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Continued from >>1914041
Welcoming all translators, typersetters, quality checkers, etc to bring more scanlated yuri goodness to the world.
/u/'s scanlations: http://dynasty-scans.com/scanlators/u_scanlations
KanjiTomo (kanji reader tool): http://kanjitomo.net/
Translations from previous threads:
Complete (but may require QC): http://pastebin.com/4LKc6reC
Incomplete (requires TL help): http://pastebin.com/kWB4tvWb
Yurikuma Arashi vol2:
RAWs: http://www.mediafire.com/download/2udcro5pjf4qdns
ch14: http://pastebin.com/z2BrDbqy
ch15: http://pastebin.com/QdXiiRzR
ch16: http://pastebin.com/80DRzwU2
ch17 http://pastebin.com/WncAiGJ9
Omake: http://pastebin.com/DJvZ5Yeb
http://nhentai.net/g/153083/
translate this Honoka Tsubasa manga!
Is no one interested in editing Manga no Tsukurikata? No SFX, some text overlays, next volume fully translated.
YKA Chapter 14
Link:
https://mega.nz/#!5cZUxb6a!CWFkBPlgq-A_dtpFRUzYnEzIkFmwjTg0xW4uMDtk-GQ
>>1928670
I suppose I'll repost my request for translations of these short Kase-san comics. Looking at them, they're mostly handwritten which may be difficult, but they're easy to typeset, so I'll get them edited if no one else wants to do that.
>>1951874
Could try posting on YP. Procyon has translated extra material for his series on request previously. http://safe.yuriproject.net/res/4121.html
>>1951829
that was depressing
So, uh, Aoi's birthday is on the 31st January and I'm planning to translate 2 Aoi-centric books and scan 1-2 art books. Gulf Standard from Yuri Project is helping so he'll work on one book and I'll work on the other one (Secret x Secret 2 or the lewd IchiAo). My only concern is I need a 2nd cleaner.
If any bored cleaner is hanging around these threads, I need your help.
Would anyone be willing to help translate the first volume of Tachibanakun To Lie Angle. Once I get a new car I'm planning on buying and scanning the first volume for anyone who's willing to translate it.
>>1951738
The last two bubbles on page 125 in chapter 15 don't make any sense. Can you look into this Goggles?
>>1953854
It follows from Sexy's previous dialogue of resuming the 'playback'. Probably just picked the incorrect punctuation is all. Just change it to "Starting from the moment" and it should work fine.
>>1953940
Ah, alright. I thought it was something like that but I wanted to be sure.
>>1953547
I think the first volume is actually already being worked on. a TL anon bought the digital version I think and has posted the edited versions here. I'm pretty sure the first few chapters are on Dynasty. So save your money for now maybe?
Are there any translations for daily witch? It looks kind of cute from the first chapter but I can't find it anywhere.
Crossposted from yuru yuri thread:
Any interest in translating this enormous HimaSaku volume from Kanbayashi Makoto, of NozoEri and HimaSaku fame? It looks angsty, honest, and passionate like her other works and the art is on point. I guess it's old but she uploaded it last April, so let's have at it before it gets lost to the pixiv Abyss. There are other complete doujins in her page too.
>>1954095
If I don't remember wrongly, some group did pick up this doujin. Consider the length and the quality of the scans I wouldn't blame them if it takes such a long time.
>>1954095
Also, most if not all of then NozoEli doujins by Kanbayashi have been translated, so it's either you haven't lurk enough or typeset not available yet.
>>1954055
Mind posting the edited versions?
>>1954158
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/tachibanakan_tolie_triangle_ch01
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/tachibanakan_tolie_triangle_ch02
TLer actually did some really nice edits with this series. Stoked for the next release.
can someone translate this pic?
YKA Chapter 15
Link:
https://mega.nz/#!MExwnKaI!1CTN0DpLBnLKoBkVIffrm2YVBWzKrZ0AJ7zvUoFxmwY
>>1954453
Rough attempt
>Usually the pure hearted Nanami is always on the attack when she's on top in bed. What a little devil. <3
>That's a lie! It's made up! Totally! Made! Up!
ガウ?
ガウ
>>1954458
p125
>From the moment the prince died,
>the bear maid and the bear princess became friends.
Kinda changes the meaning a little bit (ie. Ever since the bear died, they became friends). Try going with:
Well then, let's resume...
from the point where the prince had died...
and the bear maid and bear princess became friends.
p130
>I can remember them bit by bit
Maybe "I can only remember them bit by bit" would work better? Like she's agreeing with lifebear?
p133
>I wanna go.
>And find the promised kiss.
I wanna go
and find the promised kiss.
p134
>Maybe if we're engaged
Maybe if we were engaged
>>1954523
>from the point where the prince had died...
>and the bear maid and bear princess became friends.
I don't know how you're getting "Ever since the bear died, they became friends" out of that.
"From the point where the prince had died and the bear maid and bear princess became friends" isn't even a sentence.
>>1954576
That's why I took out the capitalization and added ...s, so it follows on from what Sexy said.
The dialogue is stating that this is the point in the story Sexy is picking up from, while in its current form it reads like they became friends at the exact moment Milne died (which, regardless of it being technically what happened, isn't what's being said here) .
>>1954643
Oh I see now. I'll see what I can do with it tomorrow.
I'm thinking maybe:
>Well then, let's resume...
>... point where the prince had died.
>The bear maid and bear princess had become friends.
>>1954661
I think it's best to just stick to what I have written. It's literally "let's pick this up from the point where this and that happened".
>>1954193
Chapter 4 has some lewd moments.
>>1954458
pg 128
>wierd ideas
weird ideas
YKA Chapter 15 v2
Link:
https://mega.nz/#!9ExwXJgb!6Hk9OJ7NjqpoeejLBZN_EknzixrxaNN2olbzm5MD_q8
>>1955633
this is sauce of queen cat 2 : http://g.e-hentai.org/g/884595/2c69f4d0cd/
also, for who not know this beautiful jewel, the link of queen cat 1 : http://g.e-hentai.org/g/682054/8e8d05afb7/
>>1955633
>ends in hetshit
Hahaha. Good luck getting that translated.
Thank Kumaria for all these Yuyushiki doujin RAWs we've been getting lately
http://pastebin.com/yu2Qci9R
http://exhentai.org/g/892374/3fef223698/
Had a bit of free time. Would be nice if anyone could translate the title and SFX's because I can also do those.
Anyone up for QC? Didn't clean this as thoroughly as I usually do, but hopefully that's fine.
Toshinou Kyouko no Koto da Mono QCv1: http://www.mediafire.com/download/70dfa68an2tyr26/Toshinou_Kyouko_no_Koto_da_Mono_QCv1.zip
Man, I wish there were more sfw KyoAya doujins.
>>1956464
Thanks Anon.
>>1956464
p5
>Buf if we're found out
But
Also TL credit should go to Goggled Anon
As for the title, it sounds like it could be something along the lines of "Something About Toshinou Kyouko", but honestly most sites don't give that much of a shit whether it's translated or not.
Nice work.
>>1956464
I wish there were more Aya in general.
>>1956584
>As for the title, it sounds like it could be something along the lines of "Something About Toshinou Kyouko"
Really?
http://ejje.weblio.jp/content/だもの
だもの is the same thing as だもん - indicate reason; infers some protest. The title the becomes something like "Because I'm Toshino Kyouko". To paraphrase: "I'm Toshino Kyouko, What Did You Expect?".
>>1956592
Well it's certainly not something Kyouko's saying, cos "Toshinou Kyouko" is Ayano's shtick. That, and it's probably different in that it's のことだもの, which google ironically translates as "thing thing".
Best leave it untranslated if you're not 100% sure.
>>1956594
I didn't read the actual doujin, so I didn't know who was saying it. Just modify it accordingly. (Because It's Toshino Kyouko).
のこと after a person's name is used to imply "everything about that person" or "that person's specific characteristics". Of course Google Translate doesn't recognize this.
For the record, the difference between こと (事) and もの (物) is that 物 refers to physical things (e.g. book) and 事 to non-physical (e.g. reading - the activity). Of course both have million other uses (like you see with のこと and だもの), but this is the basic distinction. Again, Google Translate doesn't recognize it.
More about だもの (だもん).
http://www.italki.com/question/302161
Is usage of Google Translate common on /u/?
>>1956598
Probably not among the more talented translations, but I do use it for looking at single words (eg. if there's a kanji I can't pick up with the reader, I can use Google's handwriting tool to (attempt to) find out what it is). Naturally it shouldn't be used for entire sentences.
I'd say it's probably "The Thing About Toshinou Kyouko". "Because" is more of a
だから kind of thing.
Kana on its own can be kinda tricky since it can sometimes have various meanings depending on context.
>>1956600
Why are you resisting the fact that だもの simply means "because" -- indicate reason; infers some protest?
そのため does too, それ故 as well. "Because" isn't just だから.
>>1956464
>I really wish Chitose had come with me
I wish I came/should have come (together) with Chitose
>Like? Love? Is she asking me out?
Like? Like.. as in going out and stuff? That sort of thing?
>I tried to tell her, but Ayano...
I told her we should stop, but Ayano...
>Ayano give me half of yours, okay?
After this line she also says, "It's okay if it's half-eaten/you've eaten from it/there's a bite out of it"
I'd like to ask, if I'm willing to do the rest of the Rat Park/Bai Lao Shu Kantai Collection Yuri doujin translations, is there anyone willing to edit?
>>1951738
Any thailand here?
>>1956598
I use Google Translate incessantly, though obviously not for the translations themselves, which have gifted me such gems as "the attempt to allosolving more than anyone" and "the Nau is broken."
I thought maybe "But It's Toshinou Kyouko" for the title? Though basically anything would work.
The "like" (presumably 好き) on 4 could use some work, there's probably a better way to do that. Are there raws for this? I could double-check the translation.
2
バーン
burst/swing
3
そそくさ
stride
だらだら
drip drip
5
middle scholers
middle schoolers
カー
blush
6
ドキ
ba-dump
7
ぎょっ!
gape
おわり
The End
credit page
北原朋萌
Kitahara Tomoe
>>1956822
RAWs here: http://exhentai.org/g/830634/0ff915d251/
And yes, the misheard 好き will forever be the bane of Japanese translations.
>>1956948
Try this one.
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/830634/0ff915d251/
>>1956464
Well here's the solution I came up with. I won't claim it's perfect.
4
Like
I like you...
What? Did I just hear "like" just now?
What? Did she just say she liked me?
5
Like? Love? Is she asking me out?
Like like... /like/? Is she asking me out?
Maybe if we're living together, but if we get found out,
And if we were to start living together, we'd definitely get found out...
Taiyaki.
Do you want the taiyaki?
Custard or red bean, which flavor do you like?
Like I said, there's custard and red bean. I like your options!
>>1957119
Or how about this?
>>1957124
My only concern with that would be that hearing the single word "like" in isolation and immediately taking it as a confession is almost psychopathic, whereas thinking it about 好き would be relatively reasonable.
>>1957130
Honestly I'm fine with any option as long as it clearly shows Ayano's misunderstanding. I'll release the final version after you guys decide what to go with.
Also, I'm still confused as to what the title should be. Please clarify, so I can try and redraw the title page accordingly. Thanks!
>>1957119
I think it just moves the awkwardness elsewhere rather than solving it. You and your aren't easily confusable unless you're talking funny or slurred your words or something. But mainly, saying, "I like your options" when you're offering someone something is definitely really weird.
Ayano is 100% definitely not confusing Kyouko for having maybe asked her out. She's just using going out as an example to describe what sort of "like" she thinks she may have heard. As I put earlier, something like:
>Like? Like.. as in going out and stuff? That sort of thing?
>>1957130
Ayano's quick to get flushed over little things, so I don't think it's unreasonable to that extent. Though it's certainly abnormal.
>>1957124
I think I might kind of like this one. Maybe a little improvement over just "Like"
And here's some more KyoAya
http://pastebin.com/mD288vpc
http://exhentai.org/g/892941/264e597136/
>To think that the real person would say that~
Why don't you ask the person themself
>Geez, Toshinou Kyouko! Give back that ice cream ([that I never get a chance to eat]) this instant!
That I always fail to give to you
>Hey, Kyouko~ You always call me by my first name.
Hey Ayano~ You always call me by my full name
>I never said you could have it!
I never said anything about giving it to you
>[It started off loud but then got sadder as it went on...]
The louder you said it the sadder it became (probably could be better phrased)
>[It's still hard to believe things went this well]
This is fine, but I think maybe, "it's almost unreal that things..." would sound better
>You're right... I hope they haven't gotten themselves involved in anything...
gotten involved in any trouble/incident
>It's become a bit too awkward to bring up the camping...
The camp plans have been left unsettled (unclear as to whether it's still on or not)
>Things haven't been looking so good lately.
You haven't been too cheerful lately
>Ayano-chan, why don't you bring her some ice cream? I'll take care of the documents here.
We'll take care of the paperwork
>I just happen to buy it sometimes so don't go misunderstanding anything!
I just happened to buy some, don't go misunderstanding
>I just pretended not to know so that I wouldn't accept it
I didn't want to accept/acknowledge it, so I was pretending I didn't realize
>That's so not like me
The fact that it wasn't me
>I put everything into a wasted effort
I gave it my all, running around in circles alone/I desperately ran around in circles all alone (could probably be phrased better)
>I feel like such an idiot!
Like an idiot!
>There was no place for me to begin with!
There was no room for me (to come between them/in Kyouko's heart) to begin with
>Why am I so useless?
How come things never go right for me
1/3 posts coming up
>>1957381
>>1957452
>I worked so hard to get Toshinou Kyouko to recognise me, but now I realize it was all a wasted
Toshinou Kyouko to notice me, but I've realized it was all wasted effort/a useless attempt
>Besides, given the circumstances, conveying my impossible feelings would just be a nuisance.
Besides, given the circumstances, even if I gave it my all and conveyed my feelings it would just be a nuisance (to Kyouko)
>[It's probably better for me if I just gave up altogether.]
and so I feel it would be easier if I just gave up and acted like none of this happened (I'm don't feel so good about this line either)
>Even if giving up were to put you at ease, would you really be able to throw away the precious feelings you've had for Toshinou-san up until now?
..wouldn't that be denying the precious feelings.. (maybe a better word than deny)
>Your feelings may be [a bit fragmented], Ayano-chan
Ayano-chan's feelings may have only bit by bit (gotten through)
>[We would've been back sooner but there wasn't a single battery in the future* so I guess it was a pain?]
For reason's there was no *D batteries in the future, anyway it was a pain
>*Time machine's [???]
*Time machine's energy source
>[You were fliring with Chinatsu-chan in the closet and then you just happened to find a time machine and have fun doing Hamupero Picturelo in the future!?]
So you're saying you were flirting with Chinatsu chan in the closet and there happened to be a time machine so you went to the future & (I think ハムペロピチャレロ are all making out sort of onomatopoeia)
>Yui's senpai thing (tea) was so hot <3
I would maybe just go with "Yui-senpai's (tea) was so hot"
>Chinatsu-chan... Don't create misunderstandings. Seriously stop...
You'll create a misunderstanding. Stop it...
>>1957381
>>1957455
>For worrying you so much~
For causing you needless worry/Making you worry needlessly
>I bought some pudding as an apology! Let's eat if together!!
...eat it..
>Things are getting bad. I need to hurry and get back home...
This are gonna get bad like this. If we don't get back home soon...
>Chinatsu-chan, try giving the time machine another go, okay?
shall we try giving the time machine another go?
>>1957452
>>1957455
>>1957456
Nice to see some TL assistance on more than just Yurikuma.
Revision: http://pastebin.com/AvBiTx0p
>Things haven't been looking so good lately.
>You haven't been too cheerful lately
This one's a bit tricky since the line is about Kyouko but Ayano assumes it's about hers.
Also in Wildstyle um... style, the doujin also has an R18 spin-off which I TL'd in the last thread
http://pastebin.com/v6PjHTa2
http://exhentai.org/g/875835/4b0174cea6/
Also Requiem for a Daydream 2, whose R18 spinoff has been scanlated, but not the main one.
http://pastebin.com/gQxhcPuu
http://exhentai.org/g/824823/1ce7ae523b/
If people wanna take a look at those, they're more than welcome.
>>1957479
>This one's a bit tricky since the line is about Kyouko but Ayano assumes it's about hers
Ah, so it is. I must have glanced over the following panel.
Yukirinrin bringing the Princess 3Ps
http://pastebin.com/WHwK5fHG
http://exhentai.org/g/893389/8813528fe9/
If anyone is interested in translating/editing Okujou no Yurirei-san spin-off manga, raws are posted on yuri project board.
http://safe.yuriproject.net/res/18118.html
http://safe.yuriproject.net/res/18119.html
>>1956598
>>1957302
I went with these. I think this is fit for release, no?
https://www.mediafire.com/?1ordiigeuffukek
>>1957381
Art's good. Picked up. Might take a while though. God I hope I don't regret picking up a 37-page doujin in the near future.
You people should translate more lewds.
>>1958036
Damn this looks cute. Some should really pick it up
Hey, YKA cleaner/typesetter here.
I'll start on YKA 16 sometime soon.
I've been a little busy.
Dominate Kayochin
http://pastebin.com/CsbKTYrP
http://exhentai.org/g/894384/06724c3249/
http://exhentai.org/s/a187a20373/892695-28
Somebody want to tell me how this ends? I can recognize "netorare" and it looks like the dude is going out with the one girl.
>>1959577
I think that's a girl?...
I'm about half way through typesetting YKA 16 now. I'll probably finish it this weekend.
>>1960118
Nice gif picture Anon.
>>1959577
TL: http://pastebin.com/k4RnF7Wr
And yes, it looks like its definitely another girl who sent the love letter, which makes the NTR remark more delicious.
Can someone help me with translating this?
>M: Do you want to do it too, Jeane? (Bise? Couldn't find a translation for the katakana)
>J: We're both girls, Marie!! And something like that before marriage - n!
>M: So how was it?
>J: It was very... hot
Viva France
>>1960250
>(Bise? Couldn't find a translation for the katakana)
ビセじゃなくてベーゼだ。ググると容易に意味を見つかるよ
>And something like that before marriage
結婚を前提に。そんなことするには結婚するようになるべきん(だけど女同士では結婚できない)
>hot
hotよりintenseかpassionateのほうがいい
Goggles, can you explain this?
>Maybe you should go over to Yurishiro-chan's side?
Is this correct or should it be something more like "be at Yurishiro-chan's side" as in "comfort her"?
>>1960457
I think "you should go and be by Yurishiro-san's side" would probably work best.
>>1960460
Alright, I'll go with that. The chapter should be put up here within the next half hour.
>>1960460
What about this: repeating "like that" sounds clumsy.
>>1960464
I'd just use "I wasn't able to kiss her back then but..." so it matches the previous chapter.
>>1960472
Will do.
YKA 16
Link:
https://mega.nz/#!1ARnDKjL!I308l51uqIzWYUSp3aVyvgzbsDYfSybDiSVH3AZdaqk
>>1960492
YKA 16 V2
Link:
https://mega.nz/#!VERWiSRI!EybfcVVYJF_3TR_W1t5EBI7-Gn8OaqLsOf7C2SmeYGA
So, uh, two things:
Title of the doujin is 寝れないふたり or "The two who can't sleep." Is there a better/catchy way of translating it?
And what's ぽっん? Silence? Sounds like the SFX of Aoi dropping her duffel bag, but the ellipses imply the sound still persists and not instant.
>>1960499
Make that three.
御殿 has two dots above each kanji. Any idea what they're for?
>>1960499
Something like "The Restless Duo" or something along those lines?
ぽっん could be Aoi's disappointment that Ichigo isn't there.
>>1960504
Catchy title. I'll take that into consideration.
So... "bummed"?
Time to contribute. If you're having trouble figuring out SFX, try this site:
http://thejadednetwork.com/sfx/
It's not complete, but it offers a huge list of SFX for you to use or use them as reference.
>>1960499
ぽつん just indicates that she's all alone, it's not an emotional sound effect.
Japanese meaning:
それだけ孤立しているさま。一つだけ離れてあるさま。
Ponytail Ribbon Rhapsody QCv1: https://www.mediafire.com/?bcd8lqgq9scb2zf
Requesting someone to translate all the SFX, signs, and other small text.
Also, the dialogues seem a bit awkward/stiff at times, can someone edit? No offense to Goggled, of course
>>1960971
P19
Student Council
P20
Tea Ceremony Club
P25
"Searching for these two people!!!" (cut off part way, appears on 33)
Unsure about the cut off text above Yui's head
Single character 裸 naked
Yoshikawa Chinatsu-san
Shichirin Middle School 1st year student 13 years old
Height 149cm
Pink fluffy twintails
Dress at time of disappearance: naked or half-naked
If you recognize these faces.../If these faces come to mind...
Contact address: Shichirin Middle School Council
P33
Student Council
Searching for these two people!!!
Can't read rest
P36
起動 Start
発進 Takeoff
Yui is wearing Chinatu's shirt, it says Yoshikawa
Sorry, I don't like to do sound effects and I probably write somewhat unnatural dialogue as well. I didn't feel like downloading so I just went over the raws and picked out signs and such so sorry if I missed anything. P16&18 is too cut off and so can't read.
Do you guys talk about cleaning and typesetting here or only about translations?
I wanted to learn those and help YP with Bloom into You, but it seems no one in that project can QC.
>>1961191
>Do you guys talk about cleaning and typesetting here or only about translations?
All.I'm actually looking for a cleaner.
Not sure about teaching how to clean/TS, but there are sites that are best suited for those kind of needs.
>>1951738
When will YKA be completely released? Is there any major difference from the anime plot?
>>1961200
Cleaner for what series?
And yeah I can learn most from the sites. I'm just not sure how far should i go with stuff like leveling and what is acceptable in the end.
>>1961208
Mainly Aikatsu! doujinshi and fan-made art books. Pic related, I bought these recently. For a complete list:http://lazylily.moe/doujinshi/
>>1961214
Do you have any raws? Just wondered how hard it would be.
>>1961215
Give this a shot:
https://mega.nz/#!yVRiUBJI!WierU1jCEiIXdD2ugWPPa4NbfsmvEZQssEjQzmccYT4
>>1960971
p25
>Even I did convey my feelings
should that be "Even if I did"?
>>1961205
>When will YKA be completely released?
It's ongoing series.
>Is there any major difference from the anime plot?
The manga plot is different altogether.
>>1961225
How about this? Not sure how much cleaning or redrawing is needed.
>>1961264
I'm not the group's cleaner, but I can tell there are lots of rough edges like the page is still grainy, you forgot to change to grayscale (for smaller file size as well), the blacks aren't really black, etc. Here's our cleaned page for comparison.
What you did right is you managed to redraw the pages and any gaps you missed will be covered by the typesetting anyways.
>>1961264
Cleaning usually also involves leveling in order to get rid of dust and artifacts.
Compare the level of noise on white on your picture and on a leveled one.
Yuriproject has a short tutorial on leveling, if you want to try your hand at it.
http://wiki.yuriproject.net/editing_tutorial#leveling
>>1961258
> It's ongoing series.
So I mean full series release, is it unknown?
>>1961287
It's still publishing in Japan.
>>1961277
>>1961278
I made some changes.
>>1961296
Better, but blacks are non-existent. Ideally, you should try to get clean whites and blacks without damaging the screentones too much.
>>1961307
Is there a tutorial about the blacks or did I mess up with he leveling? Not sure what I should do about them.
>>1961308
You do the same thing you do for whites, only for blacks. Literally, just pull the other slider.
>>1961311
Like that? I'm not sure I get it.
>>1961314
Yep.
White still has some dust on it that will need to be manually removed (well, almost manually; leveling whites some more can help), image is slightly off and needs to be rotated, and that black line up there should've been cropped out before you resized the image, but overall you're done with the basics.Now quit before it's too late. Cleaning isn't fun.
>>1961329
I'm not the person you've been talking with, but it all depends on your preference and the preference of the person that wants it cleaned.
If you want it done well, then yes you should do all that.
I, personally, would just remove that black line at the top, cover any visible dust, and call it a day. The alignment isn't too off on that image in my opinion.
>>1961329
>does it really need to be rotated more?
Slightly, yes. Use a guide and put it close to the border of right panels, you'll see that they are not completely parallel to the guide.
>And that dust is only visible with extra leveling layer, it should be cleared too?
Of course. Don't you know that most people read manga in Photoshop, with 300% zoom and adjustment layers turned on?
Joking aside, invisible dust slightly affects the image size. That's about all it does, and even then the difference is insignificant, so if you don't want to clear everything out, don't. Leaving small (and I mean small, not like >>1961278) amount of dust is okay, though some scanlation groups would disagree.
>>1961372
I'm planning to translate this
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=51339501
for Valentine's Day. The book is fairly short and if you read NOTO-san's other books, her stories are brief with little dialogue. I think this is a good way for you to sharpen your skills.
Unfortunately, I can't link you the raws right now since I have to rip and scan the pages first. On top of that we're currently working on two books for Aoi's birthday this 31st. If you can give me your email, I'll contact you and link you the scans directly when it's ready.[email protected]
>>1961384
Sure. I will send you my email in a bit.
>>1960971
p5
>Why don't you ask the person yourself~
You should ask that to the person herself~
Still unsure if this is the correct translation. I kinda assumed it was Chitose reacting to real Ayano saying this instead of fantasy Ayano, but that dialect is a bitch.
Also, "Why don't you ask..." and "Geez, Ayano-chan" go in the same bubble. It's missing the line about her glasses.
p6
>Niagra
Niagara (again, still haven't though of any good English equivalent puns for this page)
p17
>Suguira-senpai
Sugiura
p18
>Nude Bon Festival Dance
don't forget the training camp in a hidden mountain part. It should basically be identical to the later bubble.
>You're right... I hope they're safe...
You're right.... I hope nothing bad's happened to them... (just so Akari has a bit more reason to be worried)
p19
>Hasn't been so cheerful lately
Not been very cheerful lately.
p20
>They didnt'
didn't
p21
>Deep breathes
Deep breaths
p23
>Just running in circle by myself
circles
p25
>>1961231
p30
>Did we interrupt something?
>Are we interrupting something?
p31
* by D batteries to direct readers to the footnote
p32
>Yui-senpai's "that" was so hot.
Yui-senpai's "that" (her tea) was so hot.
>There's no guarantee you'll be able to go back.
you'll be able to come back
p36
>Things are gonna get back like this.
bad
p37
>Nishinko-sensei
Nishigaki-sensei
>It really is Funami and Yoshikawa
So it really was you two, Funami and Yoshikawa.
>>1961402
>Still unsure if this is the correct translation
It is. If she were to say it Tokyo style it would go, "そんなの本人に聞いたらいいじゃん"
But, it should go "Why don't you/you should ask the person herself"
That "to" sounds foreign.
>Yui-senpai's "that" (her tea) was so hot
Maybe just dropping "that" altogether would work better in English? "Yui-senpai's (tea) was so hot/warm"
>>1961413
She uses アレ so she definitely refers to something vague to make things lewd. I'm thinking either "that" or "you-know-what".
>>1961453
Yeah, I just thought that maybe just "Yui-senpai's was so hot/warm", dropping "that" and just having Chinatsu leave out and bracket the "tea" would still get that feeling across while sounding more natural, but reading it over again now, it sounds off as well. "(Person)'s that" does sound awkward in English. "You-know-what" might be not bad.
How do you guys cut multiple pages in photoshop? It seems the cut option can't save dimensions only ratios. Any tricks to make the process faster.
Had a go at this loli piano story (p170-189)
http://pastebin.com/fChVTGgr
http://exhentai.org/s/ba37e43d9e/894501-170
Hey Goggled, did you send YKA chapter 16 in to Dynasty? I figured you were probably doing it and I haven't seen it show up yet.
I encountered this:
There are small text in the narration boxes. Is Aoi thinking while narrating? She just repeated "koe" twice.
>>1961797
This is fairly common in Japanese, where furigana is given to a word or phrase even though it's not matching the words used. It's used like this in numerous ways, such as to provide context or clarify something, as it is in this case. You read it このこえ(not こえこえ), but it says いちごの声 just to make it clear who's thoughts you're reading. Something like that. It can be used to give translation for foreign words, for cool effect, simple alternative to a complex word and more.
Couple examples.
黒い森 - furigana:シュバルツバルト (Schwarzwald)
火竜 - furigana:サラマンダー
自分の罪 - furigana:シンジツ
>>1961786
Indeed, they've been taking ages to add it (along with the recent chapters of SwapSwap). I guess the upload who regularly checks the request list is off or something.
>>1961797
It's one of those double meaning kinda things. In this case, the main part reads "Ichigo's voice too" while the subpart reads "this voice". It's the same thing as when they do the ol' chunibyo habit of adding English readings to kanji, but it is a bit of a pain when it comes to deciding what to put down in an English translation. In this case, I don't think it particularly matters either way.
Could I get any opinions on this? We are working with this on YP, but QC seems to be missing in this project.
http://www.mediafire.com/download/75l71zhu1lz58a5/yagakimi+ch07+QCv2.rar
>>1962385
Lil tricky without the RAWs to compare to but here's my penny
p6
>I think you forgot that yesterday
I believe you forgot this yesterday.
>I left it in the Student Council room?
So I left it in the Student Council room, huh?
p7
>I just wondered
I was just wondering
>Information class
What's the original Kanji for this? Just sounds kinda odd, unless it's an actual thing in Japan.
p13
>What are you over there grinning about?
What are you grinning about over there?
p14
>Or maybe you're more outside-the-box and like Koito-san?
Or maybe you prefer someone more outside-of-the-box like Koito-san?
p17
>doubtless
>There's no doubt
p23
>causing her tpanic
to panic
>>1962402
Raws are here:
http://www.mediafire.com/download/1hm528v4bk135sk/yagakimi+ch7+raw.rar
I was just doing typesetting with bit of cleaning, so I don't know much about translations.
>>1962385
Just by looking at the English; not the raw.
8
>spooked
surprised
9
>/not/
Should drop the // and italic or bold the "not"
>hardier
more stubborn, tougher or something else would be better.
18
>dag nab it
dang it, darn it, or damn it.
19
>Hmmmph
Hmmm
On an almost similar note, our stuff are coming along just fine like our 2nd doujinshi is practically done. However, I planned to include an art book to the Happy Birthday Aoi bundle (name I made up just now), but I need someone who can fix my scans and stitch them. If you guys are interested in cleaning it, please give me a holler.
>>1962641
sample image of said art book
Ponytail Ribbon Rhapsody QCv1: https://www.mediafire.com/?x38srrg531kpg91
Someone please translate the SFX for me. Also I think it's still missing some random small text dialogue so please do those too.
>>1963485
Offtopic: Can some tell me the origin of this meme?
>>1963485
p5
>バーン
*burst open*
p11
>It might mean she might have one in the future
It could mean she might
p18
>I hope nothing's bad happened to them...
nothing bad's happened
p27
>ずん
*thump* (or whatever noise a bunch of papers make)
>Shichirin Middle School
Nanamori Middle School
p33
>バーン
*burst open*
p36
>ゴウン
Apparently it's the sound a washing machine makes, so maybe a *vrmmmm* or something coming off the airships?
>がしっ
*grab*
p37
>ドドドドドド
*rumble*
Which is better to blacken blacks/remove their "dust", painting/brushing it black or using the burn (or was it dodge) tool?
>>1963568
Burn.
>>1963513
http://hijiribe.donmai.us/wiki_pages/52245
>>1963657
thanks
>>1963485
14
It should be "Comiket" that's the biggest piece of text, since Ayano's saying the loudness of Kyouko's voice is proportional to the sadness of what she's saying.
18
>Kyouko you literally just said that
no literally
19
Haa (Ayano sigh bubble)
23
>I just didn't want to...
acknowledge it, so I was pretending I didn't realize (no period it's connected to next part, I don't mean that position-wise) the fact that..
29
I don't really think wa~ah fits this sound. I don't know what sort of sound best fits a time machine coming through a time portal or whatever though. Just to transliterate the sound it gives, Gyuuun is written.
31
>licky schlicky pinchy
Sounds a bit silly I think. I don't really have a suggestion to better it though.
33
>I think I've gotten closer to Toshinou Kyouko than I have before
than I was before
36
>Back to the yuichi
Back to the present
>あらすじ...
Outline While flirting in the closet they were suddenly transported into the future!
The button in the bottom right is the "take off" button again
37
>(駆動音)
(Motor sounds)I don't think it would be an exaggeration to include anonymous in the translation credits too
>>1963833
>It should be "Comiket" that's the biggest piece of text,
So something like "Comuket is something I'll be going to..."? (note Comuket is the YRYR version of Comiket)
>no literally
It's just there for emphasis and seems to be pretty thingy considering it is "literally" on the same page. Translation doesn't always have to be 1:1.
>than I was before
That's actually gramatically incorrect unless you change the prior part of "I'm closer to"
>I don't really think wa~ah fits this sound.
*wooooooosh*
>Sounds a bit silly I think
It's Toshinou Kyouko. What do you expect?
>>1963861
>So something like "Comuket is something I'll be going to..."? (note Comuket is the YRYR version of Comiket)
As long as "Comuket" is in the biggest font as opposed to "I am" since Ayano's treating going to comuket as something sad. Though yeah, it might sound better like that with comuket at the front of the sentence.
>That's actually gramatically incorrect unless you change the prior part of "I'm closer to"
No, it's fine. It's "I think I've gotten closer to" that comes before it. Though even if it were just "I'm closer to Kyouko" "than I was before" would still be fine.
You can google "closer to * than i was before" to see a number of examples of it in use if you like.
this looks cute
what does it say
>>1963581
Why? For scanned items, sure. What about digital raws?
>>1964027
Surely digital RAWs wouldn't have dust? Unless it's put there intentionally by the author for effect.
>>1964313
Ah, for that I meant "erasing" text on black bubbles.
>>1964027
>What about digital raws?
Digital RAWs don't have dust, only artifacts if they're in .jpg.
Dust is basically the "artifacts" of printing (and sometimes scanning, if whoever scanned the RAWs screwed up). It's damn right near impossible to have pure white and black colors printed on the kind of paper manga (and most books, too) uses, from cheap magazines to tankoubons, though the latter have significantly less dust when scanned, since the quality of paper and printing is higher.
>>1964320
Text != dust.
>>1963927
Mami! I want to borrow your hair clips!
Eh? That's fine, but what are you going to use them for?
You'll get to see after you let me borrow them!
Oh? She's taking off her scrunchies...
Finished!
My my...
I was especially particular about Mami's boobs!
So she wasn't too worried about the hair ornaments...
>>1956689
that kirby suction.
I'm in a bit of a trouble here. Our original translation is "Starlight Monastery" but the text won't fit unless I split monastery "monas-tery" and I don't want that.
Currently I'm suggesting we use "temple" instead. Any other suggestions?
>>1965001
Never mind. Found a solution.
>>1965013
Some people would misread it as "Monastery Starlight" at first.
>>1965015
I'm sorta aware of that and that is way I positioned "Starlight" higher than "Monastery" and hopefully anyone will get the idea.Still open for suggestions.
Bit o' TsubaHonks. Just the scribbly stuff on p15 that I'm having trouble with.
http://pastebin.com/SgwMvRjC
http://exhentai.org/g/890477/8b9d66e3a5/
>>1965175
東京都女子高生(16)不明
写真と実名公開して捜(索)
国立音の木坂学院2年生
高(坂穂乃果)さん
〇日〇時ごろから連絡が取れなくなり〇日家族が警察
警察では引き続き情報提供を呼びかけ
And the line right before all this..
>We're running out of time
It's a matter of time
I'm not going to check over the translation for rest of it, but I noticed that part when checking to see if you meant reading the scribbled text or translating it.
>>1965243
Updated: http://pastebin.com/j32eqRRk
We can look over it a bit more if someone shows an interest in typesetting.
More CocoChino
http://pastebin.com/HiKgztdK
http://exhentai.org/g/896565/2f90ab7f38/
Here you are Goggled Anon: YKA 17 and the Vol.2 Omake.
I would appreciate if you look look at Life Sexy and Life Cool's last bubbles on the last page of the Omake. Not sure what they are talking about there.
Also, I noticed that Dynasty has the Vol.1 Omake not after chapter 8.
Anyway, links:
YKA 17:
https://mega.nz/#!MIBRhBiS!2vunApSN2rZKDmxw72JXdfd54c-LeHtVqcICKWN83MQ
Vol.2 Omake:
https://mega.nz/#!9QQ2jbxC!tu9yzusfmAGHsVb8xMHeQL_iFVVoL2mmBsTm_yvpJBs
>>1966021
For the omake
>There are three "Suzuki-san"'s in my class alone
"Suzuki-san"s or Suzuki-sans (no apostrophe)
>Well, putting Sexy aside...
Well, Sexy is fine as it is...
>Is that okay...?
>You sure about that...?
Ch17 looks fine.
>>1966037
Fixed omake.
Link:
https://mega.nz/#!JNoXDaqb!avK6fqUykvtHNr8zACDwatwkIOx25I742A0lakKuHsQ
>>1965016
Why not have Starlight higher and positioned on the right? People would be reading the rest right to left anyways, so chances are more people would initially try to read the sign right to left instead of left to right.
>>1966420
The original text is this and I kinda figured anyone would naturally read the first word from the top then down.
>>1966431
Yeah, but there isn't enough space in English. I just think that if people are reading this, they'll be used to reading this manga right to left and when they see Starlight on the left but higher, it's sort of a conflict of expectations. On one hand, anyone would naturally assume that things would be read from top to bottom, but on the other hand, they've been reading this whole doujin from right to left up until now. I think it would make more sense to keep Starlight on top, but move it to the right.
>>1966440
There.
The doujin is done.
looking for any nice, bored, loving people who'd like to help translate an untranslated yuri visual novel "A Kiss For The Petals - Snow White's Knight" (https://vndb.org/v12645).
all scripts have been extracted and are available on the yuri project wiki website for anyone to translate / modify: http://wiki.yuriproject.net/wiki:shirayuki_no_kishi
i posted some patched clips of what's already translated on youtube to get more ppl interested & aware of this vn. enjoy this random yuri scene and any contribution to this project would really help!:
https://youtu.be/SXdzJEZqxfg?t=25m12s
>>1966449
Hmm, I think it does work better left to right. The right to left rule largely applies to the panels and bubbles; we still read the text within each bubble in the proper English way, and the sign could be considered its own bubble.
But I understand if you're just 'fuck it' at this point and wanna leave it as is.
>>1966449
I read it right to left, Even the old one (monastery starlight). Just letting you know.
Some MiyuIllya
http://pastebin.com/BaEUQ5qt
http://exhentai.org/g/897136/6c93adb416/
>>1966531
>>1966628
I'll go with the right-left thing. Now that's over, it's time to typeset this one.
Is it better to use text boxes for typesetting or just break lines manually?
>>1951738
N04h translated some stuff for me, anyone want the scripts for editing? Asked Y-ism and they said they'll ask around, but got no other answer after two weeks now.
The works are a two parter Honou to Ame (Fire and Rain) and Yuujin A no Soukanzu (The Correlation Chart of My Friend A) by Mikage Sekizai and two final chapters Dorodoro to Koi (Mix-ups and Love) by Gyuunyuu Linda and Honesty by Cloba.U. They're nothing too fancy, but I'd like to share them.
Do you guys have any way to contact you? Checked the blog, but haven't found anything there.
>>1967372
I prefer break lines manually so you can adjust any text at your convenience.
Hello, I'm a typesetter and cleaner. If anybody needs help, here I am.English is my second language, pardon for any mistakes.
>>1967372
It depends. The end result is the same, so why does it matter to anyone but you?
>>1967372
Mostly prefer breaking lines manually especially when dealing long words in small speech bubbles.
>>1967562
If you're into Aikatsu!, I'm always in need of cleaners. Here are our current works: http://exhentai.org/uploader/SHiN-gx
If you're interested in cleaning art books as well, I got 2-3 books lying around that needs to be stitched together and cleaned. Like this one: http://lazylily.moe/wp-content/uploads/2015/03/NNNNN.png
The one I linked needs to be cleaned before the 31st, since I plan to release that book together with two books.
>>1967914
Sure, I can help.
>>1967372
Use text boxes, break the lines manually when necessary.
These aren't mutually exclusive, you know.
I couldn't find a general scanlation thread in the catalog so hopefully someone here can help me.
Does anyone have the raw scanlations for Aoi Hana/青い花? And download link or archive I've found is dead.
>>1968161
Nyaa
I'm in quite a fix (I think this is translation thread related).
Codeyamada/Yamada Beta just sent me a C&D letter stating I take off her works from my website. Normally I'm an asshole and ignore her, but she threatened to stop making books of certain favorite couples.
What shall I do?
>>1969016
Share it here instead of your website.
>>1969017
Doable, but, well, if they found out( by checking other sites, sadpanda) the books were translated from me, I think I'm still fucked. I'm holding off replying a real answer. I'm currently writing her a note of consideration.
>>1969020
Share it without credits and group name. What you aim is for everyone to enjoy Aikatsu and like the artist more right, not climbing the pedestal?
>>1969038
Aye. I just sent the author a letter and see how things go. If I have heart left in me, I'll take down the links and host any new one under a different name or be completely anonymous.
I will continue hosting these doujinshi in Lazy Lily until they send a C&D letter, rinse and repeat.
Don't know if this is the right place to ask, but I'm planning to sub Harmony (I pre-ordered the BD the moment it was available).
I'll be ripping the RAW and syncing the subs. I know some Japanese but not enough to translate, so any help would be appreciated.
anyone know how to translate these sentences? i have a good idea of what it says but i wanna be sure. thanks!
GirlB「璃紗さん……今『美夜さん待っていてね』と、叫びませんでしたか?」
Risa「そ、それは……何というか、探しに行くための気合で……」
GirlA「もしかして、これから待ち合わせですか?」
Risa「いえ、そうではなくて……」
待ち合わせじゃなくて、乗り込むに近いんだけど……でも彼女たちは勝手に、良い方に解釈してしまっている。
>>1969016
>but she threatened to stop making books of certain favorite couples
Got a reply. Pretty reasonable lass. Wasn't even mad. Links of my translations of her works will go, though.
>>1969540
What did she say, what's the plan now?
>>1969771
I sent her a request for a less harsher compromise, but I doubt she'll yield. Any books from that artist will not show up in Lazy Lily's site. That's all I can say about the matter.
HEH. Things are turning out for the better.
レーセィリリー真様
Lazy Lily SHiN-sama
私はあなたの善意ある決断に感謝します。
I am thankful of your decision with good intention.
また、Twitterでのあなたへのブロックを解除させていただきます。
Also, I've unblocked you on twitter.
今後、私が同人誌を発行する際に海外版を作るとして、ひょっとしたらあなたに声を掛けることもあるかもしれません。
Next time, when I publish my doujinshi and think of making an international version, maybe just maybe I'll ask you to do it.
もしもその時がきたらまたご連絡致します。
If that time comes, I will contact you.
それでは、あなたの今後の健康とご活躍をお祈りいたします。
Well then, I wish you good health and working with you next time.
やまだ(仮)
Codeyamada
So... Yeah... If Codeyamada is really up to it, me and by extension Lazy Lily will be her official English translators.
IF she's really up to it.
>>1969818
>ご活躍をお祈りいたします
This is more of just a general phrase. A 'good luck' sort of thing expressing hopes that you continue to work hard; a wish for your success. Fairly similar to 頑張ってください.
>>1970037
Oh yeah, sorry. I exaggerated that phrase a bit.
Regarding the possible collab, this will never happen. It was nice of her to give me a sort of compromise, but after that initial negative email, the gaijin-nipp collab thing will never, ever happen. Sometimes I can't tell these Japanese are polite or plain sarcastic.
Could be fun though. No expectations. Moving on.
can anyone translate this page please?
What does it say?
>>1971636
I have shit Japanese, but I can translate half of it and someone else can fill in the blanks (and maybe tell me my translations were bullshit)
Cocoa: Chino-chan. Com over here ~ <3
Maya: Ahaha, Chino is cute ~
Chino: Cocoa-chan, Maya-chan - ?????????
Whoever this is: Your heart is pounding, isn't it?
>>1971770
>Com over here
Damn typo. That's supposed to be come.
>>1971770
Rather than come over here, it's face this way.
Cocoa-chan, Maya-chan, what are you thinking!
Based on the color of the text, it's probably Megu.
>>1967372
Text boxes and adjust manually as needed. Everyone who says otherwise is hung up on one piece of bad advice from an otherwise decent typesetting for noobs guide.
Kayo-chin in Wonderland. Also buttplugs.
http://pastebin.com/buTd6v9u
http://exhentai.org/g/900184/a0c5632fbb/
If anyone wants to finish the rest of the SFX:
p8 panel 1
p14 panel 1
p16 panel 2
p20 panel 7
p21 panel 1, 2, 4, 5, 6
p30 panel 1
p31 panel 2, 4
p32 panel 1 (including small text in yui's dialog), 2,
33 panel 1, 5
36 text at the right of the panels
37 text beside the explosion
http://exhentai.org/g/892941/264e597136/
Sorry, was a bit busy with uni. Once someone TL's these I'll upload it directly to Dynasty. Thanks.
>>1970157
>Sometimes I can't tell these Japanese are polite or plain sarcastic.
All part of the 本音と建前 culture.
>>1973744
p8
>*warm and fluffy*
p14
>So cool!
p16
>*burst open*
p20
>*boom*
p21
>*gulp...*
>*inhale*
>haaaaaaah
>*thwip*
>Cobra (on bag)
>Okay
>*slide*
p30
Not sure what the voomy text says. Seems like an obscure reference.
>*voooom*
p31
*thwap*
*squeeeeeeze*
p32
>Kya<3
>Stop it (already in the translation, just make that bit smaller)
>Uwaaaaaaah
>Bang Bang Bang
>Vuvuvuvuvuuum
>Awawawa...
p33
>Student Council
>*shreeeeeeeeeed*
>*burst open*
>*shreeeeeeed*
p36
>The story so far: While flirting in the closet they were suddenly transported into the future!
p37
>The end
There's no crack pairings in Love Live. Only rare ones.
http://pastebin.com/ga1YytrD
http://exhentai.org/g/900830/38c9c34ec7/
>>1973752
Ah, got it now.
It's Yuiri~n and Chinari~n backwards
So basically,
>n~iriuY
>n~iranihC
>>1973744
Just a few more post-release notes
p6
>the printout I had forgetten about
forgotten about
p18
>Kyouko-san, you literally just said that!
Kyouko-chan
p36
>they were suddenly transprted into the future
transported
Other than that (and a few alternate translations that you probably need not bother with at this point), great work!
Oh, Chiya. Will you ever get sex from Syaro that's not tinged with friendzoning?
http://pastebin.com/5fe1gmsj
http://exhentai.org/g/896569/f4b4e2d97e/
>>1970739
Here you go! If I got anything too wrong or missed the gist of something, someone who's more experienced can feel free to let me know. Also, I don't know the characters, so I just translated the name「シズエ」 literally.
Got two strikes from fan artists so I for once I'm asking permission to translate NOTO-san's books because she's one of the few artists I genuinely like and support if ever she puts a Patreon. Problem is she hasn't replied back for almost a week now. I think she's probably busy since an Aikatsu-only event is coming. I'm not so sure if I should remind her through a public tweet or wait.
The sequel to this is finally coming. http://g.e-hentai.org/g/836435/778ca92b49/
>>1976451
Try to wait until a few days after the event. She might be extremely busy.
>>1976508
You're right. That also means I have to put Eclipse on hold http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=51339501 and pick something else for Valentine's Day.
Quicky Gochiusa 3P
http://pastebin.com/rK4vvKVq
http://exhentai.org/g/901525/43d422141f/
Out of interest, for those who use my TLs for typesetting, what would you say is the best way to distinguish text that appears in the corner or edge of a bubble like pic related? Like, do I keep it in the same line:
>Honestly, Sharo-chan, you were so rough<3<3 Ufufu
or as a seperate break?
>Honestly, Sharo-chan, you were so rough<3<3
>Ufufu
I know it's called a lil confusion before where TSers would put the minitext in the next bubble, causing a knock-on effect with the rest of the dialogue.
>>1976546
Separate break, and use a different font like this one:
>>1976550
I meant from the translation side of things, ie. conveying to the TSer where everything goes. Notepad/Pastebin only has a basic font and you can't use bold and italics.
>>1976553
>>1976557
Oh. Still going for the second option. Splitting the lines will give the TS'ers an idea what the translator's intents are. Plus they have access to the scans and use them as visual aides. Unless the scans are cleaned by wiping off the texts, you have to leave a note like "ufufu" is separate and uses a different font, etc.
>>1976325
Thanks a lot for this!
Updated TL for Ponytail Ribbon Fantasia, mainly to match parts with the Rhapsody dialogue.
http://pastebin.com/NpNLCFjq
http://exhentai.org/g/875835/4b0174cea6/
I would like to request the translation of the 7th (7/8, just in case, since the author add'd a chapter 0) chapter of this fanfic:
http://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=4548098#chapter_6_0
Suggestions for the SFX すうすう? Left frame is Aoi sniffing Ichigo's pillow, but it's not "sniff, sniff" because the SFX is the muffled kind.
>>1978023
It's still in the sniffing category, but less in the "checking its smell" sense and more in the "inhaling all the Ichigo goodness" sense.
>>1978023
A deep breath sort of "mmm haa~" is the best I can think of beyond just writing inhales smell, breathes in or something.
Quick Valkyrie Drive smut
http://pastebin.com/b6AYNNAX
http://exhentai.org/g/902814/a40dcc27f7/
>>1979442
was there a part 1?
>>1973807
Hey. I wasn't in the thread recently but was waiting on your email. Do you have something scanlated already, still need help?
Someone please tell me how to clean those damn photoshop screentones. It looks different on every zoom level and then still different in saved jpg file. I want to remove damn bleed but it's just impossible.
>>1980092
Oh, right. That project is put on hold since the author is actively ignoring me. No block, no unfollow yet. The good side is I picked another book for the end of February. I'll have it scanned once we're done with this: >>1967032
My email is[email protected]
On an unrelated note, anyone has an idea what ポワワ means? I checked my usual SFX dictionary and I got nothing. Pic related: Ran is getting relaxed by the hot tea, so I guess the SFX is related to her loosening up?
Some glorious DomTwilight and SlaveHaruka from based Yukirinrin
http://pastebin.com/2zFUmBwA
http://exhentai.org/g/903470/8788012722/
>>1980236
Don't think I'd use those. Ran already uttered "Ahhh~." I think an adjective should work like, I dunno, "relieved" or similar.
>>1980456
How 'bout "Mmm..."
>>1980675
Fixed. Thanks.
Also is "kyuu" for "squeeze" okay here? I can't think of any SFX about Aoi wrapping a towel over Ichigo.
>>1981438
I would think Ichigo said it instead of an sfx. Maybe just use "wrap"?
>Is there any place you would like me to itch for you?
scratch
>>1981438
It's a tightening of the towel sfx. Squeeze probably works.
>>1981541
Oh, thanks for that.
>>1981605
Okay, keeping "squeeze"
Additionally, do you don't mind we're pushing for "no chill" for Aoi's "odayaka janai"? Our recent Odayaka translation is a good example to showcase "no chill". The more popular "this is something special" is not catchphrase-ey enough and we thought "no chill" has that charm and is flexible.
can someone translate this to me?Please ;)
I was translating a story description from an upcoming yuri VN called つい・ゆり ~おかあさんにはナイショだよ~, so I can add the info to vndb (https://vndb.org/v13107)
I added my translation underneath the original and was wondering if anyone here could double check or improve the translation. Thanks!
First half:
仲良し双子姉妹の、“ほんとう”の気持ち
Loving twin sisters, their "true" feelings.
仲のいい双子の姉妹“佐倉 一果(さくらいちか)” と“佐倉 双葉(さくらふたば)”。
生真面目で少し頑固な一果と、人懐っこく子どもっぽい双葉は
家族も友人たちも、時に呆れるほど仲がいい。
Sakura Ichika (serious and somewhat stubborn) and Sakura Futaba (friendly, youthful) are twin sisters
who get along so well that their family and friends become astonished at times.
幼い頃からどこに行くのも何をするのも一緒だったふたり。
成長して、お互いの性格や嗜好に個性が出てきてからもそれは変わらない。
家でも校内でも、しっかりものの一果が甘えん坊の双葉の世話を焼く光景が日常となっていた。
No matter where they go or what they do, those two have always been together from a young age.
Even after their surroundings change around them while growing up, their relationship still remains the same.
There's never a day where Ichika (firm) isn't around Futaba (pampered), be it at home, school, or anywhere.
>>1982065
Second half:
だがある日、あまりにもお互いにべったりの姉妹を心配した母親に、
仲がいいことと依存することは違うと、
いくら仲がいい姉妹でもいつまでも一緒にいられるわけではないのと、
そう諭されたことによって、ふたりの関係は少しずつ変わっていく。
But one day, their mother started to worry about them since they've been hanging around each other excessively.
She warns them that getting along and relying on one another are two different things,
and that no matter how close they are as sisters, it is not possible to stay together forever.
After that, their relationship gradually begins to change bit by bit.
「双葉の喜ぶ顔を見たい」という姉としての気持ちの裏にある自らの欲と
“普通ではない” 許されない気持ちに苦悩する一果。
「一果ともっとずっと一緒にいたい」という自分の気持ちとは裏腹に
すれ違っていくふたりの関係に焦りを覚える双葉。
On the other side of Ichika's feelings of "wanting to see Futaba's smiling face" are her worries of
her personal desires considered unforgivable and "not normal."
Contrary to Futaba's feelings of "wanting to always be together with Ichika" is her
presence of mind lost in their diverging relationship.
姉妹として持つ以上の、秘めた気持ちを抱くふたりの関係は
一体どのようなカタチをとり、どのような結末を迎えるのか――?
Their bond that harbors hidden emotions beyond that of sisters...
What form will it take? And what kind of conclusions will come out of it all――?
>>1982064
Looks incomplete.
>Hey there, Y-Y-Y-Yoroichi-sama!!
>?
>Uh, just, you know...
>Today is...
>>1982069
thank you!
My very first cleaned and typeset chapter
https://mega.nz/#!WoVQDQpK!OHZUAMu1ODmhzSmZS1rfSvv5QHH75wFSVQ5cG8dS7Wk
Translation is from thread >>1906254
Please tell me what I should be doing better
>>1982099
Burn your black areas so there is no white dust visible. Try different font maybe. Use smaller font if text gets to close to bubble.
I was translating some character descriptions from a yuri vn website to post in vndb (https://vndb.org/v13107/chars#chars) and was wondering if someone can double check / improve my translations that I posted underneath the original. Thanks!
Source: http://www.cyc-soft.com/eyephon/002/character.html
佐倉 双葉 《さくら ふたば》 / Sakura Futaba
人懐っこく素直で騒がしくて元気で、直感で生きるあほの子。
あまり常識にとらわれず思ったとおりに行動するタイプ。成績はあまりよくない。
むしろ一果ができるからいいやくらいに思っている。
A friendly, honest, energetic, silly girl who lives on intuition.
Acts outside of common sense. Grades aren't so good but has Ichika help out.
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御影 百合 《みかげ ゆり》 / Mikage Yuri
「わたしと沙希だって、一果や双葉とは幼稚園からの腐れ縁だからね。
いろんなことを察するもんさ」
"Saki and I have had an inseparable relationship with Ichika and Futaba since kindergarten.
You can pretty much guess the rest."
軽めで飄々とした、ちょっとおっさんも入った性格で、
女子のぱんつを楽しみにしたり、「沙希のおっぱいはわたしが育てた」などと豪語する。
Has a light, aloof, and somewhat middle-aged man personality
where she likes to enjoy girl's panties and boasts about things like "I nurtured Saki's breasts."
>>1982099
Also it's "tough" not "though". Just fyi.
>>1980178
I have sent you email long time already but you never responded. Anyway my is[email protected]. Write me if you need some help.
