I moved the "Remember to use clyp.it to post your tracks/WIP: posting a clyp.it is just providing sound for a question, posting a Soundcloud link is making self-advertisement and the thread doesn't need that." to the top since it seemed to be a problem in the last thread.

Also, I'm looking for that dude who was gonna do a guitar solo on a track of mine last night. Where you at, mang?

Okay, I really didn't wanna be the first one to post a track in my own thread but y'all ain't doing shit.

>https://clyp.it/sn332q0i

https://clyp.it/haqnqpci

>need fresh ears here
>any tips on how to make it more dynamic/danceable
>is the intro fucked up m8

All kinds of criticims welcome.

What's a small MIDI controller with good pads? I have a Nanopad2 and the pads are basically clacky buttons.

>>63610079
I'm interested in that BT, can I hear it? Might be able to do something

>>63610326
>https://clyp.it/sn332q0i
Cool. I like how it sounds.

>>63610079
>https://clyp.it/sn332q0i
I have MIDI guitar in it now but I'm gonna replace it with a real one once that guy hits me up. Guitar starts at about 1:51. If you wanna give it a shot, I'll send you a version without the MIDI guitar. Also, I'm not sure what BT means so I just guessed.

>Cool. I like how it sounds.
Thanks, man. I was going for that underwater-y vibe kinda.

>>63610576
Woops, meant to reply to >>63610465

>>63610576
sure, just give a link

>>63610657
>https://www.mediafire.com/?5kdb2de3b02huol
I want it to KINDA sound similar to the orignal so I included the guitar MIDI file for reference.

It's in F#m
85bpm

>>63610767
i got something, lemme record it

>>63610767
https://clyp.it/3chzrdy5