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I usually wait for other people to make these, for fear of fucking something up, but you guys were taking too long.
So I'm going to shill my OC until you love it.
>>48117615
Mystery box.
I prefer the shitposting to this.
So... Angel did nothing wrong?
>>48116892
You'd be surprised how many "dommes" demand that from their male subs, or say things like "I don't have sex with submissive men. If you want sex, you're not a real sub, and you're unworthy of being my property."
>>48117653
I find your opinion disagreeable, and think less of you for it.
>>48117667
Well sir, I find your stance disagreeable, I will not offer any evidence to the contrary, but believe that you are a faggot.
>>48117693
Fuck you faggot
>>48117706
No, FUCK you, faggot
Anybody know if you had to role on this or if you could just pick what you wanted? Also what was the name of it?
>>48117723
No, fuck YOU, faggot
>>48117735
No, two gentlemen, who totally aren't me, I am of the belief that your argument is irrelevant, as SDA is clearly the cancer of /CYOAG/
>>48117728
You just pick.
>>48117767
I agree, SDA is a cancer.
>>48117777
Oh shit check'd
>>48117777
Well if we're going to continue this trainwreck...
>>48117840
We got to fan the fires of shitfest, anon.
>>48118021
>>48118056
>>48117653
>Angel claims to be a shut in
>disappears from CYOAGen over the holiday weekend
She's just another Stacy isn't she?
>>48118097
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
STACYS GET OUT REEEEEEEEEEEE
>>48118112
Does anyone have the complete thing for this?
>>48118145
Where are the kazoos?
>>48118521
I don't think there's any more to that CYOA other than the Lucifer choice. I don't need more anyway, because Lynneth is best demon.
>>48118528
Dunno man. I don't have them saved.
>>48118521
Do you mean the other bit, the Angel roommate one?
>>48117777
Quads speack the truth.
>>48118564
>Lynneth
>Not Lucy
>>48118583
No, I mean everything. I was in some other thread and they posted that pic. I asked if there was more, they told me to come here and ask for it.
>>48118564
If you're not going for the Big D you're going nowhere.
>>48118613
EVERYTHING?
Like, I don't know how much more of this you think there is. There's a grand total of like, 4 images related to this. You've seen 2. The other 2 are the Angel roommate part.
>>48118660
>Serving in Hell
>>48118667
Ah, I see. I didn't know. I guess I have everything then. Thanks.
>>48118681
If you think you're not serving her in any of other options you're deluding yourself.
>>48118700
Wait, so you do have the angel roommate part or do you just not care about it?
>>48118145
Post all of the cyoa and do it properly or don't post at all faggot.
>>48118705
I'm not serving her sexually and that's the important part.
>>48118717
I didn't have that part, just Equipment and Spells
And given that I've posted 75-80% of the posts in this thread, cut me some slack.
>>48118724
Even if you don't serve her sexually you're still her sub.
>>48118716
I have both images of the angel roommate.
>>48118760
That's not how hierarchy works.
>>48118744
>not posting the complete version of a cyoa
>not posting the most up to date version of said cyoa
>in a cyoa general thread
>wants me to cut him who probably has been in shitposting in these threads longer then I have browsed 4chan some slack
No.
>>48117653
I think this is an old version.
>>48118791
There is no single way for a hierarchy to work.
>>48118777
Ah, I see. Glad I could help.
>>48118794
So what you're saying is...
You're a newfag?
Great, I can now ignore the content of your argument, thanks.
>>48118607
>>48118660
>wanting to deal with the responsibilities of running Hell
>not just living a comfy life with Azureah
>>48118811
Probably. This folder is pretty old. I just downloaded it from some dropbox link. Too lazy to sort shit myself.
>>48118823He's right you know.
>>48118851
>>not just living a boring afterlifelife with Azureah
FTFY
>>48118853
Yeah, I'm lazy, sue me. Or don't, I'm poor. Because I'm lazy.
>>48118814
That's not how this one works.
>>48118607
>>48118660
My desires are simple. I have no interest in ruling Hell or anything like that. Lynneth will be into all my fetishes, keep me constantly horny, and give me unlimited free sex in her brothel, with any kind of woman I can imagine. That's all I need. Also, Lucifer says I'll be "worked to the bone", and the only work I'll be doing with Lynneth is "interviewing" new brothel employees.
>>48118877
Point me to the line where it says so? Because I'm not seeing it.
>>48118717
Might as well post the rest of version 0.8.1
>>48118908
>>48118899
Where does it say it works the way you want it to?
>>48118863
>not wanting to cuddle for the rest of eternity
I'm a simple guy with simple needs.
>>48118968
But aren't already a NEET?
>>48118938
It works the way the Big D wants it to. Meaning that if she wants to do something nasty to you it wll happen whether you want it or not. Hence my original point - wherever you go and whatever you do, you're her bitch. Just like everyone else though.
>>48118968
Well, you're entitled to your desires, but that's still fucking boring.
>>48117593
A classic.
Virtuous Spirit + I Am Legion
A good balance of perks and Virtuous Spirit makes resistance to I Am Legion impossible. I am well suited to acting as the philosopher king of all physical beings.
>>48119006
I just don't want to sleep around on my waifu, anon. And it's important to remember that more waifu will destroy your laifu.
>>48102130
>Name: Slackjaw
>Villain
>Outsider: Abaddon Shard
>Striker 3: Quality Assurance
>Stranger 5: Sloth Manipulation
>Breaker 7: Respawn
>Perks: Manton Bypass (Quality Assurance), Godslayer, Ally (Imp)
>Drawbacks: Identity Revealed, Bad Reputation, Wanted (ABB, E88, Coil, Merchants), Endbringer Target
>Followers: Mr. Smith, Jack-of-All-Trades, Pandemonium
>Gift: The Memento
I don't even bother with a costume, when I bother with more than a pair of boxers at all.
My modus operandi: turn myself and my gang invincible with a Manton-ignoring Quality Assurance, go wherever I want, take whatever I want, do whatever I want. Nobody gives a shit until after I'm gone.
If somebody manages to snipe me from out of my Sloth range when my guard is down, I Respawn elsewhere like a goddamn cockroach.
I have a bad reputation after having kinky public shapeshifter sex with Pandemonium on multiple occasions.
The major Brockton Bay gangs all hate me because I mess with their stuff.
Imp and I get along because we both like to annoy people and get up to Stranger antics.
Two reasons I have no Kill Order on me:
1. My Sloth aura isn't a Master ability, so it should make even the Endbringers stop giving a shit and go dormant with prolonged exposure.
2. My gang displays zero ambition beyond getting free stuff, pranking people, and slacking off.
>>48118823
>Ah, I see. Glad I could help
Not that guy. If I could impose just a bit, could you post them all to me?
>>48118880
All i'm hearing is that you want to be a man whore. I can't fault you for that, though.
>>48118716
here is oc
>>48117593
Morphing Lifeform and I am Legion
We Scion now.
>>48117653
-9 Zombie
-4 Skeleton Mode
-5 Reanimate+
-5 Empire
-1 Training (Running a business)
-1 Training (Rollercoaster construction)
>>48120492
No.
>>48119562
Sorry I don't have them, hang around here enough and you'll spot them pop up.
>>48118716
The grammar in this CYOA is causing me physical harm
>>48120586
yes it is oc
>>48120905
I meant I say no to his offer, anon.
>>48120913
oh im dumb
>>48120492
Am I just blind, or do you not have how many points you start out with listed?
>>48121006
You're just blind.
You get one first level one second level and one third level power if I'm reading it right.
>>48120492
This is pretty cool actually, wouldn't mind it if you added a few extra pages.
Instincts level 1
Pregnancy level 2
Evidence level 3
If seduction fails I can always manufacture the evidence I need of cheating
>>48118521
>>48118564
That's not how it works, anons.
>>48118521
>>48121213
Also whoever massively resized that instead of lowering the quality a bit is a fucking retard of the highest order. Not only did they make it terrible to look at, they didn't even manage a decently small file size.
Here's a readable version.
>>48121236
>>48118564
And here's the actual Lucy page
>>48117593
Virtuous Spirit and Eternal Wanderer master race. I'm gonna live out my Mushishi fantasy of wandering around and not giving a fuck.
>>48117767
Anyone have the fan addon or whatever it was of this where you romance the girls?
>>48121213
Newest version.
>>48120492
Now THIS is how you do a CYOA based around this subject. Really nice job!
>>48120492
I'll admit, it took me a while to realize what this actually was. Kudos on making it stealthy.
>>48118583
i choose mystery box
>>48122207
i dont get it, what is it?
>>48122207
>>48122223
nevermind, just got it
>>48122223
Netori CYOA. Well, you can fuck them over in a more subtle way, but it's clearly pushing you to cuck somebody.
And the demon's name is Black Bull or Cuck Bull or something like that.
It's absolutely foul, but he's clever in that making this is less likely to piss someone off.
>>48122207
I don't get it.
>>48121022
>wouldn't mind it if you made more for me
No shit
>>48122257
It literally just got explained in the post above you, bud.
>>48122284
Yeah, sorry about that. I didn't have it set on automatically updating and forgot to press post so I missed it.
>>48120492
My dick is diamonds.
Hi /cyoag/
My vacation is terrible and hot.
Have Familiar. I converted it into a pdf online for testies, looks alright in Preview so fuck it.
>>48122312
Hunh, looks like you have to zoom in a bit, but otherwise it's alright.
k, I'm sleeping now.
>>48122312
Prepare for anti-pdf rage
>>48120492
Nice to see a fetish cyoa that actually makes me choose, instead of giving free points with drawbacks, that aren't really drawbacks for the target audience.
>>48122312
As they say, nothing good happens in california
>>48120492
I have nothing better to do with my life, so sure, I'll indulge you in your fetish
I'm gonna skip most of the text of course, because that's a retarded amount. Skipping the intro, hopefully nothing useful was hidden there.
I assume we're being hired for something but I'm not reading that much text with no paragraphs and so much filler.
>Drain 3
none of the prior powers have any interest at all. The first tier is useless, the second is cool, and the last one is okay.
>Jurisdiction 1
Your fetish is clearly cuckolding people, and I have no idea what my job is since that was covered in the word-barf intro, so I'm gonna to nail some sisters instead of being a disgusting piece of shit.
>Roletaking 2
Would have loved charm too, but again, this isn't my fetish and I can't be arsed to put so much work into a build.Heh, and I just now got the title.NewTechRec = NTR
If you're going to make a cyoa that is 90+% text, you're gonna want to play around with effects. It's boring as hell to look at white text on a black background.
I'd still have skipped more than half the text, both because I have no interest in your fetish, but also because the way you did the cyoa is boring.
>>48117876
Oh, this one seems interesting!
Well, if I get a job in the afterlife I want to at least make it better, so Life Liason.
The Watch could help talking or solve particularly important situations, I'll take that.
Perks... Lastchance, Keepsafe, Helloffice (I'll have to deal with a lot of paperwork, I know that), and Holiday (I want to actually be able to play some games :|)
To get my job done I will probably need some proper help from experts... so The Advocate, Detective Barghest and the Karmic Vagrant, because that gurl will need some help to get back that enlightenment.
>>48121396
Why are the archangels so fucking boring compared to the demon girls?
>>48117693
>Power
I want to become a God.
>Blood
Easy and effective. Anyone that dies in my Realm will be devoured.
>City ( X )
My realm is blanketed over a large city.
>Minion: Swarm x3 ( XIII )
Crawling shadows that do the devouring for me.
>Minion: Individual x2 ( XV )
Two very attractive human with charming eyes and fleshrending talons. They seduce mortals, murder them and leave them for my shadows to consume.
This should be easy. My main form of food are the victims of my "sisters" but my shadows could theoretically feast upon any human corpse in my city. So there's plenty of opportunity for me to gain in power and it's not like a bunch of dissapearing people and corpses will be easily noticed in a large city.
I predict a "quick" ascension to dark godhood.
>>48118583
Mystery box anon
So when do the Americans have summer holidays? My life is empty and all I do is shitpost in the cyoa threads, so when they're gone between 10 am to 4 pm, I have nothing to do.
>>48123370
Are you my twin? ;-;
>>48123370
Yesterday was one of the biggest American holidays. If you mean the kids not having to go to school, that started about a month ago (plus or minus a few days depending on where specifically they are) and will go another month and a half or so.
>>48117615
Choose two:
>shit on the floor for 3 months
>subsist on gruel and water for 3 months
>submit to soul-shattering boredom for 3 months
There, I boiled it down for you. I hate to be harsh, but nobody is going to want to play it without serious improvement.
>>48123223
The whole purity/innocence thing doesn't give them as much room to be fun or lustful.
>>48123501
Entire cyoa could be solved by giving us a monetary reward for surviving 3 months in that room.
>>48123223
>boring
notslut =/= boring
>>48120492
As someone with no strong opinions on imaginary NTR one way or the other, this made me pretty happy. Nice to see it handled so well.
>charm 3
Gotta pull bitches somehow;_;
>pregnancy 2
Seems like the best free money option, also I want cute daughterus.
>jurisdiction 1
Eh, why not.
>>48117653
Shoujo 2
Shapeshifting 8
Training Robotics 9 <spoiler>Sex robot, sex robot</spoiler>
Flight 15
Death's Number 20
Empire 25
>>48123393
probably not, sorry.
>>48123445
>If you mean the kids not having to go to school
That. But why is there so little shitposting?
>>48124241
Because the cancer that is SDA has left. I suspect she has been banned for avatarfagging.
So, is the "Gangbang SDA" CYOA out yet?
>>48124303
ah. Well that would explain things.
I hope she's happy.I'm not.
>>48124316
I wouldn't want to touch that slutty STD infested lesbian with a ten foot pole. I'd rather sell her to some orcs or centaurs.
>>48124340
Why are you unhappy, anon? Is your sadness CYOA related? Is it because there's no OC and you have no life besides these threads?
I'm going full on harem mode
>>48124360
>Why are you unhappy, anon?
Mental problems that won't be fixed
>Is your sadness CYOA related?
No, but I have some kind of writers block going on which is uncool
>Is it because there's no OC and you have no life besides these threads?
Yes to the last part, no to the first. You don't need OC to read people scream at each other.
>>48120492
Nice CYOA - funny and offers interesting combos.
Figure 1
Charm 2
Pregnancy 3
Ruin relationships the old fashioned way by seducing happily married women. I prefer if the relationship was ruined by the woman's free will - the corruption and guilt makes it that much more evil and sweeter.
Children inherit Pregnancy 1 and are tasked to spread my genes far and wide.
>>48120492
Drain 3
Jurisdiction 2
Charm 1
I take over some girls body. That's probably enough in itself to extend my life for however long I'm in it. When she gets old or whatever I switch bodies one way or the other.
If I really need to I can still ruin other relationships with the other powers. Jurisdiction lets me work on someone else while still stuck in a target. Charm pretty much just lets me get with anyone I can target, and with jurisdiction they don't have to be in a relationship so I don't have to be doing this shit all the time.
>>48120492
Figure 3
Pregnancy 2
Charm 1
I will ruin women for marriage with my Chad (and occasional minotaur) dick.
I considered taking Jurisdiction 3, and fucking people's waifus, but I don't think it really works, because otaku are so used to seeing their waifu getting fucked by other guys in doujinshi. I would need some kind of way to ruin the original work for them.
>>48122207
>Demon of marital infidelity
>subtle
>>48124645
>No, but I have some kind of writers block going on which is uncool
I want to tell a story, which for me is hard to do in a cyoa. There's only so much text I can put in before you lose your interest as the player.
Anything beyond a choose one cyoa requires too much planning and balance, and I don't care about either. I want to write scenarios and keep things open to interpretation, but that doesn't seem to be what you want.
I lose all motivation when I have to write plans and figure out multiple options.
>>48125090
Have you considered an episodic cyoa of interconnected choose 1 cyoas?
>>48125068
>those tan lines
All of my yes. It's such a shame the artist had to ruin the picture by including that guy
>>48125090
Then take some adderall.
>>48120492
Jurisdiction 3
Legal Department 2
Charm 1
Time to cuck the demon of bulls.
I'll use my jurisdiction to take his powers.
He'll also be powerless to attack me because of legal department, and will be trusting of me anyway.
>>48125265
how take powers with jursdicton?
>>48125132
I don't think that would work. Once I finish the cyoa, I'm done with it. It would almost be like adding an extra page to another person's cyoa, if that makes sense.
Like what I had imagined with the "first episode" would be drastically different from the "second episode". And I have no ideas after finishing "episode one".
Plus, those aren't enjoyed. See Crossworld and how few-to-no builds it got. I know I wouldn't play an episodic one until it's done.dont get me wrong, Anon, I want to make cyoas. Writing down notes is easy, writing down the rest is impossible
>>48125369
>Pic related
>>48125355
You can summon anything your target cares about with Jurisdiction 3, even personifications of a concept, I assume he cares about his powers and or his life.
>>48120492
Why the hell is /int/ trying?
>>48125401
Because they're shitposters, duh.
>>48117653
Why is this version reposted usually? Pic related has more in it, isn't it a newer version?
>>48117653
>Transferal
>Cute witch femdom show
Why?
>>48120492
>Get Powers
>Too Busy Helping Clueless Demon to Use Them.
Sounds Cucked to me!
>>48125085
Compared to the possibly-a-joke Reverse Cuck Quest, I actually had to read it closely to catch it.
>>48125396
You can summon a personification, but he still keeps his powers and his life, same as Brazil still stays in its place, even if you summon its personification.
>>48125424
Reincarnation would be cool, but... I can only blacklist at species level? Nothing more generic?
There are an awful lot of species of beetle out there.
>>48125625
More than any other creatures on this Earth, god loves beetles and nematodes.
>>48120492
>charm 1
>roletaking 2
>legal dept 3
very good cyoa dude
>>48125702
You should make all your builds in one post instead of spamming 'em.
>>48120492
I should make a cyoa and pretend to be other people making builds for it also.
![b9bc8c3ebaeb2d60681303f964334601[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/HG20dXf.jpg "b9bc8c3ebaeb2d60681303f964334601[1].jpg")
>>48125424
>Shoujo
>Free
>Superstrength (10000x)
>Flight
>Training: Ass kicking
>The Challenge
>Invasion
I'm going to be the cutest superhero.
>[quip]
>OCThink I finally got the system down for cyoa #2 that I can make.
>>48125715
>>48125717
Stop being salty about his superior CYOA making skills.
>>48125763
Anon please, you don't need to praise yourself publicly.
>>48125756
I refuse to forget him.
What now?
>>48125756
I'm confused if I pick magic will I be a weak magic user? It seems to imply that.
>>48122283
I like how you make the leap between asking for more oc and more content tailored for him
>>48125756
Why don't the Symbiants just date each other? Why do they insist on going after humans? Surely there are male Kitsune, Vampires etc?
>>48125756
Succubus is the only sure and safe way to become immortal?
>>48125756
Interesting stuff but the lewd waifu subtext makes it quite a bit less "mystical" than it could be.
Anyway,
>Hellborn
Fun way to live, and the protection from being a member of their organization wouldn't hurt.
>Magic
Could join the Witches of the Hellborn and make my useful. Might even get a little apprentice of my own in due time.
What exactly is it Witches do for/with the Hellborn though?
>>48125756
The lack of balance is astounding.
>>48125756
Disguised and Symbiants were very alluring, with their monstergirls and fluffy tails, but I don't think there is anything stopping me from petting them even if I'm from a different faction. Ancients are nice, but I refer my power games to be more lewd in nature, so I will go with Hellborns.
Succubus, because I want to be a pretty succubus.Also easy immortality.
![Hope-Solo1[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/5ss8S26.jpg "Hope-Solo1[1].jpg")
>>48120492
Ruin 3
Legal 2
Figure 1
My chosen football player attached.
Where - in time - is Carmen Sandiego?
>>48126111
That's soccer, not football.
>>48126148
No, it's football. We had the word first you mong
>>48126233
Wrong, the brits invented the term soccer long ago. Not our fault you dropped it to try and and steal football.
>>48126208
Pencil
It should easily give me success in money and love, and it would be nice to write things like humanity living among the stars, or achieving immortality and world peace, even if I'm not alive when they happen.
>>48125756
Burn the demon filth
>>48125952
Can someone answer this please? Why don't the Symbiants just date each other or the ancients if they're so desperate for affection/company from people that share their lifespans?
>>48126410
Unless the CYOA maker replies it's impossible to say.
>>48126208
I'm confused. How is the quill a risk to me if it can't change my own history?
Anyway, women's suffrage never happened.
>>48126445
>>48126445
It's just that this sort of thing never makes sense to me. Why don't immortals/the long lived just date other immortals/the long lived? Especially if there's 1) a decent number and variety of them and 2) they're desperate for company.
They don't even necessarily have to fuck if they're affection starved; just hug and share secrets sometimes.
>>48126410
They're all qt girls and that's forbidden love.
>>48126491
Why would immortals, beings that aren't human, give a fuck about human social mores. Moreover social mores that aren't even static or particularly justified.
>>48126516
>Just because one species has a certain morality means it's impossible for other species to have the same or similar.
How retarded.
>>48126516
Why are you this buttflustered about a joke?
>>48125756
Which faction is most likely to help purge the Symbiants? They need to die.
>>48126410
Because then there would be less fluffy tails for us humans.
>>48126539
But why would they have it? What purpose would immortals have for breeding purposes, for example? That's pretty much the only logical-ish someone might be against two people just being gay. Moreover they're described as desperate for affection/relationships from people that live as long as they do. Why would they sitll have that more in those conditions? They've likely spent centuries together and forged a relationship close to/deeper than mere romance. Forever is literally a possibility for them. Why would they still be anti-gay in that situation?
>>48126545
I'm not. It's just that this piece of lore is completely nonsensical and is there to justify monster-human impossiburrr ruv.
>>48126601
You need to consult your psychiatrist on dealing with your autism.
>>48126601
Maybe they're just smart?
>>48126610
The lore fundamentally does not make sense. This is, mind, assuming for some reason that they're all of one gender and straight in sexual orientation. If there are both male and female immortals/long lived then this it is simply unacceptable.
>>48126641
>Why can't I have my gay monsters I can't handle other people's ideas and opinions I desperately need to rant about something that triggers my intense autism when nobody else gives a fuck.
>>48126639
But if they've been around for more than a few decades...they'd literally have to be retarded. Like literally retarded. To the point where a relationship with a human should be the least of their concerns.
>>48126658
That's the fucking thing. If they're gay and all of the same gender, there's no reason why they wouldn't at least try dating each other. If they're straight and all of the opposite gender/have a gender ratio that's at least equal to 1:100 there's no excuse. IF they're all straight and they're all of the same orientation, THERE'S STILL NO EXCUSE.
They've known each other too long to not at least be somewhat emotionally intimate. They might not fuck but there's no reason why they should also be affection starved. Especially when they're also things like succubi and vampires to convert members of their opposite gender for them to fuck/date.
>>48126711
>That's the fucking thing.
The fucking thing is that you keep trying to push your fetish and having autism episodes over shit nobody else cares about when your fetish isn't sated.
>>48126658
>people's ideas and opinions
What opinions did you offer? What ideas? All you did was say I was autistic. What am I supposed to do with that idea? Engage it seriously?
>>48126722
What fetish? I'm asking why immortals don't date other immortals if they're not all sexually incompatible and desperate for romance.
>>48126742
>What am I supposed to do with that idea?
Seek medical attention.
>>48126742
Humans are better partners because they don't pester you for centuries after you have broken up.
>>48126790
>>48126722
>It's an anon tries to justify why all monsters are female and exclusively lusting after wimpy anon's dick episode
>>48126809
>It's an anon throws a shit fit about other people's fetish and whines his is superior episode.
>>48126742
There's no logical reason. It's just the author's fetish and he could not resist making that a part of his cyoa. The lewd subtext is the only complaint I have with this cyoa.
>>48126780
So they just want a quick one night thing? Then why are they described so angstily in their lore? It explicitly says that they're jealous that they can't date humans because of exactly what you described. That they die too quickly. None of this makes sense...
>>48126761
>Why can't I have my literally retarded monsters? I can't handle other people's ideas and opinions. I desperately need to call other people autistic to shut them up when somebody shares their ideas and opinions to further a conversation about inconsistencies in the OC.
>>48125756
>Faction
Custodians
>Bestow
Transfusion
My role is simple. My angel blood protects my mind and sanity. Perfect for experimentation on my brain and body.
Flesh and steel unite...
>>48126839
>homosexuality
>fetish
Don't put words into my mouth. I'm not that anon but I agree with him that in a setting where immortals of both genders exist, there's no reason for an entire faction of permanently depressed female monsters desperate for human cock.
>>48126887
>I'm not that anon
>>48126887
I can't believe you're gender oppressing them right now. They're clearly all humanphallosexuals.
>>48126847
Drop it, anon. It's a magical realm and logic doesn't apply. The author needed monstergirls so he made an entire faction of them.
>>48126892
>WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH ITS IMPOSSIBLE MORE THAN ONE PERSON DISAGREES WITH ME WAAAAAAH
Sorry to break it to you, anon.
>>48126916
You seem to be awfully upset for it to not have struck home.
>>48126807
>>48126855
If he'd made them a group of 1-5 immortals that despise each other and all other long-lived beings, are unable to turn anyone into immortals and hate dating immortals because of>>48126780, it would make sense for them wanting to date humans/the short lived. What it doesn't justify is their depression.
>>48126907
I know but what I dislike is the fact that this could have been included better. It was sloppily done. Even the monster girls could have been expanded a bit. Why, for example, do they all look like humans with just a few things tacked on? Why not have spider girls with spider bodies lower bodies at least? It's just too much.
>>48126928
>I dislike
You're making the mistake of thinking anyone cares what you dislike.
>>48126924
>>48126887
>there's no reason for an entire faction of permanently depressed female monsters desperate for human cock
My cock is the only reason I need.
>>48126939
>>48126936
It's incredible to me that you dared make >>48126658, and all the ones before and after it. A bit of self-awareness goes a long way.
>>48125756
I really love the worldbuilding in this one. Honestly all factions other than Symbiants are appealing, but the Disguised calls for me. Their pack mentality and freedom is excellent, along with additional security of support when it comes down to it.
Plus, monstergirls. Come on.
Still the powers are a bit more difficult, Siphon and Transfusion is cool, if that's your thing. Still I wish there was some sort of Physical Prowess kind of thing. I don't care for Magic or cloaking. My pack relies on me, so I choose Siphon.
I would gain respect and fame in my faction, excellent traits for being a leader. I would simply choose 3 bitches to become my "bottom bitch"because 3 is my limitand to form a small elite pack together. Now the next thing is for them to be trained as packleaders so they can form their own packs. Sub-packs if you will, so:
Me>3 bottom bitches>pack bitches
Also, I pick the 3 girls for my elite pack to be masters of a certain trait so my siphon can absorb and improve me.
>>48126928
How about you make your own CYOA with gays and monstrous monsterpeople.
>>48126958
>>48126928
It's a sloppily done cyoa, anon. It's unbalanced fetish shit with good art. Keep arguing and you'll have spend more time complaining about it than the author put into making it.
>>48126950
I wonder if this is how most NEET "reborn in an MMO" harem mangas come to exist.
>>48126928
>It's just too much.
You mean its just too little.
>>48127018
>>48127004
A bit of both honestly.
>>48126975
The CYOA states that vampires make up the majority of the immortals/"ancients," and implies they can turn people into vampires. Based on the fact that it was never mentioned that only males or females could be vampires, it stands to reason that there are a non-trivial of partners of both genders for a lonely immortal to choose from.
>>48126991
Unbalanced? How?
>>48127026
>>48127039
People are just fed up of your whining. That kind of post is born of exasperation at seeing you shit up the thread for an hour.
>>48127039
Male vampires don't have any blood they can pump to their member.
>>48126410
I'm sure at least some of them do, and the one's that show any interest in weak mortal dick prefer that to the alternative for various personnal reasons that the author didn't need to cover.
AlsoYuri is purist love
>>48127062
It's not been an hour. How am I whining? Are these not legitimate criticisms of the CYOA? Is it wrong to discuss CYOAs in /cyoag/ or would you rather someone reposted an AA build, and y'all bitched about that 'til the 404?
>>48127094
They're only problems to you and they only bother you. That should be clear by now. You keep ranting at people telling you they don't care and want you to stop talking, not even the CYOA maker who would probably pointedly ignore someone as irritating as you.
>Discuss
You keep restating your opinions to people that fundamentally think you're retarded. That's not a discussion.
>>48127039
>unbalanced
The factions are presumably balanced through word of god at the cost of realism: the Disguised have plenty of infighting and rivalism but all band together at the first sign of a threat, the Symbiants are a bunch of emo waifus but can somehow stand on their own, the patricians rule the world but are not stronger than any other faction, the custodians were simple humans and were never snipped in the bud even though the Hellborn have a tendency to do so, the Hellborn are literally Hell on Earth and extremely dangerous but luckily everyone else bands against them always, finally the Patricians are angels and equally powerful and who the fuck knows what they're doing.
The powers are more clearly unbalanced though: symbiote is a weaker version of transfusion, and magic does everything the others do and twice as good, except for the immortality you get from being a succubus maybe.
>>48127124
If you think there's only one anon "complaining", then you're sorely mistaken. Receiving criticism allows an author to grow. Sucking their dick unconditionally does not.
>>48127094
>Humanphallosexual oppression
> legitimate
>>48127162
The problem being other people clearly don't agree that a faction is problematic for not being full of gay vampires.
>>48127124
>They're only problems to you and they only bother you.
There was at least one other poster that agreed with my position.
>You keep restating your opinions to people that fundamentally think you're retarded.
All YOU did was call me autistic. That was the only thing you could offer as a rebuttal. I re-stated my opinion because you, for whatever reason, were unable to actually engage it sincerely. You want a discussion? Then discuss. Half the blame is on you here, don't forget. Just calling someone autistic for voicing an opinion you dislike to shut them up is not conducive to a conversation.
>>48127181
You're a literal autist or a closeted gay guy since you seem to see homosexuality everywhere. I repeat, there is no reason for a faction of desperate immortal waifus when STRAIGHT male immortals clearly exist, the narrator presumably being one. It's a blatant magical realm which is the author's every right but does diminish the quality of his work.
>>48127225
>using the narrator as an example
Did you even read the section on angels?
>>48127181
>The problem being other people clearly don't agree that a faction is problematic for not being full of gay vampires.
They were never explicitly described as either 1) homosexual or 2) all of one gender.
Second that's a strawman and you know it. At least attempt to engage with the discussion topic.
>>48127124
Okay, let's dismiss criticism by labeling it ranting, as if that had any bearing on the validity of the points being made, and then just going
>lalalalala I don't care and clearly no one else cares because I said so
>>48127181
It had already been brought up that homosexuality needn't factor into things. The complaint is that an option is not logically consistent. Gay vampires are only tangentially related.
Oh, and the popularity of a position has nothing to do with the merit of said position. Stop saying "you're outnumbered" as if it means anything at all.
>>48127225
If you think it's a magical realm why are you going through pains to whine that it's a 'magical realm'? At that fucking point it's like bitching that a grilled cheese sandwich isn't a blt. No fucking shit, it was never meant to be a blt.
>>48126017
>Could join the Witches
Are you a girl? Otherwise, don't count on it
>Why are witches with Hellborn
where else do you think they'd fit?
>>48125952
Because Kitsune and Hulder aren't lesbians. They are the ones who are heartbroken.
>>48126479
Kitsune, Hulder and IIRC Selkies were invented by men as waifus. They want to marry a Human.
>>48126845
what "lewd subtext"? The part at the bottom of the Hellborn and the Angel-faction saying you can get a waifu / how they'd be if you tried to get a girlfriend?
I knew anon would ask for which faction would give him a waifu, so I pre-empted the question.
>>48126907
okay?
>>48126574
both Hellborn and the Angel-faction, probably. You could trick the Monstergirls into fighting, too. Hellborn has more firepower, and you'd have a better chance motivating them for sure.
You probably want Siphon so you can get stronger, or Transfusion to be protected from mindcontrol by the Succubi.>4 builds made
>50 post shitstorm made
sometimes I wish I couldn't make cyoas.
>>48127244
And how long you can rant and repeat yourself doesn't increase the merit of your position.
>Muh logic
>Why can't this guy's vampire fetish apply to muh logic? I mean, it only invalidates the vampire fetish why can't he do what I want
>>48127039
I don't think that the symbiants would turn others into their race even if they could. The vampires and succubi seem to be the only ones capable of turning others, explicitly think that being one is a curse.
Honestly it seems like they want to be with a human because they kind of hate themselves. Like a group of sjws who are also straight white men or something.
>>48127261
>Kitsune, Hulder and IIRC Selkies were invented by men as waifus. They want to marry a Human.
Are you saying the supernatural creatures in this cyoa were born out of humanity's collective imagination?Don't do that shit.
>>48127255
>If you think it's a magical realm why are you going through pains to whine that it's a 'magical realm
Just because it's a magical realm doesn't mean it can't make sense. You already have people of one species able to turn people into members of their own without killing them and physically giving birth to them in their new bodies.
>Kitsune, Hulder and IIRC Selkies were invented by men as waifus. They want to marry a Human.
>Because Kitsune and Hulder aren't lesbians. They are the ones who are heartbroken.
So why don't they marry male vampires, male succubi, male whatever-else is immortal/long-lived, or just male versions of their race? Why not ask their vampire/succubus friend, that they've known for a little while, to convert their lover? Or just pay for the conversion with something.
>>48127282
The obvious answer is that they both have to feed on humans in an intimate way so they naturally desire further intimacy with their food. But anon is going to flip his man tits and whine about how they should have all turned gay anyway.
>>48127128
>magic doesn't give you immortality
It's kinda vague on that really. It might.
Some of the other options make avoiding trouble easier, but magics only real drawback seems to be that it requires forethought and effort to work.
>>48127261
>guys can't join the Witches
So what are guys with magic called then and which faction do they belong with?
>why are witches with Hellborn?
No, my question was what they were doing with the Hellborn, practically: what is their job within the Hellborn faction
>>48127282
>The vampires and succubi seem to be the only ones capable of turning others
So why are they whining when their lovers die? Wasn't it mentioned that the ancients can increase lifespans? Why not just cash in favors?
That's before we even get into the limits of magic. Why not cast healing magic to cure ailments or polymorphy-into-child magic every 50 or so years?
>>48127295
>male succubi
>>48127324
Those are called incubi, or is that anon talking about succubi (male)?
>>48127318
They accidently kill them is what the cyoa implies.
Not sure why the others don't try to find a way to increase lifespans though. That seems logical.
>>48127305
That makes sense to me.
>>48127261
It's not your fault, anon. Remember that anon who flipped out that Ordion wouldn't let him get gay married? I think it's just that guy again.
>>48127295
Your method of them all turning prison guy would mean anon couldn't get a waifu so thus the magical realm is destroyed.
>>48127344
Ordion specifically allowed gay marriage, just after your coronation and not before. Your powers were limitless once you became the High King.
>>48127305
>The obvious answer is that they both have to feed on humans in an intimate way so they naturally desire further intimacy with their food.
That doesn't explain why Kitsune/Huldra/Selkies are so bent out of shape when it comes to the idea dating immortals.
>>48127324
The CYOA makes no mention of gender locking the change.
>>48127342
So why not have a witch cast boost-blood supply or something? Or have the succubi just fuck other people.
>>48127380
What an irrelevant post.
>>48127386
>That doesn't explain why Kitsune/Huldra/Selkies
Those races are traditionally pictured as all female.
>>48126790
This should be re-balanced so that all races add up to 21 in starting stats.
