We are his faithful hands!
Our previous thread: >>25378307https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/25378307
Human Superiority's Pastebin and Manos green part I and II:
http://pastebin.com/u/HumanSuperiority
http://pastebin.com/QBMRbrPv
http://pastebin.com/C3cq16me
A character sheet for Manos (WIP):
http://pastebin.com/2iFWvgSe
Backgrounds of Fate (Manos Side Stories)
MedicalKrabbyPatty's (aka: A Black Hand) Pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/u/AMedicalKrabbyPatty
A Royalist's Pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/u/ARoyalist
In this thread we wait for Human Superiority's return and the continuation of his green.
Heil the Reich!
Heil Manos!
>>25441111
>i just wanted to say, that i hope that >>25421483 becomes the new thread image for the next one. i really like it.
Your wish is my command, Lord.
We are the instruments of His will!
Heil Manos!
>>25446567
Perfect as always based harshwhinny. Heil manos
>>25446552
>>25446567
Thank you based Ms Harshwhinny as always you did an excellent job!
>>25446567
thank you mistress
heil manos!
>>25446567
NOTICE ME SENPAI!
>>25446584
how could you ever doubt her?! shame on you!
>>25446567
Thanks comrade Harshwhinny
>>25447823
She's sinking quick! Pay your respects while you can.
>you are Blackout
>and as much as you hate to say it, you miss being in the field
>seeing all the ponies here in the Reich have such fervor and pride in their service
>it makes you feel guilty for not having the same feeling
>you wanted to be the best.
>but what do you do now that you were given that status.
>you look over to the nearby bar where a group of black hands walk inside laughing and carrying on
>"did you hear the rumors?"
>>"what rumors?"
>"i heard that there was a few new weapons leaving that high security building and heading towards ponyville."
>>"what did they look like?"
>"im not sure really. but they said they looked like those tanks we saw during the parade."
>>>"hey yeah i heard about that too. and there were ponies in some new armor riding them?"
>"yeah, but here is the real kicker. apparently Manos was with them when they left."
>>"are you serious? do you think Manos would be going into a battlefield when he could stay back in his castle safe and sound?"
>"hes done it before. why not now?"
>unfortunately for you the conversation is carried on inside the bar and you dont hear much more
>you give a heavy sigh
"Even Manos is out there now.."
>you take a moment to look at your armored infused body
>there is nothing keeping you from going too..
>you feel a new sense of determination as your hooves lead you in the direction of the main gates
>you are Aryanne
>Manos has ordered that you and the others in his personal guard meet him in the field
>MEET him in the field
>you storm into the barracks where your Black hands are relaxing
"Alright everyone, listen up!"
>everyone in the room quickly drops whatever they were doing and snaps to attention in front of their assigned bunks
"Manos has gone and decided he couldnt wait for us. He has already left for the front"
>while each pony remains in place you see a few ponies eyes look to others
"so im considering us late. get your gear and ready up we leave in two minutes! Heil Manos!"
>"HEIL MANOS"
>>25448029
>you are Celestia
>after a few moments of idle chat with Twilight she returns to whatever she was doing previously
>shes a good student, always studying.
>looking back over to the city you see a single pegasi rushing to your balcony in his golden armor
>"Princess!"
>you take a set back just in time for him to land
>with the stallion being this close to you now one look is all you need to see he has bad news
>he is shaking from head to tail and his eyes are wide
>even now when he is safe inside the castle grounds his eyes are bolting from side to side looking for something
>he leans in closely and whispers to you
>"i.. i need to speak to you"
"then speak my little pony. what has you so concerned? what has happened?"
>you already have an idea.
>but you hope you are wrong
>"n..n..not here. eyes, eyes and ears hear and see."
"are you quite alright my little pony?"
>the other guards in your room start to look to the panicked guard
>"no.. no not alright! we need to speak. away from ponies. yes. away.."
>one of your guards speak up and start to get between you and the soldier
>>"you are in no condition to be speaking to the princess alone soldier. you need rest, and to calm down."
>"NO no! you could be one of them!"
"What is going on!?"
>your voice gets the attention of everypony in the room
>perhaps it WAS a little loud
>"p-princess are they.. are they safe?"
>he motions to the guards in the room
"yes my little pony. they are safe. we are all safe here."
>his shaking starts to cease and he takes a seat on the floor
>his eyes are still wide and drifting between the two other guards
>"the city. the city is lost."
"how is that possible? i just sent my ponies to take it back. its only been a few hours since they arrived?"
>>25448040
>"there was noise.. and, and large carriages. they made even more noise! the noises killed ponies. hundreds! in seconds.."
>you wrap a wing around the shattered guard pony
>"everyone. i saw so many. so many just ripped apart. i had to run. i had to get away or id die too"
>>"you left your position?"
>you look over to the guard who spoke
"please. let him finish. im sure his reasons are sound. he did come to me and not just run away"
>"thank you princess. you are always protecting us."
"youre safe here my little pony. its ok. please tell me more, if you can."
>the broken pony removes his blood covered helmet
>"the, the Hands.. they told us to leave.."
>he looks right in your eyes
>you see a fear in his eyes you havnt seen for thousands of years
>pure terror
"and then they made us leave.. hundreds of us.. they slaughtered us.. like.. like i dont know what."
>your head snaps to the city
>manos.. you have gone much too far.
"dont worry my little pony.. everything will be ok"
>>"princess. he needs to get some rest. we can put him in the infirmary for you."
"thank you. hear that my little pony. youre going to go to the infirmary. they will take care of you there, now get some rest."
>"y-yes princess.. ill go get some rest.."
>the pony slowly gets to his hooves and is escorted by the guards out of the room
>what has manos done to cause that kind of fear?
>>25448051
>you are a Royal guard pegasi
>you are escorted out of celestias room by two of your brothers in the guard
"we.. we didnt know what hit us.."
>"its ok soldier. you will be ok now."
>you walk with the guards down the many halls of the castle
>you haven't been inside here enough to know it well
>but you're pretty sure the infirmary was a hall or two the other way
"uhm was.. wasnt that hall the way to the infirmary?"
>one of the guards speak up
>"we had to make room for another one just over here, for more extreme cases."
>>"dont worry they will take care of you"
"oh. okay."
>why do you feel panicked again?
>youre safe here. the princess told you so
>you just need to relax
>"right in here"
>you walk up to a doorway you havnt seen before
>slowly the door is pushed open for you and you step inside
>the room is nearly empty besides for a table, chair, and a bed
"where.. where is.."
>then the door is suddenly closed behind you and sealed with magic
"no.. nonononono!"
>you run to the door and bang on it desperately
>then a voice comes from behind you
>"if you were brought to me.."
>you slowly turn your head to the desk and chair
>there is a pony in the chair and it slowly turns to face you
>sitting in the chair is a pony
>a pony dressed in black
>"then you have sinned against our lord... and must be punished."
"princess... save me."
>the pony laughs and gets to his hooves
"there is no sun or moon here little pony."
>walking into the light you can see the pony more clearly
>his perfectly brushed mane, his sadistic smile, and his red armband
"only fate awaits you here."
>his horn begins to glow and soon you find yourself without a voice and being pulled into the room
>please no..
>>25448066
>"there is no sun or moon here little pony."
>"only fate awaits you here."
those last two lines of dialogue should be green
>>25448029
Welcome back HS!
>>25448066
>>25448088
You have repented with those dubs. Checked
>>25448105
good to be back
>you are a member of canterlots crystal Gestapo
>and you love your job
>gather intelligence at any price, and correct the population when needed.
>you just finished your work on a pegasi guard who was already quite traumatized
"that just takes the fun out of it.."
>you werent always like this, in fact the first time you ever had to commit violence you hated yourself for it
>but eventually.. once you had done it enough, you grew to love it.
>you made sure to keep notes on everything the pony said during his interrogation
>looking over the list you made sure to get all the key points
"lets see.. it seems he told the princess that the black hands are attacking royal guards. that our lord has devised some new form of weapons, and that they are REALLY effective. and that the city is no longer in royal guard hooves."
>pretty nice bit of Intel for one go
>you take a seat at your desk and begin to write out your report
>the Shine sisters will want to be aware of all the current happenings
"i really love my job."
>you seal an envelope placing all the necessary papers inside,
>along with a few false documents in case this was to fall into the wrong hooves
>of course each false document will be marked properly
>walking over to the large door you break the seal with your magic and turn to the two guards outside
"get him out of here. and have this sent out to the Reich immediately"
>"yes sir."
>the guard takes the envelope and places it in his bag before he and the other start to dispose of any other evidence
>you have been at this a while, and they know what needs to be cleared up.
"have a lovely day gentlecolts"
>"and you too sir, heil manos"
"heil manos"
ill be back at my usual time with more green. hope you enjoyed this early stuff.
>>25448234
I love the smell of early green in the evening!
>>25448225
>you are a member of canterlots crystal Gestapo
>and you love your job
and I love your green hs!
we are fucking everywhere, i never thought the castle was already this infiltrated, the shine sisters seem to do an excellent job!
i wonder if silver valor knows about this little operation?
>>25448585
we have ponies in the guard. and many black hands have stayed in canterlot since the changeling attack, the only question is what will happen now that Celestia knows of Manos' attack..
>>25448618
its going to be hard for her to counter all this.. especially he has a religion dedicated to him, each member of that religion can be considered a threat. but she cant just start targeting everyone who follows that religion or else she will have herself set in the public eye as being the bad guy, poor sunbutt. shes in a pickle
>>25448618
yeah i know, but those where celestia's personal guards, they were in her fucking private room, nonetheless they we're ours and not hers, this goes deeper and is much more organized than just some sympathisers in the guard and the populace
>what will happen now that Celestia knows of Manos' attack..
if the show taught us anything then that celestia isn't a great fighter
>>25448557
I like you Anon!
>>25448029
>>25448040
>>25448051
>>25448066
>>25448225
Oh boy watch your back Celestia
sorry if im a little slow, im writing in another thread too.
>>25448225
>you are Manos
>the battle is slowly coming to a close
>ponies saw the large group of guards surrendering and quickly followed suit
>you stand on the turret of your prized tank looking out over the either routed, slaughtered, or surrendering forces
"you are making the right choice. i assure you."
>riding back to the city with long lines of captives definitely will increase moral on your side
>and completely crush it on anyone elses
>"lord manos"
>you look down from your perch to see Marble sunset
"marble! that was a textbook rout. i thought you didnt have the confidence to command troops?"
>marble gives you a seig heil
>"i found some laying around sir"
>you point to the line of prisoners
"i want those ponies names listed along with a approximate count of the dead on both sides."
>"ill have it for you sir!"
"i know you will. carry on"
>Marble rushes off to get a tally while you look to your driver
"any idea what was causing those weapon jams?"
>the pony holds up a spent ammo belt along with a few rounds
>you take them in your hands and examine them
>"yes i do sir, apparently they didnt measure the belt widths and the projectiles are in various sizes.."
"no wonder we were having issues."
>you drop the belt and the rounds
"my scientists cant even measure.."
>"on the bright side lord, now that we know whats wrong we can have it corrected."
>thats not the point
"the point is this issue shouldnt have even been an issue! how hard is it to measure and keep it consistent?"
>the pony is silent
>you know he agrees with you
"drive me back to the city. the square should be ours by now."
>the engine of your armored creation roars to life again
>"yes lord. as you will"
>>25449853
>sorry if im a little slow, im writing in another thread too.Which one?
>>25449853
>"my scientists cant even measure.."
Heads will roll!
>>25450050
>>25448286
>>25449853
>you are Aryanne
>the rest of Manos' personal guard follow behind you as you approach the gate
>as the large gate opens you see a familiar pony walk out with you
"Blackout?"
>Blackout turns to face you continuing to walk
"i thought you were on leave? what are you doing?"
>"i decided to cut it short. i heard Manos was going into the field. figured he might want some help with whatever he is doing"
>you look back to Cinnamon, and Almond.
"Comet was ordered to stay behind since he is part of some broadcast thing manos has going on, so. we are down a pony."
>blackout continues to walk but looks back over our ponies
>"is that an invitation commander?"
>you smile
"would you feel better if i made it an order?"
>"i might."
>you hear Cinnamon's voice shout from behind you
>>"well consider it one then lets get moving, id rather be tired and there than bored and here"
"couldnt have said it better myself. now shut your yap and lets get moving. we have a lot of ground to cover."
>>25450082
fuck. i dont think i can do this two thread writing deal. might have to just do one or the other.sorry for cutting this one short. but ill write more some other time
>>25448029
>>25448040
>>25448051
>>25448066
>>25448225
>>25449853
>>25450082
hope thats enough to keep you guys from killing me for ending it for tonight
>>25450094
don't overexert yourself!
we'll patiently await your returnalthough i think, senpai choosing another thread over us hurts a little...
>>25450133
sorry anon. but ill be back. i wont abandon this green
>>25450159
>>25450400
why do you only use reactions that were used on you?
>>25450992
Kek. I was the one who used that reaction in the last thread.
>>25451250
>implying it was last thread im talking about
not the one before faggot
>>25451266
Have you noticed my name?
BUMP! Jesus, you guys are lucky to have me.
>>25450174
>>25450400
>ever doubting HS on his word
>>25452740
Sweet, we got HITLER following this general.
>>25452796
but Hitler hates generals...
>>25452804
Come on, it's 2015.
>>25452804
Kek my sides are gone
>>25453333
>>25452426
we really arent
>>25453333
noice quads
>>25450159
I've enjoyed this slaughter, but I have to admit: Manos has called down the thunder. He must be ready for the boom. Besides, where is that snake, Sombra?
>>25454263
>Besides, where is that snake, Sombra?
Fucking this!
>>25454263
Damn. I did not need that comma there.
Bump.
Admit it, you NEED me.
>>25454713
be quiet Quaver, there are more people here ready to bump as well
>>25454722
>2 hours
>no bumps
Uh huh, sure.
>>25454731bumping before page ten is a waste
>>25454742
>be me
>be on Clover app to browse 4chan
>can't see 'pages'
Now does it make sense?
>>25454751alrighty then, but we are wasting bumps arguing
>>25454768
>Implying that this isn't the ultimate goal of the name related
HOLY SHIT! BUMP!
You faggots need to start bumping! Holy fuck!
>>25455453
hysterical as always...
Boop.
Which SNES games should I buy?
>>25456016
>buy
Just pirate a complete collection with every fucking SNES game ever created and emulate them you unprofessional faggot!
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/25378307/#25446347
>The problem with drawfags is they're mostly liberal scum and don't want to be affiliated with Nationalism/National Socialism/Fascism and then there are the perverse, often furfag ones that somehow think National Socialism is some kind of uniform fetish they can jack off to... Maybe one of of those drawfags that makes Aryanne pics takes pity on us and draws something, but I doubt they even know we exist. Besides most of them seem to belong to the perverse ones too... I for one am content with our mad hatter.
I saw your call for help Sir. I brought it to the ears of my lord. Hopefully he will heed it.
I just realized something at work.
Celestia seems really surprised about the griffons showing up. And she stated manos has gone too far even though her ponies have been kiddnaping and possibly killing manos faithful in equestria. The griffons said that the ponies already accepted their 'offer' jus before somba spoke to them.
This is some eerie shit. If the narrative is to be believed when '>we are Celestia' then who accepted that offer? Who ordered ponie whisked away in the night?
>>25456986
There is another princess.. One who isn't afraid of warfare.
>>25456960
I'll cross my fingers then!
>>25456986
>even though her ponies have been kiddnaping and possibly killing manos faithful in equestria.
Since yesterdays infiltration revelation I'm not so sure about that anymore. Remember that scene where the Royal Guards took those Gestapo prisoners in Ponyville and that supposedly traitor negotiated with them, his angry subordinates may not have known it, but that could have be a also part of the complot where guards loyal to Manos take care of a quick and safe evacuation of important pones entrusted with confidential information.
>>25457066
Also this of course!
>>25457066
should have put that in a spoiler, HS has kept that well hid
>>25457154
Come on, every partly intelligent human being could have figured out that...
>>25457169but now Unprofessional Faggot knows
>>25457221
Fuckin kek
>>25457152
This isn't the case when said prisoners were punished by the same gaurds and said Gestapo pony. Later when marble gets some screen time one of his soldiers says they should have helped them and marble goes on in an immersion monologue about following orders. I assume these ponies were killed or at least beaten pretty badly but until it is stated explicitly it leaves us to wonder.
>>25457371
>but until it is stated explicitly it leaves us to wonder.
Hopefully we will get our answers soon.
>>25457371
>immersion
Fuckin auto correcting inner to immersion.
This is getting pretty deep anons. I need a wall with lines connecting pictures for this shit.
>>25456119
I have an emulator and an SNES USB controller. It just doesn't feel the same. So, which ones should I buy?
>>25457221
Indeed. >pic related
>>25456960
who?
So, when do you guys think HS will show up tonight?
>pic unrelated
>>25457923
around 6:30-7:00. same as always unless he got a bit of free time
>>25457933
this.
>>25457944
It's HS!
HEIL MANOS!
Can we get someone to edit this picture to have The Hand, and text that says "Equestria Awaken"?
>>25458234
here ya go
>>25458353
Buzzkill....
>>25458371
literally all you need to do is open paint and edit three things. or make it from scratch. took me only five minutes.
>>25458381
HS should make a mention of those popping up everywhere in Canterlot.
>>25458381
i like it better in german
>>25458428
Me too.
>>25458381
>>25458428
>>25458460
>that filename
>sides
>>25450082
>you are Manos
>you ride on into the city with a chain gang of royal guard prisoners
>the streets are completely ruined.
>trash, bodies, and rubble are all over.
>how the hell did griffons cause all this damage with basic weaponry?
>you think out loud the sound of the tanks engine blocking your words from unwanted listeners
"if birds without magic can cause all this destruction the conflict with Equestria is going to be at least double this"
>then something catches your eyes
"hold.. hold!"
>the driver brings you to a stop
>nearly everyone stops to look and see what has caused the hold up
>you slowly walk to the largely ruined piece of rock that used to be a statue
>the two sister princesses that once stood next to it completely smashed into dust besides their hooves
>and then the statue of you.
>standing tall amidst the rubble it could easily have gone unnoticed as just a lucky statue
>you are at the base of the statue now and you look up to see your image defaced
>protruding from your stone self are large black crystals
"Sombra.."
>so he was here. and possibly still is.
>a few black hands have gathered around to look at the statue covered in the black shards
>you see a pony slowly reach forward to touch one of them
>just before he does his hoof is stopped by your hand calmly
"no.."
>you look back to your line of prisoners and point to one in the line
"her, bring her over here."
>a few black hands unbind the guardmare and walk her over
>she has dried blood crusted into her coat and her eyes are a mix of worry and anger as she arrives next to you
>you grab her hoof and press it to the crystal
>not a moment after her eyes are dilated and she is screaming
>she starts to jerk herself around trying to get away from whatever she is seeing
>its then you realize she is still looking right at you
>your face reflects back to you in her widened eyes
>you let her hoof go and her screaming stops instead turning into a muffled cry
>"what are those lord?"
"a shipment"
>>25458905
Sombra gun die 2nite!
>>25458905
>"a shipment?"
>you wave over a few more hands
"have it gathered and delivered to the Reich as soon as possible."
>the black hands look around confused as you get back on the tank and begin your ride into the city
>soon you approach the square
>as you expected its back in your control
"have those royals moved over there with the Griffons"
>"yes lord!"
>having all the prisoners gathered together and under watch you look to your ponies
"my children! my faithful hands! the city is once again under our control."
>you extend your hand out to the destroyed city around you
"but as you can see.. there is little left here."
>ponies look to their once proud city
>the place that once gave them pride and hope for a better future now in ruin
"perhaps it was fate that this city was to fall. we were too accepting of others. too kind and willing to let those who felt differently or had different lifestyles live amongst us."
>you hear a few murmurs of agreement
"but have no fear my little ponies. while this city has fallen another has arose! a Reich has begun in the north! where those who value the same values as you and dedicate themselves to the same faith have gathered!"
>a few crystal ponies in your black hands start to grow smiles on their faces
>you motion them over.
"the crystal ponies of the Reich offer you shelter and safety from the Tyrants of the Sun and Moon, while i will not force you to come back with us, i ask that you do. let me protect you."
>you already know they would go if you told them to.
>the ponies of ponyville city are fanatical in their faith just like those in the Reich
>but asking them to go paints a much better image of you in the public eye
"those who wish to come with us, we leave in a few hours.. i wish we could stay longer and give a proper goodbye to our home... but alas time is of the essence, and you must decide your own fates."
>you walk over to your hands
"have everyone ready to move out, i can already feel the heat of the sun"
>>25459290
>you are Celestia
>you are enjoying a nice breakfast/dinner with your sister.
>"Sister?"
>you look up from your plate to Luna
"yes?"
>"are you alright? you seem.. distant"
"im alright Luna. just thinking about events."
>"about ponyville?"
>you nod your head
"yes. i just dont understand how all this could be happening, griffons intruding on our land, Manos and his rise to power.. and now.."
>looking over to luna you notice her plate has been empty for a while, a few small bits of dried food remain
>compared to yours, still filled without a bite missing
>"and now? what sister?"
>you take a sigh.
>"manos has attacked royal guards that were trying to help take back the city."
>"is.. this true sister?"
"yes, im afraid it is luna, it wasnt until recently that I-"
>the door opens up and a royal guard steps through
>>"your majesties, Twilight Sparkle and her friends are here as you requested"
"but.. i didnt"
>Luna speaks up and smiles to the guard
>"let them in."
>>"yes your majesties."
>you look to your sister a small smile on her face
>"you always seem to be in a better mood when Twilight and her friends are here. so i took the liberty of inviting them to your breakfast."
>you give your dear sister a warm smile
"thank you luna, that was very thoughtful of you.
>with a bow the guard opens the door allowing the five ponies to enter
"Twilight its always nice to see you, how has everypony settled in?"
>before twilight answers luna adds to your inquiry
>"and.. where is your other friend Twilight? Rainbow Dash?"
>>"oh dont worry about us princess. everything has been nice, we just wish to get back home as soon as we can. its nice to be back in Canterlot but Ponyville is our home."
"i hope you can return home soon my student, i can understand being away from home must be difficult"
>>"and Rainbow Dash, shes probably with Manos. didnt you know Luna?"
>Luna looks a little troubled
>a feeling you too admit ably share
>>"shes a Black hand, a personal guard for Manos"
>>25459601
sorry that should be admittedly. its bugging me since i hit post after noticing what i typed
>>25459601
>you are Manos
"alright its time to move out, those of you coming with us please fall into line behind my machines"
>you watch as your pony citizens scramble slightly to get to where they need to be
>you signal the lead elements you are ready to move and soon the convoy start to roll out
"commander. if you please, your crystal."
>"yes lord, here you are."
>a communications crystal is lifted to your hand, then to a reasonable distance from your face
"this is lord manos, ill be leaving the city on our most protected end, all remaining outside forces are to converge on me, we are leaving the city, i repeat we are leaving the city."
>to your surprise Rainbow Dash is the first to respond
>"leaving?! i thought we were taking the city back?"
"we are Commander Dash, just leaving the stone and rubble behind. everyone we could find is coming out with us."
>well... thats not ENTIRELY true.
>there are a few ponies who desired to stay behind
>and there are most assuredly griffons and royals still in some areas of the city
>"manos, ive been meaning to find the right time to tell you, but it seems we left something behind in the Castle"
>what?
"what do you mean Rainbow? from your operation previously? whatever was left we can go without."
>"no sir, from before. from when you left to the Reich"
"what was left behind?.."
>there is a short pause before another ponies voice comes onto the communications
>"lord manos, im one of your scientists as well as a black hand. and uh, what was left behind.. was a hive. lord."
>a hive?
"how is that possible. i was told that a hive needs a queen to run---"
>a queen...
>you think back to something that your scientists informed you of
>queenie can communicate with ALL members of her brood.
>not just the ones in the camps...
"inform Cadence immediately, i want to have a chat with our little pet."
>>25459783
So. A war on three fronts.
>>25458234
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>>25458460
Edit guy here, didn't like the bad quality template and made something shitty from scratch...
>>25459909
Bold edits.
>>25459922
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>>25459931
much better thanks mad hatter
>>25459783
>you take the crystal and toss it back to the pony
>he looks to you with slight concern
>"lord is everything okay?"
"something isnt right.. im just not sure what it is, FORWARDS!"
>the speed is picked up slightly and a single ponies voice can be heard
>soon others join in the tune
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_FTCajk7oeA
>by the end of the song you are leaving the city and the rear guard is in sight
>you kneel down as close to the driver as you can and point to a small shack in the distance
"bring me in to the command post. there should be ponies waiting for me there."
>"yes lord."
>your tank breaks off from the main group
>they continue on, making their way from ponyville to the safe territory under control of your Reich
>upon arriving you walk past lines of unicorns and pegasi
>each of them giving sieg heils and stepping out of your way
"Commander Dash"
>"over here lord! the others just arrived."
>walking over to Rainbow you are greeted by Aryanne, Cinnamon Pop, and Almond Heart and... Blackout?
"Blackout? what are you doing here?"
>Blackout smiles as her helmet opens up to reveal her face
>>"i got bored waiting around, and i thought you might want to see my pretty face"
"its good to see you again."
>you turn your attention back to Rainbow Dash again
"Commander. you said we left behind a hive?"
>she nods in affirmation
"where exactly?"
>"back in the closed off R&D section of the castle."
"alright. you know the way?"
>"yes sir i do."
"then take me there. i need to see this for myself"
>you turn back to the pony in charge of the reserve forces
"you are to hold this position. i shall return soon with further orders. is that understood?"
>"yes lord manos! it will be done"
"lead the way Rainbow."
>>25459996
We need to lobotomize either the Changeling Queen if she is too much trouble, or King Sombra if we ever find him again.
dinner time.
>>25460039
CAN you lobotomize a bug?
>>25460054
Yes. This isn't exactly a bug, either.
>>25459987
Just remember, it was originally my idea.
Gentlemen, I am taking a government class. I need to sprinkle National Socialist ideas around the room. Do you guys have any ideas?
>>25460461
>you are Aryanne
>and to be honest it feels a little odd having to take orders from someone who was once under your command
>Rainbow Dash comes to a stop just outside the edge of everfree
>"right up here is where we first uh... made contact with you. sir."
>Manos mumbles something to himself before ordering Rainbow to continue on
>"alright, right this way. the woods have changed a little since we were last here."
>it doesnt take long for that to become apparent
>the woodland is dark, darker than it should be at this time of day
>you look up to the sky only to be greeted by layers and layers of branches and leaves as high as you can see
"well, getting our position by the sun or stars is out of the question."
>Manos continues on as you take a moment to look for gaps in the treetops
>>"not sure how that would be useful here anyway, you have two princesses who can literally move them at will."
>thats a fair point.
>one you never really thought about before.
"they usually keep things the same."
>>"unless it benefits themselves, every second they keep the sun or moon from moving is a chance they could ruin the balance of nature."
"how so?"
"the moon changing course could create tidal waves that could destroy whole cities, and the sun if left in one position too long could create a desert out of a tropical forest"
>you nearly run into manos as he stops in front of you to look back
>>"the princesses could hold your whole world hostage if they decided to. if they desired it, they could end all life here"
>this revelation makes cold sweat drip down the back of your neck
"they.. they really cou-"
>a smile comes to his face and he starts to laugh
>>"yes, it is completely within their power to do so. i just wonder if they know it, or at least the extent of it"
>sometimes you wish you could understand how manos can remain so calm knowing everything he does.
>and then go to war with beings capable of destroying the world on a whim.
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>>25458460
nice. edits and other content is always saved and appreciated
>>25460696
HS, do you have any suggestions for >>25460461 ?
>>25460724
dont say its national socialism until you have at least a few people agreeing with you, start small. have people think they are coming to the decision on their own rather than being told what to believe or agree with.
in the end the pen will always overcome the sword.
>>25460759
I've never called it National Socialism so far. Any other ideas? What are some benefits that everyone can agree with?
Am I alone again? Le sigh.
>>25460673
>you are Manos
>after a hour or two you arrive at the door of your once proud home
>memories of a party you once held come to mind
>you take a moment to remember the night
>closing your eyes you feel yourself drift out of body
>time slows around you until it comes to a stop
"its been a long time.. since i have seen this place shiny and new."
>the world turns into a slightly foggy representation of the night you invited everyone to your castle
>guests are arriving at your door escorted by friends and your own guards
>you can hear laughter and the sound of drinks and silverware in the main hall
>buts its all just a memory.
>you open your eyes and let the world come back to reality
>you step inside, as if going back in time you see the castle looking new as the day you rebuilt it.
>ghostly figures of guests and guards enjoying themselves walk around your home
>then Rainbow Dash walks inside.
>"its right this way manos, be careful, this place is dangerous and a little unstable now."
>you watch as she walks through the guests
>they disappear into a cloud of smoke as she makes contact with them
>Aryanne and the others follow her closely, each of them looking to the corners of the room and the shadows for anything dangerous
>they cannot see it like you can.
>you yourself start to follow their lead, staying close and following their footsteps so you dont crash into something by mistake
>the laughter and sounds of guests talking still fills your ears.
>is this because you havnt slept?
"no, its only been one night.."
>your words catch Aryannes attention
>"what was that lord?"
"sorry. just thinking out loud."
>just then you hear your voice from behind you
>"Everyone, i thank you all for coming"
>and there you are, standing above the crowd of guests
>"and for those who were personally invited it is time for our private dinner."
>that was the night. the night you were no longer Anon...
>>25461092
>Anon
Oh right. I totally forgot that Manos was supposed to be ME, the reader.
>>25461092
>"but for those of you who arrived without a personal invitation don't fret! your dinner will be served out here right after we depart. i hope you all continue to enjoy the night, those of you dinning with me, please follow me."
>you look back to your ponies. who continue to march on into the castle
"wait. there's something i need to see."
>there is a slight chill up your spine as you start to walk on
>you follow the ghostly forms of Cadence, Celestia, Luna, Lyra, and the others you invited.
>surprisingly you seem to walk along the floor without stumbling or tripping on anything
>you follow yourself walking down into the crowd where you led your VIP guests to the dinning room
>once you arrive there everyone already has taken their seats and you stand at the head of the table.
>"let dinner.." you then hear the clapping of your own hands
>"begin"
>suddenly the doors open up and servants bring out all sorts of foods
>from the high class to the more humble of tastes
>you watch as everyone begins to eat and enjoy then you remember what comes next
>>"DIE QUEEN SLAYER!"
>a changeling attacks you with a broken glass jabbing it into your neck
>you watch your old self die right in front of your eyes
>you sit there and watch Anonymous die.
>you are Blackout
>Rainbow Dash is in a shouting contest with Aryanne
>"what the buck?!"
>>how the hell did he do that? how do we get to him now?"
>the others seem to be just as surprised at what happened as they are
>they just are at a loss for words instead of their 'commanders'
>"he- he just-"
"Calm down everypony, just think for a minute. ok.. lets go over what we all saw."
>you look to the large collapsed doorway in front of you
>you look it over for any sort of flaws or parlor magics
>"Manos, he said there was something he needed to see.. then poof!"
>>"no not 'poof!' commander Dash. there was no sound! he just.. walked right into the rubble! like it wasnt even there!"
>>25461236
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A N O N D E S C E N D S
>>25461236
"Cinnamon, youre a unicorn. is there any kind of spell going on here?"
>Cinnamon walks over to the rubble his horn glowing
>he examines it looking to up, down, left, right, and into every nook and cranny. before finally giving a sigh
>"if there is. its damn good magic. i cant find a thing that would suggest it.."
"alright. well we have all been here before, we all spent plenty of time here and we know the threat of changelings has been removed thanks to rainbow."
>"so what do you propose blackout?"
"we split up, try to find a way around this rubble and into the next room. if i remember it correctly this was the VIP dining hall.. there should be a servants entrance around here somewhere, Cinnamon, Almond, you two come with me. Aryanne, you and rainbow look around for another way in"
>Aryanne speaks up
>"what if we happen to get lost, this place has changed a bit since we were here."
>you close up your helmet
"our communications still work correct?"
>you can hear your voice coming from both Aryanne and Rainbows crystals
>"they seem to."
"then we can find each other if the need arises"
>>"and what about us? we dont have communications."
>you look back to Cinnamon
"nope you got me. if you get lost. yell. ill find you and return you to your mommy little boy."
>Cinnamon rolls his eyes while the girls giggle
>"dont worry Cinnamon, youre a big stallion now. im sure you will be fine."
"alright, lets move out. we need to find Manos."
>"SEIG HEIL"
>>25461390
this is where i stop for the night.
as always constructive criticism is welcome!
Enjoy my other shit! (or dont idc)
http://pastebin.com/u/HumanSuperiority
http://pastebin.com/2iFWvgSe - be sure to check out the character sheet. (still WIP)
pastebin will be updated soon
Feel free to discuss the story, ill be around for a while to answer questions
and Remember: You're human. Be proud, be Superior!
>>25461432
oh shit nigger, IS GOIN DOWNi love u
>>25461635i lov u 2
pastebin updated.
self promotion:be sure to check out Vietnam Anon in Equestira. its short and unfinished. i might work on it in my spare time or if it gets requested
>>25461092
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>>25460054
You can hypothetically lobotomise anything with a brain that has non essential functions. Most insects don't have proper brains, instead relying on a series of decentralized ganglion to function. Since queenie can speak, she has at least one neural structure that isn't necessary for survival. She likely also has a brain, since communication requires coordination between several sets of muscles in addition to the ability to recall memories.
>>25461432
Sasuga senpai, can't wait for more!
Say truth!
page 8 bump
Good morning guys! Ready for another day of faggotry?
I'll start posting funny pics.
>pic related
You bastards. RESPOND TO MY POSTS! REEEEEEEEEE!
YOU NUDDAFUCKAS! POST SHIT! REEEEEEEEEE!
bumping from break
>>25465138
Beat me to it.
>>25465138
My lord, will we be receiving green tonight?
>>25463256
what is the truth anon, what the majority believes is real? or what you believe? is there one single truth that can be considered completely pure? or is there always a shade of gray keeping you away from the pure unfiltered white? is what we have read the real story or is there another hiding underneath?no there isnt"truth"
I just got home. Green when?
>>25466648same as alwaysfaggot
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>>25466723
K. Thx. <3
>>25461390
>>25461432
>you are manos
>black hands dressed as guests rush to your copies side
>they quickly examine you and you can hear them speak in a hushed tone
>"oh celestia, this cut is too deep"
>"this is not good, i dont know if we can actually help him."
>you watch as Cadence rushes over and tries to use her magic to help
>but her horns glow keeps fading away
>she cant concentrate
>in her frustration she attacks the changeling beating it into the floor
>the shell of the bug cracks and opens up with each stomp
>the other ponies in the room are watching her stunned
>then everything stops.
>all eyes in the room slowly turn to you
>the REAL you the one who is watching it all unfold
>that chill that crawled up your spine before returns again
>then everyone in the room speaks
>"you had everyone under your hoof the moment they walked in here."
>then anon starts to stand up from the floor, blood still pouring from his neck
>"it was very well thought out.. and to be honest, i am jealous of your tact."
"its easy to be afraid when its the unknown you face, but once the foe has shown themselves. fear can be overcome"
>the ghosts of your friends all form into a black cloud and move into your old self
>once they make contact the whole body then changes into the form of the pony behind this attack
>his crooked smile and bright eyes are the first thing you recognize. then his horn and grey body forms, while his tail and mane remain in a ghostly smoke
"if you were smarter Sombra.. you wouldn't have shown yourself to me."
>>25467678
>his deep laughter fills the room
>"is that so? you are alone in here. you have no elements to protect you. and i feel stronger here than i ever have before!"
>his grin becomes maniacal and his eyes lock with yours
>"here i will end you, and i will take back my kingdom"
>you calmly feel your pocket doing your best to look natural
"simply killing me wont get your kingdom back Sombra. whether you like it or not, you need me to get it back"
>inside is the crystal that was given to you by your operators and you hope they are listening
>you are going to need help with this one
"and im not sure i want to give it back."
>Sombra walks towards you his horn beginning to glow
>you remember something that Luna told you long ago back before this castle was rebuilt.
>there are dangerous magics here.
>perhaps Sombra has gained access to it?
>you need to know what it is.
>"im going to take joy in ending your miserable life Manos"
>you watch as the large cloud loving unicorn charges at you
>perhaps this would be the end of you.
>you are Blackout
>Cinnamon and Almond walk with you down one of the side halls
>the castle is almost deathly silent except for.
"hold. i hear something"
>everypony stops and their ears perk up listening for anything you might have heard
>"i dont hear-"
"SH!"
>you know you can hear a voice.
>its muffled and distant but its there.
"follow me!"
>you rush down the hall, the voice getting clearer and clearer
>you make it to a small wooden door
>the voice is on the other side, you are sure of it.
>the only thing you aren't sure of is whose voice it is.
>only one way to find out.
>>25467935
>you and the others get on each side of the door
>cinnamon and almond on the left, you on the right
"alright, whatever i heard its right on the other side of this door."
>"alright, on three we enter."
>his horn starts to glow as he readies himself
"one, two. go"
>in a flash Cinnamon swings open the door and the three of you charge into the room
>once you enter you immediately recognize this room.
>this is the dining hall. the one manos should be in.
>you are Sombra
>Manos stands before you with your horn going right through his chest
>you quickly pull it out watching as his blood drips from it
>you take a few steps back from him as he holds his chest in pain
>this moment is what you have been waiting for.
"you have no idea how badly ive wanted to kill you Manos, ever since our first encounter i have hated you with a passion that i have never felt before."
>you watch as his blood covers his hands and he falls down to his knees
"you and your plans, your 'greatness' you are nothing. and this moment here proves it. you call yourself a god! you are nothing but a child with a silver tongue and mind games!"
>you knock him to the floor and stomp on his open wound
"pathetic! that is the only title you can ever own. a pitiful pathetic monkey."
>you take immeasurable joy as the life slowly leaves his eyes
alright its time for me to enjoy dinner. i was going to post what i have typed out, but... its better if i do it all at once.
back soon
>>25468204
>"oh i have been, where you are before~"
>the sound of a voice in the room interrupts your moment of glory
>you search for the sound of it
>"and i have felt the pain of losing who you are~"
>suddenly manos body comes up from the ground grabbing you by the neck and horn
>"and i have died so many times..."
>you struggle to get free but his arm is wrapped around your neck and the other is grabbing your horn directing your head wherever he wants
"get off of me! you should be dead! ive killed you, you were dead!"
>the once dead body of Manos turns your head to face him
>there is little you can do to get out of his grip
>"oh? but i am still alive Sombra. im alive and well"
>you are Manos
>and your chest hurts more than anything you have ever experienced before
>more than the time you got stabbed in the neck or either of the times you were attacked by Shining armor.
>but you didnt pass out this time.
>"how are you still alive?!"
>you grip his horn tightly in your hand
"oh ill get to that. dont you worry, but first"
>Sombra lets out a scream of pain as you twist his neck away from his horn
>he starts to buck and try to break free.
>your scuffle knocks the two of you to the floor behind the table
>you do your best to keep sombra in a tight grip but he is starting to wear you down.
>you let go of his neck and instead use both hands to grip his horn
>he takes this moment to push into you to try and throw you off balance
>rolling with his movements you regain control and get positioned over him
>you press your boot into his neck pushing him head to the floor as you pull his horn with your hands with all your strength
>you hear a loud snap and a scream of pure agony
>you let out a small laugh at the bastards pain
"want to know how i survived Sombra?"
>you kneel down to the Unicorn
"I am Fate, the rules of life and death are different for me"
>you raise your arm and plunge Sombras horn deep into his eye
![[ETERNAL SCREAMING].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/jTJz70I.jpg "[ETERNAL SCREAMING].jpg")
>>25468538
FUCKING BRUTAL
>>25468538
Fucking noice!
>>25468538
Damn son....
>>25468538
>you walk over to the table
>luckily there are nice cloth napkins still on the plates
>breathing heavily you wipe the blood splatter from your face with one of them
>then you turn to look at the body of Sombra on the floor
>you cant help but chuckle to yourself
"heh, all that magic, all that potential wasted."
>you step over the body and start to walk out of the room
>as you do you start to sing softly to yourself
"Es gibt ein Haus in Neu-Berlin, man nennt es Haus Abendrot~"
>just before you leave you turn to the body again and pull out your sidearm
"Es war der Ruin vieler guter Jungs~"
>you fire a round into his head for good measure then re-holster it before walking out the door
"von mir, mein Gott lebt ich not."
>you are Blackout
>you walk further into the room while Cinnamon guards the door
>Almond slowly follows behind you keeping watch
>then you spot something. a trail of red blood coming from the other side of the table
"Manos!"
>you rush over to where the blood is coming from but whats there catches you off guard
"what the.."
>"is that sombra? oh my god.."
>Almond inspects the body
>well whats left of it
>the lower half of his jaw is missing from something entering his head
>and he has a horn sticking straight into his eye going into the floor on the other side
>wait.. not a horn, thats HIS horn.
>you take a moment to look around
>one of the napkins has been taken off of a plate, the dust having left a perfect outline of where it once was
"Manos should be around here somewhere. we should keep looking"
>"yeah, to be honest. seeing King Sombra dead in a dining room makes me really glad we are not on Manos' bad side"
>>25468714
New Order music?
Isn't there plenty of real songs from the NSDAP?
>>25468743
yes, but fuck you. i like that song.besides most of the others are better for marching or celebrations.
>>25468770
>telling a fan "fuck you"
Firstly, THAT is Unprofessional.
Secondly, I love that song too, but there are folk songs used by the NSDAP that would also be fitting.
>>25468770
>i like that song.
Me too! Especially the rolling R in it, makes me feel nostalgic.
>>25468829
>telling a fan "fuck you"
we've called you worse you fucking nuisance
>>25468714
>you are Aryanne
>you and Rainbow Dash are looking for a way into the dinning hall
"i told you we went the wrong way."
>"we did not go the wrong way! how could we have? the dinning hall was on the left of us and we went left!"
"well we havnt seen any way inside so how could we have gone the right way?"
>"hey, i was here just a day or two ago. i think i might have a better memory of it than you do"
"Rainbow, you might be a commander now, but im still your superior, and im ordering you to-"
>"to what?"
"shh, someone is coming"
>Rainbow quickly hides behind some statues while you get behind a large banner
>you both wait to see who is walking your direction
>>"if you can hear me, relay a message to anyone who can get a hold of Aryanne and the others, ive lost contact, tell them ill meet with them outside the castle"
>you come out from behind the banner
"no need sir. seems we have found you"
>Manos stops just as he was about to pass by your hall
>>"cancel that last order. continue on to your previous destination."
>you hear a quiet 'yes sir' come from manos' pocket
>>"i wondered where you would be."
>you are Manos
>and you happened to find Aryanne and Rainbow Dash
"where are the others? shouldn't they be with you?"
>"we split up when we had to search for you."
"and why didnt you just follow me inside? i happened to notice that my bodyguards were not around when i was attacked by Sombra."
>Rainbow Dash and Aryanne look to you confused
>>"uh.. Manos, you walked right though a collapsed doorway. we couldnt follow you"
>you what?
"im sorry i think i miss heard you"
>"you walked through a doorway that was collapsed"
>you just stand there for a moment
>did you really walk through rubble?
"show me"
>>"sure thing, we will tell Blackout where to meet up with us."
>you follow the mares down the hall
>even with sombra dead, this place is still giving you a chill.
>>25468898
I wouldn't expect any less from YOU, but HS is a higher being who should be above such nonsense.
>>25468909
>you walk down the hall in thought
>how were you able to walk through a solid object.
>whats more, how was sombra able to effect you and not tip off the others?
>"its right here."
>you look to the doorway and feel the stone and rubble
"strange. i dont remember even seeing this."
>its best not to dwell on this now. there is still that hive in here.
>you look to Aryanne and extend your hand
"communications please"
>you are handed Aryannes crystal
"Reich, this is Manos"
>you wait a few moments before a voice comes back to you
>"lord manos. we hear you loud and clear."
"has Cadence been informed of my current situation?"
>"yes lord. she is currently here now if--"
"put her on immediately"
>"yes lord"
>you are Cadence
>a pony rushes over to you holding out his crystal
>>"its Lord manos ma'am, he wishes to speak with you"
>you take the crystal from him
"Manos, are you ok?"
>"yes im fine, just taking care of a few loose ends. now, i need you to get to our little queen and have her put on the line"
"are you sure manos? i heard there is a hive thats forming near you. if you think its her should we be informing her of anything?"
>there is a loud silence
>then manos' voice comes back
>"please just get me into contact with her."
>you sigh as you ready a teleportation spell
"yes manos."
>>25469086
>you are Manos
>you hear the sound of magic on the other side, followed by a few footsteps and the sound of chains being unlocked
>then there is the sound of breathing
"Queen?"
>there is a little buzzing then the changelings voice comes through
>"y-yes?"
"are you in control of the hive thats growing in my old home?"
>"no! i swear im not! i had no idea that there was a hive there until i was locked up!"
>you listen to the sound of her voice
>she sounds like she is telling the truth, but Changelings are deceivers by their nature
"i know they need a queen to operate and organize so effectively, i also know they have a connection to you since they are from your previous queen, so ill ask again. are you lying to me?"
>the Queen remains silent
"Queenie?"
>"they are under my command..."
"how do i know you aren't lying to me now then?"
>while this conversation was going on you and the others have been walking to where Rainbow had sealed them in
>you are currently outside the large door
>"you dont.."
"then ill test you."
>you pull out your sidearm and aim it down the hall behind you
>you dont fire it and just wait a few moments
"anything?"
>"no, what am i supposed to be looking for--"
>you pull the trigger and the gun fires, the changelings on the other side of the door start to go crazy
>you can hear the buzzing of their wings as they fly around probably scared by the noise
>"what did you just do?!"
"congratulations queenie, you passed. please hand the crystal back to cadence"
>"but i-"
"NOW"
>>25468829
>Not even HS likes you
Just leave and check the damn pastebin everyday, holy fuck
>>25461236
>>25461390
>>25468538
>>25469358
your posts make me think im writing starwars.welcome back m8y
>>25469195
>Cadences voice comes back
>"Manos?"
"Cadence. here are my orders, amplify my voice so you and the queen can hear me"
>you wait a few moments so she has enough time to cast the spell
"alright Queenie im going to open that door. and here is the real kicker. if i or any of the others with me even get a scratch on us. you're going to die."
>you can hear sad bug pony noises on the other side
>"i understand. you wont be hurt. i promise."
"good girl. ill be seeing you when i get back"
>you place the crystal in your pocket so they can hear if any harm comes to you
"Cinnamon, if you please?"
>>"yes lord manos."
>the sound of large locks and tumblers unlocking fills the hall
>the changelings on the other side remain silent as the door swings open slowly
>you take a step inside the room and look at the hundreds of changelings filling it
>each one of them have their eyes locked on you
"move."
>for a moment nothing happens, then a small path is cleared for you by the drones
>you walk right up to the large hive structure. and you feel the smooth surface
"i wonder"
>you turn your head to a changeling and you point to the hive
"take a part off"
>a few drones rush to the hive and start to rip a chunk off and drop it at your feet
>you watch them closely as you pick it up
>the material is very lightweight and it feels solid
>you stick it into the ground firmly and take a few steps back
>sidearm still in your hand you point it at the hardened material and pull the trigger.
>>25469370
>you can hear sad bug pony noises on the other side
Damn, I don't know why, but I found that cute
>>25468943
Nah, your autism really isn't worth the time it takes to make this comment.
>>25469393queenie a qt3.14
i need to step out for a moment, ill be back soon to post a bit more.
>>25469370
Good to be back.
The queen must be taught discipline. She must understand that while she may be what is essentially a broodmother, she still bows before all of Manos' will. I think it would be prudent to either lobotomize the queen, or break her mentally. Now of course it would be easier to do if we had her under the pretense of rebellion. But as far as I can tell, she is simply using the Mannonburg estate as a backup plan. Plus, her only serious contact with anypony is with Cadence and her own cruelty inflicted upon the hive
So. It's either make the Changeling Queen completely and truly love Manos, or make her love him. Ultimately, however, her fate is sealed.
>>25469468
Fucked up that last sentence, but it should be obvious what I meant.
manos
>>25469370
>the material falls over from the impact of the round
>the changelings in the room who had previously jumped back from the noise start to skitter back
>you ignore them as you walk over to the chunk and lift it
>there is a very small indention where the bullet made impact
>you pull the smashed bullet out of the dent
>you toss the chunk aside and holster your sidearm
"this is a interesting discovery. perhaps a cheap new armor?.."
>you look over to your ponies.
>they are far more nervous than you are about being surrounded by changelings
>but you cant really blame them
"lets go. leave them here for now. they wont be going anywhere."
>as you leave the room the door starts to slowly close
"if you value your existence.. you will continue to make that material."
>those are your last words to the changelings as the door seals itself again
i planned on posting more but i wont be able to continue green tonight. ill give more tomorrow.
>>25469855
Good night.
>>25469855
>i planned on posting more but i wont be able to continue green tonight. ill give more tomorrow.
that was supposed to be in spoilers. sorry for my half assed ending to tonight's green.
as always constructive criticism is welcome!
Enjoy my other shit! (or dont idc)
http://pastebin.com/u/HumanSuperiority
http://pastebin.com/2iFWvgSe - be sure to check out the character sheet. (still WIP)
pastebin will be updated soon
Feel free to discuss the story, ill be around for a while to answer questions
and Remember: You're human. Be proud, be Superior!
>>25469874
Why did you stoop to the level of unprofessionalism earlier?
>>25468204
>>25468538
>>25468714
got bored, made this in paint.
>>25468829
Pretty much anywhere else I would agree with you, but this is 4chan.
this is your friendly reminder that HS never said he is professional. and the only faggot complaining about it is the Unprofessional Faggot.
>>25469874
We need to care more for sweet, innocent Queenie! It was definitely a mistake to abandon her and leave her alone with crazy Candybutt. When we come back we should try to assimilate her in our entourage, I bet with her powers and her hive she'll be a valuable addition to Manos cause besides we can watch her ourselves. If pones get offended by her, she just could change into a unicorn mare, problem solved.
>>25470723
kek
Good morning gents!
We eventually need an Aliens style battle with the queen.
>>25472389
No
>>25472019
We should just put her down. She's a Changeling, the only reason she was left alive in the first place was because copper decided to have an extra pet.
>>25472829
She is also useful, like the Judenrat. At least keep her until she is no longer needed.
>>25473334
So like honorary Aryan/pony status? I could see that.
Bunp
>>25470723
Made me laugh/10
>>25470723
Still has horn / 10
Guys, guys aren't we forgetting something...
Manos is injured, pretty heavenly injured. Didn't he just get stabbed through the chest, he even admitted it hurt more than anything he experienced before.
How is he even standing right now, I'm very concerned!
>>25474820
Has he healed up already? I remember when he got his throat or neck cut open it started to heal up quite quickly. After a hour or two it was fixed. But, what's odd is he still has the scar from the burn shining game him. I know it hasn't been mentioned much recently but both manos and HS said its permenant.
>>25474820
The human ability ofdetermination
Predictions for tonight's grün?
there has been a pattern to all the times manos/anon has 'died' or been hurt though. i noticed it while re-reading, so i can only assume its canon. but if you want to hear are my facts:
VS Chrissy and Shiningin the fight with Shining Armor and Chrissy manos was hit by a blast of magic, permanently scaring him on the side of his face. but not killing him outright. the spell DOES however eventually wear him down and cause him to pass out and/or 'die' from only a single attack that shouldn't have been fatal to most ponies/creatures
VS Changeling 'assassin'Manos was stabbed in the neck by a broken and jagged piece of glass, if the attack went awry like in the green that was recently posted and the ponies were unable to do anything that means that manos' naturally/magically healed himself in a short period of time, much less time than the magical attack in the previous encounter
VS Sombrathe first time Sombra 'killed' Manos was with magic, however it was in a alternate reality/warp world so no damage can truly be done physically (perhaps mentally though as we saw with copper coin) so manos was able to take the attack just fine with no real harm
VS Sombra (2)now here is where things start to get interesting and the pattern becomes clear, at least to me. Sombra lures Manos into a trap away from his guards to have him alone in a room and unawares thus not able to force him into the warp. HOWEVER Sombra doesnt kill manos with magic like he tried to previously. he STABS him, which in turn causes manos to die however he is able to come back from death in a fairly short amount of time
Final point and my theoryso as we have seen from the four previous combat scenarios Manos was hit ONCE by magic and nearly killed from a single blow, while the has taken physical damage with less and less issue. perhaps only magic can truly harm him.
>>25475030
>but if you want to read here are my facts:*
sorry i was typing too fast.
>>25475030
>Implying that Manos CAN be killed.
>Implying that he's a glorious human that can be killed by little ponies from a children's cartoon.
>>25475052
its just a theory.
>>25475059
A green thoery! Thanks for reading.
>>25469855
>you are a queen
>why did you do it? all you wanted was a chance to prove that not all changelings were rabid beasts
>you thought that if you proved to manos and Cadence that you would help with removing the evil creatures they would let you start a hive of civilized and loyal children.
>you look up from your new cell and see Cadence walk in.
>she looks so angry with you.
>and she is the one pony you dont want to make angry.
>two other ponies walk in with her.
>they always wear those black uniforms.
>do they like to look like changelings?
>with a nod from Cadence the two ponies unlock your chains
>is this a second chance?
>a Cadence levitates a pink shinny rock over to you
>you stare at it for a moment before you realize you are supposed to take it
>"Queen?"
>thats manos' voice!
>you gulp slightly and your voice starts to waver as you respond to him
"y-yes?"
>his voice is even and calm, almost disturbingly so.
>"are you in control of the hive that's growing in my old home?"
>you feel your heart sink and you start to panic
"no! i swear im not!"
>why are you doing this now?
"i had no idea that hive was there until i was locked up!"
>his voice gets more assertive and angered
>"i know they need a queen to operate and organize so effectively, i also know they have a connection to you since they are from your previous queen, so ill ask again. are you lying to me?"
>...
>"queenie?"
>he called you queenie.
>you sigh and tell him the truth
"they are under my command..."
>>25476401
>"how do i know you aren't lying to me now then?"
>thats a good question.
>you have already lost his trust and the trust of the only ponies you know
>you have nobody... you're alone.
"you dont"
>"then ill test you"
>a test? how is he planning on testing you? how will you know what to do? what if you fail?!
>"anything?"
>no, there was nothing! did you miss it?!
>your wings buzz slightly in panic
"no, what am i supposed to be looking for--"
>suddenly hundreds of your drones are in panic
>they are screaming and looking for something
>you start to stand up, but the two ponies take a step forward making you sit back down
"what did you just do?!"
>there is a soft chuckle from manos
>"congratulations queenie, you passed. please hand the crystal back to cadence"
>what did he do though? has he hurt them? you want to know for sure
"but i-"
>"NOW!"
>you drop the shiny rock in your panic and push yourself back to the wall
>you watch as the rock gets lifted by Cadences magic
>>"manos?"
>you cant hear whats being said but there are a few nods from cadence and she never takes her eyes off of you
>then suddenly the voice is loud enough for you to hear it
>"alright Queenie im going to open that door. and here is the real kicker. if i or any of the others with me even get a scratch on us. you're going to die."
>die..
>you look up at cadence and a smile crosses her face
>you know she wouldnt mind putting you in one of the camps
>you know what you are to her.
"i understand. you wont be hurt. i promise"
>before you even finish speaking you are giving orders to your drones
>you tell them not to panic just watch those who are going to enter
>and if the tall one speaks. listen to him
>"good girl. ill be seeing you when i get back"
>>25476401
>>25476570
Welcome back!
>>25476619
thanks for the warm welcome
>>25476401
>>25476570
See, what did I tell you! Queenie is an innocent qt, she just wants to be loved! We should give her LOTS of love when we return.
>>25476633
You deserve so much more than that based HS!
>>25476570
>Cadence takes the crystal back and places it in her front pocket
>the two of you and the other guards all take a seat and wait.
>you all listen to the voices in the crystal for any signs of assault
>Cadence makes sure to keep a close eye on you
>"if ANYTHING so much as scratches manos. ill rip you apart myself"
>your wings involuntarily buzz and you give a quick chirp
>if cadence doesnt speak changeling. but you are pretty sure she understands what a fear reaction is
"h-he will be fine. i promise."
>your eyes move to the floor
"i wouldnt hurt manos, hes all i really have besides you.."
>"nice way of showing you care by betraying us.."
>you feel a tear come to your eye
>that really hurt..
>you were just doing what you thought was best
>there is suddenly a loud Bang from the crystal
>the guards in the room get back on edge and draw their weapons
"I-I-nothing happened! i swear!"
>Cadences horn glows and you can see and feel her anger
>the moments following feel like a lifetime, and for you it nearly was
>Cadence is close enough to you now that you can hear manos' voice
>>"this is a interesting discovery. perhaps cheap new armor?"
>you release a breath you didnt even realize you held
>>"lets go. leave them here for now. they wont be going anywhere"
>your eyes keep moving from Cadence to the shiny rock and back again
>did.. did you pass?
>>25476745
>did.. did you pass?
>hfw
>>25476820
HNNNNG
dat qt3.14
>>25476745
>you are Manos
>the door has closed and begun to seal itself shut
>as it closes you turn to your ponies
"alright everyone. let head back to our Hands, then to the Reich. we have killed two birds with one stone today."
>everyone starts to walk down the halls away from you still checking for anything that might cause you harm
>speaking of harm.
>you pull the collar of your uniform back a bit to examine the cloth napkin you have used as a makeshift bandage
>its not really a 'bandage' its more like a wad of cloth on a wound, which is what it is.
>the blood on it has started to dry along the edges but the center still is bright
>and the hole in your chest is still there, though slightly smaller than before
>if you hadn't seen all this happening a long time ago. you would have panicked when sombra attacked you.
>but you saw his whole life from its dull beginning, to its end.
>and end you were more than willing to grant him.
>"Manos? are you alright?"
>you place the cloth back in the wound and continue on
"yes sorry, just had to keep an eye on a little scratch i received. i dont want to have too many stains on my uniform"
>>25476936
Ha! That picture is actually really fitting.
quick question. are any of you guys behind >>25476913 ?
>>25476969
no? alright. just asking.
>>25476969
>>25477034
that header screams unprofessional if you ask me...
>>25477095
Yeah this.
>>25477095
Kek. It's actually not my doing.
>>25477120
It's someone even MORE Unprofessional than I, for I capitalize my shit.
>>25476969
Twas me, I had found you on that blueblood thread, didnt ever check out the Manos story till now
>>25477293
Ah, so you're the one trying to replace me as the Unprofessional one?
>>25476936
>you are Cadence
>you look at queenie as she huddles in fear in of you
>you cant believe you started to trust her.
"why would you betray everything we are working towards?"
>queenie just sits there quietly
>a few small chirps and buzzing is all the noise she makes
"you were the only changeling i thought i could trust, and then i hear you are making a hive?! why!"
>the queen lifts her hoof to her face to wipe a tear away
>you almost start to tear up but you fight it back
>you dont waste tears on bugs..
>"i just thought if i helped you then you would give me a chance to make a better kind of changeling. a civil one, that wouldnt be like the monsters you have had to deal with."
>you feel a lump in your chest, besides Honor Bound and Manos, Queenie has been the only other, creature, you have got to know.
>and whether you wanted it to happen or not you have grown attached to her
>you look away from her and whisper to yourself
"attachments can be removed if they must."
>but you wont do it unless manos orders you to.
>or unless she trys to harm him.
"ill be back to check up on you."
>you turn away and walk out of her cell. the two guards locking the restraints on her before leaving
>>25477308
>implying anyone wants to be you
>>25477343
i need to take a small break. got a small case of writers block, ill return in a bit
>>25477293
Great, another Namefag...
Read the story, lurk the threads and learn our ways.
Don't make yourself look like a complete idiot such as the unprofessional one!Enjoy the ride.
Heil Manos!
>>25477377
>got a small case of writers block
Wow, that's a first.
>>25477441
>Implying that I don't have fun trolling you idiots, or that it's a bad thing
>>25477441
i just got a few things going on that i have zero control over. its just effecting my day a bit.unless that was sarcasm
>>25477468
HS, what's YOUR opinion on me?
>>25477465
I know, I know, I'm so sorry! You are obviously merely pretending to be retarded...
>>25477494
You are forgiven.
>>25477468
Hey, if you don't feel like it today, just take a brake! You know we'll wait for you!
>>25477484
Disgusting, you have no fucking shame!
>>25477484
>>25477522
>>25477522
It's BREAK, you negroid.
>>25477532
Answer the question, please.
Man, do I sure love fat changeling and zigger cocks in my tight underage asshole!
>>25477537
Ahh the poor excuse for a monkey is pointing out typos again, how fitting.
>>25477582
Kek!
>>25477554
he already answered it you dense subhuman
>>25477554
I think he's agreeing with the skinI am
>>25477760
Anon, confound these mobile celular devices
>>25477582
>Implying that I like ziggers cock
>>25478025
>implying you dont
Guys, I'm turning over a new leaf. I will cease my Unprofessional comments, and I expect the insults to stop. Deal?
>>25478510
no, no deal. drop the name and act normal. here let me give you a run down of all the name fags from start to finish
HS: writes the green we come to read
Black Hand: writes side stories about perspectives of the side characters and generally loyal to manos in some way shape or form
Royalist: (see Black Hand) only exception is he does the opposite side, he does stories related to the Royalists
SheevAnon: doesnt grab for attention and is well liked by HS, for being a long time reader and gives his input and adds suggestions where acceptable
ArmAnon: one of the early namefags who got his name from a funny turn of events where HS convinced him he was in his ArmA lobby
the archaeologist: so far ive only seen 4 posts from him. 1 being a blast from the past where he posted the link to the first thread/prompt that HS got his idea from and then a thought out theory on this story see >>25475030
VietAnon: had a name just so HS knew it was him who started the other thread (he should drop it imo)
and you. the Unprofessional Faggot, constantly shitting up the threads and attention whoring the hell out of it, when ever you get called out on something you say "ha itz fer da lulz" only positive thing about you is you bump the thread. (which can always just be remade)
>>25478610
Wow. You've helped me see the light......
Thank you, Anon.
>>25478610
I'm honestly surprised people remember me.
I'm always in the thread, I just don't tripfag!
>>25478767
i remember you, nice to see you again bravo 3
>>25478790
THIS IS GETTING UNCOMFORTABLY ACCURATE, S T O P
>>25478790
Ah, HS is back. Have you brought some green? Your green to me is like fried chicken to a nigger.
>>25478854
ive written a bit in a prewrite file. ill probably post it tomorrow i just need to link them together smoothly. (which knowing me might be a day of green in itself) but what i have isnt post worthy in its current form. luckily for you guys tomorrow i get a day off so you might get extra.
>>25478891
>whole day off
>MIGHT get extra
What are you, a nog?
>>25478978
yup
>>25478993
Holy shit, seriously?
>>25478610
noice and accurate
continuing the previous story heres a little review before the next part.
>continued Swift Justice
>the machine slowly comes to a stop just before running you over.
>your face is nearly touching the front of the war machine
>there is a small slot in the front revealing a pony looking you right in the eyes
>there are ponies driving those things?!
>you take a few steps back and you are corralled back with other survivors of the attack
>there are Black Hands surrounding you and the small group of guard ponies
>where did they even come from?
>it doesnt matter, you're trapped and you're panicking
>oh celestia save us.
>from on top of one of the carriages of death Manos himself stands high above you all
>"you are brave ponies, of that there is no doubt. who is in charge of this little group?"
>thats a good question, to be honest the chain of command has been decimated.
>"come now.. no need to be afraid.."
>he holds out a small object
>"decide your own fates then.. if you are leaderless become your own. surrender, as prisoners of the Reich."
>what is this Reich? you havnt even heard of it until you arrived here and apparently you are at war?
>"so what will it be? life or death?"
>the tall monster who calls himself manos sneers at everypony
>he probably has already decided what he wants to do with you
>just then you hear the voice of one of your comrades
>"if you think we will surrender to a monster like you then--"
>Manos points the small device to the pony and a loud bang fills the air
>you cover your eyes hoping you wont be next
>when no more noise follows you uncover them and see a corpse laying beside you
>the face of the pony now disfigured and disgusting
>his armor turned from a shiny bright gold into a pumpkin-like orange
"oh celestia. why?"
>"he made his choice. now make yours"
>what choice do you really have?
>you step forward and remove your sword and the remaining pieces of your armor
>you hear the mumbling of your brothers and sisters behind you
>>25480452
>by now you are completely unarmed nothing left to distinguish you from a common pony besides your mane and tail being trimmed to guard standard
>another sword falls next to yours, then another, and another
>soon the rest of the guards are without weapons and armor
>Black Hands move in to take everything you disowned onto the ground
>many of them drop their old and worn blades for freshly sharpened royal ones
>"secure them, move into the city"
>so this is it then.. you're a prisoner of war to a nation that doesn't exist lead by a creature who calls himself a god.
>>25480452
>continuing the previous story heres a little review before the next part.
>continued Swift Justice
kek nice review.
>>25480551
>so this is it then.. you're a prisoner of war to a nation that doesn't exist lead by a creature who calls himself a god.
Very nice! I'm very interested in his and his comrades fate as POWs. Please do continue!
Boop.
Also, good morning!
Bump.
>>25481817
And a good day to you too.
>>25481817
>>25482180
Bump afternoon gents
Boop.
Hey, does anyone remember when that unprofessional guy tried making the "official uniform"?
>>25477343
>you are Manos
>after a long tiring walk through the forest you return to the rear line of the Black Hands
>most have started to continue the movement back to the Reich but you still have plenty here for a decent defensive line
"Aryanne, Blackout. take the others and get some rest. we will be moving out soon and you will need the energy"
>as you give the command for a short break to your guard one of the few remaining commanders approaches you
>"lord everything is set. should we begin?"
>you nod and he escorts you to the top of a nearby hill
>looking out over the gathered unicorns you take a deep breath
"my ponies. we fought long and hard for this city. and in the end we gain possession of it"
>the unicorns remain silent, some might have and idea that this isnt a congratulations speech
>they wouldnt have been ordered into their squads if it was
"but unfortunately we wont be able to restore it to its former glory. and ill be damned to an eternity on the moon before i see it lost again!"
>its slowly becoming more and more clear to the ponies what you are going to ask them to do
"i know this is home to many of you. and to be honest. its home to me as well."
>you turn around to the city in the distance
"this is where i met you ponies. this is where i met Lyra, Copper, Blackout, and... and bonbon.."
>you hear a few voices from behind you shout
>"she awaits us as the gatekeeper! she will judge us in Valhalla!"
>you feel a tear run down your face, Lyra must have been speaking to ponies again.
"Lyra.. i hope thats true"
>you wipe the small tear and turn back
"that she will. and this was her home too. a home she fought hard for, going as far to die for what SHE wanted. and what she wanted was Ponyville to be out of Royalist control. and we will give Bonbon that gift!"
>"seig heil! Heil the Reich"
>you look to your Unicorn commander and nod
>he steps forward and in a strong determined voice he gives the order
>"Form bombardment squads, and ready your spells!"
>>25483421
>you watch as the ponies get into their positions
>a few are a little hesitant but do so none the less
>"ready spells, prepare to let them loose!"
>combined impact spells start to form above the squads
>they hold letting the spells magic build up and increase their power
>"fire!"
>the sound of the spells being cast is similar to that of a loud gust of wind
>the spells take to the sky arching towards the city
>you watch as they make impact.
>large buildings start to crumble and sway, dust and debris fly up into the sky
>the ponies who decided to stay in the city decided their fate.
>you had told them before you left it was their choice to stay
>fate doesnt feel guilt for his actions. Fate has the last say.
>a second barrage makes impact on the city
>a whole block is completely leveled nothing remains there
>you take a moment to close your eyes and get a close up look at the destruction
>you feel yourself leave your body as the world around you freezes
>inside the destruction you see small groups of griffons that remained undetected by your hands
>there are buildings that were still occupied by royal guards
>and there were families trying desperately to escape the fighting
>all of them were now buried in rubble and dust
>you open your eyes again, the world returning to its normal state
>you continue to watch as your unicorns continue their barrage
"i will leave nothing for the sisters, when they come to salvage the city, they will find nothing but rubble and ash.."
>>25483421
>>25483623
scorched earth policy u-unf!
i can't wait to see the princesses and the rest of the elements reaction to this, especially twilight's and aj's "muh appuls"..
heil manos!
