Previous Adventure: >>82366065
Past Threads: http://pastebin.com/UprS7B3X
MAIN TOPIC: Part 5 Development, finishing the last aspects of Part 4
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(ALSO, try not to suggest 1:1 copies of characters and events in JJBA)
>Canon Stand Info for the Ignorant and Forgetful
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/Stand
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Stands
>Plot summaries and character list
http://pastebin.com/vbD28iMx (this is out of date, fix it)
>Abilities and Stands
http://pastebin.com/vYTvZPFP
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QycIbBT6L7Ny5elmmnhI4OdQYk-yJ-mGJC6TrdwBii8
>Every part, in order
1 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IdBYK9zXpJrDc4vAIHnRLmZpPiKyxiIkj25oOTaaeF0
2 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KA0-Y_HnU_m6V5pwZ7fEtqGMnwm43NrshzANTcCxr34
3 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hDbP7BA0XBP3_3GW0uphroYjQdcW1EW5b37w-r_lsaI
4 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zn-D4aD-cBBfpBtfTLmVM_D9C1cGPYgDYRl_CCGbnsw
5 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UNm7KLXgWF0LMxCCq3VZ3O_VJ8vEqj7d22RjnDqVIEg/edit?usp=sharing
6 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l9034tpMm4EdF1NGzisA2bCXBDvUbx_vTR69hXjp_iY/edit?usp=sharing
7 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SDhmnLrv5dtVAZx2ewx1JKTsZVoXkE8LRw-8rK2gyhQ/edit?usp=sharing
8 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/10wx78PDHPNMygoTbFvihjTjPF-DwP1Ced8XKT3YNzUQ/edit?usp=sharing
>Phantom Scare: Chapter 1
http://pastebin.com/bsmui6f7
>Images
http://ccba.booru.org/
>Fighting Game
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B0lqXHlZXEFTaFppZV96ejU5b2s&usp=sharing
>Voice Impressions
http://pastebin.com/DcZUTVx1
>/Co/Co/ playlist:「THE SHOW MUST GO ON」
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLLWEiXuZ9FOaYfU_0hIoo6qadB1yEO_Km
so who wins the contest of part 4?
So, how was the Telephone Avatar created?
Was it an experiement with the jawbreakers, resulting in an unspeakable horror?
Is it a stand that broke off of it's user after their death?
Is it just some kind of strange monster with stand like qualities?
>>82508376
Mr. Krabs.
>>82508401
Red Guy threw a jawbreaker down a hell pit and it crawled out.
>>82508401
The two suggestions I've seen are:
1. The Red Guy threw a jawbreaker into a hell pit even he wouldn't go into and Telephone Avatar is what crawled out
2. It's the stand of Alexander Graham Bell that's been stuck in the phone lines until the Red Guy gave it purpose
Personally I like the hell pit suggestion better.
>>82508481
You're still turning me off to Mr. Krabs by pushing him as the winner of the bet he was never a part of or even aware of.
If you just want a scene with him at the end in a wheelbarrow full of money with the CoCo realizing none of them made much thanks to the LHC, than that would be fine.
>>82508217
>"Goodbye, Molly's Gamble - The Autistic Heart"
looking at the docs, did we scrapped Pinky Suavo's role as one of the celebrities that sold their souls to the WB? And what about the Brain thing from Billy and Mandy?
>>82508376
I am pretty sure they just called it a draw after all the bizarre shit they went through
>>82508528
Alright fine.the Eds win due to standard cartoon laws "youngest, inexperienced kids win all the time". I mean, they kinda deserve it for being put down so often. They still loose it all to Krabs, but get the Hills in exchange.
Also, forgot to mention in the OP:
Stand Suggestions are once again open. Part 5 is going to feature a bit more focus on team and combo battles so working around that concept is appreciated but not necessarily required. Also, be sure to take a glance at the Docs to make sure the character/Stand concept isn't already in use.
>>82508584
Doc 5 doesn't have everything from the threads, it was never meticulously updated with the new ideas.
>>82508634
Could be they start up the competition again at the end, I doubt the month is over yet.
>>82508778
We need a stand user to get possessed by Wooya, the rest of the fireside girls, a fifth member of the Heylin, and stands for all of them.
>>82508919
the fifth monkey was either Bananas B from Jake Long or Bobo from Generator Rex
>>82508919
There were a lot of suggestions for the Fireside Girls members a couple threads ago, no stand suggestions for any of them aside from Fang though.
Also I think we need a couple more Gangrene Gang members.
While we're at it, anyone think we should get back to basics with at least the celebrity talent characters needing that flashy aesthetic?
>>82509014
I'd also suggest Baboon from Skunk Fu too, but I'm worried it complicates things further.
>>82509071
I think it was decided to keep the gang members down to five? Maybe 6? It's supposed to be the same as the Rangers or around there.
>>82508584
>one chapter in Part 4 called "New Kids on the Block"
Since you guys are organizing the villains from Part 5 already, who are the characters that made to the cut for the villains' side?
Besides Patrick, Red Guy, Telephone Avatar and HIM, I remember those guys being brought up a lot:
Bill Cipher
Dr. Facilier
Jan Mouse
Gideon Graves
Wooya
Max/Powerline
I remember Candlejack and Pinky were mentioned once too, but I don't know if they are still in or were cut off.
>>82509293
Pinky was on that list, the doc just wasn't updated. We're also waiting for a couple of threads of brainstorm to see if any ideas jump out at us for additions.
>>82509293
Bill and Gideon are part of Plucky's mind battles. Facilier and Wooya are handlers of their gangs, and Jan and Max/powerline are part of the celebrities arc. There is also Mortos der Soulstealer who acts as a money lender/debt collector for the WB.
For the fighting game. should Edd and Eddy be strikers for Ed, or should the three use a mix between Pokemon trainer and the foreground/background mechanic from Fatal Fury ?
>>82509293
Jan Mouse, Jem, Sunny Bridges, and Max/Powerline could all be part of a celebrity group that's fought either as a group or separately.
>>82509480
Another anon suggested Lil' D as a replacement for Sunny. I dunno about it though.
>>82509465
I honestly don't see what Eddy could do on his own combat-wise in a Pokemon Trainer type scenario, unless we gave him combat options beyond his stand like the El Mondo Stink Bomb or something.
>>82509558
I think Eddy should constantly be in the backround, and you switch between Edd and Edd. Eddy's moves are the one constant between Edd and Ed, with him using Money For Nothing to charm bystranders into setting traps from the backround.
Been working on this one for a bit.
Stand Master: Morocco Mole
Stand Name: 「82-99」
Stand Appearance: A large number of mechanical hornet-like creatures with reflective octagons for heads
Ability: 「82-99」 is a Swarm-Type Stand made up of roughly 80-100 bodies capable of absorbing and redirecting the 「VISIBLE LIGHT」 which sight is based upon. When the swarm absorbs an object's light, the source is rendered invisible and a 「REFLECTION」 of the taken light is created, with only the original bearing a shadow or physical stimuli. If the decoy is touched or struck by anything other than the original source, the gathered light explodes forth carrying a force equivalent to the source's mass. Should a source be too large to properly absorb, 「82-99」 will only take lines of light from the target and bears the ability to fire them manually in a barrage-style attack.
Plot Usage: A member of Interpol's newly formed Stand investigation unit, created after the deaths of Danny and Gadget and the discovery of the LHC.
>>82506535
>Right, gotta find that bit where he slowly becomes one with the town.
Found it.
>Following the events of Fred’s death and Penny’s subsequent report, Interpol permanently reassigns Danny to watch out for the people of Molly’s Gamble. Having since become one with the entire town, he now acts as a silent guardian and is happy with his place in the world, seen performing small acts of kindness around Molly’s Gamble – holding a red light/crosswalk light for an extended period while an elderly woman crosses the street with her groceries, rustling the leaves of a tree to free a boy’s tangled kite, and opening a fire hydrant for a group of kids to play in the water on a hot day. At this last scene, we catch a glimpse of Danny reflected in a nearby window smiling.
It was implied that the kids in the last part could be the Recess kids too, but I don't know if that would interfere with the Fosters thing now.
Couldn't quite get the proportions right
>>82510192
I already added it to the part 4 doc.
Added a bunch of stuff from last thread to it too while I was at it.
There's at least SOMETHING for every fight now in it with exception to Scooge VS Father.
So now part 4 is mostly down to embellish, embellish, embellish now.
>>82510192
It might be the other kids who appeared in the arc (Billy, Gumball, the PPG).
>>82510284
I could swear there was a revised Scrooge vs Father fight in the same thread Scrooge's Stand was revised. I'm gonna take a look in the thread archive
Seeing as how we're now starting to shift to part 5, I wanted to talk about the Strays, but there's no posts of them anywhere in the docs. What's up with that?
>>82510406
Wait, really?
>>82510431
Yeah. No trace of it anywhere.
Might as well type this one out properly
「PSYCHO MAINTENANCE」
Appearance: Army soldier-like android (think Bad Company, except normal-sized) with a shotgun in place of its right forearm. In other words pic related.
Ability: When an object/person is shot, it takes no physical damage but is "marked" with a symbol (think paint guns) which is visible to stand users. Up to 5 targets can be marked at a time.
When a marked target is injured, the pain will be shared amongst all marked targets. This pain maninfests as some sort of phantom pain (similar to those felt by amputees), but the other targets will not be physically injured.
While the pain is shared equally between targets by default, this can be controlled by the user, to the point that it is possible to redirect all of the pain being shared to one single target.
>>82510357
Ok, I think I found it. Funnily enough, it was the same thread where the demon conspiracy plot first appeared. Should I screencap it or repost it here?
Heres's the thread anyway: https://desustorage.org/co/thread/81617479/
>>82509293
>>82509480
The celebrities fight them one by one.
Not everything has to be a group battle.
Also
>>82507640
The Part V starts with Taffy talking to Tom in the Cafe. Taffy's stand manifests and he's left to deaal with the bizarre twist his life has taken.
After all, he had come to the meeting with a gun expecting Tom to admit he had killed Jerry in a crime of passion or something.
Finally
>>82509293
Xavier the Renegade Angel is involved with Red Guy and spills the beans to Toph when she kicks his ass.
This marks her for death and is the reason the assassins come.
Which reminds me
>>82509293
Thief from Thief and the Cobbler is in the assassin group we didnt flesh out.
These guys end up killing Toph.
>>82510899
This reminds me. Did anyone save the Xavier dialogue with Toph?
Some anon wrote it two threads ago.
>>82510637
Repost time, I guess.
>「Fancy Footwork」(Chromeo)
>User:Dongwa Miao
>Appearance: A pair of mismatched and gaudy socks on Dongwa's hindlegs.
>Ability:
>「Fancy Footwork」 allows Dongwa to either control someone's leg if kicked with the left sock, or to cripple their leg if kicked with the right.
>「Fancy Footwork」 is a bit oversized, however, and does not stay on his legs without effort.
>「Stayin' Alive」
>User:Sagwa Miao
>Appearance: A tiger made of scrolls spouting out of an inkwell floating above Sagwa's tail.
>Ability:
>「Stayin' Alive」can put ink blots on pieces of paper, which allow anyone marked by the Stand to move randomly between pieces of paper while maintaining their velocity.
>「Stayin' Alive」 may mark someone only with their consent, preventing Sagwa from using it offensively.
>The blots will remain viable for movement until the paper is destroyed, or unless the ink is removed from the paper.
>「Chess」(Weezer)
>User:Corneil(Corneil & Bernie)
>Appearance: A golem in the shape of Bernie, adorned in chess tiles with various pieces adorning its body.
>Ability:
>「Chess」 allows Corneil to force an opponent it has hit to move in a direction based off of the chess piece he calls out.
>The chess pieces have a cooldown of ten seconds across them all, and the movement restriction lasts for around four seconds.
>「Chess」 also functions as a serviceable punchghost.
>「Jump」(Van Halen)
>User:Michigan J. Frog(Merrie Melodies)
>Appearance: A small metal box adorned with a top hat, with cloth-like legs sprouting from the four bottom corners.
>Ability:
>「Jump」 hypnotizes anyone that touches it to act like a frog for as long as Michigan can see them.
>While hypnotized, 「Jump」 does Michigan's trademark dance on the victim while the Michigan Rag plays from within it.
>This ability only affects one target, and anyone under the effect will not be able to remember being hit by the Stand, nor any time under its control.
>>82510916
I'll try to find it really quickly.
>>82511063
>The Michigan Rag is now referenced.
Nice.
>>82509546
Lil'D would work since he's the guy who got suckered into selling his soul, unlike Sunny who knows what he's getting into.
>>82510916
Found it.
>Toph beats Xavier in the Stand battle. Goes fucking brutal on him. He's supposed to be dead.
>He gets up, and says, "Well done, young blind girl. You have bested the spirit guru in the battle of spirits. But you are still blind. And I don't just mean that your eyes are useless, you are also stupid. You don't know what's really going on."
Toph goes from surprised that the thing didnt die. To confused. To angered. To confused again. "What?"
"The Stand User, has become the Used stander. The Stand Master is now a Stand Slave. All because of the red guy with the big buttocks."
Toph prepares her Stand for another round. "I either hit you too hard, or not hard enough, Start making sense you snake-handed freak!"
"Can't you see? The blindness in your eyes has blinded your brain! There is more going on than mere gang battles!"
"So you're saying that there's someone behind all of this?"
"Woah! You didn't hear this from me! Why did you jump to conclusions? Now you are marked for DEATH (echoes of the word "death")"
"What?"
"I must be off. If I want to avoid the pox of your presence, the taboo of your existence. The blindness of your eyes."
(Flute from Xavier Show begins)
"And so this guardian angel has completed another task (task...). Will the day be saved by the blind little stupid girl and her friend? Who knows? All I know is that there's a red man standing in my way.."
To be continued flashes as we see Xavier heading towards a being on a road. We see a view from behind, only making out a leg and a butt that stand on the road.
>>82511106
I saw that people wanted it referenced more than just the top hat, so I went ahead and made the change. At least it wasn't as major as Sagwa.
>>82510246
Bravo, Mr.Anon you did quite well. You even went ahead and did the cross hatch shading as well fantastic. Keep It up
>Character: Fifi le Fume
>Stand: 「SHEMPI」
>Appearance: A series of fungus-like markings winding about the user's body
>Ability: 「SHEMPI」 allows the user to assume complete control of their body's chemical production and secretion of such chemicals so long as they are aware of which compounds to create including hormones, pheromones, acids, and so forth even leading up to toxins and hallucinogens. By itself, the Stand carries no offensive or defensive power but in theory allows the user to freely augment themselves.
Can't exactly have Tiny Toons referenced without bringing her in somehow.
>>82510811
Gotta add this to the doc.
>>82511175
Gotta figure out where in the part 5 doc to paste this.
>>82511743
All right, part 1.
>>82511836
and part 2
Stand User: Dan Backslide
Stand Name: [ROUNDABOUT]*
Appearance: An antique runabout, purple in color, with gold accents.
Abilities:
When active, [ROUNDABOUT] will cause intense misfortune to those within a range of 25m, excluding the stand user. When one leaves [ROUNDABOUT]'s range of effect, the misfortune will cease. However, If one lingers in the presence of [ROUNDABOUT] for too long (Any time greater than 2 hours), this misfortune will persist for the amount of time they stayed within the range of [ROUNDABOUT]. This misfortune is so severe it can cause situations that can be considered near impossible to occur with alarming frequency. (Example: Getting struck by a large animal soaring through the air.)
*(A Roundabout? I'll steal it! No one will ever know!)
>>82512000
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jqQAkAy4Voc
>>82511836
I just followed the link and copypasted.
The only thing left in part 4 I have an issue with is how, of all the people who head to the Hills, do J&SB make it back to Foster's before the Conmen Coalition?
It seems like someone was trying to set it up so ALL the major LHC fights happen in the same building, but given the amount of collateral damage happening, that doesn't seem feasible.
Cruella could be in the Billionaires Club building and so J&SB stay to fight her while the CoCo head up to the Hills. There, Ratigan needs to somehow separate them and force them into their match-ups before he makes his getaway.
>>82512000
A reverse of Pollo Loco's Stand? Could meld very well into part 7, but I don't know about having it named after *the* JoJo song.
>>82512100
The pun is too good to pass up!
>>82512000
Damn, Backslide confirmed.
>>82512000
Didn't he already have a stand? Wrrrryd the docs.
>>82512254
He steal the Roooundabout, the words will maaake you out n' out!
>>82512291
His present stand is actually sort of boring, to be honest. Very much so.
>>82512063
In the last thread it was suggested that Ratigan could impersonate other people to lure each CoCo into a different fight. For example: disguising himself as the recently deceased Gloomgold to lure Scrooge, who would believe that his nemesis somehow survived the previous encounter.
>>82512355
Could you post it? I can't seem to find it.
>>82512291
His current stand, [HARD DAY'S NIGHT] is pretty lame.
>>82512358
I didn't see that suggestion, but it works.
He impersonates Glomgold to lure Scrooge away.
Kevin to lure the Eds away.
But then who does he change into to lure Stan somewhere? His family never made an appearance in part 4.
>>82512381
His current stand, [HARD DAY'S NIGHT] is just a humanoid covered in locks that lets him steal things without someone knowing.
It's not bad, but I think it could be better. And [ROUNDABOUT] certainly is more interesting.
>>82512429
Ford appears in Part 5. Briefly.
>>82508217
>http://pastebin.com/DcZUTVx1
Don't forget to update the vocaroo pastebin with that Metalocalypse one.
>>82512479
It doesn't let him steal something without knopwing, the original user forgets they ever owned what he stole.
>>82512620
Still. It seems like it could be better.
>>82512000
>>82512302
>>82512479
FFS it's called a runabout, RUNabout, as in an old car.
>>82512000
I could see him as a reoccurring villain. He'd never be able to finish a fight due to always being interrupted. The first fight would be in Moe's Tavern, where Moe'd use Run For The Hills to break up the fight.
The first fight would take
>"DARN THOSE URBAN RANGERS, THEY DRIVE ME TO DRINK!"
>>82512568
Yes, but that's still part 5.
Ratigan knows of no one's appearance to use which will gain Stan's attention.
>>82513080
Maybe someone publicly recognizable? Or Dipper? (Assuming he exists in this part)
Just wondering, does Wuya and some of the others get off scot-free or will she get retribution later on?
>>82513165
Or Mabel.
>>82513165
Like I said, none of Stan's family appears in part 4.
Maybe Stan sees everyone else run off and then is just like "Sure, why not, it's not like there are psychopaths crawling around this neighborhood or anything." before trying to follow one of them and getting shot at from a window by Burns.
>>82513219
She gets sucked into a vacuum cleaner and held there indefinitely like the puzzle box prison she was trapped in for a thousand years.
>>82513235
Hmm, is there anyone he recognizes that Ratigan also knows? Who knows, maybe he'd imitate Gadget and lures Stan either by asking him to follow or goads him closer while he's investigating out of sheer disbelief. (assuming it takes place after gadget's death)
>>82513219
Almost none of the villains survive Part 5.
Pretty much all of the ones who sold their souls get dragged to hell with the demons at the end.
The heroes have to put Jan down because she lost her original identity with the fame and loss of her soul.
Max was supposed to be one of the few who could have been saved. But he ended up dead.
I think Varrick survives.
He gets a good trashing and then runs away.
"Honestly, i had NO idea what these guys were doing. They were so weird!"
>>82513370
This takes place well after Gadget's death, this is near the end of part 4 when the Conmen go to take down the LHC leaders.
>>82513370
Looking at Stan's fights and interactions, it could be:
-Billy
-Coraline (or Madame Foster)
-Any member of the Recess Gang
-Gadget
Or just another CoCo
>>82513533
I was toying with the idea that Jan survives her initial encounter and meets with Max after breaking out of the Powerline persona. They discuss about their similar predicaments, but they are interrupted by Mortos, who comes to collect their souls and kills Jan.
Threadly reminder that Stan should fight Father and Scrooge should fight Burns. Every time it's mentioned until it's too concrete to change.
>>82513676
Probably another member of the coalition then.
They all run off, Stan calls out how stupid that is, one of them comes back but they're really Ratigan.
>>82513760
Write it yourself then.
>>82513676
Jan surviving and meeting up with Max gives Max a good reason to join the heroes.
Jan dying and saying in her final moments that Max has the opportunity that his father gave him could be what spurs him to join the heroes.
His father left him a heritage for the future. Although he fucked it up by getting killed when they offered him his father's soul back to distract him.
>>82512965
It's a pun damnit!
Question about something. Have we reached a period of all out discussion, or is the topic now primarily focused on parts 4 and 5?I wanted to know if I should bring up the rest of my ideas for /Co/rge /Co/star or not. Or if I should just wait until it becomes major discussion. Right now though I don't have much that I didn't already discuss. Just a few stand user ideas for the story.
>>82514048
That should be fair game, we have all thread to talk about the final nails in part 4 and the beginning layout of part 5.
>>82514048
Well, you could, but I'd like to see more part 5 stuff in this thread.
In all honesty I think our multiple universe stuff is better suited to being a direct cause of part 8 rather than part 6.
>>82508217
We somehow need to fit Dover Boys in here, or at least Dan Backslide
>>82514138
>>82514158
Ah, ok. Well, like I said it's just stand users. I'll put it under a spoiler to not interrupt part 5 conversation. Also, /Co/rge /Co/star just has an AU of the Warden in it, it could take place at any point, it's just in a separate universe.
Okay, I have a few stand ideas, the first one for protag Tommy Pickles, who'd have the stand 「THE RING」, which allows him to unravel people into film rolls that contain their memories. He can watch people's memories, or even alter them by taking or storing objects inside. It only works on people he's photographed though.Daria is a brojo, her stand, 「DEAD POET'S SOCIETY」, releases a healing mist that causes euphoria and pleasant hallucinations. Though initially the stand's fog is benevolent, even healing injuries, breathing in too much slowly kills the opponent.Angelica would show up as an early antagonist, who would become neutral party or a minor ally post-defeat. Her stand is 「THE GREAT GATSBY」, a giant baby that tries to crush opponents and can only be seen in peripheral vision.I've already talked about my ideas for Warden and Dodger's stands. Warden's stand fuses dimensions together seamlessly. He can pick certain things not to be combined by the stand's effects and have them remain separate. Sometimes AU selves will be different from other's, so people are becoming "sick" the more Warden fuses realities. Dodger's stand is a gigantic satellite that feeds him estimated guesses of future events, given in percentages. There might be a 60% chance it'll rain, but a 40% chance it won't, for example. It just points out what the likeliest thing is that will happen.
There are a few more ideas, but I'm not satisfied with them yet. Plus, I'd like others to contribute ideas to the part at some point too.
>>82514553What about School!Kuzco? Still a Pillar Man retaining his Mode: Groove
>>82514632
He's KO'd in Part 2.
>>82514683
No, this is the thing with the multiple parallel universes converging so there are 36 perfect Kuzcos on Mars.
One of them learns the lesson from the movie and becomes a good guy.
>>82514553
Part 9, AUtistic Wonder?
>>82514683
36 Kuszos on mars, don't you know?
>>82514632Probably. I can't think of a good stand idea for him, but I imagined he'd get Warden's stand at the end of it all.Oh, and I also forgot another little thing. Freaky Fred appears in it, as an AU self who somehow became a doctor, rather than a barber, and thus never awakened his stand. At some point though, he'd fall in love with someone and awaken his stand, still Floyd the Barber, but it turns objects into surgical tools, rather than razors.
>>82514724
It's based on Jorge Joestar, a (non-canon) side story where things are weirder than normal.
>>82513974
That's the idea I had in mind. I'm not good with dialogues but the scene was something like this:
>Jan and Max meet in one of the many abandoned houses in the Old Country
>Jan breaks down, screaming that she's a monster now, unable to recognize her own reflection
>Max comforts her, telling her that they are the living proof that the contracts can be broken
>"Living, heh. Funny that dancing dog boy mentions that"
>Mortos is looking at them from a window
>"Mortos is here to steal pretty mouse girl's soul and turn it into spooky money" He pulls from his coat a crudely made note made by himself that says: "I.O.U. 1 ZOUL"
>Jan: "What the hell is that thing?"
>Max: "Such disgusting being, such malefic aura, such eastern europeaness. There is no doubt, that's one of the demons at the service of the Warner Brothers!"
>Shot of Mortos pushing his face against the window, a reflection in it gives a brief glimpse of Mortos' Stand
>TO BE CONTINUED
>>82514158
Since there is no universe reset in part 6 but a major fuck up in part 8, it makes sense
>>82511063
So where are we putting the strays? That's a gang of abandoned/feral pets with stand for anyone who doesn't remember.
Instead of putting them in the demon arc, how about we find them as test subjects at Acme University in the stand research building?
Escaped animal test subjects who still roam the grounds.
And I just thought of a reason why the Urban Rangers go the Acme University, to retrieve Ford/Doof/Farnsworth's equipment so they'll be able to help Plucky recover.
>>82514794
I like this. Will add some more.
>>82515534
Plucky fights them on his way to the endgame during the second arc.
Hell's coming loose in the capital of the Old Country.
The protags meet up with Plucky shortly after they jump off the top floor of the skyscraper after meeting the demons.
Plucky expects them to be tactically retreating or something. Asks why some of them are missing. Also who the new guy is (Max).
They grab him and keep running.
Him goes Kaiju form. Red Guy appears being held by TA in front of them.
Red Guy manifests a Stand to combat them. If they can beat him and his Vice Presidents. They'll be banished for a few millenia. No big deal for them, but a lifetime of peace for the heroes.
If the heroes lose they fucking die and their souls are relinquished.
Man of Murder finale ensues.
>>82515693
>>82515534
I thought that the corporate battles after the gang arc takes place all in one VERY big skyscraper.
They NOPE the hell out of there when they come up against TA. HIM, and the Red Guy. But beyond that it's a vertical battle.
666 floors of adventure!!!
Plucky is unsure on how to climb in time but is lucky that the fight came to him.
"Guys! Guys! They're demons!"
"WE KNOW!"
>>82515693
I don't like the stray fight near the end.
It just breaks the momentum.
I don't see how describing the end game with the demons has anything to do with placing the strays.
I'm suggesting the strays be old test subjects who are still at Acme University, the place where the demons began experimenting with the jawbreakers after they learned what they actually do.
>>82515722
It takes place across the old country since the real WB HQ's location is only know to so many.
They go around demolishing talent agencies until Max!Powerline comes into the picture and points them in the right direction.
>>82515875
The Stray fights serves to set up the final battle which will take place around Capital City.
Shit's already getting fucked around town, and its an obstacle Plucky has to get through before joining the rest of the Party.
He can't just go from comatose to final battle now can he?
I like the idea of them hitting up different areas. But I dislike the concept of them all being talent agencies.
1 or 2 is alright.
Even then. A company doesnt divide itself over large areas that much.
Human Resources and Financial sectors will usually be close together.
If anything Powerline is in the story longer than.
But the final battles when they go corporate HAVE to be in a 666 story tall building if we're going to get the climax where they fuck off out of Patrick's office and just jump off a skyscraper.
Kinda how the Stardust Crusaders did something similar when running away from Dio.
>>82515996
>>82515875
Maybe it all takes place over a city?
Warner Bros. divided itself over various office parks and so they have battles in metros. streets. and department stores. Also in offices.
I want an elevator battle too. Shit would be tight.
Then FINALLY we get to Patrick's office. Which is atop a 666 story tall building. This is the mysteriously hidden building hidden in plain sight.
>>82508778
Does anyone know the origin of the text in that image? Or did someone just meme really fucking hard. I've been wanting to know for years. Every time I see it I google all kinds of things to try and find the source but I never do find anything but that image itself.
>>82515996
>>82516030
It feels like we're missing a whole damn arc here.
They assembling the gang, they go bust up other gangs, Plucky goes into his coma, BLANK BLANK BLANK, 666 story building.
In between they need to bust up some talent agencies, go to Acme University to get Doof's machines to help Plucky, and do other plot shit. That's the part I'm talking about, not when there are demons fucking up a city. This is well before that.
Plucky fights and defeats a dream demon before going to the final battle, Rolf and the urban rangers have wrecked the shit out of the WB by the time he wakes up, then he has to fight more demons.
I'm suggesting the strays be moved far sooner in the story because Plucky fighting a bunch of lost pets while the city burns around them doesn't make any sense. The animals would not stick around a city that is being destroyed around them, they'd get the hell out of hell.
Making them animal test subjects for the stand jawbreakers gives them a logical place in the story at least.
>>82515996
>I dislike the concept of them all being talent agencies
Same here, I was wondering what could be the other WB branches, we already have the Looniversity as the scientific research branch. Another could be a legal firm/department, THE talent agency and something about money (a financial district? a stock exchange?)
>>82516236
So here's what I mean
>Fight gangs
>Plucky goes into his coma
>Sector V protects Plucky
>Fight some talent agencies
>Plucky is under attack
>Ghost Busters (Ford, Donald, Doof, Tina, Farnsworth) begin protecting Plucky
>Urban Rangers go to Acme University to get the equipment they need to help Plucky recover
>Fight strays there and also some other WB people
>Somewhere after this they meet Max!Powerline who points them in the right direction
>Fight assassins
>Arrive at WB tower
>Fight their way to the top
>Beat Patrick
>DEMONS
>Plucky wakes up
>Fight demons
That's just what we have right now. It's all still open to being changed, but that's what's there right now.
>>82516411
That was my main idea with >>82515996
I imagine that HR and Finance are in the same place.
But they have to take the metro to get there from where they fight at the Stock Exchange.
(Chernabog is in charge of HR. It was a nice and funny thing we had going on. HR is worse than hell).
>>82516559
>>82516435
On another note. Why are we calling them ghostbusters?
We have actual ghosts coming in to save the day at the end.
Dead Man's Party,
Im a bit iffy on this dude.
Plucky not recovering on his own is also pretty weak. The team should focus on taking down WB.
The KND bullshit some machine to give him a stand in his dreams way after the point in which he no longer needs it.
The University is good for exposition. But we dont need it to be that big a deal.
>>82516594
I'm calling them the ghost busters because I forgot to add not!ghost busters in front of the name. They have some similarities to the ghost busters because they're a group of people who research or have experience combating the paranormal.
The KND don't bullshit it all on their own, they use the machines that the not!ghost busters had at AU to do it, the whole reason why the UR go to AU is to get that shit.
No one came up with a name for the group consisting of Ford, Doof, Donald, Tina, and Farnsworth, who are basically the resistance and rebelling/escaped scientists from AU, so I keep calling them the ghost busters because I don't want to have to type out all their names every time.
>>82512000
Er.... I think that Crosh from part 7 already got the Roundabout.
>>82516747
its an interesting idea.
But I still dont like giving them too much importance. They're invaluable, yes. But the University arc happens early on and is where Scooby and Shaggy come into play.
Maybe the protags go for some components. But when they do shit should have already hit the fan.
Like the XCom: The Bureau University level. Everythingw as falling apart.
>>82517182
Shit hits the fan when some ghost possessed stand user tries to kill Plucky while the urban rangers are away and it's Plucky's mom who saves him with the other guys. Then they have to go get the stuff from AU to help speed up Plucky's recovery while Tina and her crew stay with Plucky to keep him safe.
>>82517097
We can always change his (Krosh) stand's name.
>>82517807
[RIDE INTO THE SUN]?
>>82517929
Sounds good, alternatively we can use a russian song/band/album name to further reference his russian-cartooness.
>>82517807
How about [FOOLS RUSH IN]?
It's meaningful on multiple levels.
>>82517987
[NAS NE DOGONYAT] by group Tatoo.
(We won't get caught)
>>82518046
YES
>>82518046
Okay. Or this. The group for Russian song is t.A.T.u
>>82517318
Who should we make that Wuya-possessed user anyway, while we're on the subject?
An every man who wouldn't normally harm anyone? An expert assassin? A weirdo she randomly finds on the street?
>>82518671
A famous stand user to cause as much trouble as possible?
>>82518964
Gewdo shit.
Posting the Fusionfall character art collage so that artists can get a basic anime image of the CN-originated characters before they get Araki-fied.
>>82512479
Damn,and I had fun drawing that stand too.
But then I'm not even the one who suggested the stand in the first place so I ain't mad.
Are there any individual fights in chapter 5 that have not been written yet?
>>82520158
You mean part 4 right? We only just started 5.
>>82518671
There's always Rex Banner. No one would really expect a cop who's been helping them to become Wuya's puppet.
>>82520027
Who's the girl at the very bottom, middle cell? Looks like buttercup with some goth makeup.
>>82520252
May as well be 4.
>>82510074
Morocco's already a Stand in Part 3 (to Secret Squirrel). might be tricky
>>82520523
I saw that and made sure to use the 90's version since Secret uses the 60's version.
>>82520523
>>82520565
Would be pretty funny if Secret and Mole were each other's catalysts for their stand awakenings.
What about Chicken Boo from Animaniacs? His stand concept would be akin to Bug's Wardrobe. Maybe have it so he can't switch until someone points out to everyone else he's a giant chicken.
>>82520832
Mayhaps it could work like the opposite of Stan's money where Stand users can't see through the masquerade but regular folks can.
>>82520911
That sounds great.
>>82520027Ben 10's pose is almost just like Josuke's
>>82514714
>36 Kuzco's
Jesus.
>>82518964
Dan Backslide Stand Revision from [HARD DAY'S NIGHT] to [ROUNDABOUT] when?
Finished the write-up for Tina.
>User: Tina Russo Duck
>Stand: 「PARAMORE」
>Appearance: A humanoid duck fashioned in a design akin to a radio tower with television antennae growing from its head, forearms and elbows
>Ability: 「PARAMORE」 is a Punch Ghost style stand carrying above average range but below average physical power. The Stand is able to enhance or inhibit the frequency, vibration, and wavelength of wave motion within the surrounding area. If struck by 「PARAMORE」, the victim carries a 1 in 5 chance of being struck with Alice in Wonderland Syndrome as the intrinsic vibration within the Stand can wreak havoc on the victim's sense of perception and balance.
I wanted to give her a Stand that would give her a good place within the Ghost Busters [considering Monster Mashers or Psyche Squad as alternate names] as her ability can be used to make waveforms visible to the naked eye.
>>82518964
Also, post that shit on the /co/co/ Booru!
>>82521368
Maybe 2 different Dan Backslides?
One in Part 7, with [ROUNDABOUT], and one in the proposed AU with [HARD DAY'S NIGHT]?
>>82517318
You and I have different interpretations of shit hitting the fan.
I referred to the University being in utter chaos. Things are falling apart, students are running in panic as the WB Stand users go full out against the protags.
Like in Xcom the Bureau. The University got fucked.
Anyways.
That means 1 - 2 fights tops for the GB then right?
>>82520393
It is Buttercup; at one point in the storyline she suffered from amnesia and was given the name "Belladonna" by Ace (Gangreen gang) until she gets her memory back.
>>82521091
Now that you've mentioned it...Where the fuck is Mandy
>>82522222
HOLY SHIT QUINTS
>>82521446I actually had the idea that the AU CoCo would have a MASSIVE battle with the members of the president's cabinet while hunting down the Warden. In my idea they were supposed to all be typical, mustache-twirling villains, such as Snidley Whiplash, Hooded Claw, Dick Dastardly, etc. But I wasn't too sure of the concept and wanted to see if someone could think of anything better. The Warden left for space and made Mr. Pickles his successor as president. Possibly faking his own death in the process, if he got his position by killing AU!Nobody.
>>82521805
Well yeah, it's not like the GB are joining the party.
I supposed Tina could show up where Plucky is accompanied by Ford and Donald, then they help defeat the possessed stand user, then the urban rangers come back, are intimidated by Plcuky's mom, then go to the Acme University to find one of Ford's old friends, Prof. Doof, who has something that can help Plucky. I think only one of Tina's friends would go with them on this excursion.
So when they go to AU it's in chaos already, the place is over run with stand users and other power users, they gotta beat the strays to get into the building where Doof is imprisoned and bust him out.
Both of Doof's arms are made out of titanium, it was a minor thing in the show that might've been a gag, but I think it's worth using here that he has robot arms.
>>82523100
Acme University is the WB's testing grounds for the stand jawbreakers.
The whole place is treated like a prison.
Anyone who develops a particularly useful power is offered a contract by the demons, accepting the contract is probably worse than being imprisoned on the campus, but they have no way of knowing that.
Plucky escaped from Acme University using his stand's power to make holes before they could force him into a contract.
Plucky could've escaped when he was still very young and has little to no memory of the facility, this is also how Ford and Tina escaped.
Doof was going to be forced to serve jail time, but he was given an alternative to be a teacher instead; this was actually in the show he comes from, I think we should apply it here as well.
I have a question. Human Resources is part of the WB HQ or one of the shell companies?
>>82522222
Best one i could find, Quintsman
>>82520027
>>82524693
The more I look at these the more they look kind of uncanny.
Not exactly because they're in animu stule instead of their usual ones, but just…off, for some reason
Should Plastic Man be in Part 7? I can see him being the Mrs Robinson of part 7 (No Stand, just a guy with incredibly weird powers who can hit Stands hard enough to damage their users.)
>>82524693
I think shell companies, they think nothing of him being a demon at that point.
Plus Toph is still alive when they go through HR, and she gets killed later in their base by Roger (American Dad), so they haven't gotten to the WB HQ yet when that happens.
>>82520252
I second for Rex being Wooya's puppet, given he will have just a small scene where he interrogates the Rangers about Plucky's demise.
>>82525565
>>82520252
So Rex Banner for Wuya puppet?
What sort of stand does he have? Does he already have one?
>>82525947
How does he even get introduced into the story?
Does he begin investigating the gang killings, finds out the urban rangers are behind it, then go after them?
Do Shaggy and Scooby intervene at this point?
>>82525947
is in the stand suggestions doc, it's 「POLICY OF TRUTH」
>>82525947
Maybe he is a contact for Shaggy & Scooby in the Old Country. Scrooge sent them to Banner so he could aid them in their own investigation
>>82524766
Its because of the nose right...
>>82524807
That could work. Who would be our Wekapipo?
Also, how would hedie to Mr. Nobody?
>>82528013
>Also, how would he die to Mr. Nobody?
>Plas
>Being killable.
That is why you fail, but seriously, Mr Nobody should explode him into several bits that eventually regroup at the end of the Part.
>>82528057
I meant how would our Wekapipo stand in die?
And I know Plas is unkillable, instead he suffers Magenta Magenta's fate or something.
>>82526748
Maybe he's Interpol.
>>82518964
>>82527748
Fukkin hell, now I can't unsee.
Damn you.
>>82528568
Yeah, that could work. Shaggy & Scooby ask him about the current situation in the Old Country (the landgrab made by the gangs and WB's growing influence) and also about the disappearance of Donald months ago(that was hinted in part 4)
>>82528568
So let's say Rex Banner is Interpol.
He's in the old country looking for Professor Heinz Doofenshmirtz, who went missing after they sent him to the Old Country as part of the witness protection program as well as investigating the odd things happening there.
Do the Urban Rangers meet him before or after he's possessed?
When Ford sucks the ghost Wuya out of him, they tell him they were looking for him since Doof is a colleague of theirs and currently held captive by the WB in their research branch located in Acme University.
The fact that he brought Tina to her son is a coincidence, a very troubling coincidence to the demons who don't like, nor believe in coincidence.
Remember, if the guys from below exist, the guys from above must also exist, so they're worried Plucky is part of some divine plan to stop them.
So what is the first scene of part 5?
Is it Taffy talking with Tom?
Or is it Shaggy and Scooby knocking on the door to Farnsworth's secret lab?
>>82520252
>>82525565
>>82525947
>>82526748
>>82530306
I dunno about Rex being possessed and sent to kill Plucky.
It's not that it's a bad decision, I like it a lot, but his stand doesn't seem very capable of storming Sector V and murdering Plucky. I imagine he'd have to fight the KND before Ford shows up and saves the day (which... kinda weirdly parallels the Stan vs Recess fights), but I don't think a stand that stabs you if you lie can take down five other stand users.
Unless Wuya has a stand, but if she does I don't see it in the docs. (In fact, wasn't it discussed that she would disguise herself as Jack Spicer's stand?)
>>82530429
I think is Taffy meeting with Tom. The Shaggy and Scooby scene would need some build up before (like them arriving to the Old Country and the briefing with Banner). There is also Plucky's attack on Boogie's club/hideout
>>82530504
Wuya pretends to be Jack's stand, yes, the reveal of her being a demon ghost comes after Jack is dead/beaten/whatever and she puts Plucky into a coma with a sneak attack.
I imagine her possessing someone alters a person's stand and enhances their physical abilities to the point where she probably ruins their bodies by tearing up their muscles with the overexertion she forces upon her hosts.
Part 5 has had very little in the way out "who has what stand" put into it. If there's not a stand listed on the doc then that means we haven't come up with one for the character yet.
Sector V probably would've killed Rex if not for Ford, Tina, and Donald arriving to suck Wuya out of him.
If they had killed Rex, then they'd be fucked because Interpol would be on THEIR asses.
So it was supposed to be a win-win situation for Wuya, but Ford with the stan-vac-inator IV put an end to her role in the story.
>>82530505
If Taffy is first then it should be followed by Plucky in mid fight with Boogy on Rolf's farm, then go to Shaggy and Scooby, then back to Plucky and stay on him and the Urban Rangers until they're separated thanks to the coma. At that point the focal characters become the Urban Rangers with occasional cuts to Plucky's dream fights until he wakes up.
>>82530633
Ah, that'd make more sense, but there's a small flaw. Interpol attacking the KND doesn't ensure Plucky's death. All the demons want him dead, so they invade his coma dreams while Wuya possess Rex and murders him.
If Rex is killed by the KND before he kills Plucky though, all it means is the KND are fucked. I don't necessarily think they'd kill Plucky for them, would they?
>>82530633
>enhances their physical abilities to the point where she probably ruins their bodies by tearing up their muscles with the overexertion she forces upon her hosts.
So, like that episode where Raimundo turns into a brazilian hulk?
>>82531329
Is CoCo's Section V still affiliated with the KND? I was considering they could be a more militant, secret organization and they initially send Section V down to earth to collect supernatural stuff for their "war against adulthood" (like jawbreakers and the String Theory Sewing Machine).
>>82531329
Making two groups who would be your enemies fight each other is its own reward.
The demons have plans within plans in regards to Plucky since they noticed the coincidences building up around him.
>>82531487
Yes, like a hulk.
And we haven't really established what we're doing with the KND as a whole here, Sector V is being trained by an adult so they can use their stands, so the anti-adult thing they had in the show might be something we're going to overlook.
>>82522481
Part 9: /Co/Co/star
We could do it. We could totally do it.
AU Characters, some of which, like Dan Backslide, would have different stands.
(Example: Dan Backslide having [HARD DAY'S NIGHT] in the AU)
36 Perfect Kuzco's somewhere on Mars,
maybe a building or two growing legs,
it'd be great.
Let's fucking do it.
>>82531875
One thing at a time, we're still trying to develop part 5.
We don't even have all the characters for part 5 yet.
>>82530429
>>82530505
Another suggestion for a first scene for Part 5 would be this showed as a movie which the protagonists are watching. Maybe the first scene could be Tom watching the movie "adaptation" of this comic in a theater when Taffy shows up to talk to him.
>>82531990
Oh, forgot image.
>>82531990
That wouldn't work as the first scene since the protagonists aren't all together yet at the start of part 5. That movie would play in the background at various places throughout the part I think.
That does give me an idea though.
During part 5, the WB are shooting a movie (different movie) based on the events of part 3 before the Urban Rangers trash the set.
>>82531875I already am, by writing like, 60% of this shit. Here's the plot outline from last thread.
>>82399322And I'm still thinking a whole lot more on the story,
But like >>82531984
said, we should focus on part 5 right now.
>>82531984
Alright.
But when the time comes, Part 9 will become a reality.
Believe it.
>>82532147
Yes, yes, but that's months away and future us' project.
Current us' project is part 5.
So the gangs in the first arc of part 5 still need some work. Each gang should have about 5 members, so far we have
Gangrene Gang:
-Shego
-Ace
-Roger Klotz
-Rancid Rabbit
-Zorak
(gang's full)
Fireside Girls:
-Fang (Dave the Barbarian)
-----Pick 4 from the list-------
-Portia Gibbons (Mighty B!)
-Malika (Fillmore!)
-Patsy Smiles (Camp Lazlo)
-Nina J. Neckerly (Camp Lazlo)
-Gretchen (Camp Lazlo)
-Cindy Vortex (Jimmy Neutron)
-Myrtle (Lilo and Stitch)
-Patsy Smiles
-Trixie Tang
-------only 4 from this list--------
Heylin Warriors:
-Jack Spicer
-Monkey King (Jackie Chan Adventures)
-Monkey Fist (Kim Possible)
-Silver Monkey (Beware the Batman)
-----Pick one from the list-----
-Bananas B (American Dragon)
-Bobo Haha (Generator Rex)
--------only one (open to more suggestions for a 5th)------
>>82532369
Baboon from Skunk Fu was also suggested as a fifth for the Heylin. >>82509106
>>82531665
>Sector V is being trained by an adult so they can use their stands
That's why they drop their initial mission, they get trapped in the conflicts of the Old Country and decide to fix the place instead of fueling the KND warmachine
>>82531875
Is not "part 9", is one of the light novels that are parallel to the main story (hopefully, we can make these stories after finishing part 8)
>>82531984
Speaking of characters, I was thinking on a lawyer of the WB as the boss of their legal firm, responsible, among other things, of seizing the string theory sewing machine from Farnsworth years ago. I found pic related in a thread about /co/ demons but I have no idea who is he.
>>82532369
For the Fireside gang i'm voting for Portia, Trixie, Cindy and Malika. And for the Heylin gang i'm voting for the Ghetto Monkey from American Dragon
>>82532468
That actually fits their theme better than the other two possible 5th members since he's a martial artist.
>>82532485
I think it might be this guy from The Little Vampire? But I really have no idea.
>>82532485
Cindy I want to see have a battle of the brains against Dexter.
The Fireside Girls probably do that cutesy act to kill people when their guard is down.
Fortunately, Rolf has a remedy for this: Squeezing fresh lemon juice into his eyes.
Toph would be unaffected by the cute act since she's blind.
I think every gang should have at least one member who has an "old country" origin (we're already following through with that I think) and also one member looking to move up the ranks and become a handler.
>>82532596
Yeah, that's him.
He's called The Captain in the book I have. I don't speak French so I have no idea if he's ever named anywhere. But anyway, I think he's actually good?
Series is called "Petite Vampire", it's a French cartoon but I have a translated graphic novel from it.
>>82532767
Aren't the Fireside girls just interested in selling cookies or is that their "cover" operation?
>>82532886
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XTgzyeWAA-w
Here's the short that pic is from by the way.
>>82530504
We could always use Morocco. He's dim enough for Wuya to easily possess plus those heavy shades he wears would keep people from seeing a bit part of the visual effect. Plus, his Stand could easily allow her to escape the scene of Plucky's hit.
>>82532596
>>82532886
>>82532913
Thanks, Gentlemen. Damn, that's a big hat
>>82532921
Seems like a good idea, what do the other anons think?
>>82532921
>>82533070
It's cool. It'd have the same effect as Rex fighting them, with the added bonus of being a more interesting fight. And it'd make Secret Squirrel take it personally if he died. But there's still the tricky business of SS's stand being based on Morocco, and Wooya is supposed to be sucked up by Ford instead of escaping.
>>82533188
It is but there are two Moroccos: The 60's version Secret Agent Man was based around who was actually competent if a bit slow on the draw and the reboot version who was essentially a comic yutz. Also, Wuya will still get defeated by Ford; it's the original attack on Plucky she'd escape from.
>>82532898
That's the cover operation, they sell cookies, but charge people the deeds to their land as the price.
And I just had a thought, Donald Duck in one of the comics is a retired super spy who had all of his super spy memories erased so he could live a normal life.
What if our Donald Duck is super spy Donald who came to the Old Country to help his cousin Tina?
>>82533070
>>82533188
My only issue is where does Rex fit into all of this?
Does he ever meet the Urban Rangers at all or is he only ever in contact with Shaggy and Scooby?
>>82533474
Maybe he's theDoppioof the part?
>>82533474
He could be the first investigator Interpol sends out to the Old Country after some suspicious rumors circulating about the WB prompt their Stand Unit into action or he could have been a previous boot on the ground in the aftermath of the Daffy Debacle. Once the situation escalates, he calls in for back up and they send Morocco to help out.
>>82533530
>"Hello Rex"
>"Morocco? You're my backup?"
>"What's wrong?"
>"Honestly, I wanted Secret. Where is he?"
>>82533530
That works I guess.
So he's more like the person in charge of the various investigators in the region?
Shaggy and Scooby are also working under his supervision and have made the most headway in the weird stuff happening in the old country, after they make contact with Farnsworth they report to Rex who calls in backup since things are escalating quickly now with the stand gang warfare.
Does Rex get a stand from a recovered jawbreaker, or did he already have one?
>>82533923
I suppose he could, since the Interpol knows about stands now. I don't know if his stand came from training or confiscated jawbreakers.
>>82533923
>>82534008
I'd say he developed it on his own. Banner was always an extremely straight shooter so it'd feel against his character to take the easy way out with the Jawbreaker.
>>82534008
The Urban Rangers get a whole bag of stand jawbreakers when they beat Dr. Facilier.
There's also the stockpile of stand jawbreakers the LHC had at the time of their defeat, we never established what happened to those.
>>82523893
treating the place like a prison is a bit retarded.
It's a normal highschool.
Demons dont act like real monsters utnil they "Win".
Only two people have contracts right now.
Max is picked up because he wanted fame, the girl, and getting away from his dad. He sold his father's soul.
Jan was desperate for a gig.
I dont think Jan ever finished Highschool.
>>82530306
Yeah.
Which is why they try to shoot down any positive influence Plucky could have by shoving his father in his face.
>>82530429
Taffy and Tom.
>>82534075
The contract thing is a bit much, true. However, there should be some draconian measures in place. Young students with potentially world-altering abilities have be kept under a boot. We could imply that the harsh turn came about in response to the growing number of gangs as well as some prodding on behalf of the WB's higher ups. The research lab's still going to be a big factor though.
>>82532147
>>82532369
Im not going to do that shit dude.
That;s a light novel.
>>82532485
Demongo is already their lawyer.
This guy could be head of accounting. Or Finance
>>82534048
They destroy them.
>>82534172
Of course it should "feel" like there's something going on. Something stinky.
Have a demonic looking principal from a cartoon as the Dean. Or maybe even...
This guy. When they go back to the University for round two, maybe he even hints at being the "man behind Powerline"
>>82534320
1 fight in the college when it looks like something's up.
Which is against the handsome man from xtreme goof movie.
Then when they return and the gangs are openly raising a shitstorm because WB is starting to look weak because the heroes are blazing it up.
We face 1 teacher and then the principal.
We leave the rest about the school ambigious to keep some sense of mystery.
>>82534235
Nah, I don't think so. He seems like a nice guy, and according to the book I have, he doesn't seem to like the thought of human/monster interactions. He has Little Vampire's human friend take an oath to never speak of them.
He doesn't seem like a villainous type. The only way I'd see him assisting the demons is ifthey were threatening his wife(?) and child(?) (I have no idea if he's LV's father or not, but dialog makes it seem this way a bit.)
That said, I don't know about Azazel from the short. >>82532913
Like I said, I don't speak French, so I have no idea what they're saying.
>>82534353
>We face 1 teacher and then the principal.
For the teacher I'd suggest Ms. Bitters from Invader Zim for that role, and for the dean maybe Dean Toadblatt from Billy & Mandy or Principal Greedyguts from the Jacob Two-Two animated series.
>>82534429
The video has spanish subs and I speak spanish: Azazel pulled the kids to hell by blowing the candles on the magical circle, but that was against the rules of damnation, so he was forced to release the kids (otherwise the secretary was gonna informn that to their boss and Azazel would lose his winter vacations).
Azazel could be part of the WB and uses The Captain's remains as a disguise to walk among mortals. After being defeated, The Captain's spirit is released from Azazel's grip and later joins the Dead Man Party at the trial against Red Guy.
>>82534320
I had the idea of using the Loonatics as School Security brought in by the company after not only Plucky's escape but also Shaggy and Scooby's infiltration. The coincidences are getting too against their favor so the WB has decided to double down. If not, they could always see use as a PMC in the second half.
>>82534773
Danger Duck's appearance is a bit... problematic though. Mostly because of how similar he is to LeTerally.Hence why I made him an AU of him in /Co/rge /Co/star, and the rest of the Loonatics work as Warden's thoughtpoliceBut aside from him, they would work well as security for the school or that other thing.
>>82534934
It could always be argued that he's a Duck Dodgers style case but fair enough.
>>82534075
It's not a high school, it's just a private "school" of all grade levels.
Not everyone in the gangs in the WB's employ came from the school. The school is where the WB's testing/ R&D is located with the students as the test subjects.
I still think there should be like a flashback part when Tina is introduced that reveals some of Plucky's backstory and how it was his ability that let people escape from the WB's watchful eyes.
>>82534267
Cartman eats one from Dr. Facilier stash, that's how he gets his stand.
>>82535276
We could have a little interlude where Plucky tells his story to the Urban Rangers that details his escape back to his father's manor.
I was reading the original pastebin and noticed that Pinky Suavo with the Stand 「BRAIN DAMAGE」 was among the characters from part 5 but is not in the current doc, should I add him as another of the WB celebrities?
>>82534075
Is called a "shell company" for a reason. On the outside is a highschool, but is actually the Research & Development department of the WB, with the student body as a big supply of test subjects.
>I dont think Jan ever finished Highschool
like the average pop star?
>>82535671
He never knew his father, so it'd probably be his mother's old home where he gets the book from.
I think Tina would be the one to talk about how Plucky got them both out of Acme University while he's in his coma.
Taffy needs to have some conflicting emotions about his friend being the son of the person who caused Jerry to get killed. But he should get over them by acknowledging that Plucky is not Daffy.
>>82535758
So then comes the next logical step: Did she go to the WB willingly thinking they were on the up and up or was she taken by force due to her involvement with pre-Stand LeTerally?
>>82535716
Yeah, we are lacking in the talent section.
We could have the talent be cast as roles in >>82532073 the movie the WB are making about the events of part 3.
We could have a scene where Taffy gets mad in Plucky's place for how they're representing Daffy in the movie. He's not mad because of the way they're using Daffy's image, he's mad because they shit all over the image Plucky has of his father in his mind that he told the group about at some point prior to his coma.
>>82535821
I think she was taken by force because they wanted to study Plucky, to see if he developed a stand without the need of a jawbreaker.
Of course they didn't realize the jawbreakers worked until years after Plucky was born, but I think they still abducted them both.
Plucky awakened his stand for the purpose of helping people escape the WB. He was too young at the time to really know he was being heroic, he just wanted to help save his mom and other people the WB was keeping trapped.
>>82535952
That'd make sense though it'd imply that they should have more allies on the outside than they do.
>>82535276
>>82534773
We should not forget that Part 3 happened and that the Looney Tunes were the 9 egyptian stand users.
Anyways.
Yeah. I misspelled University.
Maybe it ends up being Monsters University?
The Students are deformed monsters due to how the experiments changed them.
>>82535716
I know its a shell company. Which is why we cant treat the University as that important. We should move to the next shell company.
>>82535854
1 or 2 new talents. Anything more is too much.
Maybe the entire lead cast are soulless Stand Users who are SORTA like the Starduck Crusaders. But not quite.
>>82535821
She went "willingly".
Remember these are Demons.., Wily fuckers with much material possessions.
They can offer pretty much anything. Paying them in return is the problem.
>>82535952
They didnt "hire" her until Part 3 occured.
She wanted a new job so Leterally wouldnt find her. So she took it. She teaches there.
>>82536300
Plucky didnt really save anyone as much as make a really big hole.
>>82536319
Nah, keeping it Acme Looniversity keeps that nice tie to Tiny Toons and the changing of the torch between generations.
>>82536319
Hiring her as a teacher makes sense. Then she finds out later what their motives are and can no longer leave until Plucky makes a really big hole.
I don't think she should've taken the job to prevent Daffy from fining her though, she took it because she's a single mom and this looked like a good job that came with the perk of Plucky getting a good education.
>>82536586
I agree, it seems a little forced. It might be a little better if she came to them after either her or Plucky's Stand manifested or we go with the abduction and experimentation angle.
>>82536781
It could be that the WB caused her to lose her old job, then sabotaged her getting hired anywhere else so when she applied for the teaching position and was accepted, she took it.
>>82536781
It's not forced. Abduction and experimentation is forced and fucks canon.
A single mother takes a job. Innocuose at first. Keeping the sinister things on the down-low is what accurate demons would do.
>>82536913
Exactly.
They created a need and "solved" it.
>>82536913
>>82536932
That does work a little better plus it better sells the escalation that goes on through the story.
>>82535854
Ok, I'll add the celebrities section to the doc and Rex Banner and Donald's Stand since they are missing too
>>82536932
>>82537037
So this is stuff Tina would tell the Urban Rangers after they've taken care of Wuya.
It also serves as a briefing on the facility for the Urban Rangers.
It works better coming from Tina than Plucky because she'd remember more of the campus than Plucky would.
The Urban Rangers go there with the objective to fuck shit up and bring back Doof since they need his help making the machine to help Plucky.
Plucky's coma should go through about three stages:
Stage 1 - Gideon is messing with his mind, he needs to be defeated in the awake world (this takes place during the shell companies arc)
Stage 2 - Bill appears in Plucky's dream and reveals he's still not waking up, he torments Plucky for a while with all his father's failures and inadequacies (takes place maybe before they raid the WB tower)
Stage 3 - Plucky gets his stand in his dream, he REMASTERS it through sheer force of will to annihilate Bill and his condition finally stabilizes, he'll wake up soon. Maybe he spends some time with Daffy before waking up (takes place during the fight against Patrick).
>>82537372
>Remaster state through will alone
Jesus, that is a terrifying thought.
>>82537538
It's also in his dreamscape, his thoughts and feelings have power there, Bill became terrified when Daffy revealed this to his son.
I think Plucky's stand should be sent in while Gideon is still using his stand to attack Plucky's mind, this buys the Urban Rangers time to find and defeat Gideon.
He remasters it when Daffy appears rather than Daffy causing a crack in the dreamscape to happen. It still cracks, but it's more of a symbolic crack then something that lets Doof and the KND send in his stand.
>>82537629
Daffy isnt the kind of guy who would just TELL his son though.
At first it seems as if he's taking up Bill's offer of a few "accomodations" in hell in exchange for tormenting his son.
He actually just points out some flaws that stand out in his son while giving some subtle hints that culminate when he summons an expensive sofa and lounges on it.
Plucky had thought that only Bill could do constructs.
Daffy says: "My zon, Dees is YOUR dream. Me and Beell can only do dees because you let us."
Bill panics and is about to strike down Daffy but gets knocked around by Plucky.
Daffy justs grins and a martini appears floating by him. He drinks it and after a bit reveals that "I did not summon dees Marteenee".
>>82537908
My point is that he lets his son know that Bill has limits. As this is still Plucky's dream.
>>82537953
I didn't say Daffy told him, only that he revealed it to him.
I'd actually like to go a few steps back and look at some earlier parts of part 5.
Bobo, Rolf's giant clam, has a room inside of it as its stand that serves as their mobile base.
It is in this base that Plucky first meets the other urban rangers.
How do the introductions go?
>>82537372
How does Remastered!Fortunate Son (Wayward Son?) work?
Alright, I added some of the reviewed stuff into the part 5 doc. What I missed?
Is Reviewfag coming back due to part 4 being finished?
>>82538751
I have no idea.
The one thing I remember when we discussed it is it has the ability to create plot holes.
If we keep that we'll need to apply some limits.
>>82538998
We need someone to invoke the offering.
>>82539166
It's a bit early to be doing that. We need to wait until it's at 400 before making an offering, right?
>>82539277
>>82539166
I mean it depends, do you want him to review things or suggest more ideas for what we can inject into part 5?
>>82538928
We should probably add Shaggy and Scooby's stand information to part 5's doc just so we won't need to have two very large docs open at the same time when we get to the detailed writing.
Part 4's doc takes a while for it to load since it's so long now.
But anyway
>>82538186
What should Bobo's stand be called? What should the room inside of it look like?
>>82539419
[BLUE OYSTER CULT]
It loos like Rolf's hideout in "No Speak Da Ed", except blue in color, with pictures of clams on the walls.
>>82539419
It appears in the doc:
>Rolf pulls out a giant clam
>"Are you ready, young green one, to be ingratiated into the Urban Rangers secrets?"
>The clam is opened revealing a large barn-like room
I'm gonna paste Shaggy and Scoobs info right away
>>82539577
I like that name
>>82539577
Perfect.
>>82539647
That was something I typed up, actually.
It should totally be Rolf's underground room instead of the barn.
So what's Plucky's first impression of the urban rangers?
>>82539682
>So what's Plucky's first impression of the urban rangers?
>"Woah, you guys are weird."
>>82539813
We gotta do some introductions or something.
Maybe Dexter has set up a mini lab inside of Bobo
Toph makes blind jokes
Handsome Squidward does an interpretive dance
Taffy... Taffy I can't seem to get my head around. He's the grey mouse.
>>82539874
Taffy plays the younger role.
Fucking confused as to what's going on and serves as the reader's "eyes" for this chapter.
He gets acquainted with Plucky and seems to be the Brojo for this part. Together they react to Dexter, Toph, and Squiddie.
>>82539874
And Cartman is a wee roach who wants to earn badges to win a bet or something. He doesn't even have a stand at this point and is basically like a problem child sent to join the scouts to see if it'll do him any good.
>>82539926
I'd find it funny if Taffy is the newest member and managed to earn a badge far faster than Cartman, who is still a wee roach.
>>82540095
Well his character introduction DID start wit him breaking up a holdup with zero casualties.
Alright, so how do they do this?
Plucky is a new guy who Rolf brings to the meeting, says they finally know who the poachers are that've been land grabbing all their neighbors.
So how do they go about finding the Gangrene Gang?
Do the gangs just start coming after them to take Rolf's farm and they knock them down as they come?
Do they go out and wait for them to show up in the night at a place they think is a target? Did they get a list of targets from Boogie?
Lets say they beat the names of the gangs and also this week's targets out of Boogie.
The next one on the list is [TBA]'s farm for tonight at whatever time. So they march out there and wait for the Gangrene Gang to try to steal this plot of land and surprise them "You came to the wrong farmland, motherfucker" style, only they wouldn't say that, Rolf would say something that means that.
So how does the fight go? We don't have stands for the Gangrene Gang's members yet.
>>82540674
After protecting a few farms they realize that to take down the gangs they need to go on a "Road Trip!"
Basically their first order of business is to wander the countryside beating Stand users up.
This proves to be a pretty worthless endeavor. And so they go to the Old Country Capital City.
Think of it as "JoJo does Manhattan". Stand battles in the streets. Pizzerias. Old Country fooderies. A vintage wine cellar. The Works.
THIS gets the attention of Facilier and the higher ups ( higher than like, street level. Not that high).
So more fights happen and Plucky goes Tomato.
>>82540824
OK, so before that, but after the Gangrene Fight, they're watching another plot of land, this time the land grab is supposed to happen in broad daylight.
So they're watching and watching and watching and all they see happen that day is some little girl go up to the house and leave selling cookies. At the end of the day they find out the owner was swindled out of his deeds for a box of cookies.
The Urban Rangers assemble and stage a raid on the Fireside Girls' base of operations. It's an office building, way outside the budget of girl scouts, they go there and the girls try their cute act on them.
Rolf sees through this trickery and squeezes lemons into his eyes. Toph is blind and also a girl so this cute act has no effect on her. The others are variables.
Fireside Girls get serious and a fight happens.
Should they kill them all or what? Do they have reservations about killing kids?
Did they kill the Gangrene Gang? Did they just break all their bones?
How ruthless are our Urban Rangers?
>>82541013
The gangs are small fries. And the Rangers are naive at first.
>"Don't do it anymore."
>"K"
>Protags leave.
>Gang's back at it the next day.
When they actually interrogate the gangs to figure out who's in charge, they figure out whats going on and the plot esccalates.
But they dont go around killing at first. Save that shit against the people who CAN'T change their ways.
>>82541167
So they have to fight some gangs multiple times?
So after they beat up the Gangrenes and the Firesides, they find out they're just small fries hired by the WB through a third party. They set off to the big city to find Dr. Facilier and beat the cabbage expulsions out of him. Maybe he offers them a deal to work for him since they've proven so competent at beating people before they fight.
Then Boogie tries to take over Dr. Facilier position and gets another, much more severe beating, retiring him.
At this point the Urban Rangers have taken out a handler, he might've had other gangs under him so now another handler has to step in and add them to their work load.
The Heylin Warriors are sent to deal with the urban rangers. Up to this point they've been fighting gangs with stands, now they're fighting people with stands who actually have combat experience. The fight against the warriors should take place across the city and be much more difficult.
But I digress, we still need stands for all of these gang members.
