would love for you guys to judge my work
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>>2857886
Its like a zoomed in google street view.
Sideways/10
>>2857883
Not that interesting
>>2857886
would be better if the girl wasn't there, she detracts from the image, if she's supposed to be the subject you need to get closer, if not, get her out
>>2857887
seems forced/not interesting
>>2857888
See above
>>2857889
best one so far
>>2857890
alright
speaking from a composition stand point these are mostly just snapshots and I'd be hesitant to refer to them as work. Find more interesting subjects to photograph
>>2857902
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>>2857889
Yeps, most interrsting one by far in the series
Work?
>>2857883
don't quit your day job
[spoiler]unless your day job is being a photographer[/spoiler]
>>2857883
We all gotta start somewhere, just keep at it. You do have a ways to go though. Try to figure out how to never use your flash. That'll learn ya real good about exposure and motion blur, etc. You really need to rotate too, it's kind of annoying and you're just begging to have shit talked to you for that.
I've seen better, but Ive also seen worse.
For feedback, I'd say get your lens to locations where people aren't usually looking from- meaning explore different abnormal perspectives. People have already seen most of these pictures already, since 90% of people just take pics from eye level, and there isnt that much of a difference in height among people, speaking angularly, that is. When your friends and family look at your photos, they should say 'wow, I pass by that house every day, and it doesnt normally look like that'.
Dont give up on photography, but way more importantly, do not give up on trying to improve. You have a ways to go, but you're doing it, so that's what will get you there.
Haters gonna hate, but you arent beyond hope.
>>2857887
I think this one is very good, maybe because of the lipsuc the cardboard posture man and the two hands in front of body
I think that other anon was off when he said that she detracts from your subject, whereas its clear to me that the subject is their relationship, both of them being pretty essential to this
>>2862347
anon who said she was dtracting was talking about the photo of a building with a different girl standing in front of it
