can I get some harsh crit?
this is my second or third time I've actually gone out with a camera with a (very) basic knowledge of composition
am I on the right track?
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that's all folks
I think I needed a higher f. and better alignment for >>2855364 to work
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>>2855362
These are all really really contrasty. It works. Not really much else to say, that's just the main thing I notice. Whatever genre this would fall into, it is not my genre, so Id have a hard time saying much more.
>>2855362
You are on the right track. If you don't have prior experience in some other artistic field, you have an obvious talent.
I think you are already better then most people here, but don't get cocky because you are completely clueless about technical aspects of photography (EXIF data reveals that).
>>2855372
>>2855366
>>2855364
I like these 3 the most.
>>2855362
>>2855363
>>2855364
I really like these ones, I think the high contrast/black n white look works very well with your subject matter. Monolithic, monochromatic. These pictures are all interesting in their own right.
>>2855365
>>2855366
Here we get to shakier grounds, because such organic matter (grass) demands more gentle handed treatment than what we see here. The picture is almost monochrome, and the tons of info in the darks/highlights are being wasted away.
The compositions are fine, the cipped highs/blacks make the first one look messy, the second one gimmicky.
>>2855367
This is n awesome natural shape, reminds me of old science photographs from the 50's.
>>2855368
I'm not sure about the composition here, although its not bad, couls work well for a book cover or so. Here the picture's dynamic range is represented much better than in the previous set, I actually like the crushed blacks.
>>2855369
It's not bad again, but seems more of a texture to work with rather than a photograph to me.
>>2855371
The leaves give it a pointillistic quality to it, the rocks have cool textures too, but it feels like an actual subject is missing from the picture.
>>2855372
see what I said about these >>2855365
>>2855375
Nice scene, I think if you wanted to put the waterfall as your main subject the photo should be horizontal to accompany the motion/direction of that flow.
Overall I really think you have something going on here, I like your themes, there is something inherently black metal about your post processing. I suggest you to start experimenting with crushing the whites/blacks a bit less in general and opening the pictures' dynamic range up. Keep shooting, looking forward your future stuff!
>>2855393
what would've been the ideal setting?
I know reducing the iso for one but should I have upped the aperture or the shutter to compensate?
>>2855366
I really, really like this
>>2855365
Nice
>>2855402
Lowest ISO you can. f/7 seems ok for that scene, and then set shutter speed to however fast or slow it needs to be for the lighting conditions.
A good way to start is setting the aperture for the depth of field you need. So a small aperture f/7 and up for a landscape shot like that.
Then set the shutter speed and keep an eye on the meter.
If you notice that the shutter speed is too slow, then you should bump the ISO up to compensate and allow you to use a faster shutter speed.
You promised me whales OP, where are the whales you lying bastard?
>>2855407
Op is the whale.
>>2855406
great stuff, cheers anon
should I just keep it in program or learn manual?
>>2855416
Learn manual. You might not use it 100% of the time but it will help you get a feel for how each setting affects the others, and how you should change things to get the result you want.
while I personally find these a bit boring, I do get the look that you're going for, OP. keep it up!
also, keep the ISO down bro
>>2855362
>>2855363
these are awesome
>>2855369
try to align things with the frame, or make less obvious that they are misaligned
>>2855371
a like this a lot
>>2855372
I like how it is composed, but would look better if the subject was properly exposed. A tricky scene in terms of lighting, anyway.
>>2855375
The light leaves balancing the composition make it look awesome. But keep your subject (in this case, the waterfalls, or at least the bright part of them) inside the frame, and give it some breathing room.
For the rest, not saying they are bad, but they just don't grab my eye.
And yes, you're on the right track.
>>2855362
What part of Wales OP? looks like some interesting castle ruins, do you have any shots showing more of the castle?
>>2855541
the four waterfalls at brecon and the castle/museum at abergavenny
nothing too great but here you go
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