Star visits /co/ edition
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Previous: >>77611010
First for Starco.
MOPE
>>77630832
There should be a Marco version of this
What if Tom had a sister that wanted the Diaz?
>>77631082
Then it would devolve into generic animu shenanigans
>>77631202
western animation is already heading to that point anyway
>>77631265
Still, little sister having a thing for big bro is still largely Japanese.
I love the smell of a new bread!
>>77631082
Adorable half human half demon babies after Marco gets raped
Sweet fresh bread, had to leave for a while what I miss?
>>77630788
I saw that thread. New thread took a while to make because I got hungry and decided to make a sandwich
Also someone always seems to make that same thread over and over
>>77630266
>Marco heard the screech of tires and horn blare from his bedroom while finishing up his homework on a stormy night
>What he didn't expect to hear was a loud thud or the annoyed yelping afterwards
>Opening his window to check for the source of the sounds, he spotted a humanoid shape slowly limping away from what he guessed was the scene of a hit and run
>Not one to leave someone in distress, Marco grabbed his first aid kit and two ponchos and headed out into the rain
>Hollering at the shape to see if they needed medical aid, he quickly recognized the gait and the clothing as belonging to Janna, one of his classmates
>He quickly threw her a poncho to keep the worst of the storm off her and asked if she would mind if he carried her back to his house to call for an ambulance
>She declined the ambulance, but was up for some medical treatment at his hands
>"I think I'm mostly just bruised, my backpack looks to have taken the most damage" -Janna said, showing her now ruined backpack to Marco
>"As long as you aren't in need of serious care, I think I can treat you at home well enough" -Marco said as he picked her up in his arms and headed back toward his house
>The trip back was quick and fairly uneventful, except for Janna hissing slightly if he moved her too much, or when she started hugging his neck so tightly he had to ask her to stop, or else he might pass out from lack of oxygen
>Once inside, Marco swiftly took her to bathroom and laid her down on the soft carpet while he started tending to her bruised and now starting to look swollen knee and bottom leg
>As he worked, he started asking her questions to distract her from the pain
>"Did you see who hit you? Get a license plate or anything like that?" -Marco asked as he started disinfecting her wounds, trying to get her mind on something other than the pain
>>77631521
Amarillo almost had an intervention
I want a THREESOME with these two.
>>77631521
Nothing important, just people realizing I don't have an addiction.
>>77631609
Out of context this picture is great with that comment.
>>77631602Marco kekking Star with Brittney?
>>77631578
I knew it, all that Sabrina requesting isn't normal. We should probably go through with it.
>>77631609
Wait who's that? Is she a new character from season 2?
>>77630832
In accordance with the prophecy.
Been busy outlining a Fallout crossover with Star vs: probably not much new here if you're read other expansive Fallout crossovers, but I do hope to do something original with it. Should be fairly accessible to those unfamiliar with Fallout as well.
Few if any of the original cast would be appearing, and I'm somewhat concerned about giving the characters good personalities without just making them all expys of their ancestors or something. It's especially difficult with characters with no confirmed surnamesthank you VERY much, Nefcy...
Mostly just sending out feelers for interest right now, I can always reel the scope in a bit if people don't go for it.
Anirbas for girl of the weekend when?
>>77631418
rape is bad m8
>>77631715
I'm doing a fallout fic too, though mine may not be as out there as yours.
I rise once again
Man today's theme are sure interesting with AU's.
Drawfag's art really inspire me
>>77626327
I just know what to write
This looks cute
>>77631693
Oh, thats just Miss Anirbas from... some place far away... yeah...
The other day she was saying how much we all should INVEST our time into posting more content about that nice gal Sabrina.
And i must say, I like the way Anirbas thinks!
>>77632240
>that tit squeeze
>>77632240
>Marco groping them man titties
>>77631967
I can't believe how well Anirbas is at not getting hurt, she needs to teach Sabrina how to be safe
>>77632323
>>77632243
shit wrong quote fug
>>77632243
>Oh, thats just Miss Anirbas from... some place far away... yeah...
Well with that moustache I'm guessing either Italy or Greece.
Is she Sabrina's cousin? Something seem's off about her
Someone wanted me to write some Starco for them, but I don't really know much about this show.
Is this one of those deals where I need to see the whole thing to understand it, or are there just a few key episodes that would give me a decent insight into the setup?
>>77632031
This Fallout junkie is looking forward to it! Writing is a pastime, reading is my true guilty pleasure.
>>77632243
Something about her reminds me of Gustav.
>>77632582
>>77632537
I haven't played F4 in 2 days and I'm suffering.I am kinda pissed though that all I got for killing a legendary deathclaw was a baseball bat that does 15 damage but uses only a little bit of AP.
>>77632582where's the gustav/star porn
>>77632635
I know the feel.If it wasn't a named creature it was probably just a bad loot roll. You'd think they'd weight the tables towards whatever weapon perks you had invested more levels in
>>77631555
>"I-I didn't, they came up behind me. By the time I realized I'd even been hit, the car was g-gone" -Janna said, distracted by both the pain and her close proximity to Marco, not to mention the fact that he was paying much more attention to her than he usually would
>Marco was too far in the zone, tending to Janna's wounds, to notice her blushing face
>But he did note her steadily increasing heart rate and heavier breathing
>"Janna, you don't have a cold or anything do you? Being out in the rain couldn't be good for your health, you might be coming down with something..." -Marco said as he put his hand on her forehead to check for excessive heat
>This just made Janna blush even harder, if that was possible
>"No, I'm n-not sick or anything, r-really. Please just focused on my leg, if y-you would." -Janna stammered out as she hid her head with the hood of her poncho
>Marco finished up his work, bandaging up her leg and giving her some medicine to help with the swelling and pain, telling her to take one every five to six hours if possible
>Janna nodded, then asked if she could stay over for the night, as it was the weekend and they didn't have classes tomorrow, plus she didn't want to move her leg too much in it's current state
>Marco agreed, but only for one night, as his parents were out for a few days for a romantic getaway cruise that they had won a week ago and Star was visiting some friends in another dimension
>Janna already knew this of course, as she had been keeping tabs on the residents of the Diaz household for some time, and knew that the best time to "checkup" on Marco was when he was home alone
>The plan had sort of backfired, as after she had left his windowsill to go home for the night she'd been hit by that car, but the aftermath had worked in her favor, apart from the injury that is
>This was the closest she'd ever been to Marco since they were kids, playing on the school's playground
>Well, closest she'd been when he was awake, that was
>>77632533
I wanna say a few Key episodes, which ones though is debatable. If your gonna write some Starco then you just have to watch the episodes that focus on Star and Marco alone.
>>77632785
Know any off the top of your head? So far I've only really seen the pilot and one or two random ones.
>>77632718
And it was a tough fight too, since I'm playing on hard difficulty and I didn't have my power armor on at the time. It happened while I was aimlessly walking around the goodneighbor area.
>>77632876
Didn't expect that area to have much more than raiders, gunners and super mutants. Suppose the Concord fight should have been clue enough they're everywhere.
What's your thoughts on it so far?
Also, do you have an ETA on the first instalment of your fic?
All you guys talking about doing crossovers of the show with stuff you are playing currently added to me currently replaying Dragon Quest 3I am replaying the entire series in preparation for Dragon Quest 7 3DS, I can't believe its finally getting localized!makes me want to draw the characters as Dragon Quest 3 classes.
...And then I remember I can't draw well... dammit...
>>77632876
im playing on hardest difficulty right now and few enemies even give me a problem anymore
a modded up semi-auto assault rifle with the double-shot modifier and relative perks can one or two shot most mid-level enemies
>>77633043
Last game I played was Victoria 2 so I don't think I could crossover with that, now CK2 that would work
>>77633029
Love it, my problems with it are very nitpicky ish like how I can't place walls and stuff anywhere I want or can't use a scoped weapon without automatically using the scope. Was kinda hoping for a Last of Us style thing where you can press a button to use the scope while holding down L2 otherwise it's like a non-scoped weapon.
ETA on the Fallo0ut fic I do not know as firt I still need to finish King for a Day. I honestly dont want to write anymore proper fics until the holidays are over and I get more free time.
>>77633075
My hunting rifle and combat rifle with fire bullets are my go to weapons. I'm a charismatic sniper.
>>77632533
It's kinda subtle? Well. Not really. There's an episode where they unambiguously become soulmates, but it's subtle in that a lot of the reasons so many people like the ship is how well and naturally their relationship develops from Marco running hell from her to this weird semi-codependent best friend thing.
>>77633043
Nonsense there is a reason I saved this pic, it's great.
Can you do one as marco as the F4 protag with a laser puppy as his Dogmeat?
>>77633354
>It's kinda subtle? Well. Not really. There's an episode where they unambiguously become soulmates, but it's subtle in that a lot of the reasons so many people like the ship is how well and naturally their relationship develops from Marco running hell from her to this weird semi-codependent best friend thing.
I guess I should start watching from the start then if its one of those slow developing deals.
Thanks for the help
>>77632537
I lost my juice in my fallout fic. Easy enough to put Star in the wasteland, Marco needs tuning in a bit.
Implementing magic is a bitch.
I just made the wand an holographic/energy projector.
This might be a little too autism. Hope with Hanako's burns
>>77633301
the combat rifle (with 308 receiver) is actually better for sniping than the hunter rifle
i was rolling with that for most of the game until i got that rare assault rifle. that plus a laser pistol that has a 20 percent chance to cripple the enemies legs.. has saved my life many times
>>77633043
I'll bet you're such a creep you tried to equip Nera with the slave clothes when you played Dragon Quest VI don't actually think this. Best Girl says something similar in Bakemonogatari, which I was rereading just, today and this was too good an opportunity to pass up.
>>77633301
True, I'd like a zoom-adjustment option, so a long scope can be used at closer ranges if need be. Fair enough on the Fallout fic: I'll withhold my enthusiasm for now.
Also, I'm still familiarising myself with the game for the most part, so I'm still on normal. New sniper character is definitely OP though, so I might bump up to Hard or Survival and see how I do.
>>77632864
Mewberty- This one has the most potential for Lewd stories as the premise was that Star entered Mewberty(Puberty) which ment she turned into a flying purple version of herself that shot webs and was boy crazy and Marco tries to help her overcome this. I should also mention that this is where the character Janna made her debut by flirting with Marco.
Blood Moon is the biggest Starco ship tease as the episode is about Star's ex demon boyfriend Tom inviting her to the bloodmoon ball, a sort of prom/dance in hell. Star only cares about the fun she might have while Tom tries to reconnect the with Star and have her fall for him again. However Marco is suspicious and sneaks into hell to convince Star to comeback home and chill with him. It turns out that the Bloodmoon dance is a ritual that is meant to soul bond two people who dance under it's light and Tom intends it to be him and Star, however Tom gets anal when the song he reqested isn't played and leaves Star alone to fix it. This is where Marco, in disguise, whisks Star off her feet and dances with her under the blood moons light, soulbonding them and hilariously c u c k ing Tom.
And those two are all I can remember right now( I've been sleep deprived because of exams) But I hope you can watch some more episodes and get a better idea for writing. I look forward to seeing what you cook up.
>>77633434
I enjoyed that one, though it followed the series a little too closely. Taking even a slight step back and a couple of artistic liberties opens the door to more possibilities with the story and characters.
>>77633461
I can see that, but I think sabrina would be a better fit. Unless we make her the armless one.
>>77633728
I was going with Hope because Burn chick has dead parents so I was trying to give Hope a plus even if she is burned
>>77632740
>Details details
>Needless to say, she was pretty ecstatic that he was willing to let her stay the night with him, all alone, with no parents or Star in the house
>Marco got Janna up and steady, then helped her to the living room, asking if she was hungry and if she wanted to watch some TV while he finished his homework
>She quickly agreed, telling him that she hadn't had dinner yet and sat down gratefully to channel surf while he reheated some dinner he'd had earlier
>After making sure she was good and set, he walked back up to his room to finish his homework
>After she'd eaten and grew bored of the TV, she huddled up to Marco's room where he was just finishing the last of his homework
>"Hey Marco, I'm getting tired, can I crash on your bed?" -Janna asked as she proceeded to pounce on his bed, not really giving him an option
>"Uh, I guess...I was gonna let you sleep in the guest room, but if you really want to sleep on my bed that's fine, I can use the guest bed or the couch instead..." -Marco said as he stretched and started walking out of the room to give Janna some privacy
>"You can use some of Star's night clothing if you want, she has plenty that she's never used as far as I can tell. Give me a minute and I'll hand you some." -Marco said as he walked into Star's empty bedroom
>Oh man, this is going swimmingly, except that Marco isn't going to sleep in his bed if I'm in it...think Janna think...-Janna thought to herself
>As Janna schemed, Marco had collected some night things for Janna and tossed them to her, then he collected his pajamas and was starting to make his way to the guest bedroom, when Janna asked him an odd question
>"Before you go Marco, one last thing? You don't happen to have a big teddy bear or anything lying around? I...I need one to sleep." -Janna said as she tried her best impression of Star's sad face that seemed to always work on Marco
>This request slightly confused Marco, but also made him chuckle
>>77632740
Oblivious doctor/protective/nurturing Marco is one of my favorite things. Janna was a nice mix of adorable awkwardness with enough hints of her mischievous antics to make her feel balanced.
>>77632864
>>77633686
Freeze Day and St. Olga's Reform School also have a good lewd potential.
>>77633043
Also please grace this thread with more of your artwork.
>>77633043
Try anyway, you don't have to share if you don't like the results(go at your own pace, no pressure) just keep trying.
Just imagine your favorite cheerleader cheering you on.and hopefully not getting hurt in the process. U-Unless you want her to be.
>>77633360
Here is a higher-res version of it if you ever for whatever reason wanted to bask in its many many imperfections!
>>77633921
"grace" is not the word, it's more like "soil".
Also I like Bianca and Nera equally, I usually toss a coin to decide which girl to choose when I replay it. maybe someday I will give Deborah a chance.
STARCO IS CUTE AND PERFECT!CUTE AND PERFECT!
>>77630919
There is
>>77634210
>Hop.
Hope's street name.
Anyway's it's still fantastic, I like the stuff you make.
>>77634337
Oh man, a lot of people in here will love the hell out of this.
>>77634210
Saved, nice style.I've never played any of them myself.
>>77634355
>street name.
AU where Star and Marco are in a street gang ala The Warriors.
Oh man now I made myself want a fic.
>>77634363
c-u-c-k-e-d Tom makes me so happy.
>>77634410
>Mewmans...come out and plaayyyy
>>77634457
Ludo asking his monster minions if they can dig it before getting shot by Toffe.
>>77634410
>they call him Safe Kid, he hates the name but everyone calls him that cuz he always makes sure a job goes smoothly
>and she's Wand. Put a gun in her hands and she can work magic. Tends to chew the things though.
>>77634481
Putting a little too much there
Before I close my 3DS drawing app I might as well also post this higher res pic FV liked.assuming that was FV at all that is... imposters everywhere makes one be very suspicious lately...
>>77634481
We need a larger one that expresses all the themes in the threads.
>Ship wars
>C u ck a doodle Tom
>Great fan made stories
>Manly Marco that still looses spaghetti
>General overall fun.
>>77634522
>Some say she chews on his weapon as well, though he takes the safety off for her.
>Don't say it to his face though, or you'll get the business end.
>...
>Of his weapon! I mean, he'll shoot you! With his gun!
Do we have a /sveg/ version of this yet?
>>77634652
No but someone should definitely get on that
>>77634522
>See that girl with the beanie, thats Gypsy. She'll steal the tramp stamp right off your girls behind.
>The other one next to her is Hopeless. She be fukkin crazy man.
>The one in the body cast, we simply call her Hurt. Don't be fooled though. She'll easily bring you with her to the hospital.
>>77633720
I already started on a story where Star and Marco are exploring the waste after accepting a contract to get rid of some deathclaws. But then i got fallout 4 i dont think i'll be done anytime soon.
>>77630761
This OP gives me a nice idea.
How would the many characters of the show react at discovering /sveg/?
I somehow feel the answers would be really interesting!
>>77634481
Nobody cares
>>77634715
Tom would most likely cry in a corner because he's the laughing stock of 3D beings
>>77634704
Ooh, that's a good point. This project might be a bit too big for me to commit to if I'm playing F4 as well. Might need to quit studying too, live off benefits and virtually move to Boston.
>>77634715
that stopped being interesting after DevintArt's third year
>>77634652
Yes please somone do this. I can just picture it.
>Starco shippers are the ones fighting.
>Manna shippers are the ones pointing at the commotion.
>Jarco shippers are in the far right corner, barely in view.
>Sabco and Mope fans are the most chilled.
>That one guy with the shield speaking to those sitting is Harem Fag, preaching his words.
>Stom and Tomco shippers are dead on the floor.
>And the one Studo guy is hidden in the darkness.
>>77634704
But yeah, you really should continue. I'm counting on you!
>>77634715
>Marco: Disgust
>Star: Intrigued
>Jackie: Oooh memes.
>Janna: I found my people.
>Hope: Wow people like me
>Tom: Fuck all you sons of bitches
>Ferg: I'm not gay for Alphonso.
>Alphonso: We need more Ferg posting.
>Sabrina: Her computer explodes as she launches her web browser, sending her to the hospital.
>>77634869
Great man.
>>77634652
All the statues are replaced with statues of Star, Janna, Jackie, Hope, and Sabrina.
>>77634652
>That one guy on the top left is Harem supporter anon
all this Sabrina getting hurt stuff is making me associate her with Gil from the Simpsons
>>77634869
Did Sabrina use Internet Explorer?
>>77635028
Yes.Poor girl was asking for it
>>77634982
That's stupid
>>77633832
>"You need a stuffed animal to sleep soundly? I didn't expect that of you Janna, and sadly we don't have anything that might meet your request. I've got a old nightlight of mine if it'll help though..."- Marco said, trying not to laugh but sympathizing with her as well.
>He'd needed a nightlight to sleep until he was around ten or eleven, a fact he planned to take to his grave
>"Oh that's too bad...p-perhaps you could be my teddy b-bear, just for tonight?" -Janna said as she hid her face with his pillow as she started blushing again
>Marco blanched, unsure if he'd heard her correctly. Was Janna...flirting with him? Asking him to bed?
>Of the unexpected things that had happened so far this night, this one was the most surprising to him.
>"Please...Marco, d-don't make me ask again, I promise it won't get w-weird or anything." -Janna pleaded, hoping against hope that her last ditch effort wouldn't not be in vain.
>"I-uh, that is...if it'll help you sleep, and it doesn't get...odd, then I guess it's ok..." -Marco said as he tried to weight the pros and cons of sleeping in the same bed as Janna, even if their clothing stayed on
>Being somewhat tired himself, and convinced that if Janna tried to blackmail him about it later, he had some insurance just in case...Marco agreed
>He left the room to allow Janna to change, and he headed out to the bathroom to change as well
>After a few minutes of getting ready, Marco slunk back into his room, as Janna was slipping under the covers
>Both teens looked at each other nervously for a few seconds, then Marco turned off the lights and slipped under the covers as well, on the opposite side of Janna
>As per their agreement, Marco scooted closer to Janna with his back toward her, as her injured leg limited her mobility somewhat, and he may have had an erection as well
>>77635209
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>>77635209
Is dorbz.
>>77635209
Yes, now its getting even better.
>>77632179
>Normal day for Marco and Star. Watching some tv while snacking on those Mexican goodness
>"Yo marco! Pass me that cheesy Tortillas "
>Marco just grunt and pass the plate
>"Ya know Marco...I just love having a peaceful day"
>"Staaar, dont jinx it"
>Marco say playfully
>"Oh relax Marco, who do you think wi-"
>SUDDENLY PORTAL and from it, a blond girl with angelic aura appeared
>"Greeting Princesses! We are the representative of our most highly decorated educational school, St.Olga's reform school"
>Star instinctively scream.
>"Noooo! You cant take me there!"
>"My,my. A resistance. Such a wild princess we have"
>The lady snap her finger and a silent masked man with brown army jacket and red hood suddenly stand beside her
>"Sol, would you please?"
>The soldier nod and suddenly rushed at Star, only to be blocked by Marco. Marco quickly uppercut him but it only nudged his mask while Sol expertly dodge.
>"It seems we have a challenging princess here. Just relax and you will be as perfect as me"
>The Lady smile while she stand as perfect and a marble statue. Sol nod and remove his mask and hood, revealing a sharp, emotionless and disciplined face of a scarred cold blooded soldier.
>"Danger rating:Maximum. Permission to perform at maximum"
>He spoke like a well oiled machine
>"Granted"
>Suddenly, his face is plastered with a brutal smile and merciless glee as he cracked his hands. A red light glow eerily from his left eye.
>"Oh no...be on your guard Sta-Uff"
>Before Marco could do anything, Sol's fist hit him like a truck but thankfully only damaging his guts.
>"MARCOOOOO!"
>Star scream and grip her wand as she faced the monstrous soldier
>"MARCO! HALT!"
>Strangely, the voice comes from the lady herself and the soldier ceased to move. The Lady approached Star like a floating vampiress.
>"Tell me...Is this Princess Mowin's home?"
>"uh...no. This is Marco Diaz's house"
>"I...was...wrong...?"
>>77632582
Why was he measuring the Diaz's?
>>77634317
I don't get this "Star is short" meme that keeps showing up. At least I haven't noticed that she's particularly shorter than Marco in the show?
>>77635416
>"Uhh...Lady...?You ok?"
>"Yes...No...Yes...This is a nightmare...Must punish self...not perfect"
>Slowly her angelic face became filled with mixed emotions, mostly negative.
>"Yes...must...be..perfect....a..perfect...Star..."
>Star slowly back out as the lady's face became mad
>"More...perfect..LESSON..HAHAHA"
>And a pink heart shape apperared on the Lady's cheek. Her perfect eyes now glint with a flowing madness
>"NEED...REFORM...NEED...PERFE-"
>A slap echoes as Sol gently comfort her. After a minute of awkward stare, they hug each other...but more like a restraining hug than a comfort hug.
>"Shh...Sleep now"
>Sol gently whisper with a loose disciplined tone and the Lady smile like a mask before she close her eyes. Sol carry her in fireman's carry. Before they left, Sol look at Star and bow.
>"Please forgive our intrusion,Princess Star Butterfly and Marco Diaz"
>With that, the portal closed. Leaving a horrified Star to ponder at the Lady and The Soldier's fate
Well enjoy. Was planning to have the old main ship couple met each other. Care to share me on the idea of what they are gossiping?
>>77635416
Aaaaah Yes it begins.
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>>77635209
Is this one gonna end in Starco outta nowhere too like many Janna green texts before?Just kidding, you can give it any ending you want anon. I am loving it so far, but if you could keeo it cute that would be really appreciated.
>>77635756
Damn...Did you have that ready in case of green dont you?
You sly devil you
>>77635209
>Once they got close enough, Janna slowly draped her arm over Marco's side and cuddled him, like the hypothetical teddy bear that she didn't actually have at home
>"Are...are you good Janna? How's your l-leg feel?" -Marco whispered as he tried to not think about the fact that he could feel her small, but perky breasts poking his back, or that one of her legs was wrapped around his own
>"My leg feels great, along with other...parts, thanks for...for asking Marco. You make a great teddy...bear..." -Janna said as she yawned and, smiling, quickly fell asleep clutching Marco to herself
>Marco lay there for a time, finding himself enjoying the comfort of Janna's touch far more than he thought he would
>She's so warm...do I smell honeysuckle? I never noticed that Janna smelled good...when did this happen? I...guess this isn't so bad...-Marco thought as he fell asleep, holding Janna's hand in his own
And done; went full on Manna with a happy/cute ending. I thought about lewd, but I like cute too much, and I've never written anything lewd, so that probably would have messed me up anyway.
>>77635756
So St.Olga's imposes the Starco dogma!?
I knew it... there was something off about all those "CUTE AND PERFECT" chantings... there had to be something sinister behind it...
>>77635746
"Tis better to be fussy than be called a hussy." Haha, okay maybe not that exactly, but probably some kind of brainwash-y limerick. I think you did well in capturing how unhinged/creepy these two would be in person. I like that you had them interact with the originals to drive those differences in demeanor home.
I should've been a bit more patient before posting this >>77635756
Thanks for the greentext writeranon
>>77635892
Yay for cute ending!
Loved it a lot anon. for me: Cute > Lewd always. so I appreciate a lot you went that route.
Here, have some Manna as thanks.
I just watched this show, I didn't not expect the last episode to turn out the way it did.
What the fuck was with that sudden plot?
>>77634481
Hater
>>77636011
Your welcome; someone asked for a Manna fic in the last thread or the one before it, and my last story probably should have been Manna, but I turned it into a Jilted Janna/Happy Star story for some reason. This is my attempt to make up for it I guess.
>>77635756
I suddenly feel the urge to cast Sol as Ira Gamagoori.
>>77636133
So it WAS you!
Don't sweat it too much, is your story after all and we all enjoy it just the same. just give them the ending you really want to give them and dont fall for peer pressure.
In the end is all about having fun doing it.
>>77635892
Good stuff.
Almost done with my finale for King for a day, being busy and having writers block is a bad combo.
>>77636192
True, but Janna doesn't get quite as much love in story form it seems. I'm guilty of it as well, so I figured I'd fix it with one more one story. She seems apt to be written as doing bad things, having bad things done to her, or not getting a happy ending very much.
>>77636221
Thanks RH
>>77636227
We look forward to it WF
>>77636299
The cute Janna greentext this general didn't even realise it needed.
Think it's about time for me to turn in. Nearly 9am: I swear it's you guys' fault I'm not functionally nocturnal. I'll be missing uni on Monday again, won't I?
I know I said I'd be writing today, but it was more planning than anything else. I'll get started on the Fallout story tomorrow, and maybe a few quick greens of my own so I can keep my writefag hat.
>>77635892
This made me feel good, awesomely adorable story.
>>77635975
And thanks for the drawing and reading drawanon, Most of the your art and discussion of that art help me visualized and thus they are born.
>>77636180
More like Guts to me
Quiet mechanical soldier with a thirst for violence but a hidden softness inside
>>77636380
Take yer time RH, this thread will probably die sometime tomorrow and maybe we can make a last thread that'll go into Monday or Tuesday like last weekend perhaps.
Oh, and good night. I'm going to bed in the next half hour too. Maybe try and oversleep tonight and go to bed early tomorrow so that you can wake up on time come Monday?
>>77636299
I really appreciate the cute Manna. as you say it was overdue. thanks again for writing it.
>>77636380
Sweet dreams, RH! Don't worry we will keep the thread warm while you're gone.
>>77636530
No problem Amarillo; glad you and a few people enjoyed it. I sorta decided to give myself a trip, as it seems /sveg/ doesn't yell at tripfags as much as the rest of 4chan.
And I'll post my pastebin that has almost all the past greentexts I've done.
http://pastebin.com/u/AP123
Night ya'll, and enjoy yourselves.
How many seasons do you think we can expect of this?
>>77636664
just one more
>>77635889
Haha Maaaybe. I know I wanted to make an image to showcase how their soulbond comes into play. Basically lots of synchronized talking that may or may not be off-putting.
>>77635899
It was the perfect thing to say considering the school's overall goals. The Starco in this AU is pretty messed up/corrupted so I couldn't resist using something familiar for sinister effect.
>>77636180
>Picture Sol's mass fluctuating as the situation demands.
Good lord.Who will be his Mako?
>>77636451
I can get behind this as well.
>>77636609
Humm....Should I give myself a name or just be anonymous writefag?
dear writefags
upload your shit to A)3
I'm sick of there being only ten fics on it and 9 of them being tomco
>>77636713
>to showcase how their soulbond comes into play
I...This is good. This is damn good.
I feel my brain create new scenarios
>>77636725
A)3?
Was dat mane?
>>77636749
finger slipped, AO3, Archive of Our Own
>>77636609
/sveg/ is just... weird.
I have lurked /co/ for a long time and /sveg/ is the most baffling thing I have ever seen on this board. is like a piece of bizarro generals.
Here people is nice, fetish and lewd stuff is kept to an acceptably low rate, and unlike other generals where people with usernames are usually the most hated here they may be the most loved (aside me of course) and people always get happy when one pops up in the thread. it's just so damn weird...
Yes this is an anonymous board so all this is technically wrong, could be seen as a huge circle jerk. But I would not have it any other way.
/sveg/ is love, and that is perfectly fine.
>>77636664
I want 3 or 4
>>77636778
You mean the links on the OP?
Hmm...Let me collect all my stories. I Rarely save em
but if you mean different one, please post link
>>77636805
don't get your heads too far up your ass, only shit lies that way
>>77636831
this place
http://archiveofourown.org/
>>77636805
I think because people are here for adorable shit and not for lewd fantasiesmost of the people anyway
plus we draw in more women, so there's a balance between content for men and women. Making /sveg/ cozy as fuck
>>77636805
I would argue it's this way because Star Vs. isn't as popular as the other shows with generals.
The bigger the show, the worse the fanbase.
Star Vs. fanbase is small, chill and low-key, just like the general
>>77636908
I imagine once the show ends /sveg/ will just kinda fade away quietly and most of /co/ won't even notice it's gone or was even ever there.
Kinda sad.
>>77636844
>9 pages and 161 works
Oh wow....so uhh...how do i post the pastebin?
>>77636940
wew lad, don't give me thoughts about death
I'm in /sveg/ for comfy times
An Idea popped into my head. Would you guys be interested in Marco going pic related during the events of Storm the castle? If any of you are interested I might get done next week.
>>77636985
So like what, he lets the arm out but forces it to eat just monsters? Would cause a lot of conflict within Star after her personal crisis with Mewnipendance Day.
>>77637000
Something like that. I haven't started writing yet because I'm still thinking of the flow. I
I wonder if when Gravity Falls ends, if Star Vs. will gain more popularity and traction. Like a spillover of fans, who want something else to fill the void and just hop to the next thing. Maybe it will just always be a show that never really gets all that big and will forever be Randy Cunningham tier in terms of popularity.
>>77636985
hell yes.
>>77637031
considering all the hiatuses GF has had, any spillover has probably already happened
>>77636985
I'm interested.
>>77637031
Based on what I've heard about Gravity Falls General, a spill over of fans from them would be very cancerous to /sveg/.
>>77637031
Whatever spillover will be short lived
I believe many would be turned off by the differences between the two
>>77637075
That sort of happened with the season finale
Fourth and final chapter to King for a Day is here. Aka the Star thinks Marco proposes fic that should have ended 3 chapters ago.
Ch.4 (New/Finale)
http://pastebin.com/gq1di0J0
My pastebin if you want to read the last 3 chpaters:
http://pastebin.com/u/WriteFriend
Well that's that, think Im gonna go to bed now, its almost 2am and I work tomorrow although granted I'm not due due in till noon.
Hope you guys liked the story.
>S2 will focus on Star starting to mature
Will her shit taste in men finally be cured?
>>77637150
yes, but she'll get shit taste in women
>>77637150
Only after dating Oskar and giving Tom another chance!
>>77636941
Right...here is my Greentext stuff.
http://pastebin.com/iDNNrGkW
It seems that i have to hunt down the rest of my work on the archive
Dont worry, ill not namefag...just this once
>>77637150
>S2 will focus on Star starting to mature
I'm a little freaked out by this. I don't want my Star to change. She is perfect the way she is.
Ferguson a cute. CUTE
>>77630761
Watching this show for the first time. So far I love it, except for one detail.I don't like Star's voice
>>77637177
You mean after Tom challenges Marco to a duel because misunderstandings
>>77637720
No
That sounds fucking stupid
>>77636805
>/sveg/ is love, and that is perfectly fine.
I LOVE this general. I've been lurking all about /co/ for YEARS, and for the most part never felt incouraged enough to post anything — anonymity or not.
Then I discovered /sveg/, started thinking about writing fanfics, and here I am, posting FOR THE SECOND DAY STRAIGHT. Also, yesterday I made alewdgreentext…
You all are doing something VERY right: please, for the love of goodness, just continue!
>>77637114
Loved this miniseries: sweet and comfy! Keep on, WriteFriend!
>>77637723I know
>>77637150
>S2 will focus on Star starting to mature
Wait, has this been confirmed?
why was her wand powered by miniature magical ghost unicorns
why did an italian-speaking non-ghost magical unicorn show up to replace the first unicorn
>>77637785
It wasn't a ghost before the whispering spell
>>77637785
>why was her wand powered by miniature magical ghost unicorns
because unicorns are one of the most potent sources of magic
>why did an italian-speaking non-ghost magical unicorn show up to replace the first unicorn
Because the duty of powering the royal mewni wand is a role passed down through a certain line of unicorns. They are italian because it creates a certain association with cheesy 'bodice ripper' novels, making the whole situation more absurd, that is to say, it was a joke.
>>77637785
This is a cartoon. Don't think too much.
Here, have this lewd Star.
>>77637802
what do you think her mother told her about the whispering spell, anyway? She had no idea it would make the wand self destruct but clearly remembered it as the first spell she was ever taught.
or was it just a spell to talk to the unicorn inside, and she had to specifically tell it to kill the wand and itself?
>>77636805
It's not often pedophiles feel so welcomed and comfortable, unless they're surrounded by other pedophiles to normalize their mental disorders.
>>77637821
Mom probably told her that it was a spell that she should only use whenever she felt the wand was in danger of falling in the wrong hands, and since she was so confident that would never happen with Ludo, she probably forgot it. Then Toffee came along and she didn't recall it ever existing, until he reminded her.
>>77637868
>>>/tumblr/
>>77637718
Many many people don't like Star's voice at the start but it ends growing on them.
I also was weirded out by it at the start but nowadays I can't imagine her with any other voice.I can say the same for the intro, I borderline hated it at the start, now I love it, is like the boss battle theme in Blue Dragon, each listen makes me like it more despite my initial hatred.
>>77638029
Intro just weirded me out, to peppy, can't understand the lyrics
>>77634980
>Implying there's only one
>>77638029
she really doesnt sound her age
i grew to not be distracted by it but it took me maybe 4 episodes not to be
>>77638048
I felt that when I saw it awhile agoit is cute sometimes, I do admit
Oh dear, I'm very late.
I wanna nut in her ass
>>77638065
Well? Post the original/
>>77638065
Nice: IVNIHA anon putting his seal of approval on the thread!
>>77637217
Oh well... time for me to write again.
So /svtfoe/, would you like another AU or old couples?
So is the Jarco fandom really dead?
I barely see Jarco or even Jackie stuff being posted much in the threads anymore, saddens me a bit.
We should post some Jackie.
>>77638065
I sometimes wake up in a cold sweat and wonder "what if IWNIHA anon doesn't wanna nut in her ass anymore!?" then I see you post and get so reassured that everything is still okay with the world.
>>77638113
Go on, SadAnon, please!I am NEVER ready for the feels that the "old/funeral fics" give me, but that doesn't mean I don't enjoy them!
>>77638065
>I hovered over the picture for a brief second expecting the spoiler to go away
>>77638126
So uhh...which one bro?
Old Couple will be how the three ships meet together.
The AU will be more about Lady Star and Soldier MarcoThanks FC
>>77638155
I'm partial to the old couple stories, but feel free to write what inspires you the most right now!
>>77638073
>>77638145There is a SvtFoE thread on /aco/: just sayin'…
>>77638122
With the deepening hiatus we're going on a roulette of flavors of the girls, The thread before last had a bunch of Jarco stuff so don't worry it's there. But you've gotta accept that it's hard to work with scraps for so long. Hold strong till season 2.
>>77638155
Any of your stories would be good, but if you're looking for specifics a cuter old Manna would be fun.
Will we see her smile like this in the series?
>>77638187
Hm...fug it. Ill try to do both then.
>>77638203
hmm...Ill give ya a choice:
>Newlywed Manna
>Parenthood Manna
>Grandparent Manna
>>77638122
People realized just how boring Jackie is in comparison to Star and Janna. This is why she gets the least amount of art and stories. It's kind of funny considering she is Marco's main love interest.
>>77638310
If only Daron and crew made Jackie interesting.
>>77638310
>>77638350
I think that, from a story perspective, Jackie MUST be almost a blank slate: when she interacts with the main characters, the focus immediately centers on Marco and his spaghetti. For that reason, she's more of a plot device, for now; and the fact that she never got any amount of real depth is a deliberate choice of the authors, IMHO.
Even I, when writing fanfics, am really, REALLY hesitant about developing her persona (despite having done so with many other characters from the series), and that's because I feel that, being Marco one of the POV characters in SvtFoE, for us to get to know her better than Marco does, kind of changes the narrative dynamics. And Marco getting to really know Jackie should be an important part of 2nd season, if you ask me.
…And stuff.
>>77638048
She's a 14 year old girl who recently gone through puberty/mewberty, of course she doesn't sound her age, she's growing into her age.
>>77638238
ere we go
>Another peaceful day in the Diaz's home. Star and Marco was just munching some tortillas after the homework.
>"Sure is peaceful around here..."
>"Star, you remember what happen when you say tha-"
>Zap! A portal opens. Marco facepalmed while Star look at the portal with curiosity and excitement. Then her curiosity and happy demeanor fade as Lady Star of St.Olga appeared with Sol beside her.
>"Good day our altern-"
>"OH NO! ITS THE REPRESENTATIVE OF ST.OLGA REFORMATORY SCHOOL FOR WAYWARD PRINCESS! AAAHHHH"
>"Star! for god sake!"
>Marco tried to comfort Star while their alt.self just watch in curiosity
>"It seems Princess Star here seems excited to enroll in our great St.Olga school. Just like most of the princesses we meet"
>Lady clap happily with large angelic smile while Sol just stare at them, emotionless
>"Uhh...sooo...other Star?"
>Marco break the ice as he hug Star, slowly calming her down
>"You may call me Lady Star if you wish, Marco Diaz, or just Lady and for Sol here...just Sol"
>Sol grunt
>"So..uh. Lady, what are you doing here?"
>Lady and Sol look at each other.
>"Well, Marco Diaz. We are here to redeemed ourselves for our last *cough* mistake *cough*"
>Marco lift an eyebrow and Sol Mirrored him
>"So we wish to...spend, yes, spend some time with you both to 'understand' the everyday life of a wild princess and we wish to partake some 'activities' that both Princess Star and you, Marco Diaz, daily activities"
>Something stink here but Lady's smiling doll face unnerve Marco more.
>"What say you Marco Diaz?"
>"Alright"
>"better finish this quickly" Marco thought.
>>77638310
I wouldn't say main love interest. She is Marco's infatuation, there is nothing other than looks drawing Marco to Jackie, that's the point. Sometimes crushes don't even have a reason for existing other than "damn, she looks good! Good for me! I want her to be with me!" even though there is nothing virtually between them that would stick.
Marco and Star is the real sticking glue so far, they're two best friends, they hang out virtually all the time, they have many things in common: interest in Nachos, fighting monsters, having fun together, enjoying each others company, caring about each other's safety that they would put themselves in danger to keep each other safe.
>>77638410
Nicely promising setup, please go on!
>>77638410
This is going to be awesome, How long until Lady and Sol are making out and humping each other in front of their alternate selves?
>>77637114
>Ch.4 (New/Finale)
Dammit! I was looking forward to the royal wedding!
>>77638410
>"So...what do you wish to know, Lady me?"
>Star grin, already back to her old self, and Lady just chuckle at her
>"Lady will do just fine, Princess Star Butterfly, and we wish to know how you children have 'fun' "
>"Fun?"
>Marco say while his soldier self keep staring at him, sometimes mimicking his expression and other time blankly grin at him. Very weird...
>"Well Lady, We have ple-"
>"We are the masters of fun!"
>Star Cuts Marco off
>"Especially with this!"
>She take out a dancing pad and magically connect them to the TV.
>"D-D-Dance Dance Revolution"
>The TV scream while magical disco ball magically appeared in the room.
>"A dance? Interesting..."
>Lady hold her hand menacingly while Sol just look unimpressed.
>"This game is about synchronizing your partner's move and become one"
>Marco explain and Lady suddenly giggled like a child
>"Oooh...sound like fun!"
>The game began with Marco and Star first. Choosing a funky music, they limber their body and get ready to dance
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=odoCxKYPFtg&index=6&list=PL030E4B56DF083D7A
>"Congratulation! a perfect score!"
The announcer happily report. Star and Marco look tired and sweaty but a pride in their face. Only Lady clap with scripted enthusiast.
>"It is our turn then?"
>"Knock yourself out, other me"
>A strange smile creep on Lady's face as she signal Sol to follow her. As they stand at the pad, Lady let out a command
>"Sol, activate Soul Bond "
>"Affirmative"
>A red light glowed from their chest in a few seconds.
>"Link complete"
>"Link complete"
>Like a stringed dolls,their movement mirrors each other and worst of all
>"Congratulation! a perfect score!"
>>77638498How do you know my plans?
>>77638582
>"Sol, activate Soul Bond "
Star and Marco have got to comment on this
>How do you know my plans?
I'm spying on you from across the street
Its not even NSFW
>>77638630
well, not too much, at least
>>77638630
Not into lolis, but this is pretty good
>>77638310
I will not lie, Jackie is THE reason I have a writer's block right now, I was writing a chapter focusing on her and it's SO DIFFICULT.
So yes I can see why writers and artists could find dificult working with her. we know so little about her. which is Ironic we also know very little about Janna but her short appearances where filled with personality so she is a fan favorite as result.
>>77638582
>And they didnt even break a sweat.
>"Perfect"
>"Perfect"
>They both grin at the same time. Everything they did, they did it as if their souls are combined. Just like seeing a person living on a mirror
>"As always"
>"As always"
>Star and Marco was a bit creep-ed out.
>"So...uh, Lady?"
>They both look at Marco
>"What's with that 'soul bond'?"
>They giggled at Marco and puffed their chest with pride
>"By the blessing of the Red Moon, our souls are bounded"
>"By the blessing of the Red Moon, our souls are bounded"
>They look at each other and touch their chests
>"Everything is shared"
>"Everything is shared"
>"oh.."
>"You too have them. A great harmony but you must be perfect to master it"
>"You too have them. A great harmony but you must be perfect to master it"
>Awkward silence as Marco and Star stare at each other, both blush a bit. Finally, Star break the ice.
>"S-So, next song!"
>The Lady and The soldier nod as Star ramp up the difficulty.
>...
>Perfect Score! again!
>Star and Marco slowly lost the game while Lady and Sol beat them like a child play and without even a single sweat.
>"Man, you guys are...good"
>"Perfect"
>"Perfect"
>Marco and Star just sigh before Star plead
>"Could you guys pleeease stop that?"
>Lady and Sol look at each other as red light began to glow again. Sol became emotionless once more and Lady's face return to its creepy perfect doll like angle face.
>So...What do you guys do for fun?"
>Marco ask
>>77638582
>>"Sol, activate Soul Bond "
Tsk, cheaters! Wait until Star and Marco learn how to weaponize THEIR Soul Bond!…
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IpKDUCR9IeM
>>77638711
Just my 2 cents: if you really want to write Jackie, even if you don't plan on spelling out explicitly what's her deal, just design her personality from scratch, and keep that in mind while you write. Sure, it probably won't fit canon once season 2 hits and we get to know more about her, but who cares, right?
>>77638717
>"Oh, just a normal interaction"
>Lady smile
>"Example?"
>"Sol, come here..."
>Sol nod and approach her. Breaking the very private distance and almost face to face, Lady slowly unbuttoned his trench coat. With a very strange smile, she whisper
>"Sol, playtime"
>Sol began to grab Lady's ass and chest as Lady herself kiss his nick. Star and Marco was just in the corner, surprised and strangely scared at the same time.
>Lady just giggle as Sol mechanically grab her into an intimate hug where they star to make out. Star and Marco just sat on the floor like a statue...they dont know what their ald dimension are doing in this strangely perverse and bizarre ritual.
>Thankfully, they stopped and quickly fixed their clothes.
>"It is fun is it not?"
>A mischievous smile on the lady's face but both Star and Marco have no comment.
>"Oh dont worry, if we got bored, we play other game like.."
>"N-no its fi-"
>Marco tried to stop them but its too late.
>"Sol-no...Marco~ bonding time~"
>Like a switch, Sol's face slowly lose its discipline posture and quickly replaced with a hungering smile. He quickly pouch Lady to the couch while she giggled in excitement. Marco and Star quickly take refuge behind the couch as firework of clothes spread around the couch.
>Animalistic grunt and moans filled the room. Thankfully the Diaz are having vacation somewhere. Marco and Star hug and comfort each other as they waited for this to end. They feel disgusted yet aroused.
>After few hours, it finally stop and in few seconds, Lady's head popped up from above the couch, already dressed.
>"Is it not fun?"
>She innocently smile as the two victim weakly nod.
>"Ah,yes. Thank you for sharing with us your 'fun'. We hope to visit again. Au Revoir"
>They heard the sound of portal opening and closing.
>Marco sigh in relief while Star is still traumatize.
>"p-please dont come b-back"
Whew,finally. Enjoy folk while I recharge
>>77638630
>>77638637
>>77638642
Not to be a party pooper, but our IWNHA-bro started using the censored versions becuase mods were deleting his posts. We want /sveg/ to survive through the hiatus, so we better behave as properly as possible...I know we will not, but let's pretend we will...
>>77638922
Good work, anon!Lol, I think the only reason Lady and Sol were there, was that they were just looking for a place where to pork, after all!
>>77638973
Who know FC...
After all, they are definitely looking for some "fun" to learn
>>77638793
I made up Hope's entire personality for a fic so I am no stranger to pull stuff outta my arse to fill a fic.
The thing is that with Hope at least I had something to go on, like her parents stuff. the fact that she is Janna's best friend and the fact that she wears makeup when all the other girls in her class don't.
With Jackie is more difficult. she was featured in "What I Really Want" and I gave her a very plain personality, caring friendly and with a slowly growing interest in becoming Marco's friend and easily amused..
But to make an entire chapter from her POV, that's way more difficult. I will eventually manage to finish it but damn if it won't be hard.
>>77639024
Good luck on your effort, Amarillo! I'll be looking up for your fic!
>>77638931
ugh, really? it's no worse than a bikini. is that also no longer acceptable? I see underwear pics on here all the time, i dont get it. the nudity is implied, not shown.
How much longer for this hiatus?
>>77637808
Your ban sacrifice is noted brave Anon.
>>77637114
>>no gag about ancestral weapons and Raphael insisting Marco give Star his great-grandfather's regimental sabre
Well I'm a little disappoint.
>>77639231
>ban sacrifice
I'm right here
It turns out nacho cheese has an unusual effect on Mewman biology.
It increases their fertility levels ten fold.
>>77639231
I miss the old days when people didn't call the gap between seasons a hiatus. I get that it's technically true, but only in the sense that the weekly gap between episodes of a running show is also a hiatus. In ye olden days it was only a hiatus if it's stopped mid-season or the show was still awaiting renewal.
I blame Disney and Gravity Falls for people throwing that fucking word around too much. 'Hiatus' is /co/'s 'autistic'.
>>77639288
I remember I was banned for months the last time I posted that pic..go fig
>>77639330
Wow someone needs to take a hiatus from posting.
>>77639345
That's actually the correct use of the word. Bravo.
>>77639318
And jalapeños are a powerful aphrodisiac to Mewmans.
>>77637114
After researching what Earth queen attire looks like, Star shows up to the next renesance faire dressed like Freddy Mercury.
>>77639427
10/10 anon
Everytime I look at Star I get the urge to masturbate but once my pants are down I can't start.
>want to continue Jarco fic
>have no idea how to write Jackie or Marco's parents (yes that is relevant)
Being in the House of Jarco is suffering
>>77639444
>I am gonna have so much sex with myself
>>77639453
Try masturbating with your pants still up.
>>77639332
I'm posting it like every two thread and I'm fine.
>>77639491
The Asian girl in blue. She is new flavor of the weekend.
>>77639503
I have no time for waifus, anon. I'm just here for Starco.
>>77639503
Sorry, did you say the flavor of the weekend is Manna?
>>77639529
>>tier 2 ship
I prefer Janna being an infamous hellion to secretly crushing on anyone.
Until she meets an dominates Tom that is.
This show is predictable as fuck
>>77636664
I think there's a pretty good chance of getting 3, and I hope we get 4
But probably it won't get more than that
>>77639458
Writing adults in this series, IMHO, is somehow alleviated by how "simple" and "childish" they are depicted anyway: Marco's parents, principal Skeeves, and even Mewni's Royals are not really serious at all (yeah, even Queen Butterfly is subtly silly, at least to me). So if you're struggling to depict them and their interactions, don't feel afraid to play the facetious card. Well, that's how I would do it, anyway.
Good luck on your writing efforts!
>>77639604
Too soon.
>>77635622
She seems to be like, an inch or two shorter in some shots (the hug at the end of Storm the Castle is the first example I can think of, but there were other moments too) but most of the time you can't even tell there's a difference.
A few people in the fandom seem to have a thing for size differences, though, and so that became a thing that happens in fanart a lot now. Kind of like how some art draws Star with freckles.
>>77631609
>>77631654
>>77630832
To be honest I have been shipping those two since I first saw the show.
end my life
>>77640182
Holy shit, calm down man, I'm here for you.
The hiatus is killing everybody
>>77640182
No need togo nuts!
>>77640210
Hey Virgin, I don't know if your busy already but since I believe your the guy who writes the darker stuff, I'd like to ask if it was possible for you to write up a proper Marco c-u-c-ks Tom fic. I know you prefer sad Star, but we really don't a fic that focuses plainly on Tom's suffering.
>>77640306
I must refuse your request. Marco c-u-c-king Tom is honestly very little to work with, 2k words at best.
Besides, I already said that when I'm done with my masterpiece I'm transiting to short, non-edgy stuff since it's easier to write. Speaking of my incoming fic, if you dig c-u-c-king but also similar fetishes, you will enjoy it.
By the way, I just reached 50 pages in office word and I'm working on the last chapter now. I should be able to deliver it for the next weekend, but it'll be polished and spell checked.
We need a real kek tom fic where star and he are a couple and then she fucks Marco in front of him
