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Zootopia Thread: Making kits cry edition

Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/iYDU8g2T

Booru: zoo.booru.org
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>fic that got Judy's age right, but completely flubbed Nick's, making him only a year older than her

I dunno why that sort of thing annoys me so much, but it really does. For some reason it just really gets on my nerves when people make Nick a lot younger than he is. I dunno why.
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>>3519231
IIRC he's 32, yeah?
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>>3519231
>Schalke
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We're waiting for the other thread to hit the image limit, I take it?
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>>3519263
I wasn't really paying attention to Nick's age that much, but Judy is around 24 yeah? Or at least she's that old when she's in the police academy. 9 years old in flashback, 15 years later in academy IIRC
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>>3519368
Okay, I checked again, he's 32. If you reverse Judy's math it's 20 years, plus the 12 when he started.
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>>3519368

1,460,000/200
7,300

7,300/365
20

20+12
32
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Thanks for including the booru, OP. Tho next time we should include the ZTArchive as well.
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>>3519495
Agreed
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>>3519266
>no picture

not authentic
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>>3519231
Posting it in a dead thread is cheating.

>Schalke
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>>3519266
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Awaiting fic continuation!
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>tfw you missed Comic Anon
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Aaaaaaand we're live!
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>>3519629
Actually I didn't mean to post it in a dead thread. I had just gotten home and this was the first thread on the catalog so i assumed it must have just started.

It wasn't until I realized there was a few hours between the first post and mine that I realized that it was an extra thread.
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>>3519638
Now that he's back from E3 he'll be much more active, don't worry.
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Fuuuuuuuuck meeeeeeeeeee

I said good night to you guys almost an hour ago. Why can't I bring myself to close Firefox and shut down?!
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>>3519665
Because you love us. Because we're broken, like you.
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I badly need a dose of cute and happy.
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>>3519650
Im loving his reading of Stoutwell.
We need more voicefags doing readings.
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>>3519665
Nangi's wet leather handbags compel you to stay.
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>>3519637
My fucking DICK
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>>3519671
>>3519678

I keep saying, "once this thread hits the limit, I'm done." I've said that like three times now.
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>>3519650
>don't give into the sexual tension
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>>3519438
>>3519472
... Dumb bunnies...
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>>3519697

It's too late, Anon...

It was always too late...
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>>3519702
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>>3519697
I need more fics and pics of his sexy fursona
I need more of you anons to submit lewds for him to read
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>>3519711
Anyone got the version of this that says in big letters repeatedly "Read my fic"?
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>>3519665
Well, i'm going to do what you should have done about an hour ago.
Goodnight thread, it's been great.
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>>3519722
Has he read any of Bat's work?
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>>3519722
You could try to get him to read Interlewd. He seemed to like Winter Snuggles, and Interlewd has a handjob.
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>>3519725
That's a negative, good buddy.
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>>3519377

I am too sad to draw now....but I will continue on

>Captcha all pictures with headstones
Fitting
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>>3519739
Shame

Oh well, it was partially for shitposting anyway.
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>>3519760
Just shitpost sexy Panthers and leopards
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Post comfy/chill/somber music. I have a craving.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Nj1D2y-PY8
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>>3519454
>"A children's elephant suit huh? Wow."
>July was looking through all the pictures of them together
>"So, when did he join the force?"
>"I called him a cop that day, and I wouldn't be wrong either, after that whole thing he joined the force and started really gettin' hitched with that rabbit"
>"I'm guessing she was special to him?"
>"Special? Man that rabbit was the whole fuckin' world to him. Never woulda thought Nick of all people could change like that. Every other day he'd be sending me pictures of him and his girl here.
>And everytime we got together just to catch up it was like talking to a whole different person, y'know? He'd keep goin' on and on about her. 'Do you think Judy would like this? Should we get a bigg...'HACKcoughcough'...errr apartment? What if we end up having kids? How many do rabbits have?' Just a big sappy nightmare, you can probably see flat spots on my forehead and dents in the diner tables...heheheheh"
>"hahaha, it sounds kind of cute actually. Just picturing the chief being all giddy and happy like that"
>"Yeah well, in his own words 'she saved my fuckin' life'. In more ways than one he said. Wasn't for her, would've never had a brighter view of life. He was just like a kid again. Heh he-hack...Never thought Nick could be all so childlike without it bein' fake."
>"Used to figure he was keeping me around for up-to-date crime watch shit, guess he just wanted his close friend too...hack"
>....
>"They look so cute together. So what happened to her?"
>"Can't really remember when, can't really remember how. Time gets blurry when you get old kid, All I know is it happened a few months? years? after the honeymoon?."
>"So they did get married?"
>"Yeah, was his best man too. Was in the area of the night she died. Could hear gunshots and sirens just down the block. Went up to the area and saw him getting escorted out covered in blood and him screaming his lungs out over her. Figured the worst. Figured right. Fuckin' hell I figured right"
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>>3519774
http://youtu.be/dQw4w9WgXcQ
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>>3519774
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lAwYodrBr2Q
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>>3519777
:(
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>>3519749

I don't understand how seeing a sad story makes people want to stop writing or drawing or whatever. I mean yeah it's sad but, isn't sad feels nice every once and a while? A few sad moments along with the general happy moments that happens throughout most these threads?

I dunno, I always find sad stories infinitely more interesting.
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>>3519790
>not having 4chanx
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We're missing our important gif for every thread
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>>3519808
>those eyes

Fucking adorable
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>>3519774
The best I could think of right now
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8PsG3ycLx3o
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>>3519803

Was just saying how I never expected to get hit so hard in the feels
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>>3519774
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9fh75B961DI
Its never too early for xmas music.

>>3519808
Alec, thank you.
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>>3519803
Some people create better in certain moods. I can't write when I'm sad, for example. Which is why I went six years without writing.
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>>3519803
Feels a bit forced on this one, but maybe I'm a fag who only likes sad stories when they have catharsis.
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>>3519777
I hope someone's compiling this
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>>3519542
>She looked at the bedroom* door, seeing a shadow pass by.
>Letting out a barely audible groan, Judy looked back at Nick.
>"Nick, you molested a child. You committed sexual acts with a minor. You fucking- ate out- my sister. My underage, minor sister- that we were granted guardianship over."
>Judy was continuing with this more for herself than for the one-member audience outside the door. This was really a moment of conflict. One that she'd already decided on the action of.
>She looked into his bleary eyes and saw none of the brovado she'd come to identify her fox with.
>He squeezed his eyes shut, and curled his body around her hand.
>"Please, Carrots." that that, he let out a sob- given that he was a fox, it sounded almost like a pained yelp,
>"Please, just get it over with. I don't want to cause any more problems- so please, just-" and Judy grabbed him by the back of the neck, pulling him close to her face.
>Her eyes drawn to his lips. No visual hints of emotion or opinion.
>She brought her lips to his, dragging her long across his teeth hungrily.
>She wanted a second-hand taste of her sister.

Again, hell is warm.
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>>3519777
Sheeeiiiiiit

Thats sad
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>>3519839
Wow, Judy's a bitch
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>>3519808
You are a treasure Alec

You should keep going
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>>3519774
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HMnrl0tmd3k

I mean most people know this one but it's still good.
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>>3519804
Whatever, I'm bored and waiting for porn to manifest in another thread
http://youtu.be/cuv4KScAYlk
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>>3519839
Wait what
Is that
Does she

...I think I need to lay down for a moment
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>>3519839
>She wanted a second-hand taste of her sister
well this took a turn I wasn't expecting
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>>3519839
>She wanted a second-hand taste of her sister

What the fuck
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Missed Meads' comic, comicanon returning and last two threads descending into Feelia Central.

And in reply to picrelated: oh, but silly anon, they already do.
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>>3519774
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fpk_HhEdDO4

Hope I could help your somber fix.
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>>3519839
I think I blacked out for a moment there from all the blood rushing to my dick
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>>3519839
I AM FUCKING DIAMONDS RIGHT NOW
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>>3519839
IM GONNA BURN FOR THIS BUT KEEP GOING
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>This threads current direction
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>>3519774
http://youtu.be/hglVqACd1C8
There, somber.
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>>3519899
We're just a roller coaster of emotions, aren't we?
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>>3519839
Suicide one thread, incest the next
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>>3519908
I know, right? These threads are relevant to ALL my interests!
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>>3519905
we're hitting critical mass.
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>>3519908
SHUT THE FUCK UP FOREMAN OR ILL WRITE A FIC WHERE NICK BUTTRAPES YOU
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>>3519839
HOHHH MY GOD
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>>3519919
There is no stopping us now. We've long past the point of no return.
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>>3519839
Of all the possible mood whiplashes, that one has to have been the most unlikely.
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>Fic that I complained about earlier for getting Nick's age wrong
>Had 2 lewd scenes but otherwise nothing to big
>Until a chapter where Judy gets straight up raped explicitly by an ex boyfriend of hers, and then he and some people he's working with try to make it look like Nick is a domestic abuser.
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>>3519774
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2SW_MWBa6w
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>>3519774
https://youtu.be/BdEvuQE6t5c
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>>3519945
Forgot image and my reaction to it. Which is
What
the
fuck
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>>3519943
I kind of saw it coming but only because it's what I would greentext.
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>>3519927
y-you can write a fic where nick buttrapes me instead senpai desu...
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>>3519945

At this point I really can't tell if greentexts like this are lying, it can be genuinely hard to tell if something like this was ever actually written or not. Because it's highly possible.
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>>3519937
We have to stop or this is the fate of the thread
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What is fucking happening. I don't even.

This is not my beautiful thread.
This is not my beautiful comfy.
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>>3519959
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12002549/8/Until-The-End-Part-1-A-Zootopia-Fanfiction
Heres the link if you don't believe me
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>>3519960
You seem to be mistaken, sir.

In that gif, we would not be the soldiers.
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>>3519960
It is too late, my son. We are far too gone now. Save yourself. Find Jebus.
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>>3519965
Oh no.
OH NO.
OHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOO.
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>>3519972
Gecko Jesus is the only Jesus
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We need to change gears to more important things.

How would you protect Nick's smile?
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on one side, judy is dead AU...
on the other side rape of a minor and hints of incest...

you know imma go to sleep, you all have fun or something
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>>3519983
A gun
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>>3519983
By forgiving him after that smile is buried in jailbait bunny.
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>>3519960
>We're the monsters
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>>3519993
T-that's not how you protect a smile.

You're going to make Nick cry...
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>>3520000
>Quads
>Confirmed
J U S T
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>>3519993
>>3520004
A GUN
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>>3520000
confirmed
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>>3520016
now u dun it m8 here come the waterworks
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>>3519989
The AU at least has potential. And potential for heartwarming

The rape of a minor is just fucked up
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>>3519968
I can now see that.

>>3519972
Jebus has nothing for us now. It's over.
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>>3520020
Spoiler: it's not a real person
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>>3520031
Its still fucked up.
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>>3520016
wait what the fuck

is that A Light Shining In Darkness?
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>>3520033
So's fucking animals, Anon. Yet here we are.
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>>3520020
Anon, the Judy AU involves Nick committing a brutal extrajudicial killing and getting away with it scot-free. It's just as fucked up.
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>>3520038
Nice catch
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>>3520020

I swear if no one picks up write fagging stories in this AU ill have to do something because im loving it right now
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Okay, so this thread is getting a bit uncomfy; POST CUTE NICK AND JUDYS TO BALANCE IT OUT!
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What would you do if Nickie made a stinky in his diaper?
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>>3520038
I don't see the engraving. Or the patterned handle.

Wrong hammer too.
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>>3520038
No, a light shining in darkness has a shorter slide and has a depression on the top for iron sights, as well as an engraving on it's slide
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>>3520042
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>>3520046
Well Bellwether kinda deserved it.

That child didn't deserve to get molested
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>>3520060
>"The uh...COUGH..HACK..wheeeze..doctors say I don't have much time left, they said 'a few months' more than a few months ago. Guess this shit they gave me is pretty damn good but still, the big man wants to bring me home soon.
>I only hang around this area much anymore or at the doctor's office over on canine ct.
>I'd appreciate it, if you could just let him know that, and that I'd like to say 'Hi'"
>July was a bit taken aback by the old fox's request, considering she was just yelled out of Chief Wilde's office, but with a stern look she told him "Okay"
>"Thanks kid...ciao." And he drove off booming his busted speakers

Sorry it took a while, rarely write.
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>>3520065
>>3520066

wait no im a retard that's just the regular .45 pistol

where did this image come from and what the fuck does it mean?
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>>3520038
It doesn't have Greek writing on its slide, so no.
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>>3520078
>>3520060
Awww
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>>3520016
Summoning you was my intention! It has worked!
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>>3520078
THE FEEEEEEELLLLSSSS
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>>3520063
What's that? Post predatory Nick and Judys?
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>>3520071
He still beat her to death with a tire iron. If you want to suddenly inject realism into this, that is an extremely brutal and painful way to murder someone.
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>>3520093
Oh, thats what we are going with?
I thought it involved something with her spine. Not that thats less messed up.

Do we have a collection yet of all the stories? I seem to have missed some
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>>3520093
Did he? I don't remember the specifics.

Good. Sometimes you need to go full Hotline on a villain.
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>>3520092
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>>3520078
That was really fucking good, anon. Bravo.
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>>3520105
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>>3520113
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>>3520099
Don't have it on me, but if you search desu storage for "July Hopps" timeline, you'll get most of it.

I like this name more than "dead Judy AU" to be honest
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>>3520099
It still did. He broke her spine with said tire iron, let her mew hopelessly paralyzed and with a broken jaw for a minute or two, and then he finished the job by beating her until she punctured her heart with one of her own broken ribs.

He murdered her in cold blood in one of the most brutal ways possible, and he didn't even receive an informal reprimand for it. You want to talk fucked up? I think that's just as fucked up.
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>>3520078
Not bad.
Imagine though how Nick would react if July bring up meeting FINNICK of all animals in Zootopia.

It's like the past came back to hit you with a crowbar in the face. Repeatedly.

Please don't break the fox.
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>people are complaining about police killings
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>>3520158
I just have to be that guy...
But don't you mean beat him like a tire iron to the spine?
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>>3520146
I think it's the least you could do. I would do the same, actually. Probably work on knees before moving on, though.
If you think this makes fanfic about raping a minor okay, you're wrong.
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>>3520158
>Please don't break the fox.
I'm pretty sure the point of this AU is that has already happened a long time ago.
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>>3520119
>>3520113
>>3520092
One day I'm finally gonna write that Vampire Judy fic that I've had an outline for like a week.

One day.
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>>3520196
Did I say it was okay? Fuck no. I'm saying you're a hypocrite for suddenly getting mad about it while jerking it to brutally murdering someone.
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>>3520196
>breaking someone's knees
>after you've already broken their spine
>while you're planning to kill them immediately afterwards

What's the point?
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>>3520220
Stress relief
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>>3520220
Perhaps he's wondering why someone would shoot a man before throwing him out of a plane?
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>>3520177
No, because between the AU and crowbar to the spine, I'm pretty sure Nick would have chosen the crowbar. Also, apologies for misspellings, posting from mobile.

>>3520199
15 years is a long time, you get used to darkness, and it is comforting and familiar, enveloping you like a blanket. You manage to pull yourself together, meticulously rebuilding your house of cards, when a dumb bunny walks in and just opens the window, scattering poorly mended broken pieces to the wind.
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>>3519839
>Nick can only stare in confusion and shock as Judy, from his view, tries to eat his face with her tongue. And her lips.
>Judy backs away, and his mouth hangs open slightly. He's reminded, for a small instant, that he would normally come up with a witty response to her abnormal behaviour- but he's just too drained. Too tired.
>Lethargy and shame take him.
>He thinks to himself, 'This was probably our last kiss, and she wanted to savour it,'
>She leans over him, her lips directly above his ear.
>Knowing how keen a bunny's hearing is, and knowing of the spy at the door, her whisper is almost inaudible to herself, but she knows it's just enough for Nick to hear.
>"Everything will be fine"
>Judy places a kiss on his cheek, gets off the bed, and makes a point to step loudly to the door.
>She watches the shadow retreat, and can faintly hear muffled footsteps heading towards Ellie's room.
>Meanwhile, Nick's shame has only redoubled. 'My actions- my shame- what is Judy even thinking!?'
>He shuffles out of bed, ready to confront Judy, his inner voice of reason slapping him, telling him 'Stop her from ruining herself! You can't let her choose you over what's right!'
>He reaches a paw out to grab her, but she quickly turns and faces him.
>'It's like she knows what I'm going to do-' She quickly grabs his hand, pulling it to her chest.
>Her eyes burrow into his, and she whispers in a tone of finality, "Sit down. I know what's going through your head. Trust me, my sly fox. I know my sister. I can get us through this. All of us."
>She reached for his shorts, sliding her hand into his left pocket, until she found what she wanted- his phone.
>"You'll get this back when I'm done," she said with a smirk, a borderline shit-eating grin.
>She went for the door, and turned around again, saying loud enough for someone in another room to hear, "and don't leave this room, got it?"
>"Fluff, plea-"
>He was cut off as the door met its frame with a clack.
>'Dumb bunny, why?'
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Nick is gonna die protecting July in this dead Judy AU, isn't he...
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>>3520078
Anyone else cappin' in? Gonna go to bed
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>>3520220
knees first

>>3520209
I'm not excited about the idea, but I fully understand and support it within the context of the timeline.
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>>3520093
>inject realism into this
I have no idea why people want to turn Zootopia into a grim, gritty, boring, bog-standard crime drama.

It's the same reason I can't give a shit about the moose detective OC.
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>>3520240
I have many feelings, but no words
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>>3520243

I doubt it would go that far. Honestly speaking, dealing with Nick's mental and emotional state is the most interesting part of the story, you don't need to have more drama in his life unless you want to break him completely.
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>>3520243
It'd be less tragic than keeping him alive.
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>>3520243
>Judy's dead
>Mom's probably dead
>Villains are dead
>Finnick's dying
Face it, it's a cap off to a generation.
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>>3520243
Can I shill it we call it "July Hopps AU"?
We're not polar bear instructor to keep calling Judy dead you know.
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>>3520240
https://youtu.be/y51uKyPJ1Uw
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>>3520277
I still cannot ready it without saying it like the month.
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>>3520269

Niggas already completely broken

If anything, giving Nick one last hurrah saving July would bring a little light to this AU
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>>3520260
He works because we've seen the city's underbelly. A city that's supposedly bright and happy will not devolve into race riots in just a week. The city that the moose walks in has always been there; we just don't see it for most of the movie.
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>>3520260
Oh, you know why.
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This July Hopps AU is actually physically hurting me.

Just the thought of Nick lying in bed alone constantly thinking about Judy, knowing she's never coming back, is enough to make me tear up.
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>>3520200
you have one who will wait for you anon
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>>3520299
Exactly. This is the sort of thing that's ruining Zootopia.
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>>3520306
It's okay. He had gotten numb enough that he forgot he was hurting.

At least until her doppelganger walked in the door and tore open all his emotional scars again.
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>>3520306
He probably doesn't.

That's really not how people cope with trauma long after the fact. He's 99% more likely to have just hardened his heart to not care anymore. Little bits of emotion left, for her memor
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>>3520312
What are your thoughts on Zistopia then?
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>>3520312

Stop being so melodramatic
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>>3520328
Poorly written garbage with terrible art and illegible dialogue.
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>>3520323
>>3520325
I'm more talking about the days/months following after her death.

And then July comes in and re-opens those wounds.
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>>3520335
>le contrarian meme xxD
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>>3520335
Can't please 'em all I guess.
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>>3520341
>implying those aren't all valid criticisms
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>>3520335

>illegible dialogue
the only point that has any merit, here's you're (you)
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>>3520341
Hey, man can have his own opinion, don't be an asshole about it.
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>>3520335
>illegible dialogue.

Wait, are you talking about it being literally unreadable? Or the dialogue itself just being shit.

If it's the latter, I vehemently disagree.

Your other points are valid, though subjective.
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>>3520334
>bright happy movie and universe
>being ruined by edgefags

No different than ponyfags writting grimdark MLP fanfics. It doesn't fit the setting.
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>>3520369
Race riots are canon.
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>>3520369
The difference is the original pitch for Zootopia was very dark and grim. So it's understandable why people would latch on to AUs that follow the same atmosphere/mood.
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>>3520243
I hope not.
Im still mad about Nick dying in The Unimaginable.

I want him to come to terms with Judy's death and return to his old self, at least on some level.

That would be a better ending IMO
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>>3520369

The original authors think you're fucking wrong, and they have a lot more sway on my opinion than you do
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>>3520381
ah there it is
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>>3520306
>lets rev up these edges
>Eventually Nick gets hurt trying to protect July
>wakes up in the hospital
>Turns out, he didn't do good enough - Jully didn't make it
>The last straw
>This breaks the fox
>Resigns, secluded himself away from the city
>Animals who occasionally wander around only know that a bitter, unkind old fox lives alone, not too far away from the town
>Though nobody really cares as he continues living out his years in silence and isolation
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Man, Im dissapointed by this fic so far.
Its about Nick reuniting with a sister he hasn't seen in 20 years.

The writing is amusing and I actually laughed at some parts.

But the sister is just too perfect. She doesn't seem to have any real flaws to her, and she already seems to have become friends with Clawhauser and Bogo.

Im hoping she is given a few flaws before the story is over because its a bit much at the moment.

Though the newer fic hes working on seems like its gonna be less like that even though it involves Nick's family again. Hopefully its good.
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>>3520078
Since no-one else was. Hope you enjoyed the story guys, g'night.
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>>3520196
Jesus man calm down, it's barely even rape on a technicality. It wasn't done with any malice and it's treated with the appropriate gravity.
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>>3520375

I kinda thought him saving July would be him coming to terms with what happened in a sense that he finally got to correct the mistakes of the past (protecting July = protecting Judy in his eyes), or something like that
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>>3520385
>Nick goes full 50 blessings, sick of the criminal aspects of the city
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>>3520230
At least you can talk, who are you?
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>>3520404
Sure, but why does he have to die in the process? No time to appreciate how far hes come if he dies in the process.

I think it would be better for him to survive saving her, come to terms with his grief, and become a mentor for July.
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I want July to heal Nick's scars with her vagina.
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>>3520385
And then he inflates several thousand balloons that are tied to his house
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>>3520421
What, like rub it on all the scar tissue he has in hopes of having a bio-oil type effect to lessen their presence?
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>>3520423
Goddamnit, anon, this is why I love you.
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>>3520421
I've read that School Days doujin...
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So what music would play at Judy's funeral? Presumably because being a cop is dangerous she would've made some preperations herself, but Nick could've added some afterwards too if they're married.
Let's go for maximum devastation here, people.
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>>3520423
>He lands it on a hill overlooking the burrrows
>He just sits up there watching all the fox and rabbit kits play on their farms
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>>3520427
...sure
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>>3520433
Official funerals don't get much more than Amazing Grace or Taps if the person in question died in the line of duty.
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>>3520411

There could be a variety of ending that could work, for sure.

I just see Nicks dying saving July to be a more solid one given that I doubt anyone is going to continue being interested in the AU if it revolves around Nick going back to normal and mentoring July (he'd prolly be retired too, since most cops retire after 20 years)

I just thought it'd be a nice "full circle" kind of ending, only my opinion of course. Nothing wrong if you disagree
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>>3520433
We'll Meet Again
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>>3520433
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Omd9_FJnerY
>>3520443
Yeah, what he said
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nhGuhfBk5xk
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>>3520433
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fi9srqFqCFo
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>>3520444
Well Im not saying the story would continue to see him mentor her in depth.
That would just be the ending.
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>>3520433
>maximum devastation

I will never understand you people or your goals.
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>>3520433
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qKggnBh2Mdw&ab_channel=StephenMcElvain
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>>3520453
>mentor her in depth

With his penis.
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>>3520443
Then what would Nick listen to on repeat the evening after the funeral whilst he sobs, curled up on the bed with one of her shirts?
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>>3520461
Try Anything
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>>3520453

Dunno, it seems a bit lacking as far as endings go.

To me at least
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>>3520405
No, punisher
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>>3520470
I just think the other type of ending is overdone. I like to see older characters actually survive the events of stories.
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>>3520461
Attempt Other Things
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>>3520454
We've already done everything we can with Zootopia. It's either this or Anon In Zootopia and I don't think anyone wants that.
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Morning folks.

May you have a domesticated fox in your life.
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So what now?
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>>3520473

I get you

I like happy endings more myself as well, I just thought it fit the story a little better is all.
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>>3520444
Not the anon you were responding to, but here my idea for how it could end
>Nick saves July but gets badly wounded, enough for him to be hospitalized
>Nick has a heart to heart with July and comes to terms with his grief
>they make up and start to actually get along
>Nick eventually dies in the hospital a few days later
>he leaves a letter for July to read
>"Take care of this city for your aunt and I, July. You're gonna be a great cop."
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>>3520480

Something something dewlap something something snifffffff something something knot in vagina
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>>3520480
The
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>>3520480
Nick becomes the punisher, kills criminals instead of due process
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>>3520484

Yea, that's sorta how I see it

Spot on
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>>3520480
A fox falls in love with a bunny. Unable to confess...
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>>3520486
>>3520487
Interesting start

>>3520488
Not the kind of story I'm writing unfortunately
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>>3520480
>>3520495
Why the fuck are you writing it in Notepad?
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>>3520498
I don't have Word on this computer
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>>3520480
>Just as Nick's knot filled Judy with a combined groan of pleasure between them, the fire alarm went off.
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>>3520480
Start with an interruption.

Something that switches the mind's tracks suddenly. This can be a character's thoughts, a piece of dialogue, an actual interruption in story.

Something that acts like the baited hook for your readers.
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>>3520480
According to all known laws of zootopia, there is no way a bunny should be able to become a cop. Its body is too small to get criminals to the jail. The bunny, of course, cops anyway because bunnies don't care what mammals think is impossible.
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>>3520502

Not him, but google docs
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>>3520480
*RECORD SCRATCH*
*FRAME FREEZE*

You're probably wondering how I got here, let me tell you how it started, three hours ago.
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>>3520498
I use notepad for writefagging. I like it because it's just raw text. No font, no interface, just words.
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>>3520480
>Chapter 1
>Judy and Nick were one day a cop when then the bad guys said to them "no stop you can not be the cops because you are small!"
>The Judy and Nick were sad because they like being cop but if they were small they couldn't be cop anymore
>So then they home and when the tv turn on it said "Judy and Nick we need your help bad guys taken over building on the city!"
>Then Judy and Nick went to building and saw bad guy and shoot him with gun and he fall off building and die
>The End
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>>3520506
Maybe something like this?

>"A-ten hut!"

>The hippo's raspy voice reverberated over the chitter chatter of the officers in the room. As the conversations slowly faded out, Chief Bogo walked into the room and towards the podium.

In the past, I've always have the worst time trying to actually start writing stories.
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>>3520520
You got me, kek
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>>3520523
Yeah, that sounds good to me.

Attention grabbing, gets you in the mindset of the characters, because you're being drawn to attention as Bogo enters the room, etc.

I think it works well.
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>>3520480
Call me Ishmael
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I really like the first gimp suit Judy, so I decided to make a second photoset now with hoods and gags.

10 images, 2 hoods, 2 gags, 1 blindfold, 1 catsuit and collar and 1 nude version:

https://imgur.com/a/T77QT
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>>3520538
Call me irresponsible!
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Good night, thread!
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>>3520542
Oh god, you madman.

I platonicly love you like fuck!
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>>3520542
Alec please you're killing me
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>>3520542
You're too good to us, I love all the options as well!
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>>3520542
>depressing greentext stories
>sexy image packs
I think my boner got whiplash
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>>3520546
I dunno why, I always feel bad for Judy in this picture. All she wants to do is Dick the Nick...is that so much to ask?
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The way this thread was going inspired me to quickly doodle this, and I think we can all agree, /co/ has seen some shit

I'm open ton any requests from anons
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Would rabbits blush if they're embarrassed in zootopia? I can't recall
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More winter coat fluff, because this shit's addicting.
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>>3520584
>Nick with an even flooflier tail

Now draw Judy burying her face in it.
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>>3520580
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>>3520454
Most of us are numbed and crave for sorrow because it's the one of the few feeling we're still capable of experiencing. This reminds us we are still alive.
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