Dumping my works for critiques. DA doesnt help me and i made these in my phone. All of these are my works transitioning from just copying stuff to drawing from my imagination. (before, i cant draw if i dont have anything to copy from) thanks in advance!
Inspired by tokyojesus
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>>2303342
That ass tho. Fuckin creepy man
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One more after this
That's it! There's actually 2 more but i dont like how they went. Crtitiques are most welcome. On what to improve and whatnit, given my style.
thumbnails work more than real sized images,they're blurry, there's not a single edge but some hair strokes, that's shit, the same texture all over the place just with differnet brush sizes, that's lame, but that's the easiest thing to push ahead
you should learn construction and light theory, those are the most serious flaws
some of the concepts are decent
Ill take note of the light theory thanks!
For the blurry part, i cant help it as im just using my phone to draw. I also transitioned from traditional drawings so that explains why im just using a brush that varies in sizes. But good to know that it's leaning towards the bad side i guess.
highschool level
>>2303340
nigga, deviant art is the shittiest place to expect anything if you're not drawing furry garbage, anime shit, or titties.
Make a tumblr for your art and post here, since this is honestly the only place I know of that will actually give criticisms
>>2303359
This one is really nice. I would advise you to try drawing them on paper with a pencil, your concepts are nice but you're never going to be able to create true art on a phone.
Also maybe try some harsher lighting.
>>2303340
What kind of phone are you using? A Note 3?
>>2303639
Yeah a note 3. Doing it on infinite painter.
>>2303413
Thanks for the advise! Yeah DA's been going to the dumps now.
>>2303459
The only time i can draw is when im waiting for the bus. XD i have been drawing a lot in paper before. I just wanted to see if I can use the same style digitally with all the perks of undos and whatnot. So i guess make my drawings sharper eh? Cant i use the current blur as depth of field?
Shit.
>>2303459
Why would you never be able to create true art on a phone?
