Hi it's me from yesterday's thread, my story was well received so I wrote a new chapter.
For those who haven't read part one, see the picture.
>it's a rather humid night
>sitting by the marina at starbucks-beach in neo-new-orleans under a streetlight, having smoke and contemplating my privilege
>this is, of course, illegal because of the phallic nature of cigarettes and generally being out after 8pm as genderless person assigned male at birth (we're all the same afterall)
>croaker patrols roam the streets, further ensuring gender equality
>Watching the neon lights of what looks like Tokyo's skyline flicker in the reflection of the water fills my mind with memories from the old world
>My daydreams end with some latina females calling me a gringo and spitting in my face
>I laugh it off as to not offend them
>Risking another look in their direction I see one of them squatting down and pissing in the streets
>They are free, independent women and should be proud of themselves
>An enforcer of Hillary's thought-police comes up to me and lectures me on how I deserved it for thought-raping them and goes on scanning my neck implant
>Xe says my Hillarine levels are too low and asks me if I had not taken my supplements recently
>I get visibly drenched in sweat
>Xe asks if I am ok or if xe should call a croaker patrol to take me to the hospital
>I tell xir I have been feeling a little under the weather lately and I'm generally sweaty
>Xe offers to give me a Hillarine injection right there and then to make up for my lacking
>I tell xir not to waste it on me, I will take one at home, it's right around the corner
>Making sure I go there right now xe takes me to my cardboard home, which has apparently been stomped and pissed on (again)
>Xe gives me a ticket written on a period pad for lingering after dark and smoking and wishes me a good night
>I rest in comfort, knowing that I deserved all of this and I am just making up for decades of oppression
Part 1/?
>Yet I am uneasy. Something feels off...
>Next morning
>I wake up around noon
>Might as well be six in the morning, I can't tell, it has always been dark since "the incident"
>The sky is black and I really need to shit and have a drink
>I walk down the alley I live in this week
>A neon sign above my head flashes and says:
>OTHER><EDIS
>SIDE><REHTO
>As I grab the doorknob I see a sign:
>"Only genderfluid twospirit otherkin who are at least 27% pansexual queer"
>I am not even sure if I fit this pattern or not
>I enter anyway
>Everyone is talking and laughing up until the point I enter
>Genderfluid people everywhere staring me down
>Dead silence
>Some obese he/she/xe with pink/blue dyed hair looks at me with an evil gaze
>It's giving me the heebie jeebies
>I keep my head down and make my way to the toilets
>There are 12 doors with different signs on them and again, I am not sure whether I fit any of those profiles
>Afraid to open any of those I proceed to shit myself and waddle out as fast as possible
>I make my way down the street past a culturally appropriated cinema
>They do not show any traditional movies anymore, someone could be offended
>All they have is mute french character dancing, open to interpretation for everyone
>Shaky ground again
>Everyone downs their food supplements
>I am still too much in awe at what this world has become and forget to pretend taking my Hillarine pill
>Promptly I feel something hard hit my neck
>I am taken away by the croakers for failing to take my Hillarine
>As I am dragged away through puddles in the pouring rain I decide to make a change to this world before I loose consciousness
End of chapter 2
Has anyone been in the thread yesterday?
I'm thinking about a choose-your-own-adventure set in this universe. Would anyone be interested in that?
>>29255467
Amazing and dark, but I'm not too sure about the choose-your-own-adventure though dystopianon
>>29255306
very good thanks anon!
>>29255582
>>29255890
Thanks for the replies guys. Why do you think the choose your own adventure is not a good idea?
>>29256003
I'd say it would be very fun, however set some pre defined answers, instead it will just turn into another weird/sexual story.
>>29256080
yeah, that's what I was planning to do
>>29256140
And let people vote using straw poll
>>29256176
First reply wins is better
What happened to the rest of the world? Do they just watch as the US becomes a Hillarian dystopia? Or has the US taken over the entire globe? Please not the latter us brits want freedom too
>>29256448
I will probably include this sometime (i'm a europoor myself)
bumping this shit fampailam
>>29257066
Thanks bro, this is probably the first pure bump I have ever gotten for one of my threads
>>29255306
>Facebook and all other social networks become mandatory from birth and you have to update your profile as law to remind everyone what you're doing
This is the one thing I fear most.
I'm bumping this, obviously
As for where this dystopian goes, I could kinda see a 1984-esque plot line with the sexual part(Winston and Julia), or like an underground movement (similar to redpill/matrix), except (like in 1984) the OP gets monitored, caught, and subjugated to torture/conscious brainwashing. You don't have to make it exactly like that, it's your thing, you could always make twists and turns to that plot line.
>>29258398
No need for any sex, dystopian settings are interesting enough alone
Awful writing
Please post more OP its good
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F3_LAUo62CI
For the read
bumbie for gud threadg
>>29258608
Sorry bud, everyone else seems to think otherwise
Thanks all for the support. Gonna make some choose your own story with predetermined answers.
