189776
I think you need to learn how to manage your money senpai
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>>125189867
Yeah but its pretty good, there's a reason its the go to head canon of choice around here
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Oof, I can tell I've been writing too much today. This shit is getting muddled. After I finish this part I'll definitely have to stop for the night.
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>>125189880
Why would you even turn into a Temmie when you're naturally gonna turn into a Weavile anyway?
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>>125189815
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>>125189915
It expires at the end of each semester and I usually don't have to buy books.

I bought useful stuff last semester, and I was going to this semester, but I couldn't.

>>125189946
Buy letting $1400 evaporate into thin air?
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>>125189867
>googles The Sun Also Rises
>it's not another fanfiction
sigh...
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>>125189058
>>that perfect characterization
>>that humor

Yeah. Not only did it give me the best Goat-related closure for the game's story, but it managed to be *hilarious* in exactly the same way Toby's writing is.

Frisk hugs Papyrus and then
> "Oh. Nyeh heh heh! For a moment I thought that you were going to suplex me.”
>Frisk looked up from the vicinity of Papyrus’ knees, his expression genuinely bewildered.
>“Well, Undyne taught me that every hug was actually a suplex! She did this by hugging me, and then suplexing me, while yelling ‘Every hug is actually a suplex!’ It...wasn’t a very fun lesson."
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>>125189880
i actually got the stomach to go onto a couple of furry sites to see if they had any TF shit and its all fursonas turning into undertale fursonas its GAY AS HELL
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>>125189880
>>125189983
cause people pay for their fursonas to get tfed
for some reason
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>>125187245
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqZ3PGbczEo
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Post Dads being shitty
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>>125190024
Well technically, every hug IS a suplex, just a suplex where nobody gets hurt.
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>>125189997
I only read the first part of that sign.
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I feel like Undyne would be the kind of heroine who would wear a cape.

What kind of cape do you guys think Undyne would wear?
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>>125190001
1. Deposit the money into a savings account without anybody knowing
2. ?????
3. Profit
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>>125187245
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ep7PrtmkCL4
I have a thing for electric swing
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>>125190279
>1. Deposit the money into a savings account without anybody knowing
It's not real money anon it's just store credit.

I bought some books I'm gonna sell for cash, I should probably get like 2-300 off of that
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>>125189419
what? 600 dollars on chocolate? for what?
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>>125190279
>without anybody knowing
What, do your parents monitor your bank account?
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>>125189840
>Human race unites, believing monsters to be the source of all problems
>White supremacists, black supremacists, jihadists, and zionists congregate, saying that it is the work of the monsters that have turned them against eachother
>Create the "Humanity Brotherhood", using jihadist brutality, black media sympathy, white infiltration, and zionist control to turn every government of the world against the monsters
This could be an interesting AU idea.
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>>125190464
>This could be an interesting AU idea.
Sounds needlessly edgy anon
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>>125190467
>blood
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>>125190227
She wouldn't. She'd wear a scarf.

If it has to be a cape, it'd be a Power Girl/Captain Marvel-style single-shoulder cape.
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>>125190338
>it's just store credit.
At least your school store has stuff worth spending that much on.
Mine just has typical school things and clothes/merch with the school logo on it. I'd hate to get $1000 store credit for that.
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>>125188870
Redid the shadows on it since I realized I changed the lightsource dramatically and I need more shading practice.
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>>125190467

>implying undyne bleeds anything except whale oil
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>>125190467
Well, well, well. Looks like you got a bit more than you bargained for, "hero". But it's the end of the line for you. Make this easy, and stay down.
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>Chip my tooth.
>Makes a cool noise when I blow through it.
Only upside
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>>125190467
>Two signatures
Why?
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>>125189776
someone is paying your tuition and you repay whom ever by wasting their money on fucking chocolate, you could have bought someone some school supplies or not have bought anything at all.
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>>125190641
looks like one of them might be a watermark for their website
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>>125190121
Well they'll be OK since there's killing intent involved. Just horribly mentally scarred.
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>>125190179
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>>125190598
I actually own like a dozen pairs of the same sweatpants.

>>125190678
It's scholarship money that I got when I finished highschool. When my sister still went to this school I paid for her books. Not spending it is just letting money go to waste.

I even went around campus handing out candy to people.
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Shields up! Protect the king! Shields up, brace for contact! For all those who have come before us, and for all those who have died at our side!

We stand here, at this last dim port before the wave of cataclysm, facing down the tide that rises up to claim us.

No tomb but the battlefield, no victory but the scars we etch upon our foes

Here and now, we defy extinction
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>>125190789
Leave me to it? Okay.
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Okay, wow. I'm looking back on part 11 and it's garbage. I'll come back to it tomorrow, I'm not going to post something up that's pretty much the climax of the story when it reads like a pile of dog shit.

Guess it's back to lurking /utg/ until I fall asleep. Maybe I'll finally organize my fanart folders.
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I'm starting my genocide run but I just want you all to know that I still love my friends I just want to experience it that's all I'll beat it on true pacifist again after I promise
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>>125190930
Do you think you are above the consequences?
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>>125190930
>Pacifist after Genocide
Go ahead and do that, little buddy.
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explain yourself /utg/
why haven't you kekked today?
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Guys I finally got caught up on reading The Best of Times, The Worst of Times and I feel so empty right now. I hate reading ongoing fics, this always happens, I get way too emotionally invested in them and then I feel nothing but emptiness when I don't have anything else to read.

Plus I headcanon sweet/loving Dadster hardcore so him being a complete asshole in this fic is tearing me apart
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DO YOU SEE BANANA MAN?
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>>125190930
>Kill everyone
>Still think of them as your friends
Anon,,,,
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any porter robinson fans here?
I just found this and i lost my shit over it
https://soundcloud.com/officialcardi/sad-asriel
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>>125191005
>>125191018
>>125191068
y-you've all done it too!
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>>125190930
>I'll beat it on true pacifist again after I promise
Just make sure you actually finish genocide before you do, partner. Wouldn't want to miss anything, right?
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>>125191034
I am often kekking, my friend.

I just don't post it.

>>125190930
you're... kind of a freak, aren't you?
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>>125190930
>doing genocide
>ever
>not being a TRUE true pacifist
I hope Undying and Sans give you over a million bad times.
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>>125190930
You will have to answer for your actions
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>That noise when you get a crit
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>>125191120
I downloaded a save file for the bosses, cried like a bitch when I finally beat Sans and then cockblocked Chara right when they were going to stab stab Asgore actually
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