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ITT: Post your music and I (possibly others) will tell you how to improve it
or how great it is
or if its actually music or not
lets go!
Ok how is it?
https://clyp.it/b3otstop
https://clyp.it/jooauac5
>>66133064
pretty interesting. Its a pretty sound. relaxing as it gets.
both links.
obviously not mastered to any degree. needs sharpened up. how was this recorded?
>>66133064
oh, also, link #2 has a nasty twang at the beginning. control your fingers! lol
>>66133155
I just recorded it with my bedroom set up, which is just a blue snowball and audacity
>>66133064
I'd love to hear an EP or something if you ever release one anon, really love your sound man.
>>66133026
https://clyp.it/wtcrydny
https://clyp.it/3x5rxoac
https://clyp.it/psxata35
They don't really sound alike but they're all me
>>66134276
they are all pretty well done musically. if this is really your stuff you have some serious talent.
its all quality issues from there
they all sound like they were recorded with a phone or something.
good stuff otherwise though.
>>66134711
>they all sound like they were recorded with a phone or something.
lol what, what do you mean?
https://clyp.it/ktruyolb
>>66134276
Damn dude, good stuff. Is it all done with electronic instruments? Just woke up and my ears are still asleep.
>>66134813
Thanks, yeah it's all samples, sampled instruments and synths (except the guitar solo in the second one which I played on an actual electric guitar but with a simulated amp)
>>66134891
You've got some guitar chops there, man. Reminded me of Prince's guitar work. I thought the production was alright, wouldn't quite agree with that other anon that it sounds like it's recorded through a phone, like mine above hah, maybe just work on the mixes a bit. Composition-wise though, you've got it, dude.
>>66134810
I didnt figure you had put this clips up here to brag about quality or anything but there is a constant hiss and some instruments bordering distortion etc its not a big deal really unless you are calling that the final product. its clypit tho so not that big a deal really. im sure you know what you are doing.
>>66133026
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=juAEEaPwngg
you will probably diss this
>>66134276
Wow, that was nice. Good variety in your music
>>66133709
Thanks man. And I'm working on stuff right now, though it may not be similar to that stuff that I posted
https://youtu.be/V0GL8LASmpo thoughts?
here is some shit from me
https://clyp.it/lhdu10cv (i like the sound of that synth)
https://clyp.it/niswitly (just made it 4 u, also idk why it came out sounding so shit, but guess what song is stuck in my head tonight)
https://clyp.it/io3dny1o (wanted to try out the text2speech)
https://clyp.it/2y4q53wj (this is a file labeled '2')
all of these are just ideas ofc, i don't think i'll make a complete thing soon
>>66135005
No, I haven't, but saying it sounds like it's been recorded through a phone is a little insulting. Not saying it's perfect and there may be too much gain at points but I'm not hearing the constant hiss - are you sure it's not on your end?
>>66135176
where are you from? i think i know you
>>66135241
doubt. bulgaria.
>>66135269
I was wrong,I am from Croatia and got a friend that makes similar stuff and always posts similar crow pics so I thought maybe it was him
>>66135016
please guys,just give me your opinion. To me it sounds as if it was recorded on a cellphone,and the voice is too silent compared to the beat
>>66135016
cant understand a word of it but damn. high energy and dark. rare. I cant diss that.
>>66135053
good energy and good song over-all but need to bring down those highs a little bit.
>>66135176
a lot of interesting sounds. I don't know how to criticize concepts. keep playing around with stuff bro.
>>66135233
im sure its not on my end. im not trying to insult you either. like I said you obviously have a whole lot of talent. its clypit so dont even worry bout it man.
https://clyp.it/zeje3hvb
my sound design really sucks. i think this could have been cool if I could make the actual sounds less shit
https://soundcloud.com/n-p-nickels/treefingers-ripoff
Instrumental, reverby guitars. Feedback requested!
>>66135831
I am sleep.
https://soundcloud.com/benjiboy316/rauhfasertapete
>Dark
>Electronic
>Experimental/IDM
>>66135772
its not a bad start but throw some sub behind it and add another instrument in there or something. Its just naked.
>>66135831
nothing wrong with it but I was thinking the whole time how funny it would be if suddenly beat dropped and insane dubstep happened
>>66136030
lol @ YOU ALSO USE XTC BRUG?
>>>66135053
>good energy and good song over-all but need to bring down those highs a little bit.
In our defence we were going for a dirty punk sound, but i totaly get where you are coming from.
>>66136256
https://clyp.it/iz230j5c
heres where im coming from
sample 1 = original
sample 2 = doctored a bit
^ this is not perfect btw
https://youtu.be/E_X8xsy6dUk
>>66137506
this needs more explanation. is this a visual art situation as well? I mean, the sounds aren't bad but I'm not entirely sure whats going on here.
also are you going to fight this guy for the name? lol
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWXQs6td2TY
why is this thread so slow?
I was sure it would explode.
>>66135772
Mess with Serum more.
>>66137816
I played a gig, I made visuals to go with the music, visuals are secondary
I'd fight him, I've been releasing music under that (shit) name since 2001
http://www.mankymusic.co.uk
>>66138222
idk man hes probably in a gang. looks like a drug dealer or something. you should sue his ass off asap.
nice work btw
>>66138439
I'm sure another mank would turn up if I attempted to sue.
Thanks, I try my best.
>>66133064
first one reminded me of russian circles, in a good way
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0AgoPwLM8ky
plz no bully
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1fWFArG6uJc
This is a rough audacity demo that I've been working on. This is indended to be the intro track to my first solo album after it's polished. I was in a band for 7 years. We played very Beatles-esque stuff.
>>66138631
>http://vocaroo.com/i/s0AgoPwLM8ky
Generic. Not bad, but nothing sets this apart from the weeks worth of jungle music the world already has.
Needs more dynamic shifts, feels totally stale by the end of the first minute. Dropping the beat to play random disjointed samples does not help.
>>66138709
>http://vocaroo.com/i/s1fWFArG6uJc
Put some passion in those vocals, son. Bored singing makes for boring music.
>>66138781
I'll keep this in mind when I go to do final takes, thank you. This is just an outline track.
>>66138922
Right on. Aside from that one nitpick, great work, especially with arrangement
>>66134276
I really like your music. The chord changes are original and interesting, Rhythm is tight and instruments sound nice. Who are you so I can listen to your things and show them to other music lovers?
https://clyp.it/subhi0wr
a meme song I am working on
https://clyp.it/syyymfca
an actual song that I finished
>>66139273
how about you get back on discord you stupid ass bitch
I made a mix album of a lot of electronic tracks, split over four sides, with each side mixed together
https://mega.nz/#F!kQREzSqR!LVOG3zcDjbDaGe2zCwjt8A
FLAC
>>66134276
Are you trying to record generic stock music?
>>66139900
that "hiphop" situation is probably theeee whitest hip hop beat ever to hit anyones speakers ever, amirite?
>>66138709
This is really good man.
![soggy_th[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/FOIxV4d.jpg "soggy_th[1].jpg")
Tried singing in harmonies for the first time, be gentle;
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1LE38XTCD3e
this is my first time working with vocaloid in a track, so lemme know if it sucks (or if anything else sucks). i already know she's too loud in this mix
https://clyp.it/mrbojcz4
>>66135016
i fuck with this hard, dude. i think the "cellphone" quality on the vocals is fine honestly, i don't notice it. anywhere i can cop a download besides ripping it from youtube?
>>66140322
would probably be completely awesome but sounds like you recorded it with as far from the mic as you could get through a tube or something
https://clyp.it/di53kkhf
https://clyp.it/y5yui1il
http://bluehole.bandcamp.com
>Psychedelic
>Space Rock
>Noise Pop
>Shoegaze
>One Man Band
>Instrumental
>>66133026
I'm trying to get my mix good, any recommendations?
https://clyp .it/2c4iuhoj#
I think you guys are gonna like me
https://donaldbeck.bandcamp.com/track/count-on-me
https://clyp.it/godklbax
Noisy bullshit.
>>66140592
If you you lived in Chicago I would hit you up for some jamming in a second.
>>66138709
this was me.
This is hopefully going to turn out to be the outro or centerpiece of the album. I just started work on this shit a week ago.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1Pz5Vqjs51U
i just made this to be honest:
https://soundcloud.com/love-through-cannibalism/orquesta-paradiso-demos-wip/s-z74xB
only shared it with 2 friends, it's a work in progress
>>66140886
This is not what noise is about
There is so no layering to your music, there are no textures, it sounds like you had no planning to this and just went for a free imrpov, if thats your thing cool
but you sound like shit.
Top this noise track homie, I bet you can't, i bet you cry in my face like a little chica
https://clyp.it/u1xog3yi
>>66140990
too ambient, not enough noise
pls go
>>66140990
I like this. Very much Throbbing Gristle style.
>>66140800
that doesnt switch up at all.
any rap beat sounds good with the right vocals on it but not everyone can work miracles. throw some fast hats in there to pick up the pace and some harder bass. if you want a trap beat thats missing a lot of things. heres a random typical trap beat: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V_eVlsaf19M
not sayin you should be like everyone else but there is a schematic here. you should be able to hear whats missing in your situation in contrast.
>>66141036
Are you in tears yet little pendejo? You think you can noise like the noise king?
Fuck you gringo bitch
>>66140990
the only thing that makes this more than just a pad is you recorded it while your neighbors were blowing air horns and your tv was on in the background
>>66141120
I had multiple pads and some organs
That was mostly just joking tho, I need to imrpove my noise game
>>66140392
Fixed it, hopefully.
Thanks for the input.
https://clyp.it/adrflpsp
>>66141041
Don't encourage him.
>>66140941
Hey thanks man
https://soundcloud.com/psychonautofficial
only 3 tracks
>psychedelic
>>66141662
Adult Swim bumps?
>>66141779
that'd be cool but i dunno anybody who works over there
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V7oaSLxaYOo
tell me what you think!
its a builder, and the last 30 secs is really cool
>>66142050
I like it, very relaxing to listen to. Keep it up dude!
>>66142050
I liked this a lot. Good job buddy
I'd really appreciate any feedback you might have, especially vocally. Am I any good?
Thanks so much!
https://soundcloud.com/proxysolo/threat-of-joy
https://soundcloud.com/proxysolo/johan-von-bronx
>>66142607
Your music sounds like Paul McCartney's newer stuff. If you take that as a compliment or not is up to you. You don't sound like Julian Casablancas at all.
>>66142449
>>66142570
thanks! maybe i should record more i have around 100 acoustic songs ready to record. i just dont have the motivation currently.
i dont have anything else recorded rn but i have this little clyp of a song i made a few years ago called "cathedral" just messing around with heavy reverb.
https://clyp.it/5p0dxwkf
>>66142734
You might want to reconsider calling your song "Cathedral"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z2WRGVJLZu0
>>66142786
god fucking dammit
>>66141259
https://clyp.it/iqvimuxr
i felt like getting involved too.
cleared it up a bit...
>>66142959
Champ work mate!
>>66143031
>>66138709
Best ITT. Youve got a definite good beatles vibe with those melodies too.
>>66135053
If you did this with clean vocals, it'd be awesome.
>>66140322
Not bad. You've got a good voice.
>>66141662
https://soundcloud.com/psychonautofficial/413-to-87-to-240
>>66133026
https://soundcloud.com/catilluminati/first-pioneers-feat-infuhmus
https://clyp.it/srcrx145
https://soundcloud.com/metadiscorse/complexity
https://soundcloud.com/metadiscorse/goodnight-sweet-child
I'm sorta new to all of this stuff
https://soundcloud.com/mephisto_waltz/the-visitation-feat-ornate-exit
>>66144085
instantly depressing then the beat goes n switches up to what in the holy fuck is this and then the rhythm gets all cat n the hat then the beat switches back for a second but not for long cause it switches on to a new wtf is this beat and nothing smooth about these transitions. Is this your take on sway in the mornings 5 fingers of death freestyle or what?
>>66144203
lol this is what i imagine somebody in a loud boiler room banging on pipes with a wooden mallet would sound like
>>66144361
Well, thanks for listening! And thanks for the feedback
>>66144411
i dont do drugs so im not real good at reviewing this sort of stuff
>>66144448
Thanks anyway man
Here's sort of a power pop mid tempo song I've been working on also.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s18vPMGgyDQX
>>66140941
>>66138709
these were also me
>>66144113
dope dancable industrial beat liked it a lot
a probably too repetitive noodling loop i made this afternoon while high, i find it pretty grooving though
https://clyp.it/33c5kxgj
>>66144918
https://clyp.it/voh5zda1
these are are very meh nvm lol
>>66144992
this is good
>>66144918
this not so much
>>66144918
quality quality quality.
i made this song today, feedback would be amazing
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B25tgLmi-i6oYnZMQlRHUEM2UmM/view?usp=embed_facebook
https://clyp.it/peydcti5
>>66145193
that beat is pretty cool
idk bout the other stuff
not that i can sing or shit but... mmm
>>66144608
Here's the last one I'm going to upload. I think I'm going to ditch this track from the final album though. Needs way too much work still.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1cY88xSVTti
Any suggestions for improvement?
https://soundcloud.com/user-379423611/audio-music
>>66145343
begging for better production, but the writing is great
>>66145343
record in a studio.
>>66145256
you have a lot of cool moods building in this. The ending was really cool. Do you have a soundcloud or bandcamp?
>>66145256
this is the best music i've ever heard keep it up
>>66145248
thanks!
>>66145577
>>66145673
Thank you guys, seriously. It's been hard for me since the band I was in split up. When I do my final album I'll make an account on one of those sites. Until then, you'll have to put up with shit demos.
>>66142050
Excellent
>>66145399
They were first takes recorded on a phone just to get the ideas down. We only recently started playing again.
>>66145256
>>66144608
>>66140941
>>66138709
Holy shit man, good job. When do expect to finish your albuM?
https://clyp.it/bwckwz3x
>>66145076
>>66145126
Thanks guys
>>66145968
No tentative date. I have to work on it between work and being too drunk and stoned to play.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0uBlQVxJRyb
http://vocaroo.com/i/s00PlNdWVdjw
>>66146451
those drums...
>>66146497
holy crap, are you signed to a label? you should be if you arent.
>>66146451
Not great like this. Consider a vocal track, or a synth track if you want to keep it instrumental.
>>66146497
Terrible flow. Listen to Moonman for inspiration.
can I get some thoughts I put my whole soul into my music
I'm 18 if you think I sound young
https://vendu.bandcamp.com/album/false-advertising
>>66146789
either you dont have a soul or you need to find a new hobby
>>66146840
tight
>>66144012
https://soundcloud.com/psychonautofficial/the-long-voyage
another one
>>66138709
I don't know if I've ever been this impressed by a Vocaroo post.
>>66146497
https://clyp.it/rtyr3hxw
now you are famous
Post your best musical memes, stuff like midi swaps or mashups
>>66144608
you sound like a Big Star knockoff
>>66147257
lol this is great
https://youtu.be/pYoVmXQ2qXc
Tell me how it is lads
>>66147045
Thanks bud.
RapeEveryoneVEVO in DA HOUZE!!
MadDd TraxXx!
I Could Probably Beat Up Troy Sivan:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=44w34UZ7rXI
Danny Noriega: Former Asexual:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O5smJEU2-iw
Blackness From the Tomb of the King:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-5oUrdYYoNw
Vive Le Italiano:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5ZAp-X_sT2s
>Devil Sexy
>Free Metal
>Feminist Queer Anti-Folk
>>66149097
WOW HOLY SHIT MAN
>>66140470
Bumping for feedback.
https://dissonent.bandcamp.com/releases
>Ambient
http://merrylou.bandcamp.com/releases
Some experimental baroque surf-pop for y'all.
glitch WIP
https://clyp.it/kj5au4ek
what do you guys think
