Welcome to the shiny new FUN! FUN! FUN! Create your own adventure
The Fun Fun Fun CYOA is a multi episode suggestion capacity test that progressively gets more fun as the CYOA continues, the Fun Fun Fun CYOA will begin and continue as the QM sees fit, line up at the post board now. The quest will start off in the sixties, and go different places as the CYOA goes on. remember to post in straight thoughts, and bump as long as possible.
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>>27715359
welp, the trip is given away, this is now my new trip.
http://pastebin.com/vnCkFRgT
here's the CYOA so far
>Buy Chevy
>go Buy Albums
>bet ready for road trip
>go buy clothes
>He waves you off.
>"Yeah, yeah- thanks mom; you know where my apartment is, right?"
"Yeahp."
>In a bit you're parked outside his house, and he runs off.
>You cruise, and in a couple of miles, you've parked yourself outside a Rarity's, you go in, and look for her summer collection.
>There's a banner in a part of the store that simply says 'sure is summer in here!'
>That's probably where you need to go.
>You nearly trot to the area.
>What do you buy?
>>27715396
Yes! It's back!
>>27715396
We need a pair of sunglasses, a scarf like the ladies wore back then, a new pretty dress to take in our photos, and finally a swimsuit for when we finally get to the west coast.
>>27715447
Going with this!
>>27715447
>>27715396
>After trying on three pairs of sunglasses that were just to small for your face, you find a pair of groovy purple glasses.
>You place them on your head, with the tag still on it, and you run off to find yourself a scarve.
>Soon enough, you find yourself at an impasse between a polka dotted purple and white scarf and a cream colored one... and then you realized your budget.
>Placing the two scarfs around your neck, you look towards the swim suit department.
>You find a nice cute onesie that matches your mane and you throw that across your back
>Then you look to find a dress.
>You find yourself a pink dress with a black belly band, and you lay that across your back as well.
>Finally you find a bonnet to wear over your hair while the top is down.
>Noting that your taste in current fashion is unfathomably delicious, you perkily trot to the checkout counter where you pay about 13 dollars.
>You get your bags and trot out of the store, putting them in the back seat of the Chevy.
>You get in and start the motor, earning a loud ROAR from the engine as you pull forward through the parking spot in-front of you, as you head for the road.
what next?
>>27715539
Time to get home and relax. Maybe talk to the folks and go over what we have packed for the trip.
>>27715539
Go home, unwind/see if there's anything else to do before verifying luggage and hitting the hay.
>>27715539
>>27715659
>>27715938
>You park the new Chevy on the curb next to your house.
>Fumbling with the keys, you finally get them into your mouth and stuff them into the door.
you get inside, remembering that you should put the top up.
>You bolt back outside, and put the soft top back on the convertible.
>Then you bolt back inside, throwing your new stuff into a suitcase, along with a new pack of undies, some shirts, some dresses, a pair of snuggly long socks.
>To your left, you notice that you never put your pistol back in its safe.
>It's pretty dangerous to go alone.
>Should you pack the handgun?
>>27716044
>panties and socks
Goodness gracious, how lewd!
Anywho, what kind of gun is it? I Don't see a reason not to take it.
>>27716094Flash is sex.
>>27716044
Lock and load.
>>27716094
>>27716044
>You pick up the small war 45 semi auto and place it in the case accompanied by a box of ammo.
>You close the case with a thud and you go to watch dragnet until nine PM, then you crawl in bed, think some lewd thoughts about the detectives on dragnet, and you then go to sleep.
>>27716230
>sks
>svedka
>peacoat
>cat
>cigarette
>nuclear warhead
hey, i've got those!
>>27716231
Unf.Are you pausing here? There isn't a prompt in that update so I don't know what to assume.
>>27716271
Yeah, we can pause there, keep it bumped and i'll continue tomorrow.
>>27716337
>>27716368
CYKA BLYAT
So about look of our two characters. Flash has a yellow coat and a two-tone pink mane, right? What about their eyes? Greez was purple but someone mentioned his real name being Rust Bucket and having the colors to match but he dyed his mane black. I think that's awesome idea. What hairstyle should Flashy have?
>>27720085
I just used the pic OP drew in the first thread for reference on Flash. Didn't take any liberties since we hadn't bought any clothes at the time.
As for Greez, I went with a 60's bad boy look.
>>27720256
The bad boy look fits.
>>27720085
his real name is rust bucket, with a more orangey brown colorscheme, but he dyed it more dark.
>>27716231
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wpP7tWXjcnc
>You wake up to the sound of the radio playing 'fun fun fun' by the beach pones'.
>You can help but mouth the words while you put on your dress, bonnet, scarve, and groovy shades.
>you nearly burst out of the door, eager to turn the Chevy back on to, in turn, turn on the radio to the same channel to finish of the song.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QgYblVYEldY
>You change the station to your 106.3 the rock, which plays rock music.
>Just in time, too. The Trotting Stones' 'satisfaction' begins to play.
>you feel as free as a bird.
>you let the top down, and on the highway, with wind in your wings.
>SURF CITY HERE WE COME!
"WOOH!"
>Something clicks.
>Oh, right- Greez.
>Oops.
>>27722350
>You turn off the highway, and you find yourself blanking amidst the emotion.
>Soon, you're outside his door. he's obviously slept in, you know him too we-
>The door flies open.
"Never mind!"
>"What?"
>Uhh.
"Assumptions."
>"Right."
>"So, do we eat on the road or in town?"
>>27722378
Both.
Eat something on the road, but while we near our destination, save an appetite up for the town chow.
>>27722378
On the road, now come on! Let's get going!
>>27722378
Oh! Let's take a picture before we leave.
>>27722378
>>27722475
>>27722523
>>27722573
sorry, had to do something.
>"Hey, wait, get by the car."
>Greez gestures towards the car.
>"Give me that camera!"
>You shake your head.
"Hey- no, there's a timed function on these models."
>Greez just squints his eyes.
>You shake your head again.
"Geez, just- put the camera here."
>You roughly push the camera on a small rock wall in view of the car.
"Push this button."
>"And we wait?"
"We've one minute."
>you two position yourselves by the car, and the camera flashes.
>>27723165
>you get in the car. and Greez throws his bags in the back seat, and then trots back to the foor, popping it open with his mouth.
>He hops in, and changes the radio to a random AM station.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dv13gl0a-FA
>You both cover your ears.
>He quickly changes it back.
>"Holy- what the hell was that!"
>You don't know how to respond, you're agape at the sound.
>"Fuckin' Commies."
>You shake your head.
>For some reason, though it makes you want to go fast.
>So Sqrew it, lets go fast.
>"WOAH!"
"TO BREAKFAST!"
>>27723235
"Yeah! Two burritos, a side of hash browns! a number twenty two please, one large coffee please!?"
>"is that all?" the speaker flashes back.
>you turn to Greaz.
"And you'll be having?"
>He simply laughs.
>"All?"
>Yeah, you're kidding. Of course you're kidding.
"Yeah! that's all!"
>"Your total is two fifty at the window, please!"
>Talk about reasonable.
>Soon, you're munching on a breakfast burrito, with a side of coffee.
>The wind reminds you of your time vacationing in Cloudsdale.
>"WOOH!"
>That's the spirit!
Now you can engage in conversation, there's about 250 miles until the next town that is alien to you.
>>27723329
you're currently heading west on route sixty six, in two hundred fifty miles you will hit a small town called Jennysville, where you'll head northwest through a couple of small towns until you hit the capitol, from there, you will go south back onto route 66. There the rest of your journey will commence.
>>27723329
So how's it been going with you Greez? Anything interesting happen lately? Ya'know, I feel like we should name this car. What do you think?
>>27723400
>Your excitment overtakes you, and it manifests itself in a wave of questions.
"How's it going!"
>Original!
"Anything interesting happen recently?"
>Breakfast topic!
"We should name the car!" your smiling from ear to ear! "Whatahuh think!"
>He's just sort of staring at the speedometer.
>"Slow down!"
>You jolt back to the speedometer.
>110
"OKAY THAT'S TWICE THE SPEED WE SHOULD BE GOING!"
>Over the course of about a football field, you bring it back down to fifty five.
>>27723454
>You get back to your conversation.
"Car name?"
>He thinks for a moment.
>"Nothing's jumping to me, i don't really know her, you know, we should name her when we come up with something, ya know?"
"Alright, alright. Sounds groovy, mr mechanic."
>"are you stoned?"
"No!"
>He simply laughs.
>>27723484
I'm sure something will come to me. Just gotta get a feel for her. Gently caress the steering wheel and sigh. Isn't she gorgeous Greez?
>>27723532
>"Just gotta get a feel for her."
"Yeah, Just gotta feel her"
>In your mind, what you just said made sense.
>"Seriously, where's your stash?"
>he starts looking under your bucket seat for what he believes to be your stash of drugs you must certainty be on.
>>27723633
I don't need a stash Greez. I'm high on life.
>>27723652
"Can't you see Greez!? I'm higher on life than any acid could do to me!"
>"Groovy! you mind switching with me for a while?"
>he laughs.
>"Because life's sqrewing you up real well!"
>You laugh.
"Cant you see? We're in the same life right now!"
>"Damnit that was smooth!"
>You darn right i'm smooth.
>you both let out a shout, while the Pinkes' 'twist and shout plays'
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eFW2cYc4t-w
>>27723165Decided to draw this. Didn't come out exactly how I wanted, but eh. Hopefully I'll do better in the future. This quest is really fun.
>>27723707
Jam softly. Ask Greez what he's hoping to see along the way or at our destination.
>>27723731
Nice!
>>27723765
At our next stop we should pick up way too many brochures.
>>27723731
it's called FUN FUN FUN for a reason, be advised, high levels of FUN may lead to, but not included to- diminished perception of realiteeeeeeeeeeee, liver failure, impregnation, and higher acquisition of trinkets.
>>27723765
>You bob your head back and fourth to the quick RnB of the Pinkles.
"What you looking for on our way to our destination?"
>"I dunno, i think i want to try some of the microbrews they've got in some of the small towns, heard a tale saying that each bottle has an entirely different taste!"
>More of the drinking.
>"Otherwise, I don't know- I really dont!"
"That's really groovy, that's really spiritual sounding!"
>"listen to yourself right now!"
"I know! Right!"
>>27723731
deserving of a remaster.
>>27723823
Wow, I think I really AM getting high on life. Aren't you jealous?
I was looking at a nap of Equestria and apparently Rainbow Falls is way the fuck to the north. I always thought it was close to Cloudsdale.Ey, Mr. QM man, maybe we can sorta... bend cannon a little bit. Whadda ya say?
>>27723918i already did, it's going to be on the north side of the west coast, where we will take I-5 down into California, literally traveling the entire west coast.
>>27723977Fuck yeah.
>>27723977So does that make this like PiE without humans?
>>27724015
it's like that, even though i've never been in PiE personally, it's ponified earth.
>>27724026
I thought you said we were in Equestria? Or an Earthified Equestria?
>>27724034
this.
>>27715359
bumpaloon
>>27723731
Makes me think of a sitcom.This quest has some good potential.
Comedy bump
Fun bump.
Bamp.
Someone said as much in /cyoag/ but I figured I'd repeat it here. The cyoa is very enjoyable but introducing some dilemma or such would make it better. Also prompts. Prompts would be fucking great.
>>27736455
>prompts
like, questions?
we've only just started with the main story, friendo.
also, we're back!
we're we last seen on the famous route sixty six! we're about ten miles away from unknown territory.
25 miles until jennysville, you will need gas and food.
>>27736677
Here is a really good example. Prompts are things for the players to react or respond to at the end of a post. Good prompts keep the action rolling smoothly and get you more responses. You see, you just told us our current situation but you could have used Greez to inform us and say he's hungry or have Fash observe we're low on gas. The only thing I can say here is "Ok. Let's stop at the next gas station." Can't really get immersed into the characters this way.
>>27736783
noted.
>You pause the radio, and notice a big green sign that simply says 'Jennysville, 25 miles'
>Shortly after that, the car starts spurring and putting.
>"We're on fumes, Flash, i wouldn't go much farther without something in the tank.
>He looks back, and while you're doing fifty five, he starts looking around in the back seat.
>"Nope, nope, nope."
>He shakes his head, you could tell because of the violent vibrations on the seat.
>He turns back.
>"I've got a gallon in the back, we should stop."
>Your stomach contracts a bit, making you realize the horrible, jarring, evil realization.>You're hungry
"I'm fairly certain there's a Hayburger in town. of course we could get a bit fancy."
>"I'm not too Fancy, flash, you know that."
>you sink into your seat a bit.
"Okay, that's fine."
>"but of course, it's your call."
hopefully that's an improvement.
>>27736830
and of course the spoilers are changed.
only that one line should be spoilered, but whatever.
>>27736830Much better.
I guess we can get hayburgers. Guess I-ll wait until we find somewhere special to eat fancy. I'll stop at the next gas station too. Would rather save the gascan for an emergency.
>>27736875
>>27736830
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mRCe5L1imxg
"Hayburgers are fine. But when we're getting to Canterlot we're eating at one of the 3 hooved restaurants!"
>"puhlease, they're so prim."
>you laugh.
>"But, seriously, pull over- we're not making it to a station on fumes."
>You rebut.
"But we need the gas for a emergencies."
>You realize your mistake.
"Right, we can just- fill up the gas can at the station."
>You pull over and he pours the gallon in the tank.
>"Much better."
>You drive for a bit before you roll up a turnpike and into Jennysville.
>The city itself is kind of dreary, and industrial looking, but there's all sorts of groovy people in bitchin' colors.
>You could smell the city has been through a bit of production though.
>Pulling up to a gas station, you get out, and with surgical precision, you fill the tank on the car.
>You walk up to the till and pay the $3.07 it took to fill the tank.
>Greez comes back out with a six pack of Ponka Cola Cherry and two chocolate bars.
>You sit in silence for a moment as you find something to open the bottles with.
>Turns out, Bel Air Doors make very good bottle openers.
>You take a Swig of the cola, and you nod to show your acceptance of the delicious explosion of flavor.
>you take off towards the hayburger sign you see in the distance.
>>27737071
>You pull up, minding the curb, soon parking yourself outside the small walk-up diner.
>You really have only got a few choices, but that's okay.
>You're first in the line, you must've beat the lunch rush, or came in long after it.
>"Good afternoon and welcome to Hayburger! what would you like today?"
"Two hayburgers please, side of fries!"
>"Okay, that will be forty cents please!"
>You bring up the four dimes and you give her the money.
>You go sit back in the convertible as Greez orders.
>He soon come back to the car, with your food.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4flAZEgtjs
>You sit in and jam to Cloudsdale Clearcloud Revival
>>27737121
>After you finish your food, Greez looks at you.
>"So, we staying in this town for a bit? or are we getting back on the road."
>The people are groovy but this place doesn't seem like a place you want to stay.
>>27737137
Hmmm... nah. We got places to be and there's plenty of daylight to drive on. Let's get a picture of Jennysville. Maybe a nice shot contrasting the drab industrial buildings with the hip colorful ponies if possible.
>>27737205
>>27737137
>You see a couple of people shooting craps on a sidewalk, right up against a colorfully spray painted wall, with a paper factory's smoke stacks in the background.
>The ponies themselves are dressed very colorfully, even moreso than the wall behind them.
>So it seems that, the most color is in the foreground, and as it goes back, the color dissipates until you have a dreary factory in the background.
>You nearly rip out your camera to take a picture.
>Neat!
"Neat!"
>"Neat indeed!"
>>27737589
>"Okay, now that's done, lets get back on the route."
"Well, no- we gotta take I-89 up and then take 107 into Canterlot."
>"Can't we just take the highway and skip the interstate?"
>Well, time over substance?
>>27737610
C'mooon Greez. Let's take the scenic route. We aren't in any rush are we?
>>27737642
pretty sure greez is the one wanting to go on the scenic route.
this suggestion but flipped.
>>27737642
>>27737896
>>27737610
>"Seriously, scenic is the best option."
"But what if we break down?"
>he looks at you sternly.
"Right, mechanic- fine, we'll take the scenic route."
>You shift the gears, and pull away from a stop, you soon take a left, and follow the forest highway into Canterlot.
>>27737947prompt neededalso what quest do you read or have you read?
>>27737947
Is... is that all? If yes that's a good example of how to not have a prompt.
>>27738143
>>27738147
I had to go out and fix a vehicle and go to dinner.
so i didn't have a prompt as a pseudo pause.
here, now we can continue.
i read the one by CIA Guy a long time ago about a pony human war.
>About five minutes later, you're surrounded by trees.
>you drive for about 60 miles before something gives on the car.
>With a *SNAP! CRACKLE POP!* the car stops going forward, and you shut it off, and you're on the side of the road.
>After a bit of swearing Greez comes up from under the car.
>He looks at you solemnly and says, "The driveshaft broke."
>He shakes his head.
>He huffs.
>"No, it didn't break, it's shattered."
>He goes back under only to retrieve a shard of steel.
>"It's as if the damn was made of glass."
>He drops the shard on the ground.
>"Any Ideas?"
>>27739394
"Driveshaft busted!? Isn't that big and important!?" Do we have a map? We'll have to fly to the closest town and get a wrecker or something while Greez watches the car. Ask him what he thinks.
>>27739394
>"Yes, very important- Flash."
>He perks up and takes command.
>"Take your wallet and fly into, into-"
>He takes a peek at the map located on the trunk of the car.
>"Peachbalm, about 10 more miles up this road, and see if they've got a Bel Air Drive Shaft and two U bolts. if they're trying to run you for more than 25 dollars they're scamming you.
>What all do you grab for going into town.
>>27739483
Man, we could use an inventory list about now. I can think of anything other than money and our camera.
Ok, I'll be as fast as I can! Then lightly pet the car as if trying to comfort it and tell her it's gonna be ok. Uncle Greez is gonna have her fixed up good as new soon enough.
>>27739585
sidearm
>>27739394
>I read the one by CIA Guy a long time ago about a pony human war.
Word of advice; if you want to pick up some pointers on how to run SoL cyoa go read Urban Survival. Best I've ever seen it done.
https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&url=https://www.anonpone.com/meme/&ved=0ahUKEwiWjN6p6sTNAhXC5YMKHd6BC20QFggfMAI&usg=AFQjCNHZtLakVVQR4FnhaoLgldEg96bL2w
>>27739596
/k/ pls; don't think we need a gun to get a driveshaft.
Actually gonna pause because everything i'm hitting a hard writers block when it comes to characters, the look of the town, developments, etc. etc.
>>27739672
You're good mate. Take time to plan out everything you think you'll be needing for a session, review and reuse from past sessions, and as always, have fun.
Looking forward to your return. Thanks for running today!
Bamp.
Bumpan.
Bump damn you!
vump
>>27739483
>Camera, money, sunglasses.
>You bolt up, extend your wings, and take off upwards.
>After about half an hour, you see a small town open up in the trees.
>You park yourself on mane street, and begin to walk down the sidewalk.
>There's a bunch of antique stores, a Sub Sandwich shop, a pizza parlor, a liquor store, a gas station, and a couple of buildings you can't quite make out.
>You shouldn't be wasting any time, but you do wanna see what antiques there are.
we're back with a plan this time.
>>27753118
Auto shop is what we're looking for. Waste no time, our partner is currently stuck in the middle of nowhere. Save dicking around for after we retrieve him and our wheels.
>>27753118
Aw. How come you ignored the action in >>27739585?
>>27753286
This.
>>27753118
>>27753286
>>27753323
>You shake off the fancy, with a twinge of embarrassment.
>you trot down the street, panning your head left to right, looking for anything that might look like an auto shop.
>Ah! auto shop.
>right at the end of town, across from the post office, and next to a- a bean burger joint?
>Neat!
>You trot up, and you waste no time in looking for a mechanic.
>you can either go into the store or directly into the garage, or get a bean burger, if you decide.
>>27753495
Into the shop part. We can always eat later. We can't leave Greez and our car helplessly by the roadside!
>>27753495
>bean burger
Fuck it, too entincing. After we get the parts we need, grab a couple burgers to take back if we have spare cash remaining.
>>27753495
>>27753513
>>27753528
>You lick up the drool coming from your chin and power on into the shop.
>You passed by a popcorn machine, and looked in the eyes of a bulky earth pony, that, surprisingly, was brightly colored with a red coat and a dark orange and creme mane cascading down his face and over his left eye.
>"Can i help you maam'."
>Uhh, what's it called.
"My fifty seven bel air broke down near town."
>he blinks and laughs a bit.
>"We don't have any driveshafts, but we can tow her into town and order one up for about 80 dollars all around, that'll take a couple of days, of course."
>You're impressed on his ability to call you out.
>He points out to a tow truck parked on the side.
>"The tow's complimentary if you're not on the interstate."
>What should you do?
>>27753613
Guess we're spending a few days here. We need that shaft.D-driveshaft, I mean.
>>27753613
Is that for repairs also? Because I have a friend that can do the repairs, we just need the parts... and the tow.
>>27753636
>>27753613
"Any good hotels in town?"
>"the Inn right passed this, they've got their own restaurant, so their breakfast ain't free, and as long as you've got your ID that's from the states, then you'll be fine.
"Sure need that shaft, but i don't think Greez would be too pumped about it."
>He snickers, and you notice your mistake.
>You fluster, and run out, taking flight to the inn.
>You've got the choice of one queen bed or two queen beds.
>the queens 10 dollars a night, and the two queens is 15 a night.
>>27753675
i'll bring that up later.
>>27753708
You've got about $160 now after the parts and such.
>>27753703
Well we do kind need a ride to pick up Greez. See if we can hitch a ride with the tow vehicle.
We may have to share a bed unless we go for two and Greez pays his own half.
>>27753703
Greez said if he charges us over 45 he's jipping us. We should ask how much for just the parts and tow. Anywho, go for the two beds.
>>27753763
Seconded. Let Greez opine when we pick him up.
>>27753703
>>27753751
>>27753763
"I'll be back!"
>The mare behind the desk looks a bit confused as you bolt out of the mane hall and down the street.
>By the time you had gotten back to the auto repairs shop, the Tow car had gone.
>you can either fly after them, or just wait for them.
>>27754000
Ugghhh. Fine! Let's go look for photo opportunities as we continue to obsessively take a picture of every town we stop at. Maybe a decent birds-eye-view.
>>27754000
After them.
>>27754203
>>27754232
these sound like contradicting statments.
>>27754232
Why? They'll be back.
>>27754532
Unless there are no other towns along the way, I do believe you can combine them.
If not I'll go with >>27754203 for sake of progression.
>>27754000
>>27754599
you're right.
>You jump up, and extend your wings, using surgical precision to get your camera in your mouth.
>Then you take off, wildly taking pictures of things that look 'neat' from a Pegasus' view.
>But, by the time you see them, they're on their way back.
>You sloop down. and try to get their attention by parking yourself about 5 blocks from them, still in sight.
>They stop at a normal space, they're listening to Dion right now.
>And they seem to be sharing a little something something.
>You just laugh at the sight.
>So do you get in or do you ride in the convertible?
>>27754645
DUDEI think we're fine flying with them. Any places of interest in the city.
>>27754645
>And they seem to be sharing a little something something.
What?
>>27754829
Saliva.
>>27754799
>>27754829
they're probably smoking pot.
>>27754931
this
>>27754931
>>27754974
Well, that was unexpected. Follow them I guess or go straight to the burger place.
>>27755070
>>27754645
>You just follow them via flying, and head into the town where you grab a burger.
>Soon enough, a more than stoned Greez comes stumbling in, and orders a meal almost as large as yours, and sits waiting.
>he probably doesn't know you're there.
gonna pause here
>>27755715
Listen to what he's saying. Try not to laugh.Thanks for running!
take your bump and enjoy your day.
good thread here
