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Old Thread: >>27171296

Tumblr archive: http://marble-pie.tumblr.com/tagged/apa/

previous issue: https://www.patreon.com/posts/pdf-of-issue-3-5202020
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>>27202743
AAaaaAAAaaaa
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>>27202743

Dis gon be good
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Ahhhhh yis new page.

Grammar is pretty good for the most part, only really noticed one small error in the fourth panel.

>by far him andknowledge of his existence is contained

I think it should rather read as "So far, knowledge of his existence is contained."
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>>27202743
>I want to hear what they know
Arrives
They tell her
>he is attracted to fucking ponies
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>>27202743
>Dear sister, I receveied
*received

>Of all the threats to face Equestria, this one I never expected to face again.
syntax is a little wonky since its about equestria, and then about her. id recommend something like:
Of all the threats Equestria has seen, this is one I never expected it to see again.

>Stones, yes. But
could be one sentence that continues
Stones, yes, but

>but this reports description of human matches perfectly.
*but the description in this report matches that of a human perfectly.

>If ponies find out what... etc
another wonky syntax, id recommend something like:
If ponies were to discover what a human is capable of, the peace and harmony we worked to ensure thus far will be lost.

>the human in her family farm, by far
end the sentence here and start a new one.
*the human in her family farm. By far

>By far him andknowledge of his existence is contained.
i guess this was just a derp moment.
*So far, all knowledge of his existence has been contained.

>No, but this does require a personal visit for certain..
two periods. another syntax recommendation:
*No, but this matter will certainly require a personal visit.

>I need to see how much they know and if our roles as leader are endangered.
*We need (if she intends on them both visiting. if not, leave it as is.)
*roles as leaders
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>>27202743


>>27202803, here. >>27202812 covered this a hell of a lot better than I did.

Guess this is what I get for trying to correct spelling and grammar at 3:30 in the morning..
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>>27202831
thanks. its 430am here, friend.
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>>27202812
>>27202803
Thanks.
Here's the new and improved.
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>>27202847
no problem. seems most of them didnt make the edit though?
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>>27202857
Actually only one line, and that's because I missed it, I think I implemented all the rest of them.
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And this should cover them all, my apologies for doubleposting this page. But now it should be good.
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>>27202743
>>27202868

Who is best princess?
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>>27202873
Cousin Crackle
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>>27202868
heh, are you a bit sleepy?

>this one i never expected it to see this one again
this is one I never expected it to see again.

>so far him and knowledge of his existence is contained.
So far, all knowledge of his existence has been contained.
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>>27202878
Ahh, yeah, I've been up some 28 hours and this is third such overtly long run consequently due to having to try to juggle art, 3D course and game project all at the same time, helping a pal with his move and trying to fit in some gym and eating in there too. Here's to hoping things slow down soon!
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>>27202905
you need to go the fuck to sleep m8. may vivid dreams of your waifu be yours this night.
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>>27202876
good taste
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>>27202743
>sunbutt finds anon fucking the girls
>sunbutt fights anon but anon trips and gets to taste the ponut
Either way I'm hyped to how anon fucks this up
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>>27202905
Luna is waiting for you in the dreamworld, friend. get some rest
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>>27202905
>That fucking Sun rump.
Jesus Christ Pencils, you want me to have a heart attack, don't you?
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>>27202743
Will this page cause any shitstorms again?
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>>27203185
Is mayonaise a gender?
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>>27202743
remember when this was a silly comic about anon having an harem?
me neiter
its sad when a fanfic writer gets over his head but this is clearly fallout equestria levels of bad.
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>>27203253
What a weird gripe you are having, I am merely adding to anon's harem here.
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>>27203344
quiet drawmonkey, go draw more juicy plots.
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>>27202905

We gonna to have cadence in this comic?

The alicorn of love would be handy in this situation. Also she would tease lime with her crush whit anon
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>>27203344
>fanfic getting more attention than the show
i present to you the dead fandom graveyard, you may pick a spot, we secretly move them to a common grave a couple of years down the line when nobody remembers
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>>27202743
Cloudy Quartz is not for sexual

>>27202873
Ember
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>>27203402
What about Discord? I udnerstand he's a not a harem material. But shoudn't he be the main source of information rather than Mane6 or Princessess?
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>>27203437

That would be good, he would talk about the previous humans that accidentally turned into him because the chaos magic, we could have more lore, the previous humans that use discord magic and the previous hot woman would return again.
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>Tyrant celestia

This meme is quite old
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>>27203528
almost as old as celestia. MOST SUSPICIOUS.
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>>27202905

Why are Celestia’s Royal garb faded and Luna’s still the same?
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What happens if anon cums inside an alicorn? Double alicorn power?
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>>27203711

Nah, alicorn have a lot of MP and take a lot of age to refill, Luna and Celestia use MP daily to move the sun and moon and they need anon cump as MP potion.
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>>27202743
shit's gonna be interesting and those colorless celestia's accessories...it's intentional right?
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>>27203528
I'm going to give the story the benefit of the doubt because it's been a great comedy thus far, but yeah some OC popping out and knowing everything coupled with the classic needless coverup by tyrant Celestia/Luna is a bit worrying.
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>>27202743
I suppose that this and all the previous human trivia comletely trivialize that "mirror" comment you made long ago, doesn't it Pencils?

Don't pretend you had all this planned when all your lore is explained after that EqG mention.
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>>27203819

The mirror isn't canon, pencil edit that page because EQG isn't relevant for this comic
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>>27203857
Well yeah but didn't he say he had written this from the start?
Why even make a mention if the equestrian lore contradict it?
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>>27203819
Why are you so asshurt over EQG? Flash should appear balls deep inside Twilight just for the asshurt faggots like you.
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>>27203888

>Well yeah but didn't he say he had written this from the start?

Nope, he never say that

>Why even make a mention if the equestrian lore contradict it?

Not metioned anymore, he remove that in the page compilation in his patreaon, that EQG and mirror mention never happen in the canon of this comic
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>>27203909

For aclarations

Previous version

https://derpiboo.ru/1072255?

Final Version

https://derpiboo.ru/1073013
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>>27202743
>salespony
oy vey, shut it down!
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>>27203913
Oh I only saved previous version now I can replace it with final version thanks
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>>27203405
>fanfic getting more attention than the show
maybe the official staff needs to work harder on their stories caughFlutterbuttercaugh
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Aah, I love the colors in this page. It's a nice break from the greyish tones you normally use (not that I don't like them)
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>>27203968
its because the princesses are full of magic
same with Spikes dragon scales. most other ponies are still monochrome
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>>27202743
Aw yes, Anon gets a chance to fuck the sun.

I hope they aren't going to be the evil ones though.
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The exposition has been a little heavy-handed in the past few comic pages. That is to say, the characters keep laying all the cards on the table outright. We're doing monologues where they say, "This is what is happening, this is how I feel about it, this is what will happen next".

The advantage is that we clear that stuff up faster and move on, so I suppose we can get into the next section of material. The disadvantage is that it eliminates suspense and feels out of character. People don't normally talk like that. "As you well know, [exposition dump for the audience]" is kind of clunky.

If you're going to do them, a smoother device could be something similar to the Greek chorus, which would step in between acts to comment on a play or describe what was going on as time progressed. It's not seen as a good literary device, but it is one that avoids character soliloquies.

I'm not sure your exact plan, but do be aware you've thrown a TON of information at us in a mere five pages or so. Equestria was Earth, there were humans, humans had super powers, there was an old species of unicorn, there's supposedly a human dimension where people live outside physical bodies, sex with a pony will give it super magic, Celestia's concerned about her reign, they used to kill humans, Discord may have been a human once, and the little girl has designs on being an alicorn. Holy shit, slow down a little. I need to digest and some of this is kind of hard to swallow in the first place. Should have chucked a few sticks of butter in the dish.
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>>27203711
>What happens if anon cums inside an alicorn?
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>>27203997
they are evil and anon needs to purge them from within
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>>27204019
SEPHIROPTH!
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>>27204045
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>>27204017
Oh yeah. And the sun is the source of all magic? But Celestia kind of moves it around at will. I don't... I don't even know what that means. You get me?

Not knocking the comic or anything, but as somebody sitting in the audience, even one of these bombs you dropped comes with like a billion questions and I think I've already lost track of a few major shells, here.
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To those who don't know, Pencils actually altered his script for chapter 4 to expand on Cloudy Quartz's role after having so much fun with the whole MILF Pie deal.
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thanks Pencils
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>>27204085
Make way for best mommy
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>>27204019
Dammit, Larson! What did you do to mom?!

>>27204045
He must cleanse their souls with his seed.
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>>27204085
that was my favorite part of this comic too!
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>>27202743

Two serious questions:

How often does Mascara's clumsiness piss off bees to sting her?

Will Pencils-sama ever give me a blessing (and full color scheme) to draw this happening?
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>this will happen at one point in the comic
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>>27204134
or this
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>>27204134
>>27204140
Oh please yes.
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>>27204140
or even this
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>>27204171
This pic makes me feel very penis
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>>27204094
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will Derpy join the harem?
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>>27204125

>Those implied crotch tits

Unf and cute
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>>27203405
>fanfic getting more attention than the show

What bizarro world do you come from?
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>>27204502
>Alicorn Derpy
RIP everyone
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>>27204502

She is too pure to be a slut like everyone in this comic.

There any 100% pure pony in this comi?
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Will we see Changelings in this story at all?
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>>27204511
>Princess of Undelivered Mail
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>>27204520
>There any 100% pure pony in this comi?
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>>27204543
>Pure
Maybe sexually, but according to the little filly faggot Celly's been manipulating everything since the dawn of time
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>>27204543
>1000 years of surpressed estrus
>will be pure
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>>27202743
aw shit
princess time
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>>27203344
EXCELLENT
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I will be disappointed if this comic about Anon finding love doesn't feature at least an appearance by the Princess of Love.
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>>27204606
dont worry
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>>27203344
Add a stallion you fucking faggot
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Cumming inside a pony to make her an alicorn is a hot idea. It has to be done right though.
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>>27204627
>Anon fucks a stallion into Alicorn state
PENCILS PLS
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S

P
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>>27204646
>Gee Big Mac! How come Anon let you have TWO horns?
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>>27204629
you mean vaginal with lots of foreplay?
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>>27202905
I feel like Luna's eye in the fifth panel needs to be much much bigger.
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I dont think Celestia's a tyrant, but she likely knows of the same History Papyra knows of and wanted to keep it secret. If others knew of humans and actually sought them (she mentioned that they were "in the stones" (likely turned to stone), we'd get more crazy overcharged freaks of nature running around who could give Discord a run for their money.

She must trust Quartz enough to keep him there without ordering an attempted execution, but at the same time, she needs to see Anon for herself to determine what sort of threat he poses to Equestria.
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>pencils already spoil the number of the page with the first sexy time in his tumblr

I can't wait
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>>27204698
>implying there is going to be any real sexy time
Is this your first harem story?
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>>27204704
>No sex
>Only lighthearted shenanigans

I can live with it
The sex pages would be a BITCH to draw anyway
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>>27202743
You know what be done. She needs to be tasted.
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>>27204725
>>No sex
>>Only lighthearted shenanigans
>I can live with it
I agree.
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>>27203528

Eh, even being completely benevolent somebody trying to usurp you is a legitimate concern. If you've been keeping the world running peacefully (more or less) for a thousand years and some young upstart manages to knock you off your throne and take over all of the work you've done can go up in smoke and a ton of innocent people can suffer for it.
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>>27204698

Pencils already said this is going to be SFW, stupid.
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>>27204606
This is a good idea. We'll need Pencils to have drawn all 4 alicorns in the comic, then we can debate about which one is best princess
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>>27204704
Are you implying that Anon will die? Because he cannot survive without giving the D to ponies.
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>>27204870
Five, there's five alicorns now. Remember?
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>>27204658
And in the missionary position
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>>27204520
Ponka
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>>27204995
>Ponka
where do you think the phrase "two in the pink" comes from?
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>>27205172
102 posts and this is the first serious shitpost
are we getting better?
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>>27205190
Oh fuck off you kike
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>>27204725
If this was a hentai doujin, you would already had sex scenes by now.
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>It's another Tyrant Alicorn story

Pencils please, don't go that route. Add both Royalbutts to the harem, have them do stupid shit, but don't do 'muh tyranny' grimdark arc.
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>>27205350
>having such bad taste
You need to leave.
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>>27205350
I bet you like your movies spoiled too
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>>27205372
>grimderp royalty shtick
>good taste
I think you need to go back to fimfiction.
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>>27205350
They are going to tyrannize Anon's dick.
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>>27205381
>wanting a generic harem manga
Legit shit taste.
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>>27205402
>le tyrantlestia
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>>27205409
Saying something over and over again doesn't make it true.
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>>27205419
And coming to Pencils' thread complaining about harem stories when that's what it was going to be from the beginning is retarded.
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>>27205448
Well that's where you're wrong, fuckboy. I criticized the shit taste in >>27205350. Learn to read, you underage fuckstick.
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>>27202751
I CAN HEAR IT AND I'M REACHING FOR AN ICEPICK TO MAKE IT STOP
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>>27205402
>wanting a generic harem manga

Did you by any chance notice what thread we are in?

>>>/eqd/
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>>27202751
SHOW BY ROCK!!!!
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>>27205461
I hope Pencils sees your comment and as a result never finishes the comic.
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>>27205457
>>27205551
its time for you to leave
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>>27205551
I hope you choke to death on one of the may dicks you inhale on the daily basis, but hey - can't have everything
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>>27205568
Fuckin make me.
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Pencil fanboys are literally the worst thing about this board right now.
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>>27205632
I dunno, the ones repeatedly complaining about them are pretty bad too
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>>27204555
>1000 years of suppressed estrus
if that's comes to be true...what kind of monster we will unleash if the seal is removed...
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>>27205637
The ones responding to obvious troll attempts are definitely on the top of the list.
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>random drawfag starts posting comic here for some reason that totally isn't shilling
>nothing worth the attention, just the comic version of literally every AiE story ever
>not even porn, just one big waste of time that will probably not even be finished
>cocksuckers start defending this shit because "muh waifu"
>pseudo general that is basically just shitposting with the occasional page delivery
>can't even keep inside their own fucking thread
>this all without mentioning the amount of newfags from the booru who already came since it started
I hope these threads get fucking nuked already, its not like this is a storytime or anything, its just a slower, less productive version of a shitty general
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>>27205666
(you)
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>>27205666
Satanic truth right here, kids.
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>>27205666

Nice pasta
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>>27205702
>>27205704
Have you ever see a man so hungry for (you)'s?
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>>27202905
>>27202868
>>27204085
>>27202743
I fully expect the next page to go along these lines.
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>>27205711
Have you ever seen such a retard in your whole life?
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>>27205738
Uh...I was replying to you two as not to give him a (you).
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>>27205755
Who, this post?>>27205666
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>>27205755
>Damage Control
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>>27205765
Yeah.
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>>27204646
>Being a fag
>Not making a harem of princesses that beg to be your cum dumps to stay powerful and immortal.
>Not breeding them all so humanity's legacy carries on through your herd of children
>Being a fag
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>>27205792
>Not wanting a stallion in the harem

I bet you kiss women, too. Faggot.
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>>27205457
Not that anon, but what else was >>27205402 this supposed to mean?

If you're going to shitpost, then at LEAST be consistent.
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>>27204502
If I take a bite out of your muffin, it becomes my muffin

I eat your muffin!
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>>27202743
Anon has sex with the two alicorns. Now they are quadricornuses with four wings and three horns
Thanks MA Larson
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>>27205806
get out faggot

go back to your dicksucking homo general
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>>27205832
>still replying
Stop, just stop.
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>>27203238
I'm afraid to say no.
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>>27204017
This.
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>>27205806
>Being a fag
>wanting to be cucked by a stallion
>wanting to put your dick in his reeking asshole
>Being a fag
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>>27205839
I think they will become dickorns.
Picture It.
If anon ever eyaculate inside a alicorn, their horn will evolve into a magical penis, one that will eyaculate magical cum that cures cancer and make colts and fillies happy too.
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ITT: Characters that remind you of yourself
For me it’s Discord – Intelligent, Nihilistic and with a Wicked Sense of Humor
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>>27205978
more like a shitty parody of discord
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>>27205210
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>>27204019

Faust.
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>>27202743
ZOMG
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>>27205350
Only polish fags could be that stupid
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You guys realize that bickering over Pencil's comic is just going to make him stronger, right?

He's stepped on our train and never gonna stop until he choo choo chooses to.
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>>27205867
>projecting this hard
just because you have poor hygiene doesnt mean everyone does.
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>>27206688
I, for one, welcome our new Pencils overlord. May he set off easily triggered anons forever!
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>>27205910
not bad
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>>27202743
>>27204017

Yes all of the sudden rush details is a bit much to take in.

Is the story planned out with an end in sight or is it mostly just written as the author goes from chapter to chapter?

This comic has become more than just a harem story and it seems easy to mess up with too much going on at once.

But if he can pull it off this will be one of the top OC MLP comics.
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>>27204125
Oh look it's BSting.
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>>27205350
>Humans are magic hungry beings
>Shown to go insane with power
>Killing these is somehow tyranny

I don't think we need to jump to assumptions.
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>>27209198
You have to silence the Idea too, that is what makes it Tyranny.
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>>27204870
Well it certainly won't be the shitty purple one.
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>>27204125
You are LITERALLY the only person on Earth with this fetish.
Seriously, out of 8 billion people, you are the only one.
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>>27209493
I'm not him and i occasionally enjoy using bee stings on pone
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>>27209493
I was not aware I could fetishize this.
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>>27203405
What did he meme by this?
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>>27204627
Not everybody is an gay shit faggot like u.
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>>27204502
I hope so, but I don't think she would interact with Anon.

>>27204511
>>27204530
Kek
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>>27209493
Naw I remember people used to try to get bee sting threads off the ground back in the day. IIRC one Anon was quite dedicated to it for a brief little while, but it never went anywhere, unfortunately for them. It does seem like a rare fetish though, and pretty weird. I can't talk though, I'm into vore.
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>>27202743
Is her crown actually silver, or is it just meant to be a muted colour to fit the colour scheme of the comic? Also, is celestia meant to be slightly sinister here?
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>>27210327
>>27204125
I will never understand these weird types of fetishes. I can't talk though, I'm into missionary position for the sole purpose of procreation
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>>27210657
Horses have sex by mounting one another doggy-style. Missionary position would actually be incredibly lewd for ponies since you're flipping them on their back and exposing their soft tummy and teats for the world to see.
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>>27210673
Did I mention that I don't fap to pone?
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>>27210673
Dont forget you can kiss in this position and look each other in the eyes.

If she's really kinky, she would look down to were you are connected seeing your dick go in and out of her and her teats jiggling with each thrust
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>>27210685
>I don't fap to pone
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>>27210685
>I don't fap to pone
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>>27210719
>>27210742

I've tried, but in the middle of the session I just get filled with a soul-and-boner-crushing guilt.
I'm too much of a normalfag I guess.
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>>27210747
>in the middle of the session
the fuck are you doing?! the soul-and-boner-crushing guilt is supposed to come AFTER you fapped
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>>27210685
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>>27210685
>I don't fap to pone
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>>27210942
Supposedly that sudden rush of guilt happens because the brain reduces it's capacity to feel disgust when aroused. When you orgasm it stops holding the disgust back, and you feel it all at once.

I'm sure most people on this board have stopped feeling any post masturbation disgust or guilt whatsoever, i know i have.

Maybe this normie has brain problems.
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>>27204502
>retard horse
Fuck, I hope not. Literal worst horse with worst fans. You have to be a special kind of shortbus riding faggot to want to have anything to do with Derpy.
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>>27211090
I've never had an ounce of guilt while fapping to pone, I imagine that they would all love a good dicking so there is no need to feel guilt.
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>>27211242
this nigga so deep down the rabbit hole, he doesn't even understand what guilt we're talking about
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>>27211236
>thinking clumsy and unlucky = retarded
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I want to kiss both princesses at the same time on their mouths
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>>27211287
you got some nigger lips.
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>>27211314
That's true
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And once anon starts getting into trouble with any of his wifus, pls make him end a conversation with "I should go" before he is hastly retreating.
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Here the page with the fixed colors, don't thank me
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>>27212280
this isnt a thank you, b-baka.
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>>27212280
>completely misses the point of why the comic isnt colored
>again
Cant fix stupid I guess
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>>27212280
>don't thank me
ok I wont. for what anyway?
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>>27212469
>>27212331
are you kidding?
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I want to see more cute lime-ponk interarction, they work great together better than ponk and maud
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Could just be me, but it kinda seems to me that Celestia and Luna are more concerned of losing their roles as leaders than the safety of their people.
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>>27212280
>>27212331
>>27212469
>>27212484
>2016
>not using a monochrome monitor
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>>27212538
Tbh i think Ponk and Maud works better imo, Limey would be closest to Marble giving her supportive talks and stuff
They re all sisters thou so nothing stops one having some close time with others
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>>27212957
You know what, I'd love more of the Pie sister's in the show, but holy shit do I not want another one of the Mane6 to become Family Pone like AJ. What a dilema
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>>27211090
Only to rape hentai yet I still keep going back
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>>27212974
Same, maybe a episode where ponk decides to try and have a family reunion like aj but the pies dont want to go so she tries to do it on the farm
Shenanigans ensue
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>>27203568
Black can't fade further.
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>>27205719
the timing on this is so fucking brilliant. it never fails to make me laugh.
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I'm curious to see if Pencils will do anything with Holder's Boulder and the implication it could be a dragon egg.
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>>27214124

Someone remember that female dragon of the previous pages in the human flashback ?

That would be a cool details
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>>27213311
He already implied that Holder's Boulder is actually a human in OP pic.
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>>27214191
>That would be a cool details
>a cool details
>details
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>>27214440

I blame the autocorrector of my phone for that shit
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>>27212609
Hercules/IBM orange or apple II green?
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>>27214477
you double dubs have earned you my forgiveness
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>>27202743
calling it now, they will fight over the hot monkey dick
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>>27202743
Wow this got incredibly gay within a few pages. Tyrant princesses is such a ridiculous trope. If you manage to pull this off without going full retard, I'll be impressed.
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>>27208272
It's not already the top OC comic? What is then?
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>>27202743
luna is a chicken head
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>>27202743
this is an unbelievably long road to take just to get to some pony fuckin
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>>27215200
>cant possibly be misleading text
its like you dont even into red herrings
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night thread
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>>27216939

Sleep tight, Nonny.
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I love Anon in this comic. He looks like a Greek god yet he still acts like an awkward retard.
Jolly good juxtaposition, Pencils.
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>>27216939
Good night faget.
And check this numbers!
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>>27216939 #
Nighty night faget
And check this numbers!
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>>27216939
G'night faget
And check this numbers!
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>>27202905
>>27212280
>"the description in this report matches that of human perfectly."
This doesn't sound quite right. "that of A human" rather than "that of human" maybe? I'm didn't major in English, so correct me if I'm wrong.
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>>27210742
>THAT SCENE THOUGH
>WHY IS THERE PONIES OF THAT SCENE
>THERE SHOULDN'T EVEN BE THAT SCENE OF THAT SCENE
>THAT SCENE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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>>27218161
Her weather spell may be a bit rusty, but boy is her dick to diamond transmutation spell perfect!
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>>27218161
<3 you Pencils
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>>27218161
>That plot-shot.
It's begging for a lewd edit.

Do you have a lewd version for every page of the comic that requires one so far, Pencils?
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>>27218161
that dock was special made for that one faggot last thread wasn't it?
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>>27218161
I relly can imagine people forming cults to worship that celestial dock
cults were created for less reasons in the past
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>>27218161
weather pegasuses suicide on watch
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>>27218161
I'm going to point it out and I hope I'm not the only one who thinks this way.

I love you Celestia's plot, but I think you need to practice her face and some of it's perspectives. Not your fault though, even the show's artists have had problems animating her in anything else other than a a profile shot.
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>>27218161
I think you forgot a speech bubble or a thought one on the third panel, because that text is hardly legible.
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>>27218161
aww yeah
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>>27218202
I wouldn't do anything like that.
>>27218231
Thanks, those are helpful, this whole comic is a project to make me better at drawing pone so this is the first time I am drawing either Celestia or Luna, well I did draw Celestia ONCE before.
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>>27218231
This.

>>27218161
I was about to say her face looked off. But that ass tho.
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>>27218161
l-love you pencils-senpai
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>>27218241
Oh, and the 'FZAAAARP!' on the fifth panel looks a bit weird, too.
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>>27218251
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>>27218161
I know everyone's distracted by the royal booty, but
>hold a moment on the onther side
>onther
Just a little mistype
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I hope this Celestia looks better, also changed up the sound effect font a little and added the missing speech bubble. Next edit will drop after the language fixes.
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>>27218298
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>>27218298
Much better, much.
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>>27218298
oh man im totally waiting for pic related to happen
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>>27218298
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>>27218298
A vast improvement Not only on Celestia, but on the dialogue and magic text, too.

I don't know why you're making her eyes so incredibly angular.
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>>27218349
I would
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>>27218349
>only one hole
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>>27218362
I, too, would.
VIOLENTLY
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>>27218406
I would, tenderly.

Than later, violently.
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>>27218411
>pic related
Right off the bat.
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>>27218416
........bat?
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>>27218316
>Against her better judgment Celestia finds herself drawn to Anon
>His predicament is causing undue stress but he shoulders the burden alone, like a man
>An immortal, magical man, with rugged facial features and chiseled abs
>Who just so happens to need a release
>And hey, she hasn't done anything useful for her own people so far. Maybe she should give it a whirl?
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>>27218298
>Dat flank
Meh. Marbles butt is better.
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