POMF=3 Edition
Come in here, all you /ss/, loli, MILF, and cougar lovers! Talk about or write about relationships between characters with a big age difference here.
BasedPastebinFucker's Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/u/BasedPastebinFucker
Kid Anon and the Spa Ponies: http://pastebin.com/604wKseg
Right and Wrong (Anon x RD): http://pastebin.com/34vUjssQ
Blue and Orange on the Rainbow: http://pastebin.com/LTHRbaVn
Anon x Changelings: http://pastebin.com/JzKpr3yw
KidAnon and Babysitter Fluttershy: http://pastebin.com/LSXpUfUs
Anon x Ginger Snap (filly scout): http://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/24611358/#24621083
Anon x DT: http://pastebin.com/VX9AexTa
The Wonderful Misadventures of Scootaloo and Kid Anon: http://pastebin.com/zRVrGVPz
White Cream (Twilight Velver x Moondancer): http://pastebin.com/F13LxLWN
Spike x Rarity x Fluttershy Magic Dragon-cock Harem in previous thread (Get a pastebin or something!)
(I hope I haven't missed anyone, I'm sure people will remind me otherwise)
Previous Thread:
>>25405646
Also, let's not forget this screencapped green of Applejack x KidAnon
Ah, the smell of a new thread, it smells like endless amounts of bumping until people actually start posting.
>>25545603
Yeah, the smell of true shit. Wonderful, isn't it?
>>25545459
Spike's a pleb, I'd let any of the drunk ponies do this
Is there any fics about mama Rarity and son-anon? I think that would be adorable. Anyone up for it?
Pic related, except add Kid anon and you would have one happy adorable family.
>>25545916
As far as I know, no.
>>25545916
Rarity is kinda relevant to my KidAnon Spa green, so I have been thinking about writing something about her.
But that would unfortunately be at a later date, and I'm not sure if it would be a Rarimom dynamic, so some other writefag is more than welcome to pick this idea up instead.
>>25546501
That doesn't seem like a comfortable position.
>>25546561
What? Laying on the stomach?
>>25546631
Yes.
>>25546670
Maybe for a pony. I don't really know to be honest.
>page 7
>>25546187
Yes yes!
Any other write-fags want to jump on the mom-rarity/son-anon concept?
Where the hell is everybody?
>>25547747
I ask myself the same question when I have to bump a thread four times in a row.
>>25547747
>>25547765
Well, some threads are a little slow in the beginning.
I myself have to go to bed now, so I'll have to leave the bumping up to the rest of you for a while.
Also, in order to balance out the loli and /ss/ that's usually more popular in this thread, have a milf.
>>25547991
milfs are great. Whether alone or with /ss/, pony milfs are the backbone of these threads.
>>25548039
I do love myself a good milf.
A woman with experience is never a bad thing.
If they happen to be curvy as well, with some chub in just the right places, I'm all over that.Good night now
Rarity as a milf would be amazing.
Kid-Anon would always get embarrassed when he gets caught starring at his mom's butt for too long. Rarity knows this and relentlessly teases him for it.
>>25548672
would be cute to seeI still prefer Rara as normal, but I'll live
>>25545478
Dear god
>>25548672
what about both Applejack and Rara Milfs?
>>25550296
What about RararaRara MILFs?
still waiting for more animation.
>>25550634
Welcome to the club.
>>25545606
Ah, I love the smell ofshippingin the early morning!
>>25545916
>>25546187
Ohhh could be a continuation of your spa ponies story. Kid Anon realizes exactly what Rarity set him up for... and want some revenge... if you know what I mean.
>>25547747
Will probably update Scootalove tomorrow. Would have today, but my stupid car decided to have it's oil pan bust open today.Actually entirely my fault
>>25548219
Nightski!Sepai
>>25550935
Okay, I'm not exactly well versed in car engines, but how the hell do you blow the freaking oil pan of your car?
>>25551048
My rides low, is rather heavy, and has loose suspension. Also the oil pan happens to be the lowest part of the underside of my car. SO I hit a rather large divot in the road at about 25mph and my car bottomed out hard enough to crack the oil pan... Thus set off a 2 hour chain of events that ended with me having my car towed to a repair shop and getting an Uber back to my campus. Was very annoying, but I ain't even made since I got to spend a day with one of my best friends from back home while also meeting a few other very awesome people.
>>25551408
Shame, but at least it wasn't all bad.
>>25551478
This is only the third such time this has happened to my car... It's just going through the motions of getting it fixed now. Plus most repair places usually give me free oil... so free oil change too.
>>25551529
You should consider getting a stiffer suspension if this is a common occurrence.
>>25551543
Naw man, to get my suspension changed would cost 5x what an oil pan replacement costs. Besides I love my loose suspension. I can drive over small speed bumps at 40+ mph and feel nothing.
>>25551590
I'm just saying, it's gonna start to pile up at some point.
Had a similar problem with my dad's car, the carburetor got fucked, and he ended up spending more money getting it fixed every time it broke than if he would if he had it changed.
>>25550935
Don't know if I would go with "revenge" but... We'll see. I have to think about this now that it's in my head and see if I can come up with something.
Sorry about your car, but I'm glad you're not hurt at least.
If Rarity is Kid Anon's mom, then that means Sweetie Belle is his little filly aunt?
That is so unbelievably cute!
>only pic I could find of Kid Anon and Sweetie
>>25553026
Just imagine her being closer to knee height and trying to act like all responsible for her "little" nephew who may or may now be older than her.
>>25553026
>>25553042
Plus side: Head will always be more or less at crotch level as they both grow up.
Jesus fuck what is wrong with me I stayed here way too long I'm out
Hey y'all, greetings from the RGRE thread. I've got some age-diff from a few days ago that I'd like to test the waters with here. We cool?
>Be Anon
>Be chilling on a bench at the school playground
>Be fucking the bejesus out of your daughter
>Somehow you reproduced
>Somehow it's not a satyr
>She's like 8 or something
>She's a jibbering mess of orgasms
>Squash soup everywhere
>just EVERYWHERE
>"Daah-deeeee~"
>Your pants will never be the same
>Mares walk up to you and chuckle at you endearingly
>>"Teaching the little one about the birdpones and the bees a bit early, huh Anon?"
"It's important - hah - to make sure your foal under - hng - understands that sex is nothing to feel awkward or - ooh! - or ashamed about."
>"M-more... Please, more!"
>One of them sits down next to you and puts a forehoof on your wet, slimy thigh.
>>"Anon, you're such a responsible father, you know that? Most stallions would either leave it to the mare to explain where foals come from."
>You give a loud moan, nearing your climax.
"I'm a very ha- hah - hands on type of father. I m-make sure to be a pa-aaaart of their daily lives."
>The mare smiles at you with just a hint of lust in her eyes.
>>"Anon, would you.... maybe like to get coffee some time?"
>"FUCK ME HARDER, PLEASE DADDY!"
>You'll have to talk it over with your wife, but she should have no problem with making your couple into a herd.
"I'd love toooooOOOOOOO!"
>Aaaand you just nutted inside of your daughter.
>Again.
>She's a screamer.
>The mare smiles giddily at you, despite the marecum that's splashing a bit on her face.
>>"I'll pick you up tomorrow at 8, okay?"
>You barely hear her over the sounds that your daughter is making. You're caught your second (third? Forth?) wind and have started to bounce your daughter on your dick.
>Your grunting seems to have been sufficient as an affirmative, because the blushing mare in question kisses your cheek and walks off to talk with her friends.
>>"See you tomorrow, 'daddy'."
>>25553096
Nice to see you again Anus.
Got a pastebin?
>>25553096
i dont even know waht the fuck this isand it scares me
>>25553096
Hey, I've been reading your greens over at the RGRE, nice to see ya grace our thread!
Though you should probably be a little careful about what pics you post, the no porn-rule and all that.
Otherwise, yeah, we're cool.
>>25553061
Don't be ashamed, you are among friends.
Probably more than half of us thought the same thing, if for just a moment.
>>25553138
No, more than half of us are thinking about shota dicks and spike.
It's rare to get a Milf or Loli story like this >>25553096
Or in op
>>25548672
I need this.
>>25553111
You bet I do.
http://pastebin.com/u/AnalPlugAnon
>>25553130
Sup Viral! It's nice to hear that you enjoy my stuff; I hope you'll enjoy what I post in this thread too.
>>no porn-rule and all that.
Whoops. My bad, Viral. Newfaggy question: Can I still post porn if I spoiler the image?
But hey, sweet deal. I've been looking for a place to post my smut.
>>25553195
Nope, no porn at all unfortunately. Some questionable or suggestive things (like cameltoe for example) is allowed as far as I can tell (still a bit of a newfag myself actually), but full on visible genitalia is strictly no-no.
Still, glad you've decided to join in. The thread can always use more green to balance out the bumping that tends to happen whenever there's a lull in activity.
>>25553173
Well, I meant in the context of Anon and Sweetie growing up together, we were probably thinking the same thing.
You're right in that shota is the most popular theme in the thread right now, of course.
>>25553222
>Right Now.
It's always been a popular thing. Every age difference thread, before the resurrection, was spike only. If anyone thought of anything besides spike back then, than it was bad.
That's why it's rare to see green on loli or MILF. Or Sugar Daddy type of green.
>>25553243
True... There really is an untapped goldmine here to be sure...
I originally had an idea for a loli green, but it did feel like it wouldn't be meet with much enthusiasm based on what I read in the comments back when I was just lurking.
And then the Spa ponies idea hit me and I wanted to write that instead.
Heck, some of the few ideas I've had for milf stories have pretty much all of them had shota in it as well.
A non-shota milf-story I would read would be one where a milf would get double-teamed by two humans.
Human-on-pony is my preference and I've rarely seen and never once read about a threesome involving two humans on a pony.
It would be something fresh for me.
>>25553307
>Double teamed by 2 humans..
Yeah....that would work.
>>25553195
Tiny square censors seem to be sufficient to avoid the ban hammer.
In other news, been in a funk since Pururin died. It was like the only place I knew with straight shota as a tag. Discovered a few new sites with it, not as good since they won't let me sort, but OMG my poor dong. Alcohol fueled babysitting insanity is in the brainstorming stages.
>>25553569
Some guys made something similar to Pururin made Tusmino.
http://www.tsumino.com/
Far as I know, it's the same thing, only blue.
>>25553698
I think its actually made by the same guys. Its still missing sort by date, popularity, rating, and all that though.
>>25553786
Hey, better than nothing.
>>25553821
Ah nice. There's another site called nhentai.net that you can use too.
>>25553821
I got used to the automated semen vacuum that was pururin.
Bumperino.
>>25553569
>>25553698
I mostly use sankaku channel myself when searching for shota.
It even has some mlp art nowadays, though sadly it's mostly anthro or humanized/eqg.
>>25545459
Happy thanksgiving everyone
>>25554707
Don't have Thanksgiving here, but Happy Thanksgiving anyway to all of you!
>>25554686
Eh, it's not that surprising that it's mostly humanized, really.
>>25553096
Lurker from RGRE reporting in would like to see more you produce good content
>>25554838
Sure thing. I have leave for class soon, but I'll try to get something for tonight.
Bump-
>>25547398
Eh, I didn't really want to do any more pornos, but you've peaked my interest.
I'll whip up a few parts soon.
Sooooo while writing my Scoots x kid Anon story I've started to toss the idea of writing a kid femanon story around in my head. It would probably be lesbian stuff between her and Lyra... But I'm a bit hesitant to start since I don't think I'd be able to capture the emotions right... Is there interest and or any pointers I could get, preferably from a femanon... If there's even any that lurks these threads.
>>25556228
Girls hab benises and boys hab bajinas.
>>25556228
Shit, I don't know if I could give you any pointers, familia. Have almost never written from a female pov.
Unless it's angsty. For some reason, I can write angst.
'Cause I'm a edgy motherfucker. Like, Gillette Mach 5 levels of edge, at least.
Sorry, m8. If I can think of something, I'll let you know.
>>25556228
I just do the same thing as when I'm writing a guy, except not.
I dunno, most of the time I just go with the first thing that comes to my head.
>>25556228
Do not want
>>25556273
I... Don't think that's how it works.
>>25556346
There will probably be some angst if it's kid femanon.
>>25556401
Yah, easy to do for a guy when you are one... Probably will do something similar, maybe make her a little more timid.
>>25556408
It's still in the rough. I still need to finish my Scootalove story first.
Also happy thanksgiving everyone... Even if some of you aren't from the USA.
>>25554838
Smut delivered, lurker. Enjoy.
>"Mommy? Daddy? I can't sleep."
>You're 'mommy-ears' allow you to be easily awoken by your daughter's voice.
>You crack open an eye (the one not buried in your pillow) and wave your little girl over with a beckoning hoof.
"Come on in, Midnight. You can sleep with mommy and daddy tonight."
>Midnight's little hooves clop quietly as she makes her way over to your bed.
>She crouches down, shakes her plot in preparation, and leaps onto the bed.
>Clad in her warm, wool footie pajamas, Midnight settles down right between you and your husband's pillows, whereupon you nuzzle Midnight's head and wrap a hoof around her midsection.
>Midnight, you guess, has other plans. She's wriggling in your embrace as though you were giving her a tongue-bath in front of her little filly friends.
>"M-mommy, stahhhp!"
>That's not a bad idea, come to think of it.
>You ignore your daughter's pleas and begin to build up some saliva in your mouth.
>It's been too long since you've washed her mane, anyway; It's getting smelly.
>Midnight stops struggling at your maternal acts, and melts into her your embrace.
>Filly knows who runs this show.
>If mama ain't happy, ain't NOPONY happy.
>Not long after, your mind wanders and you let instinct take control.
>When Midnight's mane is clean, you absently flip your daughter over to face you, and you begin to clean her face.
>Your daughter has long since stopped complaining. Midnight's not asleep yet, but she's practically purring.
>Without a word exchanged, you begin to unbutton your daughter's adorable, fluffy onesie.
>Pastel-blue cloth parts under your magic, and reveal their treasure: A cute widdle filly tummy oh my CELESTIA it is so cute.
>You pull her forelegs out of the sleeves and begin to clean her upper body.
>Lick Lick Lick Lick Lick
>>25556544
>Not a single part of your daughter's body will go uncleaned.
>When it's time for you to start on her lower-half, you're eager to see if that tummy of hers is as soft and fluffy as it looks.
>Once she's free of the pajay-jays, you give Midnight nice long licks, starting at the bottom and moving to the top.
>How can your filly be this soft? You just want to bury your face in her fur forever.
>You lick a little bit lower and prepare to clean her hindlegs, when-Oh.
>Oh, my.
>You forgot about that part.
>Your daughter's filly parts are giving off the most tantalizing odour.
>N-not that you're a filly-fooler or anything, but you have a responsibility as a mother, and it's your duty to keep your little filly clean.
>Your vision swims slightly and you feel blood rushing to your face.
>The realization of what you're about to do sets in.
>You don't really have a choice, right?
>Midnight needs to get clean, right?
>And her dribbling slit is such a dirty, dirty thing to lick.
>You throw a glance towards your husband and hope to Luna that he's as heavy a sleeper tonight as he usually is.
>You pause to gather some more saliva in your suddenly dry mouth, and then give her no-no place a slow, hard lick.
>If Midnight wasn't awake before, she sure was now.
>"M-mommy? What a-are you doing?"
>You pull your face away from your daughter's crotch and smile kindly at her.
"I'm cleaning you, silly."
>You don't wait for a response, and instead go about cleaning her.
>"Th-this feels funny, mommy..."
>You hum absent-mindedly into her crotch in response, and Midnight gasps lewdly.
>My, my, my. You're doing your best to clean this area of this filly's anatomy, but it keeps getting more and more dirty.
>Looks like you'll have to go deeper and investigate the source.
>>25556576
>You gently push your weird, long horse tongue past your daughter's folds and into her clenching tunnel.
>Your daughter doesn't say anything; she just squeaks and moans over and over with each breath.
>It's so dirty in here. You'll have to do a really good job if you want it to be clean again.
>You scrape her inner walls with your turgid muscle, trying to wipe the bitter juices off of them.
>But it doesn't seem to work; maybe it's time to try something different.
>Changing tactics, you readjust yourself and begin to thrust your tongue in and out of your little filly's snatch.
>"Mah! Mmmuh-muh-mommy! Wha-hah-hat are you dooooiiiiHHNNNGGGG"
>Pungent marecum, albeit a small yield of it due to her age, floods your mouth and leaves your daughter panting and sweaty.
>All clean.
>You magic Midnight's pajamas back onto her and cuddle her to your chest.
>You think you've done a reasonable enough job.
>For tonight, anyway.
>But you're nothing if not stubborn.
>>25556595
Thank you for this dong expansion.
>>25556544
Checked and enjoyed thank you based Anal
>>25556595
7/10, pretty good
I'm semi hard
Now do one where her son comes to visit
>>25556595
>tfw you will never give your horse daughter a tongue bath
>>25557802
And now I'm imagining Aria singing "I Will Always Love You" horribly off-key.
>>25556595
This expanded the dong well... but when did ponies become cats?
>>25552539
Well you know, maybe he wants to try out his new found abilities with the mare who gave him the ticket... or it was Rarities plan all along to secks him, but she just didn't want to have to deal with him being all virginy on her.
Anyway looking forward to whatever you write as always.
>>25553096
Dong expansion at 64% and holding sir! We're going to need more green to achieve peak dong expansion.
Seriously though, I like what your writing both here and >>25556595
Anyway I can't bring myself to write anything tonight. I've just got too much alcohol and food in me to write what I want to write.
Night ponies!
>>25550935
>tfw no older girl who knows youve never fucked before who wants to fuck around with you but wants you to be more experianced first so she buys you spa girls to double team you and plans on later having a one on one session with you herself
it hurts to live
>>25558305
Thats why we write man...
>>25558254
Mmm, something like that. I'm definitively brewing something in my mind for our naughty fashion-pone.
Aww, no new green?
Though I'm not one to talk. since I haven't posted anything in this new thread either.
I have been writing it up, but it's not ready to be released yet. I'm starting to reach the end, so I want to post all of the remaining parts in one fell swoop.
Looking forward to when you can continue!
>>25558305
That's why I write, anon, to deal with the pain for the things I can never have.
>>25557941
They became part cat when I realized the potential for erotic licking. Where in the show does it say, "We are not part-cat"? WHERE COSMIC
>>25558254
More green to follow tomorrow. Thanks for the kind words, Cosmic. I hope you enjoy the boner that I, a stranger on the internet, have given you.
>>25558562
Those are the best kind of boners after all!
Crap, I really need to sleep... It's stupid late here...
I'll try to get some green ready tomorrow.
G'night ya'll!
>>25555936
Quick deposit of what I have to see if I should continue
"Mom! I'm home for school!" you call as the door shuts with a "click"
>You are KidAnon
>And you just got home from school, as you've just stated
>After dropping your bag in the living room, you make your way into the kitchen to grab a snack
>The primary food featured in your mom's boutique were apples, so you grab one from the counter
>"Hello darling! How was your day?" you hear your mom call from upstairs
"Fyne!" you reply, after taking a large bite out off the delicious fruit
>A trifle of the juice had flung from your mouth as you spoke, but you figured mom wouldn't mind
>The sound of hooves on the stairwell soon bounced off the hollow walls of the boutique, and you awaited your mother's appearance in the kitchen
>"Hi Anon!" Sweetie Belle greeted, stunning you slightly
>As you focused your attention on the white mare, a steam of apple juice ran down your chin, making you feel quite foolish
>She however was focused on the spots of juice that had formed on the counter
>"You might want to clean that up before Rarity gets down here."
>Your lips curled in childish defiance, and you blurted out the first thing that came to mind to quell Sweetie's giggles
"You're not my mom! You can't tell me what to!"
>The childish mark did naught but turn her giggling into full-on laughter, which only increased your will to defy her
>"I never told you that you had to clean the juice up, but I would strongly advise it. I've known my sister for a lot longer than you've been alive, so I know she's gonna freak out when she sees these splotches. Take my advice or leave it Nonny, you're choice."
>She then playfully rubs your head, and heads to the fridge, humming some pop song you've never heard
>As you stick your tongue out, you realize that perhaps Autie Sweetie Belle was right
>You grab a few paper towels form underneath the sink, and begin to wipe up the liquid from the counter
>>25558620
Ho-ho, what have we here? Some more kid anon with fashion horse and small singing horse. My attention, you've got it.
>>25558594
Classic Viral, going to bed just before the fresh greens roll in.
>>25558404
Yessss, one great update to bring closure to this sexy symphony of boners! My body couldn't be more ready.
>>25558562
Damn it Anal, your giving me new fetishes for licking. Ughhhh I want to lick a girls body up and down now.
And thank you kind stranger, I only hope that I may return the favor to you in the near future. I feel like Nicolas Cage from that one weird boxing-casino-assassination movie. Pic related.
>>25558742
Well, more like teenage singing horse, but same difference.
Also, name w/ no trip because I'm a faggot.
>>25558620
>Not even your mother's approach from behind stirs you, as you put all of your effort into cleaning the counter as best as you possibly can
>The sudden assult of a warm hug is surprising, but not unwelcome
>"Welcome home my darling! How was your day?"
>"Oh just fine Rarity. Thanks for the concern," Auntie Sweetie chimes in semi-sarcastically
>You can practically feel your mother roll her eyes in response
>"Yes Sweetie dear, I'm sure your day was rather taxing. However, I want to hear of Anon's exploits at school today, just as I heard of all those attempts to get your cutie mark when you were a filly."
>Talking takes a brief backseat to the sound of fizz and swallowing as Sweetie cracks open a can of soda
>"Can't really argue there. It'd just be nice to talk to my big sister every once in a while."
>Your mother releases you from her soft grasp, and turns to your aunt
>"Now you're just bring dramatic," she replies with a playful swat. "What, does our daily discussions at breakfast not count as 'conversing' anymore? If you wish, I could call you every free moment I have throughout the day and tell you about the dresses I'm working on."
>Your aunt laughs before taking another swig of soda
>"That's fine Rarity, I don't need THAT much jabber from you."
>"Oh Sweetie darling! You'll never believe what I just did! I sewed A STICH! And you'll never believe what color the thread was! RED! Can you believe it?"
>The sound of your aunt's hysterical laughter drowns out the rest of your mother's mocking
>"I get it! I get it! Sorry, I want to talk to my sister more than I do."
>>25558620
>tfw you will never fuck your small horse aunt
Fuck everything.
>>25558784
Teenage singing horse will now be of angst horse in my head canon...
>now be of...
>Been spending too much time in the Ivanon thread.
But yah, interested to see where this goes YEEPZ.
I can't even fathom how you pronounce that.
>>25558791
>>25558940
Like "Yipes" with a hard "E" sound instead of the hard "I" sound. The z is there for reasons.
>Another sip
>"But seriously, have fun talking to Nonny. I'll be in my room writing to Applebloom about another possible sponsor for the CMC."
>"Oh really? Who?"
>"Flim n' Flam Corporations are offering to cover twenty-five percent for the cost for any micilanious workshops that we might run."
>"Oh really now?"
>"Yep. I know that Applebloom has some experience working with the brothers, and I wanted to know just how they check out as business partners. I'll tell you more about it tommorrow."
>"Flim and Flam want to partner with you?"
>"Yeah. Why, do you know them?"
>"Actually, yes I do. Although I would imagine that Applebloom would have more experience than myself. I'll tell you my experiences in the morning."
>"Sounds good. Anyway, you know where I am if you need me. See ya."
>With that, she heads upstairs fairly quietly, leaving you and your mother to continue your discussion
>"So, what all did you do in school today?" Rarity asks, hugging you again
"I made an explosion mommy!"
>Her grip tightens suddenly before she releases you
>She spins you around, and lowers herself to meet your gaze
>"You. Did. What now?"
"I made an explosion in science class!"
>"Oh my goodness! Dear are you alright?"
"Yeah! I just mixed potassium with water instead of salt, that's all! I was away from my work station, so I didn't get caught in the explosion. No one got hurt either! Guess my special talent isn't chemrstry ey mom?"
>"Right. Heh heh, not your special talent..."
>You had no clue why your mom was acting funny all of a sudden
>The explosion was awesome when it happened in the lab
>>25559022
>"Flim n' Flam Corporations are offering to cover twenty-five percent for the cost for any micilanious workshops that we might run."
>>25559022
>Anon's special talent
>tfw
>>25559022
So how old is kid anon supposed to be in this fic? He's saying "mommy" quite a lot. I'm imagining somewhere in that 8-10 range due to his dialogue and behaviour.Unf~
>>25559589
Thinking 9 here.
>>25559135
I thought Flim and Flam were terribly utilized in their opener to be honest.
Offered the Apples the solution to their cider storage for little loss on the Apple's end.
>>25559367
Not quite
>>25559022
>"Did you do anything today that was... non-explosive darling?"
"Oh yeah! I also took apart a VCR in my technology class!"
>"Did you now?"
"Yep! At first, my teacher was real mad that I had taken apart what she called 'expensive equipment.' But then I realized what some of the components did, and told her! She was so impressed that she's gonna put me in an engineering course, and advance my technology studies!"
>Pride began to ooze from Rarity's expression, coaxing you to tell her more
"So next week, I'm gonna learn about the up-and-coming touchscreen technology, and how it works with infared sensors! And the best part is, I'm the only one in my grade who's gonna be there!"
>"That's wonderful Anon! Perhaps you'll be a great engineer like..."
>Her eyes suddenly go wide as she trails off, and she looks away from you
"Like who mommy?"
>"Um... like a friend from Manehatten!"
"Really? What's his name? Can I meet him?"
>"I'm sorry sweetie, but he's rather busy with his own engineering work, and with... helping out my friend, Coco Pommel."
"Oh..."
>You can't hide your sadness, as your face drops to the floor
>"Oh, don't be so sad Anon. Tell me, did you learn anything in math today?
>Suddenly your disappointment in not meeting this strange engineering genius vanished at the prospect of talking more about yourself
"I did! I know all the multiples of numbers up to ten!"
>"Really? What are the multiples of nine then?"
"There's nine, and eighteen, and twenty-seven, and..."
>Now was not the time for your mind to draw a blank
"Um... thirty... eight?"
>"No darling, thirty-six," Mom says with a giggle. "Remember, multiplacants of nine decrease by one in the ones place, and increase by ones in the tenths place."
>>25559616
Bueno...
Also I'm absolutely loving this. Rare's actually doing math with kid anon. Oh my heart can't take the adorable. Also I have to say your interpretation of Equestria's education system is far superior to the crappy American education system I had to deal with, If I tried disassembling school property I'd have been suspended or worse, not recognized as a potential engineer and encouraged. Ugh... still though, very sexy.
>>25553096
Boner inducing, but tooooo short. I need more.
>>25559804
I hate it because it treats 500+ kids like one individual and it pushes the status quo as something worthy of the top grade.
But I'm not here to talk politics.
>>25559665
>All of a sudden, two and two were put together, the stars aligned, and you were amazed by your mother's brilliance
>"Now then, if nine times four is thirty-six, and we follow the rule I just established, what would nine times five be?
"Fourty... five?"
>"Very good! And nine times six?"
"Sixty-four!"
>"Splendid job darling. Now then, what did you do today in history?"
"We learned about the formation of Ponyville, and how the Apples played a key role in its foundation!"
>"Well, key isn't the correct word there. Crucial is more like it, seeing as we..."
"What does 'crucial' mean?"
>"Well it means that the whole thing wouldn't exist without that one element."
"Oh."
>"So what did you learn in English today?"
"I learned how to write my own name in cursive!"
>"Did you now? Care to show me how?"
>You nod, egar to show off your skills
>She levitates a parchment and a quill with ink in front of you
>Not wanting to waste any time, you draw out a cursive "A", then "N", then "O", and finally another "N"
>Feeling quite proud of your writing, you show it to your mom
>"How lovely darling! Except a small 'n' looks a lot like an 'm', and a small 'm' has an extra curve."
>Confused, you look back at your paper, and see that your 'n' and 'm' look like they do in print
"But they look like they do when I don't write it in cursive."
>"I know dear."
"So why does an 'n' have to look like an 'm' and an 'm' look like a... a..."
>"Because darling, fancy people like me think in strange ways."
"Well all fancy people that aren't you are stupid!"
>As you push your lip out into a pout, your mother can't help but chuckle
>"Come now darling, not all fancy people are terrible people. We just want everything we do to look as best it can."
>You still skoff, even if mom's explication makes sense
>>25559938
>"Do you have any homework darling?"
"Nope."
>"Then you may go to your room and play for a bit. In half an hour, I'll call you down for our playtime, and we'll have dinner a little after that
>Food did sound good, and you wanted to fiddle around with your TV some
"OK mommie. I love you!" you say, much more chipper
>"I love you too,"
>She kisses you on the cheek, and you go on your way
>"Wait darling, what were you cleaning up down here?"
>You stop your bound up the stairs and turn around
"I was just cleaning up some apple juice I spilled
>Mom then cast a digested looking glance at the counter, and you head into your room
>As the door behind you closes, you notice a VHS tape on the floor
>You don't recall leaving one out, so you walk over and pick it up
"Big Di-cked Stal-ee-ons... Fuh-ck Young Mares On Beach..." you read aloud
>You have no clue what any of that means, but you figure it's a present from mom
"Thanks for the movie mom!" you call, as you pop it in the VCR
>You then turn on the TV, and sit back
>The image that appears on the screen is very blurry, and it looks like it's been filmed an while ago
>Some text appears on the screen, but you can't make it out before it cuts away
>You did see something about eighteen plus though
>All of a sudden, a beach appears on the screen, and the title of the movie appears on-screen
>Beaches meant water, and water meant swimming
>You liked swimming
>The scene cuts to a red stallion holding a surfboard with his magic
>Suddenly, a blonde pony walks up to him, and he looks her up and down
>"So. You gonna be my ride?" she asks
>"They don't call me 'The Big Wave' for nuttin'!" he responds
>"I hear you can makes all the mares wet."
>"Why don't you try me and find out?"
>>25560037
>Thus far, you had no clue what was going on
>Then again, you had no clue what was going on in a lot of the movies you saw, yet they had big robots and explosions so they were pretty fun to watch
>Maybe this one would have big robots and explosions too
>The two ponies then went inside the shack they were standing by
>There was an unbroken panning shot of the room for a few seconds, but then the camera cut to the guy, laying on the bed
>The mare then snuggled up next to him, and began kissing him
>Your mouth dropped open in shock, as you had never seen two ponies kiss each other unless they were Special Someponies
>Then the mare reached down to the stallion's private zone and... WHAT ON...
>All of a sudden, the stallion was laying on his back, with his peepee fully exposed to the mare
>"Someone's happy to see me.." she said
>"Or someone just wants a blowjob."
>She laughed, with with a snort nonetheless, and petted the stallion's peepee
>She then ate the stallion's peepee!
>You were about to scream out in terror, until she bobbed her head back up, revealing his private part
>Oh, she was just licking it like a lolipop
>You wondered why she would put his private parts in her mouth, seeing as guys pee from there, and it can't taste very good
>But why ever she did it, it made the stallion real happy
>It also made you real happy too for some reason
>You felt your privates push against your pants, which felt unconformable
>So you took off your pants, and your underware for good measure
>The room suddenly felt very hot, so you took off your shirt as well
>You decided to thank your mom for buying you such an awesome movie, even if it didn't make any sense
"Mom! Thanks for the awesome new movie!" you called
>You then turned back to the TV, and... holy cow, is that what a female's private parts look like?
>Why would it be a circle instead of a cylander? How do you pee like that?
>>25560037
>>25560153
wonder if its his moms or his aunts
also lol
>>25560173Neither.
>>25560153
>When the stallion put his peepee into her hole, you suddenly undertood why it was shaped like a hole
>Your door then suddenly opened, with your mother in the doorway
>"Movie? What new movie dar- OH MY GOODNESS! ANON, WHAT ARE YOU WATCHING?"
>You suddenly realized mom had caught you sitting naked in your room, which she didn't like you doing
"It was getting hot in here, so I took all of my clothes off. Also, my peepee..."
>"I don't care about THAT Anon! Well... I actually do... but what I want to know is WHY you're watching THAT in my home?"
>You suddenly realized she wasn't mad about you being undressed
"It was lying on my floor mom... I though you had bought it for me..."
>"Bought... it... for... Why would you think that I bought... nevermind. Just... get your clothes on, and get out of your room. I want to see exactly what you saw."
"But..."
>"OUT!"
>You'd never seen mom this angry, so you decided it'd be best to do what she said
>You quickly exit the room, and wince as the door slams behind you
>Suddenly you realize that you're going to be in deep trouble when mom saw what was on the video, and you couldn't help but cry
>"Hey hey, what's all the ruckus about?" Auntie Sweetie, questioned suddenly in front of you
>It took all that you had to stop weeping enough to form full sentences
"Mommy didn't like what I was watching,"
>"What were watching?"
>Sweetie then opened door, and peered inside
>"Rarity? Is everything going to be al-..."
>As your Aunt went silent, you looked up at her, and saw her mouth agape with wide eyes
>She then walked into the room, and shut the door behind her
>Even through your sniffles, you could still hear the discussion going on
This will probably be all for tonight. It's pretty late here, and I need my shut-eye.
>>25560261
oh was it that vcr from school and anon dissembled his teachers porn and then re-assembled it and somehow it made its way to his room?
>>25560317
Nah, it's something entirely different.
Came from Rarity's friend in Manehatten.
>>25560341
The VCR at least. The porn comes from some Joe Schmowhom Rarity was seeing to see if he would make a good daddy for Anon.
>>25560341
Urghhh curse you for stopping when it was getting good man, I was invested.Get some good sleep
Yeepz stuff, yay!
>>25559665
>>"I'm sorry sweetie, but he's rather busy with his own engineering work, and with... helping out my friend, Coco Pommel."
I would kek if it turns out that the engineer was actually Anon before a freak magical accident turned him into a kid.
>>25560346
Who is Joe Schmo?
>>25560351
Sorry man. I'll get back to work soon.
>>25561458Ding. It is. It's actually a callback to a story I was writing a while back. I like to do that from time to time.
His actual name is Red Rocket, and he's nobody in the MLP universe. No literally, he's no one. He is the very definition of a throws away character.
>>25561723
... Ok.
I am guessing that when Anon wasn't a kid, he had a relationship with Rarity or something?
If so, that is really creepy as fuck since she is now his mother.
>>25561772
Nah, Coco.
>>25561789
... ok then, I am guessing Coco is agonizing over this because presumably there is not yet an age reversal spell that they found.
This is actually kind of sad.
Reminds me of that one FiMfic.
>>25561810
Who says the two Anon's aren't co-existing?
>>25561852
...OH FU-
>>25560261
Non-cannon time
>Suddenly, a crash resonates from downstairs
>The sound of hooves slamming against floors echos off the halls, until Coco Pommel appears in your doorway
>"Anon! Oh my sweet darling Anon! How I have missed you so!" she cries agast
>"What? Coco, this can't possibly be your Anon, this is my son."
>"Rarity, I must confess, I love little foals more than grown men! So I asked Twilight to turn Anon into a kid, so our spankings could be more meaningful, but then I realized that I want to do more crazy stuff that his small pecker and tiny fingers can't do! So I need to take him to Twilight so she can fix this!"
>Rarity looks completely taken back
>You however, are enraged
"Fuck you bitch!" you exclaim. "I'm with Rarity now!"
>"But Anon, I love you!" Coco cries
"Yeah that's tough. I never loved you. You think I enjoyed being handcuffed and smacked with a riding crop day in and day out? You think I enjoyed being humiliated by you every time we had sex? Please. The only reason I stayed with you is because you have a tight ass."
>You then walk over, and put your tiny arm around Rarity
"I've got someone more experienced now. Someone who won't bite my dick when she gives me a blowjob."
>Coco can no longer take the abuse, and runs off, crying
>Rarity is still taken aback, until you smack her, and lay spread-eagle on the bed
"Now. Back to business. Suck my tiny, hard, dick." you proclaim smugly
And now I feel shitty, so Ima do stuff to forget my crimes against Coco.
>>25558742
But this way, I get to read a bunch of greens first thing in the morning!
>>25560261
Like this! Fresh greens for breakfast!
>>25561976
Wait, this is sounding very familiar...
Were you the one who wrote that story where Anon and Coco are childhood friends, live in Manehatten, start a relationship and it turns out Coco has a bondage fetish?
Or am I just mixing my greens here?
>>25562035
That depends. Did Coco go to court over claims of theft of intellectual property from Suri?
If so,yes.
>>25562054
I can't remember, I don't think I read the entire story, and then I couldn't find it again.
Anon was working for an electric company or something like that, and they had just invented the DVD-technology I think.
>>25562125
Yep, that would be me.
>>25559938
nine times six is FIFTY four
>>25562139
Well slap my ass and call me Sally.
I'm really glad we're starting to get more writers in here.
Looking forward to see where your story is going.
>>25560261
Plot twistheh[\spoiler] Rares wasn't prepping kid Anon for their "play time". Dis gun be guud.
>>25562035
Yes, it is nice to read the fresh greens still in bed. Do that every morning.
>>25562664
Hrm... Did just a bit too much spoiler there.
>>25562675
I think you did.
>>25563595
Not sure what's going on here, but those are tiny skirts on tiny girls and I don't feel like I need more information than that.
>>25563644
Scootaloo wore shorts or something, which is against school uniform rules. Celestia spanks her and says that she's no longer allowed to wear them OR panties, as punishment.
>>25563660
The legality of that is highly questionable.
>>25563685
They will learn.
>>25563692
Your fetishes are getting really specific.
>>25563938
I just tried to pick a relevant picture.
>>25563595
>>25563692
Not sure if I can this fetish... Pic related
>>25564093
It is a struggle sometime.
>>25564293
Bondage and punishment isn't much my cup of tea, but if some anon posted a green on the subject itt, I would read. And if well written I would indeed experience expansion of the dong.
[Spoiler]Yes I am indeed encouraging >>25563595 to write a little.[/spoiler]
>>25564442
I will never into spoilers...
>>25564442
At least you got the format down this time.
>>25564442
I'm usually okay with it, and I do have a thing for spankings, but only if it's well written.
My main beef is when someone tries to do bondage, but doesn't take in to consideration the various rules and etiquette tied to the act, as well as the trust needed between the partners, and it just ends up closer to rape and abuse.
>>25564472
No capital letters in spoiler, m8. You'll get it, don't worry.
>>25564541
Yes, but there's so many rules to the syntax. It would be easier if they used Ponychan's syntax of just [?]hidden text[/?]. But there's little use in complaining, the last half decent coder this site had was W.T. Snacks.
>>25564543
Yah, too often I feel like writefriends won't properly flush out the emotions of the characters, so the delicate line of bondage is an especially difficult rope to walk. Kind curious to read some well done stuff, if you've got any you know and could point me toward.
>>25564653
YEEPZ's story about Anon x Coco is the only story I can think of at the moment.
I didn't get to the bondage itself before I stupidly lost the link to his story (and I couldn't remember the name of the it or the author), but they at least talk more in depth than almost every other story I've read that had attempted it.
The only other one off the top of my head is this fimfic
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/275162/her-most-faithful-servant
Have only read the first 3 chapters so can't fully vouch for it, but it seemed promising and the comments seem to imply it gets to the heart of bondage and does it justice.
Maybe give that one a gander.
>>25564442
>Yes I am indeed encouraging >>25563595(You) to write a little
I don't really do green. I've tried before and have ended up with three stories that "don't feel ready to post yet".
>>25564472Control+S is your friend, friend :^)
>>25564780
Good luck finding it on Google. The thing's in a Doc, and those don't show up in the search. It's litterally called Anon X Coco right now. I'll link the Doc when I get to my PC though.
The whole thing's still unfinished though. I've got maybe a page or two left to wrap up.
>>25560261
>"Sweetie, I love you, but if that's your porn, I will...!"
>"Hey! Don't try to pin this on me! I didn't even know they filmed... until today!"
>"Well then, if it's not mine, and it's not yours, who's could it... oh no..."
>"What? What is it?"
>"It was that... that ruffian Red Rocket! He must've snuck up to Anon's room when I wasn't looking! Why, when I see him again, I'm going to...!"
>"Rarity, focus on the task at hand. So... now your son knows about... What are you going to do?"
>"He knows more than just...! He knows what blowjobs and, hand jobs are too! I don't know what to-."
>"Tell him about the birds and the bees."
>"WHAT? Sweetie he's NINE! How on Earth could I..."
>"Look, outside of your friend in Manehatten, you have no reference for how humans work. Who knows? He might be at... that age."
>"But Sweetie..."
>"He already knows what... sex is..."
>"Sweetie! He'll hear!"
>"And? He's seen it Rarity, no use it keeping quiet about it!"
>"...True... but still..."
>"Best let him know what it is an what goes into it now before he tries it on some filly at school."
>The room suddenly goes silent, before the door to your room opens, and your aunt steps out
>"Anon dear... could you please come in here?" you hear your mother call
>You wipe your nose, and head into your room with your head down
>You stop in the center, and await your punishment
>"You're not in trouble dear, we just need to discuss something."
>The reassurance helps ease your sorrow slightly, but you still made your mom sad, and that's never fun to do
>You look up from the floor, and notice mom's looking pretty nervous
"What's wrong mommy?"
>>25564932
>Ctrl S
>have manually typed it all my life
Fuck.
>>25564932
>afraid that 9 is to young to teach them about sex.
>I knew when I was 4
If they are old enough to ask about it then they are old enough to know
>>25565357
Yeah, it was similar with me, I knew about sex since kindergarten, and I had my talk with my mom very early.
Hell, I can't remember a time were I didn't think about girls. Probably didn't help that I was an early bloomer when it came to puberty as well.
That's kinda why I didn't explicitly state Anon's age in my story (until I finally settled on 10) because I have some trouble wrapping my mind around a kid that age not having at least some knowledge about sex.
So I just settled on 10 and made him clueless, hoping that didn't seem too implausible.
>>25564932
moar
>>25565357
I learned at about 8, but you gotta remember, Rarity has no clue how humans work.
The only human she knows is Anon in Manehatten, and KidAnon, and that'd be a pretty akward conversation to have with Anon.
Her mindset is "better play it safe than sorry" here?
>>25564472
Ctrl+s will make a spoiler, or you can highlight the text and do it to put one around it.
>>25565548
Although, let's write out this potentially humorous situation.
>Patience was the last thing Rarity had at the moment, as she let her hoof tap against the hard kitchen tiles
>"Hello?" Coco answered after a good chunk of time
>"Hello Coco, it's me Rarity."
>"Rarity! Oh its so good to speak to you again! How goes your boutique?"
>"Business has never been better! Sorry to cut this conversation short, but... is Anon around?"
>"Anon? Uh, yeah actually. He just got here."
>"Could I possibly talk to him? I need to ask him a few questions."
>"Oh sure! Let me get him for you."
>She could hear Coco call Anon, and patiently waited in the silence for Anon
"You've reached the personal secretary for Coco Pommel. How may I help you?"
>"Very funny Anon. You never cease to amuse me."
"I do my best. So, what do you need?"
>"I was wondering... how old do humans start... maturing?"
"What, is your kid being a little brat? If he is, a belt will usually straighten him out..."
>"No! Nothing like that! I mean.. well... sexually..."
>It was at that point she had made a huge mistake
"Um... far younger than what I am now..."
>"Please Anon, be serious..."
"About nine or ten on average. Why? Is your kid learning about the wonders of puberty?"
>"Pu-ber-ty?"
"Human stage where a person is physically able to reproduce."
>"Oh. We-well yes. In fact I just caught him watching some... pornography..."
"Yo, how'd he get his hands on a porno in Ponyville? The little dude must have some connections. They're pretty common around here, but..."
>"Anonymous, please! Spare me the details!"
>She twirls the phone cord around her hoof a couple of times before speaking again
>"Could you just... tell me what I should look out for?"
"Look out for? Alright. Just so you know though, it's gonna get weird."
>"Try me."
"Alright. Well soon enough, your son's gonna wake up every morning with a boner..."
Bumpo.
>>25566909
Bump.
>>25566380
The plot thickens.And that's not the only thing.
Bump with my BDSM story, as promised.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/10-A6rB1qZlDgM5XMJjZBmHth1TjQ58h5PUZ8aZs6SnU/edit
For those who are wondering, the actual BDSM discussion starts at page 40, and the sex starts at page 52.
>>25567981
It's not actually part of the story. It's just a little joke I tossed in for fun.
>>25568071
Oh, okay then.
>>25564932
>"Well... you know that video you were watching earlier?"
"I'm sorry I made you mad with that mommy. I swear, I won't ever watch it again."
>"No, no honey. I'm not mad about that. Although I FORBID you from ever watching something like that again. It's just... the video startled me, that's all."
"Oh. So what did you want then?"
>Mom takes a huge gulp, and shuffles around for a second
>"Well... I wanted to talk to you. About what was in the video."
"It made me feel really good mommy! What was that on the screen?"
>"What you saw... was called sex. What happens there is when too ponies who love each other very much get together, and put their private parts together."
"So then could we do it?"
>"WHAT?"
>The fear rushes back to you, and you chose your next words very carefully
"Well you said it was something ponies who love each other very much do... and I'm not a pony, don't you love me very much?"
>"Well yes, but..."
"And I love you very much, so that means..."
>"Anon, this act is only done by ponies who feel a special love for each other. One a son and her mother can't possibly feel?"
"Why's that?"
>"I'll explain that in a little bit. Now then, this can result in the creation of a foal, but I doubt it'll happen to you. But then again, no one's really tested to see if human and pony hybrids exist. I doubt they do though, but we're not talking genetics right now. What creates the foal, is when a liquid that comes from the male's private bits makes contact with an egg inside the female."
"There are EGGS in ponies?"
>"Yes, but they don't work like chicken eggs. They form into foals inside the woman in an area in her tummy called a womb, but that's a lesson that your health teacher will tell you. Now, the male private part is called a 'penis', and the female private part is called a 'vagina'."
"OK..."
>"So then, that's really all there is too it. Now, you're not to talk about this at school..."
"So why can't a mom and her son form that kind of love?"
>>25568493
>mother tries to explain sex
>uses that classically horseshit concept of "only people who love eachother do it"
>backfires by son wanting wincest
>>25568493
>Her words stop dead in her mouth, completely forgotten by their owner
>"W-well, a mare and a stallion form this love when they've known each other for a long period of time, and..."
"Like us!"
>"Yes... like us. But again, a mother and her son can't form this kind of bond because..."
>You waited patiently for an excuse from your mother, but she failed to come up with one
>"Well, if a mother and son were to have sex, it would look very bad in the eyes of the public."
"Why? If they love each other very much, shouldn't they be able to do it without fear of bad thing happening to them?"
>"It's just a social taboo honey. There's genetic ramifications in the children that could come out of it because of the close genetic-link between the two ponies..."
"But you already said I couldn't make a kid by putting my semen into a mare's womb. So why would it be bad if we formed that kind of love?"
>The more you talked about this, the more your mother's face turned red
>At this point, she was shifting uncomfortably in her seat, making strange little noises every once in a while
>"Well... because if a grown mare were to have sex with a young colt, it's seen as taboo socially because the foal isn't old enough to truly know what sex means."
"What's there to really know? The male sticks his penis in the female's vagina, and he thrusts in and out until a liquid called sperm comes out, which comes in contact with the egg in the woman, and it goes into the womb, and forms into a foal."
>Your mother looks taken back for a second, and stammers as she attempts to regain her train of thought
>"Well yes, it is a bit more complex than that, but that is the general idea. But it's not that aspect that they understand. It's the emotional side. They don't fully understand the emotional side of it..."
"But you said it happens when two ponies who love each other very much, like we do for each other! So then why is it so bad if we were to do it?"
>>25568759
The kid truly is tenacious. He's got spunkand is eager to share it.
>>25568759
Damn son he is fucking persistent
>>25568801
also not sure if I picked the right reaction gif he seems to be more resigned about it rather than happy
Maybe this one is better
>>25568759
Man, that kid is determined.
>How do you write teacher and student green without it being shit?
>How
>>25563692
>tfw you will never put churros in Sweetie Belle
You know you get it you sick bastards.
>>25569141
These are the questions that people will ponder for ages to come.
>>25569141
Think from both perspectives and write from both perspectives. Be a horny little colt or filly who just discovered masturbation. Be the lonely teacher who fantasizes about teaching her little students the more personal parts of life. Have them come together in some way... But I get you, is a difficult subject.
>>25569141
Hmm... Damn, the only scenarios I can think of that isn't like taken from a cliched porno is either very dark or very tragic.
2edgy4porn
>>25569297
That's good advice though all the same. It's best to explore your options. I'm mostly really worried about getting painted into a corner and going edgy and stupid.
>>25569447
Exactly!
I really hate it when it's "Aww.. they have a tragic backstory", that can be part of it, but it shouldn't be a crutch.
Anons, what are your least favorite cliches in green?
>>25569480
I hate it when a character is unrealistically clueless.
It's one thing to be a little naive, inexperienced or dumb, but when something is painfully obvious, yet the main character completely misses it just for the sake of humor can annoy me to no end.
It's one of my main beefs with the "reverse gender roles"-greens, even though I generally enjoy them, because it is such a staple for them to have Anon be completely daft when it comes to social cues.
I also hate the whole spaghetti thing. It was funny the first two times I read it, but it quickly became old, especially when a story would keep using it over and over and over and over again.
>>25569480
It's how I'd take it, but it's also a little cliche with the whole lonely teacher part... but often cliches are that way because they are often true IRL.
Though my least favorite cliche in greens is when the reason for the sex isn't explained. I mean.
>Be Anon
>Be in bed
>Suddenly Luna bursts into your chambers
>She is sad and drunk
>She proceeds to lye across you, kissing you
"I'mOkWithThis.jpg"
>You and Luna proceed to have kinky horse secks...
Everything happens for a reason, and having the reason aired is what makes it so much more interesting to read. Believe it or not I read greens for more than just dong expansion. I like to feel what the author feels, and a well flushed out green can make a lot of feels rise up... among other things.
>>25569616
>implying there has to be some sort of established reason
>implying you cant just be happy that this girl is drunk and horny enough to have sex with you
>>25569616
Yeah, it's no fun when a green just leaps straight into the action.
I'm not asking for like a super long and detailed prologue, but having some form of setup really helps with the immersion.
>>25569609
I also have to agree with you about the spaghetti and cluelessness. I unfortunately think I fell into a bit of the clueless cliche with my kid Anon being 13 and not knowing about masturbation... but I'll just chalk it up to him having a sheltered and unimaginative childhood on Earth. But when it comes to things like Anon is fully grown and has been in Equestria for a while, but doesn't comprehend the basics of their reversed gender roles, it becomes painful to read.
>>25569616
Oh fuck nigga I just realized
I think I remember reading a green of this
She was super drunk and sad and she rode him cowgirl style
Celly came to pick her up and she somehow knew and winked at anon
I need it
Anyone got a pastebin or cap or something?
Ive been wanting it for a while now
>>25569661
Not saying I wouldn't still sex a drunk horny Luna... it would just be lacking in emotion to an outside observer.
>>25569663
Exactly. If it's a short green it doesn't need much, but a little setup goes a long way with getting into the feeling.
>>25569686
I dunno man. I was just writing the best example of that cliche that came to mind. But I'd be interested to glance it over.
>>25569661
The separation between reality and >greens
>>25569616
Cliches are cliche because they are relatable and can lead to good moments, but they can also lead to lazy writing.
>>25569609
I can see the times where it is well placed and funny, but yeah, the majority of the time it's not adding anything. RGRE is a very good example of that, the writing is so much more interesting when Anon has to adapt/fight in a situation rather than shrug it off.
>>25569661
Some of us just think it's sexier when a story has more than just "penis A is inserted into horsepussy B". Emotions can be just as hot as the motions themselves, m8.
>>25569669
Yes, but that can be explained by naivety and inexperience, so it's justifiable and I can believe it, despite what I wrote here >>25565439 about my own views. He just might have been that sheltered. It isn't like he's just dumb or something like that, once he gets it explained to him he starts getting it rather quickly.
>>25568759
>Your mom then suddenly rises to her hooves, and begins pacing back and forth in the room
>You look down at the spot where she was just sitting, and notice there's a small wet spot where she was sitting, and figure that she probably peed herself
>But she did say that stallions had some sort of liquid that leaked out of their penises that wasn't pee
>Perhaps mares did the same
"Mom. Can I ask a question."
>"If it's a question about a mother and son having sex, I swear..."
"Do mares leak out juice like stallions do?"
>She casts a funny look at you, before her entire face contorts into a funny look
>"Why ever do you ask?"
"Because there's a small puddle on my bed where you were sitting."
>One cold stare at your bed from your mother is all it takes to know you've got her in a bind
>"...Yes darling, they do..."
"Why do they create a liquid then? Can males get pregnant too?"
>Silence
>"No. It's used to show... arousal from the mare?"
"What's arousal?"
>Your mother's face is now glowing red, which only furthers your curiosity
>"It means sexual excitement."
"So you want to have sex then?"
>"Well I suppose you could interpret it that way..."
>The more she talks, the more your mother's speech increases in speed
"So then why don't we have sex? To get the urges out of your system?"
>She looks at you near-disgusted, making you greatly regret your question instantly
>Although she soon bites her lip as it quivers, and she looks like she's actively considering your proposal
>She begins trotting in place, whining silently to herself as she does so
>"I mean... we could just this... NO. Not with your son! You could scar him for life... But still..."
>You merely watch your mother as she speaks quietly to herself
>Finally, she turns to look at you, with a strange look in her eyes
>She then goes to your door, closes it, and locks it
>>25570097
fucking unf
>>25570097
>She allows her hoof to linger on the door for a single moment, before turning to you
>The floor suddenly seems interesting to her for a moment, before she looks up at you with pleading eyes
>"Sweetheart... if I do this to you... you must swear to never tell a soul."
>You form a cross with your fingers, and nod
"I won't tell anyone."
>And you meant it
>She sighs to herself, before turning away from you
>"Take off your clothes darling..."
>You do so, and fold your hands in your lap
>The slight chill of the room, and the warmness of your hands feels really nice on your pee-p... penis
>You can even feel it growing slightly underneath it's hand canopy
"Mommy? Why is my penis growing?"
>"It means you're aroused darling. You're getting an erection."
>She sounds kinda defeated, like you do when you loose a big baseball game
"Mommy, are you feeling alright."
>"Fine darling. Just... trying to come to grips that I'm actually going to have sex with my son."
>You merely shrug to yourself, as your mom walks over, and plops herself in front of you
>She breathes onto your dick, making you shiver in the process
>"Have you noticed anything different about me lately darling?" she asks, looking over your tiny penis
>Now that she mentions it...
"You've been a lot hotter recently."
>Mom giggles to herself
>You really have no idea why
>"Yes darling. That means I'm in season. That means, my body craves sex."
>She then gently places a hoof on the underside of your penis, near your balls, and slowly strokes up
>"This is called a hoofjob darling."
>You breathe in deeply, as she pulls her hoof up your erection, and then slides it back down
>As she strokes you again, she licks her other hoof, and presses it against the other side of your penis
>As she slides down with both hooves, you moan loudly, and your mom licks her lips
>"How'd that feel sweetie?"
"R-really good."
>"I'm glad to hear."
>>25570327
ITS HAPPENING
>>25570327
Also
>Mom giggles to herself
Thats the moment when she gives in completely, just totally lets go, and says "I want this"
>>255703275 dollar foot dong
Alright, time for the fourth installment of the Marvelous Misadventures of Scootaloo and Kid Anon in Equestria!!!
>You stood up while she packed her few things back into her saddle bag.
>You chose to leave your board and helmet by the tree. You can’t imagine you’ll need them in the forest. Scoots does the same.
>You offer your hand to her sitting form.
>She raises her hoof to meet your hand.
>Grabbing tightly you pull her up and give her a little smile.
“Hope you’re not too tired to lead the way Scoots.”
>”Well… it is a little bit of a walk, but not far… How well can you climb?”
“Pretty well I am ‘The Monkey Kid’ after all.”
>What an imaginative taunt some of the more xenophobic colts and fillies had taken to calling you behind your back… and to your face some times.
>”Heh, good.”
>You and Scoots walked through the thickening forest.
>Open space between towering trees turned to bush, and open trails turned into little more than deer paths.
>Scoots kept the lead, her head swiveling, looking for… something.
>You kept your eyes ahead, watching the ground for any surprises.
>It was difficult footing occasionally, you could feel larger, course rocks underfoot, but the layer of fresh leaves camouflaged all the potential twisted ankles.
>The trails were beginning to take on a serious downward incline, and if you looked straight ahead you could tell you were walking into a valley.
>Soon you were noticing outcroppings of large rocks between trees. Poking up like ancient monuments to a once tall and mighty mountain, reduced to boulders.
>As you and Scoots continued down the forested hill you noticed more and more boulders of increasing size.
>”Ah ha! There it is!” Scoots sounded excited.
>>25570978
“There’s what? All I see is trees and rocks.” You looked toward what she was walking toward.
>”This, it means we’re on the right path.” She was pointing toward a stylized arrow on a boulder maybe three times her size.
>The arrow pointed toward a slightly wider deer trail, still going down the hillside.
>’Huh… I wonder if this is what she saw when we left the road?’
>You approached the boulder. The stylized arrow was much larger and complex than you thought, taking up a third of the rock’s face.
>You’d stopped to gander at the magnificently intricate arrow on the boulder. Each sharp edge was instead a spiral of contrasting red’s, blues, blacks, and whites. It was speckled with little dots and images.
>You wished you had a camera…
>”Well Anon, what are you waiting for? This is just the beginning!”
“N-nothing, just looking at the rock.”
>”Well there will be plenty of rocks to look at when we get there!”
>She was already proceeding further down the hill.
“Hey, wait up!”
>You rushed to catch up, but the leaves were slick atop the gravel trail, and you couldn’t risk running like her.
“Must be nice having four legs!” You yell forward “Never have to worry about losing your foo-Ahhh”
>Your foot slipped over a loose rock, and you fell gracelessly on your ass.
>”Anon! Are you hurt?” Scoots was immediately by your side.
“Uhhhh, S-Scoots… c-closer…” You half whisper, lying on your back.
>”A-anon, I-I’m…” She was lowering her head, nearly whispering, tears forming in her eyes.
>She’s next to your ear.
>”I-I’m… SO NOT FALLING FOR THIS!” She was just speaking in a regular volume, but it sounded like she was yelling.
>>25570987
“Ahhhh yah got me, but you still fell for my trap card!” You lounge up, wrapping your arms around her neck into a warm embrace. She backed up, and your hug didn’t last as long as you wanted.
>She gives you a little clop to the side of the head.
>”Don’t do that Anon… you scared me…” A crease of concern adorning her muzzle.
“Sorry, but you’re cute when you’re concerned… and I wanted to catch up to you… so I brought you to me.” You were smiling, but still felt a little bad for tricking her.
>”Don’t do that again, promise?”
“Promise.”
>This time she held out her hoof to you, offering you a lift.
>With a mighty tug she pulled you up to her, than without releasing your hand she stood on her hind legs, bringing her forelegs over your shoulders.
>She looked into your eyes, and you could still see the remains of her concern abating back into her irises.
>Than just like that she planted a quick kiss on your lips and hopped off you.
>”You know you can be a real drama queen sometimes Anon.”
“Well things are boring without drama… so I just like to make my own sometimes.” You were shrugging.
>”Huh, well just don’t go scaring me you know.” She gave you a little smile.
>The both of you resumed your walk down the hill, watching as the boulders kept growing and growing in size, from filly size to stallion size to wagon size.
>By the time you’d nearly reached the bottom the boulders were of all sizes, from pebbles to house size chunks of weather worn slag.
>You could hear the distant trickle of running water nearby, you were definitely nearing the bottom of the valley.
>”There look!” Scoots was pointing forward.
>You look past her and see another large colorful arrow on a boulder… pointing directly up… or was that over?
>Scoots runs up to the boulder, fluttering her wings, easily jumping atop the carriage sized boulder.
>>25570997
>”This is the climbing part… Well more of a jumping part… But yah, get up here!”
>She looked practically ecstatic.
>Staring the boulder down you plan your attack. There is a smaller boulder adjacent to that… If you can just get a running start you can use that as a platform to get atop your target.
>’Well no time like the present.’
>You run down the remainder of the hill, jump with all your might, land, and jump again, and land again.
>You were next to Scoots, looking down about five or six feet to the ground.
“That was fun!”
>”Awesome! Because there is a lot more where that came from.”
>You and Scoots turn around simultaneously.
>Before you lies a field of boulders, transected at points by a swift shallow creek, bordered by trees and rising hill faces on either side.
>The sun shone through the break in the canopy caused by the lack of trees, and you could see more, smaller and less stylized arrows pointing away from where you and Scoots stood.
“Well let’s follow the signs.”
>You jump onto the next boulder within your range, and Scoots does the same.
>Than you hop to the next, and the next, keeping your momentum up so you can make slightly longer jumps.
>Scoots can get slightly further than you can thanks to the added lift her maturing wings provided… but she still couldn’t fully take flight.
>The rocks were weathered and course enough to give you confidence with each jump that your feet wouldn’t slip and break.
>This felt wonderful, and you hopped like a ninja over the boulders toward the mysterious place all the arrows pointed.
>Scoots was taking a different set of boulders than you, but you were never more than fifty feet from the filly.
>You occasionally looked down, and could spot small fish scattering in the crystalline water.
>You realized you were getting thirsty again, but you wouldn’t have another drink until you arrived at this rate.
>’I hope we’re getting close…’
>>25570997
>You and Scoots continue to follow the trail of boulders as it lazily followed the streams’ path.
>Coming up is a large bend in the path, and you think you can see some colorful rocks poking out from behind the hillock.
>Scoots races ahead and pounces on a boulder immediately before the bend, she looks right at you, confidence in her eyes, chest puffed out, wings splayed.
>”I would like to welcome you, Anonymous, to…” She waited for you to make the final jump to her boulder. “The Sanctuary!”
>She jumped one boulder further, and you followed… and turning the corner you were greeted by a blast of color.
>All up the hill side were spray painted boulders, big and small, each with their own theme.
>One had a huge Sun like Celestia’s cutie mark, another a spectacular moon in the image of Luna’s mark.
>Another was a huge mushroom, and another a series of pained doors, another was covered in various tags. Some you’d seen elsewhere, others were completely foreign.
>Everywhere you looked was another beautiful spray-painted mural.
>You felt a tear form in your eye.
>”Well what do you think?”
>Scoots was rubbing her head against your side.
“Its… its… I can’t, I just can’t begin…” You were shifting your gaze all up and down the hill.
>The sun shone through the breaks in trees between the painted boulders, casting shadows that played with the color, only rendering the vista even more spectacular.
“It’s wonderful!” You exclaimed, jumping down from your boulder on to the gravel shore of the creek.
>”Isn’t it! It always changes a little whenever I come here.” Scoots joined you on the shore of the creek.
>You start walking in no particular direction, forgetting your thirst, just marveling at this most odd place.
>Scoots walks next to you, sticking close, but also letting her eyes wander.
>”Ohhh this is new!” She points a hoof over to a large painting of a chess piece, a rook, if you knew your chess well enough.
>>25571012
>”That used to be a faded old painting of a drop of water with things in its reflection”
“I wish I could have seen it” You regret.
>”No, you don’t, look closer at the piece, it’s made of so many smaller chess pieces!”
>Indeed it was, the large rook was nothing more than hundreds of white or black pawns, knights, bishops, and just two sets of kings and queens on opposite sides.
>You two walk all around the field of graffiti art, taking in each and every work in the afternoon’s golden rays.
>After quite a while of silent observation Scoots perks up.
>”Hay, ummm, check this out.” She grabs your hand in her hoof.
>She leads you between a few boulders to what could best be described as the center of the field where one particularly large boulder proudly sat.
>”This is the Boulder of Nopony”
>You could have read it, the title was emblazoned on the boulder.
>All over the boulder were tags of various pony graffiti artists.
>”I was wondering if you wanted to, you know, leave your tag. It’s tradition.”
>Scoots reaches into her saddlebag and produces a can of black spray paint in her mouth, which she offers to you.
“I would be honored.” You take the can and give it a shake.
>You walk around the boulder until you find a suitably empty patch of gray rock face.
>Quickly and gracefully you produce your mark. Two legs made in one fell swoop. Arms like a sine wave, straight line running from the top of the legs, up through the middle of the sine wave, and up further. A circle for the head. Some scruff on top for hair, and last but not least two ‘X’s for eyes.
>You stood back, proud of your work as a few lines of wet paint dripped down.
>Now it was Scoot’s turn, she had a red can in her mouth, and stood up to where you had just sprayed your tag.
>>25571028
>She proceeded to spray two wings on either side of your tag, giving the little painted man large wings.
“Why did you put wings on my tag?”
>Scoots put down the can
>”Well he always looks kinda sad, so I wanted to give him wings to be happy about.”
>Her wings were splayed again.
>Smiling you wrap her in a hug which she returns in force.
“He looks happier already.”
>Another half hour or so goes by as you two travel up the hill inspecting the newer pieces of art.
>Occasionally you felt compelled to draw little things on the open rocks, hand prints, a bug, and your best attempt at a Pegasus.
>Scoots did the same, flowers, a scooter, a sword, and one of what was supposed to be you.
>After a little while longer you found yourselves on a small cliff a ways up the hill, above most of the boulders and artwork.
>You were becoming exhausted from all this exertion, and your cotton mouth was killing you.
>You took this opportunity to reach into Scoot’s saddle bag and grab the water skin.
>Plopping yourself down on a cliff you let your legs dangle over the edge as you sipped from the skin.
>Scoots emulates you, sitting like a Lyra on a park bench, rear legs over the edge, front legs behind her supporting her.
>You offered the water to her, but she shook her head, instead resting herself against your side.
>You wrap your arm around her as she leans into you, feeling her warmth and softness between your fingers.
>You let out a little sigh.
“Scoots, how do you find all these places?”
>”Well I have lived here a lot longer than you… and I just like to go out exploring… sometimes with friends, but mostly alone.”
”But how did you find this place?”
>”W-well… one of the other orphans showed me it a long time ago.”
“Ohh…”
>>25571036
>You knew she was an orphan, you’d discovered this little fact from Twi who encouraged your friendship with her…
>”Yah, I mean, it’s who I am… old Dusky showed me this… just before she had to leave since she was too old to stay in foster care.”
“I’m… sorry to hear that.”
>”Don’t be Anon, it’s what I’ll have to do one day… when I’m old. It’s what we all have to do.”
“What will you do then?”
>”I dunno… maybe try to get a job, but I don’t want one. I want to skate, and draw, and be with you…” She rubbed her head against yours a little causing your nose to itch from her windblown wild mane.
>”What about you Anon?”
”I… I….”
>Come to think of it you had never really thought of your future here, just living day to day.
“I don’t know.”
>”Don’t worry about it.”
“Heh, I wasn’t before.”
>You play with a little bit of her mane that’s falling over your chest.
>The sun isn’t as high as it used to be, it had to be close to 5… the sun sets by 6:30 these days.
>You pull your hood over your head and snuggle Scoots closer.
>”Hay Anon?”
“Yah Scoots.”
>”What did you mean when you said you were dead yesterday?”
>A shiver ran down your spine, and Scoots held you tighter, able to sense your shiver.
>You take a deep breath of the crisp air and close your eyes to the beautiful land that lay before you.
“What I meant is… I can remember myself dying.”
>>25571047
>”Like… when you were back on Earth?”
“Yah, when I was back on Earth… and now I’m not sure if I’m dead or alive anymore.”
>”But you seem alive to me… and I’m alive… and… and…”
>She was losing her words, and instead opted to just hold you.
“Yah, you seem that way to me you know… but you only know your one life… Imagine suddenly falling into a world full of things like me, and you’re the only Pegasus… would you think you’d died?”
>”I… ummm… I don’t know what I’d think… I might think I was dead… if I knew how it happened that is… Do you know how you… died?”
“No.”
>You were lying... And you knew Scoots knew you were.
>Scoots looked up at you, and you down to her. Her purple eyes were wide, a small tear forming.
>”Anon… I don’t know what I’d think if I was in your place… but I can tell you what it’s like watching your parents die…”
“Scoots…”
>You give her a little squeeze.
>”I was in the sky carriage when it happened, just me, my Mom, and my Dad… I was a lot smaller back then.”
>She looked down a little, a tear falling off her muzzle.
>”We were going to Manehattan to see a friend when the storm took us. My Dad was pulling the carriage, and me and Mom were in the back. The storm was out of nowhere, and it didn’t look too bad at first.”
>You were wrapping her in a hug.
>”But then… a bolt of lightning struck my Dad… I can still see him, going completely stiff… we started to fall. Mom tried to fly out and lift him… but she couldn’t. We crashed to the ground, she was crushed by the carriage…”
>She was full out crying now, and so were you.
>”I stayed there for a day, under the wreck of our carriage… with them… until a traveler found us… From there I’ve just been in foster homes…”
>You hold her close…
“Oh Scoots…”
>>25571057
>You can’t say you’re sorry, that will do nothing… you can just empathize… which is actually doable since your parents are as good as dead to you now.
>”T-that’s why I’m jealous of you Anon!”
“Why? I’ll never see my parents again either…”
>Saying that hurt your heart as a swarm of memories flooded your mind… all of them you pushed aside.
>”Because you have Twilight as your new Mom. She’s wonderful, she cares about you, and… and… you’re the only one she really cares about.”
“But she has friends, family, the princesses… I’m not the only one…”
>”You her only kid!” She blurts out to you.
“….”
>”Foster parents are terrible… they’ve had so many kids in their care before… I don’t mean anything to them… I once broke my leg… and Dusky was the only one who stayed by my side when they put the caste on me.”
>She was gently weeping into your shoulder.
>”They… they say they love you… but that’s all. Then they go and say it to every other kid they have, just the same, and go to bed at night… leaving us… leaving me… alone.”
>Your heart was breaking and reforming in so many ways right now.
“Scoots… I… well I love you… and wouldn’t leave you alone.”
>”Heh… I love you too Anon… t-thank you”
>She’s still sobbing a little into your shoulder, her words just a little muffled…
>You lean your head over hers and plant a kiss on her forehead.
>She stirs a little and raises her head, eyes a little puffy and red, nose dribbling just a bit, and her muzzle all moist from tears…
>’She’s beautiful… in this time and place we get to share… she’s real…’
>She closes her eyes, and raises her face toward you, you do the same lowering your head toward hers, slowly closing your eyes.
>You can feel her hot breath escaping her nose, making a little sniffing sound as she exhales.
>>25571068
>Your mouths meet, your tongues come out to play, and you hold each other dear and tight.
>The embrace lasts an eternity as you and her exchange your oral affections.
>And after the timelessness wears off you both split from each other’s faces, tongues tucked away, eyes opening… you and her giggle.
>It is getting late, and the sun is starting to set. But you two lean back against the cold rock slab and embrace each other once more.
>The passionate kiss lets you run your hand through her mane, and she rubs her hooves over your back and over your hood, removing it slightly so she can feel your hair.
>The kiss breaks much the same as the last, and you both know you can’t spend forever here as much as you both would like.
“Hey Scoots, I think it’s time we go.”
>The lengthening shadows were beginning to give you an eerie feeling, and you wanted to go back home and have dinner with Scoots and Twi and even Spike.
>”Yah… hay, thank you.”
“For what?” You ask innocently.
>”For being you silly!” She booped her nose against yours.
>You blush a little.
“Well… ummmm… Thank you for being you Scootaloo.”
>”Heh, it was nothing Anon.”
>She smiles at you as she picks herself up.
>You grab her saddle bag and stand as well, placing it back across her back.
>”Lets get outta here… this place gives me the creeps at night.”
“You and me both…”
>”They say the ghosts of the artists who died lurk The Sanctuary at night.” She says this in a somewhat serious tone… like she’s seen things.
>A gust of wind blows through the trees, string a small whirl wind of leaves in front of you and her.
>A chill runs through your spine and you take a step closer to Scoots.
“Yah lets go now!”
>You and her proceed to retrace the path you took to get to The Sanctuary. It doesn’t seem to take nearly as long to get out of the forest as it did to get in.
>In a mere fifteen minutes the both of you are back to your gear.
>>25571077
>You pick up your board and dawn your helmet. Scoots does the same, but trails her scooter behind her.
“So Scoots, I was wondering if you wanted to have dinner with me and Twi tonight.”
>”Yah that would be great. I love eating at your place. The food is soooo much better than at the home.”
“Cool, want to head there now?”
>You were getting pretty hungry. This was an exhausting day.
>”Ummm do you want to do something first?”
“Like what, more kissing? We can just do that later tonight.”
>”No, like bomb a hill?”
“Ohhhh you know my weaknesses all too well”
>It was true, while tricks and racing were fun on a board, there was nothing like the feeling of flying down a hill.
>”Well just a little further down the road is this suuuper awesome hill.”
“Awesome!”
>You drop your board, hop on, and proceed to kick yourself up the remainder of the hill.
>A few short minutes later and you were approaching the obvious crest of this once glorious mountain.
>Stopping yourself at the peak you scan down. It’s a lot steeper on this side, but it’s mostly straight and it levels out to a long flat plane. This was a perfect hill to bomb.
>>25571087
>”So race yah to the bottom?”
>Something in your heart hitched as she spoke these words to you. Flash backs, horrible memories, painful past experiences.
>You pushed them away, shaking your head, turning to Scoots and giving her a little wink.
>With that you kick yourself off down the hill, Scoots following close behind.
>As you quickly gain speed you put your arms out to your sides, letting the swift, cold air refresh and break you a little.
>Scoots takes the chance and leans forward, overtaking you.
>She can’t turn around to give you some kind of taunt, this is a serious hill requiring serious attention.
>Attention you were currently diverting to her form.
>Her sweet body hunched over in determination, her purple hair flying everywhere behind her, her fragile wings tucked tight to her sides.
>She was starting to get too far ahead of you, and you ducked down into a more prone position to reduce air drag.
>Keeping the straight line, you’re getting closer to Scoots.
>You’re still eyeing her body though, taking long glances at places you probably shouldn’t be…
>’But oh she’s just so cute… I want to press myself against her…’
>There’s a familiar hardness in your pants, but you can’t give it any attention, you’ve got to be going 45 or more miles an hour now.
>But still, you can’t help but stare, her tail is flying everywhere in the wind, covering nothing.
>’Oh… oh my God, did… did her… did her place just twitch?’
>”ROOOOOOCKS!!!”
>Scoots wings suddenly splayed as she propelled herself above a patch of fist sized rocks… they were directly in your path… and you didn’t have wings.
“WhaaaAHHHHH UMMMPHHHH AAAACCCCCK-“
>Blackness.
And there we have it friends, installment 4 of 6 complete. This is the most pleasant group of writers and readers I've found, and I get a warm feeling inside myself whenever I update this story. Even though this segment isn't very sexy, I hope it does give you feelings.
Anyway here is the updated pastebin, now with 25% less grammatical errors! http://pastebin.com/BAne48b7
Anyway I gotta make some food before I keel over. Will be back in a bit to read YEEPZ updates. Stay awesome!
>>25571159
And now it gets interesting.
>>25569480
Least favorite cliché?
I have a few.
First and foremost, there's the long-standing crush between X pony and Anon. While I am guilty of this myself, my beef comes primarily from how much it's used. It can be a good plot device, but it seems like writers pull the "Oh, I've loved you for such a long time!" card to side-step actually developing the relationship of the two.
Second of all, Anon being this super suave guy that can do no wrong. I remember an Anon was complaining that Anon in greentexts basically served as the writer's self-insert Gary Stu that was perfect in every way. And he was right. I feel like Anon needs to be more than just a freeloader in Ponyville that gets all the girls because he does. I recall there reading a EQG fic where Anon was an orphan who had been taken under the Apple's wing as one of their own. He was working for Mac in his car repair shop, and had genuine interests and relationships. The best part? His flaw. He had terrible anger issues that lead to him killing a dude in cold blood. And that was an awesome shake-up for the story.
Finally, when people tell, but don't show. Don't think I need to go into detail about this.
Bumpo.
>>25570327
Oh my, this is getting hotter than the Sahara in July and wetter than the Amazon in November. Simply... Me gusta.
>>25569735
It's when the good moments don't fall flat that the cliches are used best...
>>25569754
Yah, kid Anon was always too busy playing vidya and skating around town to learn anything about his body... Let's go with that.
>>25571524
I agree with all your cliche related grievances. The absolute worst is not showing, but just telling. You can tell what takes 30 lines of showing in just 3... And that's just not sexy.
>>25545478
Is there a pastebin of this story?
>>25569221
I do. I can't not think about it when I see that picture.
>>25571966
I don't think so
>>25570327
Mama knows best.
>mfw
>>25571077
But Scoots...Hay is for horses.
>>25571159
Very cute chapter!
I'm glad you're feeling welcomed. I was nervous when I started my story, since it is my first time writing clop (or any porn at all), but the thread has been very supportive, for which I'm very grateful.
You're doing great, keep it up!
>>25571524
I think part of the reason why Anon ends up being so Gary Stu is because of the 2nd-person formula. Since the reader is expected to at least somewhat put himself into the story, he's by his very concept a self-insert, not just for the writer but for the readers as well, and no-one wants to be a loser.
I personally like it when a character is flawed. Where's the drama if you can just easily solve every problem?
I'm usually more forgiving about this in greens, since they tend to be short and there really isn't the time or space needed to dig that deep into drama. But it really can seriously drag down the quality of a story.
Show, don't tell. That can also be very frustrating, but sadly it is something I accidentally dip in to from time to time.
I try not to do that, I really do! I want my story to paint a picture inside the readers mind, but sometimes I just get hung up on pointing out the details and eventually I find myself running out of good ways to describe them without repeating myself.
So I start telling more instead of showing, and end up repeating myself anyway. Shit's annoying as all hell.
I'm also worried that I won't properly convey what I want in my writing and that I'll end up confusing the reader, especially since English is not my native language (despite learning it since I was 2 or 3 years old), so there's always the fear of misusing a word I'm not too familiar with.
Like I said, I try to stay away from it, but sometimes it just happens without me noticing it until it's too late.
>>25571966
As far as I know, that picture is all there is.
>>25570327
>You notice anything about me lately?
>Well, it seems like you've been dripping everywhere
Holy fuck.
>>25570327
Godamnit yeepz I need moar of this hurry plox
>>25575213
Sure thing equal sign.
Getting back to it now.
>>25576436
dunno why i have an equal sign attached to me
>>25576588
Because it's a Starlight Glimmer episode friend.
>>25576678
Starlight was a cutie filly.
Pigtails. CUTE PIGTAILS
Oh boy, the finale delivered
>>25577816
>mfw I've never watched the show like ever except for a few minutes of a couple episodes
>mfw i love the porn
>mfw 5 seasons are now complete and there are 2 left
>mfw im gonna marathon run the entire show after i get done with some other shit on my backlog
>mfw I will be all caught up for season 6 and then the final 7th one
>mfw I will be getting off to the porn till the end
>>25577945
>fan of the famdom
You know there's even better porn of other things out there, right?
>>25578109
>famdom
Senpaidom
>>25577816
....Requesting of Twilight going back in time to rape Dash.
Tricking her into thinking it's an Awesome trick.
>>25579105
..Whoops I meant Green of Twilight going back in time.
>>25579105
Twilight had taken a moment to catch up to the rainbow maned filly. Despite the dire time she needed to stop Starlight, that suppressed lust seemed to stir and tickle all those right spots she knew were so very wrong. Being so close to the filly made her heart beat faster as she smiled and bit her lip. "Hey.. You want to..see something neat?"I posted this to a friend for fun when the subject came up.
>>25577945
>fag of the fandumb
>>25579166
That would be great green.
>>25570327
>Another couple of strokes with her hooves pass, before she takes both off, and instead lightly pushes against the top of your penis
>"Now son, there are many parts of your penis," Mom explains in a dazed state. "What I'm stroking now, is called your 'shaft', or 'member'. Your 'shaft' is basically the body of your penis. This here..."
>She then pulls the skin back slightly, fully revealing the very tip of your penis
>Your spine runs cold as she paws at the exposed flesh with her wet hoof
>It felt so good...
>A little bit too good...
>You wimper slightly as the overwhelming amount of pleasure rushes over you
>"Is called your 'head'."
>She looks up satisfied, but her expression quickly drops as she notices your slightly pained expression
>"Whoops. Sorry darling, I forget you're still sensitive there. Here, allow me to make up for it."
>You cannot contain a shuttery gasp, as she runs her tongue slowly along the bottom of your member
>"Did that help?"
>You can only nod in your current euphoric state
>She chuckles, and begins stroking you with one hoof again
>"I suppose we can move on to the next phase then."
>She then takes her hoof off your member, and licks her lips
>"What I'm about to do now, is called a 'blowjob'."
>A wave of pleasure washes over you, as she engulfs your penis in one motion
>She stays near the base of your member for a few moments, before she pulls her head back
>When her head nearly pulls off your cock, she pushes it back down, much faster this time
>A moan wells up inside you, and you can't keep yourself from letting it loose
>Loudly
>Mom pulls off you for a moment, but doesn't allow the pleasure to stop as she continues to stroke you
>"Try to keep it down darling. We wouldn't want to alert Auntie Sweetie Belle, would we?"
>>25579772
moar fucking moar right now
i need this
plz dont go away for 24 hours
plz post it all now
also plox make him cum in her mouth
i gotta fucking oral fleshlight, a heating pad, and some astroglide with this fucking stories name on them
uunffff
>>25580103
I need to whip it up real quick.
A quick spoiler though, he'll be coming in someone's mouth.Just not Rarity's.
>>25580199
I can make this work.webmJust make sure he fucks rarity rightin the pussy and cums balls deepat some point
>>25573501
Ahhhhh youuuuu.
But really there are only so many ways to describe something in any language. This is where I like to fall back on similies and metaphors. You can always compare something in the moment to another thing elsewhere.
Also what is your native language, Viral. I first thought you were a fellow Amerifag, than I thought you a Britbong, but now I just don't know... [Spoiler]My guess is German because of your kinkocity[/spoiler]
>>25576678
What is she, some kinda communist?
>>25577945
Do yourself a favor and just watch S1. Also if you've got a VPN, torrent all the show in 1080p. It's often difficult to find every episode on streaming services.
>>25579166
Hrmmmm.... Much potential.
>>25579772
All my UNF~, you have it.
>>25580296
Shes a filthy fucking commie thats what she is
>>25580199
>>25580264
Oh and I gotta stu vag one too for when its right in the pussy time
>>25580296
Already said Im gonna watch the whole thing
Got another show I wanna watch first and wanna play through 2 vidya first
>>25579304
>>25580296
Yeah, I just don't like writing while another writer is. Kind of looks awkward and might throw some people off. Maybe I'll do something with it later, though.Also, Yeepz is a cool dude.
>>25580199
UUUUNNNNNNFFFFFF~~~~~
>>25580264
>9 years old cumming multiple times in one session
>Couldn't do that myself without seriously hurting my dick until I was 13.
>Either my dick and body was just lame or this is some kinda super kid.
>Would not mind if it plays out with him having multiple orgasms.
>>25580321
Hrmmm... Not sure if this hurts my deeprooted sense of Socialism or not... But haven't watched a new ep since S4.
>>25580375
Word man. But I'm just suggesting you prepare properly since torrents take a while. Nothing worse than struggling to play a 480p version of the show from a server halfway across the globe.
>>25580381
We've got between 3 and 4 active stories itt. The more the merrier IMHO. Also it gives other writes a chance to become inspiredsteal fromyour writing.
>>25580545
Alright, I'll think about it. Thinking of passing out right now, though. At least it would give me some more stuff to add to my pastebin for fun.
>>25580545
Watch this and tell me that shes not a fucking soviet style commie bitch
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QrQ50P-Ffqk
Also I dont have to worry about that torrenting problem
Check it
http://www.watchcartoononline.com/anime/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic
>gif offtopic for this post but still important
>>25579772
>You nod enthusiastically, and she pops your penis back into her mouth
>In the slight delay, you admire how great her mouth feels
>It's really wet, and a little slimy
>But the warmness of it all and softness of her tongue and walls make the slimyness worth it
>You suck in a breath as she swallows you once again
>When pauses for a moment at the base of your member, and swirls her tongue around for a moment
>You cannot stifle your second moan this time, but you mage to bite your tongue to silence yourself
>Mom moans in approval, and continues her previous pattern
>Up and and down she bobs her head, covering your dick in her warm saliva
>Occasionally she pulls off, and plants a kiss on your head before she goes right back to sucking
>Soon enough, you feel a strange feeling rising up within your penis
>It kinda feels like you gotta pee
"Mom, I think I need to run to the bathroom. I feel..."
>She pulls off you for a moment, and strokes your head a little bit to silence you
>"It's not pee darling. Remember when I was talking about how a liquid oozes from the male?"
>She stops stroking you for a moment, allowing you to talk again
"Yeah?"
>"That's what you're feeling right now. The need to orgasm. When you feel the sensation reach its peak, let it out. Let it all out into Mommy's mouth."
>And with that, she dives back onto your member, bobbing her head much quicker this time
>You feel the sensation building much quicker this time
>Despite your best efforts, you cannot contain you loud sounds of pleasure
>Mom doesn't seem to mind though
>In fact, she seems a little motivated by them
>Out of the corner of your ear, you hear your door creak open, but you don't pay any attention to it
>You felt yourself about to release, and cried loudly in pleasure
>"Well. Well. Well." you hear Auntie Sweetie Belle say smugly from the door
>Your mom stops dead in her tracks, and looks to the doorway utterly mortified
>The good feeling leaves you rather quickly
>>25580296
Kinkocity. I like that, it seriously made me laugh out loud.
You were close though, and while I usually try to keep such info to myself, I suppose it wouldn't hurt to say that I am in fact Swedish.
>>25579772
U-Unf!
>>25580199
Double Unf!
I like where this is going!
>>25580381
I say go for it! It's really refreshing to see so much life back in the thread.
>>25580395
>Multiple orgasms in one session
>Kinda what is happening in my green
He's already busted 2 times, and he's in for the third.
He'll definitively feel it later though.
>>25580264I can, however, grantee that.
>>25580381
Yay, I'm a cool dude.
>>25580631
That and Larsonjokinglyadmitted it in the episode's Bronies React.I am cancer. I am sorry.
>>25580817
Yes, you are!Lore says so.
>>25580755
Now the aunts gonna join in
>>25580817
Your such a great writefag
So much fucking better than this one dumbass I was arguing with earlier
>>25580605
Do you...
>Also tfw you just wake up when other anon is just about to go to bed. Our fandom is spread so far and thin.
>>25580631
Commisar Shimmer, basking in the glorious success of the worker's party. All are equal, no one opporeeses anyone but her, beautiful true equality among ponies... Unless she's magically or physically manipulating them, she's done nothing wrong... Well I haven't watched any of her episodes, but the idea seems both righteous and practical if before there was a system of institutionalized oppression.
>attempt to pursuade to wonderful torrents: unsuccessful
At least I'll always have the media stored locally incase no Internet or Hasfag gets more draconian with the DCMAs
>>25580990
Do I?
>>25580861
Lore knows his shit. I'd listen to him.Also, tell Jargon I request more /SS/ stuff from him.
>>25580985
Thanks mate.
>>25580755
Oh the blue ballin... Ouch.
>>25580796
Yah, makin up words is a speciality of Americans since Bush was our president. Also how's the super long nights treating yah up there... Also those epic Internet freedoms you've got.
Oh yah, kid Anons sick will be aching for a week. Aching in pleasure that is~
>>25580817
Shrugging intensifies.
>>25581063
I'll tell him when I see him later or something.
>Lore knows his shit.
Hooray!
>>25581013
Doooooooooooo.... You like mudkips?Not entirely sure what I was asking you in the first place.
>>25581163
It's cool, that happens to me more than enough times.Decided to hang around while I eat before I lay down. Been up for nearly 24 hours, so yeah.
>>25580755
Holy shit holy shit holy shit! Was wondering where Sweetie Belle disaporated to.
>>25581163
hey manMudkip was my first pokemonGen 3 forever
then Absol became my favorite
>>25581106
I think we all like to make up words from time to time, got to keep the language fresh somehow.
The nights aren't so bad yet, we've had a very late winter this year, there hasn't even been any snow yet. But then again, I've fucked up my sleeping pattern so I've hardly seen daylight these past few days.
Don't know what internet freedoms you're talking about, I'm afraid.
His poor pelvis. But I don't think he'll be complaining.
Post yfw this is what will inevitably happen in this story
>>25581861
I would, but I like not being banned.
