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Add this to the OP from here on out, it's been doing surprisingly well.
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>>6886685
Pretty much, yea. I will say that giving into getting fucked is actually kind of ok based on how women describe the feeling of being aroused. However, there is the whole discussion of mentality and sexuality, which in turn influences arousal. However, that is probably too deep for basic smut. What is not too deep is keeping the character across transformation. Wanting to try something different, like Dom to sub, is one thing, but most of the time, the characters revert to 100% super sub (ignoring the characters who were already little girls before they changed). FtM is a little different because they are almost always taking the dominant role regardless.
Age regression is an iffy subject in my opinion because the super regression is basically pedophilia. Old man to youthful man is quite different. Not my thing. Though in a way, a lot of TG is similar because it usually involves a loser who becomes a bombshell.
There's something you want that you can't find, write it.
I'm making an outline for a story I'm working on in which a guy is turned into a succubus as an apprentice to another. The main character won't have anything affect his mind, and he'll be dealing with issues like if he was into women as a guy, wouldn't it be gay to like women as a women.
>>6886802
Nobody here does commissions, to my knowledge. Try a commission thread, they pop up on /d/ and /aco/ every now and then.
>>6886905
I let the other person start on rates, and either talk them up, or talk them down depending on how good the sample is, and how long they say they can make it for the price.
>>6886905
Remove cookies, log in again.
>>6886905
I run a Discord account in one browser through the web app, I have my main account signed in through the Desktop app.
So I juggle two.
I'm planning on writing a thing about a paladin purifying a succubus, but I'm having trouble designing the succubus' personality. Any suggestions what she should be like? Some details:
>Paladin worships the god of joy, he will be purifying her via sex (think Devil Eater)
>Paladin's favorite things are fighting and fucking
>Succubus will probably be changing personality-wise as she gets purified
>I kinda want her to be a bit of a foil to the paladin, a blue oni to his red oni, if you will, but I keep flip-flopping because I'm planning on things getting romantic later on but also the paladin (a character I've had for a long time) would like a girl he could spar with.
Not based on pic related, but it's a good example of the kind of purification thing I'm talking about
>>6886803
>Age regression is an iffy subject in my opinion because the super regression is basically pedophilia. Old man to youthful man is quite different. Not my thing. Though in a way, a lot of TG is similar because it usually involves a loser who becomes a bombshell.
Yeah exactly, I love old to youthful/idealized but child or beyond is just not my thing whatsoever. That being said I would hesitate to call it pedophilia though unless it explicitly includes sex, cause most of them seem to basically be just more literal forms of age-play and breastfeeding/diaper stuff.
>There's something you want that you can't find, write it.
That's more or less been my reasoning to actually try and get into doing this as a semi-regular thing, though I've been really struggling to find the motivation/time to properly sit down and do it.
I've got a couple rough ideas for regression stuff as well as some other things like attribute theft and beautification, all things I personally enjoy but find there's a dearth of content for. Hopefully I'll get them written out fully some time soon.
>>6886933
Purification is totally my jam.
Can't wait to see what you're cooking.
>>6886933
I think you should challenge yourself and keep the succubus' personality the same. The only difference should a matter of morality. For example: If she cares about people as a demon, she probably sees them as pets. A dog is a companion that is loved, but it's still a dog. She'd get upset if someone hurt it, but she's commanding and superior in every way. After purification, she sees friends as companions with interests and lives all their own and cares about them.
Idk, something like that.
>>6886935
Attribute theft is an interesting thing for sure. The field is wide open for possibilities, and not too many people take advantage of it. Beautification is pretty common I think, but not theft. I had some ideas, too.
I'm working on motivation, too. Try what I'm doing, which is actually writing things down. Like with a pen and notebook. Make an outline, jot ideas, just write blurbs, flesh out a character. Shit like that.
Fun story, I'm waiting for my shift manager to get back because I left my notebook inside the shop. I told him I had finance stuff inside, but obviously I didn't want people to look through my random smut blurbs.
>>6886946
That goes relatively well with what I tentatively had down. Vaguely inspired by Alice of MGQ, the succubus would be mainly interested in the paladin as a form of entertainment. Occasionally telling him to be careful out there, as she'd rather not have to find a new toy, but how long until she's just /saying/ that's the reason. Eventually she might even be against him going into battle at all, he has the money to retire and settle down, after all. Which would also allow for some character development for the paladin, with him being willing to give up a life of adventure for her.
In both of our posts, her personality does change, by the way, which is part of the draw of purification. If the demon's a bitch even after becoming an angel, then what's the point?
>>6886963
Good way to guarantee he looks through your notebook.
>>6886964
Not true.
If she's a bitch as a succubus, she can be a bitch as an angel. The difference is how she's a bitch. If as a demon she's an egotistical control freak, then as an angel she'd be like an overbearing protector.
>>6886966
Not what I want at all. Besides, I have it now, so no worries there.
>>6886964
>If the demon's a bitch even after becoming an angel, then what's the point?
Demonstrate angels are just as bad (in their own way) as demons, but that's probably not the point of a smut fic.
>>6886978
which is still a personality change from evil to good. You really can't change alignment without changing personality. Pic related
>>6886982
As much as I actually do love the whole thing of heaven just being the other side wanting your soul, it's pretty much entirely against everything the God of Joy is about. The angels of other gods? Maybe, but even if this weren't a smut fic this wouldn't be about them.
Plus I'm actually not even planning on angels of any sort being in this. I was mainly using them as an example
>>6886987
A change yes, but the core character is still the same.
Accidentally made a corrupted SoB OC.
hey guys i have been looking everywhere recently for a story i read a long time ago. if anyone knows where i could find it would be amazing. its about a guy doing an experiment for college trying to give people mind reading abilities or something, with a baseball cap with a whole buck of electronics on it. he end up being able to control the mind of his volunteer assistant, and then figues out he can use it to modify her body and basically reprogram her brain. it was quitee a long story and eventaully he builds a big harem. anyone read this story?
>>6887118
That's no accident.
You up for an idea? I'm planning to write that cursed armor TG idea. Not interested in a transformation pic, that's too much of your time.
But the armor in the story can be summoned at a moment however still requires a physical tie. So I imagined it having a single nipple pierce and a navel piercing, maybe with a soft chain between the two. Some sort of elaborate designs too, since it's fancy armor.
So a nude of this guy who was transformed into an elfish woman with nipple and navel piercings maybe looking sour (or masturbating furiously) would be cool if it piques your interest.
Stream demanded a 40k harem anime pic so here.
>>6887369
I'll see if I can do it sometime. Got any armor refs you like?
>>6887413
No armor required, just nude and piercings. The armor's "unsummoned" state is the piercings.
Kinda boring now that I think of it. I'm also not 100% sure how I'd like the armor to look anyways, and if I want it to be static or if it can sort of change/evolve with a situation.
>>6887419
what was the cursed armor idea?
>>6887413
Could you do a genderflipped one? A lady Rogue Trader with a bunch of alien husbundos/servants?
>>6887413
>no insane dark eldar girl
>no air caste tau girl
>no tzeentch herald trying to plot her way to victory throught flawed plots
I'll give it a 6/10
>>6887439
That's a nice birdie!
>>6887443
You don't say.
>>6887439
That's S2 spoilers ya doof.
>>6887443
nothing like some bird butt
>>6887448
Aye
>>6887451
>tweet tweet
>>6887452
>>6887421
This is not the picture in question, but it's pretty damn close. I just took the idea and spun it into a story arc.
Minus crotchtits I like this one as well. Wish there were some stories like this. A bang 'em and leave 'em with tits and confusion.
>>6887448
God bless thoses few waifufags with nice characters that doesn't ask for the weirdest fetishes whenever they make a commission.
>>6887447
Glad to see you're still here, inker. I always liked you.
Anyway, I'm back and I did a thing. Do we still post smutty stories in these threads? I've been away too long.
She Who Wanders part VII
http://pastebin.com/SWBi8DGb
Just a bridging chapter to advance the plot so better things will come.
>>6887476
Welcome back, and we most certainly do. Good to have another of the old guard around.
>>6887490
Glad to be back. I got a legit writing job now so all my /wst/ kind of fell by the wayside.
Hopefully I'll be able to contribute more soon because I still find all this fun.
>>6887534
Didn't you want to sign up for the military, Onyx?
>>6887534
Job always gotta take precedence. But having writers around to give hope of something someday is great.
>>6887541
Yup. And I did. I'm in the reserves though, not full time. So I did my basic training and employment training, then came back and tried to get a writing job, which I now I have. I'm not sure if I want to continue with the army though. I enjoy it, but I've lost a lot of enthusiasm.
>>6887543
I'm definitely going to stick around. This place is good for encouraging me to write. I been writing a lot of original stuff with the goal of getting published eventually, but I missed just writing smut.
My job is mostly editing, so I just sit in front of a screen and fix other people's work, but it pays OK for now and it's a foot in the door of publishers, so yay for me.
>>6887479
That's something that would be pretty great, actually. I'd love to write it, though I think it would be more of a project ongoing than smut.
>>6887571
You mean slice of life more than just lewds? That's the kind of erotic fiction I like.
It could be a quest on /tg/ or akun or a multiple-session RP.
What sort of situations would you include in it?
Whole bunch of people coming back, it seems. DLFG posted 2 new quirks on 3 weeks, Smutomancer did a thing recently, Mask popped in fire a bit, Belgianon gave us a great story, and now the delightful Onyx is here too. And that's only writers, and ones I can think of odd the top of my head.
It's a good time to be /efg/
>>6887596
I'd try to make it more than just cliche "Oh look I'm a girl now guess I need to get fucked by literally every penis I see and literally every guy in who sees me is raping me, which is apparently totally cool with everyone."
If I were to write a story like that, I'd have him go through the struggles of the whole ordeal. Dealing with sexuality, arousal, loss of what he knew before, instead of being the one everyone fucks, maybe be the one who gets picked on because (s)he's really awkward as a girl, ect. I could probably merge the story I'm working on into this idea. I think it could work really well. I might just do this.
I'm trying to write a fantasy story that features a female warrior who wears pretty revealing clothing, and has a ginormous ghetto booty. Big enough that most underwear ends up looking like thongs when she wears them. I'm not quite sure how I want to write this character, since I don't know many girls i can talk to. I figure she's kind of ok with having a giant butt, since she goes on adventures and stuff, but maybe she gets embarresed if people pay too much attention to her ass. What do you guys think would be fun to do with her?
>>6887733
Team her up with an equally under-armored guy and have them become the chosen ones of lewdness and light
>>6887439
>air caste
>not earth caste
>into transformation
>99% of tagged results contain like a single line "and then her boobs totally grew half a size"
>the remaining 1% are mistifying since they contain no transformation at all
Does anyone know what the fuck TF even means
Stop tagging minor breast expansion (or even major one, goddamnit) as fucking TF
>>6887748
Thats a cool idea, but i was looking more for things like personality traits or behavior type stuff.
>>6887476
I hate to say it, but you actually mistyped the title in Pastebin.
>>6887768
>Stop tagging minor breast expansion (or even major one, goddamnit) as fucking TF
To be fair expansion IS a form of transformation, though I still get what you mean. Most sites filter really broadly across the board like that even for other fetishes and it's really terrible.
It's especially bad on EMCSA where the only tag is "growth" which encompasses a billion and one different variations and then just ends up like you said where someone goes up a cup size or gains an a quarter of an inch in cock size, as well as a bunch where it happens between scenes or doesn't even happen at all.
I don't see how the hell you would be able to do it just given how stories are distributed and posted across the web, but it'd be amazing if someone could manage to create something like VNDB or a full on wiki where people can post story names and basic summaries along with tags as specific as they want.
Then again I supposed you'd have to actually encourage people to contribute and maintain it which is pretty unlikely.
>>6887800
Svengali does a pretty good job for EMCSA. The real worst offender is Literotica. Nothing about that site is good.
>>6887756
Air castes are angels, they even live in the skies. Get your womanlets out of here.
>>6887811
AOO is also pretty terrible, since they only allow authors to tag and don't enforce any sort of consistence in tagging. Reading something you thought might be decent and then shitting dick nipples? Too fucking bad if the author doesn't want to tag that.
>>6887859
They're tall, but they're not exactly well-built. According to the fluff, they're so frail they can barely live outside of low-G conditions.
>>6887565
nice to see you again onyx.
Good to know your still writing stuff.
>>6887454
I believe this is the source of the idea.
>>6888295
You would be correct sir. Thank you for locating it.
>>6887447
Please draw the picture of that.
And more importantly, the orgy sex scenes.
Hey folks, have a story in progress here. Got inspired by a post in >>6828617.
Tags: shrinking, brain drain
Basically, 6 people are on a reality show where they all have to live together but every day one of them turns into a pet version of themselves - that is, they shrink to about 18 inches tall and lose about 75 IQ points but are otherwise unchanged.
Part 1: http://pastebin.com/NARtSdHe
Part 2: http://pastebin.com/Rg81cdC6
>>6888323
Other possible refs
>>6888583
>>6888592
Depending on how wild you want to get, there are always labia/clit options as well.
As for your earlier thought about shapeshifting armor, I think maybe limited 'role' specialization? Nothing FAST though.
>>6888583
Clamps are objectively superior.
>>6888575
Eh, while it's not my fetish it isn't too bad. Kind of a niche fetish though, so don't expect it to be overly popular.
I would like to request Sanguinius on Fulgrim smut.
Preferably with them getting drunk after a battle, letting their guards down, and then just going at it in Fulgrim's luxurious bedroom.
Since primarchs can't get drunk, this would obviously be them pretending and using it as an excuse for their hidden desire.
This talk of 40k smut makes me wonder.
Has lissera been back after the conclusion of the tau whore caste story?
>>6890326
>tau whore cast story
THE FUCKING WHAT?!
Where is this?
I must read this.
Now.
Taking any pregnancy or weight gain requests anybody might happen to ahve.
>>6890449
Neither of those fetishes are particularly popular among requesters here, so I hope you've thought of some prompts of your own.
>>6890331
Unfortunately you will have to wait till tomorrow when I run down the mountain for groceries and can access the net on my laptop and hope I can find where I saved the notepad file that has the proper links.
Or someone else posts the links.
>>6890462
Sounds like you have an interesting life, anon.
>>6890462
You sound like me every time I visit relatives in Tennessee.
Anyone know where I can find the XCOM Snek thread? I want to re-read it...
>>6890331
>>6890483
>>6890487
USFS Cryptozoological Research Recovery and Relocation unit.
currently taking a break from chasing reports of a "batsquatch" that's allegedly been harassing a ranchers horses.
anyway.
> Part I - https://archive.loveisover.me/d/thread/6069936/
> Part II - https://archive.loveisover.me/d/thread/6078110/
> Part III - https://archive.loveisover.me/d/thread/6112299/
> Part IV - https://archive.loveisover.me/d/thread/6144072/
> Part V - https://archive.loveisover.me/d/thread/6221743/
> Part VI - https://archive.loveisover.me/d/thread/6299103/
>>6891389
Many thanks, anon
>>6890682
You mean 8ch dot net /xen/res/1.html ? Or a story?
>>6890682
I have no clue what you're talking about.
A story posted semirecently on /d/ quote('6891443');
>>6892120
Methinks you messed up your quote.
>>6887632
Shamefully I forgot the one woman who did fantastic emotional pieces but also guro & shit. When her stories didn't feature anyone being disemboweled, they were touching.
Her latest series before the purge was lesbian inter species with intelligent magical beasts. Good stuff.
>>6892137
Are you thinking of Xiombarg's Storyteller?
>>6892120
It wasn't this, was it?
>>6892137
That's Xiombarg's Storyteller, no doubt,
>>6892458
Yeah, I remember when she first posted that.
I think XS runs quests or something now. You'd think this would be the perfect place for XS.
Bad idea for good lewd:
Ranma 1/2 where everyone falls into a monstergirl spring. Ranma becomes a dairy minotaur, Mousse becomes a raptor harpy, Shampoo is a catgirl, Ryoga becomes a racing centaur so he can get lost even more easily... or an orc. Not one of the big male piggy orcs, the lewd gyaru female orc.
Ranma can never stay a guy because he keeps lactating (and it forces a transformation into the seven foot tall Amazon minotaur woman). Mousse has the same problem since the Harpy generates eggs and he LIKES being able to see and fly. Shampoo doesn't give a fuck and enjoys the physical capabilities.
Ryoga can find his way around as the orc, but is obviously going to stand out as a green skinned babe in a bikini he fashioned from his bandannas.
What is wrong with me?
Maybe a dog-girl for Ryoga is better.
This is a Dairy Minotaur
This is just a minotaur
>>6890682
You mean story? http://pastebin.com/Azd4gJKB
>>6892687
I actually really like that idea.
Maybe it's just cause my knowledge of Ranma is pretty minimal but I think it might work better if it were OCs instead.
There's enough room there for interesting transformations based on the concept where it could be an anthology or something like that with a bunch of different characters.
>>6892687
I'd say go smaller scale, with a single variable changed and everyone reacting.
I have been focused on cowgirls lately though...
Not sure if this is the right place to post this or not but I write captions and been a long time poster here on /d/ I posted on here once before but it's been a couple of months. I started over six month ago now and my work has turned more and more /d/ with time. My hentai caps are set in a game (A series on my blog) but still are that special kinda weird.
Here's a link if you want to see more
https://opheliagmtg.blogspot.com/
>>6892953
Captions are kind of a gray area as far as we're concerned; generally they're better off in a caption thread. They tend to get deleted if they show up anywhere else for some reason.
>>6893010
See I was unsure. I don't usually post my work here any ways just because I don't want to come off like I'm doing it to advertise my blog but you guys seemed to be interested in the same style so I thought I'd post it, think a couple people might enjoy but I wasn't trying to break any rules honestly.
>>6893246
See that'd be easier if I wouldn't have to retype the whole caption. I know that's being lazy. I make these for a blog so I usually don't think about other place's guidelines when making them, just my own.
>>6893320
You don't have it in a document of some sort?
>>6893323
Nah I keep the ideas for captions and have every kinda image sorted for them but after they're posted I don't really keep to much extra just to cut down on things I need to keep organized. It might just be my inexperience or just being lazy but when I started I really didn't plan on it getting as popular as it is now so if I did it now. I'd have to rewrite over a hundred caps just on the off chance I need to repost the text. Bout all I keep when they're done is the original copy on my computer and a back up hard drive, along with the rest of my stuff for the blog
What happened to cuteanon? Where did his tumblr go?
>>6893423
Not sure, I've seen him on the flockmod sporadically so one has to assume he's still alive at least.
We really ought to get our people coordinated better.
![zyXYA3I[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/4ZZEgZs.jpg "zyXYA3I[1].jpg")
>>6893433
If you see him tell him we miss him and his beautiful art
>>6893442
>dem hips
truly out of this world
The latest chapter of Lock, Croc and Two Smoking Barrels is here for your reading.
Chapter 11: Croc Star
http://pastebin.com/n7wZkdNU
I hope you all enjoy it.
Just had my power go out for 5 hours and it caused me to start writing again, but I didn't get finished before the power came back on again so I'll write more before bothering to post it lol. (I'm writing a Fallout story, just finally got to a point where sex can start happening lol.)
>>6894127
Best part of Corruption of Champions
Snek life is best life
I'm toying with the idea of a girl who is either super busty or super curvy, and the guys are like really into her because of this. BUt she's kind of mechanical about her assets, hope thats the right word, like she doesn't get embarresed or feel arousal from them or something. What do you guys think? Could this be a fun idea to play around with?
>>6894149
I'm married to one. It sucks.
Try flying the opposite direction: a woman wants to achieve breast orgasm, or its one of her favorite methods for sex, but her partner is more of an ass man--or something like that.
Still hope someone does something on that self-conscious cyborg GF pitch..
>>6893515
> Odile's torso writhed rhythmically, making waves as her legs pulled tighter against his shoulders, her feet folding together. Michael would teach her the advantages presented by a tongue that was not affixed to the roof of the mouth... and blunt teeth.
Alligators don't have their tongue tied to their pallet. That's only crocodiles.
>>6894149
You mean, like real life?
>>6894149
That's the opposite of sexy.
>>6893442
I'm here to say you're not missing a great deal, anyway.
>>6893423
I miss Protein.
>>6894736
Protein's still around, she occasionally posts links to her stuff in the Discord.
>>6894736
>>6894745
hi! here's some recent work!
>>6894775
Isn't she the DA serf?
>>6894775
moar
>>6894777
that's eclair on the right, yes!
>>6894783
i am trying, i really am
>>6894788
You better be, we haven't got any serf cuteness since months ! Months ! That's unacceptable.
>>6887413
>Stream demanded a 40k harem anime pic so here
Now someone make a story
>>6895048
White Scar isn't interested in fluffy tail.
>>6887118
You have a website you post all your stuff on? Google isn't giving me anything.
does anyone here know of/are willing to write any non-vanilla mutual first time stuff?
like, vanilla isn't hard to find, but there's nothing I can get my hands on for stuff like interspecies or monstergirl or /gfd/ or even futa in mutual first time stuff, and it's a damn shame
[spoiler]there's also one thing that i'd also like to see, just for the sake of it's existing, and that's mutual first time consenticles. like, a girl seeks out a tentacle monster cause she wants it for her first time, only to find out that the one she found hasn't ever had it, either. anyways, I'm drunk and nostalgic and rambling, so feel free to respond or ignore, no matter[/spoiler]
>>6895255
>her lusty panting is too loud
>these tails are too warm
>I could be riding bikes right now
>>6894520
Not to ruin the joke, but... she's a crocodile. Thus all the 'croc' puns in the titles. That's also why, at the end of the latest chapter, he's outraged to hear them call her an 'alligator.'
On the other hand, I didn't know that alligator's didn't have that, so thank you for that and thank you for reading.
If there are any drawfags lurking, could I request a picture of the new Alarielle getting fucked by her giant beetle mount?
smgdh @ the lack of ratmans
>>6892735
sauce?
>>6895887
Monster Musume no Iru Nichijou
>>6895808
You haven't seen Skavanon's work, have you? Ratmen are literally all he ever does.
>>6888575
part 3 http://pastebin.com/Qa3jj91z
>>6895911
He does it very well, though. Nothing wrong with having a niche.
>>6895345
Are you looking for smut or h-manga, because I could dump a bunch of links to monstergirl first time manga. Otherwise, you're probably best served by looking for stuff in the smut index.
>>6895911
Somehow, I hadn't. Thanks bud.
>>6895725
I know I'm going to regret asking this, but how do beetles even mate?
>>6896048
>>6896048
Male mounts the female "doggystyle" either on the ground or in flight.
Amusingly enough, it can last for up to an hour with some species. I hope that elf lass has some endurance!
>>6896080
A better question is "why does this keep turning into /an/?"
>>6896093
People like pseudo-bestiality with intelligent animals?
>>6896080
They're pretty crazy looking things. Giger himself couldn't have come up with some of the gnarlier beetle dongs out there. Google around a bit, you'll see what I mean.
I'd like to ask for something with a regular girl buying a special bodice/corset to wear. After she gets dressed in the rest of her clothes she notices it feels loose and goes to tighten the corset and each time it shrinks her waist and makes her breasts, ass, hips and thighs plumpen up.
The more she does it the better it feels and she starts transforming into a pointy eared demon. She keeps doing it until her figure is a ridiculous hourglass shape, possibly continuing until her waist literally vanishes and her upper half is floating above her lower half with magic in between. Maybe even go a step further with a collar doing something similar to her neck.
I dunno if I should ask here or in the hypno general, but here goes.
Anyone have a link to that mind control story where this bossy ghetto bitch turns a little asian chick into her slave with the pheromones from her armpit sweat?
>>6896197
I think I know the story you're talking about, I read through it on EMCSA like a year or two ago. Unless of course there's another story that's identical.
I'll see if I can track it down. Stuff gets purged from the site at random though so it's possible it got removed at some point.
That thing went some really weird places too if I'm remembering right.
>>6895345
This is pretty much right down my ally as a writer. I'm going to finish up my current story this week, then I'll give this a shot (the tentacle one, that is). Anything in particular you would like to see, other than what was in the prompt?
>>6895887
>>6896564
Cathyl is so terribly wasted as a minor character.
Where/what are the best stories that feature traps? Either as protagonist or a significant element.
>>6896592
Have you looked through the list? We have it there for a reason, you know.
Look in the list, THEN ask. Is that so hard to understand?
>>6896629
I looked through the list famalam, I figured this was the place to ask about erotic fiction in general; ie what stories and authors are out there 'in the wild' too.
>>6896592
The Lythra stories by Monster are fun.
>>6896564
God dammit, now I'm wondering about sheep girl economics.
>>6896665
I think so too.
Also, bumping.
Reposting my stuff:
Snek (finished):
http://pastebin.com/Azd4gJKB
>monstergirl, femdom, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, vaginal, language barrier, bathing, teasing, kissing
Crashland (ongoing):
http://pastebin.com/Tixj5R9C
>monstergirl, size difference, large breasts, muscle, multiple arms, sweat, light femdom
Working on more.
>>6898140
If a hundred trolls can edit and delete shit on it, you can too, anon. Go for it.
dragon cuntboy story still going or nah?
>>6898295
Seems like the fad ran its course.I guess it was bound to get old eventually.
>>6898133
I approve, but needs more snek.
>>6898394
If it's any consolation, getting a dcbk sequence commish from BlackShirtBoy soon...
>>6898396
Well it's not helping I'm dividing time between my other hobbies.
Between building a tabletop army and getting used to work again a lot of my creative juices are getting tapped. I'm still committed to one big chapter a month, but it might be July now.
>>6898387
>somebody actually likes Crashland
I will redouble my efforts.
>>6898133
>>6898479
for the record, i also like these stories.
Another catastrophic failure on the weaving byroad to success:
http://pastebin.com/2ZeNHxs7
Tags: hetero, monster girls, tentacle girls, sex ed, kidnapping, that's it mostly, rape I guess, modern-sorta setting, who even cares, I certainly didn't
>>6899572
FIrst of all, I'll give this a read later. More importantly, you really have to watch your presentation. Who the hell is going to read something if the author says it's shit? It's only by chance (and boredom) that I opened that link and recognized your name and thought that I might be interested in reading it. I'm not saying that you should swagger around, but cut the self-depricating shit back a bit.
>>6899590
Agreed. Have some pride in your work, otherwise you may as well never share it at all.
based on the towergirls' jester princess I wrote weird smut involving TF into a doll with mind control/hive mentality themes. cross posting to a few threads. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iiPLvZlnngmMX_4N2wSSxOcaRlCSawxnrvmlqzMWKqA/edit
>>6899665
>TF into a doll
44 years later and The Dummy is still creepy as fuck. I want no part of this.
>>6899703
>sex
Less than 200 words in the sex scene. Not tag-worthy.
is anyone else having problems with the captcha?
>>6899665
It at least an animate doll?
So many doll TFs being BAD ENDor full immobility. Kinda sad desu.
>TFW Dolljoints fetish but no good stories.
anyone got good petrification stories?
Like, say some female warrior attempts to take out a sorcerer, only to fall into his trap and become immobilized in some fashion. She is still cognizant of her plight, though. She's brought to his lair as a decoration and occasionally brought out of the suspended animation for his personal desires.
>>6898405
Perhaps this might produce ideas...
Damn, BSB is fast.
>>6900723
Kinda. She's still moving, at least.
>>6900965
What's up with the vulva being so huge?
>>6901033
Made for egglaying
Also, trying to determine whether red or yellow eyes are better. Any opinions?
>>6901046
yellow
>>6901046
Those eggs don't look any bigger than a baby's head.
>>6894775
Excuse me if this is untoward, but did you previously play a Pangolin Lunar named Ayda? Your style seems familiar.
>>6900723
>TFW Dolljoints fetish but no good stories
You mean things like being turned into a human-sized doll but still being/regaining mobility? Because if so, how do you feel about someone TFed into a living doll afterward buying fancy frilly dresses for themselves because their parents never bought them dolls as a kid and they missed out on playing dress-up with them?
Requesting something about a planet where people's dicks are the perfect length and shape to hit their prostate. It nevers comes up because no one can fit their whole hard dick inside themselves. Eventually portal sex toys are invented and someone mindbreaks themselves fucking their own ass.
>>6899572
So why the hell did you post this for a day, then delete it?
>>6901163
Yea. And I think I can get behind that story idea.
>>6901214
Fixing it. Will reupload when ready.
>>6901386
Ah. Excuse me for jumping to conclusions. I've seen so many of the /mgt/ guys just delete shit that I assume that any time something disappears, the writer went on a deleting binge.
>>6901479
/mgt/?
>>6901496
Monster Girls thread?
>>6901615
I'm guessing so.
From what I've heard, the old monstergirl threads on /jp/ are in the peculiar situation of demanding new writefags and OC creators only to drive them off for failing to meet impossible or contradictory expectations almost as soon as they're welcomed in.
>>6901673
>the old monstergirl threads
They still do this. It's an ongoing problem. The writefags who are there are only there in spite of efforts to drive them off.
>>6901675
One wonders what kind of force would make people so bitterly opposed to original content in any form.
>>6901678
Waifufaggotry.
>>6901679
That makes no sense.
Or do they really want nothing more than personality-free moeblobs they can't even fap to without feeling guilty about it?
>>6901686
They want it exactly how it is in their head and anything else is shit.
>>6901687
Which begs the question: why can't they just do it themselves? Even our most demanding of requesters don't ask that every single detail is an absolutely perfect match for what they had in mind.
>>6901695
They're lazy and/or shit at writing. They're all meme-spouting autists. What do you expect?
>>6901705
...excellent point.
Let's hope none of us reaches that level of faggotry.
>>6898479
>Crashland
Be waiting for update while breathing heavily since i started reading it a couple weeks ago.
Kind of a weird question, but would you classify slime possession/absorption as vore along with those tags and any others?
For example a caption story I saw a while ago basically involved a slime guy going inside of a woman and being absorbed by her so her tits and ass/hips filled out more, and then the slime took control of the body/mind.
The actual act of the slime being 'eaten' wasn't really sexualized or focused on which personally I think is the where it becomes vore or not, but I'm not really sure.
Was thinking about doing a longer form thing with a similar concept to that caption and it had me thinking.
>>6899572
>yfw be a teaching prop for monstergirls
>>6902009
If it was the some absorbing the person I'd generally tag it as vore. Absorption tag would work either way.
>>6886747
Hello friends, Neko here again. I've been working on this recently but I've gotten some writers block and it's at a decent stopping point so I think you'd like it.
http://pastebin.com/KKFURj5s
Alchemy Class 2: EXTRA STAGE
A Touhou Project Fanfiction featuring Marisa Kirisame / Alice Margatroid
Tags: Yuri, Bondage, Sub/Dom, Petplay, Drugs, Hypnosis
I still need go through it and mend the thing where the tense swings between past and present, so don't mind that too much.
pic related
>>6902312
So does part 1 got the Hypnosis and stuff in it or not?
>>6902312
Damn that ending paid off. You think of going to make more?
>>6902316
Well what I've wrote essentially already has it, though it might not be your definition? It's more 'mental programming' then your typical 'swing a coin and fall asleep'
>>6902416
There's a lot more hashed out but I just haven't been able to get into a mood to write more. It's just one thing atop a pile of writing projects. Hopefully soon though.
>>6902312
You really need to get yourself a pastebin and use it. If you're going to be a regular contributor, much less one that writes a series, you're going to want to collect all of your stuff in an easy-to-find repository.
http://pastebin.com/pmgi1iHD
Finished this earlier today. Let me know if it's shit and in general just yell at me.
>>6903025
Tags, please. No tags, no reading. It's just common courtesy.
>>6903103
There are tags.
>>6903103
>FxWerewolf, voyeurism/exhibitionism, size difference, oral, vaginal, dubious consent
>>6903176
Hnnnng that sounds like all of my things. Definitely going to give this a looksie
Tree of Savior
>>6903025
It's actually pretty nice. The only suggestion I have is to stop rushing so much. The beginning felt like you just slapped it in because you didn't know how else to start the story. Remember that smut isn't just about sex. A woman being abducted and tied in the middle of the night can be extremely sexual.
You make good use of detail and description during sex, but you could do well to expand it in general. It's a great start, but I generally find that smut has to be a certain length before it's really enjoyable. Like I said, part of this can come from starting well before you get to the sex itself.
>>6904156
Thanks friend. You're mostly right about the pacing, I'll consider that for the future. I generally have a better idea of what the actual sex is, rather than how to get to it, but one of my greatest fears is having the preamble drag on for way too long that it actually turns off readers before they even get to the lewd parts.
>>6886747
Hey, /efg/? Can I get some opinions on an outline of a story I'm writing?
Here it is: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N9bAhvhe8Qo40drOUGFkgbG2AaIc7KXk8Fjlog-Cfqc/
>Basic pitch is American werewolf bites a kpop idol on accident while trying to protect her band from a stalker
Before you ask, yes I did try /tg/; the general consensus was a mix between "it's alright" to "REEEE FURSHIT GET IT OFF MY BOARD"
I'm asking here because all the writefags seem to be here and not there.
>>6904604
Again, you don't necessarily need to worry about the introduction if you either make it a good story or if you make it smutty. You had a woman being adbucted in the dead of night. That has a whole lot of potential for non-sex smuttiness. The guards can molest her a bit, taking advantage of her helplessness and the lack of supervision. Maybe she just has a thing for ropes. Either way, you can use smut to set up the actual sex. There's no requirement that says that exposition has to be unsexy.
>>6904685
I've never tried to give feedback on an outline before. We don't get that many around here, usually just WiPs. I have to admit, it's a pretty creative idea. I'm also all for kpop idols being attacked and then viciously mated by werewolves. They deserve it.
I'm not sure what the sister is there for, as far as the story goes. The story would be pretty much exactly the same if he bites her, then panics and runs off with her into the woods and tries to piece things together from there. The grandmother is also unnecessary. You don't need to justify the entire background to the story. People go to other countries all the time, for any number of reasons. it's enough for him to simply be in Korea and figure that he should check out at least one concert while he's there.
>>6904005
Those ears make it look like a rat.
>>6904685
>werewolves
>furshit
Ignore the newfags. Werewolves are as /tg/ as it gets.
Alright I'm gonna crank one out, let's see if I can do a couple of thousand words in the next hour or so.
>>6899703
Chapter 13: Croc-in' Pneumonia and the Boogie-Woogie Flu
http://pastebin.com/n7wZkdNU
tags: loneliness, Florida, no sex
So, given an apparent severe lack of porn other than like two images, has there been any stories of the XCOM2 Viper King?
>>6904975
Jesus. I consider it an accomplishment if I can get fifty words out in an hour.
>>6905083
I'm on 1146, when I make it past 2000 I'll post an updated pastebin.
>>6901132
Yup.
>>6905068
What was the other one?
Wew lad.
http://pastebin.com/pdabymVK
As promised, another 2000 words and a full sex scene, it's a little late here so excuse any minor errors.
>monstergirl, size difference, large breasts, muscle, multiple arms, sweat, light femdom, oral (male), oral (female), kissing, female ejaculation
>>6893995
I have been writing on and off for over a week as I get time, I keep coming up with ideas and having to fix things to fit the ideas in or come up with things that happen next because basically I am running without an outline on this thing. Once I get it set up the way I want it I will just update the pastebin post I already have up.
>>6905266
Can you update pastebins?
I keep posting a new one each time.
>>6905266
Oh total is 3300 words so far
>>6905268
you can if you make an account
>>6905268
Yup You can it is kind of a pain in the ass figuring out how, but you can
>>6905273
Oh cool, maybe I'll do that, thanks for the info.
I'd really love to post and share erotic fiction or comics featuring monstergirl characters that fit in with various fetishes, like multi boobs or futa characters. How do most people start out doing this? And how do you get past the embaressment shame part of this. I'd love to write stories, but a part of me thinks thats no one will like the work, even though I know there are people out there who will ike this stuff. Silly self doubts i guess.
>>6905695
There's nothing to be embarrassed about. People have been writing smut for centuries. You just have to start. Even if you suck, someone will help you figure out how to fix it. There's basically no reason not to give it a shot.
>>6905711
Cool, thanks for the encouragement, I'm starting to feel a bit better now, now to figure how to write good sex scenes with multi cocked characters. Maybe orgy's or some kind or girls with multiple pussies.
