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>>47397293
To the anon asking about fonts in the last thread, this is an excellent study in what not to do.
>>47397356
Ya the descriptive stuff for the items and everything after that is fine, just all the switching and half the fonts for the races are painful.
>>47397293
>"The next person who starts their sentence with a preposition gets flamed, thrice"
Since when has starting a sentence with a preposition been a problem? Ending a sentence with a preposition is what English teachers bitch about.
>>47397466
I'll end you with a presposition, asshole.
>>47397607
I'll propose to your asshole.
>>47397293
hey i know this is a bit off topic but does anyone know what the site is called with that rng dungeon crawler that runs a dungeon with one image with a bunch of numbers and parts of a dungeon, not sure where I should have posted this
>>47397734
Dungeon robber.
>>47397764
ty friend
I'm super depressed that I've been super sick the weekend and could barley get any work done on my OC. I had planned to have it finished by tomorrow. :(
>>47397819
Tomorrow's a real long day, anon! It's not like you 'job' is more important than working on your CYOA!
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>>47397819
Look on the plus side, I spent all weekend working, and now I can finally begin working on my stuff. You can do it m8.
>>47397819
Don't work tomorrow anon, it's Victoria day. God save the queen!
Update on CYOCYOA: I thought it would be done by today, but I was wrong. Even without the neat formatting stuff that I'm skipping doing, it's a handful. 100% coming out tomorrow, however.
>>47398049
hype
>>47398049
>>47397819
One important lesson for you two to learn: don't bother with deadlines. Just get it done when you get it done.
That way the hype doesn't kill interest if no product arrives.
>>47398280
You're right, but I'm usually pretty accurate with my estimates. Oh well.
WHEN'S CHINPO-SAMAS KEK FESTIVAL CYOA???
>>47398280
>>47398318
There's really no reason to try to generate interest for a CYOA anyway, unless you want some motivation to keep working on it.
>>47398347
In your mind, ready to be unleashed upon Photoshop to post online.
Whenever you're ready, senpai.
>tfw no Beach War cyoa with waifus, bros, and lolis.
>tfw no talented enough to make this cyoa.
>>47397885
>the Government is the only faction not out to just fuck the world's shit up
Fuck, alright. Let's do this.
>Power Origin
Serum.
>Augments
Strength
Speed
Endurance
Durability
Immortality
Stimpack
Burst
Ranged Combat
Senses
Healing
>Unstable Augments
Devourer
Precognition
Landmines
>Employer
Gubmint
>Perks
Weapon (Something ranged)
Loyal
Mentor
Not rolling with the government out of any fondness, but they seem to be the least hellbent on murderraping everything in arm's reach. The weaker augments in general suck, so devourer is going to help me play catch up. Eating the fallen is nasty and all, but whatever it takes I guess.
Basic game plan is to kite, kite, kite. Prepare battlefields beforehand, maintain distance, plant mines, bait less patient augments into bad positions and use the weapon to finish them off. Hopefully my mentor is cool enough of a dude to help me through the first couple of fights before I've built up enough strength and durability with devourer to go toe to toe, and the benefits of loyal on all of the government's forces seems insanely good.
If I had to guess, I would say that I'm completely fucked.
>>47398472
It sounds like you just want anime pictures of people at the beachnot that I don't want the same thing.
>>47397293
>go to CYOA thread to see what's new
>link over to old one to see what I missed
>Angel posting vacaroos of herself screaming and pics of her cutting herself
I-I just wanted have some simple escapism guys.
>>47398547
Nah man. I just want a non-nonsensical high fantasy adventure at the beach cyoa.
Seige giant sand castles using volleyballs. Use limbo sticks as barricades. Kill the army of crabs that come on to the beach and giant squids. Etc. Eat watermelon slices during a time of rest, don't get captured by the enemy and buried in the sand.
>>47397293
>>47398614
>You
>>47392917
I'll use a collar. My preference would be nothing, to work purely from my own power, but it's just too limiting. The others are the same as far as I care, so I might as well use the strongest.
The most important power is Classic. It's a classic for a reason.
Stockholm Syndrome because I don't want my slaves to be unhappy. At least, not after that initial period of playing with her, before the stockholm syndrome kicks in.
Love potion for the same reason, and also because I kind of want that for myself.
Triggers because changing someone to act and live her life differently is way hotter than just being obeyed.
Hypnosis, purely because of the "new slaves" thing.
Orgasm is kind of tempting because of the dual functionality and the notion of using it on people who aren't already slaves, but ultimately I doubt it would be all that useful.
Instead, Words, because apparently there are super heroines I have to hide from.
I'm taking all the slaves I qualify for. Lacking Maid means that I miss out on Kirrie, which is a shame, but I don't want my girls wearing uniforms. I do get Lilly, Jill, Cecily. I'll try to hook Lilly and Jill up with jobs, to support their upkeep and keep them busy during the day, but Lilly is mostly to play with and Jill is to be a classic waifu. Cecily is more of a daughteru age but I can have fun with punishing her too.
Suggestions: Something that makes it so that your slaves can never lie to you, and something to make them get along well with each other. Hypnosis and Classic should stack together to let you give subconscious commands.
>>47397293
Posting some stuff to keep thee seat warm for any OCs.
T-there will be OC r-right guys?
Right?
>>47398716
We got Kingdom Diplomacy coming. Italics maybe got something??? Some anon is working on CyoaCyoa.
We got OC coming.
>>47398473
Sure the government wants to murderrape everyone, they just don't need augs like you to do it. They already have the power they need for that, all they need is to prevent others from taking it from htem.
>>47398764
He's releasing a new version?
>>47398716
I'm trying to write waifus for a lewd CYOA and it's haaaaard.
Can someone post the pokémon CYOA?
>>47398795
Who do you have already?
Question for the people making cyoas: how do you plan the presentation of the cyoa and what program do you use?
Holy shit I finally finished the first 20 neutral companions for the Hero Academy cyoa. I was hoping to finish the whole thing by tomorrow but god damn it I spent all of Friday night in the emergency room because my idiot friend some how got a fucking concussion mowing his lawn and spent all of today and yesterday sick as shit. But through the powers of modern medicine I manged to type a lot of some what coherent sentences. And god damn it I just wanted to vent I'll shut up and go back to my writers cave.
Only thing left is the 20 school specific companions, cross school events (think missions), complications, and school clubs. Most of which has already been done and only needs to be written.
As moot as my witness I will finish this by the end of the month!
>>47398804
Which one? We got 3; Pokemon Personified, Pokemon Trainer, and the Pokemon were actually cute girls the entire time.
>>47398863
Pretty sure the one I want is the last one.
>>47398833
I use photoshop and tend to copy layouts I like, I usually start by outlining stuff with rectangles and then work from there.
Also those double dubs
>>47398816
I have a farmgirl, a tomboyish cop, a shy girl, and a slut written out. Gonna also have a girl who likes cooking, a clutz, maybe a mechanic, and probably some more.
>>47398937
>farmgirl
Please, please be the writefag from that one thread talking about creamy thighs.
>>47398937
if you want instant success add a yandere and the option to become a girl. That's like a formula for a successful cyoa here.
>>47398937
And coming up with them is the easy part. It's the writing them up that's hard. And to make them all about the same length. The Kaifus are the only waifus I've ever written, and I feel like I didn't do a great job with them.
>>47398976
>this is not self-serving advice at all
>>47398840
Looking forward to it Box. You can do it!
>>47398970
Nope, sorry.
>>47398976
Persona would like to talk with you. Their yandere might be defective.
What is the key to making a decent to good companion cyoa?
>>47398983
Yandere a little bit but not so much the being a girl, fuck that menstruation bullshit.
>>47399044
It's nice when Be the Girl options include magic/altered physiology/tech to obviate the big disadvantages to allow the slut character insert to work smoothly.
>>47399031
Set up a framing setting/situation from which to draw criteria for choosing a companion.
>>47398573
How did that basket of issues end up here in the first place?
>>47398937
>tomboyish cop
Can we have a delinquent too?
>>47398840
>my idiot friend some how got a fucking concussion mowing his lawn and spent all of today and yesterday sick as shit. But through the powers of modern medicine I manged to type a lot of some what coherent sentences.
Plot twist: you got concussed so hard that you thought you were your friend?
>>47399144
Gee anon, what could possibly attract a basket case to escapism?
>>47398788
He says he's almost done with Girls in Military, plus he has more waifu cyoas coming down the pipe.
I think he finished his finals or something.
>>47399202
Well, good times are coming.
>>47399031
I don't know if it's for everyone, but I liked that one with the knights where each companion had a quest and among your companions you would pick one of their quests that would upgrade that companion and have big impacts on the world. (I think there was a fantasy version and a sci-fi version).
Also, unrelated, there was another knights quest with art by shwig (basically, it was some art he made compiled into one image). The nice art was probably the most alluring part, but I also liked how unique each companion felt from each other.
tl;dr Having some kind of quest attached to a companion is a nice way to expand their character (it doesn't even have to be a long one, as long as it encapsulates their goals), and , within your own CYOA, each companion should feel different and special.
>>47398473
That pic has had me laughing for far too long.
>>47399267
Why
>>47399291
Not that anon, but that anime face looks shopped on. It doesn't match the rest of the art at all.
>>47399076
>>47399247
Thanks, Anons. I will put this advice to good use.
>>47398573
Why are you resurrecting that shit? Leave old shit in old threads.
>>47399291
The gun doesn't make any sense.
>>47399321
harmonyfags go home
>>47399593
This is the superior reason.
>>47399340
>>47399031
For the love of god, make the companions likable on some level.
>>47399340
Make the lore of the companions affect your choices somehow. easy way to make them unique
>>47399577
Hey, it's not everyday you see someone cut themselves over CYOA drama.And apparently her name's Lisa.
>>47399910
>thinking it's unironically real
>>47398347
What is this a reference to?
>>47399015
Persona's yandere yanded too hard. People don't like the idea of being bled out for hair dye and her personality to you is bitchy instead of sweet and loving.
>>47399922
>tfw google images didn't turn up matches
>>47399031
>>47399340
Make them appealing people with their own interesting but not edgy backstories and talk about how they get along with you, people like that.
>>47399990
>Those Horizontal cuts
Pff
>>47399990
Down the road, not across the tracks. Fucking casuals.
>>47398573
>>47399990
was it confirmed angel? As annoying as she is I wouldn't have imagined her posting pictures of self harm like that
>>47400010
magic, mystery, etc.
>>47400087
Just stop it. This shit is so fucking boring already.
I hate it when the kids come out for the weekend.
>>47400010
>Potato pancakes
That photograph is deeply offensive. Those are most certainly hash browns.
>>47398879
>>47398863
Well I would like Personified.
>>47399183
I don't know,I don't like looking in the mirror so I can't really say.
>>47400130
>I'm not having fun so everyone is wrong
please go away, that guy
>>47400291
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0Bwl-aJm3wG4nTkNBbnFPYm9YeFU&usp=sharing&tid=0Bwl-aJm3wG4nN2w1TGJCSVlQZ2M
>>47400291
It's 16 pages and it draws people to bitch about how it's not in a PDF.
You can find it in the first Google Drive in the Pastebin link.
>>47400337
I just feel like it's pretty CYOA-unrelated at this point. Making out like I want to censor you or something is pretty extreme.
Besides, you're not wrong, you can do what you want at this point. But some people actually care when they're boring someone. This isn't a judgement on you, either, so don't bother writing a snappy response.
>>47399990
Should just go play soccer if she's gonna be a pussy and pretend to be injured.
>>47400393
If the fact that Angel doesn't even post here anymore doesn't stop those shitposters, the fact that nobody appreciates their shit won't stop them from slinging around like a retarded monkey.
>>47400337
Dude. This is a /tg/ thread. More specifically a CYOA thread. I'm honestly surprised more people aren't complaining considering the complete irrelevance.
>>47397293
Shit waifus = shit CYOA
There seems to only be fucking gay options
>>47400430
I don't even care about ragging on a long-gone Angel, honestly. But babby's fist "haha! I'm posting insincerely! with memepics" probably doesn't belong in this thread.
I mean, if you're going to play around with very unrelated stuff, be funny, or sexy, or something. Anything.
>>47400393
>>47400430
>>47400337
mate, I agree with you guys that it's getting pretty irrelevant here, but what else is there to do while waiting for cyoa's? Anyway, all I asked was if it was Angel being a shit here again, not start up some NTR argument
>>47400437
>/tg/ thread
>ever staying relevant
I'm surprised we even still have CYOA's happening at all
>>47400341
>>47400356
Fuck's sake, no wonder people bitch about this shit.
>>47400559
People like to bitch. It serves a vital purpose.
>47396528
>tfw Angel wants to study the same thing I am
I don't want this
>>47400341
>>47400356
>tfw Italics will one day just make another version that will end up 32 pages long.
I don't think I'm ready.
>>47400604
>not 2^16
>>47397734
Is that pic Lisa Cuts 3?
>>47398716
Well, whether there will be OC all depends on whether or not you start taking shit seriously and finish yours or not.
Highlander don't you fucking disappear. I need that Travelled update man. You're fucking killing me here.
>>47400543
>but what else is there to do while waiting for cyoa's?
Why does it have to be in this thread, though? As someone else said, you probably received some blowback aimed at whoever thought posting false-flag kiddie feminism followed by 3dpg teen wristcutting would be super entertaining.
>>47400692
Ssshhh. Highlander is in a better place now. Leave him be.
>>47400692
Did they say that an update would be soon?
>>47400726
Considering people voted for "Put as much lore in as you can" in the last poll, I don't expect to see an update for the rest of the month at least.
>>47400821
Too bad. I mean lore's always fun, but I liked the idea of him addin' in little stuff and showing us kinda regularly.
Box Wine. What are the cyoas that you've made. I only remember 2. The dere goddess and hero school ones.
>>47398795
>I'm trying to write waifus for a lewd CYOA and it's haaaaard.
Writing imaginary girlfriends for anon to masturbate over is by and far the easiest thing about making a cyoa.
I think I might have made one in an hour, spellchecking and graphics included. I did already have the images and a basic idea of what to write, though.
>>47400944
I've made others (that were complete and utter shit and made people's eyes bleed) under a different name along with the occasional anonymous shitposting cyoa but dere goddess and Hero academy is the only stuff I've done under this name.
>>47400983
Could you post them, please?
>>47400583
I'm pretty sure angel already has job in pharmacy science stuff
>>47400983
>>47401000
Oh sounds interesting. Would like to see the ones you consider eyesores or were under a different name.
BTW Has Kit said what he's currently working on? What about Beri?
>>47401000
The shitpost ones? Not right now cause I'm on mobile but I'll try to dig through my computer to find them tomorrow. The other stuff I've purged from my PC in shame. If you want to try looking through the archives you can. The two that got the most responses was one about toothpaste that gave you kinda shitty superpowers and a one about powers of dance. Hell I'm not even sure if anyone remembers them.
>>47401024
God like I don't think you understand how complete and utter shit they were. I know for fact at least one of them is in the archive maybe I'll grab it and post it when I finish up Hero Academy so you can all point and laugh at me.
>>47400665
Did someone take a piss on your coffee or something?
>>47401024
Kit has been MIA for a while now (or at least I think he has he only name drops when posting OC) and Beri just fInished back to back multi page cyoas so I wouldn't be surprised if he's taking a break.
>>47401148
I don't think beri ever says in advance what he's doing, except occasionally that he's doing a gallery.
>>47401071
Heh it would be interesting to see how much you've improved. Please do post when you're done with Hero Academy!
>>47401148
Oh you're right, Beri did post a recent 9 page one. Yeah I am surprised kit hasn't said anything lately.
>>47401148
>Kit has been MIA for a while now (or at least I think he has he only name drops when posting OC)
I think Kit has stopped nameposting entirely. Be Evil, for one, was posted sans name.
So what happened to Crown Quest?
I remember the shitstorm and then no one ever posted it again.
>>47401852
I don't know what you're asking about, anon. I liked the CYOA, but it's not like anything came of the shitstorm besides mudslinging. The author made a new CYOA and it was fine.
How would anons feel about aCorruption of Champions: Goblin RaidersCYOA?
>>47401852
>>47401949
>>47401954
>>47401963
>>47401919
I mean I didn't see it reposted much.
Even the shitty augments one he made got reposted.
>>47401972
>>47401983
>>47400337
>I should be free to shitpost as much completely irrelevant bullshit as I want because it's fun for me :^)
>>47401991
>>47401941
You'll get the one guy who gets really upset when that game is mentioned riled up again. He's been quiet lately.
>>47397819
Dont worry buddy, I started my cyoa nearly an entire year ago and am still sitting at about 90% completion
>>47401052
Searched the archives and can't find a toothpaste or dance one. Please repost them when you can.
>>47402019
Well there goes my idea.
At least I expect he doesn't spam porn and cynicism.
>>47401852
Oh you mean OrdionAnon.
I kek'd as that carried on for what two threads?
i need more rpg cyoas, somebody make a dump please
>>47402000
>asking a question during a discussion that was already happening is shitposting
I'm not that anon and agree we shouldn't be giving attention unrelated topics, but come on he seems to be getting a lot more flak than he deserves.
>>47402135
>buh buh I didn't start it ;_;
If you're shitposting you're shitposting, it doesn't matter if someone else was doing it first.
>>47402179
Shouldn't you stop as well then senpai? You're shitposting at this point too.
>>47402219
No. You stop first :^)
>>47402231
But I'm a third guy, so I just started ;^)
>>47402247
Me too :^)
>>47401941
A large pink egg, a couple of bottles of purified succubus milk, and a massive crate of whisker fruit, please.
>>47401941
Would you be goblin doing raiding or raiding goblins? I would rather have stupid sexy goblins in other setting than CoC furry wonderland.
>>47402337
>Bondage-powered magic
Well, we hexer now
>>47402272
whisker fruit is full-furry, not just catgirl. Not judging but you know how that is.
I'd go fox jewel myself.
>>47402397
>>47402405
>>47402337
I hope the author gets the update (w/ typo fixes, and hopefully clarifications such as what exactly counts as an act) done soon.
>>47402397
>>47402405
>>47402412
>not posting the final page
>>47402469
Yeah I didn't have that for some reason
But who would even need it?
>>47402518
>Choosing powers over waifus
>>47402518
A quick look at the archives shows that three people picked a companion, so it's not completely unnecessary.
>>47402563
>choosing a waifu over becoming a qt foxgirl
And you'll still meet all the potential waifus at the birthday party.
>>47402469
Actually, let's post the boxes as well.
>>47401011
She said she wanted to go into biomed
>>47396528
>>47398573
Why? Did she finally see this?
>>47402397
Depends how much you eat. You stop soon enough, you're a cute catgirl. Overdo it and you get full furry, though. I wanted a large supply because you can't count on it to deliver quickly. Too often you just get slimmer, faster, something like that, not any actual progress in transformation.
OK, fine, add to my lunch order a black egg and a big pot of scholar's tea. The first to clear up any excess fur I might gain (while hopefully retaining the flexibility perk) and the second to clear up the inevitable catgirl ditziness.
>>47402518
>>47402563
Are you fucking serious?
Why even post part of a CYOA if you're not going to post the whole thing? It's not up to you regulate people's builds like that, shit.
>>47403071
>>47398573
It's almost certainly not her. It's probably just some idiot who decided be edgy by posting an image of cut and the idiots ITT decided to ID it as AA despite no evidence.
>>47402703
>>47402703
There are hundreds of anons here. Why assume it's her? You have no evidence at all that that's her; keep in mind that neither your feelings nor desires count as proof.
>>47402624
Is it wrong I would get off on her doing that to me?
>>47403344
I didn't even realize i was missing it when I posted. The thing says 3 pages, I posted 3 pages.
>>47403402
My rage is mostly aimed at the other guy I quoted. You're still very in the wrong though, don't mess.
>>47402405
Don't touch the freakin' tail!
Hey everyone, I've made some improvements on my OC of yesterday. Hope you can give me some feedback so I can keep improving my cyoa!
v0.3
+ reduced costs on unpopular options
+ added a lot new Companions
+ small changes to Support Squad
+ a few layout changes
+ fixed some typos
>>47403438
Shit, how do I put that in spoilers?
>>47403450
Control+s, buddy
>>47403438
The first box is cute, the second box is 2edgy, and the third box actually makes it pretty okay again.
>>47403450ctrl+s
>>47402397
Be a Kitsune
>>47402405
Female 7
>>47402412
Cunning
Absolute Shapeshifting
Illusions
>>47403450
[spoiler(without these parenthesis)] text [/spoiler]
>>47403472
>>47403475
CTRL + S only brings up the save as...window.
>>47403558
Well, it's not supposed to. If you've got the reply window thing up, using control+s is supposed to plop a pair of spoiler tags down, ready to use.
I have seen many people coached through using spoiler tags, and I haven't seen any of them have this issue.
>>47403384
Context, nigger. Read the cited post and those from last thread.
>>47403472
>>47403475
I'm using tablet.
>>47403558Thanks, buddy.
>>47403444
Is Unaging still expensive?
If yes, thank you for not bending over backwards for an autist.
I won't read it until you're done, though. I don't much care for half finished projects
>>47403693
It's still as I had originally intended it. A luxury, high-cost option that doesn't offer any immediate advantage
I'm not going to add much more material anytime soon though, it's big enough as it is
>>47400692
He'll come back later. Let the man who's been awake for 3 weeks get some sleep.
>>47403730
Thank you. His autist tears make me smile - especially when he says he'll disregard the CYOA and add his own rules.
Still not reading it until you say you're fully done.
>>47403656
It was an assumption even then. They were all just wishing it.
>>47398863
>Pokemon Trainer,
What exactly is that? The one that started JumpChain?
>>47403905
No. It was a cyoa you pick some region, pokemon, rival, and your story. Not related to Jump crap.
>>47398863
ALL OF THEM!
>>47402337
This is really good but - no gender-swapping spell or option? Why? That kind of kills it for me...
>>47404021
>what is Sculptor of Man
>>47398716
So what exactly is the hidden lore?
>>47404021
In addition to >>47404158, there's Circe and her shapeshifting magic.
>>47404216
>>47404158
sculptor is only as good as surgery, so it's completely unacceptable.
Circe might work. She seems to be into shapeshifting into animals and having you fuck her as them in public, so merely changing sex should be easy enough.
>>47403798
You're still being far more annoying to read than anyone from the last thread.
>>47404201
It's a long list with paradoxes, connections and references.
>>47402636
Such a CUTE
>>47404249
>sculptor is only as good as surgery
This may or may not actually be the case. Here's what the author said regarding the differences between Circe's shapeshifting and Sculptor of Man:
>>47382957
>I guess the difference would be Shapeshifting being limited to you but allowing non-human forms, while Sculptor is basically a license to body-horror people.
The author later sais this when asked why Sculptor is likened to surgery:
>>47383375
>Gotta establish a frame of reference for alteration complexity somehow, and it was the best I had.
Considering all this, it seems like Sculptor is simply limited to human forms (or forms recognizable as having once been human, depending on how far the "body-horror" thing goes), so functional gender change should be something you could do with it.
Here's to hoping the update (that I hope the author is making) will clear up all these confusions.
>>47400692
I'm here, just filling out medical forms and working on both the text version of the cyoa and the next set of Ranks, which has everyone I want chosen, and now I just need to format everyone in. But while I'm here I might as well give you all an update on things for the 1.15 of the next text version.
> 8 New Origins, including the two dropped by anon
> 20 New Traits
> 12 New Armour Options
> 12 New Weapon Options
> 40 New Items
> 18 New Detriments
> 12 New Covenants
> 14 New Hubworlds, including two reader submitted ones
> An a fuck load of Lore
Needless to say it's been hectic, but we're getting there.
>>47400821
>>47400896
The Lore will come eventually, but I've also been paused by work and clan troubles.
>>47403761
It's closer to seven years now, but maybe one day.
>>47404489
How big is Traveller going to be?
>>47404489
Lordy, that's a lot of new shit.
>>47404519
>transformed into Spawn
That might actually be worth drinking shitty knock-off Dew. Spawn is crazy OP.
>>47404519
We've exited 'big' and entered 'huge quest' territory.
>>47404568
Aye, aye.
>>47404519
Ordinary Mountain Dew. Gotta save all the souls.
>>47402337
>Power Source
Sex, Submission, Exhibitionism
>Spells
Feather-Touch
Charisma
Shroud of Lust
>Coven
Yaga
Circe
Get Circe to teach me Shapeshifting magic because that's what I really want more than any of the rest. Then we can let Yaga keep both of us... topped off.
>>47404519
>no Pitch Black Dew
>>47404868
>no dorito flavored mountain dew.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d7hZfoqsskM
>>47404489
So what's the Rank Edition name this time?
>>47404883
The thumbnail is almost enough to make me hurl.
>>47404911
Given the weight of the next edition?
> God has come to reap the sinners. ed.
>>47404489
That's sounds awesome!
>>47404911
>We don't need eyes where we're going. Edition
Rolled 1 (1d20)
>>47398788
Rolling for kingdom
Rolled 13 (1d20)
>>47398788
>rolling for kingdom
>>47404868
This might be off topic, but how does Pitch Black Dew taste? I ask for slightly complicated reasons.
>>47398788
>>47398788
>Power:
Combat: 3 (3)
Knowledge: 3 (2)
Resources: 3 (3)
Treasury: 4+2 (6)
Property: 2(2)
>Benefits:
Sorcery
Establishment
Diplomacy
Warrior
Spy (Ecclesia)
Rewards:
Tuskan Legendary Beast
Aurendalian Grand Ship
Arcanian Magecraft
Arcanian Academics
Mystian Personal Assistant
>My people were smugglers, a crumbling drydock on a remote island my only inheritance. Signing on to a Mystian mercenary company at a young age, I might easily have become just another body at a wall, but I revealed a talent for sorcery early on, and was taken under the wing of the Batallion's warmage.
>It's a profitable line of work, and I've done well for myself. That both the Mystian shadowspeaker and the Arcanian headmasters are paying well for information on the Eclestian ice queen is an excellent opportunity, and the court's interest in my storm crow - previously thought to be untameable - has provided me an in. How much I learn before I must make my exit remains to be seen.
>>47405068
Everything, take the Luck boon. A new life with things noticeably going right for me from now on? Sounds like a good deal. Especially if it applies when I'm being sent to my new body as well. Come on, sexy college student.
>>47405068
Like Fanta Grape. It really isn't anything big.
>>47405158
Ah, Thanks.
>>47399593
as the anon who posted that image, I was just pulling something out of my anime girls with guns folder
upon further inspection, what the fuck IS that gun
>>47404489
Anon submitted 4 didn't he?
>>47403444
Nyla is still basically a must-have because of her utility skills. Sarah is only useful for a distraction, but causes problems, Leia is useful if you plan on taking a delicate approach but can't do anything if you are that big of a noise-maker. Nyla, however, can give tips and get you into anywhere through direct rip and tear methods on hacking. If you make yourself a murder machine and get her so that you can open anything or take any information that you would otherwise be too dumb to understand, you've got a highly secure build. She's basically your Otacon option with no real substitutes.
Ideally you'd want to have 3 companion slots with 4 categories.
>Team Leader
You could build for this role by buying yourself the expertise, or have one take care of this for you. Either in the field or at command This is where Timothy and Leia come in, just a slight rework on the description to give them the same expertise but alter how in-touch they are with you would be good.
>Support Team
This is where you have your secondary options. Like the dog, support squad, Scrap, Quickshot, and Juggernaut.
>Intel
This should be a group of Otacon options, you really only have Nyla for this. It would be nice for a few others here.
>Field Agent
This is the where you get your murder machines and all that. The high power agents that get your mission done, even if you've got to take care of a few skirting details. Viper, Ghost, Punching Bah, and Mockingbird all fit this category.
All in all, you've almost got this at an even playing field. If you get two more Leads and three more Intel teams you'd be pretty solid. Having an extra in support is fine since there are two non-unique characters. This would really allow for us to build into other roles.
>>47400272
>using Mawile as a tank
Shame, CYOA maker. Shame on you. Mawile's Def is decent, sure, but her SpD and HP are not, and her Atk is enough that using her as a tank would be a waste. And then there's mega evolution, which basically turns her into a rampaging destruction machine - at max investment, she has 310 base Atk! Mawile's purpose is Atk, and Atk alone.
Sorry, got a little carried away. I've spent too much time on /vp/. Also, Technician Meowth with Normal Gem Fake Out and Covet is a force to be reckoned with in Little Cup - or, if you want to trade your one powerful hit for reliability, just use Life Orb Return. Gem Fake Out into U-Turn? That's a reliable amount of damage to lead off a fight, especially if you're switching into a defensive 'mon like Ampharos, Rough Skin Garchomp, or Milotic.
>>47404578
>We've exited 'big' and entered 'huge quest' territory.
Is it possible for a cyoa to be too big? I ask because Traveller seems to be reaching that point. I could be wrong, though.
>>47405684
I thought he wanted to turn it into some sort of official game or something didn't he?
>>47405684
Too big is when the size starts to make people not want to use it. That's not really the case with Traveller so far, at least not for the people that were interested to begin with.
>>47401148
>Kit has been MIA for a while now
>>47405684
This likely will be the last 'big update' for Traveller as I've reached a point where I'm satisfied with the wholeness of it. Though I certainly will be holding a final referendum before moving onto the final update of the image edition.
>>47405713
That's the long plan.
>>47405684
I think it'll be fine. Traveller might end up the largest CYOA in the archives forever, but it probably won't end up being too big.
>>47401949 >>47401954 >>47401963 >>47401972 >>47401983 >>47401991 >>47402002
Stats
Might: 4
Swiftness: 4
Endurance: 14
Charm: 4
Willpower: 7
Wisdom: 7
Race: High Elf
Blessing: Zivurna
Class: Blood Mage
Skills: Mind Sap, Flesh Rot, Sanguine Armor, Blood Pact
Quests: The Barbarian Army, The Priests of Zivurna, Rebellious Son, College Experiments, Moth Dealers, The Ebony Fist, Season Unending, Peasant Revolt (Diplomatic), Harpy Raids, The Black Knight
Companions: Thane Finn Hjalmarson, Runa Helgadottir, Andrea Clark, Norvame Girneus
Artifact: Sentinel's Bracers
Marriage: N/A
You'd have a hard time finding someone with a body as durable as mine or magic more potent. With some weapons training there are few combat situations in which I won't be able to handle my myself.
I don't really have the most confidence in my ability to handle the diplomatic missions, but I should be at the least able to handle the priests, college, and harpies. At the very end of the day though I can't be bothered with the whole king thing. I'll give the Sentinel's Bracers back and call for bygones to be bygones. At worst, I have to fight and kill the king and some of my companions. At best, everything is left alone and I've gained contacts from all across the land.
The marriages are a big part of my reluctance. Anyone you don't pick could very easily take offense to such a thing and not all of them are as beneficial as they first appear. The best choice you could pick is probably Leomaris or Marilla. You gain no enemy from doing so and you'd get many resources and advantages over everyone else. Kymic or Willonia and their demands of no more cutting down trees or mining would literally cause a civil war since that is the bread and butter of some houses. Who is to even say that they can keep up with the demands for their special wood? There is just a ton of little things that would rock the boat and I don't want to be the one responsible for it. I'm going home. Maybe to make a wife of Andrea.
>>47406077
Well at most we get to 150 pages, this isn't that much actually, and given it's going to be getting an image version update it's not actually that bad.
>>47403579
No, this issue happens all the time. When it does, just manually type out the tags and it works fine.
>>47404489
What's a rough ETA on 1.15?
Mainly just wondering if it's before or after the end of the month.
>>47406313
Probably after the month is done. I'm going to be working all week and likely then some.
>>47405423
first of all, thanks for helping me out
I agree on the fact Nyla is very useful, but you're kind of overestimating her a bit: she's very useful whenever hacking is involved, but her tips while useful are not that good.
In most situations that do not involve hacking, Leia is a strictly better choice; offers more information, more influence and is generally better at saving your ass.
I like your idea of companion categories though, I think I'll do that when I have ideas for some new companions.
>>47406357
Just don't overwork yourself, Highlander. Dead men can't write.
Or develop games.
>>47402636
Wait a minute is that the situation that happened to Lorelei and Oliver? She is trying to make up for him?
>>47402636
Is futa implied?
>>47406679
Who are you talking about?
>>47403444
The font became much smaller and is much less readable now.
>>47403798
>>47403693
That's really nice that my small remark made you so mad.
>>47406695
Implied where/by whom?
>>47406727
He's a retard that doesn't know 'tail' is slang for ass.
>>47397293
Odd question, anyone know the name of the font first used, in the introductionary paragraphs? Looks fucking sweet.
>>47405772
Where is that from?
>>47406727
>when she said "A kitsune should only let her boyfriend touch her tail." she wasn't actually talking about tails. She wouldn't tell me what she meant.
>>47402703
I'm not angel you retarded Neandrethal.
>>47397294
Don't sell yourself short, you definitely sound adorable enough to be made into an author-waifu.
What have you made?
>>47406785
It's a reference. Whether or not it's the same girl? It's hard to say. The cool CYOA he did with the Necromancer also had a Kitsune implied to be >>47402636 , with a different appearance and personality. So I think he just likes making references to it and implying kitsune are her, but a lot of the time the setting/world/personality doesn't really fit the original girl.
>>47406714
is it really? the dimensions were just slightly increased. will try 35% next time i post it
>>47406929
>the dimensions were just slightly increased. will try 35% next time i post it
Are you saying that you'll decrease the size further? 'Cos I'm pretty sure that'd make the font even more difficult to read.
>>47406999
As an outsider to this conversation, you are being a fucking idiot.
>>47407041
Last time I remember seeing percentages mentioned in relation to that CYOA, it was the image's relative size to v0.1. Can you tell me what the percentage means on this occasion, then?
>>47403444
Efficiency Improvement (15)
Lightning Reflexes (15)
Pain Inhibitors (10)
Mental Rebalancing (10)
High Tech Ranged Weapon (25)
Auto-Shotgun
>Shocking Blast
>Personal Lock
>Modified Bullets [Inferno Bullets]
>Inferno Bullets
High Tech Melee Weapon (20)
Sword
>Mono Molecular Blade
>Personal Lock
Magnetized Blades
I'm the lightly augmented Ninja
Mission: Rescue
Companions:
>Cyber Dog
>Support Squad
Let's say, hypothetically of course, I wanted to make a short cyoa today...
what should it be about?
>>47406777
No you dolt. She's like, 8 years old, her mom isn't going to tell her about the birds and the bees.
So her mother said "tails" as a euphemism forgirlvagina
Here, have some new original content. Just finished version v1.0 right now.
Are you a pirate or a ninja ?
>>47407178
I'd like a CYOA about paper powers.
