Hello /r9k/, I wanted to share a story with you all.
>I was 17 then
>I lived in a small town in the mid-west
>I knew this girl who lived down the street from me
>Call her Katie
>She was kind of tall with long brown hair and hazel eyes
>I found her to be beautiful
>We would still walk home together everyday still even though we weren't that close anymore
>I guess you could say that she was my first crush
>During that summer Katie and I both got jobs as camp counselors at a day camp at our local park
>It was pretty boring and tedious, plus I hated dealing with the kids
>Katie on the other hand, was amazing with them
>She was always very positive and caring towards them
>Eventually, we get kind of close being together everyday and we develop a routine of going down to the woods behind the park to eat lunch, as the camp was for younger kids so it got out at around noon
>We would eat, talk and listen to music
>We would always have a good time and I really liked talking to her
>One of these times we were sitting there like normal, I believe it was a few weeks after we had started working there
>This spot where we'd sit was perched on top of this bit of land, overlooking a pond
>We were seated under a tree listening to a song which I can't remember, but I remember it was good and I was enjoying it
>I notice her hand was moving closer to mine
Cont.
OP here, I have it mostly written out, although I still have a little more to write so just bump if you want me to continue.
>>29620217
>>29620186
fucking go on dude
Bump please boss?
>not having it pre-written
>>29620186
bumppppp b0ss
>>29620290
>>29620366
>>29620371
Sorry, i had it pre-typed but it says
>>Non-ASCII text is not allowed
so I have to re write
Cont.
>The environment was too serene for me to be worried
>I remember this because I would have definitely been worried in a situation like this
>Our hands eventually took hold of each other and we sat there holding hand and talking for a while, listening to music
>Eventually, we walk out of the woods together still holding hands back to our street
>I walk her to her house, say goodbye, but before we part ways her hand lingered
>I looked at her, trying to read what was going on
>I think I looked normal
>We just stood apart from each other looking at each other
>Finally, she hugs me and tells me that she had a really good time hanging out
>The summer continued on and we started hanging out more and more, I guess you could call it dating
>One day we decided to take a trip into the city
>We took a train ride that lasted around half an hour or so
>When we got there we walked around, went to a museum, and later got lunch
>We then went to this local park and walked around enjoying ourselves
>we get to this pond in the park with a wooden fence surrounding it and Katie climbs up on it to get a better look at the ducks
>I walk up to her and look as well, and while I am doing this I get the urge to put my arm around her
>I do so and she turns around and looks at me smiling
>I loved her smile
>I felt like I had to kiss her, so I leaned in and we kissed
>It started with a few kisses then to making out, so I leaned her against the fence
>No one was around, I just couldn't contain myself.
Cont.
>>29620467
I don't know if I still want to be on this ride
>We continue our walk and eventually find a place to eat dinner
>I had been saving up my paychecks from working at the summer camp in order to take her somewhere nice to eat in the city
>we did end up going somewhere pretty nice, at least for high school kid standards
>We finished and started to head back home
>We got back pretty late, and on the train ride home Katie and I started making out again
>the train was empty, our section at least, so we started progressing further--feeling each other, etc.
>We get back to her house and she invites me in
>Her parents aren't home, which I am happy about for obvious reasons
>We head up to her room and continue making out and feeling each other, I'm grabbing her boobs and ass, she's grabbing the outside of my pants
>I start stroking the outside of her pussy
>She starts groaning and removes her shirt
>Some thing came over me, and I somewhat forcefully picked her up and laid her down on the bed
>She gave a slight playful squel of enjoyment as I did so, and she started taking off her pants
>She then sat up and grabbed my pants and started to take them off
>I assisted her and she took her hands and started stroking my dick
>She put her lips on the tip and slowly started to cover it in spit
>Once it was, she went back to jerking it with the newly placed lube
>Then she started to suck
>It felt very good, so good that I was somewhat paranoid that I would prematurely cum, so I raked my hand through her hair and pulled her off
>I laid her down and entered her
>I have trouble describing it, but it did feel surreal
>I was like a body high--amazing
>I cum eventually and she goes to the bathroom to clean up
>I lay back on her bed
>She comes back wearing black panties and bra and cuddles up to me
>I felt very content laying there with her next to me
>I guess we dozed off for a bit, because I woke up at 1am
>I guess I startled her as well, because she woke too
>I told her I had to leave and kissed her goodbye and left
>Cont.
>>29620760
Come on OP deliver you fuckboy. What happened next?
>>29620760
I'm trying. I had it pre typed, but it says Non-ASCII text is not allowed whenever I paste it in, so bear with me and everyone bump if you want to hear more.
bumporooni dingeridooni
>>29620913
Bababooey.
BABABOOEY!
MOTHERFUCKING BABABOOOEY!!
Cont.
>Summer continues on and we continue to spend time with each other everyday, working, hanging out around our town and in the city
>First time I had actually enjoyed my summer
>School year comes around and we are both seniors
>We hangout a lot after school but I never really see her dad around, which I thought was weird
>One day I ask about it offhandedly
>She wasn't super clear, but from what she told me I could tell her dad was a shitty guys who wasn't around much since she was little
>She said he would still come back sometimes and him and her mom would have a brief fling together and then he would leave again
>This has repeated over and over again in a cycle since she was little
>Her mom was delusional; her dad was an alcoholic deadbeat
>But I figure there is not much I could do, so I don't mention it further
>A couple months later she in not in school for a few days
>text her to see if I could come over because I really wanted to see her
>She said no that she was too sick and that she didn't want to risk it
>I decide to go anyway and bring her soup and stuff
>She answers the door and is shocked to see me
>She blushes and tries to hide and move her face away, but I already say somehing that made my blood run cold
>She had a black eye
>I knew it was the piece of shit father
>And I tell her that but she denied it
Cont.
OP please we're dying, you're taking a while
This thread is so fucking irritating, hurry up OP for fucks sake
>>29621146
>>29621148
Sorry as I mentioned before I wrote it out but it won't let me enter it so I have to re type.
Why do I feel like this is going to end in disaster for anon?
>it's been an hour
Oh my god
>>29621143
Holy shit anon, I'm totally in this ride.
>>29621173
Copy and paste your text into notepad and save it with ASCII encoding, then copy paste it from there to here.
Let's go OP, I want to hear how you killed her father.
Cont.
I know she is lying and ask if he is home
she tells me that he is not, so I come in
We sit down and I tell her that I know she is lying
>She admits it and tells me that he dad came back and got into a fight with her mom while drunk and took his anger out on her
>Suffice it to say I was very angry
>I wanted to protect her from her dad
>But she told me he already had left and had no idea to where, so it was pointless
>I was just left to stew in my rage
>Time goes on and things return to being peaceful and good
>I begin to think I am in love with Katie
>I spend Christmas with Katie and her mom, we just had a great time overall
>The holidays come and pass
>It was a cold Sunday morning in January and I hear a knock at the door
>It was Katie
>She seemed really distraught and anxious
>She is on the verge of tears telling me something bad happened but won't specify
I tell her to come in and I get her some coffee and ash what happened
>She tells me that her dad had gotten into a car crash while drunk
>He had been driving from another city to see her and her mom
>I drive her to the hospital to see him, and while we are waiting she won't stop shaking
>She is a complete nervous wreck, so I try to console her but it's not use
>The doctor comes out and starts talking to us
COnt.
>>29621377
OP is alive!
>>29621295
>>29621377
Thanks I'll try it
sorry about the messed up greentext by the way, I was trying to type quickly.
>>29621377
>tfw you're staying up past your bedtime to find out what happens
>>29621411
Take your time OP, quality over quantity.
>>29621426
>bedtime
You're probably too young to be browsing on here...
>>29621457
That was probably ajoke lel
>>29621457
Not him but adults with obligations got bedtime you filthy neet. If you go late to bed you be tired at work or school tomorrow, not that you know anything about it filthy degenerate.
>>29621457
It's 2:40 in the morning here m8 and I want to be up early to get some reading done. Doesn't matter really, I can't get to sleep until 4 the past few days.
>>29620467
>I just couldn't contain myself
OP please don't be a faggot for the love of god
>>29621511
Lol what time is it at you nigger
Cont.
>The doctor told us that Katie's father had a very slim chance at recovery, that he was in a critical condition
>Katie bursts into tears when she hears this and I hold her
>Katie and her mom spend some time in the room with Katie's father while I wait outside
>Her dad passed away the next night
>In the next couple of weeks Katie started spending less and less time with me
>Figure it's normal and part of the grieving process/coping process so I think little of it
>In the next couple weeks she goes to school less and when there she seems very withdrawn
>She doesn't have the energy to talk to do anything with me really
>I start getting worried about her
>A couple weeks later and it has not gotten better
>One night I was in my room and I got a text
>It was from Katie, I still have it saved:"Anon, I wanted you to know that I really am very sorry for how I have been lately, you deserve better. I'm just very sorry and very tired. Please just remember the good things about me and the good times, don't dwell on the bad, and that I love you very much."
>I immediately picture what I have feared
>Don't want to admit it to myself but I was starting to fear that she may attempt suicide, but always dismissed it until now
>But this was a clear message
>I call her and text her a bunch of times, but get no response
>This worsens my suspicions so I decide to go over and check on her
>I run to her house and when I get there I notice that there are only two lights on: one in the kitchen and one in the upstairs bathroom
>I knock frantically at the door
>No answer
>Run around back and check if it was open
>It wasn't, but I found a spare key in a plant next to the door after looking for a couple minutes
>I went in
>It was so silent
>I walked upstairs and stopped outside the bathroom
Cont.
>>29621714
Jeezy peezy normally this stuff is eh, but the suspense is real.
>>29621714
oh boy, here comes the feel train
>>29621714
the feels are getting steamy
please, op.
continue
Inb4 enter bathroom
Get on the floor
Everybody walk the dinosaur
Cont.
>I take a pause
>I open the bathroom door
>Get on the floor
>Everybody walk the dinosaur
>>29621762
That's because it's been 2 hours kek
Cont.
>It was quiet
>I couldn't hear anything on the other side
>So I opened the door and saw something that would haunt me forever
>Katie was lying in the bathtub faced down covered in cuts and gashes--the bathtub filled with blood
>A bottle of pills rested on the side of the tub
>She was still conscious, not alert, but moving ever so slightly
>I freaked out and called 911
>After I hung up she moved a little and turned to look at me, her face was very pale and sickly looking
>I rushed over and sat crouched holding her hand
>I thought back to the time in the woods, the first time we held hands
>I felt so bad thinking back to that point
>It was summer then, we had no cares at all
>We at that point had just gotten together for the first time
>Everything felt free and open
>She had instilled hope in me when she reached out for my hand the first time in the woods
>That act of comfort and hope had now been replaced with dread and fear
>Fear for her, her future, fear for myself and my future as well
>I thought what the hell will I do with myself now
>i already feared the worst, I couldn't help it
>I thought about her poor mom, how alone ahs would feel in this house
>I thought about how I would never spend another Christmas with her, how I should have made more of our time in general
Cont.
Anon please tell me this is going to be a joke ending.
>>29621951
Why?? Embrace the feels!!!!
>>29621933
my feels meter is off the charts
>>29621933
Fuck op dont make me cry
dear OP, please don't mess us up on this
Cont.
>I then noticed this was the perfect opportunity for grape
>I needed to supply for my craving necrophilia fetish
>I would then use the knife to kill myself
Cont.
>i hear someone calling at the door
>i open the door
>get on the floor
>everybody walk the dinosaur
Cont.
>wake up
>it was all merely a dream
>>29622046
Grape?
I get the necro action but what do you mean? Eating grapes while fucking a corpse? That's extra fucked
Cont.
jimbles
>I could hear the ambulance coming
>Katie turned her head towards me
>I felt this was the end
>She managed to utter some words, but it was barely audible
>Those words wereYou just lost the Game.
>>29622132
>it was all merely a dream
>mfw I didn't read anything
Cont.
>While I was thinking this Katie became more alert and asked me to get closer
>I get closer
>She told me she that she loved me and that she was sorry
>i said she shouldn't worry, that I love her and that help in on the way
>SHe leans in and tells me to close my eyes
>I was confused at first, but she insisted that I close them again so I did
>At first nothing happened, just silence, then I heard a splash of water as if she was moving
>I opened my eyes partially to where I was merely squinting
>I could make out the silhouette of Katie bending over
>Before I could fully open my eyes, I heard the deafening, distinct, unholy sound of
>*BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP*
>And the sound of all the porcelain and glass in the house shattering at the thunderous crack of wind
>My eyes started to burn--tears welling up in my sockets
>The smell was overwhelming, terrifying
>It overpowered my senses
>Spiralling down--dipping in and out of consciousness as I willed myself to regain composure of my mind
>Struggling to fight back the urge to vomit, my vision started to blur and then collapse in on itself
>I hear it again
>*PLBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBRBRBRBPPPT*
>A layered sinful stench
>Multiple layers of rot on an onion that is sick to the core
>*BRRRRRRRRAAAAAARRRRRTTTTT*
>I fling myself towards the door knob
>Locked
>"This can't be happening... this can't b--"
>*PLBBT* *PLBBBBTTT* ... *BRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPFFFF*
>My hand falls down as my spirits fall from grace
>I lay down in the corner
>I have accepted my fate
>>29622133
grape
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>>29622183
The only time braap craposting is fucking hilarious
>>29622183
This post was delicious.
>She was my everything, i couldnt believe this was happening
>i pray to God
>please dear ogre lord, Shrek give her the power
>a giant onion falls from the sky
>i see it now
>He comes out of the onion
>i can feel his power
>he puts a spell on katie
>she is transforming
>everything is onion now
>may god help us all
>she is with shrek now
>he saved her from the mortal realm.
>>29622184
It was a fucking joke anon
op you need to type faster damn
>>29622261
You can never truly be sure
Just gotta be safe and play it like everyone's a newfag when asking a question
it's just my instinct
please dont hurt me
OP here, this >>29622183 isn't me, but kek.
I wrote out the green text and deleted it. I can't bring myself to. But Katie passed away that night. There was nothing I could do. I'm tearing up as I write this. There's nothing to say; she was amazing and now shes gone, I'll always remember and love her. Still as I fall asleep sometimes, I can feel her warmth or remember the feeling and it makes me feel like she is there. I still wake up most nights to the memory of seeing her in the bathroom.
thanks for listening.
>>29622329
you aren't op you fuckhead
ive been watching the number of posters forever
>>29622183
Brapposting at the right time, anon.
>>29622296
Na I get it, it was the response I was looking for
Cont.
>Waiting for the ambulance, I sat there with her, putting pressure on her wounds and staring into her eyes
>That moment felt like forever
>At the hospital I waited to hear news from the staff
>I was too anxious to even answer calls from my mom wondering where I was
>It felt like our future and happiness together for the rest of our lives was on the line
>The doctor said she had cut a main artery and was in critical condition
>I didn't think I could ever recover from this moment
>I felt too depressed in the waiting room, too anxious to leave her and I ended up staying the night there
>Her mom go a hold of my mom and she dragged me home
>When I came home, I was to anxious to eat or do anything
>Ended up skipping school for the next few days
>Finally heard the news from her mother
>She was coming home the next day
>Called her and she said I could visit her the next Saturday for lunch
>I come in and her mother had prepared salami and tomato sandwiches for lunch
>Told her I was finished and expected chicken tendies
>Her mother responded she did not know
>Scowled at her saying maybe if she wasnt busy being a toaster bitch fucking drunk degenerates then she would have catered to my chicken tendie needs
>Katie tells me to please be considerate
>wtfdidyousaytome.png
>Throw my piss jug at her cut up arm
>She screams as it bursts and seeps into her wombs
>"Chicken tendies, chicken tendies", I yell
>Her mom tells me it is time to leave
>This bitch has had enough of telling me what to do
>I call the police informing them they had cut the brake pumps on her dad's car to get the insurance money for his death
Cont.
>>29622329
that hit me right in the feelbox
well good night anon
>>29622357
If it was OP then he wouldn't register as a new poster.
>>29622419
but he did so it isn't op
>>29622329
god fucking damnit
right when i was getting feely
op impersonation
im going to go kill myself
>>29622407
>>29622183
>>29622132
you are all just so great
>>29622407
I'm fucking dying over here holy shit
Sorry everyone
Cont.
>As my mind was wondering, I didn't feel or realize that her hand was getting colder and limp to the touch
>I started panicking
>In a frenzy, I desperately tried to make her sit upright
>It felt like her body was lead, resistant to my touch
>I slouched down in a fit of despair and carefully smoothed out her hair, her head was cold, smooth and angled, her chin covered in blood
>The ambulance came, the men loaded her in and I followed along in my car
>The waiting room was empty
>the flourescent lights beating down on me were irritating, I guess my senses were dulled in the adrenaline
>I was agitated, nervous, hunched upright, I couldn't stand being out here I wanted to be with her
>I couldn't discern how long it had been, but the nurse finally came out and led me to her room
>The hospital room was cold and sterile,a mess of wires covered Katie
>I was... disoriented, it all seemed very surreal and distant seeing Katie there
>She looked peaceful
>I felt her head and it felt warmer
>It was a nice contrast to the room, it made me feel slightly better
>Katie's mother arrived and she broke down and embraced me
>Nothing was registering to me, I couldn't reconcile my surrounding as concrete
>We sat in agony as Katie lay there
>The time passage was strange, so I have a hard time describing it
>But it was hard to stay awake and watch her
>I don't even remember falling asleep, but I did at some point
>In the morning Katie was still asleep, the doctors said her condition worsened over night
>I had my breakfast brought to me and just watched her
>Her breathing was uneasy, fitful and jerky
>I was just stuck there, how can you describe it?
>She was in front of me and I had to just watch and wait
>I'm rambling, I realize, but there's no way to explain, I have been all this time trying to understand
>The feeling of my body was leaving, I just had tunnel vision, completely block and focused on her
>Her breath, in and out... in and.. out, out of sync
Cont.
>>29622946
How the fuck did it take you an hour to write that shit
>>29623080
feels I'm guessing
>>29622946
why do you date dumbcunts, her dad dying should be good news no? Certainly no cause for suicide.
>>29623080
I have a hard time thinking about it, sorry again.
Cont.
>There's no use going around and around rambling and rambling, so I'll cut to the chase
>In the late afternoon, Katie died
>As I left the hospital and got in my car, I just sat there and didn't know what to do
>I mean what could I do but frive home?
>Instead though, I drove down to the woods and sat at the spot where we would sit in the summer, a time that felt like a lifetime ago
>It was winter, the pond was frozen and the trees dead and spindly, a light snow covering it all
>I sat under the tree and sat and stared trying to remember the room
>I tried to remember and reconcile the thoughts, the pieces, the fragmented feeling patched together throughout
>They came in: Katie covered in wires, Katie covered in blood, Katie in the ambulance, and so on
>But I instead I focused on Katie when she was a camp counselor, Katie huddled around me in her living room at Christmas
>A beautiful radiant, caring girl that emanated exuberance
>And that's all I care to remember her as
>Thoughts are fleeting and I can't bear most of them, so I'll end it there
Thanks for sticking with the story, OP signing off.
>>29623465
Yep.. Nice, only took 3 hours its 5:27 right now I think I'll just skip sleep
>>29623465
I'm sorry, OP. I hope you find your peace some day.
t. Been here for the entire train ride since about 7:45 MST.
i prefer the brraapp post... :( im sorry OP. good luck in your future, i hope one day you can move on.
