It isn't all about the sex edition
After bemoaning the fact that many stories don't seem to touch on the other aspects of being a girl besides the physical thrill, I decided to try something.
http://pastebin.com/fQgzkyah
Any criticism is appreciated. This is my first time actually trying to write this sort of shit and I have no idea what I'm doing.
what happent to the old thread?
>>5717541
Reached the post limit.
>>5717492
I really like your writing style; definitely a cut above what you usually see in TG fiction. Some genuine humor, strong character voice, neat premise.
However, a lot of the details regarding Ashley just rang...false. Ashley does not feel like an alternate universe counterpart to Peter, she feels like a caricature of femininity. I would suggest toning it down a bit. If Peter was way into videogames, then maybe Ashley could be somewhat nerdy, too? At least don't make her favorite movie The Fucking Notebook. I mean, come on.
Random thoughts I had...
"Of course there was makeup in dozens of shades and colors, all of which could be described as "skin-colored""
While make up does indeed come in a variety of shades, *that's to cover all potential skin types of the customers*. A singular girl would thus have make up all to match one skin color - her own.
"there was also a variety of menstrual pads and tampons"
Ashley's bathroom should not be the feminine hygiene isle in the supermarket. People buy one brand. One.
"I got a text from Brittany telling me how she got some new nail polish and wanted to know if I would try it out."
... getting a new nail polish is not something you call your friends over for. On the scale of girly excitement, that's just slightly above getting a new deoderant.
I get that half the fun is exploring the differences to boy-world, but really, not absolutely every interaction is going to revolve around how very girly everything is. At some point you gotta hit the 'normal human being' layer.
I think it went into a better direction toward the end, but it was too quickly summarized. I'd have liked to see Peter's interactions with his former best friends in more detail, trying to get them to take him seriously as a gamer and then running into the sexism you only briefly touch on.
>>5717492
I posted this in the last thread, but I really like it. It reminds me of Quantum Leap.
Your writing, spelling, and grammar are all good. One of the only problems I have with the narrative is that all of this girl's friends are token minorities. Its like a 90s high school sitcom or something, its weird.
http://pastebin.com/PWqenpPX
Wrote this on the fly. Might continue it. Let me know what you think.
>>5717692
Thanks for the criticism. As any writer can tell you, people often write best when they focus on what they know. I'll admit that I really don't have much experience with what girls do when guys aren't around, so my writing during that part was a little piss-poor.
>>5717703
Yeah, I was sorta trying to go for a bit of humor, but I guess it did come up sloppy. If I decide to continue this, and that's a big if because fuck writer's block, I'll probably just replace them with ordinary girls.
>>5717492
I gotta be honest, that writefag attempt completely killed my mood. Physical transformation is a 100% must for me, fucking hate it when stories seem okay then you find out the protag ends up as a shemale or some shit.
Gunna dump a few
>>5717782
A few quick writing tips:
First of all, try writing in the past tense instead of the present. Usually flows better.
Ironically, considering you're writing a TG story, you don't really have a good grasp of periods. Remember - If you have a quote with an interjection, it would look something like
>"I really didn't like when you used that fatality on me, Scorpion," said Sub-Zero half-heartedly.
Punctuation can make or break your work.
>>5717850
Understandable. There are many works out there that touch on that. This is just a sort of reversal on that - what if you woke up tomorrow and everybody suddenly treated you as if you were a different person?
>tfw trans and TGTF thread
>>5717492
What's the source of the image? Google doesn't really help me.
>>5717883
Did Nyotaika get cancelled or just dropped by scanlators? I haven't been able to find any in a while.
>>5717838
>As any writer can tell you, people often write best when they focus on what they know. I'll admit that I really don't have much experience with what girls do when guys aren't around, so my writing during that part was a little piss-poor.
Honestly, if you're interested in writing more, whether professionally or as an amateur, I would strongly advise reading some novels by female authors with female protagonists set in the modern day.
Writing believable female characters is an important skill for an author, and the best way to hone it is by immersing yourself in their perspective.
>>5717928
True. But this is /d/. Porn and good writing with believable female characters have never really gone hand-in-hand; it's usually either one or the other.
Im having some trouble finding a tg fic I read a while back and maybe one of you fine anons could help me out. Basically a guy goes on vacation by uploading his conciousness into a robot avatar. Something goes wrong and he is uploaded into over 200 sexbots and now has to fuck his way home to find out what the hell happened and to fix the situation.
I really dont remember any more than this and hope /d/ knows what im talking about.
>>5718035
Mm, I disagree. All my favorite porn stories involve characters I actually give a shit about. Unless your fetishes specifically require humiliation and abuse, nothing is more enjoyable than reading about likable people having good sex with each other.
Stories with bland or shittily-written characters are quickly forgotten. Good for a quick fap and nothing more. But stories with well-written characters I can return to again and again.
>>5718124
You seem wise. I'm always on the lookout for non-shitty tg fic like the kind you describe. Got any recommendations?
>>5718179
Not him, but I posted some of these last thread.
http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=88
http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=1423
https://fictionmania.tv/stories/readtextstory.html?storyID=1300377577320344103
https://fictionmania.tv/stories/readtextstory.html?storyID=29924532917098916
https://fictionmania.tv/stories/readtextstory.html?storyID=33310059212229986476
https://fictionmania.tv/stories/readtextstory.html?storyID=3323312433615616969 (not really sure about this one)
https://fictionmania.tv/stories/readtextstory.html?storyID=33135558131222950827 (same)
It's not a lot, but it's something.
>>5718124
And I agree with you. I'm just saying it's hard to balance the two of them equally. I mean, I'll certainly try, but I won't make any promises.
>>5717492
Cut the list at the beginning of the third part. If you want write about the differences between genders/chauvinism, integrate it into a scene and maybe have a little aha moment at the end instead of a didactic wall of text. Show, don't tell.
The other critic commented on the "girly" scenes, which I agree with, but I don't agree with their assessment about Ashley being false. The circumstances of birth are powerful and there's no reason why female-Peter would necessarily develop along parallel lines to male-Peter. There's nothing about her (apparent) lifestyle that suggests caricature. It's on the pinker end of the spectrum, to be sure, but we've all known people as girly as her or at least have seen their tumblr/facebook.
After that point time speeds up which feels strange because the story up to that point was told on a day to day basis. There's definitely stuff in there that could be mined for good scenes so there's no need to rush over it.
Otherwise, you have a great foundation. Stories about something other than man ---> blonde nympho have a special place in my heart. You should definitely see it through and give it the ending it deserves.
>>5717855
Please dump this or at least give the source. I'm not finding anything with a reverse search.
>>5717492
it's fine not being all about sex, but this is /d/, so what takes place here, SHOULD be all about sex, everything else on this subject should be taken to other boards.
>>5717492
Does anyone know the writer Morpheus? I'm not usually on /d/ and don't see other threads for this, but he's pretty good at stories that are more about the every day stuff or the story itself than the sex. He also has a whole lot and it's really well written.
>>5718249
Not him but
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/739654/8928760cd7/
>>5718313
Morpheus is a well known and much enjoyed TG author who has recently joined the Canon Cabal of the Whatley Universe. http://www.crystalhall.org/
Check out his/her fanfiction in the fanfiction section of the forums. Theres about 4 new stories from him.
>>5717891
I feel you. It's gonna be okay.
>>5717898
Seconding request for source
>>5718179
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WnxdFRVfWzQinY3VoIgsqX3zvurLk5GZk2HbIDvoVyc/edit
This isn't too bad so far.
Google a Twine game called Masculine Mystique. Super hot, but will probably never be finished. Last update was in July :/
>>5718410
>Guy suudenly findds himself as a girl
>Reacts as a human being would and freak out about loss of identity etc
>Doesn't enjoy it
Why is this so god damned rare?
Wasn't sure to put this over on the caption thread. But I guess I'll put it here. Since you guys/gals lately have been critiquing stories.
Read it and post what you think.
I understand if its kinda long, But that's how I caption!
1/10
>>5719141
2/10 real
>>5719145
Having trouble, friendo?
fuck 2/10
3/10
>>5719184
Go on son
>>5719128
>I was a pretty big guy
BANE?
oes anyone have that TF comic where the blue goat woman shows up, fucks everyone and transforms them? I can't find it anywhere.
>>5719264
I do anon, here ya go.
>>5719269
>>5719271
>>5719274
>>5719277
>>5719280
>>5719282
>>5719316
And with that post; it is done. Apologies for not having original content to bring to the table though.
>>5719051
Because if they don't magically start enjoying it then you essentially just made them trans, and its a depressing ending. Especially since some of us are trans ourselves, and would never consider forcing someone else through that
>>5719331
>you essentially just made them trans
Son, they weren't figuratively turned into a girl. They are a girl now.
>>5719331
That is such a lame buzzkill.
Forcing someone to be a girl against their will is the best part. The alternation has no meaning if they get brainwashed.
>>5719337
In which case they've either been given a matching cis female compatible mind map or had one to begin with. Otherwise they're most likely going to experience gender dysphoria like an FtM would.
>>5719341
Presumably excluding the "fuck them until they ahegao and want nothing more than to be a cum dumpster for the rest of their lives" kind of brainwashing, right?
Why are TG threads always ruined so early like this, every time
>>5717883
>Gender Pirate
God damn. Can't people just change that name. It's clearly Tim Curry
>>5719361
/d/ is night time /tg/
And /tg/ loves to talk
>>5719361
because dumbases equate magical gender-changing with transgenderism
>>5719358
Nope, that is lame too.
Preferably they never give up trying to undo the effects, but never quite manage to pull it off.
Anybody have that 15-ish page hentai about the dude who gets turned into "a magical girl" by a bear robot and fucks some guys in an alley?
At least a link, please.
>>5719423
http://exhentai.org/g/435364/3905b42a7f/
>>5719337
No, he means male mind in a female body. Because he can't conceive of a situation in which his brain also undergoes the transition from male to female. And that's because he's stuck in his own narrow view of the subject and can't imagine it going differently.
The problem with this fetish is actually that there's a huge gap in mentality between the trans people who view it as a combination of fetish and wish fantasy, and the non-trans people who view it more as a form of sexual violation, more akin to a rape or TF fetish. Content tends to please only one or the other of the two groups, seldom both. But nobody has yet made the distinction between wish fulfillment TG and involuntary TG for these threads.
>>5719671
>>5718054
Gulliver's Planet.
>>5719193
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/740843/e485fcc95b/
>>5719676
Thats it! Thank you anon.
>>5719676
>Gulliver's Planet.
Where to read?
>>5720617
Ever heard of google?
>>5720620
>Gulliver's Planet.
This shitty site?
http://crossoverfanfiction7.tripod.com/Gulliver.txt
It is hopeless to find here some kind of access to the new sapphirefoxx content, right?
>>5720781
yep
as you should Support them.
>>5720857
Nah... Miss Mako does better stuff for free.
>>5719264
People ask for this comic in EVERY SINGLE THREAD.
>>5720781
Also in every single thread.
I also predict an inevitable 100 post discussion on either tg attitudes or complaining about shitty fan fics.
>>5720857
Honestly, the only good thing about Sapph is that he puts up videos on a regular basis. By themselves, the flashes are nothing special.
Plus, he came out to his family about doing this sort of stuff and they fully support him, which is a little weird.
>>5721236
You, sir, are as right as a right man can be. All the right men in the future shall praise you for your rightness
>>5720781
i think in one of the torrent threads someone got his animations. But they're honestly shit he seems to be at a point where he just stagnates.
>>5721624
That's some sick irony for you. Their internal search engine has always been several flavors of shit.
>tfw would dump SapphireFox but too poor
>>5721660
Too poor to buy them*
Sorry if I got your hopes up, one determined guy.
What're some good sites? I've mined out all I want from ex/fictionmania/tgstorytime.
>>5717492
Hey
Im looking for a pic of guy being attacked by a horde of girls and getting tged then chasing after another guy.
>>5721678
I know which one you're talking about, and I know it's by Kittyhawk. Sorry that I can't help you more.
>>5719361
I'm pretty sure Dante would actually be totally fine with this
>>5721676
Only other one I can think of is tgcomics
Also, satinminions has a few awesome comics
>>5721687
I know it's in her Quickies collection, but I don't have it on hand
>>5719269
Thank you Sir. Been searching for a few days
Wish someone would post some non free comics from tgcomics I need some new material to fap to
Body Swapping: Clasical Switcharoo between person A and person B
Body Morphing: Changing the physical appearance of someone's body, generally to match another person's. It might be your own, or it might be somebody else's
Cloning: What it says on the tin. Generally is understood to mean that person A is now a clone of themselves, not the original. May include Body Morphing
Body Part X'ing: X might mean Swap, Morph or Expand. Basically changing a part of the body (arms, genitals, hair) instead of the whole
Possession: Taking over somebody else's body, generally through ethereal means. When Person A takes over Person B's body, Person A's body is rendered unconcious until somebody else possesses it, and Person B's conciousness loses control of their body until either Person A leaves or they regain enough strenght to kick Person A out
Gender Bender: A Gender Change that usually alters reality to make it seem like the affected person has always been of the gender he/she now is
Life Swapping: Swapping how everybody else sees you as, but not the physical appearance you own. In some rare cases, this could also mean that everybody else sees your body as you see it (say, a teenage guy) but reality fixes itself so that it's obvious to anybody that you are whoever you swapped your life with (for example, a newborn girl)
Trait Swapping: To swap non-physical details like Name, Height, Weight, Age, Memories, Personality and Clothing among others.
Age Regression: Losing Age
Age Progression: Gaining Age
Body Suit'ing: Taking the skin of somebody and wearing it as a suit. Not to be confused with Body Suits, which are "clothes" sold as means to transform your appearance into somebody else's, included but not limited to famous/fictional individuals or animal/mythological creatures
Vore Takeover: Taking over the body of somebody who ate you. Generally achieved by becoming some goo-like substance or just air. May vary in graphic-ness from none to walls of text
>>5719305
>Unhand me, foul bitches!
Every fucking time
>>5719383
because alot of transpeople arent exposed to gender change until they see things like this, some of them may post feels and what not but lets not let them ruin the thread and stop us from posting more content
>>5722452
As someone with real-world experience with kink and with trans issues, I think /d/ is a terrible place for discussion or advice-seeking, because I've seen more stupid, even dangerous suggestions put forth by people with one hand at their genitals than I have anywhere else. It's not, as they call it, a 'safe space'.
You know what? That's fine! It's an image board where we post weird manga porn. It's not intended to be /soc/ or /lgbt/. As much as some of the content posted here makes me wince, that's what here is for.
(It's not the 'one of us!' comic, but it's still Kittyhawk.)
Lets add something new and make a /d/iscussion
The current running Pretty Cure franchise (HappinessCharge PreCure!) appears to have a gender bend villain.
I present you Cure Un-Lovely (aka Phantom with tits?)
Nows the question:
what is his gender in this transformation
is "she" a trap
a shemale or /d/ickgirl
or "just" a woman?
After all the Pcure series a ment to be "family friendly" i.e:
Mommy, how did this guy turn into a woman?
Mom: because magic, dear.
Next on Pretty cure: Sexchange is magic....
Also have a panda link for more Phantom/Un-Lovely pictures.
http://exhentai.org/g/740713/ff57932c0a/
also best "cure" is still "milk cure" from Matsuzawa Kei ;-p
>>5722992
Unlovely is nice but the chance of him/her appearing again is pretty small.
Speaking of gender bender girl sentai shows, Ore, Twintail ni Narimasu is airing next season. The MC is a boy who turns into a girl when he goes into fighting mode.
Anyone else looking forward to it?
>>5718546
third
>>5723004
3 is just WG, and 4 hasn't been released yet.
doe anyone have some good hentai/comics?
Also, I just get the sad panda when I try to use the ex links.
>>5724599
lurk more
http://howtoaccessexhentai.wordpress.com/2012/03/19/how-to-access-exhentai-org-2012-update/
>>5724606
i never understood why g-e has the same login as ex - and why you have to access it this complicated. Because laws or something?
>>5724876
>cont
I personally am looking for guy to woman to centauress tg/tf, as this gets me off some loads. Having to deal with the new sex AND the body of a half horse...
>>5719331
I like that. It's nice to empathize with somebody making the best of a bad situation.
>>5723155
Woud you happen to have the episodes' references?
>>5719671
You don't have to be trans to prefer wish-fulfillment tg over involuntary tg.
I love zero suit tgs
>>5725578
I want more
so anyone has a story where the guy turns female and into something not human?
Requesting the short Story of this guy who drank this potion which should turn him into a woman but instead transforms him to something inbetween
>>5725422
google the Sailor Stars
>>5726129
Can I get the one where the guy turns into a girl?
>>5725801
if you don't mind furfaggotry you can find like double or more TG fiction. the downside is you have to not mind furfaggotry.
>implying there's only two genders
>implying you need a penis or vagina to a man or woman respectively
It's threads like these that only enforce gender roles rather than transcend them
>>5726489
>believing in the concept of gender to constrain your mental identity
The body is just a shell any who assign a form of identity based on a physical body are foolish
>>5726715
>believing in individual identity
one day you will see how foolish you are, and you shall rejoin the hive
>>5719399
personally i like my TG with at least some level fo happy ending, minus the identity destruction and brainwashing.
because 90% of the time, even "happy ending TG" is just super quick transition from "oh no ive become a girl, i hate this" to 1 or 2 fucks and then "i love beign a girl dicks are awesome, hooray".
On that note, i fucking love Key To Her Heart, though i guess not necessarily as a TG comic and more of a "lul so fucking awkward to read" comic
>>5726835
I had an idea for a TG story where the guy gets transformed unwillingly (I was thinking disease or something) but keeps the same sexual preference. Starts out with a degree of detachment and angst doing things like masturbating to himself with the idea that he has a girl who will do anything he wants but not wanting to believe that girl in the mirror is him. It progresses to the point where he doesn't really want to be a girl but realizes that it's at least got some upsides (ie; lesbian sex). I was also going to do a brick joke where one of his male friends wants to fuck/grope, he tells the friend not unless he turns female, and at the end the friend comes back as a girl.
>>5724186
sauce for them then?
Anyone got any good neko tf stories? Been looking all over the place and I can't find anything that isn't god awful.
So, http://tfstories.tumblr.com submission-based-adventure comic has started up again, and Glockens is running a Patreon to get it and http://pnll.tumblr.com/ updating more often.
It's a Mystery looked promising (back in 2012) but it's still 35$ away from regular updates.
>>5725929
http://pastebin.com/8uRQMZqp
I so desperately want some more of this story to be made. Anyone have links to similar material?
>>5726855
Isn't there a route in one of the XChange games where the protag's best friend (who always wants to fuck the female version of protag) eventually becomes a girl, and they have lezbo sex?
>>5727574
IIRC he does become a gril in X-Change 3 but the MC turns back so they are just an heterosexual couple.
>>5724606
I've made an account, cleared my history, tried editing cookies after logging in to e-hentai forum, and I STILL get sad panda.
>>5728279
Just get the extension ya dingus.
http://haruhichan.com/forum/showthread.php?25188-Chrome-ExHentai-Easy-v2-Get-past-sad-panda!
http://haruhichan.com/forum/showthread.php?24909-Firefox-ExHentai-Easy-v2-Get-past-sad-panda!
>tfw trans
>Wish this could happen to me all the time so then I could live as a cis girl
>this stuff gives me an erection
Fuck everything... why can't this just happen to all us trans people? I think it's safe to say we'd be fine with it.
>>5728543
Is Xchange Alternative 2 worth it? I 'm looking for body swap games and the like.
>>5728430
cud off ur beins tranny :DDDDDDD
>>5717492
Anyone have the fictionmania story about the kid with the goth witch sister who has a wish-granting bone necklace, but the necklace makes him a 12 year old girl into Hannah Montana since it wishes things in reverse or something?
>>5727520
Same, or maybe a tomboy-ish transformation.
>>5726489
You really thought TG fetishism was any other way? Get your delusional SJW bullshit out of here. And while you're at it, read up on gender vs sex. You're arguing for semantic distinctions that already exist.
>tfw find it nearly impossible to think about sex in a male role anymore
>the idea of using my penis in sex feels almost alien and wrong
>completely fall apart in relationships because I can't be "the man" in a sexual sense
>still pretty ok with being male otherwise in day to day life aside from the occasional fantasy of living as a girl
I don't even know anymore. Not that it matters now that I'm 25.
>>5728936
are you L I T T E R A L L Y me?
seriously, i've just gotten out of a relationship because of that shit. It didn't seemed like a big deal before, but it suddenly shone in a new light after... that.
Came across a talented artist on Pixiv named ナッピー's (Nappy) He did a nice mother/son body-swap which deserves to be translated. Check it out.
Another of ナッピー's (Nappy's) art on the same story.
>>5728430
>Get bikini in the mail because postal service made a delivery mistake
>Think for just a split second it's enchanted
Fictionmania is messing with my head
>>5728996
Reality is painful sometimes.
>>5729336
It's right up to the frown. Unless that's a really shit set, it's really fucking comfortable.
I did not cry in such a situation, as really, I cannot stress how comfortable it is. Bikinis, underwear, all of it. That glorious, smooth, soft tightness surrounding and hugging one's body in all the right places.
>>5728600
I feel like you mean a little bit of this story http://fictionmania.tv/stories/magic/HeartsDesire.txt
and a pinch of this one
http://fictionmania.tv/stories/magic/mylifeasashton.txt
>>5729720
>http://fictionmania.tv/stories/magic/HeartsDesire.txt
That one. Thanks.
>>5728945
All of mine seem to end before then. The one time I did get sexually active, I turned down a blowjob because I felt wrong about it. Couldn't really explain why I didn't want it. Got dumped a week later.
>>5729336
I'll never dress up like a girl.
Real girl just popping in to say that yes, it is as awesome as you imagine it to be. Not that I have anything to compare it to, but I've found it awesome.
...okay, yeah, menstruating isn't awesome even at the best of times. Nor is losing your hymen. And menopause will probably suck. And I know plenty of people fetishize them, but pregnancy and childbirth seem like really unpleasant experiences, but fortunately they're entirely optional.
So aside from all that, it's awesome. The constant maintenance can be irritating, but worth it.
>>5730836
so being female is like owning a car, got it.
>>5718212
>http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=88
Goddamn anon, that was gold, I literally couldn't stop reading. I couldn't help but feel bad for the MC though, since he basically ends up a different person.
>>5731163
Identity death is a bitch.
>>5730898
More like bags of sand
>>5731179
No boner, now is not the time.
You'd think you would have held on a bit longer, though. At least a week before resigning himself to being a dainty little female.
>>5731179
Damn.
>>5730744
Why not?
>>5731163
>I couldn't help but feel bad for the MC though
Why? He likes his new life and would never go back to being a boy.
>>5731709
Only because the disease basically brainwashed him into enjoying it.
>>5731713
I wouldn't really call it brainwashing. The identity stayed the same, and in the end it was acceptance. He found both pros and cons to the situation.
>>5731739
Maybe I was missing the point of the Jerome/Jeri character. I thought that they just happened to be one of the ones whose brains didn't get warped to match their sex. Was it more of a lack of ability to accept his situation that the author was trying to convey?
>>5722789
Wish this artist would just do friggin' porn.
>>5717883
When was rock a girl? I've seen both seasons and Roberta's blood trail.
![1410901597010[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/dJfGFDk.png "1410901597010[1].png")
>>5729336
>>5731748
pretty much. jerome was a young black man if i recall correctly. his conflicting views on womanhood and manhood were so powerful that his psyche literally snapped.
as the author mentioned, black men are seen to be much tougher, and are expected to be that way as well.
they are supposed to be strong and in control of everything they do.
but if you flip that around that means that women are thought of as weak and somewhat mental, to put it bluntly.
for the rest of them, they didn't have these prejudices as bad. especially jack. he knew strong and independent women that helped him along.
jerome's psyche was so set on the "Ideal black male" though, that he simply couldn't cope.
admittedly, the change did alter brain chemistry some to make it easier to accept, but there was no outright brainwashing. just some light conditioning to help adjustment.
as it said in the thing, the change doesn't alter hardcoded information, such as sexual orientation.
so no, its not that he didn't accept the brainwashing, but that his own views conflicted too heavily with his new and permanent form
>>5728853
Are more of these capped old chap?
>>5732065
>the change doesn't alter hardcoded information, such as sexual orientation.
Um, yes it did. Yeah, yeah, the author tried to wave it off with symmetry - heterosexual guy becomes heterosexual girl, gay guy becomes lesbian girl - but there's no reason whatsoever it would work that way. Gender identity and sexual orientation are different areas of the brain. If anything, that alters them even *more*, ensuring that everyone gets their sense of self and their love life screwed over.
I mean, think about the extra layer of horror there - it doesn't affect the MC, but suppose the disease hit a boy who was deeply in love with a girl. Love-of-his-life-type of love. And then one day, something screws with his brain and all that love and attraction would just be... gone. No relationship survives someone catching that disease.
(Except for bisexuals.)
I honestly don't know why I dislike this story so much. By the standards of TG fiction, it is an undeniable gem of good writing. But almost everything about it rubs me the wrong way. The way people force the MC to instantly become a girly-girl instead of letting her explore femininity at her own pace. The dumbass depiction of "female power" (which, for those curious, is to give men boners and make them do things with the promise of sex. Empowerment!) The gratuitous sexual assault that is never mentioned again, leaving a sexual predator free to prey on other girls. And the way the narrative insists over and over again that there's no brainwashing when there clearly is.
I guess at the end of the day it's the wasted potential that gets to me. A good writer and a good premise somehow adding up to a disappointing story.
>>5732154
I don't give a fuck how gender identity actually works. This is a fetish about mind/body bending sexiness.
The story only matters as a means to the end of getting one off.
>>5731186
I think you mean like taking care of a cat which is your car and it's made of bags and sand.
>>5732154
I'm in the same boat as you, somehow, but maybe I can go a bit deeper. As a tranny, the sexual orientation flip is not uncommon. Quite the contrary, rather. I know plenty of straight girls who became straight guys, and vice versa. No, the thing that bothers me is the sexual role flip. Estrogen, no matter how much is pumped into you, does not make you like getting bent over a guy's knee and spanked.
More disturbing how easily many of them accepted it. No matter how much your mind decides it wants completely different things, you still have over a decade of memories of being this completely different person. You don't let go of that in a week, that's just silly. Especially the whole sexual orientation flip; I knew my orientation would change eventually, and I still freaked out when it did. It took lots of adjusting and reassuring myself that I was still me. If I suddenly got the urge to act entirely different, I would have had a meltdown.
>TG thread
>Amateur psychology. Amateur psychology everywhere
Back on topic
>>5732276
>>5732278
>>5732276
Arguably, the psychology is the best part of genderbender stufff. I love watching their awkward squirms
>>5732324
I like seeing that in actual content, not so much when a bunch of anons are talking about. I don't give a shit about their personal lives, I'm here for the porn.
>>5731163
fucking impeccable. this is great writing
did someone here write it though? The 'oy vey' halfway thru makes me think so
Matter over mind.
I'll dump some.
>>5732154
I agree with most everything you said. I was still able to enjoy it, but some things left a bad taste in my mouth. Going on a picnic and rejoicing in nature with the mother made me groan.
For a one-liner. Hope it was worth it
Kid switches bodies with his mom. Laughed.
Here's the last page. The trade was permanent, thank you god.
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/46333/4d648b138d/
Feel the privilege you cis-scum
I should stop. I want to ask if anyone has the source on this image though. It was TG. Started with some fat guy. It was a set of about 8 images, I didn't save them all at the time. Now I can't find it. Posting what I have, appreciated if anyone has the rest.
The end
>>5732493
never got this
is he shocked at how big the bra is, or is the arrow backwards?
>>5732523
Something tells me I have the whole set in my porn folder, but I don't know for sure. I'd have to install a duplicate detector to find it.
>>5732494
Source?
I like my TG with bondage and humiliation. Always having to come up with my own stories to stuff I have yet to come across more than a few artists that make anything like it :(
>>5732650
I think the context is some magical bullshit where his body changes form to fill whatever he wears or something
>>5732650
Its something like he's blackmailed into wearing it, then he ends up fitting it.
>>5732517
>OH MY GOD THE STOVE IS ON FIRE WHY HAVEN'T YOU CALLED FOR HELP
>lol fire
every time
I love TG fiction but I always have an issue with how the female is depicted/written.
It's so difficult to find something specific to what you like. I can't enjoy it when the result of TG isn't just physical but also involves adopting the social conditioning of what a women should be, since it's so often from a limited male perspective.
The focus on make up and maintenance is always the worst. A lot of girls really don't care that much, but are still perfectly physically attractive. Also, girls don't all talk about make up and "girly things" with each other. A lot of these "girly things" are so entrenched in your own way of being/social expectations that you just never mention them.
>>5732759
>I like my TF with bondage and humliation.
What the hell?! That pretty much most of TG.
I want the mtfs obsessed with realism to leave
>>5732523
10/12
>>5732524
11/12
>>5732527
12/12
1/12
>>5733135
I am really drunk so let it be known this was quite the undertaking.
>>5733136
Seriously fuck this captcha and shit.
>>5733139
4/12
>>5733141
5/12
