ITT Share OC poetry
>I am a poo poo man
>I live in poo poo land
>I drive a poo poo van
>'cause I'm a poo poo man
>I'm in a poo poo house
>I want a poo poo spouse
>I have a pet poo mouse
>Here in this poo poo house
>I have these poo poo feels
>while eating poo poo meals
>these feels they will not heal
>These poo poo feels are real
soy un perdedor
im a loser baby
so why dont you kill me
>>26605161
Poo on loo, pajeet.
>>26605161
Ok i've made one just now...
>I am a pee pee man
>I live in pee pee land
>I drive a pee pee van
>'cause I'm a pee pee man
>I'm in a pee pee house
>I want a pee pee spouse
>I have a pet pee mouse
>Here in this pee pee house
>I have these pee pee feels
>while eating pee pee meals
>these feels they will not heal
>These pee pee feels are real
>>26605256
You just took my poem and changed "poo poo" to "pee pee". I know I have no way of suing you, but I would appreciate it if you deleted your post.
>>26605770
I'm sorry for this infringement on your copyrighted work, Mr Anonymous.
I'll delete my post right away...
>>26605887
Thank you Anon, I really appreciate this. I hope in the future your poetry will have more of a unique voice.
>>26605161
12 year olds shouldn't be on here.
Seriously, kid. This place makes kids retarded, because they're too inexperienced to have developed a bullshit detector. I hope you get a lifetime ban, for your own good.
You're waaaaay too young and stupid to be on this board.
It's going to fuck you up.
>>26606181
I'm not underage. The poem's language is meant to be simple and juvinile, but it's meant to keep hidden the emotional currents, kind of like Hemmingway's writing, y'know?
Holy shit incinerate yourself.
>>26606215
Hemingway was a fucking hack.
Alot of his novels were self-masturbatory garbage... if you actually studied him like you claim, you'd know that.
you flippant little fuck
>I am a butt fuck man
>I live in butt fuck land
>I drive a butt fuck van
>'cause I'm a butt fuck man
>I'm in a butt fuck house
>I want a butt fuck spouse
>I have a pet butt mouse
>Here in this butt fuck house
>I have these butt fuck feels
>while eating butt fuck meals
>these feels they will not heal
>These butt fuck feels are real
>>26605161
That was horrible
Fuck you and your dogshit thread
t. random faggot
>>26606317
>Alot of his novels were self-masturbatory garbage
Other than The Sun also Rises, I actually agree with you. His real talent shines forth on his short stories, which can be very restrained and not pretentious at all. God Rest You Merry, Gentlemen is something that never fails to break my heart on rereads.
>>26606181
Implying your not twelve
