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Here's a dropbox with a LOT of CYOA's:
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>>47625060 →
>Shroedinger
>You have the ability to perform multiple actions simultaniously [sic] on a quantum level; you are limited to 10 actions at the same time and each of them can’t last longer than one minute
What does this power do?
>>47645332
It lets you do several things at once. Think Tsubame Gaeshi. Fake Assassin in general, really. It's either a really good or a really bad power, depending on how you think.
UPDATE
So, I decided to just forget about the height limit and implement the general drawbacks the way I originally wanted. No, I don't anticipate Amnesia to be popular, unless someone wants a fresh start. But that's why it is flexible enough that you can always just take Library as a free one & pick a different one you want as the drawback.
(1/9)
So, my next CYOA is going to have a rather complicated weapon upgrading system.
Do you guys prefer it to be a simple "have 10 upgrades, use it how you wish" sort of thing or would you prefer it to be a progression? In the sense that you have to "defeat" a boss to obtain enough materials for an upgrade so you can continue your progression.
It will essentially be a mini-RPG that focuses on character progression. Weapon stats are complicated enough that you might need a calculator to calculate attack ratings and compare damage types versus what types of bosses you fight against. I will try to keep it as simplified as possible but it will be complicated in the CYOA sense.
>>47645391
Oh, right, and I guess it lets you cheese quantum physics or something. You'll never be allowed in a casino again, if people figure it out.
>>47645409
Since the first page had no more room, I had to make another listing page. New, we have a couple of not-quite-human-shaped people. Both are soft and cuddle-able.
(2/9)
Is there a cyoa where you become a powerful demon, preferably a highranking archdemon?
Not the roommate cyoa or succubus cyoa though, I'm talking adventure and fantasy.
>>47645424
And now back to the grind of uploading the same ol' pages.
(3/9)
>>47645442
This takes quite a while.
(4/9)
>>47645457
We're getting there.
(5/9)
>>47645476
It's weird when I posted the page with Pan & Captcha wanted me to pick breads.
(6/9)
>>47645276
Kind of a weird one. Not studying seems like an impossible poor decision.
>Major
Architecture
>Year I
Intro Biology
Intro Chemistry
Intro Physics
Intro Philosophy
Study
>Year II
Physiology
Intro Music
Intro Dance
Study
>Year III
Theater
Intro Psychology
Study
>Year IV
Advanced Theater
Study
>Graduation Gift
Locked Scroll
Was going to go for the Classics originally but then I read in the notes how very specific and limited the upgrade is. Not at all what I'm interested in. Would've like to take Intro Mathematics and Intro P.E. as well but I'm very happy with what I ended up with. Going to need some sort of armor too, which Architecture will help with. Might be nice to spend Year II exploring the campus but I'm just not risking forgetting an entire class.
>>47645413
I like the MH progression style.
What is the cyoa about in general though?
>>47645476
Last one before new content.
(7/9)
>>47645503
New page!
Because I feel like someone will ask about it, the life cycle for Floof is basically the same as a human except they undergo a metamorphosis for about a month from ages 16 - 22 and don't undergo the mental changes of puberty until the months leading up to this. And, like all the other supernatural creatures, they don't get old and die.
(8/9)
>>47645526
And here's the Library
(9/9)
>>47645520
You're making Jumpchain for dummies but I love it. Make sure the world progression coincides with powerlevel though so we keep some challenge going.
>>47645491
It's a sign. Bread girl is best girl.
>>47645498
Just something you can expect traditional RPG elements to be a part of, which is why I want to make it have a complex weapon statting system.
There will be a multitude of ways you can upgrade your weapons, IE to scale with certain stats of yours more. Also you can ascend weapons to be something completely different.
>>47645409
>Voyeuristic prostitution
>Mind rape memory death
Why are your drawbacks so mean and horrible jesus christ. You should've just left them out, because it completely ruins the tone. It goes from 'cute and nice' to 'horrible and evil, this bitch is clearly a fucking monster and this whole agency corrupt'.
>>47645391
>It lets you do several things at once.
Like patting your head with your right hand while rubbing your belly with your left hand or having a conversation while fantasizing about something else? I don't know what the phrase "on the quantum level" means, but if the power just makes you good at multitasking (albeit with a working memory of only 60 seconds) then I understand it.
>Think Tsubame Gaeshi. Fake Assassin in general.
I don't know what you're describing.
>>47645526
You had the perfect opportunity to make Floof metamorphose into a mothboy... but you didn't take it. You're lucky Kataline is such a cutie.Please never stop making these.
>>47645618
Pretty sure nobody would be happy with that.
>>47645413
The simple one. I'm stupid. And I'm not the only one. But do what you wanna do buddy, you'll just be restricting your potential player base but maybe that's okay. You're not trying to make money anyway.
>>47645630
Sometimes I forget not everyone is a part of the Bi masterrace.
>>47645659
I'm bi, I don't like the idea of being given one thing and then having it switched around to something else.
>>47645526
Are you still mute when you're fully mothified?
>>47645526
>Floof
Aaand there's finally a new best girl to replace Mishe and Harmony.
And I love everything about queen.
Plus, I think this is the first ability for myself that I actually like. Hell yes I want to fly.
I don't really care for any of the dowries, so I suppose I'll take love nectar.
Floof is best girl.
>>47645596
>Why are your drawbacks so mean and horrible
I was just trying to weight them evenly with with something as detested as working...
Does anyone else agree with this anon's assessment about the tone?
>>47645618
At least you like one of them.
>>47645693
Yes, but at least there's no additional drawback when going from 3 bites to 4.
>>47645712
Glad you like her!
>>47645597
Fake Assassin is the imaginary person summoned to full the role of the Assassin class in Fate/Stay Night. He didn't have any crystallized proof of his legend, being that he didn't really exist, but he was exceptionally skilled. He could, among other things, cause others to subconsciously discount him and prevent people from understanding his fighting style. Tsubame Gaeshi is the pinnacle of his talent as a swordsman, and is essentially an attack that can't be blocked, because it works by cutting in three different directions at the same time. Not in the "so fast it's almost simultaneous" sense, but in the "dimensionally refracted phenomenon" sense, where the three cuts happened in one swing.
Anyway, it's a power that relies on imagination. If you lean on it, I could see you using it to preserve resources, create/clone items, walk through walls, dodge attacks better, sneak up on people, always win games of chance, step across spaces, breathe without air. Well, I don't think you're supposed to, but I like it.
>>47645520
>Slytherin
Quality above quantity, and ambition over recklessness.
>Potions Class
Potion brewing in the potterverse is just plain incredible. My goal is to invent a potion that allows vampires to walk in the sunlight but that will probably not work, until then I have no idea how to hide my vampire powers though.
>Draco Malfoy
He's misunderstood, rich and smug. There was no other option.
>Sword of Gryffindor
This looks like something that will only keep getting better as I slay monsters through the multiverse.
GREAT WORK. Now create more, a lot more. Do all of the worlds!
>>47645597
>>47645597
I imagine it's more like Coil, but picking and choosing elements to keep from both. You can simultaneously walk up to someone with bodyguards and shoot them in the face, while also staying away from them, and keep the results of having shot them without having to be standing there in front of their guards.
So not just multitasking, but I might be wrong.
>>47645722
Why would anyone trust an organization that can destroy your mind completely and offers it out of hand to any random person coming in?
>>47645496
>Not studying seems like an impossible poor decision.
>in a magical university
No shit Sherlock.
>>47645748
Well duh. But it's poor design for a game to have a decision with only one real choice.
>>47645792
You only have to pick it once for it to apply to all four years.
>>47645722
>Does anyone else agree with this anon's assessment about the tone?
Amnesia is horrible and I would never take it, but I have seen some willingly choose it in other CYOAs (not wanting to carry old memories of their life as fat nerd when starting a new life as a qt girl and stuff). Doesn't really paint the organization badly because it's completely voluntary.
Surveillance is kind of iffy if you're doing a lewd build. Someone who just takes a cute girl to hang out with probably wouldn't mind. Maybe there could a restriction on where they place the cameras? Like no cameras in the bathroom or bedroom. I would still take it half of the time as it is.
>>47645413
I have no opinion on your CYOA, but your post made me think of an idea I would like to use: a multitude of mini tech trees to invest points in.
>>47645276
Hey OP did you make this?
>>47645732
I thought it might be that but I can't tell at all from the description.
>>47645826
>Doesn't really paint the organization badly because it's completely voluntary.
Group is all powerful enough that they can destroy your mind. Group offers this to random people for using their library. Not only is this price completely out of sync for what's gained, the fact that they even HAVE this kind of power makes them untrustworthy, you can have no idea how often they've used it and on who.
>>47645851
I mean I thought it might be Coil's thing, not the keeping several elements of each.
>>47645856
I don't think you'd like Men In Black.
>>47645842
Why would the maker of a CYOA not post it with a proper filename?
>>47645868
The Men in Black are only liked because you're lead into trusting the characters we meet. If there was a government organization that did what they then people would flip the fuck out on them for it, even outside the whole ALIENS bit, that kind of power is never trusted.
>>47645409
>Lose all memories
Hope you enjoy potty training and trying to learn English as an adult.
>>47645831
Well yeah, isn't that essentially what every or most CYOAs are? Especially fantasy and RPG based ones.
>>47645903
I didn't mean it literally. Like, when a person gets amnesia, they don't forget that stuff. I'll see about rewording it for you.
>>47645491
Could someone open my mind and convince me not to pick Andrea if my only intention is to give her a soul, yet turn her into my obedient robot workdrone?
>>47645409
When can we pick the office lady? She specifically said she lives alone and doesn't want to. I feel kinda bad for her.
>>47645939
>For me
>Implying I'd ever pick this shit
>>47645889
I wonder why you flipped the fuck out just because the amnesia choice anon. Especially the organization already much more powerful than that before this update. After all they do take care the likes of djinn and little gods
>>47645520
>House
Ravenclaw
>Class
Transfiguration, Magical Theory
>BFF
Katie Bell
>Item
Philosopher's Stone
I was real torn between Magical Theory and Care of Magical beasts, but I think I can learn about unicorns on my own time. With the philosopher's stone and my classes, I try to engineer a means of permanent transfiguration, to alter myself at a natural level, to such an extent that my bones become condensed, reinforced wand wood, and my marrow is adapted into unicorn marrow. I will now become addicted to the blood for it will already be a part of me, and with my modified bones I aught to have the ability to survive most on-grounds attacks.
>>47645952
Because it wrecks the tone. This place comes across as evil and corrupt with the voyeur and mind rape options. Before the drawback was just a job, mundane, not something to be suspicious about.
>>47645911
I'm thinking about 20 trees with 5-8 weapon upgrades in each. I'm pretty sure I've never seen a CYOA like that.
>>47645945
Wait, I don't get it. If what you pointed out wasn't even a factor is dissuading from the choice, why did you mention it?
>>47645944
I haven't made a page for her,yet.
>>47645960
I'm pretty sure Transfiguration is permanent by default, maybe unless you mess up. Likewise, you don't need to become a treant to use magic without a focus in the series, it's just hard.
>>47645997
I noticed that something stupid was written there, so I pointed it out. Poking logic holes in things doesn't mean I like those things.
>>47645424
>>47645526
If she's the princess of a kingdom of cat people then why is it that her cat ears are explained by her being the daughter of a spirit of luck?
>>47645973
And it's only voluntary choices anon, after all would you really trusted an organization who have powers and spell to deal with this? They can create souls, necromancy,etc.
Afterall who to say you haven't mindraped when picking? Who knows what they actually did with spells and stuff.
Just ignore that choices if it really bothering you.
If i work at that kind of organization a memory erasure is probably a must. Some things better left unknown afterall. Also for secutrity measure.
>>47646000
No one in the series has ever done Transfiguration on themselves to the extent that anon wishes to though. He can use all the help he can get.
>>47646055
Because her mom decided to give everyone in the kingdom cat ears too. For kicks.
>>47645520
Cool CYOA. I don't get the whole crossworlds thing though.
>>47646055
Because that's where the kingdom got their cat ears, too.
>>47646065
>Afterall who to say you haven't mindraped when picking?
I think you're missing it, this is exactly part of my problem with the implication that it's something they can do. They can abuse that power and nobody would know.
My issue is a complaint of tone. This breaks the tone of the CYOA (which was mostly innocent) and destroys any trust you can place in this girl and her organization.. It's not so much that there's amnesia in there, it's that this organization can CAUSE amnesia and flings it about so willy nilly.
>>47646066
I'm pretty sure that sort of body modification would be considered black magic and declared illegal, so Dark Arts would be more useful for him than Transfiguration. He isn't really turning into a different thing, after all, just trying to make himself better at being him, no matter the cost.
>>47646072
>>47645424
you should have just moved the 2 you added to the first page a bit ago to this page so that it had more info on it. or even have moved 4 from page 1 to page 2, that would keep page 1 about the same size, not that that's vital.
>>47646119
I think he's planning on adding even more, so this complaint is temporary.
>>47645541
>Jumpchain for dummies
Why for dummies?
>>47646000
Wands are magical amplifiers, it would be foolish of me to not want my body to become its own magical amplifier by an extraordinary amount. And, in regards to transfiguration and permanency, I have seen no evidence to suggest this, all transformations demonstrated within the franchise only last for a short period, Whether or not this is because they choose to dismiss the effect or because it is temporary are never specified. I don't want to take that chance when it comes to altering myself to an extreme.
>>47646094
Dark arts do not seem to cover what I pursue, whereas transfiguration specifically states what I seek, altering aspect of myself into something other than they were. I, of course, would be in open conversation with this experimentation with the teachers, and put an effort to curb my research so as to avoid doing the experiment on such a level they might feel is not in the best interest of me or the school, only pursuing secrecy should it outright denied in all forms.
>>47645976
Well good luck with that, you're going to get a lot of reskinned upgrades between different trees. I know that difficulty first hand and my next two CYOAs are going to basically have something like it. Not only will balancing be an issue, but just coming up with uniqueness while maintaining appeal in the options becomes exponentially difficult with the more options you set for yourself. Same goes for hard stats if you're thinking of having those.
This one in particular is more stat based so different upgrades effects numbered stats on your weapon, including stat scaling constants. Depending on your stat investment, it might be better to adventure in different areas and fight different bosses due to damage types.
![fb6a30976c2ef9d1d2eb1387f08b6e2a[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/6JWJSFN.jpg "fb6a30976c2ef9d1d2eb1387f08b6e2a[1].jpg")
>>47645409
Orb of Life
Dream Home
Employment
>>47645526
Floof
Queen
Back
Love Nectar
No interest in additional bites or drawbacks, because I don't really need for her to able to metamorphose after she has become a queen.
She might not able to find her old family, but we can make a new better one together.
>>47646090
>>47646090
I don't know, amnesia is pretty tame compared what they already can do before this.
Of course i know that memory loss is sensitive stuff around here, for me too. Afterall why would you only have the knowledge from library but sacrifice every memories from your birth is maze me.
As for tone, remember Fei La and demon hunters? Slime and their persecution? Soulless robots? It never all sugary of course, but well my view of the world pretty minus, so i am biased.
>>47645851
You can shoot a gun in one direction, and at the same time, shoot the same gun, the same bullet in entirely different direction. While you had no gun in your hands at all, you were fighting three dudes in melee with a sword at the same time. You hit each of those three guys with one vertical slash of your sword, despite each of them standing in entirely different position from you. All at the same time, simultaniously.
>>47646165
>that pic
no
how about no
>>47645722
>>47645409
Honestly, the whole goddamn library thing makes no sense both ways!
I get why you need to pick it as an option gameplay/logically, but since you'd only be going in there for the one book/info/item which is supposedly directly related to their goal of fostering human/monster relations, there is no good logical/lore reason for them to not just let you in there for free (one time) to get the relevant info.
And the amnesia thing is just... Why? How? What's the deal? There's no reason for them to actually do that.
And frankly, the book benefits aren't that good overall. It's really nice for a select few characters (Really improves the Djinn's quality of life for example) But suffering mindrape or even giving up a free house or money is totally not worth waterproofing clothes for the slime. Waterproof clothes already exist. Just give her a latex suit or something.
Your cost/benefits are out of wack since that option is so unbalanced.
Surveillance is fine. It's creepy, but justifiable (Research purposes) And getting a custom dream home all expenses paid is a pretty massive boon. Objectively the most expensive one if there really is no limit and you can literally have a multi-million dollar home.
Job is fine, butthurt neets can just not take it. It pays like $18/hr plus benefits which isn't the best, but better than a lot of annons probably have.
>>47646166
The thing is, creating a soul is an active thing. You made something, you didn't effect an already existent person. Induced amnesia is something you CAUSE to a person, it can only effect, destroy, and manipulate an already living thing. They might have been 'powerful' before, but this kind of mind affecting magic is in a completely different direction.
You're also missing that I don't like the whole voyeur option, it feels like prostitution and is obviously destruction of privacy rights. Especially since the office chick is implying she's going to watch them. It's not as bad as the Amnesia, but I don't like the implications there either.
>>47646127
Cause Jumpchain is a complicated but kind of fun clusterfuck compared to Crossworlds. I'm surprised by how much I'm enjoying the bits of Crossworlds I'm seeing though.
>>47646166
Also, anon? The demon hunters, persecution etc, those are things outside of the organization. Things that they're trying to mitigate when they're not fair or right. It's part of what painted them as the good guys before the whole mind rape powers made them untrustworthy.
>>47646143
Well, the only solid assertion I've seen that Transfiguration is inherently temporary is HPMoR, which was wrong about literally everything it attempted to address, so I'd side against it here on sheer principle. Also, according to Rowling, the best practitioner of wandless/focus-less magic was also one of the strongest known practitioners. Anyway, it's your story, so you take it as you like.
>>47646213
I know i know, memory loss is bad, that's why i said it's completely strange, 10+ year of your life just for sliver of knowledge? Ridicoulous.
As for voyeur,yeahhh not gonna pick them unless necessary, though even if are not picking them, there probably some dudes still monitoring us, but yeah the choice kinda bad.
That's why i only picking deskjob~ Best choice of three.
>>47646115
Thanks. Wow this is one long intro. Basically it's a cool multiverse where every fiction has its own dimension and stuff? And the player has to protect a world seed?
There's gotta be a more concise and catchier way to get that across. Not that it's badly written, it's just kinda too long of an infodump up top. Just my personal opinion. I like it anyway.
>>47646261
It is, and I agree. That's the thing, he tried to balance these options with how 'hated' a job was, but the thing is he didn't consider how it effected his tone and lore in the CYOA either, or that people's fear of a job (I'm bad with people and scared) aren't the same as their problem levels with voyeurism (no privacy or comfort in my own home) and mindrape (I die/become someone else), nor did he take into account how people stopped complaining about job after the desk alternate was included. So the job option with enough variation nobody complained, to stuff you almost always get an adverse reaction to in any variant. It's not parity.
>>47646263
I know it's long but I had so much I wanted to stuff in.
It's adapted from a table top rpg I made a few years ago.
>>47646203
>It pays like $18/hr plus benefits which isn't the best, but better than a lot of annons probably have.
You can also show up to the work looking completely different or with moth wings growing out of your back; something that I don't think I could do in my current job.
>>47646228
I don't know~ For me as an organization who maintain integration of supernatural being, this kind of things pretty normal.
But like i said, i view world in pretty minus way so i am biased.
Also miss interviewer already tried to do some mind tricks from start with her own lustvision,or something, so yeah i am fine aslong i am not picking the options.
Fei La, Jeanne, and Pan still best girls.
>>47646240
>HPMoR, which was wrong about literally everything it attempted to address
Sure but it was fun in a nerd power-fantasy kind of way. Also sometimes the story got legs and jumped from its creator's soapbox to run wild and just be a nice retelling/reframing of HP. I enjoyed those moments.
>>47646292
Also yeah, instead of those kind of drawback Beri could just give use some vartiety of jobs like as part time librarian or something.
Somekind perks like double roommate is great too.
>>47646308
Perhaps you could sprinkle the lore through the CYOA? Or just trim it a bit? Or insert some images between the paragraphs?
Just random suggestions. It's your game so do as you wish. What are you planning next?
>>47646240
While that is fair, I'd argue that the benefit of raw output imbued directly into you may outweigh the benefit of understanding how to properly manifest magic without a wand. That said, I do admit to seeing the benefits of that, but would like to say that such practice also seems like something more covered in Magic Theory, which I will already be pursuing.
>>47646320
Also, I just went to check, and according to Rowling, Transfiguration works by changing the object even on a molecular level. Since you can also use it to duplicate food, and transfiguring yourself was noted to be dangerous because you could get stuck and forced to live out your life as an animal or some kind of abomination without assistance, I feel that it's safe to say it's not temporary.
>>47646381
this does alter things a bit, but not enough to change my specialty classes, as both are still almost certainly needed for what I am aiming for. At the very least, it does mean less time can be spent on some aspects of the engineering to favor others in quality, so thank you for that info.
>>47645526
How terrible for these girls that they're not getting any attention because of controversial changes on page 1.
Guy working on the seven sins/virtues cyoa here. Hit a small rut with the powers, but I'll figure them out soon enough. Please share whatever thoughts you wish.
Also, I started the color cyoa a while ago, and have decided to do some of it when I have hit a rather large rut in my current cyoa.
Lastly, what font's would you recommend for the virtues?
>>47645409
Dream Home
Library
Jeanne
>Fashion Designer
>Interior Designer
>Shapechange
>Attract Others
>Immortality
>Me
>My Bottle
>Desire Compass
>Make as many wishes as you want
>Implying I don't want her to change me however she wants.
>Implying I'm not going to free her so we can be cute models together.
>>47646343
>>47645409
If not double roomates. I was going to suggest some kind of benefit or drawback that would allow you to gain a gift or a blessing from some girl OTHER than the one you actually picked.
Because there are a few combos that can't be done but would be really synergistic.
Take Militant Macaroons for example. It's of limited practical use for the life of an assistant baker, is it not? Since Pan mostly lends herself to comfy builds.
On the other hand, the effects of those Macaroons are damn near perfect for being Kaila's combat partner.
>>47646451
They do senpai, just scroll up.
>>47646457
Shit, meant fonts, not font's. My bad.
>>47646469
Allow me to rephrase, then. They're not getting a lot of attention/as much as they deserve. Better?
>>47646421
That's fine; Dumbledore and James Potter were both noted to be powerful wizards who specialized in Transfiguration, enough to fight Voldemort, so we can see it's a good specialty even for a combat mage.
>>47646194
what's wrong with yandere monster waifu?
>>47646466
Ehh i doubt you can get other girl blessing without the girl herself, it would be strange.
Why would the girl bless you or give you heirloom or something,if you are not picking her afterall?
>>47646226
I'm not sure I understand your meaning, sorry. Could be because of all the drugs. Are you saying that Jumpchain is more complicated than Crossworlds? Or less?
>>47646483
How much attention they need senpai?200 post? People do notice them, some even choose mothgirl, and discuss about the cat ears.
>>47646457
Could do with a divider between sins and virtues in the base powers section.
>>47646501
Jumpchain very complicated. Many jumps. Many perks. Maybe too many. Crossworlds like Jumpchain. But smaller. Easier. Maybe more fun. Not sure. Time will tell.
Now tell me about the next world, druganon.
>>47646261
>~
Why do weebs use this as punctuation?
>>47646548
Eh~ don't know~ After all i use this far before i touch internet. sorta remind me of myown handwriting~ what with little sguiggle at the end.
>>47646548
It's the movement my tongue makes while I tickle your- nope, you won't get me banned. Discuss cyoas.
>>47646491
I'm not certain as to whether I'd actually focus on it for the sake of combat, that isn't my priority here, but I suppose it couldn't hurt. Myself, that is.
>>47646492
Time-warping, matricide/patricide encouraging, possibly predatory if the screens of chapters beyond 2 are true, yandere moth monster waifu is no waifu of mine.
That shit is a much better horror story than porn.
>>47646371
A blended Marvel/DC universe
>>47645618
>Please never stop making these.
I don't know. I think I've worked on it too many days in a row. I ought to just quit while I'm ahead.
>>47645409
I can't do anything right, can I? This is my last effort on the matter.
>>47646451
Yeah, I think I might be about done with the CYOA because of it. The same thing happened with the last update.
>>47646524
I think anon meant relative to what the others got. The 4 most recent haven't had quite the same attention as any of the others.
>>47646548
I used it on the CYOA. I find it to be more readable to say "Let's go~" than "Let's gooooooooooooooooo!" Plus, it is better at indicating a rising tone. "Let's goooooooooooooo!" just feels like yelling. "Let's go-" is not an option because horizontal line is more intuitively an interruption in the cotext of text.
>>47646603
I'm so sorry Beri, I didn't want to make you feel put out like this.
>>47645424
No, neither of the new ones interest me really at all. Honestly the fairy ("item") probably appeals more than the moth does at this point. Actually that wouldn't be a half bad idea, try to think Eryn from Fairy Fencer.
Probably just not my thing, and neither of them come with anything like a decent body transformation unless you wanted to be a full-on slave. I mean they don't HAVE to have that, Andrea doesn't and I think she comes in at #4 for me (She's really good, there are just a lot of great options).
>>47645409
Some thoughts/questions on some of the girls:
Twile: Loves pranks. Can take over your body at any time. That is not a dangerous combo at alllllllllllll.
Harmony seems hyper-competent and from the sound of it, is already perfectly integrated into human society. ...So, what's she even need to be in the program for, really? Seems like you wouldn't have too many duties as a housewife/husband if you took her deal anyways either.
Does Jeanne's immorality automatically go straight into "be the little girl" mode or does it simply make you younger?
>>47646013
Then they're still fixing it for you, since you are the one who was bothered by the logic hole and pointed it out.
>>47646660
I like the moth.
>>47646603
I still won't pick them,but well the library choices is better? The surveillance one is still bit unnecessary though~
Unable to perceive other strange being? Should be fine? Though since we lived with one it would be pretty dangerous?
But well, just rest Beri this is already fine, enough for now~
Ice Job~
Also some people won't be satisfied, but that's normal. like with Twille some sort of trust that some anon (like me) unable to give is needed,etc.
But yeah headpats for you Beri~
>>47646691
Good lord, you are cancerous.
>>47646715
Well this is cyoag, so cancer like me,SDA-copy,angelanon copy is pretty natural to be here~
Also you could ignore my post ya know~
>>47646589
I only made that specification because it seems like something that's better for other things, where you have the time to mess around or focus on random minutia, being difficult as it is. You might not think "oh, this guy blew my door up, better summon some stone tigers," but it might be fine to do it after all.
>>47645276
It says there are arrows for prereqs, but I see none
>>47646635
It's my own fault for not having a good enough sense of what people want / can tolerate.
>>47646660
That's a shame...
>>47646663
Not wanting to miss a prime prank opportunity is probably the situation of greatest frequency when she'll take over your body without permission.
Like the blue text above Harmony says, she'll reach her limits. Hive minds tend to have trouble relying on others. That's a shortcoming they hope to fix.
Jeanne just makes you younger & immortal. It doesn't change other aspects of your body.
>>47646674
Thanks!
>>47646691
Thanks. The biggest danger in Lock Out is likely for Kaila, as you won't be able to see the horrible monsters she fights. It also renders a portion of Demon Sight useless & you'll be wondering if Floof is just insane for talking to an imaginary fairy. You won't be able to take Kataline's bonus condition either, since you won't be able to see things that are full spirits (just halves) Things like that. It might put you in a disadvantage in the much more distant future if/when supernatural creatures are more properly integrated, though.
>>47646742
Ignoring cancer is typically a pretty poor plan of action, though personally I like tildes so you can just continue being yourself.
>>47646830
I think what anon was saying was that Twile would probably get you killed/hated for the pranks.
>>47645722
I think the drawbacks are pretty severe. They almost feel like they're at the right level for drawbacks but should give a somewhat improved boon. Like taking the job should give Room and board for girl + $400 weekly plus maybe a good healthcare plan. Voyeur house should maybe throw in cleaning or paying all utilities and small repairs.
I'm not sure how amnesia links to the library thing. I'm okay with it being a downside for a perk but Memory loss to library card just doesn't seem to work. Might work for the Orb of Life but not so much for the library. Maybe it could be something more like every year you have to give up 2-3 weeks of time to organize the whole thing and index any new material. A mini boon to go along with it is you'd have a better knowledge of what's in there and be able to check out materials for up to a month.
>>47646830
If Beri really want to add some more people, you could try wiith the classic aquatic people like mermaid,or naga.
Now that i think about it...classic myth creature is lacking in this cyoa,like centaur, or halfdragon, or something that actually need help integration..
Also i now convinced that this boss lady name is smith, and we actually live in pararell world of that monmusu anime.
>>47645409
What does Andrea not having a soul entail? It feels like giving her one wouldn't really change anything. Is she like some sort of P-Zombie or something?
>>47646925
He changed it already, scroll down.
>>47646830
I think you're doing a good job with the girls though, and if you have any ideas you wanted to put in you should keep going.
>>47646115
>Loki's Angel
>Red Mage
There are only two choices to make, correct? The rest is backstory and railroading.
>>47645520
So I'll stay in the Wizarding World until I complete my education is that right?
>Slytherin
Hyper-specialization here I come.
>Divination
Knowledge begets control. With knowledge of the future, I will CONTROL FATE ITSELF! Muhahahaha.
>Draco Malfoy <3
Your description makes him irrestibile. Poor little jerkass woobie.
>Time Turner
Combined with Divination to help me experiment a lot. The goal being to eventually avoid all possible pitfalls and obstacles and correct my actions repeatedly until the optimal path is found. At least on a five hours scale.
>>47646742
>SDA-copy
No one believes me when I say I'm SDA anymore.
>>47646742
What do you have to do to get a copy like SDA and Angelanon have?
>>47646881
Oh, I thought anon was just pointing out how it could be a bit troubling, to which I assented.
>>47646929
>Also i now convinced that this boss lady name is smith, and we actually live in pararell world of that monmusu anime.
Sure thing, Kurusu.
>>47646930
It's a very major factor in her inferiority complex. Plus, it hampers her creativity. You'll have to be more directing for Artist without it.
>>47646954
Thanks, I think.
>>47647031
That's ok, isn't it?
>>47647042
Do androids dream of electric sheep?
>>47647127
She can't dream (in that sense of the word) without a soul.
>>47647110
Arr according to pran.
>>47647042
Say Beri, Jeanne will grant wishes to people who rub her bottle right?
Is the same thing will still happen if we released her from bottle? Do we need to stay near her too when choosing modelling after she is released?
>>47647151
>SDA: The Untold Story
>How to get famous, then convince people that you're just a false-flag copycat.
>>47647148
Poor girl.
>>47646940
Or up. I didn't update the thread before I posted. Probably won't take any of them. The house one is tempting, since 3 hours a day I'm not under surveillance but I think it would get to me in a paranoia sense. Just constantly being watched would cause me some level of stress I can't predict.
Still stand by the fact that $400 probably isn't enough to live on comfortably. Sure your companion is taken care of but you still need to pay for your own expenses, possibly rent. And I'm not entirely sure if Welfare includes any children the two of you might have.
>>47645409
>>47646603
You know, I have yet to make a build, so fuck it, I'll make ALL THE BUILDS and do one for each girl. (And rate them as I go to figure out who'd I'd ultimately pick)
For starters, I don't have my own place, so dream home is pretty much my mandatory extra option for all of them, with a couple exceptions.
>>47645442
Fei La:
Take her deal
Match-making, Love-making (all of the threesomes)
Sex Drive (Kind of nessesary due to the above, AND feeding her)
Lustonomicon Porn too shocking for a succubus? Imma scan that shit and throw it on /d/. What's the worst that can happen?
Demon Sight
Kinda on the 'slave' thing even if she's nice enough and I can do without the demonic features.
Rating 4/5. Obviously good for the lewds, which is really tempting, but not a whole lot practical elsewhere, and I should NOT be trusted with that book...
Mishe:
Iffy on that deal. No for now, but it sounds like I can take a raincheck and do it later if I change my mind?
Locket Slime. Literally having her in my pocket sounds odd, and I shouldn't need a full time guard.
Jelly Resilience- Pairs with the orb for near practical immortality,
Big book of slime- Waterbending is cool. Gown sounds nice for giving her dexterity, but the incites dependence effect sounds kind of... rapey to me. Personality altering items creep me out.
Rating 3/5: Slime girl a cute, but after the slime nursery and that slime adoption CYOA there's much more fleshed out slimegirl CYOAs that make Mishe almost underwhelming in comparison. I'd just play one of those for a slime waifu instead.
>>47647209
>matchmaking
>lovemaking
So are you going to cheat or are you into cucking your partner, you filthy piece of shit?
Hero Academy
>>47647278
>>47647270
don't feed him and his NTR fetish
>>47647148
That reminds me. One of the things I dislike most about andrea is that you specifically define her as soulless (and capable of having one) via the library option. I think that whole philosophical question (leaving it undecided) is what makes android girls interesting to me. They think of themselves as soulless machines but when they think and feel exactly the same as I do, having faith in them is what makes the relationship.
>>47647310
>>47647310
>the shittiest schoolSt Flareshas the most valuable exclusive classDruidism
Why do this?
>>47647325
>>47647345
I hope I didn't fuck upThe alcohol is starting to kick in
>>47647209
>What's the worst that can happen?
Slaneesh, that's the worst that can happen.
>>47646830
>It's my own fault for not having a good enough sense of what people want / can tolerate.
I thought the stuff you've been doing with drawbacks in the past few updates has been reasonable. They're pretty softball honestly, this is a generous cyoa. I pretty much agreed with >>47645826
I don't think you can really avoid getting some complaints, and sometimes people are going to get autistic about it because that's just how this thread is. That's not on you- I mean, you even made all of the drawbacks voluntary here.
I guess what I'm trying to say is don't get discouraged because you managed to randomly trigger someone here once or twice. Your cyoas would be less interesting if they were too easy on us.
>>47647278
Friendly reminder that most heroes are not adventurers and the only reason to take things like survival and dungeoneering is if you're homeless.
>>47647382
>>47647382
>less interesting if they were too easy on us
Beri's cyoas are famously generous. Even this time we basically get a supernatural roommate, immortality, a blessing, a magic item and possibly a house for free. Don't kid yourself.
>>47647270
This shit again lol? I mean, hate it if you like, but there is a lot of ground between monogamy and NTR. I'm kind of stuck debating whether you're just this close-minded or if you just indulge in an anti-NTR fetish.
>>47645520
Thi is an interesting take on making cyoas which I like hope you keep it up.
>>47647278
>Lunestier
>Arcane Magic x3
>Summoning Magic x3
>Tactics x3
>Magic Refinement
>Valerie Bluewood
>Allyce Westhold
>Crale Edwards
>Tennie Northbreed
>Suzette Highking
>The Great Hunt (every year)
>Security
>Bodyguard
Hopefully with my summoning magic and tactics I can basically become a general of my own magic army and I can use arcane magic to protect myself and support my army. After gradation my friends and I can go on quests to find treasures and lost knowledge and help protect peasants and kingdoms...for a price.
>>47647422
Matchmaking means she gets you an almost perfect partner.
Lovemaking means you have sex with her.
This implies your perfect partner is okay with you keeping a succubus on the side, hence you're a cuck.
>>47647422
>It's not NTR to betray the love of your life and fuck a succubus every day
You sick fuck fetishists disgust me
>>47647391
>Adventurers
>Not homeless
>Not living off the land and hunting down super beasts for food
Do you even Dungeon Meshi son? Besides, its better than being a Fantasy Lib-Arts fag from Lunestier who probably never even goes adventuring at all
>>47647278
>no one picks Potion mixing
Since when did /tg/ have such bad taste?
>>47647498
I don't even like Lunestier, they sound pretty obnoxious. But Magic Refinement is crazy useful, and you get to fuck a princess.
>>47647209
the rest?
>>47647312
Well, she doesn't "know" she doesn't have a soul. She just assumes. A soul is the best gift you can ever give her, though.
>>47647382
>don't get discouraged
alright... I appreciate your support.
>>47647498
>the peasantry actually believes eating boiled Goblin testicles and charred Spider mandibles is a positive thing
Don't mind me, I'm just the local hero of a major city living in luxury.
>>47647278
>St. Flares
>Classes
Martial Combat II
Smithing I
Elemental Magic (Ice) III
Knowledge I
Teamwork I
Physical Training I
Monster Hunting
>Companions
Luvyna
Kengen
Eloise
Sorte
Kit
>Events
Battle Royal
The Great Hunt x3
Fund Raising
Basilisk Den
Security
Bodyguard
description
>>47647382
>They're pretty softball honestly,
>Losing all of your memories was softball
Did you grow up exclusively on a diet of island CYOAs anon?
>>47647498
The only reason I went Lunestier was because i can get a dragon from them
>>47647278
So can you take extra ranks in the exclusive classes/multiple exclusive classes?
>>47647498
Adventuring would get in the way of your heroing.
>>47647555
Really, anon's advice is bad. It's basically 'don't listen to anyone who has criticism and be mean on purpose', which is really out of tone with your nice CYOAs and attitude. Really, I think all of us like you for who you are.
>>47647310
I still think it's unfair that Mage Armor comes with physical feedback while there's no such thing in Necromancy, Beast Taming or Summoning magic.
>>47647534
Which is the only reason to ever go to Lunestier
Meanwhile, I'll be hunting rampaging hordes of sand sharks to save villages and cutting up their meat and hide to feed and support the villagers who lost their food and property.
>>47647559
So your a useless ponce who is unable to function in the outside world and would die of starvation while going on a actual adventure outside his cushy estate? Good to know. Meanwhile I'll be hunting down the giant mutant squid dragon that wants to devour the sun while actually aiding and helping the actual citizenry that make up the backbone of your petty kingdoms
>>47646603
Beri you are a hard CYOA maker we don't deserve you. I mean first you make a great CYOA with over 9 pages that was amazing, and less than a week later you go and make another CYOA. Bless you. You deserve a break, try to relax for a month or so. You deserve your rest.
>>47647559
Do you know anything about rich people food?
>>47647342
St. Flares is best school. Besides, druidism wouldn't make any sense anywhere else. When's the last time you saw a posh druid/snob hybrid?
>>47647391
Homelessness is pretty badass for adventurers. But you know that, and are just fishing for an excuse to shit on best school.
>>47647498
This guy gets it.
>>47647607
Lies.
>>47647412
Sure. Like, I already said this cyoa specifically is generous. Just saying, it's a good thing when there's some difficulties for the player to deal with. That's what made Royal Revival cool, and even in Branching Heart, where you're much weaker, you have proportionate challenges you can get involved with like keeping non-human roommates happy, slime-bullying... magical girl monsters and hostile demons if you're more combat-oriented.
>>47647585
It's opt-in and you know it's going to happen and when, and can prep for it. Not even in the same league as normal memory death stuff.
>>47647209
Continued
>>47646603
>>47645457
Twile
No deal, not being alone in my own head sounds maddening.
Ghost Writer
Real Form: Body swap is somewhat tempting to be honest, but ghost writer and real form combo is kind of obvious.
Not particularly crazy about those gifts in general. Chains is a safeguard, but if you're gonna pick chains, you could just pick anyone OTHER than Twile. Suppose I'd pick the rock and work out a good use for it later.
Rating 1/5- I couldn't take never being alone either, to be honest.
Harmony:
Is it cheating if I take her deal because I work from home anyways? Yeah, it probably is.
I'm a little curious on how the ring works with remote viewing there. If ring ups my processing power could I then use remote viewing with my own body simultaneously? But then I imagine ring lets me use the other bodies senses anyway, so if the range is unlimited I could get a weaker version of remote viewing in practicality.
Eh, I'll take processing boost anyways.
Oh, and Tutor. Those sync nicely.
Paychecks without the deal, but I'm guessing a potentially profitable hobby won't violate the deal, so I could take the deal, take the ring instead and be an indie game dev most of the day,
Rating 5/5: Mainly because taking Harmony and Dream home together is fucking cheating if you just want a comfy NEET life.
>>47647607
>Adventuring would get in the way of your heroing.
>>47647651
You're arguing a bronze knife isn't as sharp as a steel one.
>>47647555
Did you have anything in mind for where Andrea actually came from?
>>47647278
> St. Flares
>Bardic Arts x3
>Potion Mixing x3
> Illusion Magic x3
> Druidism
As for my pendejos' i pick
>Malyvin
>Eloise Avery
>Dax
>TRAP-CATCHER
And wait do we get one from our school for free? Because if not
>Tarkun Ironstout
and if i get a friend from school i pick
>Kaerulaus
as for events i'd go for
>Battle royal. Even though being Mr. Utility means i'd get knocked down a peg fairly quickly
>Escort
>Security
>Bodyguard
>>47647555
Is Lucky immortal?
>>47647629
Why would I care about villagers who lost their food and property? It's not like they have anything to pay me with.
>>47647468
>>47647488
lol awesome post times. made my day
>>47647662
Seriously, how would you know about any crises you have to respond to when lost in the wild.
Adventurers can only occasionally be heroes, when the opportunity presents itself in-between the adventuring.
That's why st. Flares is the worst school.
>>47647699
Not Ej Har is that edgy.
>>47647617
Yeah, but don't want you a super robo that can respond to your emotional state and piece itself back together?
>>47647629
Oh yes, I'm definitely a ponce. You're completely right. Would you mind going back to your camp (mudhut) now? I'm about to have dinner with the Duke. Seems he wants to reward me for keeping his city safe. I stopped like 3 robberies this month. Hahaha.
>>47647633
Isn't that what Chefs are for?
>>47647712
You stop the crisis before it happens, Dragon attacking city? Well you fight it in its lair before it leaves. You just want to reactive,
>>47647708
autism: the post
>>47647663
Yes, in that softball is softer than hardball while still being a ball.Though bronze can take an edge as well as steel, just so you know
>>47647739
>Isn't that what Chefs are for?
Missing my point. Rich people are the ones that eat nasty exotic organs and disgusting dishes like that.
>>47647759
The problem is that both cut just as deep, just because one does it better doesn't mean getting stabbed isn't as harsh.
>>47647753
Yes, I'm totally autistic. How did you know?
>>47647278
Ej Har
>Classes
Knowledge(Magic Theory) * 3
Arcane Magic * 3
Potion Mixing * 3
Blood magic * 1
>Friends:
Cassiopeia
Bathsheba
Nashwa
Dax
>Events:
Year 1:
Battle Royal (1v1), Escort
Year 2:
Party Planner
Year 3:
Bodyguard
Year 4:
Fundraising, Basilisk Den
Year 5:
Basilisk Den, Blind Date
Name:
Khalid "Crystal Aurora" Eral, they both mean the same thing in different languages funnily enough.
Originally Eral had planned to take summoning as an elective; however this would have cut into his time to study the Pure element, the manifestations of the Purity within reality, and indulge his penchant for alchemy. There was some distress by this until he stumbled upon a girl talking to Pure beings. It was then decided that he would devote his time to studying the Purity, the creatures and the girl. All to achieve the ultimate goal: the ability to move between the Pure lands and those Tainted. To see and be part of the world as it is truly.
>>47647699
If you think this, you are no true hero
>>47647712
With Survival you are usually never lost in the woods, with Druidism you can tell when there is an evil imbalance in the world, Dungeoneering gives you the skills to hunt down evil where it dwells, Monster Hunting let's you lay the dark ones low with utmost efficiency, and all the previous can be used to provide relief and aid to the people who have suffered the most directly from the crisis or, better yet, deal with the problem before the crisis occurs.
The villages, farms, and those who you dismiss as peasants and rustics can exist easily and rebuild happily without the support of your ivory cities, as they have since even before your foolish kingdoms. It is your vainglorious cities that relies on the peasants, and by extension the Folk and Field heroes who are actively doing their job to defend all men abroad
>>47647790
>implying "les mandibules d'araignée en sauce rouge" made by Phillipe are the same as your dungeon made atrocity
Humor is truly the peasantry's gift.
>>47647148
She can if we program her to :P
>>47647837
I'd like my character to be a companion.
>>47647616
I was just saying I'd try to persevere more, not that I'd ignore criticism.
>Really, I think all of us like you for who you are.
If that's sincere, it's the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me.
>>47647631
Thanks, but I can always just rest later.
>>47647655
With the ring, you could remote view 2 bodies or just one & still have a body of your own that can sense properly at the same time. It's interesting how body-deficiency and extra-bodies are on opposite ends of your spectrum.
>>47647676
She was manufactured in a super-science facility sort of place. An unrelated experiment blew the place up. Due to her robot durability, she alone lived.
>>47647690
Yes, Lucky is some kinda super cat. Immortal, luck-stealing powers, and even seems to understand speech.
>>47647342
I actually plan on buffing St Flares by combining survival and dungeoneering and adding a new class
>>47647865
Can Lucky protect me from dead spirits? If I went spelunking in Hell for treasures, could he serve as a bodyguard?
>>47647790
The people who eat that stuff are divided into two groups:
- people who can
- people who have to
>>47647888
So are exclusive classes mechanically the same as regular classes or are they unique paths you add ontop of the regular classes?
>>47647935
The same
>>47647892
... At the end of a day, he's just a cat. He can curse your enemies, but I can't slay your foes.
>>47647192
Then get a job you lazy piece of shit. Or if you care that much about being NEET pick the free house and welfare and turn yourself into a slime.
>>47647888
No matter what, I still can't combine druidism with necromancy. Why won't you let me become the master of Life and Death, Box? WHY WONT YOU?;-;
I'm on meds so I'm probably overreacting though.
>>47647555
Working on it. Post size limits and my own slow ass typing time. >>47647655
>>47647270
>Not tag-teaming your cute succubus pet with your ideal match
Get a load of this pleb. (Monogamy is overrated, anyways)
>>47647655
>>47645476
Omne
Take the deal, sounds like she could actually use the help.
Backpack
Teleportation
Gentle Touch (I'm a clumsy fuck so that'll keep me from wrecking shit while using teleport and backpack)
Divine Uniform- Shame to take it from her, but I kind of need it for sheer practicality if I'm gonna do the avatar thing. Because if my clothes don't transform with me when I change forms, that's a problem.
Rating 3/5: Being an assistant god(dess) might be interesting. Don't get most of the actual perks of godhood though. My own combination is handy for transporting things around earth in my normal life. (Load up some cars, hop on a plane, drop them off in another country for example. Ultimate smuggler)
But avatar will let you do some real meaningful stuff for the pocket planet people. Hey, do my posessions downsize, or stuff from her planet upsize with me when I use avatar? If so, I might bump that rating up one.
Pan
Take that deal! Dream home pairs perfectly! Get a home with a first level shop and an upstairs apartment in some market district of a nice town somewhere.
Working: Mainly for practicalities sake. giving free pastries will cause the shop to be swarmed and pull the rage of other shopkeepers. (Also, yes, I like money)
Metabolism: Live off cake, still be fit. Fuck yeah!
Earthen Cupcake, Militant Macaroons. I'm now a goddamn super-hero. If anyone robs our little bakery, they're solidly fucked. Maybe go full on bread batman if I feel like it? Otherwise comfy bakery life.
The pie is cool, but what faeries would I be getting along with. I see no faeries!
5/5:Milf-mode weight gain fetish fuel, hell yes
Also, comfy, ability to live off sweets and superhero powers. What's not to like here?
>>47647358
Future note. My eyesight sucks even with glasses and that body text on things like battle royale is way too hard to read at 100%. Please keep that in mind for your next cyoa.
>>47645496
You only have to dedicate one slot to Study for the entire 4 years. Not one for every year.
>>47647956
To be fair, Egyptians held that cats kept the dead in line and escorted unruly spirits back to the underworld, or something like that. It was kind of a joke, but now that I think about it, it might work. I also can't think of a better test subject, because I can count on him to be less likely to die than I am, and I don't believe in dying, so between us, we're invincible.
>>47647853
Ahh so this is what the nobility is like when they stop being warrior knights and just pansy aristocrats. Well I hope you like the goblin balls in your mouth. Are they really juicy and chewy? I sure hope your meal with the Duke is appetizing.
>>47647865
Wow, you have great work ethic.
>>47647865
Definitely sincere.
>>47647959
Maybe if he does that Clubs update, we'll get a Rotary/Exchange Club that allows you to replace a single class with one from a single year at another University?
>>47647534
It's funny I changed from Odesium for just that reason. Magical Refinement is just too useful... and the fuck princess is hot.
>>47647837
I actually was thinking of making a build a lot like that, but then I saw yours and decided to make >>47647445 instead. I think Knowledge, Potions, and Blood Magic are good choices for the darker sort of hero.
>>47647391
I think I'd capture a castle or something for a homebase pretty quick.
>>47647566
>description
?
>>47647534
>he wants to fuck a royal princess
Is this a subtle way of telling us you have a castration and torture fetish?
>>47647278
Alex
St.Flares
Druidism 3x, Unarmed combat 2x, physical training 2x, stealth, survival, ki attunement
I'm not sure I can actually do this with Druidism but I plan to enhance my body to be a high spec war machine with horns and bear hands and stuff like that.
Kit (best companion), Chandara (third best companion), Kengan, duxix, malavyn.
the second best companion is Inas for those interested in my opinion.
I plan on having Kengan teach me some more Ki attunement stuff and duxix and malavyn teach me tactics. As for Kit and Chandara, I'm going to seduce them. Obviously I'll also teach them whatever I know about druidism if they're interested, I don't need a monopoly on cool bear arms and leopard feet and spiked tails.
I participate in the great hunt every year. I'll also do escort, security and bodyguard on my fifth year.
>>47647961
>Do my possessions downsize
Nope, you can't viably take things to/from the planet. Her outfit is a notable exception, though, because it can transform, which includes shrinking.
Pan sure is popular. Poor Omne has no friends, though.
>>47648002
>I don't believe in dying.
But what about killing? Be die when they are killed.
>>47648007
>great work ethic
thanks!
>>47648020
You're too nice.
>>47647499
I did though. I also went for mastery...
>>47647270
It is not NTR if I marry them both, although Islam requires that I give equal sexual attention to all of my wives so this could keep me busy if I have to fuck both of them every day (and Islam forbids having sexual intercourse with more than one wife at once).
>>47647345
Why does thinking about Scal make me get a strange fluttery feeling in the pit of my stomach?
>>47647534
>>47648050
>Princess
>Not Valerie, Alyce or Crale
>Not Sorte
It's like y'all are complete faggots
>>47648122
I'm pretty sure that dynamite religion of yours doesn't particularly approve of human-succubus marriages.
>>47648122
>wants to avoid NTR
>joins the cuck religion
>>47647499
>not being a master Potion mixer
>not inventing a dick shrinking potion
>not throwing it at your enemies in the Battle Royale
Endless possiblities.
>>47648078
Well it depends, if your world isn't grimdark you may be able to get away with it if you love her and marry her. Also if you are a great hero she may be allowed to marry you like if you slay a dragon or dark god. And well if you are super strong you can just kill the king, and the entire royal army and declare yourself the new king and make the princess your wife.
>>47647278
>St. Flares
Nerd need not apply. No please, fuck off people who don't think adventuring and field trips and fucking monsters up is the tightest fucking shit should get the fuck away.I like the backstory for the name of Lunestier.
That's lovely, a hero willing to pay homage to their failure, and rise above.
Ej Har's backstory is cool,. to. Fuck morales, yeah.Uzuza gives me an idea for a cyoa similar to that one where you can buy Kitsune slaves
I love the classes. I want tofigurativelyrape magesin PE.
>Martial Combat x2 (2)
I ain't a fruit.
First aid is tempting, but I'm sure other things are nicer.
>Tactics (3)
God, it'll take a while to get through this (and I love it)
>Smithing (4)
If you can't fix your own armour then ytou're basically a gay homosexual.
>Elemental magic (Ice focus, followed by Air) (5)
I really fucking love air and ice magic.
>Traps (6)
We're going on field trips often, so this will come in handy
>Knowledge (7)
Both to bully nerds and steal their cuties, but also because it's useful to know languages for traveling.
>Teamwork (8)
Since I'll need a team
>Physical training (9)
Nerds, get out.
I'd have loved Maneuvers, too. Stealth is for bitches.All the spelling mistakes makes me happy. Makes me feel not-bad about muy bieng dirunk.Box Wine, I really needed this, thank you. Genuinely.
My day turned out so much worse than expected. My day, my week, probably more has been ruined thanks to something fucking stupid.
I really, really needed this.That, and this whiskey I'm drinking. I know, I know, I need to stop. But this is an exceptional occassion, and I'm drinking less (ONLY 2 deciliters, but I'm reeeally considering more)yeah, i'm drinking more. I need it.than I had planned, so, bully me.
>>47648122
How do you have sex with more than one wife at once? Do you have two dicks or what?
>>47648122
The anti-NTRfags are unlikely to see a religious loophole as a reason they should shut their gobs, lol.
Honestly, >>47648160 brings up a good point, if unintentionally. The whole situation involves accepting relations with succubi and generally considering them people to some degree. Caring if peopleincorrectlythink it's NTR is pretty meaningless.
>>47646743
a fair point. I like to apply my magic more to myself than to external forces, bot maybe turning my robes into some sort of mech suit might be an idea.
Alternatively, grow the wood out from beneath my skin and assume some sort of arcane focus battle-mode.
>>47648204
I wannawrestle then cuddlethat Nidoqueen
>>47647278
Oi, if you're the creator, I'm still hoping I can get an answer out of you for my question.
Eloise is stated to have healing magic outside of First Aid, but does not seem religious, so what courses did she take to get that magic, and do we have access to those courses?
>>47648122
> Islam
> Mainstream Islam
Oh it's fun being a minor sect. Enjoy your pretenders and decadence Kafir.
>>47647947
Box Wine.
You should really define the whole exclusive thing better by rewording that whole section. You also should reword how picking events/quests works as many people are confused by it.
For the classes thing just drop exclusive and say something like "you have 9 courses you may choose from the general list and your school's curriculum list. Then just rename the schools list to School Specific curriculum or classes.
If you still want the word Exclusive then perhaps you can add in an exclusive choice that lets us become master of 1 field for a single pick showing that we're exclusively good at it. Should promote a bit more build diversity with having to spend 3 class points to "master" something.
>>47648204
>Chad is in Hero school too
This was supposed to be a wish fullfilment!!! REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE !!!
>>47648216
let me enlighten you with the best fatwa I have ever read.
>If a man cuts his penis into half and enters half of it into one of his wives and the other half into another one of his wives, Ghusl will become Wajib on him, but not on his two wives. If he enters half of it into her wife's vagina and half of it into her anus, Ghusl will become Wajib on both of them.
>Source: Hawashi Tohfatul Muhtaj Bi Sharh Al-Minhaaj. Vol. 1, Pg. # 260.
Disclaimer: I don't read arabic nor do I actually care enough about islam to look up whether this fatwa is real.
>>47648274
See >>47645875.
>>47646603
>>47647961
>>47645491
Alice
If taking her deal lets me in on that exclusive tech of her race, maybe. ... Maybe.
World Tour
I'd rather have two gadgets than use the DNA splicer.
I'd take other if it wasn't limited to just copying HER traits. I guess thermal vision.
I want the holo comp WITH the bass-suit but if it's just one the comp sounds much more practical. The holo-interface notwithstanding, I'm assuming the processing and rendering capabilities are just so much better than anything we've got so I could do some super-computer stuff with a watch-sized device.
Rating 3/5- I mean, she's locked of from most of her own benefits that come with being a super-advanced alien race thanks to regulations. I'm almost worried about what other kinds of red-tape government BS she might be caught up in. So she's really like a Yuki-onna I could have massive gaming sessions with, which is still pretty cool. ... pun not intended.
Andrea:
Inferiority matrix sounds... mean. I don't think I could bring myself to do that.
Artist. I mentioned game dev before on the Harmony build. This is even better for that since she could make all the assets! (Rather than harmony teaching me how to 3d model, assuming she can)
Reproduction- It's what she wants after all.
Cyborg Nanobots. Nano-machines, son.
Rating 5/5. Kind of bumped up just because her perks actually fit me really well. Probably the same for any other computer nerd on this thread, which is probably more of us than not. Between the Nanobots and her artist output, my productivity would be through the roof and I create some really cool shit. And use it to buy back the power armor and repair center later!
>>47645539
You're usually pretty good at fixing your own text errors beri, but fei la's library description has had
>we have a spell spells
for a couple updates now.
Godspeed in your quest, you waifu generating madman
>>47648231
To be fair demons are just fallen angels. Well in Islam angels don't have free will so they can't fall, in Islam Lucifer is a genie, one who doesn't accept God's decree that humans are the best. I don't think Islam has anything like Succubus sex demons. So Succubi would basically be slutty genies. Thats not that bad.
>>47648304
You can just imagine the guy who issued this actually having to deal with it at some point.
>>47647947
Box Wine, could you answer my question here >>47648274?
>>47647842
Okay, you can roleplay as a self-important adventurer and you're pretty good at it.
I'm just saying, that character is ignorant and wrong.
>>47647748
Yeah, but only if you happen to come across it, that's the problem, that and barely having the equipment necessary.
>>47648041
Yea I'm sketching out that page now.
>>47648148
Yo bitch. I took Valerie too. Remember don't be gay sparky, don't be gay.
>>47648304
What? Really? I don't know what Ghusl or Wajib is. But someone cutting their penis in half ick.
>>47648285
People are just retards, really.
>>47648057
>I think Knowledge, Potions, and Blood Magic
Could also replace potions with two levels in assassination and one in illusion/stealth. Tbh I wasn't really going for a 'dark' hero, just one that would, if need be, operate outside the conventions of other schools. Odesium is probably the best idea in general but considering Eral wouldn't stop at things like extreme body-mods, even on humans, it's probably a no-go. He's from a kingdom where mages, and those with any magical power, have all the authority in society. Race, gender, sexuality, none of that matters. If you can honestly tick the magic-user[] box, then you're automatically elevated in society. If you can't...--slavery is wrong in all cases, but...---you're a servant for the rest of your life. A well-treated servant, yes, but a servant all the same. All you get to choose is who you serve. Mothers must serve their children, even toddlers, if they don't have magic but their children do.
>>47648204
drunkanon, you're drinking for at least three days straight, you should stop
>>47648308
Yeah, Alice's fancy computer thing is head-and-shoulders above Earth's best computers.
Andrea's probably around that good, actually. It takes a lot to be that good of a mockery of life.
>>47648330
Oh, I never noticed that. Thanks for pointing it out. I'll fix it for the next one.
