Writing rhymes
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Any anons here write rhymes? anyone care to share?
I would but i think it'd be cringe if I just posted them
How do I get out of the trap of using simple rhymes with words like you, me, etc.?
>care to share
you're a poet and you didn't even realise it OP
>>60818169
Wanna have a rap battle OP?
I'm down.
Put your hands in the air like you just don't care.
>>60818169
you fist.
lemme battle you, no bullshit
>>60818245
ayo my flows are limitless
you suck on clitoris
pitiless, I'm not impressed with your images
and I fucked your mom
in the bum
and then she cum (came)
you are lame
what a shame
who's to blame?
rat, bat, fat, flat, vat, that, scat, pat, hat, chat, at, sat, begat, format, tomcat, drat, mat, combat, cat, matte, acrobat, democrat, brat, bureucrat, habitat, thermostat, laundromat, aristocrat, that.
Bro, I got all day.
>>60818292
here
following >>60818245's sentiment. it's all you
Every word I try to say to you
always plagued with fear and redundance
Vultures would pass my body by
in search of a meal with a bit more substance
oc donutsteel I've already used it as a hook
>>60818297
Limitless lol like that movie lmao
that one sucked more than your mum
I'ma unload this lyrical ammo
and I'm gonna fuck yuor bum.
When i write rhymes i like to spend 5 minutes per line average, and i have to rehearse it to an instrumental and re edit it over and over again, but in the end i feel when you flow the rhymes in the end and get what you were envisioning it feels amazing
>>60818225
By practice and repetition, mostly. Boring yourself out of convention breeds ambition. To fulfil it you require invention.
>>60818317
More liek, "every word I say is poo"
It sucks I hard to hear that redundance
Memes and 4chan are my way
you bee eating soybeans and whey.
hey please end me god,
im slowly dying
people say im odd,
i hope they're lying
people say im stupid,
it doesnt bother me at all
ive been shot by a cupid
it hit my heart even though its small
half my life im pathetic
people pass trying to act empathetic
i know they're not
i know they're just lying
>>60818383
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=wW0TWPfMoBU
Just put together a little bit of rhymin to this one
Better Inform the press and sound the alarm because i came here to impress and not do anything less thats why i wear this crest on my chest to inform you you're only messin with the best
>>60818297
>and then she cum (came)
>>60818491
hAHA that prose is weak
that's more pussy than I got in a week
and I got a hot life
My dick turns to stone like lots wife
peopel say ur stupid because u are
it should bother you you retar
u got shot by cupid? Nah that's just my dick
It hit ur heart because its my dick.
All ur life is pathetic
I'm not gonna be sympathetic
Your mom is hot
jk I'm lying
>>60818470
yeah my bad I didn't understand this was a "try to be a nigger" thread
>>60818491
yo that verse had me dying
it was real shit
I really hope you wasn't trying
ca it was real shit
I hope you get hit by a bus
>>60818541
>h3h3
>>60818556
Straight off the dome cuh
>>60818556
wait so this (>>60818317) was a real effort ?
sounds like the content you'd expect to find in the tear-stained diary of a middle-schooler
>>60818556
>>60818592
The dome is my penis btw
>>60818592
god this board has fucking eroded
>>60818572
deal with it faglord
>>60818624
its just banter m80
People can have rap battles in a rhyme thread and discuss serious music in others. Its just dumb fun
>>60818608
>implying old middle school notebooks aren't the hottest inspiration in emo right now
>>60818297
Wtf? Punk rocker here n il smoke you. Get at me first
>>60818608
you're right let me get on your level
When they tell you you must make it
And you think hell no
Got a bad feeling and can't shake it
Hits so low
Every day I know a way you say it's only half a trip to see all of that for free
When I stray to feel the ray of day hey wait there there that's the breeze up there in those trees
Easy ways of knowing and I got no ways of showing and I find a place for lowering my knees tell me please
why are we out here I would have brought beer there's deer lights cars signs and now bees i feel gay now jeez
>>60818722
These are interesting dubles
the 60818 is the dubles of the a troubled soul.
The 7 means you will get the result good.
The 22 means u will get really bad.
You will get a troubled good really bad fate.
OH NO!
>>60818769
haha what
nigga my fate's spelled out
all paths are determined
visions of a rope for all
I be yearning
strange fruit drifting slowly
silent in the night
some niggas ain't born to put up a fight
oh what you've got a gat
well fucking shoot me jack
pussy bitch like you ain't got the balls
or the gumption
firing hi points and being life's consumption
well the void beckons close nigga
so keep thinking you're ballin
at the end of the day
that lanky reaper nigga be callin
>>60818892
I like how you responded to that
your fate is sucking lmao
you lost your spot like jay lemo
bitches on my dick eat my "strange fruit"
I got my dick in your booty I'ma straight fruit.
I don't got a gat lmao where you got that
I got my dick I use as a gun for fun
I got gumption I call it my cumtion
I not that nigga u assumptin
I am slim reaper you dingus
and my scythe is my penis
>>60819015
fucking lol that straight fruit line
this faggot talking assplay
like uncle took him to a shed
this nigga ain't understandin
I'm just trying to be dead
but if you think you toppin nah
you a bottom to me
but that don't even matter cuz soon
i'll be bodying me
so if this gross
morose
bellicose nigga's trying to get a
necro dose
and score this
dig up my grave faggot
hop on this dick
rigamortus
>>60818892
>>60819015
Punk rocker to you fruits fags:
Step up to a real nigga
And believe the hype,
Like fresh produce at the grocery
My shit is ripe,
Comin up from the gutter
And the underground
Here to rock the mic,
Show you fruits how its done
Like adolf and his reich,
Real shit, real nigga from the 408
Too good too smooth you two wont even hate,
That other lil hoe i called out didnt even step to me?
Prolly had his punk ass screamin for the deputy ha,
I Brought it in pulled it out and now its wrap
Just dropped by to show you little girls that a punk can rap
Whats it like to get beaten in yo game? You fools for real??
On a scale from 1 to 10 you fucks are zeros
Shit, Go on back to /b and livestream yo anheros
>>60818189
Its an anonymous site anon, go ahead
I mean, I write poetry, but I tend to avoid rhymes in the common sense of the word. Also, it's in Danish, so there's not much point in sharing it.
If you get stuck, just remember that "nigga" rhymes with "nigga".
>>60820008
Your lyrics are minimal
While mine are subliminal
Sublimely in time I rhyme like it's an actual habitual ritual
Bitch you will be beaten till I finish the kill
In which you will admit defeat or submit to my skill
Stomp on the track with the Maryland terrapin arrogance back to sack bottle of Cognac feel major pain get drunk in vain of the self centered mind mind polluted, magnetized my ego manum size go crazy mangum is where I reside fuck your side
>>60818169
DEATH
PAIN
DITSY CUT STAIN
>>60823156
I like it man
Stay strapped like Haitian basketcases wrapped in strait-jackets pacin'
>>60823251
Got you mashin' brakes as fast as Asians learning racin'
i eat pasta
like i eat ass-ta
yo
find truth inside the words i spit
hope you play this shit late, when the moon is lit
hope my brain don’t split, let my mouth emit
lyrics that change lives, and make my rep legit
time to recommit
i been slacking the last couple months, but i’m bout to get with it
turn my life back to normal, get life tighter knit
and when you see me at the benefit, hope you know my pockets getting fatter and i made it out the pit
been in deep, had to jump the cliff
to make it out alive, don’t let my body stiff
and when i do pass in my honour light another spliff
>>60824020
hahahahahahaahahhahahah
Here's my go:
Salud it's the doctor coming through
Heady like a heady brew or stew
What that henny do to you, phew
Taste like cotton candy, mixed with ampheti
Knees fine no sweat and no mom's spaghetti
Jeez Louise, get off the stage already
Shaking like a mixer with parkinson's
Left faster than a bullet spin
and the bullet in
Bartender make a gin and tonic with no gin
Just put the whiskey in
im a lyrical spirtual individual
im a lyrical spirtual individual
im a lyrical spirtual individual
im a lyrical spirtual individual
