How would YOU fix it?
>>67394327
No Flash
No Aquaman
No Wonder Woman or a brief Diana cameo
No Doomsday
A Lex Luthor who is a cold, collected, bald authoritarian instead of a mincing, cackling homo
>>67394327
REMOVE
JUSTICE
LEAGUE
Making Batman v Superman: Dawn of Justice into two movies:
Batman v Superman
and
Dawn of Justice
>>67394327
i'll post it again
JL (2016)
-Set something between 3-4 years after MOS
-Darkseid's army invades and kills almost everyone on Jonn Jonzz planet who flees to earth after hearing about Superman and Zod
-Have each hero already established, Superman is seen as a god by Christians but is treated as an American Weapon by everyone else(especially Russians),Batman is retired and now serve as mentor to Azrael. Flash has his powers but since he can't control his speed he only use his power when it's absolute necessary. Hal Jordan has gone missing since ZOD's invasion and everyone in the army thinks he's dead when he was actually saved/recruited by the GL's and has been training ever since. Establish WW living as an ordinary woman after the events of WW1.
-Earth is invaded by white Martins who are basically scouts, Superman+MM barely manages to hold the attack,Azrael is killed in the process which forces Batman to return. Flash decides he has to use his powers to save earth, Hal finishes his training and is sent to Earth again, WW investigates and finds out Ares has been helping Ma'alefa'ak(the main Villain, he has become Darkseid's general and has the task to conquest earth)
-Before the real invasion begins all the 6 heroes have met and decided they have work together, they fight Ma'alefa'ak's army and defeat him.
-After all the destruction the government convinces Superman he has to work to them in order to help more people, and he accepts, Batman who was already skeptic about Aliens has gone hiding after the conflit and now is paranoic it was all a gov conspiracy, setting the tone to BVS.
Suicide Squad (2016)
-Government sends them to steal some alien shit they can't have the heroes know it exists, batman investigates and now has proof to back his paranoia.
>>67394327
Just fire Zack, literally anyone could make a better movie than him.
People here don't even know how to frame a fucking scene why are you asking
more quips
>better pacing
>recast luthor
>remove wonder woman
fixed
Pay Nolan to do the final cut
Boom 75+ RT
This is what they will do with Justice League
No, Justice League is not being cancelled
>>67394327
>>67394406
BVS (2017)
-All over the world people are riotting because they don't feel safe after the events of JL, Batman alone manages to take care of Gotham and put order in the City again, which is seen as an embarrassment by the government(controlled by Lex) who orders an assassin to take care of him(anyone you want, Deathstroke,Bronze Tiger,Deadshot,Bane), but fails, they start to paint him as a terrorist in the media and Superman is assigned to take him down. Clark is BTFO by Batman but in the end they find out it was all a ruse and become best friends.
GL's Corps (2018)
-Hal and all GL's are assigned to defend some planet, which they manage, but in the end they fuck up and free an ever bigger threat who's now coming to earth.
>>67394406
No-one liked it the first time you autist
the whole batman vs superman scenario doesn't make sense
the comic thing where they fight was an "what if" scenario. it's retarded to take that story and use it to attempt to launch a "cinematic universe".
Show full penetration
The board? Banning plebs like you who can't stop making retarded threads about stupid superheroes made for literal 12 years olds.
First make a movie about Batman with Robin and Joker as the main villain, just an usual Batman movie.
End up with the Joker escaping after killing Robin and Batman becoming a bitter old man.
Then make a Suicide Squad movie.
After Suicide Squad make a Batman v Superman movie.
And then a Dawn of Justice movie.
>>67394406
>Azrael
lol my dude wtf stop reading there
Pay me 15 million and I'll tell you.
>>67394393
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>>67394374
So basically they fucked up by trying to introduce the Justice League in an already crowded film?
I thought this was going to be the main problem. Wonder Woman's inclusion makes no sense.
>>67394459
give us anything better you cuck
>>67394406
>>67394454
>g-guys read my fanfiction
Fuck off!!!
>>67394374
This.
We want BATMAN VS SUPERMAN. Not fucking justice league.
>>67394515
See
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>>67394374
All much better ideas than your cluttered mess of a fan fic
>>67394467
It does. Superman is just an alien who brought mass destruction and almost the demise of humanity to the planet.
No JL setup. Just solely focus on Batman and Superman. Batman isn't a killer. Works with Lex to develop some kind of kryptonite plot device that suppresses Superman's power but doesn't harm him otherwise. Lex, of course takes it too far and insists they kill Superman or whatever and takes it into his own hands. He fucks up Superman with kryptonite then goes on the run from Batman while Batman is blamed for Supermans death and the societal effects of this are people asking if it was the right thing to do etc.
Eventually Batman tracks down Lex and Lex has that suit that he wore in Mortal Kombat vs DC. They fight. Lex gets upper hand. Return of Superman. They stop Lex.
Movie ends with them not being enemies but not being allies either, just going their own way for now.
>>67394327
Easy as fuck
Take away Doomsday
Make Lex more serious, all he needs to do is be there and manipulate both Superman and Batman into fighting.
Change Wonder Woman actress, put someone who actually has meat in their bones, Wonder woman doesn't need to be ripped but she can't be a fucking skeleton. Not only that but someone who can act, please. She could be the one that's dealing with Lex and the one that stops the fight between the two idiots.
Give more room to Batman and fucking explain why he kills people. Ben did a good job, he can stay there.
Take away the Flash, Cyborg and Aquaman previews, if they really need to be there make Batman be the one that finds them (and other possible meta humans) while trying to find people who can help him take on Superman.
Don't try to put Lois in everything, she's ok, but she doesn't need to be always there, Lois was never an important character.
>>67394374
DC is trying to play catch-up with Marvel, for whatever retarded reason. Since 2008's Iron Man Marvel has been building their cinematic universe; The first Avengers came out in 2012, after origin films for almost every core Avenger. DC only has MoS.
The smart thing to do would be to do a Batman, WW and Flash origin film (Aquaman can get originated in the WW film, come on, he's fucking Aquaman), then Justice League, instead of this bloated mess.
>>67394467
It's a great concept. However, the conflicts have historically been after Supes/Bamham have been working together and realise their differences in ideology.
Making Batman into Butthurtman because of Supes collateral damage, when he is shown to instigate as much collateral damage, is strange and striking
You know what the scary thing is about the JL setup?
As cluttered as it is at the moment, there's a 30+ minute extended cut and numerous cut scenes confirmed for the bluray release
Pretty much this >>67394374
See, I didn't hate the film, but it would have been much better if they shaved off 20 minutes.
But at the same time, it felt like the build up movie for future solo movies and for the Justice League.
I know that in this day and age of the internet, you're supposed to either love/be hype for something or hate it. Thought the movie was just okay.
>>67394374
this but instead of Luthor as the main bigbad make him a pawn of Braniac who betray him just like the comics
also introduce intergang
>>67394829
Too soon for such a big villain to be introduced.
>>67394327
-Instead of stitching 464574 different short trailers together, film long and coherent scenes.
-Drop the nightmare scenes and thePa Kent is alive
-Make Lex bald since the beggining, and make him more psychotic and manipulative and less faggot
-Don't revive Superman (Either don't kill him or don't revive him)
-Lois shouldn't make retarded choices (Interview a terrorist, going to more dangerous places, swim underwater...)
Make it anime and both superman and batman are little girls.
>>67394406
>make aquaman a nigger
Yeah, okay.
>>67394924
>Batman
>A little girl.
I could accept pic related.
>>67394327
No dream sequences
No Justice League
Stop jump cutting every 7 seconds and spend genuine time with the main characters.
Have a good Batmobile chase where there dont jump between 10 different camera angles in 5 seconds.
You can have Bruce visit his parents grave or wayne manor but not constantly throughout the movie reminding us every 20 minutes that he has lost his parents.
DONT recycle the entire Man of Steel OST.
>>67394327
Do Just Batman VS Just Superman.
>Have two fights, One where Superman is passive and One where he really wants to kill Batman. Have >Kryptonite appear only once. Make a big deal outta the two meeting.
>Perry White, Lois Lane, Alfred Commisioner Gordon and Jimmy Olsen allowed.
>Make Batman the main character.
>Keep the Day of the Dead Superman mexico scene
>Keep the Knightmare sequence.
>>67394973
The Rock is a nigger, Momoa is Samoan
Its a budding romance instead, Clark and Bruce fall for each other and becomes a super duo.
>>67395449
We already had that
>>67394327
Make it a love story
>>67394973
Jason Mimosa isn't black
>cast someone else as Lex Luthor
>make Batman movie before this explaining his reason for killing and showing what happened to Robin
>scrap Wonder Woman and JUSTice League entirely until another movie
>don't use Doomsday until another Superman movie (or not at all)
>longer fight scene (or have them go through numerous conflicts with each other)
>maybe take the route of World's Finest (Lex Luthor and Joker teaming up against Batman and Superman)
>cut the movie down by 30 minutes, so much unnecessary shit
Not make it
>>67394327
Not spend so much time reminding us about the other DCU heroes.
Either make the fucking individual movies like Marvel or just drop some hints at the end during the denouement.
Also remove Zuckerberg. Or tell him to play evil Zuckerberg and NOT pretend he's TDK's Joker.
>>67395994
>cut the movie down by 30 minutes, so much unnecessary shit
In my opinion this could apply to 90% of the movies released the last decade.
>>67396482
It's funny because Lex is one of the few redeemable stuff from BvS, certainly he's not the typical "evil businessman", but certainly a threathening and powerful character
