1) TIME RESETS MAKE NO SENSE.
Just look how there is absolutely no consistency amongst them.
First & Second resets:
- Trigger before someone nearby gets killed
- The protagonist doesn’t need to know about the eminent death for the reset to happen
- The protagonist has no control over when it happens
- The reset sends you 5 minutes into the past
- If the protagonist fails, time moves on as normal
Third reset:
- Triggers after someone nearby gets killed
- The protagonist needs to know about the death for the reset to happen
- The protagonist has no control over when it happens
- The reset sends you 20 years into the past
- If the protagonist fails, time reverts to present, and he can try again until he succeeds
- Let’s not overlook the time paradox of managing to chance the day of death but everything else remained exactly the same, something which is impossible because of the butterfly effect. Also, we are supposed to believe when he returned to the present, his old self magically forgot everything, life went back to normal and played out in exactly the same way. Bullshit. And the fan boys still don’t accept it is nonsense, they now think the protagonist could always control time travel but was too afraid to use it consciously. Excusing bullshit with more bullshit.
Fourth reset:
- Triggers when everybody is fine.
- The protagonist wills it to happen. The fan boys were defending the show before this, saying it was great how he had no control over this power, since he can’t use it to his benefit and the tension is tenfold because of it. Well, so much for that.
- The reset sends you 20 years into the past but not at the same moment as in the second reset.
Fifth reset:
The problem with this one is that it doesn’t exist. We get to a point where the protagonist is in grave danger and yet no time reset triggers. Why is that when it fits several criteria from previous cases? I mean, sure, the protagonist says that the fourth reset would be the last, but how did he know that? Did he read the script for what happens next? Does he know he lost the power? How does he know that??? The story never explains anything regarding that; it just throws it out there and then expects you not to give a damn when it’s vital to the story.
2) THE PROTAGONIST HAS NO STEADY MOTIVATIONS.
They change in every episode with no rhyme or reason. But the fan boys don’t notice it because he is a bland self-insert who can be anything and anyone at any given moment because the plot said so.
First & Second reset: He saves kids because he is altruistic
Never explained why he is, he was magically born that way.
Third reset: He wants to save his mother by manipulating the emotions of a little girl
A selfish reason, now he is magically no longer altruistic. Also he deducts that he must save the girl because he is at the time the murders began. Well, thank goodness nothing else happened in the world that year, or he might arbitrarily assume he had to do something completely different.
Fourth reset: He wants to save the little girl
He no longer cares about saving his mother, which by the way was never hard to save since he had 20 years of time to simply be around her when the fateful night arrives.
3) PLOT CONVENIENCES.
Many events happen seemingly by chance and end up affecting the plot considerably. No proper mystery or thriller should be so reliant on chance because it cheapens what it’s trying to accomplish.
>>138757093
Please stop spamming /a/ and go fuck yourself, faggot.
>>138757136
Episode 1: The mother gets killed exactly when she finds out who the killer is. How nice for the killer to wait until he is revealed before deciding to walk in the house. The reason the protagonist panicked so fast when he saw his dead mother, was because at that exact moment a neighbor came in and the police arrived outside. There is no way for the killer to arrange it that way, since the neighbor was just passing by. Therefore, it was darn luck and not incrimination that made the protagonist panic, making the whole thing stupid instead of an elaborate scheme.
Episode 3: The protagonist has birthday the exact same day as the girl he is trying to save. This is way too convenient and lazy writing for the sake of cheap feels. He already wants to save her; there is no reason to hammer it even further with more drama. nds you 20 years into the past but not at the same moment as in the second reset.
2) THE PROTAGONIST HAS NO STEADY MOTIVATIONS.
They change in every episode with no rhyme or reason. But the fan boys don’t notice it because he is a bland self-insert who can be anything and anyone at any given moment because the plot said so.
First & Second reset: He saves kids because he is altruistic
Never explained why he is, he was magically born that way.
Third reset: He wants to save his mother by manipulating the emotions of a little girl
A selfish reason, now he is magically no longer altruistic. Also he deducts that he must save the girl because he is at the time the murders began. Well, thank goodness nothing else happened in the world that year, or he might arbitrarily assume he had to do something completely different.
Fourth reset: He wants to save the little girl
He no longer cares about saving his mother, which by the way was never hard to save since he had 20 years of time to simply be around her when the fateful night arrives.
>>138757093
>>138757136
If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime
>>138757179
3) PLOT CONVENIENCES.
Many events happen seemingly by chance and end up affecting the plot considerably. No proper mystery or thriller should be so reliant on chance because it cheapens what it’s trying to accomplish.
Episode 1: The mother gets killed exactly when she finds out who the killer is. How nice for the killer to wait until he is revealed before deciding to walk in the house. The reason the protagonist panicked so fast when he saw his dead mother, was because at that exact moment a neighbor came in and the police arrived outside. There is no way for the killer to arrange it that way, since the neighbor was just passing by. Therefore, it was darn luck and not incrimination that made the protagonist panic, making the whole thing stupid instead of an elaborate scheme.
Episode 3: The protagonist has birthday the exact same day as the girl he is trying to save. This is way too convenient and lazy writing for the sake of cheap feels. He already wants to save her; there is no reason to hammer it even further with more drama.
Episode 5: Airi’s house is set on fire immediately after she finds out who the killer is. Again, the killer seems to be waiting to be revealed before making his move.
Episode 8: The girl was hiding from her mother in the exact same bus that the person who wanted to kill her was hiding his equipment. From all the places in this universe, what are the odds of the target running to hide into the killer’s base?
4) THE PROTAGONIST’S REASONING MAKES ABSOLUTELY NO SENSE.
He runs away from the police, thus incriminating himself for no reason. The fan boys excuse it as him panicking because of the murder of his mother, thus he wasn’t thinking reasonably. If that is the case, why is he STILL running away from the police after he returns to the present? He is calm now, and thinks reasonably.
>>138757230
>If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime
>>138757179
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>>138757093
If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime>>138757230
>If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime
>>138757179
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>>138757093
If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime>>138757230
>If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime
>>138757179
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>>138757230
Hell, he spends half the episode playing with children out in the open for everybody to see, and then goes to chat in a public cafeteria full of people. Seems like he is not afraid of being seen, right? But when the police arrive, he is running away again. What is this bullshit?
He assumes that he can save his mother by saving a little girl, the two of which have absolutely nothing to do with each other. The fan boys excuse it as if he stops the killer, he will save both at the same time. But how is this going to work? Just look at how no matter what he does, it will never have a positive outcome.
- He is not intimidating to keep a child killer away by spending time with the girl (in fact, this makes the killer double as motivated)
- He is not strong to beat up the killer in case he shows up
- Even if he scares the killer, this will not stop him from killing other children or his mother in the future
- Even if he saves the little girl, it will not prevent her mother from beating her all the time
- He is not trying to tell anybody about it, which over-complicated things for no reason. The fan boys tried to excuse it like nobody would believe him if he talked. Yet in later episodes pretty much EVERYBODY believes EVERYTHING he says and helps him out. Do you know how stupid it feels when his fellow students simply agree to hide the girl in a bus by simply believing his story, and leave her there in the cold for three days, only for eventually his mother believing him as well, and letting her hide in their house thereafter? He could have resolved the show’s entire conflict since episode 2 if he simply told everybody what is going on.
5) THE MYSTERY ASPECT OF THE SHOW IS COMPLETE GARBAGE.
- The protagonist is doing absolutely nothing to find out who is the killer. He prefers to spend his time in a cringy romance between a 10 year old girl and a 30 year old man.
>>138757284
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>>138757230
>If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime
>>138757179
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>>138757093
If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime
>>138757284
- Whatever the author thinks that can count as clues, is nothing more than hints dropping on the protagonist’s head by complete chance (the bus Hinazuki is hiding just happens to be the killer’s hideout) or through someone’s convenient infodumping (the meeting with the old man, or the teacher in the car). This destroyed any sense of mystery, since the protagonist didn’t use deduction to find clues. They were thrown at him with ridiculous convenience.
- 10 year-olds in the 80s are somehow masterminds. They can psycho-analyze the protagonist (Hinazuki) and deduct he is hiding something (Kenya). He on the other hand can do nothing but stare like an oaf despite living in the fucking internet era. He is so useless, even little children are better detectives than he is.
- There aren’t even many possible suspects for who the killer could be. It can either be someone from the cast we see all the time, or a complete stranger which would make the revelation BS (thankfully this is not the case). Now try to count how many people look like the guy we see in the first episode (male adults with no beard). There, it can only be THAT guy. What kind of a mystery is this where you know right away who the killer is?
- A mystery story is supposed to give you answers at the end. Yet you don’t get any explanation for why the protagonist has this power. Magic space Jesus gave it to him just because. This didn’t prevent the fan boys from using double standards all the time, saying how real the characters are and how it makes them cry, and how amazingly interesting the mystery is. But when I prove to them the time resets are unexplained bullshit they immediately say it is just a cartoon and you shouldn’t take it seriously. If that is so, why do you find them real and cry about it? Why do you call the mystery amazing when it makes no sense?
>>138757230
>The mother gets killed exactly when she finds out who the killer is
Is that not the reason he killed her?
Agree, it's really bad. People only like it because it's serious and they got hooked early by the cute loli/shota romance. Aside from that it's basically the anime equivalent of The Butterfly Effect.
A twist villain has never been so contrived. Oh damn it was the teacher all along! Because he just likes to do bad things and that's his whole motive! Give me a fucking break.
>>138757326
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>>138757093
If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime
>>138757326
6) FAKE TENSION WITH CLIFFHANGERS.
Every episode ends with a cliffhanger that makes the average viewer wanting to find out what will happen next. The problem here is that what follows the cliffhangers is a dud. It is always something anti-climactic or completely stupid. Every time something horrible happens to the protagonist (fails to save the girl or gets captured by the police), a time reset occurs in the beginning of the next episode to undo all the tension. When the killer gets in the bus where the girl is hiding, is followed by him leaving without even trying to find her because it was conveniently his lair, and not because he knew she was there. The show systematically tries to undo consequences or hide its plot conveniences with cliffhangers that are too obvious to spot when you marathon the show.
7) VICTIMIZING GALORE.
A one dimensional evil parent hits while laughing her own child for forced drama.
- No fan boys, saying this happens all the time in real life does not make it any less forced.
- Let’s have the girl being bullied at school as well. No reason to assume the more victimizing they throw at you, the more absurd it becomes.
8 ) PLOT INDUCED STUPIDITY.
- Everybody is either too dumb to do anything about it, or too blind to notice the domestic violence. Because a child full of bruises, the testimony of teachers and students, as well as a mother who is constantly running away from inspection, or swings shovels at people, is clearly not evidence.
- People lose their jobs, ruin their marriages, and leave town because of a chocolate bar. But people who beat their children every day while laughing about it are left to do as they like.
- Only complete retards open the door to a room they know it’s on fire.
- A little child can’t slip through a jammed seat belt, even when it’s easy for an adult to do it.
Why did you make a separate thread? What? There aren't enough threads already?
>>138757273
Fuck off to mal
>>138757361
9) ONE DIMENSIONAL EVIL CHARACTERS.
- The manager lusts over Airi, and betrays the protagonist just so he can have her for himself. The fan boys try to excuse it like he did what he thought was right, but all we see is him being a jerk who laughs idiotically and saves Airi because he wants to impress her and get in her pants.
- Letting us know Hibazuki’s mother was mistreated by her husband does not excuse her actions. She is one dimensional because her husband was one dimensional, the end.
- The killer loves to kidnap and murder little children, just because. He is also presented as a mastermind for half the show, always magically teleporting to people that find out who he is, and managing to throw the blame for what he did to someone else. But towards the end, he turns into a laughably incompetent idiot who monologues his evil plans to the protagonist and has no alibi for what he does.
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>>138757093
If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot kkjg
FUCKING WHITE MALE NTR KEK
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>>138757409
Sounds to me like you don't have the brains to argue any of his points, so you resort to burying your head in the sand and spamming 10 year old level retorts. As expected from a MAL Poster.
tldr
>>138757455
Dumb Trump poster.
>>138757480
>White male
Fifth reset:
The proto a point where the protagonist is in grave danger and yet no time reset triggers. Why is that when it fits several criteria from previous cases? I mean, sure, the protagonist says that the fourth reset would be the last, but how did he know that? Did he read the script for what happens next? Does he know he lost the power? How does he know that??? The story never explains anything regarding that; it just throws it out there and then expects you not to give a damn when it’s vital to the story.
2) THE PROTAGONIST HAS NO STEADY MOTIVATIONS.
They change in every episode with no rhyme or reason. But the fan boys don’t notice it because he is a bland self-insert who can be anything and anyone at any given moment because the plot said so.
First & Second reset: He saves kids because he is altruistic
Never explained why he is, he was magically born that way.
Third reset: He wants to save his mother by If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animemanipulating the emotions of a little girl
A selfish reason, now he is magically no longer altruistic. Also he deducts that he must save the girl because he is at the time the murders began. Well, thank goodness nothing else happened in the world that year, or he might arbitrarily assume he had to do something completely different.
Fourth reset: He wants to save the little girl
He no longer cares about saving his mother, which by
3) PLOT CONVENIENCES.
Many events happen seemingly by chance and end up affecting the plot considerably. No proper mystery or thriller should be so reliant on chance because it cheapens what it’s trying to accomplish.
Reminder that Kayofags are cucks
>>138757568
uhh yellow
I like it.
Episode 1: If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime
2) THE PROTAGONIST HAS NO STEADY MOTIVATIONS.If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime.
First & Second reset: He saves kids because
Third reset: If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime
Fourth reset: If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime If you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good animeIf you have to make wall of text explaning why this anime is shit you then you are a fagget who cannot accept it is a good anime
>>138757093
>>138757093
The time reset is just a plot device.
Fuck off.
>>138757706
sorry, I took them
>>138757706
>bokumachifags are so salty when someone criticizes the shitty story that they try to turn every thread that does it into a dubs thread
How does it feel to be underage?
>>138757670
>/a/
It's /v/.
this is a japanese adult
This will go down as a /v/-tier anime.
Boy, I dodged a bullet in not watching this
Normalfags being all over it for some reason was a sign
Is the manga different or what?
>>138757860
the sad thing is, it's so well directed, the music, tension, narration.
But it will be called shit by tryhards and NTRfags
>inb4 is this your first anime
>>138758452
>well directed
Consider suicide.
>>138758563
Not him but why not?
>>138758124
Manga was the same and the ending was spoiled in every thread for the show. The people flipping out now are retards and shitposters.
>>138758636
because it isn't a carbon copy of my manga!
How dare animators take liberties in an adaption
Half of this is a criticism that, while decent, is way too fucking long and could easily be put on a reviewing site. The other half just looks like the insane ramblings of a person who didn't get to see what they wanted, 9r at the very least is swallowing buckets of salt right now.
Jesus, did this show piss the audience off that much? Didn't even get to the ending yet, but by the time I do I hope I'm not as fucking raving as this. At best, it would probably be mediocre.
What reaction of our sister site futaba and hiro 2ch?
>>138758124
just barely
>>138758452
>well directed
>narration
You're an idiot and you have no idea what you're talking about.
>>138757759
I really don't think that's the problem. The problem is that there's some unbelievable shit posting going on right now in addition to the criticism being reposted at least two or three times in this thread alone. I would forgive it if it wasn't spammed.
you didn't need to make this, it's clear that the writing is terrible. I doubt many people would disagree.
>>138758805
tell me why it's not well directed then you pretentious piece of shit
>>138757093
It's really fucking mediocre. I never got the hype.
>>138757716
A shitty plot device.
>>138758893
You're the one who made the baseless claim, why don't you elaborate on it?
How about addressing all the criticisms listed above? How about intelligently explaining your points instead of banding your opinions around like the underage little MAL poster you are.
>>138757093
I told you this anime suck
pic related would have been a much better anime adaptation with character going back to the past than some shitty detective game
>>138759008
my reasons on why it's well directed is because the music is timed really well as well as composed
I love it when the openings actually reflect the themes of the show, such as this opening having all the characters linked to the Yashiro murders having their eyes covered because of the spider's thread analogy used on the most recent episode.
The quality has also been consistently good as well as the plot.
All of this is opinionated but at least I back it up. I assume you are just shitting on it because it's pretty accessible.
Now tell me why you think it's bad or how you think I'm wrong
>anime
>doesn't make sense
welp you got me
hey op why dont ya give us an anime that you think is great ?
>>138759202
too tryhard edgy to adapt in this day and age
maybe if this was the 80s where anime was experimental with hyperviolent shit
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>>138759399
Man this was really a /v/ anime
Crazy
>>138759514
>/a/ doesn't like anime without moe shit
wow this really was an alright anime
crazy
>>138759305
>i-it's well directed because the music is timed well! t-that's what directing is, right???
>the quality is consistently good! the plot is good! i'm not smart enough to know why, but i'm sure it's good
You're not worth it.
Why don't you post your MAL account?
>>138759685
I know you're just trolling, but honestly, give me examples on what good directing is then.
Hell, tell me what you think a good anime is
>>138759399
Legend of the Galctic Heroes
Haibane Renmei
Space Battleship Yamato 2199
Kaiba
Kaiji
Denno Coil
Welcome to the NHK
Ghost in the Shell
Princess Tutu
Birdy the Mighty
That's just right off the top of my head; all of them are at least 100 times better.
>>138757766
what does /v/ have to with erased?
>>138759748
>I know you're just trolling
Guess again.
>>138759887
oh, then you're just a shit poster who's too much of a pussy to back up his claims
>>138759919
No idiot, you're just not worth it, knowing you think directing is all about music being "timed well". Not to mention, you completely skipped over elaborating on why the plot is good.
Once again, how about addressing all the criticisms the OP has put forward? Evidently you're not smart enough to do even that.
>>138759590
>moe shit
You just proved him right.
>>138757093
Dropped erased after the chocolate forced drama
>MAL normies think it is AOTS
hahahahahahahahahAHA
>Thinking about picking this up
>Weeks pass, don't get around to it
>Suddenly entire board exploding into treats over NTR
Well, that's that, then.
>>138760022
nah /v/ loves moe stuff just look at all the persona threads and jrpgs over there
>>138759978
he's adressing the plot which is not by the director but by the mangaka
I'm arguing that for the story he was given, the director did a really good job adapting it, minus Airi being excluded in the most recent episode
I said the plot was good as far as the anime currently goes. We don't know if A-1 is going to go for an anime original ending or not and that Airi not being present in the future is an indicator of it
>>138760076
Are you implying that /a/ is responsible for your decision to watch or not watch?
>>138760042
>MAL normies think it is AOTS.
Goddamn, they're retarded.
Holy fuck I have never seen an anime meme'd to oblivion so quickly
>>138757093
>the eminent death
a renowned death???
>>138759852
>Legend of the Galactic Heroes
Dropped.
>>138757093
Try harder snobfag.
>>138760772
memes and all it's still better than this garbage
>>138761679
No it's as bad, just not the same type of bad.
>>138757093
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>>138757408
Spaming with fat greek snob shit
>>138757487
Fuck off snob's dicksucker
Who the hell is Snob?
>>138762885
some redditor
>>138762885
Certain contrarian shitter who hates any new anime
>>138757093
>trigger
Go back to redit, please.
>>138757670
How does it feel /a/?
How does it feel to be /v/?
![[HorribleSubs] Boku dake ga Inai Machi - 04 [720p].mkv_snapshot_05.07_[2016.01.30_00.50.51].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/tgTLEoE.jpg "[HorribleSubs] Boku dake ga Inai Machi - 04 [720p].mkv_snapshot_05.07_[2016.01.30_00.50.51].jpg")
>all these walls of text
Why would anyone actively want to read them?
>>138757670
I'm so glad that this didn't turn into a full catalog sitstorm like the Free! reveal or whatever the hell the Chuu2 shitstorm was about.
>>138757093
I agree with all that you said about this garbage show. I don't understand why everyone is losing their shit over it. Maybe it's the pretty art? The writing is miserable and nothing makes any sense though.
post your aniblog OP :^)
I don't even like this show, what are you making me do?
>>138757136
>Why is that when it fits several criteria from previous cases?
No, it doesn't. He forced this final reset, breaking the "rules". It's perfectly logical his power would disappear.
>Never explained why he is, he was magically born that way.
Not everything has to be explained immediately, retard. And it is explained soon after.
>magically no longer altruistic
wrong, nothing magical here
Your critique is weak as fuck. His behavior made perfect sense considering the situation and the way previous revivals worked.
The only thing that didn't make sense is that he focused solely on Kay and ignored other victims but apparently you were too dumb to notice actual plothole.
>He no longer cares about saving his mother
Wrong. To save his mother he has to deal with the killer and to do that he has to save the kids.
>>138759872
People like >>138757670
The fucking autism of this op.
You're like the wackjob who wrote up time cube.
Is NTR the new way to say "Muh ship didn't sail"?
>>138769739
Trust an idiotic frogposter to like Erased.
>>138770871
No, just retarded.
>>138757093
The only thing I question is why after the first 20 year reset, how did his child self (that he possessed) deal with it? Did he 'remember' that (see what happens but have no control)? Is it just a blank 2~ weeks?
As for 'butterfly effect' he only changed the deaths of a few kids and impeded sensei a little, nothing reality changing. Because no matter what sensei was going to move on and eventually become councilman by killing a GF/family some years down the line.
As a thriller it is weak, sensei is 1 of 4 adult males that the viewer knows are acquainted with both mother and child in the 80's. He is the only one with the right hair colour and build. It needed more red herrings. The 'unknown criminal not introduced' is something that should be avoided in crime stories unless you want to end on 'it was a legit serial killer that got away' note.
Mediocre as fuck, after the sensei reveal in the manga people got a little bored of how tame it was and the magic/time travel is weak as fuck.
If you want a real murder mystery, read 10 Little Niggers.
Holy shit, this is some /A/+ autism
>>138757093
Well, the story focus on his daily life drama rather than the mystery or thriller part and his power end up as nothing more than a plot device, lost oppurtunity to make the show interesting indeed.
>>138768688
>my OC
it's a good feeling
Someone tell me the chapter of that girl who playing with Satoru in his childhood
>>138772832
alright
The real problem with the supposed NTR isn't the cucking itself, it's that the entire emotional investment of saving Kayo and seeing what the timeline she actually lives in doesn't amount to anything other than "Oh yeah and then she got knocked up by Hiromi"
It's like the author just decided to build everything up just to throw that in for some shock value shit and then just disposed of Kayo as a character because she never fucking appears again
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I haven't been following this show and dropped in this thread on a whim. This is probably the worst thread I've seen on /a/ in a while.
>>138759202
Pic unrelated.
Fixed for you. Both are shit.
>>138757093
Fuck yourself you greek faggot shit.
>>138762885
A CANCER. He opened this shit-tier thread.
>>138757093
ERASED is a masterpiece, shut up.
The NTR will be talked about in the years to come.
>>138757093
are u the guy that did this for death note a while back as well?
DIDN'T READ LOL
>>138757093
GOT NTRED
"Erased" works on days of future past time travel rules: ie once the MC goes back to the present the past satoru regains control with no memories of the future.
>>138768688
Holy shit
Op,you should have just made a google doc or something
>>138757093
Not gonna read this, but the series is simply bad for lack of consistency and the author just doing whatever it come out of his ass, everything is a forced plot device and everyone's reactions are just convenient instead of realistic. At the end the only thing this series have is shock value, main reason this series will be forgotten once is over, even Akame ga Kill is better written.
>>138757093
MC Saves your live. Ends up stealing his bae.
