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Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
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>yfw you will never be BBC or Kyle
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Where is BBC I miss him
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Where is Kyle I miss him
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>>2482427
THIS IS A BOY

A BOY!!
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>>2482460
At least it's not a man, then it would be totally gay.
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>>2482432
I don't really frequent these threads, but I keep seeing the name Kyle pop up. Got a link to his stuff? Googling Kyle doesn't help much.
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Been working on this for about 2 weeks off and on. Supposed to be Starfire...will probably make an alt with her older suit on. Usually post my stuff in draw thread but i never get any responses.
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>>2482471
Not being a critical bitch, this is amazing I feel like when colored it should have flame effects in the hair but otherwise I really like it.u should also draw it with the CN teen titans costume
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>>2482427
Is this a trace of doxy?
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>>2482492
its an artist that gets shit on for copying doxy's style.
I think R4 is his name or w/e
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>>2482505
Copying? He straight up stole it.
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>>2482639
yea on his tumblr there were people calling him out obviously and saying how hes just a shadow of another artist and a thief, but hey,
good artist borrow while great artist steal right?
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>>2482427
Looks like there's a chunk taken out of that poor girl's side. It would look like okay if she still had her ribcage intact
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>>2482471
>>2482479
Don't reply to yourself, you fucking idiot.
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>>2482468
Don't ignore meee
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>>2482855
>>2482468

He's kairunoburogu on tumblr.

Tfw this selfish faggot never updates the blog anymore. (That tutorial helped me a lot by the way)
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>>2482471
Sorry, but it just doesn't have the spark.
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Oh good this thread is off to a great start.
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>>2481960
>...and then she farts!
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trying to get my stuff to look like Sunibee's
gibe advice pls beyond anatermy studies shading studies
how to i pick a good skin tones
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Some sketches
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>>2483274
highlights highlights highlights, even if it doesnt make sense, pick a plane of angle and highlight that shit.
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just painting.
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>>2483335
gotcha
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>>2482427
Link to your tumblr, DA or Ukrainian.Carpet.Forum
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>>2483361
disgusting. and you signed it, fucking fat enablers.
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>>2483361
/d/ has no taste.
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firsr digital ever, im such a noob
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>>2483552
It's like you've never seen any pornography.
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>>2483568
Its like hes badly traced some pornography
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>>2483495

Next time I draw her with a dick, just for you.
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>>2483361
I think this looks pretty decent, what are those two other fags so triggered about
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>>2483700
nosefag is just an idiot. we all know that.
also, this is decent, but that's it. anatomically and style wise this is pretty much a mess.
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>>2483552
>KEK
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>>2483776
original poster here

>style wise this is pretty much a mess.

how so, genuinely interested.
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>>2483845
Because the style doesn't follow any rules set by realistic anatomy and phisics.
For example her smile and dimples. The smile is wide and the dimples aren't counterbalanced by thick enough cheek muscles. And this little example can be applied throughout the entire figure.
Same thing goes on with shadows. The shadows on the cleavage suggest a light source coming from the top right in front of her. But the shadow on the point of her nose says that the light source is on the left.
And finally there's the messy paintwork, where you are not sure if you want to have a painterly approach with defined strokes or a more smooth airbrush feel.
All this summed up your artwork could have the title Uncertainty.
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I was bored in class and wanted to draw some boobs, any opinion?
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>>2483924
Btw, i'm posting from the phone so I can't resize it if it looks too big, if so I'll resize it when I arrive home.
And don't mind the black dot, just some shit that got stuck inside the phone's camera, I've to try to solve it.
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>>2482460
idk anon, that chest says otherwise, and he would have a greek dick if he was a boy, that's not something which gets depicted so much in art lately

and if this doxy does mostly futa porn, the OP pic artist might just love his style but not the futa part so he took things in his own hands
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what's up dudes
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>>2483947
>That foreskin

I give up Kyle you win.
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>>2483956
are you that one fag that complained he couldn't fap to kyle's work because all his dicks look circumcised
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>>2483947
THIS THREAD HAS BEEN BLESSED BY KYLE PICTURE
+100 LUCK TO ALL WHO POST
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>>2483947
her fingers are broken and her mouth is out of perspective. also their interaction is pretty hard to read in the crotches area.
otherwise it's a cool artwork.
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>>2484006
go kill yourself
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>>2484008
HERETIC
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I decided to post this question here:
How do you guys handle your linearts? I always end up making several layers over and over them until I finally reach my cleanest line.

Is there any tip for not repeating the same lines over and over again? My drawings take me ages to get finished.

Pic kinda related
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>>2484016

MAN THE PITCHFORKS
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>>2483552
Pig disgusting subject.
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>>2484016
just kill yourself already.
you're not funny and you are forcing a meme that will never become a thing.
go do something productive instead of spending your days shitposting on 4chan, fucking retard.
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>>2484019
just liek draw smooth
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>>2484110
PRISE KYLE
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Is it illegal to draw/produce loli/shotacon in the U.S?

I hear stuff about owning it, but never any laws about making it yourself.
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>>2484147
There's absolutely no problems with that. Go right ahead, pedofag.
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>>2484147
I wouldnt risk to do that, not only because the law, but think about other people, what will they think about you
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>>2484172
Not him but the right people would praise and adore you desu senpai.
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>>2483947
kyle should have never fucking come here, he doesnt need critique he just shows off. and actual autists start spamming up threads.
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>>2484173
>Worthless penniless saucer tits NEETS
>the right people
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>>2484147
It's ridiculous a question like this even has to be asked. Of course you can make it.
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>>2484191
>he doesnt need critique
>>2484007

Get some glasses anon.
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>>2484114
does it hurt, jellyfag?
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>>2483956
fucking dickbrains
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>>2483947
I still hate you faggot but I will only hate you, your art that is actually somewhat decent

>pregnant

don't try tempting me I don't care if it is still in great taste I will always hate you
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>>2483947
Any tips for rendering subsurface scattering?
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>>2482471
Looks bomb senpai.
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>>2483947
WE LOVE YOU KYLE
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>>2484147
A guy in my country got charged and might go to jail for like three years for writing a story, kind of like American psycho but more graphic, that had a few underage victims being raped and tortured.

>this is supposed to be a free first world european country
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>>2484374
>european

Lemme guess, Britbong?

Aren't you fags just outright trying to ban all porn in general? I know BDSM and feet shit is already illegal.
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>>2484380
>No feet
Not even my fetish, but for what purpose? Do you guys want some help with a revolution or something?
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>>2484374
He could probably get more money and have a safer income if he just opted to go full illegal and sell art through the black market.

It's almost at the point for some people where tor relays, underground connections, a strong pen name and word of mouth are the best ways to distribute your work .

It's almost totalitarian how the government treats the depiction of fictional ideas.
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>>2484383
There is some very influential feminists in Britain that have been trying non-stop for decades to ban pornography. They get little victories every so often by banning specific fetish porn. They even got "female ejaculation" to be illegal. It doesn't mean much because your average policeman won't come knocking on your door because you jerked off to something a lil' "naughty", but you are absolutely prohibited from selling that content, and if they catch you, you WILL be in trouble.

Seems like in 2013 they tried to make all ISPs ban pornography sites unless you called and chose to opt-in for adult content. Lol


Honestly the Brits are just pushovers. They'll let the feminists and the muzzies walk all over them for really no reason.
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>>2484380
No, but that image gets me every time. But yeah, UK is going full retard at top speed.
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>>2484389
>tor relays, underground connections, a strong pen name and word of mouth

How do I acquire these?
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>>2484412
http://lifehacker.com/what-is-tor-and-should-i-use-it-1527891029
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>>2484147
If you create the porn, then you will be possession of it.

It is illegal.
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>>2482427
>he honestly thinks the global rules mean anything
good 1 dude
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>>2484446
Why do you call yourself momma?
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Kyle your art skills are amazing and appreciated, thanks for still stopping by and sharing your works of art, they'll forever be remembered
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despite being a massive ungodly homosexual furfag, I still managed to get commissioned human women often enough. How do I make womans faces look more...sensual? I feel like my proportions aren't bad but it doesn't look attractive. Is it the expression, droopy eyes? Should it be more stylized? ARE the proportions fucked up and my dunning kruger eyes are passing over it??
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>>2484722
the eyes are pretty bad, and that's a serious man jaw
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>>2484722
the eyes are bad, don't get me wrong. But the mouth is so awful it hurts. Might have something to do with the tooth almost being as big as her eyeball.
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>>2484722
Uhhh... that's not how lips work...
Rework the lips.

Her facial structure is kind of masculine. But I guess that's why you're a homosexual furfag.
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>>2484728
>>2484730
>>2484731
thanks guys, how does this look?
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>>2484739
the mouth still looks a bit off, but greatly improved imo
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>>2484446
But it's not illegal you stupid fuck.
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>>2484745
yeah I'm having a little trouble with the lip bitey smile from a looking up angle. I don't know, if anyone could redline or something I'd be very appreciative.
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>>2484739
Lips are still sorta off but I'd still make tender love to it. Post the rest, faggot.
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>>2484287
pathetic
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>>2484722
Making an appealing orgasmic face with "retarded" eyes is pretty hard. But the problem here probably is mostly the closed mouth in combination with the extended jaw which looks like it belongs to an open mouth face, thus it turned out like a man's jaw. Appeal wise you should probably lose the lineart for the single teeth. Spaces between teeth are normally connected with non healthy people and are considered unappealing. Just stylize that and you'll be alright.
Check the redline.
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>>2484801
very nice
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>>2484801
BBC senpai, you're back?
I missed you
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>>2484809
I'm not posting my stuff anymore because psychos. Hopefully redlines won't trigger anyone.
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>>2484817
Not that anon but I'm glad you're still redlining, it's always very helpful
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>>2484666
Satan is right, guys. All those things are allowed because it's still /ic/ material. Just like how fursuits and pony cosplay is allowed on /cgl/.
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>>2483947
I'm having a bit of trouble making sense of this... At first I thought the penis belonged to the person in the back, but now I realist it's probably the pregnant one. But why is it pointing to violently to the left when it's erect? Would make sense if there was something forcing it that way, but nope. The arms and hands are confusing as fuck too, what's going on with the fingers here?
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>>2484801
It's a pretty nice redraw bbc, but I burst of laughing at the eyes...
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>>2484817
BBC I really think you should stay off /ic/. If the trolls can confirm you're going to read their posts they'll keep attacking you.
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>>2484869
the thing about trolls is understand their point if there is any, proceed to ingore them and make clear they understand how underaged they look with the "No, You!" tier flaming. nobody´s enjoys bullshit like that internet is best served with moderate respect.
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who is bbc? incase?
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>>2484801
can you teach me how to draw skulls like that
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>>2483600
Wikihow will employ him anyway.
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>>2484019
Learn Peter Han's dynamic sketching so you learn how to do confident lines and minimal layering.
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>>2484869
>>2484871
>muh trolls!
>muh internets boofey man!
>muh internets bullying!
>abloo bloo bloo

As much as I like BBC Chan he's also a fucking drama queen and it is blatantly obvious he gets kicks out of causing shitstorms and thoroughly enjoys it while playing the victim.
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>>2484801
god bless you bbc. I always hope you or kyle will redline me. I did a fusion of my previous edits and this. Still not perfect, and the rest of the image is another story but I can't post it b/c its furry, but I appreciate the help sweet /ic/ friends.
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>>2484019
use Lazy Nezumi
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>>2484989
If I had to be honest I think you should fall back a bit on how you did >>2484739

Something you did makes her look more "pleased" than the OP version and even BBC's redline, although he was just keeping your first one on point as reference. I think the "retard" look isn't that appealing (to me) while the smiling and eye looking towards the giver is the better approach. Just fine tune it and you're golden.
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>>2484981
>playing the victim
So bbcchan is a girl? The most you can do is ignore it. Dont lose sleep over it fampai
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>>2484996
nice I didnt know that one and it seems pretty useful
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>>2483947
>Doing art from a legendary manga
YOU
ARE
MY
NIGGA
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>>2485033

404 butthole missing
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>>2485033
Ever tried going without the line art?
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fuck you you little pice of shit niggers cum guzzler monkey dicks sucking faggots.
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If I have to draw one more fucking tentacle I'm going to snap.
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>>2484981
>the guy gets doxxed
>drama queen
can you be more of an idiot?
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>>2485033
this looks great. you managed to hide the use of reference very good in this one. keep at it and very soon you'll be able to draw your own stuff without needing refs.
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>>2482427
>Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
>your
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>>2485088
Nice. Must of really been grinding up dat ass of yours if you went out of your way like this.

With that, shameful. But >>2482492 and >>2482639 pointed it out ahead of time.

>>2485033
>>2485053
Personally, (s)he should just stick with with lines, just colored to give it life (unless it's a stylistic choice.) Lineless renders are becoming rather mainstream and thus, boring.
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>>2484801
>>2484817
M8, you are awesome! If anyone has a right to post their stuff and get (you)s here, it's you. You are more helpful than anyone else in these threads, so every cunt that talks shit to you can be ignored as the jealous fucktards that they are.
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>>2485094
>boo-hoo he didn't read my post, I noticed it first, mom, tell him he's late!
Pathetic, my man. Out.
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>>2484871
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I think I've been painting these fucking tentacles for over 4 hours straight now. Fuck ass nigger holocaust america
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>>2485066
>>2485140
nobody cares about your fucking problems. show your art or gtfo.
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>>2485143
Shut the fuck up and let me blow off some steam in piece you little fucking faggot asshole piece of shit.
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>>2485099
Calm down there, anon. Just pointing out the obvious, no need to retort with surmised wordplay. You get my point.
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>>2484981
how you feel about the fact that real people have killed themselves over cyberbullying?

>be nice - suicidal kids dont think twice.
PS yall niggas said furry shit is where the money is i´m neck deep in that shit now hope you didnt fucking troll me or anything.
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>>2485152
>how you feel about the fact that real people have killed themselves over cyberbullying?

And nothing of value was lost.
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Anyone else feel a little bit naughty hitting "top" and "bottom" in the porn threads?
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>>2483970
thats even the same picture
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>>2485154
"No."
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>>2485153
anybody´s 70 year of active dedication to fields of life is precious unless you´re literally ISIS
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>>2485154
oh golly how tempting indeed.
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>>2485152
>killed themselves
Their own fault.
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>>2485160
I very much doubt the retarded teens who killed themselves over cyberbullying would have actively dedicated to a field of life. They would have probably just leeched the government for neetbux and maybe produced more retarded offsprings.
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>>2485168
if world didnt have room for retarded offsprings your parents would´ve used a condom too.
live and let live :^)
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>>2485186
whatever
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>>2485168
I'm pretty sure you're an equally worthless neet.
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>>2485186
I am letting them live, it's not my fault they don't want to.

>>2485196
This is true. Well, not quite, I'm in education right now.
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>>2485208
Ahh, let me rephrase my comment to you then 1_ year old Edgemaster.

>Pssh, Nothing Personnel Kid.
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>>2485214
Go back to tumblr, tumblrina.

See? I can play the name-calling game as well!
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>>2485223
It's only a meme bro.
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>>2485242
You think this is a fucking game?
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>>2485150
let me guess. you aren't even good at drawing, right? what a pathetic excuse for a human being kek.
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>>2485336
Post your work.
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>>2485355
merc-wip.jpg

go fuck yourself
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>>2485443
you too
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>>2485355
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>>2485446
at least I don't bitch about made up tentacles kek
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>>2485472
Clever girl...
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>>2485487
It was generated you dumb memer
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>>2484147
No. Supreme Court has already dealt with this in Ashcroft v. Free Speech Coalition. Those who say it's illegal are going to be citing state laws.

For those of you who aren't US citizens, the way our system "works" is that local and state governments pass whatever they want into law and depend on the supreme court to decide if it's okay after the fact.

All the anti-loli laws go against set precedent, but that is not enough to get them stricken from the books. Laws need to be challenged by someone with legal standing. That's bad news for loli-fans in the affected states because it all depends on the autist who gets charged not bitching out and taking a plea deal. Because of the nature of the alleged crime, the one guy who got hit purely on fictional work gave up out of embarassment despite massive donations from various legal defense funds in media like the comic industry.

So essentially, the legality depends on whether or not you're willing to take the bullet and not plea.
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>>2485485
Neither do I, I finished the tentacles.
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where is the art in this thread
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>>2485593
Art discussion takes place in porn threads mostly.
Skill level is too high and thread atmosphere is too toxic for most to want to post work they know has flaws.
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>>2485033
Any tips on coloring like this?
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>>2484817
You're always welcome here senpai, especially your brilliant redlines!
Did the doxxing bullshit finally come to an end?
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>>2485609
Paint fruitbowls.
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>>2484147
I'm super paranoid about this shit. I feel like I'd need to be behind and learn to program at least 7 proxies just because I'm drawing porn in general. Not to mention getting the money from PayPal along with data being drawn from any social media that I'd use for self-promotion would ultimately lead back to me directly anyway - free speech doesn't cover obscenity, so I'm thinking I'll have to go full Fring to have any peace of mind doing this kind of work and making a profit off of it.

Do these feelings simply come with the territory, or do I really have nothing to be worried about as long as I do the work I'm paid to do and keep everything else clean?
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>>2485709
You're being paranoid. But if it makes you feel better, then do what real porn does and add a two sentence story to your posts. There, now it's literature.
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>>>/trash/2317774
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>>2482427

>anything interesting is not allowed

Why even bother making the thread then?
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>>2483947
how does that arm even bend?
who does the dick belong to?
whats wrong with her fingers?
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>>2485827
>>2469196
>>2476242

plz, I'm disappointed in the quality of the shitposting going on.
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>>2485834
...That's really not what the people viewing the image are going to berating it on...
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>>2485837
Then what is?
Or is it because it's from Kyle-senpai is why plebs will dismiss the flaws because "muh dicksucking"?
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>>2485088
What the fuck is that bullshit.
I want to see how he defends himself, you have the link to the tracer?
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>>2485869
im pretty sure its just a troll but if not, fucking source please
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>>2485871
It was made by an /e/ faggot, it seems.
Fucking cancer.
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>>2485847
Color, scenario and fetish are more important than perfect anatomy.

I don't even really see what you mean by the dick.
I had to squint my eyes to see what you meant about the fingers and no one really cares about how the arms look as long as they're long enough and straight.

If you just look at the colors alone you can tell there's a lot of skill in his technique and in the end of the day, that's what gives the first impression.
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>>2485879
>Color, scenario and fetish are more important than perfect anatomy.
Well, I wasn't that other anon you were talking to at first >>2485834, I was another anon. But personally that whole "Story > Anatomy" thing isn't a good excuse. Just because you can color well doesn't mean your shit isn't shit. Don't get me wrong here, I don't think that picture is bad (moreso confusing if you take a second to process what you're looking at) but you don't need perfect anatomy, you need controlled anatomy AND good color technique. One should not outway the other.
And my point pretty much shows ordinary people will not look at a drawing with a critical eye and just think with their dick/ just take what's in front of them with lower standards than artists would.
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>>2485879
you are probably right about dickbrains not noticing these flaws. but this doesn't mean I'm not going to call you out for being a dickbrain and thus a lesser human being.
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>>2485882
>you need controlled anatomy AND good color technique
this anon knows.
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>>2482471
Worked on it some more and finished the lines. Added flats just for now...probably gonna take a week or two to render cause i'm lazy as shit. Will try to add a bit of flames to the end of the hair.
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>>2485978
those lines on the arms and legs, are those supposed to indicate muscles?
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>>2485978
>>2485979
Another anon here, I was just about to question the same. I'd also suggest fixing her feet, toes shouldn't extend that far for the grooves I'm seeing there. Her right one.
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>>2485978
What are the lines on her arms and legs? I hope those aren't supposed to define the shape of the muscles, because that's all wrong. There are also some other things you want to fix. I did a quick redline.
Otherwise I really really like this and the style in general. Especially the face is really appealing imo.
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>>2485995
Thanks. Will take the redline into account and rework it a bit. I usually have the lines there as placeholders till i render in the forms then i erase them.
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>>2485999
If the placeholders are wrongly placed, the final render will be off as well. The general proportions are very good, you just need to study how muscles attach to the bones and how they overlap with each other.
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>>2482471
Yeah, here's some critique.
Work faster. Work harder.
Experiment. You'll get results quicker in the long run with smaller experimental work than on large projects.
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>>2485809
Critique, please?
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>>2483947
KYLES BACK FUCK YESH
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Givin' this a shot again. I would like some advice about one thing here, how should I handle muscle on the female body and the guy's abdomen including? I'd like to give just "subtle" amounts of muscle definition on the girl's arms, nothing too strong, just enough to be classified as "tone." While extra guidance towards the male's abs being "strong but not much, visible but nothing on bodybuilder levels." Just thought I'd ask.

And I guess anything else about the picture to add would be fine.
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>you will never be as good as Kyle
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>>2486099
oh for fuck's sake, stop being an assburger already. kyle never went anywhere, you dumb tardo.
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i hate it :/
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got a big booty so i call her big booty
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>>2482427
Do I post animated porn here, or in the animation thread?
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>>2482427
>>2485088
It's sad that someone paid to commission this. The hair and colors stick out like a sore thumb.
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Kyle please teach me to draw feet senpai
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would you read a doujin in this style? more drawings in >>2485943
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>>2486432
yes
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>>2486432
Yes~
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>>2486432
I'd prefer some more marked lines and shading but I've seen doujins looking sketchier than this. It's cute and I'm sure it would appeal to me more if I were into lolis.
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>>2486455
>>2486453
>>2486434
thanks for the feedback!
the final product would be inked and toned, btw.
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>>2486340
you're the milk cow ladies anon, right? I love your style.
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>>2486432
the body anatomy is a big turn off, so probably no. dickbrain normies won't care though, so go for it.
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>>2486541
post your work faggot.
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>>2486567
Not him, but you don't have to be gud to spot mistakes. What you should ask him is, what kind of mistakes and where.
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>>2486567
>post your work

I'm so sick of this meme. I'm not a major league baseball player but I can see when a player is good or has a flaw.
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>>2486538
yupyup, danke
tho now i worry if people can recognize me lol, that never seems to go over so well in these threads
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>>2483947
I like the style but the nipples are a little wierd
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>>2486541
hmm, I know my anatomy is not tip-top, but do you mean general anatomy or personal taste?
I say that cause I tried to go for a skinny look, which is kinda new to me.
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>>2486613
tend to think it's presonal, I see that body shape on borru's
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>>2486613
I'm talking general anatomy. as I said, normies, especially the dickbrain ones, won't care, since you can draw appealing symbol faces and create bodies that have adequate proportions. but I, as an artist, can't just overlook all the anatomy errors you incur in as soon as the pose is just a bit harder to draw. this makes it a no go for me.

>>2486567
let's do it this way. I'll post my work as soon as you kill yourself. deal?
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>>2486340
i have a super hard time easily free handing figures in this style from the front, to the point that i had to do this one by doing a silhouette of the figure from the rear and then go back and add details/make minor changes to make it forward facing

anyone else have experience with this problem/tips for overcoming it?
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>>2485033
Oh cool more trace shit from Kyle
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>>2485099
underrated
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>>2487134
stay jelly
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>>2486582 #
That's not the reason its used. You can say something is bad without being an expert, but you should show work to justify unnecessarily predictions such as "You will always suck if you don't follow my advice."

>That wasn't a good play by Kobe.
>Omg Kobe, you're nothing but trash. Do what I say! You're never gonna amount to anything.

The top can be said by anyone. The bottom needs to come from a basketball god or its worthless, even as criticism. Someone below kobe cannot judge his potential growth because they never walked on a higher path to vouch for their own judgments.
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>>2486185
Any input about the muscle on the girl or is it ok as it is? Excuse the pushing, just wanted to know.
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>>2485006
>only girls can play the victim
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>>2486593
most regular posters are easy to recognize. Or decent posters in general
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>>2487272
It's a difficult pose to show much muscle definition especially on a toon girl. I would fix her belly button to something like a small horizontal line since thats how the belly folds when bending over. ALso can't tell if her mouth is open or she's lip biting.
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>>2487250
interesting.

so where exactly did I tell him how to improve in my post
>>2486541
?
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>>2483274

there's enough people ripping him off
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/a/ stuff.
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>>2487420
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>>2487425
Ayy.
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>>2487447
The foot still looks rather off.
The rendering though looks rather nice. Her left arm placement though...looks off too, like it's not connected well to her shoulder. Not sure if I'm seeing things.
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>>2485847
fuck you kyle is perfect, you shitters shouldn't even post here this should just be Kyle general.

there's not one person in this thread that is not shit, Kyle is the only artist who gives a damn.
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>>2487447
Take off the entire foot and redo it.
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>>2487457
*leg
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>>2487456
Something primal and untamed is manifesting in me as if I am stalking prey and am about to gorge on unsuspecting meat in the veldt.
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>>2487420
>>2487447
ladies and gentlemen, I give you a polished turd

>>2487456
gtfo cancer
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>>2487465
post your work faggot.
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>>2487466
yeah?
>>2486711
>let's do it this way. I'll post my work as soon as you kill yourself. deal?
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>>2487465
congrats, you made fun of someones work. Good for you.

Post your work.
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>>2487506
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>>2487507
Actually looks pretty good. Still no need to be mean.
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>>2487516
Lurk more.

Seriously. Lurk more. Fucking hell.
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>>2486283
blog?
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>>2487519
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>>2487507
blog?
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>>2485879
This desu, don't neglect your color studies you pieces of shit
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>>2487523
http://andrewsonea.tumblr.com/

I haven't posted in a while though
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>>2486283

Meh, looks kinda unfinished but it makes my dick feel curious.
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>>2487506
just step in line with the other anons who have to kill themselves before I post it.
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>>2487525
the hands anatomy in that pic is still atrocious to look at.
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>>2487046
waist was a bit weird
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>>2486453
>Gujira's traps
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Rendered my wip from last week. Made bottom girl's head smaller as per anon's advice. My question is: are the crow and the cat distracting? Should I remove them?
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>>2487771
Saved
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>>2487771
Not imho.
They actually fill out the composition well, I just suggest you make the top one the same color of the bottom girl's hair (and if the crow represents the top girl, as I'm assuming, swap the animals positions as well) in order to balance the image more.
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>>2487771
What's with that line above blond girl's left eye? It really puzzles my autism.
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>>2487779
Thank you! The crow/cat night sky skin are fixed, but I will try switching their positions to see if I like it more.
>>2487800
It was the outline of a light shape I forgot to remove. Thank you for pointing it out!
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>>2482427
just testing the waters with porn, make your crits as cruel as possible please
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>>2488331
the perspective is awful and your stylization is pretty much garbage. get back to fundamentals training (gesture, perspective and anatomy studies). porn is too hard for your current skill level.
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>>2488331
>wants to do porn
>worst elements of piece by far are the breasts and genitals
Topkek
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>>2486185
>signing a rough
>signing a rough trace of someone else's work
not digging the stylized piggu face either but whatever
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>>2488369
Again this.
It's a learning ref, the entire pose isn't going to stay, it's just for practice. Gotta learn from somewhere. Though the face I can get. The girl I'm using is a bit rough to work with, so I'll have to decide how to make it look right.
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>>2488381
Signing a study is useless. When you ref don't just copy. Think of the drawings in the picture as objects in 3d space. That allows you to draw the pose from different angles instead of just copying the ref. Also think about why the artist made the choices he/she did.
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Wait, how did BBC got doxxed?
Did someone commission him, and use the paypal info? This is literally my worst fear.

I haven't been here in months.
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>>2488396
You have a good point.
I admit I have a bad case of "I drew it, I sign it", even if it's just a crappy doodle, blame my autism. But thinking about it, drawing in a more "3D space", different angle approach, sounds like a better way to understand what I'm doing even clearer. Thanks.
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>>2488331
Another thing. If you want to draw original poses without being called out as copying. Draw a pose from imagination first, then collect refs similar to your drawing to fix and fill in the gapes in your knowledge.

This in practice: http://shattered-earth.deviantart.com/art/The-BASICS-Using-References-255875213
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>>2488468
Fuck meant >>2488450
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