Zootopia thread
stakeout here:
http://imgur.com/a/taCRu/layout/horizontal#0
Unf
>>2379026
Oh hey, thanks for the full comic
Judy booty to get us started
>>2379026
Here's a thought.
What must it be like to be the one ram on the force that WASN'T part of Bellwether's posse? I mean she had a bunch of dirty cops backing her, but that's gotta look bad for every sheep on the force.
>>2379082
Aww yis
>>2379062
>behind a paid all
Fuck.
So hey. Kinda interested in the Zistopia AU that was brought up last thread, but for some unknown reason, tumblr is a little bitch on my phone. Don't suppose anyone knows where there might be an offsite collection or mirror of what's been made?
>>2379119
someone started to make bigger panels but i don't think he's finished yet
>>2379082
Bunny butts
nth for zistopia
>>2379119
There was a mega upload a while ago, I think anons are working to make the layout less.
you know.
ass.
>>2379062
>>2379173
>>2379092
Honestly, speaking from (very painful) personal experience?
Poor ram's fucked. Unless he did something we don't know about to distinguish himself as 'definitely NOT one of Them' when shit hit the fan, it doesn't matter if he was in on it or as oblivious as a rock - everyone else'll hold him as dirty, simply by association, because he's 'one of Them'.
His best hope, short of early separation, is hoping for a transfer to a new city and keeping his head down. Staying on the ZPD, though? His career is probably over, and every friendship he ever had is now in question, even after IA does their investigation and clears his name.
Shitty, but that's how life is sometimes
>>2379105
shh, tell no one
>>2379274
Lawdy
>>2379236
This needs the Brazzers logo.
>>2379274
shit nigga his body looks all fucked up
>>2379274
>>2379026
A few days ago redrawing panels from the comic seemed to be the meme du jour, here's my crack at it.
At the risk of coming off as a circlejerking faggot I have to say the amount of subtlety of body language and emotion Weaver manages to convey with his simple lines is astounding. It's really hard to capture when doing in your own style.
>>2379356
M O A R
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>>2379356
Something that I can't quite put my finger on seems odd about the Nick's head/neck in the first panel. Besides that very nice redraw! I like that you managed to fit in more of the background bit/ the steering wheel that weaver left out.
>>2379356
Two cakes!
Some constructive criticism if I may, tho - one thing I saw in Weaver's original that made the middle panel just, well, incredibly sexy was that Judy's eyes looked like they were pretty much rolling back in her head; your detail is hot, but maybe lift her irises a bit more? Maybe cut the pupils in half, give her that 'losing her mind' look.
Otherwise, dammitall good sir or madam, this is some fine tasty cake.
>>2379522
>>2379522
I'm so fucking hyped for this
>tfw already has plans to draw a zystopia where prey are the one's marginalized while preds rule
>tfw Weaver just did one/beats you to it.
Fug.
Anyway, here is my take on the pred/prey role reversal of Zys. The biggest difference is that collars are not used on prey's unlike in the normal Zys. Instead the preds use shock ear tags, stamped on the ears of prey's. This serve three purpose, it can be easily seen by anyone and is handy to identify who is the individual by the serial number tagged on their ear, thus marking the prey as a prey species easily. Two it reminds them of their role in the grand scheme of life and that they are nothing more than cattle or something like that. Three, it shocks any prey who tries to go beyond the zone where they are stationed/allocated in, thus most zootopian prey are confined in the city. Judy is one of the few rare cases that is able to travel since she is an officer and has little more lee way than the other prey who are allotted to tedious and repetitive tasks etc etc I need to go to sleep.
>>2379522
You have my attention.
>>2379522
>dat_filename.txt
Rut-roh, raggy...
Please, do continue. My almonds are activated and I am waiting.
>>2379596
are...are prey just kept around as a food source in this?
>>2379596
Do it anyways! Weaver's have just been little doodles based on Zistopia scenes. It sounds like you might have something actually interesting brewing here.
>>2379607
Oh shit please dont
>>2379596
>two cakes
draw what you want to draw, even if it already exists in one way or another
>>2379239
That's a zootopia story I'd wanna read-the one sheep who WASN'T in on it.
>>2379640
>Tfw the sheep are still in on it
>>2379607
pls no
>>2379596
>At the risk of coming off as a circlejerking faggot I have to say the amount of subtlety of body language and emotion Weaver manages to convey with his simple lines is astounding. It's really hard to capture when doing in your own style.
are you the Yandere Judy guy? your styles look similar
>>2379607
Before the current events, they are food source, not to mention being cheap manual labor. Damn they are slaves for a lack of a better term. It is only recently where more "liberal" predators has given more rights to preys. This started when some desperate predator president wants more votes and allowed preys to vote. To win the preys vote of course he gives them rights. It manifested first with the ''Hide your prize" law, in where preds cannot eat preys in public, then jumps to the most recent in where killing/eating prey species are illegal(unless the prey consents), and that prey's are only to be processed for consumption when they died naturally/in an accident.
Basically all prey are recycled, dead prey are processed and turned to food and a lot of prey species find that more comforting than being hunted. Besides Nick does not like hunting his jerky.
On the subject of Nick, I kind of imagined that Nick, not being bullied when he is child is able to get his dream job and is now a ZPD detective under Vice. After years of being there he has basically become a corrupt cop, along with a fox partner too who is also corrupt. Nick and his partner dont view the recruitment of a prey to the police force that lightly and is basically a jerk to Judy.
The same plot happens in where a preds goes feral because of Night-howlers because someone is shooting them with NH pellets. The twist is that it is not Bell but a new antagonist who view the modern predators as too soft on prey and that the prey population is booming and this booming population of prey will over run the preds in his theory thus he wants to make the preds strong again and realize their true task and control preys(through eating them etc). Basically a crazy sociologist. I am kind of basing the antagonist on that British scientist guy who dont give food on the starving irish after the potato plague, saying that it is natural to cull the irish or something. Yeah that is pretty messed up.
>>2379612
>>2379727
That's a cool bad guy.
>>2379727
>wall of goddamn text
Holy shit, I really need to sleep.
>>2379683
Yeah I am that guy, comics is still not finished and sorry for being slow. Only thing I can say is that page 1 and 2 is finished with 3 already near finished..
>>2379727
Holy shit that's fucked up. It's kinda going the slavery of prey shit. Dude fucking do it. Sounds like a great idea.
>>2379727
Holy shit that is a wall of text. Sorry for that.
>>2379683
Yeah I am that guy. Sorry for being slow, the comic is still not finished [spoiler]though page 1 and 2 are done with 3 almost done.[/spoiler]
>>2379494
It's because he's not smugging
And also the ears are too far back.
>>2379833
hey, its Judy/Dexter guy. I remember talking with you during that piece over on (11-3)chan
>>2379920
Too bad that the zoo thread died over there. I kind of liked posting there. But yeah still drawing Zoo stuff and currently busy with making a comic which I hope I can finish before next week.
>>2380034
>implying bun-wife has an ounce of fat on her
>>2380034
T H I C K
>>2379791
Take your time man, I know the end product will be worth the wait. We believe in you anon.
>>2380048
I bet she's got a fat knot inside her though.
>>2379683
'Yandere Judy'?
How did I not know of this.
Is there more?
>>2380103
i got that one but i think there are more
>>2379727
this sounds lovely desu
>mfw i probably wont start drawing well before the zootopia hype wears down
welp better https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c6rP-YP4c5I am i right my dudes
>>2379167
Yeah, the original source material wasn't designed with comic layout in mind, so cropping gets really dicey.
That said, yeah, someone really should put it in an Imgur or similar for mobile users. Every time I tap 'external image' Tumblr's dash layout fucks up. BADLY.
Posting Yandere Judy
>>2380318
>>2380300
HOW THE FUCK DID "desu" GET IN THERE???
filthy weeaboo demons
>>2380331
t.b.h. gets changed to desu
>>2380331
>He doesn't know about the wordfiler
t.b.h you sound like a newfriend fa.m
>>2379356
Oh my god, I love your lettering. His spasms in the third panel are INCREDIBLE.
>>2379521
I don't agree with Anon entirely about "rolling her eyes back," but Weaver's original panel also framed her face a little more plainly between his thighs. Her eyes eyelids were also at differing droops, like she was really relaxed but aroused at feeling him squirm on her tongue.
But it's close! It really is! Maybe if you did an edit, her right eyelid would be a little higher than the left, with her irises a little less in focus? Sort of in a haze?
Shit, I'm sorry, man. I don't have a frame of reference in art, just some directions.
STILL A++, ANON!
anothere yandere panel
>>2380363
>>2380352
Well i am quite new to trash so i beg your pardon.
also thanks for info
Two cakes up in this bitch, all this dang Zootopia art is great.
I wanna see more of >>2379522 and Yandere Judes.
>>2380472
www.furaffinity.net/user/ews
>>2379356
More faggot
>>2380455
>nick riding chief bogo
oh my god.
>>2379119
formatanon is in the /co/ threads right now
heres the latest one
>>2380548
He's done good work and all, but I can barely read a lick of this.
>>2379494
>>2379521
>>2380375
Glad you guys like it! And yeah, there are plenty of little things that didn't turn out as well as they could have. Nick's neck is actually pretty tricky to get right.
I was tweaking it to death already though so I think I'll just have to accept it as it turned out and try to do better next time. I realize now though that I left a bit of the textured overlay in the unf bubbles in the final panel, which kinda pisses me off..
>>2379683
You're quoting me but referencing a different post. I, that is "circlejerking faggot" guy, is not yandere guy.
>>2379482
>>2380516
There's no more smut from me presently, but here's a test panel from an edgelord fancomic I'll probably never finish.
DIDN'T KNOW I NEEDED THIS UNTIL NOW
DRAWFAGS
We need Kindred (Lamb/Wolf) Nck/Judy IMMEDIATELY
>>2380714
I think he said something about ditching the pencil dialogue for layered word bubbles
when that will happen, we will never know
>>2380902
Lmao, seems like a cool idea I suppose. A zootopia/league of Legends mix
>>2380939
Rengar in Zootopia when?
>>2381096
Who?
>>2381096
>Rengar as a bounty hunter
>Apprehends dangerous perps that are laying low in the Nocturnal District
>J&N have to work with him to catch antagonist of next film
>>2381107
Rengar the Pridestalker, a lion assassin whose only mission in life is to experience the death-defying thrill of hunting and killing the largest, most dangerous people/creatures he can find. An absolute badass.
>>2381129
>>2381107
Hes inspired by Predator, and can do cool shit like go invisible.
>>2381107
He's the Predator, basically.
>>2379356
Fuckin love the art style there, drawfriend.
Either do more, or at least release the "edgelord comic" you were talking about
Anybody know if the script of Zootopia is available anywhere? I'm sort of itching to edit it.
>>2381144
>>2381129
>>2381096
>league of legend
I can't understand how people can like that game.
>>2381107
All you had to do was look up his name, but glad the anons helped you
>tfw want to draw Zootopia art
>but literally can't draw cute
this sucks
>>2381291
Personally I can't understand why people likes games such as DOTA 2, warframe, binding of Isaac, etc. Never saw the appeal
>>2381337
Personally I play Warframe to relax, I find the grinding is quite meditative.
>>2381337
I play dota 2 because I need an excuse to hate the world and everyone in it
mostly south america though
>>2381337
>>2381374
I used to play Warframe with 2 friends. It was fun for a while but then I hit a point where I was forced to repeat a particular mission over and over until it dropped what I needed. That was were it lost its charm but for a free-to-play game, and a few friends, I had my share of "fun".
>>2381374
>>2381469
I tried warframe due to pressure from my friends, but I just couldn't get into it... Also never liked CS:GO until I actually tried to get into it, and I like it a bit. Also, I may seem autistic for saying this...but why do people like GTA 5? It's horrid compared to the older games... (To me) and it frustrates me how it's so...online. I just want to shoot people in peace. And the controls and way the feeling of the game sucks overall to me.
>>2381321
Spend the next month copying cute art. After that, you should better understand cute and be better at drawing it.
>>2381321
>tfw I can't draw
I should of started early. Kill me now.
>>2381291
This, honestly.
If you had like 10 people you know to play with, it could be good. But even if there is one random guy in the lobby, he will probably end up making everyone else's life miserable.
That game is the reason I never got into random dungeons back when I played WoW, except turbocharged to the extreme.
>>2381777
yeah if you werent taking classes back in high school and drawing every single day as a kid? youre never gonna make it now bruh
>>2381613
I find CS:GO to be quite solid when I just want to kill random dudes in matches which won't last more than 3 minutes. Too bad there's some kind of widespread meta in the community that leads to an annoying map "rotation".
I've never played GTA 5 so I can't comment on it
>>2381777
>>2381804
It's not too late to start an hobby but you've gotta commit to it. You can't jump from hobby to hobby because you ain't gonna accomplish anything.
>>2381842
This.
>>2381842
>Gaming is about playing with friends,
This is true, but it's ridicolous how jarring the difference can get between when you have 5 people available and when 1 guy had to go do something and you're in the hands of Manos.
lol apparently got banned on /co/ when i asked for fics and i just notice.
so when is someone going to make a pic of judy calling nick "nick mild" in bed
Moar bun
>>2381912
But did you find any fics?
Just saw it again. Fuck judyis so amazing
-j
>>2382013
Shit nigga, calm your ass down, stop signing your posts, and just buy the blu-ray when it comes out.
>>2381231
Any word on this at all, or is it a fool's errand?
>>2382013
Only saw it once. Gonna cri
>>2381992
yeah got like 4 and 1 more that was in behind a damn site invite for archives of our own
i'm reading the third one and putting the other one till later don't quite like reading incomplete stuff
>>2381912
got linked to 5 or so, have read 3 of them the 4th one i'm waiting because it's still in progress and i don't like reading incomplete stuff
5th one was behind a site with invite only sign up
>>2381912
>judy calling him "Nick Mild" in bed
>implying she would be able to make any noise other than "aanhhh" and "harder"
and then site didn't update the first time, and i endup double posting. god damn
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11853225/1/It-s-Just-Biology-Baby
i haven't read past the first page, but is it just a cuck fiction? if so i wont even bother reading it.
>>2382395
>shy fan-made character that has a crush on an established character
probably
desu senpai
>>2382045
Unofficial I guess.
http://zootopia.wikia.com/wiki/Zootopia/Transcript
>>2382542
I can work with this. Thanks anon! Have a Jude.
>>2382606
That uniform can't be ZPD approved, and I don't think those are regulation cuffs.
After reading the Zistopia update I can see where people are getting the idea that Judy/Nick is getting shoehorned in.
>>2382689
I mean it is, but that doesn't mean its bad
he's doing it pretty well if you ask me
Is it cool if I post fanfiction here?
>>2382689
Oh my god yes. It's so forced. They were so good when they were at odds with each other, or even when that friendship began to blossom. Now they're being mashed together like a 7-year-old with two action figures
>>2382706
I disagree tbqh. It's very obvious and frankly annoying
![arrested-development-cast[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/zcPLuOG.jpg "arrested-development-cast[1].jpg")
I like Zootopia and all but I cannot stop thinking of it as some Arrested Development story.
Like they are going to reveal that most of Nick's family are untrustworthy foxes with his white collar crime parents and his brother being a sleezy incompetent magician.
is there a zistopia imgur album?
-j
>>2381337
>games such as DOTA 2, warframe, binding of Isaac, etc.
Anon, these games are completely different from each other.
>>2382753
Hot
-j
>>2382753
>digitigrade
>>2382835
>not digitigrade
>>2382860
But rabbits are plantigrade.
>>2379833
Hell yeah. Love me some yandere Jude, keep up the good work!
>>2382753
>he didn't sign it
>>2382741
do you lewd the jude ? that's an important question, anon.
>>2382356
"The Visit" 3k words, short and fun, don't have much else to say
"Zootopia Drabbles" 75k words, a few mini arcs,
mostly short slices of life, some cute, some slightly sad, it was worth the time
seems to still be ongoing but since it was mostly a collection of short stuff i read it anyway
"Interspecies Trouble" 80k words, a few typos, several times using "then" when it was "than",
a few characterization that i found out of place but that's just personal, a sub plot about 2 rookies that really went nowhere.
it is also first person narrative with judy and nick pov i did found it a bit repetitive plus i got blue balled.
the one i'm waiting on is "The Fox and the Rabbit" even when i hate reading incomplete stuff i might just endup doing that because currently i'm out of stuff
and then there is this one
http://archiveofourown.org/works/6189262
that i haven't been able to read because the dumb invite sign up
das all i have for now, anon.
>>2383092
I do not lewd the jewd.
>>2383106
well post it anyway, why are you waiting for anon approval.
>>2383092
I appreciate ya, anon. Thanks.
Will definitely give these a read. I may or may not pass on that "Interspecies Trouble" one though.
>>2383143
http://pastebin.com/DSSrgUNR
My first draft. I'm trying to explore an AU Nick's character through therapy notes. People seemed to like these a lot on the /co/ threads. There's even some screencaps floating about.
Will go up on my Archiveofourown page in a little
>>2382753
>>2382835
>>2382860
>not recognizing the real problem is the lack of a signature
YOU WERE WARNED
>>2383198
Oh hey, saw you posting these in /co/ before. Glad to see more of them.
>>2383093
good end
This is fucking insane. There's honest to god not enough content coming out, fan-made or otherwise, to keep me sated. What has this movie done to me?
>>2383212
Amateur
>>2383092
"Interspecies Trouble" was terrible. The language was broken and nonsensical, like the first draft of a 7th grader's first fiction writing.
The author is fedora/10. here is an excerpt from his bio:
>"The world frowns upon what I am, and who I am. thus, the internet is my solitude. physically 21 years old, 6ft 2in. my senses are better then yours and you would not last long in my presence. I deem very few worthy of my time, and especially fewer worthy of my presence."
Holy fuck you can taste the cringe.
The fact that he is getting positive feedback to reinforce his shitty writing is appalling.
>>2383264
>No signature on the fanart of Byron demanding a signature
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>2383092
"The Fox and the Rabbit" is very good. If you're looking for smut, try "Zootopia After Dark"
Favorite right now is "A Fairer House" on AO3, Pride&Prejudice flavored ZTP AU.
>>2383232
I'm still writing more, fleshing them out. Got little tiem as a collegefag.
>>2383198
its "pity", not "pittie"
>>2383299
That tail is tiny
>>2383299
Das signature
>>2383391
New.
You'll notice some side notes about
>All sessions have thus far been free as part of a "Rehabilitation Initiative" from mayor Lionheart"
and
>(Make a note to look into collar withdrawal studies)
But also a lot that implies Nick was in close contact with his family for awhile.
It's a little experimental, but I'm trying to tell the world and explores Nick's character just with these therapy sessions.
We already establish collars, we also establish how they might have mentally affected him, how that plays with his father.
How he's met Judy briefly, but the case kept going on, but is still wary of police officers. How his collar made him lie about how he feels and the true feelings that lying cause him, how that relates to his dad
I'm also hoping that all of this is conveying the fact that Lionheart was just recently put into office and removed the collars, and the civility between Nick and the therapist shows how the attitudes weren't all just outright hate towards predators
Like I'm saying, it's a bit experimental, but it's been a really fun exercise thus far
>>2383268
i'll give it to you, anon. i do think it was broken but i could make sense out of it mostly because, how should i put it, i guess i learn to read broken english due my english being broken for quite some time(it still is in many places).
i assume it bothers me way less because i take what the author wrote translate it in my mind and then i can make sense of of it, i get what the author was aiming but can see that he failed on writing something cohesive
still i'm not going to completly dismiss the work, the author put some effort into it and he should aim to get better
>>2383198
it's short and so far i like it, i want to read more of it, personally i think the notes don't offer much description of what's going on, how long are those sessions supossed to be ?
(i know it is stupid to think they are short, they are notes after all, not transcripts)
any other plase besides archives that you will posting this ? damn site still does not send me an invite.
>>2383291
may read those i prefer romance with just the hint of lewd, imagination can fill the rest way better than any author could but reading smut is good too, at least every once in a while.
>>2383355
lol youre right
http://imgur.com/QkimmA9
>>2383497
>any other plase besides archives that you will posting this ? damn site still does not send me an invite.
Maybe a generic fanfic site too.
>how long are those sessions supossed to be
[spoiler]about 2000 characters :^)[/spoiler]
>personally i think the notes don't offer much description of what's going on
What would you like to see in this regard? I'm only mentioning his physical changes and appearances when they are important to the therapist. Like how he fills silences with jokes, or seems more at ease when he's well dressed. These are important about "what's going on".
Or do you mean lore wise?
>>2379522
I-Is this gonna be Bellwether cucking Judy?
>>2383198
This is fantastic so far. Post a link when it goes up
>>2383351
You're right. Dunno how I slipped up
>>2383549
Thanks man!
>>2383558
Really liking it. The sessions all seem quite similar though, with "Nick makes a joke, gets nervous, leaves". While I feel that constant display of anxiety on Nick's part establishes him in this AU, a little more variety/behavioral change would be welcome. As of right now Nick seems near-constantly anxious/dysfunctional (unless that is what you're going for, in which case good job. I'm assuming these appointments are the only place we would be seeing Nick's issues)
I can see what you're trying to do with the development (Mention of Lionheart's rehabilitation initiative, meeting Judy, etc.), it just feels like it is moving a bit slowly in that regard (Not really a complaint, I'd rather have it proceed too slowly than too fast, I can appreciate that finding a proper balance would be difficult)
Overall I'm impressed with your work so far, and look forward to you future additions.
>>2383626
>(unless that is what you're going for, in which case good job. I'm assuming these appointments are the only place we would be seeing Nick's issues)
Earlier sessions, yes. The timeframe between when the collars were removed versus when Nick went to see a therapist is short. I mentioned earlier he's dealing with YEARS of backed up emotions right now.
My longterm goal is for him to relax more through the sessions and his character development, but early on, he's got like 30 years of backed up anger, anxiety etc. Being unable to express that in a healthy way is bound to fuck someone up.
> The sessions all seem quite similar though, with "Nick makes a joke, gets nervous, leaves"
You're right...I'll spice that up a little more, or at least keep it varied. But I totally see what you mean.
>(Not really a complaint, I'd rather have it proceed too slowly than too fast, I can appreciate that finding a proper balance would be difficult)
From a storytelling point of view, yeah. These are here to give context and set the mood, but at the same time I have to balance the realism of what a therapist does to what story I want to tell.
It's really challenging but super fun at the same time!
>Overall I'm impressed with your work so far, and look forward to you future additions.
You are too kind, thank you!
>>2383039
Nice! I wonder if it's more effective - some people can be extremely protective about their gender identity.
>>2383730
She taught the psych classes at police academy, and was very good at getting into the students' heads. If she claimed they work, I'd be inclined to believe her.
>>2383834
That's pretty darn interesting, and I stand corrected! I apologize for my choice of words, I meant no disrespect toward her with my earlier post.
>>2383705
be back with more feeedback in 5-10
>>2383705
since the sessions are a week apart and a lot can happen in a week it be nice if you added a bit more about the topics discussed at any given session, could help you flesh out nick state on a week by week basis
also side questions:
the movie events didn't occurre here at all, besides he being asked obut the otter ?
or the things just didn't came up/were found important by the therapist ?
Hey dudes, does anyone have a Zistopia download link?
I just want to wrap those soft ears around my dick and cum down that tiny throat of judys
-j
>>2383875
>if you added a bit more about the topics discussed at any given session
I feel you. I mentioned a few things, but I think weekly gaps are pretty big, so you're right
>the movie events didn't occurre here at all, besides he being asked obut the otter ?
Well, I'll let you find out where that goes...Because it might
>or the things just didn't came up/were found important by the therapist ?
Possible. Therapists really just take what the subject says. It's amazing how little talking they actually do with you. If the subject brings it up, the therapist asks for them to explain
source: Therapy for four years, where some of this is based on.
>>2383862
Okay. That's adorable.
Especially love Judy holding her fluffy faux foxtail. If you drew that, awesome. If you just found that, still cool.
>>2383937
Nah, credit goes to S-Dash. Does cool things for another general and has more than a passing interest in Zootopia it seems.
>>2384004
Ah, good to know. Might have to look up this S-Dash if the rest of the art is on par. Cheers.
>>2384014
Allow me to assist you with that.
http://s-dash.blogspot.com/
>>2383913
calm down j
>>2383917
>Because it might
then i have to point out that you may need to make a mention of the events of that week even if just in passing or rework your timeline because from the week he mentions meeting judy to the next one were he says he's back hustling this wouldn't really make sense
so far what you have written does not play well if you really plan to take the movie events/timeline in consideration
guess i'll really need to wait for the next part to tell
>>2383198
Probably one of the better written fanfics. At least it's interesting
>>2383247
fuck, i'm in the same mood
http://imgur.com/a/Z37i8/layout/horizontal#0
hey folks
a few people have requested a version of The Late Stake without the dialog bubbles (so the underlying characters are easier to see and unobscured), so here's that
there's one about halfway through that, unfortunately, I ended up flattening and saving by mistake, so it's got white voids on it unless I redraw the normally-covered action
but otherwise this is the high visibility version
>>2384180
>I...I just like the porn and the community D:
Anon, nooooooooooooooooooooooo.
>>2384186
reaction pics ahoy!
>>2384186
It's amazing how even after removing the dialogue you still get across a lot of the tone, action, and passion.
>>2384171
I'm basically just sitting here all day every day waiting for shit to update while I'm between jobs. It's maddening.
>>2384186
I appreciate the raw art, Weaver. Being able to "read" the characters without dialogue is really super!
Nick's face in panel 6 is especially clear. He's shocked this is happening. Delighted, but shocked.
Just absolutely jerking back into the seat in panel 8 is ... relatable.
>>2379356
BUT CAN I SAY "TWO CAKES"
TWO CAKES
FANDOM IS NOT A ZERO SUM GAME AND WE ARE GETTING SO MANY CAKES RIGHT NOW
Speaking of TWO CAKES - image related! Great job, Weaver!
>>2384230
>Not practicing drawing in the mean time to make your own content on the side.
It's like you don't even want two cakes.
>>2384197
What? :v
>>2384259
The only experience I have in art is a college class I took very halfheartedly. Zootopia 2 would probably be ready to come out by the time I got anywhere good enough to post anything. Honestly, if anything, it'd be writing that I'd do.
>>2384272
Could git good at it in time for Zootopia 2 and pull a full Weaver drawing/writing combo.
>>2384272
>Zootopia 2
I want this so badly dude, you have no idea.
>>2384267
I'm the opposite, I love the art and stories that the community puts out, and I'm not a fan of the porn, man. Not that it's bad that you're into it, to each their own and all. But I mean like, dude, how could you not appreciate the normal art?
Anyone have zistopia link for whats so far done?
>>2384323
Yessir.
http://nicolaswildes.tumblr.com/tagged/Zistopia-AU/chrono
>>2384322
I appreciate the normal art. I also appreciate the porn. I appreciate both very much.
>>2384076
Sorry, dinner.
>then i have to point out that you may need to make a mention of the events of that week even if just in passing or rework your timeline because from the week he mentions meeting judy to the next one were he says he's back hustling this wouldn't really make sense
Yes and no....It's an alternate timeline really. But it's going to have events from the canon.
>>2384080
T-Thanks
>>2384334
Zistopia is fucking sweet but holy god I'm so tired of the shipping. It's so forced
>>2384372
> tired of the shipping
You know, that's fair. I keep going back and forth on it.
In a world that segregated, it may take something as basic as physical or romantic interest to realize this other person's worth it. It may take something that basic to pivot civil rights on.
I don't know, man. I like the shipping. I really do. I'm still hoping we see more of the mystery surrounding the savage incidents now that Judy's on the "real" case.
>>2384372
i'm just tired of the handwriting, my eyes can't handle it. too fuzzy/smudged in some of the images.
>>2384401
this too
>>2384230
Thanks for posting anon,
MFW tungsten carbide boner at work.
>>2384398
It's not that I hate shipping. I personally don't care for it in 90% of cases (I don't even give a shit about in Zootopia), but in Zistopia it's so very shoehorned in there because the author likes it.
I'll say what other anons have said in that when they were at odds they made good characters. They didn't like one-another but through the plot (You know, what it's supposed to be about) they came to understand the differences of each other. It accomplished a lot of the civil rights themes simply with that, not by forcing Judy and Nick into an inter-species relationship to satisfy the author. The characters were just beginning to get so fleshed out before they do 180's and "fall in lubbbbbbbb"
It's not organic. It really doesn't even feel close to their fictional dirivitive characters. It feels forced.
>>2384417
>Browsing /trash/ at work
nigga, what
>>2384372
I don't mind the shipping but I'm basically a huge fag who can't get enough of it elsewhere so I'm pretty biased
>>2384372
I don't mind the shipping if it isn't FORCED. "Oh he saved me I am getting hot for him now" is the most cliched trope in the book, and the way this comic is going, it's heading for it HARD.
>>2384450
>do 180's and fall in lubbbb
Given how cynical they both need to be to function, I'm not convinced they're doing a 180 as much as getting closer than they could with people in their home communities ad the walls come down. The chemistry is ramping up more quickly than I'd expect, but it's not "forced." It feels more like "desperately clinging to that first thing you've felt in ... ages."
I'm growing increasingly convinced the author sees how they could be really bad news for each other even in the best circumstance. As Judy mentions in the latest update if even WORD gets out, they may both lose their social standing. She's almost certainly going to lose her job.
My guess is they're going to be together, but it'll mean leaving the city and probably losing any direct influence on the Tame Collar program or what's going on among Predator and Prey in the metro area. They're going to be a laughingstock.
They won't care because, well, there's no getting around what and who you love. It just means the world is going to lose one great shot at ending the apartheid state all because people hate interspecies/pan/preyo-/predosexual couples.
I'm genuinely curious how this is going to end in anything but a tragedy for everyone else.
![1461021466853[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/rmWm32b.jpg "1461021466853[1].jpg")
/co/'s hotpockets are censoring the mere mention of specific r34, as well as things like pic related.
>>2384525
seems normal then
>>2384510
If the shipping is forced anywhere it's from Nick's side. It was established early on that preds get Judy hot. This isn't news. Nick legit falling head over heels for her is.
>>2384485
>aurelina
>>2384525
>>2384186
Whoops this one didn't make it in somehow
here's the re-edited gallery
http://imgur.com/a/nLhuM/layout/horizontal#0
>>2384451
Anon got a desk job at the moment and my boss and Co worker are on leave. Gets no work done in /trash erryday lewding the Jude.
>>2384548
>It was established early on that preds get Judy hot.
If this is true, it flew over my head entirely
>>2384569
>Getting paid to lewd the Jude
Living the fucking dream, Anon
>>2384548
I'm going to give it "to the count of ten" on explaining just where he is in self-denial. I won't discount that he may be pansexual but buried WAY down deep given his upbringing in Happytown.
There was a scandal over a pretty ungulate girl kissing him out of enthusiasm for desegregation ending. The happiest day there could be for Predators and everyone glared. Just for a kiss.
In some ways, I think Nick has more to lose by being out 'preyosexual' at all. If he even dates her, he's a 'race traitor.' Predators as a class are dying by design and he's sleeping with a cop? A shock troop for the system that's killing them?
Sure, he LIKES her. He may be sexually attracted to her. Committing to ANYTHING with her?
Well, shit, that may be harder.
>>2384510
>I don't mind the shipping if it isn't FORCED. "Oh he saved me I am getting hot for him now" is the most cliched trope in the book, and the way this comic is going, it's heading for it HARD.
Yep.
That's how I feel too man.
>>2384521
But I mean, that's just desperation, you know? I see how he threw in that little flashback with mom and dad and then did "JUDDDDYYY" to really cement Nick's feelings, but seriously, that was forced as hell and that moment was there for the reader to see, not the characters to feel.
>I'm growing increasingly convinced the author sees how they could be really bad news for each other even in the best circumstance. As Judy mentions in the latest update if even WORD gets out, they may both lose their social standing. She's almost certainly going to lose her job.
This is probably going to happen unfortunately. That or she just loses all feelings for him (or has none to begin with). Gratitude for being saved shouldn't translate into romance, it's a tired trope.
>>2384574
Same. I never saw any of that, other than Judy getting teased by her bitch sister (probably just to be a bitch) with baseless allegations.
just remember
you should never be afraid to share your work
unless you're gideon grey
>>2384621
goddamn what's with all the gideon bullying
>>2384617
Just link him here, or at least let him know people are actually dissecting and debating over his comic. I'm sure as a creator he'll feel a sense of accomplishment. Might skim through and read some of what we've been saying
I'm almost tempted to make a Tumblr just to tell him (not that the shipping is annoying, but that we all like his comic so much).
>>2384574
Not gonna screenie the whole thing but it's the comic where Jillian sends the kid over to Judy to ask if she's a predophile. Then, later, a member of her squad says that there's rumors she's a preddo.
>>2384372
Spellcheck:
Line 76, "rapd" should be rapid
Incredibly solid, anon. I like how you kept his nervous tics consistent. Nice detail. And that fifth session cut deep.
The only minor complaint I have would be that the part where they're talking about "the hustle."
I understand what's happening and the purpose of it, but it just reads a little awkward. It also seems strange that Nick would be basically implying to his shrink that he's doing something illegal.
>>2384621
Jokes on them, the other one is a dough covered balloon.
>>2384574
http://nicolaswildes.tumblr.com/post/141142300015/zistopia-au-05-closeted-pansexual-judy-hopps
Update 5 "hints" most of the Burrow knows she's probably pansexual ("predosexual"). They're comfortable enough propping up a kid to ask the "innocent" question. Judy's deep, deep in denial about it, though maybe not entirely to herself.
The tags suggest she's had erotica in her home office, and the whole family knows. They just Know.
The author has gone on to explain in Asks they're both in various states of denial, Nick moreso than Judy. Given how they're also transparently a Wildehopps fan in other asks that may not be a fun source, but it's there.
>>2384322
>I want this so badly dude, you have no idea.
It did really well in the box office. The voice actress for Judy really wants to do another one too. Fingers crossed.
>>2384621
>>2384660
>linking him to /trash/
anon, I could never do that
plus, him knowing the suggestion is coming from 4chan would probably make it worse
>>2384569
>>2384580
>he was living the dream
>getting paid to lewd the jude on /trash/
>he was good at his job but got careless
>he attached the file to an email
>it was the mailing list of his job
>he didn't realize it and send it to everyone
>his boss calls him the next day
>he goes to his boss office
>he starts sweating
>his boss ask "what the fuck is this shit"
>he tried to rsponse but choked on his own words
>his boss says "Only gideon pics are allowed in the mailing list"
>anon quit his job in that moment
>he went on to live the dream the only diffrence would be that this time he would do it for free
>>2384604
>Same. I never saw any of that, other than Judy getting teased by her bitch sister (probably just to be a bitch) with baseless allegations.
>>2384574
>If this is true, it flew over my head entirely
Not the guy you're talking to, but the "she can't prove a damn thing" is a plausibly deniable way to say she really is a predophile.
>>2384595
The cop thing you've got a point on, but nobody really seems to mind the idea of Nick fucking prey, possibly because collar issues are a fact of life for them and it just makes sense to try to avoid it if possible.
>>2384574
gotta read the canon posts anon, she has a chomper magazine
Question is, how will Nick react when he finds out? Will he be okay with it, or will he be disgusted.
>"Oh, you only listen to me because you want me to be your plaything, is that it?"
