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took some pics of my friends band. Just need some critique, i
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took some pics of my friends band. Just need some critique, i know they aren't perfect and etc. First time using my new alien bee/battery pack combo. All bare bulb flash

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>>2798380
2/?

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>>2798380

looks pretty fucking great.

but i dont get the band vibe, it looks more like a sitcom or comedy promo.
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Can't you fuckin 1000x1000, OP?
Looks like a generic indie-rock band.
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>>2798393
fair, I haven't posted on /p/ in a minute forgot my manners

>>2798390
yeah I'm normally shooting documentary/banal hipster shit art photos, so I was lost for the whole "band vibe." What do you suggest? Who's photographs should i be looking at?
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4/?

obligatory post-hardcore high school band photograph

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5/?

I know that I overdid the flash in both this and
>>2798383

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>>2798401
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>>2798401
>I'm normally shooting documentary/banal hipster shit art photos

do you post these in the board? i dont recall seeing such a clean pp and straightforward composition recently.

well i know shit about band photo, but i know when i see a good one. aang from this very board does good stuff, maybe an anon will come up with her tumblr.

now, what id do? id look for the scene this band wants to be part of, look at its best/most prominent bands and ape some of the aesthetics, while putting some of my own vision.
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>>2798405
>>2798407
Good, very bandy in tone, but get beard fuck to shave that thing into a mustache, lose the beanie and glasses, and to dress like a dad from the 50's
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>>2798416
I have in the past. I posted heavily on this board around 2011 - 2014. Heres an example of my documentary stuff that I've posted before, although I doubt anyone will recognize it. Sorry for the quality, I grabbed it off an old imgur upload not the original file. Thanks for the suggestions though!
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>>2798410
Is that the moody blues?
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>>2798426
That's pretty fuckin sick.
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>>2798432
thanks man! heres a few more. I have more than this, and I've even been published/had a few shows (not a professional, but more than a hobbyist) but I would feel weird posting my website because of my name and 4chan and etc.

http://imgur.com/a/jLji9
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>>2798426
Awesome, I /r/ your imgur.
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>>2798426

i remember that picture, OP.
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>>2798426
you! damn i loved that thread, it was amazing.

>>2798407
this though, it's pretty bad. people in the background, kind of awkward poses, distracting flare... light is also way too unnatural. would go in the garbage.
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>>2798427
Yeah man.
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Technically the photos are pretty good, I just think the models need to be a bit more serious. The goofy looking lad in the beanie is pulling a silly face in pretty much all of the pictures. It's fine to have one silly photo out of a session, but he sort of ruins the tone of the photos. Take >>2798405 for example. Serious, serious, serious, stoned hipster at 7-11 deciding what snacks to buy. Also some of them are kind of over-lit, as in the lighting looks quite fake instead of complimenting the photo.

Overall I think >>2798380 is the keeper. Looks almost like they're standing on a movie set against a flat background, really like it.
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OP, i think you cant make them badasses, because theyre genuine dorks. then, you should use that for the photoshoot. make something thematic. theres a recent kim deal video clip where the whole band is dressed as waiters, their name on a little plaque and everything.

for them, idk, get them into a blockbuster type place and make them the salesclerks. something super ironic like that.
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>>2798383
>>2798380
>>2798388
>>2798405
Yellow beanie makes my /pol/ senses tingle.

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>>2798528

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>>2798453
fuck yeah I have two of their records.
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>>2798383
17 seconds to load the picture, resize please ffs
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>>2798401
They all look like kids (maybe just yellow beanie looks like an idiot), and I liked the ones with them having fun in the playground, I don't know their music but if it's like sugary or like OK Go maybe go that playful way?
I totally see them as pic related.
also:
>dat porn film filename
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>>2798380
>>2798383
Off-camera flash with some kind of mild diffuser? Pics are shit, btw. Try post-processing and subject separation.
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>>2798380
The composition of this image drives me nuts.
is the dude on the left the singer or something? Since the three are directly in front of the off-centered building, and the guy on the left is not, and the only one not touching another band member, it looks bad.

It's close but not right. You could have done better.
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These are pretty awkward too look at. Everything about the guys especially but also the photos themselves just feel kinda tryhard and fake. Looks like the band searched for 'inde rock band + seattle + kreuzberg + nmh + vintage' on google and went with that as their style, and you did the same with 'rock band photo', resulting in an insipid copy of a copy of a copy. >>2798405 and >>2798388 are almost parodic.

But I guess it's a hard genre to nail. The first one I kinda like, but I would like to see a wider, more symmetrical comp to amplify the flatness that's already there.
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>>2798388
The
>there's always one
photo.

I fucking hate these. This photo makes me strongly dislike the guy on the left. Even if this was directed, it is like one of those "alright let's do a goofy shot" and there's always the one guy who thinks too much of himself to participate with the group.
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>>2798426
I love these kinds of shots

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