Can we have a screenplay thread?
I'll post a few scenes. I know they suck and my english is pretty bad but I'm having fun writing these.
Feel free to contribute.
>>62944169
>>62944201
What is the point of this scene in the context of the overall narrative?
>Lazily
What did anon mean by this?
Hey guys if you would give one do and one don't as advice what would it be?
I read a few sentences and it sounds like a Tarantino movie without any of the things that make his movies interesting.
>>62944169
what does (beat) mean?
How about mine, guys?
>>62946002
At a guess I'd say it means "defeated". Exasperated, something like that.
>>62946258
it's a pause in dialogue faggot
>>62946468
Thank you.
>>62946155
>John Core
Have some fucking respect for yourself anon, this is laughably bland name, try to come up with something else, beside that i like the noir-ish dialogue.
>>62946643
I have more.
Just a short erotic film I am working on. Planning on directing it next year.
>>62946643
Newfag
>>62946664
There's always room for improvement but it's not that bad at all, you keep it short and simple and it feels like a pulp novel. Try to skim through noir films script online, and read some Chandler, it might help. That's just my two cents though
>>62944169
>Posting your shit on 4chan so Max Landis can steal em for his screenplays/fanfiction
Don't.
>>62946816
I've been posting on this shithole for more years than i count, sorry if i don't keep up with all the memes.
>>62946965
>implying my ideas are good enough to be stolen
>implying I haven't registered my screenplay
>>62944169
>I know they suck
you're right, they do
I'm working on a feature length noire psuedo-parody. It's basically a action/mystery/thriller/comedy that pokes fun at films like blade runner and gangster squad.
>>62947129
More of this scene. If it seems a bit silly or over the top, that's the idea, it's a noire comedy parody
How does one make a PDF from final draft 8 if I want to post it here?
It just says "printer not connected" whenever I want so save as a pdf
>>62947396
ayy
