Zootopia Thread: Dancing Bun Edition
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>>4200733
Pic is so damn hot!
Hoping it's okay for yet one more bit of shilling...
Alright, so, with help from ComicAnon and others-- I've revised and expanded the whole 'The Police Saga' thing. And I think it's pretty great right now. Four chapters and just a tad shy of 20k words is quite a long step from what was once just greentexting of hot Jude 'the Dude' on Nick action.
I had finished this before, but with these revisions I think of this as totally completed. Synopsis is basically: After the movie, Jude (male Judy, same character really) and Nick are flirting so much and want to work out a relationship. Yet it's rather awkward, as hot as they are for each other.
Please take a look:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/7208780
Thanks a bunch guys.
>>4200748
I proofread this some. It's really good. I love the sort of slow burn tension that's happening between them.
>>4200754
You used the wrong image.
>>4200663
https://e621.net/post/show/639685/anatomically_correct-animal_genitalia-anthro-black <- Here
Which is better?
Bengo...
>>4200769
I considered them both but decided that version looks a little too manic to use in the compilation of a comfy AU.
>>4200779
... or Gidjamin?
>>4200731
Judy is not for rape.
Judy DOES the rape.
>>4200758
Thanks. I really love how it turned out.
>>4200779
FinNick
Reposting because I just realized I posted it on a sinking ship
>>4195771
>Panel 1
"That's, Ga-
Ga-
Gaze-
>Panel 2
Nick and Judy: "GAZELLE"
Gazelle: "Hi~, it's Gazelle!"
"What's with you two?"
>Panel 3
"Wh, w-w-w-
WHY IS GAZELLE HERE!?"
(Handwriting is pretty scrawled; something about overhearing something going on in Finnick's car)
"Finnick, you used to know Gazelle!?"
"No, we're still acquaintances, or how should I put it..."
>Panel 4
"We just have too inseparable a relationship,
"That's all." (TN: 腐れ縁 translates to "an undesirable but inseparable relationship", but it's hard to kind of assert both parts of that without making it sound clunky as shit in English)
Above Finnick: "You reek of booze!"
>>4197650
"If it were Nick doing it,"
"I'd be fine with being eaten..."
SFX: ふる = furu = shaking
SFX: アオーン = Ao-n = I have no fucking idea
OZZY KNOWS
>>4200798
Are you... Are you counter-requesting?
That level of candor is kinda hot...
>>4200754
>tfw people accepted the clan's battle cry and put it in the cap
this might be my greatest contribution to /trash/, i'm really happy and comfy
>>4200828
Welcome to the joys of content creation. The first hit is free.
>tfw savage the savage is dead
>>4200353
hella
sorry I'm only taking the one request tonight, I'll have another stream sometime later
>>4200838
[spoiler]it actually isn't[/hahaha]
Crossposting an image from the other thread.
Because GOD DAMN this is fucking hot.
Anyone have a source?
I need more.
For reasons.
>>4200850
Hey it's cool, Swinton is always welcome. It looks rad btw! Totally saving that.
>>4200850
Is it possible to see her actually handjob-ing someone?
>>4200857
e621 says its by an artist named nuzzo
>>4200779
>>4200797
If I had to pick between the two, I'd say Bengo.
Gideon is like Final Destination.
Foxes only.
>>4200873
They've done other pics of Judy.
Here's one that fits the theme.
Also, GOD DAMN.
>bengo pls
>>4200886
Ya but its pretty much just a human with Judy's head on it.
>>4200779
>>4200797
>>4200895
Yes, her build isn't Zootopian canon.
Still fucking hot.
I've got little notion of what to do for TT other than this. And it's not even a coherent idea. Help? Thoughts?
>>4200921
go for a build up? like a steady degradation of her morals or something? is she someone's particular bitch or communal?
I want to kiss Ozzy on the lips.
>>4200938
Yeah, I'm thinking she's communally abused yet still holds to her convictions and has some sense of pride, and manages to get a quick moment of power for like a day. She wants to become 'Ms. Big Shot' in the prison under the guard's noses, but when she realizes that musk-play is a two-way street and she's as horny for predatory pussy as the convicts are for her woolly womb... that's quite a change. And it devolves to like a kinky shower moment maybe. Guards think about stopping it but watch and fap. Then, there's a day of awkwardness and reflection, maybe it concludes with Bellwether literally stripping in a rec and saying "Alright, guard boys and pred convicts alike, come at me, I don't fucking care anymore."
Thinking out loud. It's all rather silly. But hot.
>start drawing
>rough sketch is fine
>get to outlining one figure, looks fine
>decide to change position of the second one
>suddenly lose all ability to draw, the sketch of the second figure looks like garbage no matter what I do
what the hell
>>4200964
well it's you ball, how you play it is your thing, if anything I could recommend a movie called "Starred Up", just some ideas of what life in jail is and could help out if you like
>>4200966
dimensions, how do they work?
>i've been there too
>have a fan running cause it's warm
>rip out a wicked fart
>fan blows it into my face
>holy shit it's wicked rancid
>>4201011
wicked dubs
>>4201022
Wicked dubs
>>4201044
>>4201011
>>4201022
SWEET JESUS
>>4201044
the irony
>>4201044
WICKED DUBS
Judy will come around to the idea eventually
post lewd greentexts
>>4201074
I actually think this is cute. Judy obviously isn't into it and thinks it's weird but she's willing to indulge Nick because it makes him happy.
>>4201084
yes sir
>>4201074
Seems like less of a problem than that other furry stand-by.
>Do something with Judy, Chief Scout of the Hopps Clan and Nick, the beloved family fox
Request partially fulfilled.
I spent the last half hour writing this out. It's 2 am, so I'll be going to bed, but I just wanted to post it first.
http://pastebin.com/RDHvNCKM
How is it? Continue, y/n? I wasn't sure what was meant by the clan and scout idea in the original request, so I just went off the cuff.
Oh, and don't vote for a pig. If she wins I lose a bet with her. I'm not sure I want to be her slave for a term...
>>4201084
>>4201074
>tfw I actually saw this when looking at porn, but never had the chance to practice it so I don't really get it but it does look interesting
>>4201105
Even if this is meant to be early civilization times, it seems weird both for them to keep him nude and also for them to have him in a situation where he's rather self-hating.
I'd rather go for him being so totally accepted that he barely thinks of himself as being a non-rabbit and so the rare predatory fight is a jarring, crazy kind of experience for all parties involved.
>>4201084
"You aren't going to break me, but that doesn't mean you shouldn't try."
Fucking diamonds.
>>4201105
This is really cute. And you did well writing pre-modern mindsets.
>>4201074
Maybe begrudgingly.
>>4201149
>Sigh.
>The shit I put up with.
HELP I AM TRYING TO WRITE NICK AS THE CUDDLESLUT OF THE HOPPS CLAN BUT THE RABBITS KEEP TURNING INTO ORLANTHI FROM RUNEQUEST, EXCEPT WITH CHICKENS INSTEAD OF COWS
>>4201105
really good premise with a fuckton of potential
the subtle can't-tell-if-shipping is nice too
keep going
do you have a working title?
>>4201105
I was head cannoning like something similar to the Eagle of the Ninth, as in an eager warrior/emissary and it's hustling slave/guide, like >>4201140
>tfw you wish you could write, but you only know technical english and have no sense of writing a full length fic and can only produce greentext
Cuddling and snuggling is fucking wonderful, I know, but I still want us to evolve to... well...
>>4201185
So they take insane risks in battle every battle but everything always turns out fine?
>>4201226
Mostly the social structure and religion
But yeah, Hopps clan rolls deep
>>4201198
Hey, as far as writing goes this is on par and then beyond for your average greentexting. Don't feel bad.
Even if you're unsure about this exact idea, don't give up. Pick up another one that's different but related and keep going.
>>4201234
I'll just say that it would be really neat if you contrasted the beliefs of the Hopps clan with the leftover fox beliefs that Nick remembers. So if the Hoppses worship a pantheon maybe Nick doesn't follow a god at all, maybe he reveres ancestors and spirits instead. Maybe he keeps it quiet. Depending on how early he's picked up, of course.
I dunno, it sounds like it might be fun to touch on.
Does foxe have pusspuss?
Does fox have puss puss?
>>4201243
i'm thinking Judy is acting boss since she's eager and overachiever
and Nick is a swindler an grown content under the Hopps care, probably more accustomed to scare due to his size and countenance
so maybe to are sent scouting for whatever reason (Quest?) and Nick has to face a push comes to shove situation where he must harness the beast and Judy must learn to direct that aggression to something useful...
>probably could cheat with something like Ranma 1/2, like Akane whenever handling him whenever he went cat mode
>>4201282
nope, probably might look into it tomorrow, am sleepy
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E_QbSIoyWMc&ab_channel=lucifersam01
>>4201312
Sleep well, dude.
Anyone have a nice zootopia phone wallpaper I can use?
>>4201269
That's a good idea.
>>4200905
Adorable
>>4201344
>zootopia phone wallpaper
>>4201312
Give a shot, it's pretty heart-warming= http://archiveofourown.org/works/7290262
Somehow Gazelle ends up meeting with and giving Judy booty-shaking lessons so she can impress/seduce Nick green when?
>>4201394
"Try Everything"
>>4201394
She doesn't need to get that into it. Even twitching her ass and shaking her tail naturally by climbing up onto a chair or whatever is so fucking hot by itself.
>>4201344
>>4201394
I don't think Carrots would be interested. She's too straightforward and cuddly for sensual seduction.
>>4201399
Would creampie until one or both of us pass out from exhaustion / 10
>>4201422
That's why it's such a great surprise for Nick.
>>4201422
Oh, but all that would change once she caught Nick jerking it to a Gazelle music video and he didn't know she saw him.
Lil buns can be sneaky and devious once they hatch up a hustle.
>>4201450
>country bunny tries to do booty shake twerk
>awkwardness ensues
>spaghetti is spilled
>Nick laughs and asks if she caught flies
that would make for a sweet short story
>>4201467
FUND IT
>>4201467
I remember there was a prompt a while back where Judy tries to be all smooth and seductive for Nick but she ends up being kinda embarrassed and awkward the whole time which makes Nick laugh. But he still thinks it was super hot anyway so it's alright.
>>4201496
>Nick is turned on by spilled spaghetti
It just works.
>>4201518
>Nick is smooth and suave all day
>He's dealt with smooth and suave his whole entire life, "smooth" basically translates to "complete bullshit" in his mind
>So there is absolutely nothing hotter to him than awkwardness and embarrassment because to him that screams truth and honesty
>>4201542
excellent post, have a reply
>>4201553
Thanks? I think?
>>4201518
>>Nick is turned on by mom's spaghetti
>>4201574
yes. it was a good view of Nick's psyche, really nice point.
>>4200828
Wow, they have saved even my fox hunt and multiple fox uses parts
>tfw you still aren't used to people saving and reposting your content, even if it happened a lot
>>4201590
incestuous foxes lol
http://www.strawpoll.me/10777994
be honest, /trash/
>>4201735
>no option for wanting all three
shame
>>4201735
>8 grills
Hello ladies. Or should I say "hello" "ladies".
Imagine doing finger quotes there
>>4200779
Bengo is Heaven sent.
Nick
And
Finnick
>>4201861
also Swenick, Nornick and Dennick
time for more dumb oc pizza place stuff
remembr to lik comnt and subslibe
>So, I guess I should talk about the people I work with too.
>Apart from my boss, the person I work the most with is Emily. Officially she's a waitress and cashier, but roles are a little fluid and sometimes she has to help out on big deliveries.
>She's a wildcat, and she definitely earns the first part of that name. If something goes wrong at work, it's usually her fault. She always tries to make up for it though, and she's got this smile that's kind of infectious. It's always nice to have her around, even if she tends to go a little overboard sometimes.
>I think she mentioned she lived in the Rainforest District? She's invited me over a bunch of times, but I've always been busy with something. Also I don't do so good with rain. Or damp. Or any water really. Would be nice to visit, though I don't stray much from Central unless it's important, the fares are getting really expensive and working delivery isn't getting any more lucrative!
>>4201762
do they draw for /trash/ or write sexy nick fics?
>>4200857
That's hot.
Also don't forget this one with the added med kit for extra hngggg.
Just wanted to say (finally) to the fulfiller of this request.
This is not what I wanted.
This is not what I expected.
This is so much better!
You did what you always do, you turned lewd into a fighting chance for world building!
>>4201103
Why is there french baguettes in her ears?
>>4201943
I BET THE FOXES DID THIS
>>4202023
grandpa hopps pls
this need a remake
>>4202165
This is pretty much always the dedest time
I'm just gonna pop in from time to time here instead of trying to actually catch up with you guys. It's exhausting, but damn has it been worth it. You guys have such a great atmosphere going on in these threads.
Anyways, good night!
>>4202200
Goodnight, have fun; and always remember to be the bun.
>>4202200
Sleep tight bunner!
>>4201943
Love it.
I want to give Judy a footrub.
>>4202228
Damn, she looks like such a fucking slut there.
So welcoming.
>"If you buy a carrot you can use it a-a-a-ny way you want to."
>>4201943
She just wanted to see him topless, didn't she? Now she's making a mental note to angle the nozzle next time so that it sprays lower.
>>4202273
Considering how wide she's spreading there I wouldn't be surprised if she's already making full use of some spare produce.
>>4202359
Well of course, she knows how strong a market there is for honey roasted carrots.
>>4202228
Those are big carrots.
>>4202411
Bunny Cunny Honey Roasted Carrots.
daily reminder that
>foxes are parasite ridden trash
>bears are sad loners
>lions are rapists with a superiority complex
>wolves cant think for themselves
>hyenna males have smaller dicks than their females
>felines have barbed dicks
>stoats are mentally retarded
>>4202416
For... no wait, they are really big.
>>4202423
Stop, stop! I can only get so errect!
>>4202445
>>4202420
Honey Coated Carrots was a big carrot pop song.
With lyrics like:
>"Please stick that carrot in my honey pot.
>I think I'll like it a lot.
>Please, give it a shot.
>Quick before we get caught."
>>4202465
I thought carrot pop was all thinly-veiled propaganda to get rabbits to fuck preds. Or was it just that one group?
>>4202468
Well the video did feature a fox carrying a basket of carrots being followed by bunnies.
So it's still on theme.
>>4202472
Oh, yep, that sounds about right. Rabbit music is fucking weird, man.
REMOVE FOX remove fox you are worst pred. you are the pred idiot you are the pred smell. return to wildrenes. to our wolf cousins you may come our city. you may live in the zoo….ahahahaha ,lion we will never forgeve you. wild savag FUck but fuck asshole pred stink stupid baa blaw..pred genocide best day of my life. take a bath of dead pred..ahahahahahLION WE WILL GET YOU!! do not forget belwether .LEPERD we kill the king , hynea return to your precious desert….hahahahaha idiot lion and wolf smell so bad..wow i can smell it. REMOVE FOX FROM THE PREMISES. you will get collard. pig+sheep+gnu+rhino=kill pred…you will remove/ bellweather alive in gras street, belwethear making plan of remove . fast vote sheep zootopia. we are rich and have mone now hahahaha ha because of powe… you are ppoor stink predd… you live in a Dumster hahahaha, you live in a van sheep live numbr one #1 in zzootopai ….fuck the predds ,..
>>4202484
>Rabbit music is fucking
ftfy
>>4202494
ewe
>>4202484
We need to get pandanon to do a cover of a carrot pop song.
>>4202508
It'd be kinda weird hearing a fully grown dude singing about shagging foxes but it sounds like a hilarious experiment either way.
Sadly he's currently out of commission as his voice is completely gone right now.
>>4202520
Weird yes, but awesome.
Don't you remember that cover someone did of Pea?
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1K1M1P4tyDS
>>4202532
I'd actually never heard that before. That's funny as fuck.
Weaver haunts our sexy fantasies
>>4202352
I doubt she's into him considering he would probably rip her in half.
>>4202520
Remember that he did the dick the Nick/lewd the Jude song
Speaking of carrot pop
>>4202273
Everything at the stand is for sale.
Everything.
Babby's first (well, technically second) tablet doodle. I always have so much fun drawing, but when I look at the results I want to catapult myself into the Sun, especially seeing how it takes years to git gud
>>4202730
That's not too shabby, anon. Fine work! Especially with Gazelle.
Besides, one can never have enough Nick x Gazelle.
>>4202468
Nah, c-pop was always just thinly-veiled innuendo are "subtle" jokes about fucking in general. Usually an album stuck to a single theme though, either a particular species or fetish.
Like that one called "Family Affair". Not too hard to suss this stuff out, but it is made for rabbits after all.
>>4202566
Maybe she just wants the tip
>>4202730
Looks really good, very good work on proportions, especially considering that is your first (second) attempt! But, if you want a critique, I can give some suggestions:
- it's obvious that you've concentrated on the characters and you've drawn a very rough background (especially the abat-jour and the bed's headboard)
-Nick's ears and and hands are a little on the smallish side (see pic related), also you forgot the two tone fur on the neck, muzzle and belly
-you have begun doing some shading (like on the pillows) but you've stopped, leaving a rather flat look (especially on Gazelle's neck)
As you can see they are minor critiques that can be easily fixed, hope to see more of your work soon!
>>4202865
that's probably the largest part anon, do not harm the pizzacat
>>4202795
>>4202872
thanks anon. I really appreciate and welcome critique, I would do anything for it, even draw, didn't want to sound needy though.
>>4202883
There's always intercrural to fall back on
>>4202865
>Pizzacat shows up to work with a slogan on her shirt
>She shows it off to pizzacolt
>She doesn't understand why he got so flustered
>Shirt just says "Gimmie the Tip!"
>>4202872
And I forgot the picture.
>>4202894
We always want new Zootopia pictures! Draw and we will look, critique and appreciate!
>>4202566
It's true that the cat cannot ride him.
But she could instead be inside him.
That cat has a taste,
For a pizzacolt braced,
And her strap on ready to slide in.
>>4202923
10/10 more please
>>4202923
10/10, you got that rhyme down man
>>4202941
I thought that this thread would be fun.
As I like a good animal pun.
Imagine my shock
At all of the cock
And all of you being the bun!
>>4202986
great rhymes, shame about the ded thred
>>4202986
>>4202923
Magical!
Is there any more FinZelle?
this is so hilarious i want more of it.
>>4203208
I'd say it's not dead until you see posts that have nothing to say except "bump"
>>4203326
Instead of just posting "bump"
I'll share some nice bunny rump.
Though you might find it crass
To post Judy's ass.
Just be glad she's not taking a dump!
>>4203354
More bun butts to share with the thread.
To save us from ending up dead.
We'll not fall to fear,
While we still post her rear.
Though we'll be stuck with our boners instead.
