Since the thread is near dead I'm starting another. I'm going to get on later though. So in the meantime... just bump this one.
I mean we did kinda go bump central in the last thread.
Part 1: https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/27066901/#27072670
Part 2: https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/27091175/#27092369
Part 3: https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/27366220/#27371493
Part 4: https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/27449343/#27449343
As always I am open to suggestions.
Also.... hint hint.
>>27535121
Yay, you're back! Sort of.
>>27535121
Bumping!
>>27535584
Is your wifi back?
>>27535590
yes
>>27535630
YES!
Lets get dis show on the road
>>27505177
After a lesson from Starburst telling you it's actually illegal for you to stab somepony you go off to the kitchen.
>Time to do some more of that frustration cooking.
>What do you feel like doing tonight?
>Crystal Empire home cooking?
>Some good old fashion Ponyville fast food?
>Canterlot's finest cuisine?
>Maybe some delicacy from Saddle Arabia?
>What to choose....
>Neighpon it is.
>You decide to make some sushi, ramen, rice, lo mein, springrolls, along with other good Asian foods.
>Twilight's pantry is full of food anyways.
>Anyways you better start cooking.
>You finish your cooking.
>Just in time.
>It's dinner time!
>You and your family gather around the table....
>Along with Moon Dancer.
>Maybe you can poison her food.
>Nah, Starburst will most likely scold you again.
>Oh well.
>It's time to eat some good cooked food.
>>27536096
im hungry
>>27536096
HE'S BACK!
>>27536096
Yay, thank you for continuing.
I just realized if Nighty has issues living in his mother's shadow that's probably similar to what happened to Luna in her past.
>>27536114
taking a break.
I wanna get used to the internet again.
>>27536207
It would not be too similar, even if Luna can help. The conflict is more about living up to expectations (especially if he tries to live up to his mother or Starswirl).
Bamp
>>27536271
Or he is moving away from being a talented unicorn like Starswirl out of fears of not being able to live up to expectations.
bompo
Niner
He's back!
>>27536096
>The food is good....
>Everyone loved the food so far.
>"Whoever cooked this doesn't know how to season this properly."
>And there it is!!!!!
>Why?!
>Why did this bitch have to criticize your cook?!
>Does she not know what good reason!?!?
>Just ignore her.......
>..... just ignore her.......
>.........justignoreher........
...
...
...
>Fuck it!!!
I'll brb
>>27540003
Time for Flurry to learn a friendship lesson at the end of the episode.
This guy is taking longer than usual.
Did he really fix his internet?
>>27540700
Yeah
>>27540003
>It's time to make this bitch pay!
"Moon Dancer you Mother F-"
>"Other than that it was OK.", she complimented.
>You decided to stop your sentence.
>Maybe there is some hope for this Weeb.
>You stop for right now.
>So you then continue eating.
>"Although you need to work on your Spring Rolls."
>You then proceed to hit the weeabitch with your delicious Spring Rolls.
>Everyone then just stared at you.
>Moon Dancer just stares at you in awe.
>"D-.... Did you just slap me with a Spring Roll?"
"Bitch I just did!!"
>You need to stop watching rap videos
>>27541080
Lol.
>>27541080
>"Oh it is on you fucking weeaboo!"
>All of a sudden she lunges toward you.
>Now the fight begins!
>Be Night Light Jr.
>You are witnessing probably the best fight.
>Watching two nearly adult mares going at each other.
>You watch as Flurry basically rip Moon Dancer's sweater off.
>As Moon Dancer pulls on Flurry's hair.
>As you witness all of this, you have no idea of how to react.
>Should you be in horror?
>Should you be excited?
>Should you be find this erotic?
>There's so many things you see this as!
>Maybe you should probably leave the room.
>Be Twilight Sparkle.
>After eight minutes of this shit you clearly had enough.
>You then separate the two.
"Alright! Break it up!"
>"Your husbando is shit!!", Flurry screamed.
>"No! Your husbando is shit!!", Moon Dancer replied back.
"Shut it!! Both of your husbandos are shit!! Now break it up!!"
>>27541323
Eh, tomorrow I'm free. So I'll work on more tomorrow.
Sorry about this.
>>27541373
I understand
NLJ is right this is basically Bump Central.
>>27541080
Spring Rolls are tasty though.
>>27541323
Moondancer is clearly an adult though.
>>27542341
Flurry shouldn't have brought Moonie's husbando into this - shits cold man
>>27541323
Wonder who Moon Dancer's Husbando is?
Some obscure anime hero or something?
>>27541323
>After getting them to calm down you have them both sit on the living room couch.
"Now tell me.... what is this about?"
>"Flurry's a child that can't take an opinion.", Moon Dancer answered.
>"More like Moon Dancer doesn't know anything about good food!", Flurry replied.
"Flurry we already discussed this! When I say you need to calm down... you calm down."
>"She started it.", Flurry replied.
"So what if she did? You knew better than to do this."
>"All I did was slap her with a Spring Roll."
"That's the problem! You slapped Moon Dancer with a Spring Roll!"
>"Would you rather me use the lo mein?"
"That's not what I meant!!""
>"Probably would have also tasted horrible.", Moon Dancer added.
"Don't make use a mute spell on the two of you!"
>And just as you threatened them, they both shut the fuck up.
"I need you two to cooperate if we are going to get Nighty back into the dating world."
>>27545011
At least you are getting them to work together again.
>>27545011
Couldn't they undo the spell?
>>27545011
"I need you both to help me."
>"Twilight I can understand why you need my help.", Moon Dancer went on, "But why do you need her help?"
>"Because I know what a kid acts like.", Flurry replied.
>"Oh please. I already saw what ideas you gave Twilight of what personality is.", Moon Dancer sneered.
>"Something that's way better than your's.", Flurry replied.
"ENOUGH!! Now help me or so help me I will ground you both!"
>They then go back to being silent.
"Now.... I think I know how to fix this. Moon Dancer you can work on back story and personality, Flurry you can help me act like a twelve year old. How does that sound?"
>"Fine with me.", Moon Dancer said.
>"I actually just read that analysis on who your new parents are.... and I will say this.... it's bullshit.", Flurry answered.
>"What how?!", Moon Dancer demanded to know.
>"Well for one thing Sparkler and Comet Tail live here dumbass!!", Flurry remarked rudely.
>And now the bickerring starts again.
>Although Flurry did have point.
>You should have also know that Comet Tail and Sparkler lived here.
>You are technically the Princess of Ponyville.
>So you should have known.
>Now you need to fix this.
...
...
...
>Then you get an idea.
"Wait I know how we can fix this!"
>"Huh?"
>He two looked at you with confused expression on their face.
"Moon Dancer, you could play my mom!"
>>27545246
Well actually she is the princess of friendship, but she should know nearly everyone in Ponyville
Also, WTF at Moon Dancer playing Radiant Dawn's mom. That is actually a pretty good idea..
>>27545246
Brilliant!
>>27545246
That is a pretty fun idea.
>>27545246
>"You want me to be your mom?", Moon Dancer asked, feeling a bit honored, "I would love to!"
>"But there's a problem with that Aunt Twilight.", Flurry went, "Nigty has seen Moon Dancer and she's currently living here! That could cause problems with what's going on."
"Then we say that Moon Dancer is divorced and that she's receiving custody of her daughter soon."
>"You digging yourself deeper in a hole Aunt Twilight.", Flurry ranted.
"Doesn't matter I need you to teach how to be 12 again now!"
>"Why now!?"
"Because Nighty's date is tomorrow."
>Both Moon Dancer and Flurry just stared you.
>Tomorrow?!
>You have to try and get all this shit done by tomorrow?!
>Well this is going to suck.
"Look! If we pull off an all nighter than maybe we can actually pull this off without a hitch. So what do you to say? Can we all get along together for one night to get this done?"
>The two look at you.
>You and your puppy dog eyes.
>How could they say no to that.
>Flurry then sighs.
>"I guess I can help you for tomorrow.", Flurry said in defeat.
>"Ditto.", Moon Dancer followed.
"Yes! Thank you!!"
>You said as you embraced both of them for a hug.
>Now time to get this show on the road!
>Be Night Light Jr.
>It took all day but you finally finished up that robot.
>Whether you were actually going to use it as an assistant or a piece of art is beyond you.
>So now what?
>>27545457
Nighty is 11 in this story right?
>>27545457
He will have his own assistant like Spike.
I think I work better at night.
So taking a break.
>>27545557
See you later.
she's going to get caught.
bompo
bum
Night Light Jr, you thought about turning your green into a Fimfic story once you're done, or compiling it into a pastebin?
>>27547853
I think this was already asked.
>>27547853
Have no plans for FimFic.
>>27548298
I am curious how much they would like it.
impatient bump
>>27545457
>Maybe try using that animation spell again.
>Maybe this time it will start coming to life.
>You ready up that horn and fill it to the brim with magic.
>Time to Pinocchio this robot.
>You try to bring the robot to life again....
>Not even a bit of movement.
>This isn't really what you expected.
>Then again you never really expected this thing to work at all.
>You sigh.
>It doesn't seem to be worth trying to bring to life again.
>Maybe you just show it off as art.
>You were about to head off to bed.
>When you heard a knock coming from your door.
>You decide to check it out.
>You open the door.
>It's Starburst.
>"Hey Nerd.", she greets you playfully.
"Hey Short Stack."
>"So... can I come in?"
"Sure. I was about t go to bed though."
>"Oh.. Sorry about that then."
"No problem."
>Before Starburst was about to leave she then noticed something on your work desk.
>"Wait... you actually built a robot?"
".... More or less....."
>"I though you were actually joking about that."
"Nope... I was actually working on one."
>"Does it really move and such?"
"All I really planned for it to do was be m assistant. But every time I try to bring it life it doesn't work."
>Hmm... So you added everything from this house in order to make this?"
"Not really. Needed to go to the junkyard to get a few things for the outer coat."
>"That explains the rust.... so I'm guessing you're going to show this to mom?"
"Nope!"
>"What? You usually show mom everything you do. Hell I remember when you showing her the toilet every time you used it."
"I was three when that happened!"
>"Still did it."
>>27549241
"Well anyways, I want to try something on my own. I mean if I'm going to be good as Starswirl the Bearded I should start doing my own spells and start making something that will help me stand out."
>"And a robot would help?"
".... Not really. It was just something I wanted to do something on my own for fun."
>"OK then."
"Now if you don't mind I'm going to bed now."
>"AKA go masturbate."
"Exactly! .....WAIT!? WHAT!? NO! How did you know?!"
>"I live in a cabin with 3 other stallions. I know what pony semen smells like."
"Please don't tell mom I did it today."
>"Don't worry Book Worm, your secret's safe with me."
"Thanks Dumbo!"
>And with that she then leaves.
>Be Twilight.
>After hours of training and working on becoming a 12 year old again, you finally finish!
>Or at least look passable for now.
>"Alright! You're ready!", Flurry said.
"You sure?"
>"I don't usually agree with Flurry a lot.", Moon Dancer began, "But I see it working so far."
"So I passed?"
>"Sure.... if that's how you want to word it.", Flurry says.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-bK58aAvR0
>"She sure is acting like she did all those years ago.", Moon Dancer said watching you bounce around.
>>27549241
Reading now.
>>27549241
>That toilet line
Actually laughed out loud.
>>27549509
Gosh if I was Nighty this embarrassment would cause me to take a life of celibacy.
>>27549509
Here comes the awkward dating scenario.
>>27549241
You really read up on how these characters should behave.
>>27549509
>Anyways time to go to bed.
>You go bed with your husband.
>Time for the bedtime talk.
>"So... what have you been up lately?"
"Huh?"
>"You said been mostly 'training' from what I've been hearing."
"Oh... Well... yeah."
>"How are you training to set up your son to a blind date?"
"Well... I do have to be stealthy to watch my son go on his date."
>"Twilight, you don't need to watch Nighty going on his first date."
"But what if he does it again?"
>"Does what?"
"Like propose the poor filly to hoof herself again."
>"He should know better than that."
"I guess your right..."
>"Anyways it's time to get some sleep."
"Alright.... "
>It's time to sleep.
>You and Flash then start to go to sleep.
...
...
...
>What you expected some sex?
>It's not like you two have sex every night.
>You perverts.
>Be Night Light Jr.
>It's morning.
>So... Now what?
>Well you have a date today.
>You might as well get ready
>You go the bathroom.
>Take a shower.
>Brush your teeth.
>Comb your mane.
>Brushie Brushie.
>Shave....
>OK you didn't shave.
>But you did put on some perfume.
>Have to make yourself look and smell pretty.
>You know you have to.
>You know your mom really wants you to look pretty for this date.
>>27549966
Nice 4th wall joke.
>>27549966
Brianne brushie
>>27549966
I wonder if he is gonna wear a suit or a bowtie.
>>27550068
Then Starburst or Flurry complains he looks too nerdy
>>27549966
>You also take one of your dad'sPocket Knivesas well for protection.
>In case this chick tries something with you.
>Although if she did, your not sure how to react.
>Anyways it's time to get some nice clothes on.
>Luckily you have some clothes made by Rarity.
>It's the best suit you can get.
>A nice suit and bow tie.
>Cause you know.
>Bow Ties are awesome.
>You then head back to your room to read a few comics.
>You want to keep your suit clean.
>Anyway.
>You need to keep clean and wait for your date.
>Be Twilight.
>You need to get ready for your son's date.
>Good thing your husband is off to work.
>You gather around with your niece and friend.
>You three begin to recap.
>"Alright, you are?", Flurry asked.
"Radiant Dawn."
>"Backstory?", Moon Dancer asks.
"I'm your daughter currently in your custody, and a student of Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns."
>"Which class?", Moon Dancer continues.
"Your class!"
>"This is amazing!", your niece congratulates, "You're doing an amazing!! I can't wait to see you in action!!"
>"Action?", Moon Dancer asks.
>"You know going all kissy, smoochy, stuff.", Flurry responds.
"I'm not going to do that."
>"What?", Flurry responded, "But that's the best part of the date?!"
"I'm not going to make out with my son!"
>>27550290
He sure is paranoid.
>>27550290
He could be the pony version of Bill Nye. I have no idea what a good pun would be for it though.
>>27550290
>"Not even a tiny peck on the cheek?", you hear Moon Dancer ask.
>.... Wait Moon Dancer?
>Why the hell would she ask this?
>Anyways it's probably best to respond.
"No Moon Dancer. Not even a peck on the cheek. Actually maybe... because that's not really sexual... unless he finds it way."
>"Don't worry Aunt Twi!", Flurry confirmed, "No kid would ever find a kiss on the cheek sexual."
"Except for you."
>"Yeah, except for me."
"Anyways I better put on my disguise. Flurry make the excuse that I went off to fix a friendship problem."
>"Yes ma'am!", Flurry said as she flew to Nighty's room.
>Now it's just you and Moon Dancer.
>It's time!
>"You ready for this?", Moon Dancer asked.
"Yes!"
>You said as you began to use your spell.
>Be Night Light Jr.
>You continue to read your comic waiting for your date.
>When all of a sudden Flurry bursts through the door!
>"NIGHTY! HOLY FUCK!!!"
>This made you jump for a bit.
>You then get your composure back.
"Flurry... What are you doing?"
>"Your date is here and your mom is out!"
"Mom's out?"
>"Yeah.... she had to fix a friendship problem."
"Oh... well that makes sense."
>"Anyways get your ass down there and go impress that filly!"
"..... OK...."
>Well it's time.
>Time to meet this mystery filly that your mom talked about.
>Who knows maybe this date will go bad and Api will end up having to help you.
>That would be the best scenario.
>Hopefully though this date will be like butter.
>In other words smooth.
>You are now near Moon Dancer's Room.
>Because that's where your date is.
>You then knock on the door.
>"Just a second!"
>You hear a high pitched noise coming from within.
>Must be your date.
>You wait for a few more seconds.
>"Alright you can come in now!"
>Alright!
>Time to see where this leads to.
>>27550478
Thank you for coming back.
>>27550478
This story is really cute.
>>27550290
It is gonna be funny when Nighty tries to kiss her.
>>27550478
Come on Twi, just a kiss! Hee hee.
>>27550478
>There you see her
>Sitting there across the way
>She don't got a lot to say
>But there's something about her
>OK maybe those last two set of lyrics were wrong.
>But that still doesn't effect on how you feel.
>She's... cute.
>Very cute.
>She then looks at you.
>With those gorgeous purple eyes.
>Well...
>Go on!
>Introduce yourself!!
"U-um.... hi."
>Nice job Romeo!
>"Hello.", she replies back.
>You both at each other awkwardly...
>You start getting nervous
>You don't know how to react.
>You continue on introducing yourself.
"M-my name is Night Light Jr, but most ponies call me Nighty."
>"Hello Nighty, my name is Radiant Dawn, a student of Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns."
"Oh.... Your from Canterlot?"
>"Nah, I was actually raised in Manehatten mostly."
"Manehatten?"
>"Manehatten."
"Hmm... didn't know Celstia visited Manehatten."
>"Anyways, I'm here because I am now in custody of my mom."
"In custody... with your mom? OK... but who's your mom?"
>"That would be me!!", screamed a nervous Moon Dancer.
>Making the tone kind of awkward for everyone.
>She then coughs.
>"I'm her mother.", she then answered calmly.
"Really I didn't know."
>"Well I met a nice unicorn and one thing led to the other."
"Flurry told me you were basically a holy virgin."
>A small cringe then appeared on Moon Dancer's face.
>"S-she did huh?", she said gritting her teeth.
>Her eyes obviously looking for Flurry.
>"We can search for my mom's stretch marks later after our blind date.", your date responded.
"Oh yeah... I have that."
>"Anyways I will see you later mom!", Dawn said as she then hugged her mother.
>Moon Dancer looked a bit surprised when her daughter hugged her.
>As if she never really had something like this.
>She then finally hugged back.
>"I-I'll see you later too honey.", Moon Dancer responded.
>Your date then trotted out the door.
>"Come on Nighty! Let's go!", Dawn said with excitement.
>You then left.
>But you could have sworn that you saw Moon mouthed something.
>>27550478
Imagine if Twilight really enjoyed her dates with Nighty, maybe that she is shocked how good of a boyfriend he is.
>>27550649
Considering they spent so much time together I would be surprised if she didn't. I think Twilight might find her relationship with her son as Dawn very different than her relationship with her son as herself.
>>27550643
I wonder if Api is gonna be jealous about Nighty's relationship with Radiant Dawn.
>>27550643
My heart melts reading this.
>>27550643
As weird as this should be, it is really adorable.
>>27550643
I wonder if Starburst is going to be immediately suspicious
Well I did about seven posts today.
That should be enough to satisfy you all.
So what do you guys think so far?
>>27550787
I think Nighty is too suspicious at this point, I was thinking he should be accepting what happens as normal or making excuses for it or even just ignoring it. I don't want this storyline to end too early!
>>27550787
It is cute.
>>27550643
>>"We can search for my mom's stretch marks later after our blind date.", your date responded.
What The Fuck Twiggles
boomp
>>27535121
I would plow the one with the pink mane
>>27552655
That is Radiant Dawn, Twilight's disguised form.
p10
>>27550643
>"Flurry told me you were basically a holy virgin."
>Implying that Flurry think Moon Dancer has never had sex with anyone.
Come on we all know that she had to have experimented with Twilight at some point.
>>27550787
Loving what you've done so far. Also:
>Moon Dancer looked a bit surprised when her daughter hugged her.
>As if she never really had something like this.
Ok, that hurt.
>>27550643
>Little Mermaid lyrics.
I'm surprised no one has raised their pitchforks and torches.
>>27556445
Wait what? Where?
>>27556476
>>27550643
>>There you see her
>>Sitting there across the way
>>She don't got a lot to say
>>But there's something about her
So... When's NLJ coming back?
>>27556681
Give him time man. He ain't a writing machine.
bamp!
>>27556968
This
The new episode is killing this thread!Select Eggs
Page 7 BUMP
You need to update!
>>27556488
I see now!
It's "Kiss the Girl!"
>>27550787
It's great.
Page Nine bump
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PirVtiJuvDs
>>27550643
>You then start heading out.
>You leading your blind date to somewhere.
...
...
...
>You didn't really plan this through.
>You have no idea where to take her.
>So far it just been you.
>Her.
>Sitting on a park bench trying to figure out where you're going.
>You look around.
>There must be somewhere.
>You then notice something from the distance.
>You see Sugar Cube Corner.
>The best place to get sugary snacks.
>Also rated number place to go to durring Hearts and Hooves day according to your school news paper..
>So let's try there first.
>But first you better see if it's OK.
"Do you like cake?"
>"Well it's OK to have once in a while."
"Because I know an awesome baker that loves making cake."
>"Really now?"
"Yeah.... She's in that building."
>You really need to stop these random pauses.
>You're nervous yes.
>But you lost Pixel because of your nervous pauses.
>Just imagine you're talking to someone else.
>Like Api.
...
...
...
>Bad Example.
>OK how about mom!
>Mom is probably the best example.
>>27560841
Reading.
>>27560841
I hope he accidentally calls her "Mom" and she freaks out asking how he knew.
>>27560841
>So whenever you talk to her just think of her as mom.
>That'll probably help.
>Anyways you lead her to Sugar Cube Corner.
>You then find a nice window seat.
>Most ponies like those.
>You then pull the seat out for your date.
>Your mom taught you to always be the gentlecolt.
>So you both get a menu.
"So... what do you want?"
>"Well... I like chocolate cake."
"There's a sale on that today."
>"Huh... so there is. OK then I would like some chocolate cake!"
"Alright. Just wait for the nice mare to come over and ask us what we want."
>You both wait for the waitress to come over.
>Then all of a sudden the waitress appears out of nowhere.
>"HEY NIGHTY!!!", the pink mare greets with excitement.
"Hey Pinkie."
>"So how are you doing?"
"Good."
>"So what would you like good sir?", Pinkie asks.
"I'll take the vanilla milk shake."
>"Alright! One Vanilla shake!", Pinkie repeated, "And what about yo-"
>Pinkie then stops her sentence.
>She then stares at Dawn.
>She leans closer.
>"Do I know you?", Pinkie asks.
>>27561060
>Be Radiant Dawn.
"Umm... nope! Not at all! I just got here."
>Oh no!
>You never thought this would happen.
>That Pinkie would actually recognize you.
>Please let her leave soon!
>Please!!
>The pink mare continues to stare at you.
>"Okie Dokie Loki!!", she says with a huge smile on her face, "Sorry about that. I just thought you were familiar."
"Nope! Just got here."
>"Anyways, I'm Pinkie Pie!", she introduced herself, "Party Pony Extraordinaire!"
"That's a title...."
>"Anyways! If you ever need a party planned, I'm the pony you need.", the pink mare responded.
"Th-thanks...."
>"Anyways what do you need?"
"Chocolate cake."
>"Alright!! One vanilla milkshake and a chocolate cake coming right up.
>She then hopped away.
>Be Night Light Jr.
>After that awkward face off you both then wait for your sweets.
>Dawn was looking a bit nervous back there.
>As if she was hiding something.
>Maybe she's a relative of the Pies.
>Nah.
>Couldn't be.
>Now...
>How to pass the time?
>Well talking works.
"So how long have you been in Celestia's School?"
>She then diverts her attention back to you.
>"Oh... how long.... about a year."
"A year? Sounds like you've been studying a lot."
>"Yeah... old habits die hard. You study and study and study, making it really hard to make friends."
"So you have no friends?"
>".... you can say that."
"Huh?"
>"Well I did have three or four but I barely hang out with them because I need to study a lot."
"I see."
>"And because I was being such a shut in my dad thought it would be a good idea for me to get into dating and such. Told my mom to set me up with somepony immediately."
"Wow.... I thought my relationship with my parent was awkward."
>"So what about you? What are you doing?"
"Aside from this blind date my mother set up, I really wasn't doing anything."
>"Yeah... sorry if I ended ruining your day."
"Oh no... it wasn't your fault. If anything you should say it's more our moms' fault."
>"Ha ha... yeah... we could blame them."
>>27561050
Since she acts so much like her I wouldn't be surprised, especially if she slips up the voice.
Shit! Forgot my name!!
>>27561514
>She then looked a bit distressed.
>"Umm... may I please be excused?", Dawn asked.
"OK....."
>She then went to the bathroom.
>Probably to do her business.
>After about what felt like ten minutes she finally comes back.
>"So, what did I miss?"
"Well our food came here."
>"Oooh... It looks tasty."
>You then continue on with your blind date.
>You drink your Vanilla Milkshake while she eats her Chocolate cake.
>After a few minutes you finish your sweets.
>You then head out of Sugar Cube Corner.
>Now it's time to go to somewhere else.
>So where to now?
"So... anywhere you want to go?"
>"Um... maybe go somewhere like the park"
"The park? Sounds nice."
>"We can read some nice books there."
"Read? OK....."
>"Reading in the park?
>Why haven't you ever thought about doing this?
>Well you two go the park.
>You were about to read a book that Dawn was carrying.
>When all of a sudden.
>"Hey! Isn't that Twilight's kid!?"
>"It's Twilight Kid!!"
>"Who is he with?!"
>"Is that a filly?!"
>"Is that his filly friend?!"
>Really!?
>Now of all places!
>"What's going on?!", Dawn asked.
"Don't ask!! Run!!!"
>You then drag your date with you.
>"Where are we going?!"
"Somewhere I know we'll lose them!"
>And the best place to lose them!
>Sweet Apple Acres!!
>>27561957
Oh boy, Sweet Apple Acres. Are we going to see a jealous Api?
I am fucking loving this. Keep it up.
>>27561957
>Well you succeeded.
>You lost them.
...
...
...
>But now you're both lost.
"Why do I always get lost here?!"
>"You get lost here?"
"N-not all the time."
>Actually a lot.
"But somepony usually comes here to find me."
>"Oh...."
"Yeah... she would usually find me by now."
>"So... where is she?"
"I have no idea at the moment. But if we wait patientl-"
>"Actually I see the entrance."
"Huh?"
>"The entrance to the orchard. It's just a few inches south from here."
"Oh.... How did I not notice this?"
>"You have to learn to around your environment more often Nighty. Otherwise you're going to get lost all the time."
>You scoff at her lecturing.
"Thanks mom!"
>"No problem."
>She then stopped for a moment.
>You don't know why she did.
>Although looking at her expression she seemed kind of nervous.
"Umm... Dawn... Are you OK?"
>"Um... no... I'm OK.", she said.
"So... how about we hang out here?'
>"Here?"
"Yeah. If they don't mind that is."
>"Well we can I guess."
"Alright. I'll go ask Applejack."
>"OK then."
>You then left to go find Applejack.
>>27561957
Now Twilight is learning things from a different perspective.
>>27561957
That would suck, I wonder what the Equestria equivalent of Gawker and TMZ are.
>>27562295
Actually laughed out loud with the mom comment.
>>27562295
Uh oh, AJs going to get really suspicious, I wonder what Dawn will do.
>>27562295
>You then head off to the Apple Household.
>You knock on the door.
>You wait for one of them to respond.
>The door finally opens.
>The Pony to answer you is none other than Api Apple.
>She yawns.
>Obviously she just woke up.
>This was her day off and she was going to sleep in.
>She then scratches her flank.
>"Yeah, yeah, what is it?", she asks with a bit of annoyance.
"Hey Api, is Applejack home? "
>"No Nighty... My mom and her went to sell apples."
"Oh... Do you think she would mind if me and Radiant Dawn stay at the orchard for a bit?"
>"No... Not at all. She used to let Starburst train in the orchard all the time."
"Fair argument."
>"Just go on and hang out with whoever. I want to go back to sleep."
"Thanks Api."
>You then start leaving.
>Time to continue this date.
>Be Api Apple.
>You're still tired.
>But you pretty sure your mom and aunt won't mind if Nighty had his date with....
>Date?
>Wait...
>Nighty has a date?!?!
>You're now wide awake!!
>You now have to witness this for yourself!!
>You thought the whole blind date thing was BS made up from his mother.
>Time to go spy on them!
>>27562518
She is going to try and embarass Nighty on his date by bringing up his tiny dick.
>>27562518
This is gonna be fun.
>>27562518
I predict AJ is going to want to know Radiant Dawn's whole backstory and family history just because she likes to learn things like that.
>>27562544
>"You seem obsessed with it."
Idea.
Nighty gets into philosophical and more scientific talk with Radiant Dawn. She realizes that Nighty is way more knowledgeable than she thought since she actually doesn't try to dismiss his ideas or findings if they contradict with what she has read/researched.
>>27562518
>Be Night Light Jr
>Now you return to Dawn.
>She was busy reading her book for a bit.
"Hey Dawn! I'm back!"
>She then noticed you as trotted up to her.
>"Oh hey Nighty! What did Mrs Applejack say?"
"Applejack isn't h-"
>"Mrs Applekack."
".... She doesn't like being called that."
>"Don't you think you should give some respect?"
"Well anyways.. Applejack isn't here at the moment."
>"Then I'm guessing we can't be here."
"Well Api said that they wouldn't mind."
>"Api?"
"Yeah... she's a friend of mine."
>"OK.... But are you sure they wouldn't mind?"
"Well I'm pretty sure I can trust Api at this moment."
>"OK... if you trust her."
"So.... What are you reading?"
>"A compilation of written works by Starswirl the Bearded."
"Woah! Seriously?!"
>"It's one of my favorite books to read from time to time."
"Starswirl is like my biggest inspiration!!"
>"Really now?"
"Yeah! I want to be as powerful and good at magic just like him someday."
>"That sounds amazing!"
"Yeah! I plan on being the greatest spell master ever!"
>"Like 'Night Light Jr the Bearded'?"
"Well more like 'Nighty the Wise and Honorable' or 'The Great and Powerful Night Light'."
>"Hmm... I would go with the first one."
>"Or Nighty the Tiny Dicked!", cried a voice behind the tree.
>You then turn around.
>You then see Api hiding behind the tree.
"Api!?"
>After a few seconds she then comes out of hiding.
>"Hi Nighty.", Api said.
"Api!! Why did you bring that up!?"
>"I thought she would need to know just in case she was wanting sex with you."
>You could really see Dawn blushing extremely hard.
>You were even red yourself from blushing.
"She's not going to ask for sex after one date!!"
>"I thought maybe she was into that kind of stuff."
"Besides! I am pretty sure my mom or her mom would not approve of that!"
>"EXACTLY!", Dawn screamed.
>Making the whole group go silent for a bit.
>Dawn then coughed.
>"M-my mom would highly disapprove of that.", Dawn replied nervously.
>>27562846
I find these lectures she has amusing. Wait until he swears
>>27562846
Going to take a break.
Give out some ideas if you want.
Also what do you guys think of the 7 posts so far?
>>27563047
Amazing.
>>27562846
My sides.
>>27563047
Great
>>27562814
I like that.
>>27563047
Love it.
>>27562846
Your story is going to get me fired.
>>27564061
Why?
>>27562814
She might try to cut him off at first, but then find her discussions stimulating.
I would like to see her try and have these discussions again as his mom, notice his behavior is way different (like unenthusiastic) around her.
>>27564061
Why the fuck are you reading 4chan at work?!
Do you like letting your coworkers know about this?
>>27549880
Not really.
I used to them all the time.
Actually it's been a while since I read them.
But to get things straighten. Here's how wrong I am.
For on thing all the ages are wrong.
>Night Light Jr in story 12
>Night Light Jr in Kilalaverse 11
>Api Apple in story 10
>Api Apple in Kilalaverse 8
Although someone did mention that the inclusion of Flurry did somehow fuck up the timeline, I still hold responsibility for it.
The relationships are a bit off. (Excerpts from source)
>Nighty is very close to both his parents. He and Twilight obviously have a lot in common and can relate to each other on a whole new level. They often practice magic or read with each other. Though he and Flash are very different, he doesn't have the same relationship issues that Starburst has with Twilight. This is mostly because Night Light is not at that age yet where seeing eye to eye with your parents gets harder and because he puts in the effort to try and be more like his father and become stronger in his weak areas. He and Flash like to roughhouse and go out together and adventure with each other. Flash is the only one Nighty feels comfortable doing adventurous things with.
>Nighty and Star have a typical sibling relationship. The seem to irritate one another more often than not. They are just too different and tend to butt heads. He really gets on her nerves when he starts kissing up to their parents right after Star does something wrong in order to seem like the better child. She gets on his nerves by calling him a scaredy cat and weakling. When they're not fighting like this, they have a lot of warm and fuzzy moments. They truly care for each other in the end.
So yeah... I'm not that good.
>>27566381
*Used to read
>>27566381
Not to mention in the actual Kilalaverse, Night Light Jr is more likely to causally flirt with fillies because he thinks all of them want to be his filly friend.
>>27566381
Ahh all right, but you actually did get Nighty's relationship with his mother and sister, i dont see why you think you messed up.
Page 10!
>>27566381
So the ages are slightly off, that's not really much of a big deal.
The relationships don't seem off at all though.
Bump!!
NLJ was on literally an hour ago.
Why isn't he doing anything?!
Bump!!
>>27562846
>"OK... That's nice to know.", Api said at your awkward date, "By the way is your 'date' going to introduce herself to me?"
"OH! Um... Api Apple this is Radiant Dawn."
>Api then stared at your date.
>"Ah'm sorry Nighty but have you ever notice that mom always made friends with names similar to her's?", Api pointed out.
"What do you mean?"
>"I mean you got Sunset Shimmer, Starlight Glimmer, Sunburst, and if you want to count relatives there's also Starburst and you, Night Light."
".... How did I never notice this? Have you ever noticed this Dawn?"
>As you turn around to ask your date you notice that she is missing.
"Where did she go?"
>Be Radiant Dawn.
>Slowly becoming Twilight Sparkle.
>Why is the spell wearing off!?
>It shouldn't be wearing off just yet.
>Has it really been an hour.
>Well you did eat some cake, then ran away from the media, Nighty somehow got lost in this orchard, and then you had to wait for him to Api and back.
>Hmm... guess that does make up an hour.
>Anyways now you have to wait and recharge a bit before you continue.
>But that takes about twenty minutes.
>How do you pass by twenty minutes with you being gone from your date.
>And without being seen as well to boot.
>You have to hide somewhere.
>Maybe in the trees?
>Be Night Light Jr.
>Well your date somehow left you?
>You have no idea where she went.
"Well this is great! I spent about what an hour and a half and she's not wanting to stay with you any longer. Now how do you spend the rest of the day?"
>Api then looked at you.
>"Wanna hang out in the orchard and wait to see if she returns?"
"... sure... But what Am I suppose to do?"
>"Well... I could teach you how to properly buck apples."
"And that will help me how?"
>"Maybe it give her an idea that your strong."
"An idea that I'm strong....? Yeah! That does sound like a good idea!"
>"Alright! Follow me and I'll show you where you can learn where to buck apples."
>>27569538
Hahaha good point on the names.
>>27569538
Oh yeah, and all of them have magic involved in their special day talent
>>27569538
Do you think Twilight is going to come back as herself and make an excuse for Radiant Dawn's absence?
>>27569538
IT'S A TRAP!
>>27569538
>You then follow Api.
>She take you to one of the Apple's apple tree.
>"You see this?", Api began, "This is Bessy! Bessy likes to hand ponies apples with the lightest tap."
>Api proves this by getting into position and lightly tap the tree.
>Making three apples fall.
>"This is our stage one training tree.", Api continued to coach.
"Really? So I have to do is just give it a light tap?"
>"Exactly."
"Doesn't sound to hard."
>You then get closer to the tree.
>You then simply tap the tree.
...
...
...
>Nothing happens.
"I thought you said a tap would work?"
>"Well that's all you're simply doing. Just tapping it."
"Which is what you told me to do!"
>"But you're not doing it like an Apple would."
"And how would an apple simply tap a tree?! They have no hoov-.... OK that was stupid for me to say."
>Api then sighs.
>"Get into the damn position Nighty."
"Alright! Alright!"
>You then get into an apple bucking position.
>Seems like an easy pose to do.
>You then give a good old hind kick the tree.
>And yet no apples still fall.
>"You're not doing it right.", Api criticized.
"How?! How am I not doing it right?!"
>"Get into position again."
>You do as she says.
>You get into your apple bucking position.
>You then started kicking.
>"Now hold that pose!!", she commanded.
>You then started holding the position you were in.
>She then inspected your body a bit.
>She even went as far as feeling your hind legs for a bit.
>Way to close!
>Please don't let this be a way for her to rape you.
>She then moves back.
>"I know your problem Nighty."
"Huh?"
>You said as you finally started falling forward.
>Making it to where your roll on your back.
>"The problem is you're putting too much focus on your front legs."
"Yeah... how else am I suppose to stay standing?"
>"While that is true, you also have to think about the force you need for your back legs as well. I mean how else are you going to make those apples fall?"
"I guess you have a point."
>"Now let's try again."
Taking a break.
>>27569765
I forgot the Apple Family had names for their various trees.
>>27569765
Now we discuss Earth Pony Magic.
>>27570020
It all comes from the cock
>>27570035
I couldn't find the scene itself but here.
https://youtu.be/xYfgEdnlVtM?t=19m27s
Bump!!
>>27570167
>Nostalgia Critic films
bomp
I'll be on at 8:00.
>>27570035
Also no.
>>27570884
Also what's wrong with the Critic?
>>27571527
His reviews are still good, but his films are cringey circlejerks.
>>27571527
8.00 where?
Bumping it's5a few minutes over 8:00 I gotta write something!!
>>27569765
"OK.. I'll try again."
>You take Api's advice to heart.
>You are going to try and make an apple fall from Bessy!
>Not just one though.
>5 maybe with this kick!
>You get into position.
>You focus your energy to your hind legs.
>You have them at full power.
>You then kick the tree!
...
...
...
>You are now in the Apple household getting patched up.
>You didn't break your leg (Thank Celestia), but it sure as Tartarus hurts.
>You get another bag of frozen fruit to cover up that leg hind leg of yours.
>"It's official.", Api began, "You are the weakest pony I've ever seen."
"I got an apple though."
>"Yeah, you got AN apple."
>Api said as she started eating the apple you worked so hard to knock down.
"Well there goes impressing Dawn with strength."
>"Well not exactly."
>You look at Api with a bit of surprise and confusion.
"What do you mean?"
>"You still got that mental strength of your's. I know for a fact you can use magic that no colt or filly knows at their age. Why not impress her with those?"
"Come on Api. You know my magic isn't that good."
>"Nighty you know 20 spells."
"I know them... that doesn't mean I used them."
>"Come on Nighty! There has to be one spell you read up that you know how to use."
".... WWell there is one..."
>"Well go ahead and impress her with it!"
"Are you really sure she will be impressed by it? I mean what if I fail? It all goes horribly wrong and then all the sudden she leaves me. But before doing that she slaps me. And after that Pixel comes out of nowhere and slaps me across the face as well. Then Echo, Then Flurry. Moon Dancer. Lyra. My mom's friends. Every mare in Ponyvil-"
>"Nighty!"
>Api yelled at you.
>"Calm the FUCK down!! You're just as worried a my mom was when it came to her cutie mark."
>>27572319
"Sorry.... you know I ca't take failure."
>"Well how can you take failure if you never try?"
"I guess your right."
>Api then took a look at the clock.
>"Hey Nighty... How long do you think your date stood you up?"
"I think it's been thirty minutes.
>"Well I better lead you out then. Looks like she wasn't coming back anyways."
"I wonder why she left."
>"Well she looked like a social introvert. Maybe she wasn't used to the idea of dating."
"That would make sense."
>"And if she does have the ovaries to come waltzing back in here asking for you, I'll jest tell her to bugger off."
"I think it would be better if you told her that I went home."
>"I guess that works too."
>The two of you then start heading off to the entrance of the famous Ponyville Barn.
>You were about to leave until...
>"Mind if I ask you one more question Nighty?", Api asked.
"Sure... fire away."
>"So from what you saw with her so far... is she type?"
".... Well... she's cute... she's smart... she also has an interest in Starswirl.. and..."
>You mumble the last one out.
>"I'm sorry... what was that?"
"She has a nice...."
>"I can't hear you!!", Api said playfully.
"She has a nice flank OK!"
>You finally admitted as you blush profusely.
>"....... So do you like doing ana-"
"SHUT UP!!!!!!!!"
>>27572319
You are awesome Night Light
>>27572487
Did you get that fear of failure thing from the latest episode?
>>27572593
Actually from the actual bio.
http://kilala97.deviantart.com/art/Next-Generation-Night-Light-Jr-455649545
Also she changed the design a bit.
>>27572635
Yeah, I just saw that, I thought she quit pones.
>>27572635
The back part of his mane looks too much like Starburst.
Nighty is probably weak because he rarely exercises.
>>27572487
>Be Twilight Sparkle.
>You were busy hiding in the trees to get away from you your son for a bit.
>Unfortunately for you though, you took a nap among the trees.
>Using the Transformation spell constantly seems to make you tired a bit.
>After 40 minutes though you finally wake up.
>You look around the environment.
>You then notice something.
>You don't see Nighty anywhere!
>Oh shit!
>You realized you slept off most of your date.
>You decide to go home at this point.
>Must be where he went off too.
>You then start flying home.
>After a few minutes you finally reach home.
>You decide to enter through your bedroom window.
>You come in as quietly as possible.
>Be Starburst.
>Been mostly hanging out with Flurry.
>Although it's kinda boring today to hang out with her today.
>She's mostly been studying.
>You then try going around the castle.
>Maybe something cool will happen.
>All of a sudden you hear a loud crash.
>It's coming from your mom's room.
>Must be the assassin!
>You don't have your spear.
>So you're going to have to rely on your hoof to hoof combat.
>Here's hoping they're not carrying a weapon.
>You stay quiet.
>You then finally barge in.
"Put your hooves up right now!!"
>"What I'm innocent!! I swear! I'm not a pedoph-"
"Mom?"
>"Oh... hi Starburst."
"What are you doing?"
>"Well the front door was locked and I thought about trying something new."
"So you decided to enter through the window?"
>"Yeah. It was open and it looked interesting."
"OK...."
>"So... see ya!"
>And with that your mom left.
>>27572985
Starburst asks why her mom couldn't use the door bell.
>>27573089
Or how her mom has a door unlocking spell anyway.
Not really feeling it today guys.
Maybe tomorrow.
>>27573136
You did fine.
I wonder if Api is going to try to sabotage the relationship.
>>27573690
I hope Api tries to pull some moves on Nighty to gain his loveand then Twilight finds herself getting jealous.
>>27572635
Some of her new designs are pretty hit or miss. This one, as well as star's, looked much better before. But dove's looks much better.
>>27573136
Don't worry about it. It's not good to write when you don't want to.
>>27574194
It could even work as a platonic thing, since she could quickly realize that she really enjoys spending time with her kid.
It would be more funny for the Princess of Friendship to be in a situation like this..
>>27574364
inb4 Nighty goes in for the kiss and gets rejected and Twi makes everything worse
>>27574194
>"Nighty I forbid you to hangout with Api!"
"Why?"
>"Because she's ruining your dates and making m- I mean Dawn look bad in comparison! Not to mention she's a bad influence. And you usually end up getting hurt at the end."
>>27576245
>Usually gets hurt.
>Api broke his dick.
>Api gave him a black eye.
>And most recently she had him injure his own leg.
Dear god what the fuck am I reading? I feel for this kid, sincerely.
>>27576468
Must be a huge revenge after Nighty punched her on Nightmare Night.
When's the next installment?
Bamp!!!
>>27572635
Will you put new design in the story somehow.
Like Nighty somehow tried giving himself a new mane cut or something?
>>27577973
when you least expect it
>Dawn takes Nighty to various social events to get him out of the house much to his dismay
>The cutie map calls Twilight while she is in disguise and she needs to desperately hide it or she brings Nighty along on a friendship lesson whilst constantly needing to refresh her disguise.
NLJ is late.
>>27582540
Sorry but it's Monday... and I can't think of anything to type at the moment.
It's always Monday where it's like this.
>>27583112
Nothing about Starburst thinking there is something suspicious about her mom and the door?
>>27583156
Not one that I can think of that sounds good.
Apparently Kilala made something new.
>>27583400
Why not have Twilight ask about Night Light Jr's Date?
>>27583400
This style looks good on her characters
>>27581411
"But Dawn I don't want to go to the Renascence festival as a clown."
>"Oh come on! It'll be funny!"
>>27586731
>"Now dance court jester! DANCE!! Amuse your princess!!"
>>27587343
>"Sing the song of your tiny cock!"
>>27586731
Is that where the friendship problem would be?
