/TLHG/ The Loud House General
Squeal Like a Pig Edition
>Booru:
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=all
>Fanfics:
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=forum&s=view&id=2
>Thread Archive:
http://pastebin.com/h2ZBJ3GS (embed)
>Episodes:
http://pastebin.com/KM6yNJpe (embed)
>[Short] Slice of Life:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B30Fd00WPdNDRGsxOFVZUTVvUVE
>[Promo] Lincoln's Many Emotions:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B30Fd00WPdNDSFNOTjBsSVhHSEE
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News:
>Season 2 greenlit for 14 Episodes:
http://variety.com/2016/tv/news/nickelodeon-loud-house-2-1201782479/
>Loud House Beats Spongebob in Kids Demographic
http://nypost.com/2016/06/01/loud-nick-toon-beats-spongebob/
>New Animated Short Coming Called "Deuces Wild":
https://www.instagram.com/p/BHFX8RshVUT/
>Something will be announced tomorrow on the instagram:
https://twitter.com/JordanG_Koch/status/750424149604995073
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Upcoming Episodes:
House Music (Airdate: July 18th)
>Lincoln enters his sisters into a talent show, and they decide to form a band.
Two Boys and a Baby (Airdate: July 19th)
>Lincoln and Clyde take up the task of babysitting Lily.
Overnight Success (Airdate: July 20th)
>Lincoln invites Clyde over to the house for a sleepover, but he gets jealous when Clyde wants to hang out with his sisters instead.
Full Episode in English: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_oIDxS0CHxZdklNU3JtNFZuQUU
Toads and Tiaras (Airdate: July 21st)
>When Lola gets sick and cannot compete in a pageant, Lincoln trains Lana to take her place.
Full Episode in Korean: http://tvpot.daum.net/clip/ClipView.do?clipid=77277243
A Novel Idea (Airdate: July 22nd)
>Lincoln visits his mother's dental office on Take Your Daughter to Work Day.
A happy Leni is a cute Leni!
She's perfect. Wouldn't you agree?
Just a few more hours until that comic announcement.
GET HYPE
Overnight Success makes me sad. Poor Lincoln.
David the Pageant Judge is going to be a new character
>>3920777
Jackpot trips confirm.
>>3920777
But instead of rape, he'll just make Lola show her feet to him
Thanks Dan
>>3920777
Dan "I like 'em tighter" Schneider?
How would the sisters react to finding condoms in Lincolns sock drawer (assuming he's still 11 and presumably dateless)?
>>3920818
Depends on what size the condoms are, anon.
>>3920818
They'd probably just laugh at him being precocious.
... Right?
>>3920818
you tell me
Why are threads made early in the morning always by shota faggots? Almost always.
>>3920818
They would lose their shit and force Lincoln to tell them who's getting that LINCOLN LOG
Welp, I had an idea of an AU or fanfic or whatever you cucks call it about Lori being a baby mama and attending community college.
>>3920777
>mfw
>>3920843
And nobody cared about it, anon.
How does that make you feel?
>>3920818
They'd laugh have a laugh when Lincoln recounts how their dad gave him "the talk" and a complimentary box of condoms at the end.
>>3920818
balloon animals
>>3920818
Luna! I know these are yours.
>>3920837
i dont know man
>>3920853
Makes you feel like I tried. Where's my golden sticker?
>>3920866
right here mang
>>3919802
drawing porn at 2 am in the morning.
this is the life.
Actual Clyde footage
I hope Ultrahand does some fat Lucy
>>3920908
living the dream brah
>>3920908
Nice hands. Unimpressive buttcheeks, though. 6/10, would touch, but wouldn't really go out of my way to do it.
>>3920919
Excellent
>>3920908
oh and also you forgot to add boobs, her left one should be visible from this angle, I think
>>3920919
thats one cool dude
I got rats in the attic
My grandma's diabetic
I'm also a diabetic
It runs in the family
We are all diabetic
Yeah, Thomas the Tank Engine
T-Thomas the Tank Engine
T-Thomas the Tank Engine
So fast, so fast
I love Thomas the Tank Engine
I love the Thomas the Tank Engine
I love the Thomas the Tank Engine
I love the helicopter in Thomas the Tank Engine, yeah
It's my favorite in the Thomas the Tank Engine
Percy, Percy-Percy-Percy is the green train
Thomas the Tank Engine
Yeah, yeah, they call me the Rain Man
So stop on calling me gay man, I'm not gay man so stop it
Stop calling me gay man, I just like Thomas the Tank Engine
Thomas the Tank Engine goes "choo-choo" when he's angry
Who's your favorite character in Thomas the Tank Engine?
Mine is Thomas for obvious reasons
All the other trains, Thomas defeats them
Because he's better than the other trains, yeah
> tfw I see the rising sun
I can't believe I actually stayed up the entire fucking night because of this general. What the fuck
>>3921021
> staying up with us tonight of all nights
But why.
>>3920983
Lynn is flat as fuck she doesn't have boobs
>>3920983
she is flat as far as i remember.
>>3921033
>>3921047
> implying
Even if she were, I think her chest still looks too thin. But maybe I'm too used to looking at adult women.
>>3921021
I bet you were disappointed by that rape story.
>>3921030
No idea. I think that fic disaster made me hype for all the wrong reasons and stayed that way.
>>3921063
Got me
Which Loud sister would Leafy fuck?
>>3921059
>Lynn ends up being the only Loud who remains completely flat chested in her adult years
>Even Lincoln gets fat and develops some nice man tits
>>3921083
LORI LOUD
>>3921073
put a toothpick in your pee hole, that'll take your mind off that rape fic
>>3920818
Don't worry guys...I'm not the one that wears them.
>>3921125
> yfw ronnie anne is a futa
>>3921083
Go the fuck away
>>3920689
>so you're sourscreen or jerseydevil?
sour. i actually prefer boybox on 4chan, but it's not like i have trip or anything off /trash/.
i wish i was as good as jerseydevil
>>3920908
>>3921103
I know it sounds silly, but I really fell for the hype and the ending made me real disappointed. I don't mind the rapist winning, but that should have been the original ending. I'm still irked over such a stupid thing that I couldn't sleep tonight. This is a dude with a job and bills and shit, getting so upset at a dumb fanfic to the point of insomnia. What went so wrong with my life idk.
>>3921170
what are you saying? you're on par with jerseydevil, both of you are good in making on-model pics.the only difference is jerseydevil has made more lewds than you
Good morning, /tlhg/. How are you?
>>3921176
im thankful for the coloring, but i still had to redo the lineart.
Still thanks nigga.
>>3921271
its 2:30 here, im just gonna go sleep.
Have a nice day.
>>3921271
Drinking a lot of water because I've been dehydrated. Also means I'm peeing like a champ.
also fuck why is it that every time I write about characters eating food I end up wanting that food, there's nowhere I can get waffles at this time of night
>>3921292
Isn't wafflehouse open 24/7?
>>3921292
what's your favorite loud random anon
>>3921292
>there's nowhere I can get waffles at this time of night
not even waffle sticks at some fast food joint? when do places start serving breakfast
>>3921283
Fine by me, flats are pretty easy to rush out so I'll just color it again
>>3921140
>implying it's not Bobby
fic of Bobby pounding Lincoln with Lori masturbating from the door way when
>>3921425
No.
>>3921425
seconding, i need this it satisfy my shota needs
>>3921302
it's the funny one of course
>>3921300
>>3921354
I'm unfamiliar with either of these concepts, but I had a bagel with jam on it so I'm feeling satisfied now
Anybody got a link to the Lynn x Beltsander fic
>>3921449
Shota is stupid
To the 3 or so anons who actually wait for me to release another installment of Leni x Anon, there won't be one tonight. I was going to write something earlier, but ended up having to do shit and it made me depressed. Now I've got a plumber coming over in a few hours to rape the pipes in my bathroom floor, so I need to go to bed. Maybe i'll update when I wake up. Depends.
Anyways, if anyone else is up at this ungodly hour and gives a shit about the fic, here's the link. http://pastebin.com/5w8JXeCg
>>3921467
Wafflehouse is an American "fast food" chain that serves waffles.
Good morning!
>>3921487
That's sad man. I hope the issue with those pipes gets solved soon.
Don't say that of your fic! The fact that there are only 2 or 3 guys willing to reply you for every update doesn't mean that those are the only guys who cares for it. We had many cases of writers that have gotten a lot of visits in their bins when they thought no one gave a shit about them. Who knows how many anons wait for your fic to be updated every day.
>>3920769
That would be an undeniable fact.
I love Lola!
>>3921583
Same mah dude
>>3921596
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rQ5B-U6LwaA
>>3921583
What did she mean by this?
>>3921583
>>3921592
> posts less than a minute apart
So, are you one guy posting from multiple devices, or is -92 just hitting that F5 button constantly?
>>3921616
Neither. I'm a completely different guy who just so happens to love Lola as well.
>>3921596
Good morrow, Lilysun
>>3921613
What did she mean by THIS?
>>3921596
Good morning babby.
>>3921596
>>3921616
There's nothing unusual about multiple people liking the best girl
>>3921645
I know, right?
>>3921659
Yeah.
>>3921659
I agree completely.
>not acknowledging smug mexiloli as best girl
>>3921682
t. lolafag
>>3921690
pipe down misha
>>3921690
misha pls
>>3921690
fuck off, misha
go back to /ksg/
>>3921708
/ksg/?
>>3921702
>>3921706
>>3921708
The Misha meme needs to die.
>>3921766
katawa shoujo general
>>3921778
What do you fags have against memes?
>>3921583
I want to rape Lola in the woods and then cut off her head!
>>3921807
You are welcome to try.
>>3921807
Then there's this faggot
>>3921778
friendly reminder that all those who oppose "shut up misha" need to be told "shut up, misha"
shut up, misha
>>3921815
I want to flick Lola's pouty lip.
>>3921807
You're the one who'd get your head cut off
>>3921836
Somebody put a muzzle on that loli.
>>3921839
Misha is from /gfg/
>>3921839
He's from all over. /gfg/, /sug/, every /u/ thread..
Just how evil is Lola?
How far will her devilish ways go in the show?
>>3921533
Good morning faggot.
>>3921873
you should have said "two for flinching"
>>3921868
Lola has been revealed by the staff to be canonically power hungry. I think she will definitely commit more psychotic deeds in the future.
> those fucking shark teeth
>>3921868
I really hope there's an episode where she does something wild. Eric Cartman levels of wild.
>>3921904
The stories in Sound of Silence were pretty good for a watered down version.
>>3921868
Lincoln is gonna imagine what the world would be like if Lola became the empress of everything at some point, I just know it.
>>3921948
who's work is this?
>>3921948
First time seeing this. Amazing.
>>3921904
>that episode where Lola somehow managed to unify the entire world into her own totalitarian state with a huge cult of personality surrounding her
>>3922058
what? example?
>>3922058
I don't think anything gets deleted but on random occasions something becomes corrupted and can't be seen.
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=4069
can someone explain to me why goten is pissed at lori?
>>3922058
First check if it's actually deleted. It might just be downvoted, or it might be under a parent post.
>>3922167
>linking to images on an imageboard
why
>>3922167
http://lueduartv97.tumblr.com/
This guy does the weirdest crossovers
>Lisa and The Mask
>>3922224
Weirdly enough, I think that's just some weird thing from DeviantArt.
>>3922184
too lazy to post
>>3922256
faggot
>>3922224
and he even made an osomatsu san one
well,kinda
>>3922343
sorry if that hurts you anon
c'mere and give your aunt luna a hug
>>3921487
I'm enjoying this story. Keep it up my friend!
>>3922381
any day
>>3921533
Lynn its 4:00am go the fuck back to bed
So, 8 hours until that Instagram thing, right?
How disappointed should I prepare myself to be?
>>3922442
what?
>>3922455
The staff is making a countdown to close and delete the TLH's Instagram like the Savino thing.
>>3922412
>he lives in the past
Alright lads, this is just about where Lynn's going to stay. I'll probably end up doing some more highlights on her body later.
What are your thoughts? I can make changes of course, though I can't really do muscles that well as I've never done them before.
It begins. This will be completed at the end of the season. I'll fill up around half of it before the end of the hiatus.
>>3922684
Lynn looks pretty good there.
>>3922718
We need one for each sibling tbqhfam. ESPECIALLY LINCOLN.
>something will be announced tomorrow on the instagram
>will be annouced today
>>3922684
doggy style
>>3922718
Oh man that's gonna be a lot of Luans
>>3922718
are you gonna do one for each season?
>>3922746
Lazy copypaste, you know.
>pastebin
>(embed)
Nigger, please.
>>3922442
>8 hours
In what country you live?
>>3922830
East coast on USA, cause it is 8 hours.
the thibg is at 12 PST, so 3 EST
>>3922746
Was fixed in another OP, but eh, too late now.
>this thread is not on the archive
>>3921170
Are you kidding? Your drawings are on model and they're pretty good. I can't wait to see your lewds
I think this is the slowest it's been in a long time. We usually have a few in the mornings.
>>3923052
Remember: the slowest at the day, more shit at night.
I'm expecting some Sonicposting and the Shrek thread at this night too.
>>3923052
Ah but sure, its the middle of the working week, and considering majority of us are Americans with a few Europeans scattered here and there, this is literally the worst hours for everyone's timezone. too early for some, too many people at work and or daily life shenanigans.
>Post cute Lincys.
>>3922907
Last thread isn't, either, but mostly because we were kind of jumping around.
Besides the Lola one i'm surprised we haven't see doing hurtful/not doing hurtful things to your waifu charts yet
As far as unfinished fics from the boorus go ill be listing stuff that aren't on the booru as well.. mostly because they never posted it ON the booru.... Feel free to add more fics or shit that you've remembered to this. we might get an abandoned fic pastebin soon or something.
Anon babysits Lola (I don't think there's a title yet)
http://pastebin.com/UrmJD0c0 (WIP)
Lizard Friend:
During Lola and Lana's tea party, Izzy sends Lola over the edge and kills her. Lola now has to try her best to make it up to Lana.
http://pastebin.com/DArBdtJY
Lincoln Gets Possessed
http://pastebin.com/j7qn0wXC
Milk (Lola and Lisa)(Abandoned)
http://pastebin.com/66mMbwB0
Not a Children's Book (Lewd) (Abandoned)
http://pastebin.com/FRXQBPsq
^ these are a bunch of Lisa x Sibling fics that i guess were supposed to be a series?
Then theres a few that i remember
Lori is 12 and she resents leni for developing faster some type of fight happens where leni and lori are fighting over a dress and the dress rips off of leni, and then Lori gets what she thinks is unfairly grounded and bawls to the bathroom. I dont think it got finished. because there really wasnt any resolution.
Another one where like Lincoln found his mom sleeping on the couch and he starts being a perv and pulls down her pants trying to get a look at her ass and asshole and he gets found out leaving him embarrassed and running to his room (i dont think it's meant to continue to be a he fucks his mom thing just escapades of him being a perv?)
>>3923210
Im only reposting this because it's a good way to re establish ideas, and it brought up alot of conversation even if it was one of the slower threads.
>>3923210
There was also that Ragnarok fic, But its not just abandoned it got removed from pastebin all-together
Could someone please draw Lincoln as Bane and Lynn as CIA?
>>3923210
Do someone know if the Lori x Leni fic is still on the race? It is not in this list so...
>>3923219
Then it will be added probably,
i dont have a pastebin account, so i wont be making a pastebin for it. because this obviously takes up a wall. (it's gets the point across though.)
>>3923225
Lincoln's a big guy.
>>3923227
The power of love one?
where she tries raping Lori?
The guy who was writing it, said he'll take it back up. but i mean if you're asking if you'd want to try a lori leni fic you could always do your own if you want to.
>>3922355
I like it, but Lincoln and Lucy are too tall.
>>3920818
Which fic was the story about how Lincoln's unchecked masturbation was leaving back a smell that almost everyone took notice?
Best scene was when Lynn tied the bag to her head to get a stronger smell of the stuff
>>3923236
…for you.
>>3923131
>tfw only post in the mornings and completely avoid the night shitposting
>>3923358
it was a luan got a bigger breast fic
>>3923381
Good choice
>>3923384
link?
>>3923505
i dont know where can it be found, it was just posted here i dont know if someone save it on pastebin sorry bro
>>3923246
That one! Thanks for the answer. I was waiting an update for so long. He left it in that cliffhanger and I thought he went full Coop since then.
I'd try to do a fic, if only my English wasn't so bad.
so boring...
>>3922907
>this picture is not in the booru
Why is the thread so dead
>>3923763
Working, on top of being the morning.
It'll pick up.
>>3923763
I dunno know, but I spent the last half hour on some OC and want to post it, but I want maximum people to see it.
>>3923763
you killed it
>>3923763
We're all dead here.
Welcome to Hell.
>>3923763
I don't post when I've nothing constructive to say
>>3923777
Fic or drawing?
http://pastebin.com/uQTparGG <rest of fic here
Part 24 (or 25 idk)
Luan's point of view
I hate this ,I hate it so much,
I can't laugh at the things I used to, even if I try to force it I just feel shame afterwards, and if the gangrel right, a few years I won't even be able to recollect who I once was.
How depressing....but I still at least have a sense of humor,just not a good one...
See ever since I got home I've been watching Dimitri martin specials on the internet, I used to hate how low energy he was, but as I am now, I get it, I get it completely.
He's a parody, a mockery of people actually like that, the dull,boring lot, like the one I'm now a part of.
Maybe, I can try modeling myself after him?
fight night
http://pastebin.com/YW65MMsp
Lincoln was in his room studying when he heard a knock at the door. After waiting a few seconds, the knob turned and a brown haired girl peeked inside. "Hey Linc," Lynn said as she walked into his room. Lincoln's heart started beating in his chest. It was a...recent development...but the two of them have been taking their sibling bonding to new and exhilarating territory. He fully expected her to jump on top of him the second she closed the door, but disappointingly Lynn just plopped down onto his bed and threw a tennis ball at his wall. It bounced with a thud and landed back in her hand. She threw it again.
*thud*
*thud*
.....
*thud*
"Hey Linc...sometimes when we're uh...y'know...doing that, you say that you love me." Lincoln dropped his pencil. His mind flashed back to the last time Lynn went into his room. How he had said those words over and over and over while they were wrapped up in his bedsheets. Lynn went on, "I really like when you do that, it really gets me going. But it feels different than when you said it before. I'm just...I wanna know what you mean by that, y'know?" Lynn was growing frustrated with her emotions, how feminine it made her appear. She kicked the back of Lincoln's chair in a show of aggression. "Hey are you listening?" she said with a lot more anger than she intended.
>>3923835
"I mean...of course I love you, Lynn. You're my sister aren't you?" Fuck, that wasn't the right thing to say. Lynn furrowed her brown and crossed her arms. She looked really dissatisfied with his answer and was about to say something before Lincoln's door opened up again. Another brown haired girl poked her head out, this time it was Luan.
"Hey, you guys wanna watch a movie? Cop School is gonna be on in ten minutes. This movie's so good, it should be illegal! Hahah," Luan laughed at her pun. Seeing an escape from an awkward conversation with Lynn, he agreed to movie night.
"Sure! Let's go!" He grabbed Lynn's hand and dragged her downstairs with Luan leading the way. After a few minutes, all three were situated on the couch with popcorn and drinks. Right as the credits from the other movie started to play, they heard a knock at the door. Luan was the closest, so she got up to see who it was. Lincoln fixated his eyes on the screen as he felt his cheeks grow hot. He knew that she was staring directly at him, but if he never turned to look, she would never be able to say anything, right?
>>3923842
"Oh hey, Bobby," Lincoln heard his sister answer the door. Bobby, where had he heard that name before? That's right, it was the only word Lori had been saying for the past few weeks. Lincoln was happy that his sister found someone because it meant that she was never in a bad enough mood to lash out at her younger siblings. But she was being a little irritating about mentioning how madly in love the two of them were. Oh boy, there's that "L" word again. Lincoln was going to gripe some more, but was quickly shocked by the sound of Cliff meowing loudly and running out of the house. "Cliff wait!"
A little after that, Luan walked back and was followed by someone. "Hey guys, Bobby's here." she said. "Bobby, this is Lynn, and this is Lincoln." The two of them turned and greeted Bobby before looking back at the TV. Luan must have made some joke at Lincoln's expense because she heard Luan's characteristic laughter and saw Lynn smile. Lynn only ever laughed at Luan's jokes if they were about Lincoln. He wiggled a little more, burying himself into the couch cushions, waiting for the movie to be over.
>>3923763
1.) Morning in the US of A
2.) Hiatuses, even 'brief' ones, bring out the worst in fans, which became obvious last night. A lot of people are probably going to wait until a new ep.
I mainly keep checking in to keep tabs on fics, and see if Cell's updated.
Could someone please post a pic of Lincoln? Facing front kind of? But not a boring pic. I want to shop bane mask onto him, but I can't find a good pic.
>>3923835
>>3923842
>>3923850
I like this, it's comfy and relatable which goes well with the Lynncoln
>>3923833
Part 25
Lian's POV.
After resolving to keep my dream of being a successful comedian, I get up a nd stretch, with a small smile.
Now, I still ant the fuck that made me Like this dead. But now that I've accepted my fate, I feel a lot better about things.
Maybe I can put this clan':s natural skills to use for Thomas and his motlety crew, I can infiltrate the camarilla in some distant city.
Yes,that would be the best way to get my vengeance, get friends in high places,get information , and feed it all to the anarchs.
Like in one of those spy films, a double agent.
Of course I can't stay here, no matter how much I want to, my heart may be cold and still, but it still yearns for my family, now I need only think of where to set up a lair...
Maybe Lincoln's missingh friend's attic? No, that's a bit unoriginal...
The sewer? Well there could be Nosferatu down there, but maybe we can cut a deal, yes, that'll have to do, at least for now, and so I write a letter to my family and leave out the window.
>>3923887
See, Luan I can do fine. But the pic is kind of boring. Plus o have to redraw the eyes.
>>3923850
Oh I get it, it's the Lynncoln part of the Luan/Bobby fic
Sweet
>>3923888
thanks man! i'm glad you like it so far.
if you're interested, it's the alternate perspective of the fic date night
http://pastebin.com/F15qafwr
>>3923887
>>3923916
Funny enough I tried putting a bane mask on Lincoln earlier
I downloaded two images of Lincoln and used two different bane masks
His fucking eyes ruin it
Moar Fat Luan when
>>3923961
never ever
>>3923919
yeah, i think i want to make this one a little more lighthearted than the bobby/luan stuff
my plans might get a little too goofy, but i hope people still enjoy it
>go to Sonic thread on /vg/ for new comic
>someone posted the pic with Lucy and Lana
Hah
>>3923977
I know I will, man. Your stuff is always top notch.
Read the end to the Lola rapefic.
And fuck you all, I liked it.
Writefag, if you're there, don't let their nasty remarks phase you, you did great, man.
And shame on all of ya, turning on a guy because you thought the ending of a rapefic was too dark. We've been waiting months for it, and when it finally comes, you all turn on him.
Personally, I like it, and think the writefag is based for sticking to the guns and making the ending depressing.
>>3923998
wait, people turned on the writefag because he wrote a rapefic with a dark ending? Which rapefics DON'T have dark endings?
>>3923914
My first pastebin file for this story got too big to paste on with mobile.
>>3923977
Loud fics need more goofy and lightehearted, especially cestfics.
Doing God's work.
What does everyone think of my vampire fic?
>>3923998
I did not read, how it ends?
>>3923998
it's funny, everybody here is obsessed with dark and grim shit and all of a sudden some writefag draws the line he probably didn't even know existed
>>3924038
It doesn't end with Lincoln going postal, which is why people got upset
>>3923998
I respect the guy for doing what he did. He stuck to his guns when he set out to write some dark shit. I just didn't read it because I wasn't in the mood to feel worse than I did.
I'm not even a rape fic fan, but it's admirable to see someone not submit to peer pressure. He also had some great writing talent.
Ayy it's done enough for me. What should I shade next lads?
>>3923781
Fic
>3 figures are completely obscured, being led in bodybags to the Loud House backyard
Lori: Miss Leni Loud. I'm in charge.
Lola: He wasn't alone.
Lori: You don't get to bring friends.
Leni: They're not my friends..
Lola: Don't worry, no charge for them.
Lori: Why would I want them?
Lola: They were trying to take your authority. They work for the rebel. The nude man.
Lori: Lincoln?! Get'em on board. I'll call it in.
>Vanzilla zoom through the city piloted by none other than Leni Loud. The hooded prisoners are on board
Lori: The text I just sent to Mom and Dad lists only me, Luna, and Miss Leni Loud here as behaving, but only one of you. The other two got hurt while roughousing.
>Lori opens the van door, and hangs the first hooded figure out of it
Lori: FIRST ONE TO TALK GETS TO STAY IN MY VAN! SO.. WHO PAYED YOU TO GRAB MISS LOUD?
>Silence
>Lori grabs a bat and hits it against the car door, as Luna silences the hooded girl.
Lori: SHE DIDN'T LAND SO GOOD! WHO WANTS TO TRY NEXT?!
>Lori grabs the second prisoner
Lori: TELL ME ABOUT LINCOLN! WHY DOES HE NOT WEAR CLOTHES?!
>Lori presses the bat against the prisoners head
Lori: LOT OF LOYALTY FOR A HIRED REBEL!
>Voice comes from offscreen hooded man
???: Or perhaps she's wondering why someone would beat a man, before throwing them out of a van.
Lori: At least you can talk! Who are you?!
???: It doesn't matter who we are. What matters is our plan.
>In one motion, Lori removes the bodybag from the prisoner
>Inside is a nude boy, wearing a mask over his face made of underwear
Lincoln: No one cared who I was until I took off my clothes.
Lori: If I clothed you, would you die?
Lincoln: It would be extremely uncomfortable.
Lori: You're a big guy.
Lincoln: For you.
Lori: Was getting caught part of your plan?
Lincoln: Of course! Miss Leni Loud rejected our offer in favor of yours. We had to find out what she told you.
Leni: Nothing! I said nothing!
1/2
>>3923998
I think people got mad because of the joke ending. It was ridiculous and some people felt like it ruined the tension but was clearly a joke.
>>3924060
Lori: Well congratulations! You got yourself caught. Now what's the next step of your "master plan"?!
Lincoln: Crashing this van...
>Lily, Lana, Lisa, Lana, and Lucy storm the van from the street, and plant explosive charges on it
Lincoln: WITH NO SURVIVORS!
>Lincoln knocks out Lori and straps her into a seatbelt, then breaks the seatbelt lock, leaving her trapped
>Lincoln grabs Leni Loud, as the Vanzilla spins out of control
>Luna Loud takes her off her bodybag, climbs to the back of the van, and opens the doors.
>Lynn takes off her bodybag, and attempts to follow Luna's motions
>Lincoln stops her
Lincoln: Sister. Our parents expect one of us to be involved.
>Lynn sits in the drivers seat, and begins to restabalizing the Van.
Lynn: Have we started the fire, brother?
Lincoln: The fire rises.
>Leni struggles in Lincoln's arms, protesting
Lincoln: Calm, Leni. Now is not the time for fear...
>Lincoln takes Leni and follows Luna's escape
>They land safely, and Lincoln presses a dedotnator he was storing in his underwear mask
Lincoln: That comes later.
>The Vanzilla spirals into a gas station, exploding and screams are heard from Lana
2/2
>>3923938
Yeah, I just erase them and redraw. It's shoddy work, but I did what I could.
>>3923833
>>3923914
Luan's a vampire now?
The POV format is making this kind of hard to follow, The story keeps shifting the focus to observers, It feels like the attention is constantly shifting to side characters who are really doing nothing important
Like why wasn't the story following Luan, When she got attacked, It's been mostly monologuing and conversation so far, Very little actual significant interaction between characters
Since we are pretty dead here, I guess I'll post some of my shit work. Lurking here awhile and decided to do some request. Most of these aren't done, but would like some feedback.
>>3923998
Let this be a lesson, that's what happens when you put memeshit on a serious fic and you shouldn't slap /tlhg/ autistic requests on your shit if you know it's not gonna work..
>>3923977
Just got done reading Cinnamon Bun. Seems like you've got plenty on your plate right now, and it all looks delicious, but here's to hoping for more Lenicoln.
There's surprisingly few stories showcasing just how sweet they are together.
>>3924117
It's pretty good, you should finish it!
>>3924117
The art is good, but make the image smaller man, that's unnecessarily large, especially sine most of the image is blankness.
>>3924060
>>3924073
I fucked up the end scene by accident. I had changed the ending to Lincoln blowing it up with the charges, but forgot to save. Also some typos I missed. Will be fixed, fear not.
>>3924131
>plate
>delicious
>sweet
loving that food wordplay, anon. i would really enjoy coming back to cinnamon bun after i've finished other projects.
would you mind if lori got mixed into the pot? i think she could bring a unique flavor to the story.
>>3923998
People didn't like it because the first ending he posted was a major let down. If he stuck with the second ending the first time, nobody would have complained even if they didn't get what they wanted.
>>3923914
Part 26-1
Lola's POV
I woke up and stretched, looking at Lana across the room in her own bed, I get up , today was another pageant.
I remember when the magic died for me. One year ago a judge, had touched me. I didn't really understand at the time, but it happened, and it felt wrong.
The judge seemed so nice, and pretty too, ever since then I couldn't look at the thing I loved the same way anymore, but all I had were my looks, I'm not smart like Lisa, and I'm not strong like Lynn or Lana , even Leni whad her fashion thing she was good at, meanwhile I was just...pretty.
And Lana looks just like me, so I don't even have that to myself. But that's why I had to try harder. Force myself to get to pageants no matter how scared they made me.
So I took a deep breath, sighed and started practicing for the talent portion, this time it was juggling. The minute I messed up,I couldn't help but to start crying, I was quiet, that way I wouldn't wake Lana up, she doesn't need to deal with me right now.
So the hours go by, and I try to get things perfect, I even skipped lunch trying to get my juggling down. I remember hearing some things about Luan but I couldn't dwell on it right now, I have to win this.
>>3924136
Thanks man I will
>>3924139
You're right I still need to touch that up and fix the size. Thanks for the feedback
>>3923998
I always end my fics on a lighter tone, if it was primarily dark or sad throughout. And I have to say, seeing a fic end in a really dark tone like that, was actually quite refreshing to see. I liked it.
>>3923998
> thought the ending of a rapefic was too dark
We got mad because all hype and tension got lost due to the joke ending. Nobody actually thought Lincoln was gonna take on David, it was just denial(or bargaining?) like in the 5 stages of grief.
>>3924170
KEEP THESE UP DUDE!
>>3924170
Part 26-2
That night at the pageant I put on a brave face, pretending everything was alright, and I was doing well to make sure that was what everyone thought, then came the talent portion,
I had done my routine, six balls while riding a unicycle,luan would have gotten a kick out of it, but about midway through I lost balance,and fell flat on my face. I...didn't really handle it well, I ran backstage into my dressing room,very obviously upset, after the talent portion was over one of the judges came in, a woman
"You did really good out there you know." She sat by me, placing a hand on my shoulder, after setting a plate from the building's cafeteria,
"I still messed up" I whined, looking up at the woman.
The judge nods"now normally, I' deduct points for that, but... Maybe you can show me a different kind of talent." She put a hand on my lap.
Oh no...
>>3924058
perfect pic already
>>3924295
Thanks mate, pick a Kyder image and I'll shade it next.
>>3924302
I know this is just a sketch, but do you think you can do this one?
>>3924302
do this one please after the guy above me if you take his request
>>3924266
Part 27.
Lana's pov
Normally I would laugh when my sister screwed up,but I couldn't bare to see her cry like that. So with some permission from the ones who ran the pageant, I went backstage to visit her and cheer her up.
I found it pretty neat that the place was big enough for everyone to have a dressing room,and then I found hers, I slowly opened the door so she wouldn't set off on me, but instead of a sobbing Lola, i found a naked woman on top of her.
Now I knew about Lola's incident with a past judge, I was the only one she ever told,and for this to be happening again, it made me pissed.
I practically lost control,it was like I was so angry, part of me could only watch as I slowly walked to the plate near by to grab a stake knife. After that, I kinda blacked out.
By the time I calmed down, I was covered in blood, in a with a dead judge, and my sister,sister thanking me.
Then I realized,she was bleeding,
Her stomachs, her chest, I..did I do it?
Did I hurt my sister? No. I couldn't have...
But I held the knife, it had to be.
But... Augh why couldn't I remember.
Lola saw how frustrated and scared I was."Lana iit's okay, really, it was an accident" she tried to sit up,but was obviously in too much pain .
And then the pageant runners, and my family came in.
>>3924047
It was literally just one retard samefagging
>>3924335
wew lad that one gets me poppin a big one every time
>>3924164
I only complained about the joke ending, but he fixed it so I forgave him
>>3924375
postal linc is such a forced meme and yet we still tolerate it.
>>3924147
I was honestly hoping it was moving in that direction before realizing it was the end.
Fuck yeah man, kick it up a notch.
>>3924415
Most memes are, to be fair.
>>3924415
We tolerate a lot of bullshit, well I do anyway. Guess I've been here too long for it to really bother me and I do like the shitposts on occasion but last night was fucking annoying, especially that postal dork and sanicfag
>>3924415
Here's an other request from the other night. Mas y menos pose with the twins.
>>3924474
qt!
>>3921059
>Neighborgs
>>3924474
suuuuper cute!
>>3923998
That reaction almost made stop writefagging, and I hadn't even started writing stories yet
>>3924354
Goddamn it Luna, Learn how to aim
>>3924516
what? are you going to stop writing because some 2 whiteknighting faggots are disappointed because their force meme was not the canon ending in your fic? dont get them in your nerves man
>>3924459
I can't stand the shitposting hours. It's always forced and the sanicfag made them even worse. Shitposting is fine every once and a while but this general does it too damn much.
Mind break porn with Luan when?
>>3923998
>>3924516
Am I the only one who didn't feel mad or anything about the ending? If anything, you people should be angry about the ending to Fight Club, cause I know I was.
