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Tits on a plate edition

This is a general about slave trainer games and the creation of games where you play as a male and dominate women. Discussion about games not being created here is also acceptable as long as it's related to the topic at hand(ie playing a male and dominating women).

If you're working on a game and want to list a pastebin here speak up please.

Major Versions of the game (BT is necessary for mods):Silver edition and Russian edition are the most active
Each of these is a standalone game, not a mod for any of the others. BASICALLY the links to download the games are in this pastebin.
http://pastebin.com/kA21ncJK

Maverick wrote a guide for scripting. Shows how to write/structure scenes for coders. Good for idea-guys & script-writers:
http://pastebin.com/gRyrGgDt

Info on character generators:
http://pastebin.com/CaevjctD

Links to other games
http://pastebin.com/7CHVFKWM

Witch trainer dress up thing(back by popular demand)
http://stregac.github.io/trainers_image_library/

Korra Trainer/Breaking Bat/Incredibles trainer/Tifa trainer/Momcest trainer/Ben ten trainer/(Anon projects not related to Witch Trainer)
http://pastebin.com/K5NC3Tk1

Contact info for major contributors:
https://quip.com/I2f8AaPEEr0a
Some of these people are looking for writers and artists. If you're interested mention it

Report & ignore shitposters, people that scream proxyfag/samefag/waifu/waifufag, people that post beast and hamplanet attention whores
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First for loli demons
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>>467707
More demons
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>>467713
That's a vampire
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>>467737
Tropic probably still calls them furry
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>>467743
They have fangs.
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>>467743
Goddamnit tropic why are you so stupid.
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>>467747
no u
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>>466307
You know, I'm just not that interested in text based erotica games anymore. When I was a kid I was huge fan of Infocom games like Beyond Zork, but there's something very satisfying about actually "seeing" the central character. As for waiting to find an artist, I'm not interested in that. I'd much rather build the game first, then let anyone who wants to mod the game in any way they wish. For now, anyone who wants the source file for Shadynasty(xcf or psd) can email me.

>>466748
I've been out of the loop mostly. Would someone mind filling me in. Did Trainerfan finish his Korra Trainer?

>>466800
See my answer above.

>>466809
>Especially since 4 Houses is also a fucking UE project.

I would hesitate to call it my project. I wrote a little for it, that's all. Most of the work is being done by much more skillful people. Mo, Artguy, and Rook are set to make something really fun.

>>466827
If you can masturbate to hands...well, let's just say I prefer the alternative.

>>466961
>I don't think I can ever reach the level that UE is at
>I mean look at those hands
Would you LOOK at them! They're magnificent!

>>467069
>microcephaly
This is the word of the day. Well, that and gigantopithecus.

>>467138
>I'll begin unfucking the script asap.
Not as erotic as it sounds, I'm sure.
Be sure to let me know if any of you have any great story ideas or unique favors you'd love to see in Bitch Breaker. I'll check back later tonight.
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>>467830
i wish you used god damn layer folders when compiling your art
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>>467830
That cut-off extra-index finger tho.
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>>467830
>>467861
Also, that right boob is in dire need of emergency medical attention. shit's breaking newton's laws.
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>>467830
I love the crack addict dyke in need of money seeing a 4 inch uncircumcised penis for the first time look.
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>>467855
I showed the you the Necronomicon, don't complain that it's bound in literal ass.

>>467861
So hot, right?

>>467865
Like a some kind of emergency cum rub? I'm afraid we've been over that. My cum still looks like frosting.

>>467869
That's exactly what I was going for.
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>>467896
>>467830
Is this a troll?

Like is someone pretending to make their own ST game for comedy purposes?

This art is vile, it actually makes me uncomfortable to look at.

You just stole an Akabur CG and did surgery with blunt scalpels and bubblegum, right? It looks like it
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I cannot believe /stg/ has fallen so low.
Are you people blind?
Can't you see how terrible this "art" is?
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>>467906
People seem to be really fucking desperate for somebody to actually make something.
That or there's a gas leak in here or something.
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>>467896
No like some kind of make it rounder. Right now, if her left boobie is a high-end c-cup, her right one is a G-cup.
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>>467723
I wanna eat that pussy with a sandwich
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Oh, sweet merciful Jesus. Sweet dying-on-the-cross Jesus. Holy titty-fucking-with-his-14-inch-dong Jesus. I have played the 4H alpha, read my own writing and been blinded by the flaws. Everywhere I look is a line in need of attention, some turn of phrase in need of returning, a sentence that deserves only death and purgation.

I've climbed the first hill and expected to see a luscious valley but have instead found myself looking into the teeth of another, far larger and more sexually dominant hill.

I suppose it's time to bite the pillow, cause this script is going in dry.
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>>467930
Why are you getting so flowery with your blog post?

Judging by this, it's no wonder your script has issues
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>>467930
less time posting more time script fixing
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>>467901
I don't understand it. There's always someone in the thread vehemently defending him as well, saying that the art is really good.
Saying that it's a placeholder, and just being made while waiting for an artist, but you have to be fucking blind to say that the art looks good.
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>>467930
....How did you not notice this sooner?
Do you write your scripts with cum in your eyes?
Did you not fucking read it as/after you typed?
I'm sorry, just... You're reacting like this is the first time you've become aware to the scripts existance.
>>>Wat
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>>467945
It's one thing to see a script in a text file, but another entirely to see it in the context of a game. It's cool, though. They call them rough drafts for a reason.
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>>467780
BASEMENT BUILD WHERE
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>>killed all of my boners
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dafuq is she?
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Any recent updates of russian?
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>>468116
Lola first version
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>>468007
tfw tropic isn't a tripcode fan
>le types in "topic" as name
>newfags fall for the bait
>le kek
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>>468127
Lola hot* version
Too bad her pussi is badly deformed
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>>468116
Is this a betty and veronica comic?
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I think I've missed a thread or two, no memes here, was there anything in particular I missed?
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>>468469
basement build is out
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>>468469
This is what we do now
>>467896
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>>468469
demons are still furries
vampires are now ALSO furries
Basement build is supposed to come out today
UE is working on his shitty art
Rook says his writing didnt flow well enough so hes fixing it
Tropic called Artguy Artgay and Artguy said Tropic is a jew monkey who has dick for brains
Heretic and Khan said stuff that I forget
and that's what you missed
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>>468476
I noticed that scrolling around, what the hell is up with the head? It seems really small on that body.
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>>468482
I've rewritten entire pages because of shitty flow, so I can respect that.

And holy shit, Heretic and khan? Have I gone back in time?
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>>468513
what's reddit got to do with this
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>>468517
That's nice.
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>>468528
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>>468529
Shitposting has evolved to literal levels. I'm so proud of you stg
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>>468523
"dafuq" is reddit (and generally normalfag) vernacular. It is never used here except by people who are brand new.
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>>468541
these fucking normies amirite?
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>>468549
>normies
>>>/r9k/
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Seeing as how basement build is supposed to come out soon, let's have a real discussion on the future of super mom since it is technically the de facto /stg/ made game

Is it possible for it to get as big as akabur using this art style?
What are the cons that would stop this from growing larger
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>>468562
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>>468562
i'm more hype for basement build than i was for pt:g desu lad

>Is it possible for it to get as big as akabur using this art style?
probably not, but not due to the art style.
>What are the cons that would stop this from growing larger
slow progress. nothing loses patrons like one update a month
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>>468573
>nothing loses patreons like one update a month

You're right, maybe tropic should start with one update a year

Daily reminder to SUPPORT AKABUR
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>>468562
The CGs are done in a different style, so the dolls don't need as much detail, though it would be nice if he'd stop being such a douche about keeping the style.
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>>467707
Fucking hell I was searching for this general on /vg/

Anyway, did you guys make the witch trainer any more playable?
[;_;]is there more anal, or at least things to do?[/;_;]
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>>468593
Get the Russian version.
There are even more books to read in that version.
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>>468602
Still no tuition/corrupting?
Still no more lewd clothing to buy?
I feel a bit sad, thanks senpai
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>>468513
>>468541
>>468550
don't
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>>468605
silver has more of that

but just go to the stregac site in the op for dressup stuff
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>>468664
he's called artgay for a reason
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>>468664
Put on your name tropic
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>>468562
I'll do an analysis

In terms of art style akabur is clearly better, there is more detail put in, in each individual seam of the clothing and character model while in comparison tropic art looks more blob like with everything being the same not to mention a more toon style that might not portray Helen the way she should be

Although I do like his violet a lot more than how other people draw since it doesn't have the pig nose or the weird monster face

The game mechanics of the current build are also hard to understand and is not first user friendly meaning that it's a game built for people who have already played other training games rather then the first user

In terms of writing. I'm glad he strayed away from the first build which has only memes left and right, not that the current build does not have as well, meme spouting is fine if it's done in one moment in one part, but ideally it's just annoying and makes future proofing the game pointless

Hopefully basement build fixes these problems, realistically they probably won't
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>>468714
She looks better with that hair. Nice.
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>>468744
I wish someone had done whore make-up for Hermione, I tried but it looked shit

looks daft on Lola and not her
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>>467896
>my cum still looks like frosting.

I think you just need to work on two things. Study the way Akabur shades his cum and the way he connects it with thin stands, and think about the placement. Graphicaly its interesting the way you have it, but it looks off because it wouldn't have naturally landed like that. Think about cum in terms of source. For one guy it needs to come from one direction and splatter and run organically.

Aside from that its not bad at all. Cheers.
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>>468810
> Aside from that its not bad at all. Cheers.


stop. lying is a crime.
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>>468810
>not bad at all

Like am I crazy?
Am I the only one who see's how bad it is?
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>>468821
It finally happened: we shitposted for so long we completely lost touch with reality.
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>>467945
have you ever written anything before? have you ever looked back at it before? not all mistakes are noticeable. some mistakes look hot but age like milk
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>>467945
here we see an idea guy making the fatal mistake of voicing an opinion about something he has no experience in.
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>>468957
I for one like cheese
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>>469023
cheese is a mistake that has been manicured
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Kill yourself.
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>>469054
AHAHAHAH
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>>467830
Also - vocabulary time. Microcephaly is a disorder causing the brain to not develop, resulting in a smaller than normal head. People with microcephaly were also called pinheads - which is where O'Reilly got his favorite insult.

Microcephaly is not an attractive look.
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I need help y'all! So far I've been doing great in the game. Got me a pattern for gold and training. Did the following quests so far:
>Quest 1: Food for the Poor
>Quest 2: Family Feud
>Quest 3: Serving the People
>Quest 4: Red Phoenix Rising
>Quest 7: Pleasing the Mother
>Quest 9: Room 4 1 more
>Quest 10: Investments that bear fruit

Now then, I'm stuck on the bit with Iris and in order to do that, it says I need to do "No Dancing Allowed", but for the life of me I cannot get the quest. Any tips/help/ideas? If I'm bugged I'd like to know soon so I can just restart.
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>>469131
Read the fucking walkthrough
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>>469134
Which is where...?
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>>469137
read the OP
But since you're blind
I'll spoon feed you

http://pastebin.com/3J3LZELT
And Here's another one
http://pastebin.com/dwc56wvZ
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>>469134
Addendum: Didn't answer my problem. I can't do Iris's whore bit because I didn't do "A Friend in Need" which I cannot find anywhere.
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>>469149
read the Op
Read the walkthrough
FUCKING
READ
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>>469054
oh fuck
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>>469151
Enraged. And yes, read through the second one. The quest I am missing never appeared. Thanks, asshole.
Both the Thanks and the Asshole are sincere mind you.


Only problem is I think I am glitched, as the dancing quest never occurred. I've had the dress for near over a month in-game and have maxed out the relationship of Maslab.
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>>469080
Dude, I think he knows. I'm pretty sure you're not the first guy on the internet to discover Google.
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>>469173
>I am an idiot who can't read
Yes, only you seemed to have glitches the game, it can't be that you're too stupid to read, no way, nuh uh
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>>469189

Okay now you're just being a dipshit yourself you can't read and/or grasp context.

I have read the second one to see if either
>A It's not problem and I'm just an ass dipshit
or
>B It is and fuck me I have to start over again

Iris wants me to help her be a whore? Okay. Quest blocked. It says "Do NO DANCING ALLOWED" first.

Okay.

Checked the walkthrough.

11.No dancing allowed
Note-Need the dancer outfit
-Talk to Maslab about employing Jasmine as a dancer
-Talk to Jafar about employing Jasmine as a dancer
-Wait a few days
-Pick up the permit
-Give to Maslab
-Make her work for one day without profit
-Profit


Had the Dancing Outfit for 40+ days now. Had her dance in the obediance test. The quest before this never appeared, but sometimes her dialogue in the after-work-how-was-your-day chatter says "She tripped while dancing".

So we're at the point where I have exhausted all my options and come to this board again for help. Or am I not literate enough for you?

Now can someone else please offer any advice that isn't read the walkthrough?
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>>469199
Nah, I agree with anon
You should probably learn to read before posting
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>>469214
Am I missing something then?
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>>469199
Read the walkthrough before posting, the answer to your question is there

You just seem to have trouble reading
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>>469221
Glasses?
To help you read
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>>469224
>>469222
There's nothing in the walkthrough that helps. Thanks.
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>>469236
>there's nothing in the walkthrough
>walkthrough made to address that exact specific problem

You really have no idea how to read
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>>469238
Alright then. Prove me wrong. Don't even need to post the whole line, just a portion of it to show you're not bullshitting me or the walkthrough is wrong.

Show me that either you're a sheeping faggot that doesn't even check to see if he's right or wrong, or that I'm the fucking dumbass.
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>>469241
Play dice
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>>469263
You're a bro. Trying it.
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>>469263
And the dice trick worked. Only took me another 10-ish games. You're the Hater to my Wander
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>>469277
No you stupid Fuck
ITS WRITTEN IN THE WALKTHROUGH

LEARN TO FUCKING READ
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>>469177
I'm not sure he does. He keeps posting that monstrosity.
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Any trainers focused on interracial and making snow bunnies slaves to the BBC?
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>>469363
Take your bait and kill yourself.
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>>469363
No and there will never be one here.
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>>469363
Get out.
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>>467928
I agree
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>>469381
Hey Linear, what's new?
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>>469363
I was like "Thats just crazy enough to work" but then I realized you werent talking about the British TV Station, and got sad.
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>>469363
>>469396
damn it I drew the wrong thing
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>>469387
Not much with me, I've been mostly on fallout all this time.

Hows things on your end?
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>>469397

Stop
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>>469397
You always draw breasts too close together. Might want to work on that.

>>469402
Putting art on the back burner as I rework this script. Hoping to put out a demo in May. We'll see how it goes. Will be in the UK in April so won't be able to work on the mod as much as I'd like.
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>>469363
Fuck off sweden
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>>469363
Fuck off Linear
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>>469409
Happy travels. God I wont leave the states.


>>469413
Uh I like timid white guys thank you.
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>>469416
>I like timid white guys

*timid horses
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>>467707
Gold last version for android plss
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>>469409
>Hoping to put out a demo in May.
stop teasing us artguy
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post ripped genie
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>>466566
Why are her tits so enormous? I mean, big tits can be nice, but this size is ridiculous for a Hogwarts age witch.

>>467830
Is this 'lovely' lass the hottest new meme?
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>>469534
>Why are her tits so enormous? I mean, big tits can be nice, but this size is ridiculous for a Hogwarts age witch.
same explanation as ever

MAGIC
A
G
I
C
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>>469534
18 year old's can have big boobs too.
Stop being so ageist.
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>>469546
>artgay trying to hide his loli fetish

Did you get your participation trophy yet?
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>>469546
The oldest students at Hogwarts are 17-18. It's not possible for Hermione and her peers to be 18 either.
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>>469551
it is magic, wizards age twice every year or something.
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>>469534
What about that chick from modern family. She had to have breast reduction surgery before she was 18.
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>>469551
Witch Trainer's timeline is completely messed up anyway. Both Slughorn and Lockhart are present in Hermione's public scenes. Susan's 18 in 4 Houses. Live with it.

>>469550
>Implying there's any reward for making these games.
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Any update on witch trainer?
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>>467707
how do you get the after credits thing in ptg?
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>>469551
Astoria is 18, too.
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>>469641
Tonks isn't.
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http://www.patreon.com/posts/4898619

PT:G is out for Android.

http://core-design.info/PrincessTrainer-83-release.apk
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>>469677
Well guys, the ANDROID version of "PT:GOLD EDITION" is ready.


I have to admit it feels pretty awesome to able to visit Agrabah and the girls at any time on the go.


Thank Xaljio for this build, he had to jump through some hoops to make my awkward codes android compatible.


This build may contain some bugs. If you find any - you know what to do. (Hint: [email protected])


Also Filip is providing the hosting again. Thanks, man.


ANDROID: http://core-design.info/PrincessTrainer-83-release.apk
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All the girls have awkwardly positioned tits
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>>469562
*Starts watching Modern Family*

R.I.P Dreams and hopes.
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>>469764
She should have kept them growing and lived a life as a hunched over porn star forced to dress as a cow in every film
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>>469761
That's because there's no weight to them. They just float too high.
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>>469534

No fuck you, she's the hottest girl of all.
Her tits are amazing.
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Can't wait for Iris Quest to come out. That Game Over CG makes it look really good. Exactly my fetish.
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>>469878
Then you're in the wrong place
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>>469080
That guy looks like a Jew stereotype.
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>>469838
Yes Please.
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>>469534
I have no idea what you are talking about.
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>>469854
Jasmine is proportionally too small next to the rest of them

even as one of those skinny Indian twins she doesn't really work
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>>469977
even better
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>>470007
>>469977
Only Narcissa's get that big.
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>>470049
All boobs are arbitrary
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EHA1qxsLH-0
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>>470003
All of their tits look weird now. I know it's Akabur's style, but why can't he draw proper tits?
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>>470068
>why can't he draw proper tits

He's never seen one in real life
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>>470069
one single tit
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>>470125
Literal Amazons.
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>>467707
>Witch trainer dress up thing

Wait, are all of those in Witch Trainer?
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>>470268
nah, some of it has been added in the silver mod

it's just a collection of art drawn by other people
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>>470278
Alright, I'll have to try out that silver mod then. Thanks.
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>>470359
If you'd like to have something added feel free to ask. If it's super fly I might even make the assets for it. Up to the devs to get it into the mod though. I'm more of a free agent sort of thing.
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>>470377
draw towels for Hermione if you have skills, I've wanted to see her wrapped up and then flashing for months now

no one has managed it, even a shitty troll scene where she uncovers and is in that bikini would be better than nothing
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>>470427
seriously? I am I'm hammered as shit right now and even I can manage a towel. Months you say?
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>>470049
Best girls
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Anyone else not getting sound in the Princess Trainer Gold Edition?
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How do I draw feet? Are they like stubby leg-hands?
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>>470501
Jesus fuck! Those are some Chun-Li thighs.
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>>470511
nothing wrong with those thighs
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>>470501

The body is fine. The face, hair, and breasts need work.
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>>470572
The fuck? The head looks like it's sitting about 3 inches further forward than the spinal column... the legs look like they could rival a hyena's bite for PSI... the tits like bananas... literally the only ok thing about this is the visible arm and hand.
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>>470454
yep months

in the post there was a request for flashing, that involves re doing her arms and I think most people here can't manage that
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>>470584
can you draw it better, fagit?

I thought so.
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>>470645
You don't need to be a train driver to know when there's a train wreck
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>>470645
>you do it then!!!!
>fagit
holy shit reddit please leave
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>>470686
>>470671
>>470584
wow, suddenly everybody is an artist.
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>>470501
I think tits needs to be a shade lighter. Otherwise it looks good
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>>470693
>you have to be an artist to see what's bad and what's good

Why are you such a fucking autistic piece of shit?
Stop fucking posting
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>>470693
read >>470686 again
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>>470703
>I hate content

Why are you such a fucking autistic piece of shit?
Stop fucking posting
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>>470645
>>470693
not the other guys, but i'll throw my hat in the ring.

i don't claim to be anywhere near good, but i mean christ, are you blind or something laddy?
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>>470714
I admit it is unusual comparing to Akabur's art but it is not really bad.
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>>470717
i disagree
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>>470708
Didn't the guy say he was writing and creating the game himself? I'd rather see a half-decent text only game than this god-fucking-awful clipart.
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>>470693
>baww, I don't like critique

Really tho, what you're saying is that you must know how to do a certain thing in order to have an opinion on the subject. That's retarded.

Here are some things you could improve on:
Line weight and smoothness. The thicknesses are all over.
Shading.
Perspective.
Human anatomy and proportions. She's like 8-9 heads tall, her leg is sticking out of her belly, her tits are magically holding themselves up. Her upper arms and neck are very long.

And just a heads up, I actually do draw shit.
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>>470723
I am not him, I am just someone that got sick of all the haters that post 'omg so bad' for every content creator
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>>470723
You realize the person you replied to isn't the person you drew it right? UE usually posts with a trip
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>>470727
What the fuck are you saying?
Anytime DBZnoob or TMP post art they get nothing but compliments

Are you retarded?
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>>470727
when i posted all that custom clothing for supermom people seemed to like it, you're imagining things
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Playing WT silver, and Hermione won't do any public favors. I've got het to the point where she's sucked cock a few times.
How do I make her do public stuff again?
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>>470727
most people just ignore what I post

occasionally I'll get a "nice" or something
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>>470746
>How do I make her do public stuff again?

You can't
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>>470753
What. Why did she stop agreeing to do public stuff then?
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>>470755
Because you are not a cuck. congrats
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>>470727
>haters
Holy fuck
Reddit
Leave
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So I've made some adjustments to the shading and reshaped her waist slightly.

Thoughts?
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>>470770
personally I think the right nipple looks really weirdly placed
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>>470770
>>470775
otherwise it looks really good
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>>470755
It's part of the game. Early on, if you focus more on personal favors than public favors, she'll fall in love with you and refuse to do the public stuff. If you focus more on the public instead of the private, she'll do both the public and private favors. All it really changes is the public favors being available and the ending of the game.
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>>470770
YOU'RE A FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT ART GAY!

Nah, it's really good
Although you should really focus on genitals rather than reshaping, it's your weakest point
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>>470770
looks same as previous 2000 iterations
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>>470770
why does her vagina look like a post op? are you trying to make a tranny character?
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Eh?
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>>470814
nice
Though, if this is all you've worked on.............................................................................................................................
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>>470814
The cabinet's shadow seems pretty off, since the light source is supposed to be in the middle of the room from what I see, but otherwise looks pretty snazzy

(If you go back in to fix that shadow, maybe touch up the shading on the rock under the hole in the wall, seems a bit out of place, like it's a movable object in an old Disney movie.)
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>>470820
I write and code, I don't do art retard
Everything else is ready aside from the main art
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>>470717
It is that fucking bad
the face is huge
the hair looks like it was pasted on by a child
the tits look FUCKING retarded
the arms look strange by contrast because he copy pasted them rather than trying to make his own
crazy fucking muscular thighs on a girl with arms as thick as straws looks ridiculous
It's genuine fucking dogshit
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>>470770
right nipple and pussy look kinda weird but besides that a+
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>>470814
bit too much cupboard shadow on the roof
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>>470501
I love these thighs, UE. Are you going to redo your earlier thighs now to match?
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>>470770
She's a really gross girl. Maybe really hot for chubby chasers. It's bizarre.
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>>470770
Face looks good as does the hair, neck and shoulders. Her hand and fingers are kind of weird, too short and better defined nails might help. I think showing her right arm at least somewhat wouldn't be a bad idea either. Her midsection looks weird to me which may be because my reference point are the unnaturally skinny Akabur bitches. However, you got the belly button in there, some shades or are those supposed to be stretch marks, idk, doesn't look too bad. The thing that I am a bit confused by are the two highlights, and maybe the belly button could be a bit lower? Her pubic hair looks great. All in all this looks fantastic compared to the trainwreck that is the short haired banana-tit creature also posted here.
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>>470770
The hair looks like stuck on plastic and her face seems too small
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At the rate UE's art is evolving he's going to be Akira next week. All we need now is more details about the game itself.
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>>470814
the ladder is translucent

why psudo-photorealism?
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>>470770
One boob is considerably larger than the other.
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>>470907
It's made as a base that you upgrade as you progress in the game

And it just turned out that way when I kept describing that I wanted it to start as a spooky dooky basement
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>>470907
>>470913
it ended that way cause I just wanted to demo layering textures for DBZnoob, but Tropic ran with it
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>I think showing her right arm at least somewhat wouldn't be a bad idea either.
She has something like 6 different arm poses. I just haven't turned on one of the right arm layers that matches this left arm very well.
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Also I'm still taking costume suggestions for Susan.
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UKNOWN ERROR PLEASE

FOR THE LOVE OF FUCK

CLEAN UP YOUR LINE WORK

WATCH YOUR TIDDY PROPORTIONS

FOR FUCKS SAKES COMPLETELY CHANGE THE METHOD WITH WHICH YOU DRAW HAIR AND FACES

THEY ALWAYS LOOK LIKE BURDENED ABOMINATIONS STRAINING JUST TO BREATHE WITHOUT KILLING THEMSELVES, BALD HEADS COVERED IN CHUNKY MUD

Like you're almost there, it's just your tiny headed horrors look like their lives are a burden
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>>470942
something that doesn't make her look like a landwhale
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>>470949
Burka?
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>>470938
how are you gonna handle all the clothes? are all the clothes armless?
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>>470727
What content creators? If they haven't made anything, they're not content creators.

Tropic gets harassed all the time and he's the only one who's ever produced something.
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>>470942
What do you have already? Because if nothing else, a bunny girl would be amusing, though that would be cool for all of them to have.
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>>470956
Head/Hair, Body, Arms, Legs, Tits, and Clothes are all on different layers.
For sleeved costumes, it's just a matter of make multiple different sleeves for the outfits.

There's also multiple leg poses.
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>>470957
they've created content, just cause you don't have it in your hands doesn't mean it doesn't exist. you have the object permanence of of an infant
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>>470963
I've actually already drawn a Bunny Girl costume for Susan.
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>>470942
How about a nurse outfit, something like this?

http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/41U2mtrVmpL.jpg
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>>470970
Fair enough. How about a camisole set you have Susan come back to your office at night wearing for a favor?
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>>470942
Make her look like a fat Wilma Flintstone
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>>470980
Saved to refs.

>>470995
Susan doesn't really have favours like that.
She's structured completely differently to Hermione in that she has one recurring core scene that you progress further through as you build up her tolerance.
Once you complete one of the core branches you unlock favour equivalents, but it's all interactive.

For example if you manage to progress all the way through the strip branch of the core scene, Susan will allow you to dress her up in all 4 clothing tiers. Equally if you reach the end of the touching branch you'll be able to fondle her breasts, and so on.

Once you've completed the core scene, you'll unlock a scripted event that plays out and then from that point onward you'll be able to bypass the core scene entirely to jump directly to the various sex acts available.
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>>471043
4houses when
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>>470814
God it gives me exmortis flashbacks
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>>471043
The camisole is still something I'd like to see.
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>>471126
It's also a pretty vague request.
Post or link a pic.
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Does the Bitch Trainer not have cheats for Princess trainer?
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>>470727

Wow, bad post. Stop posting anytime.

I don't understand why telling him what he needs to fix is a problem. It's for all of our benefit, including himself. I want him to succeed and release a good, fappable game and for him to gain the experience so he could become a successful porn dev.
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>>470942

Stockings and garter belt with a chastity belt that says "for you."

"If I take that off, would you die(cum)?"
"For you"
"You're a big guy/girl"
"memes"
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>>471149
Please, no memes.
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>>471154
memes makes game unfutureproofable
it's great
I love looking back at old games that meme too hard
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>>471154
Make sure you put the "Make (House) Great" hat for each character
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>>471160
I actually kinda like that. Not in game, but just for shitposting.
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Hey when is WT: Gold Edition supposed to come out?
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>>471208
After Magic Shop: Finished Edition.
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>>470770
still fat
still gross

maybe make a storyline where you can expel her for being disgusting and then never see her again
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>>470942
5th element movie costume!
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is basement build out yet
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>>471375
Yes
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>>471382
lies
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basement build when
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>>471412
NOW!
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Hey all, you saw the Basement concept earlier... Here is our simple clothed Dash for now.
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>>471462
Looks great. Any eta on those last cgs for basement build?
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>>471462
Looks good, although there is a small problem with his hair on the top left side
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>>468686
Overall I agree with your analysis..

As for the art. I am working on making them less blob like and with more depth, the problem I am currently having is, repairing semi-ok previous art to the point where its updated... trying to get cleaner better art at the same time on my own, as well as doing the basement, thinking about color schemes for the existing rooms and designs for future inclusions..

All in all It's a shit ton of work thrust upon my shoulders since I volunteered to do the art work... I am trying to maintain a semi constant update of my work while working a full time job, plus being sick for the past couple of weeks. All in all the lack of updates is my fault, BUT I am working on this all the time.

If you have suggestions to make the game better post them, legitimate ideas, post them, designs, post them.. AS long as it's not a shitpost, we are looking and listening to all feedback.
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>>471474
BIGGER DICK
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