War is Coming V2 Edition
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>>27127414
Twisted Desires Pastebin
Part 1: http://pastebin.com/shurgbZ9
Part 2: http://pastebin.com/WSp0Cpxv
Part 3: http://pastebin.com/ZTwyKsMN
Part 4: http://pastebin.com/dVKsDRhX
Knifey said he wasn't feeling too good, but he might return to us one day. Check his story out here
http://pastebin.com/BAKYHgJ8
And Minty, his story can be found here
http://pastebin.com/u/mintyanon
Like always if you want to write something go ahead
If not sit back and enjoy or talk about vidyas of your choice
>>27202418
>You just stare at the Diamond Dog in front of you
>His fur is brown and he's got a black jacket on
>There's and eyepatch over his left eye
>He doesn't look as ugly as the other Diamond Dog either
>"Hello, DD." Umbra says "I brought some friends to see the grotto."
>He looks at each of you
>"What's wrong with her?" DD asks
>Turning around you see Rarity hiding behind Sombra and Umbra
>"She had a bad experience with your kind." Twilight says
>"Let me guess, she's a seamstress and those dogs tried to use her to find the gems?" DD asks
>Twilight nods her head
"How'd you even guess that?" You ask
>"Because that's what my customers do." He says "They find the gems they wand and I go get em."
>Umbra turns to Rarity
>"Rarity if you want, you could go pick out some gems." Umbra says
>"Do you really not mind?" Rarity asks as she steps out from behind Sombra
>Umbra nods her head
>"Go ahead." Umbra says "It'll be on me."
>Looking around you see a sturdy set of doors
>"That's the entrance to the escape tunnels." Umbra says "They lead out to a secure area."
Okay so my sleep schedule got messed up so I'm gonna call it early to try and fix it\
Another day off is tomorrow so I'll try and get four to six parts out
Also it's pronounced Dee Dee, but you can do what ever you want
>>27202539
Rest well
>>27202539I know that feeling, I've been working to fix mine.
How secure will it be?
>>27202539
I completely forgot how we got to this point. Last thing I remember was that Anon got Discord and Eris talking, then was about to go back into the room where Umbra was with the girls. What did I miss?
The pastebin's not updated, so I couldn't check there either.
It feels strange waking up this early
Off to cash my check be back in a few
Oh good, you put 'Umbra' in the OP. Now when people ctrl F for it they won't think we're kill.
Bamp
>>27205281
Yeah, I made the thread last night wondering if Rager was kill. I'd search the board every day last week and didn't find anything. I really thought he was killIt was awful...
>>27202539
"How secure?"
>"Very." Umbra says "The tunnel itself is very dense and runs quite a way before reaching a safe haven."
>Umbra walks up beside you
>"I fear I may have to open these doors soon." Umbra says "I don't want to put my subjects through that."
"They'll be fine." You say "The ponies of your empire are strong."
>She smiles before you both head back
>"So how did you end up here?" Twilight asks
>DD scratches the back of his head
>"I got kicked out of my group a while back." DD says "With nowhere else to go, I came up north. I found a cave where I started to dig myself a home."
>DD chuckles
>"Then during one of my gem excavation, I kinda ended up digging up a hole in the farm." He says "That's when the guards brought me to meet Queen Umbra."
>He walks up to Umbra and bows before her
>"She offered me a home here in the empire." He says "She said that my ability to dig through the ground and fetch gems could help the tailors with their buiesness."
>He stands back up
>"I get payed in bits for helping them find gems, and I get to keep some of the more unique gems." DD says "It's nice."
>That does sound like a nice set up
>"If not for her, I'd be freezing out there in the wastes." He says "I owe her my life."
>Umbra smiles, and you notice that Twilight is looking at her
>He walks over to desk with some scales on them
>"So pretty pony..." DD says as he turns to Rarity "You want me to get you some gems?"
>>27205281
>>27206833
D-Did you guys not see the image of Umbra from the last thread?
>>27207920
I didn't look through the catalog, and when I would go on the board it was never on the first few pages. I usually just search "Umbra" or "Rager" to find the threads!
Then again, I was searching on Clover, which I think just searches the body of the post, not the title or name. It probably would've shown up had I searched on my desktop.
Either way, that's all in the past now. I THOUGHT I LOST YOU, I WAS SO HEARTBROKEN
>>27202418
I want to be her slave.
>>27207958
Don't worry, Anon. I won't be kill till the story is done
>>27207972
Yeah, me too
>>27207920
>Rarity nods her head
>"Well just find the ones you want and I'll get them to you." DD says "Follow me."
>As Rarity and DD go down a tunnel on the right, Umbra turns to you
>"While they're doing that, I want to show you something, Anonymous." Umbra says "Follow me."
>She looks back over at your friends
>"You can all tag along too." Umbra says as she continues to head down a tunnel on the left
>Following right behind her, you notice that the sound of running water is getting louder
>It's getting warmer too
>When you reach the end of the tunnel, you emerge to finally see where the sound of water is coming from
>There are openings in the hall where water is coming from
>You assume it's falling into pools, but you can't tell because the are small walls made of wood obstructing your view
>It's hot in here
>Off in the distance you hear the sound of laughter
>You can't believe it
>This can't be
"Umbra, is this what I think it is?"
>She nods her head
>"Yes, Anonymous." Umbra says "This is an indoor hot spring."
I'm actually shocked I found this image
>>27210391
>"When did you do this!?" Sombra asks in an excited tone "This is amazing!"
>Your friends seem surprised at his reaction
>"Shortly after DD arrived." Umbra says "While he was digging way outside the empire one day, he came across a cavern that was filled with running hot water."
>"He must have found a spring of geothermal heated groundwater." Twilight says
>Science!
>Umbra looks out to the springs
>"After some planning we were able to create the springs you see before you." Umbra says before looking at you "They're really relaxing!"
>You smile
"So how does it work down there?"
>"Well, there's a section for mares and a section for stallions." Umbra says "A-And sometimes DD opens up the bath for both."
>Umbra looks down at the ground before kicking a pebble down the steps
"Something wrong?"
>She looks up to you with a blush on her face
>"I've always wanted to bring y-you here." Umbra says "It's a frequent spot for l-lovers to come to."
"During the mixed bath?"
>Umbra tries to keep her composure and nods her head
>You smile before rubbing her ear
"Maybe we should make a date sometime..."
>"We should." Umbra says "I can reserve the spring for us whenever we want."
>"Can you cannonball into the water!?" Pinkie asks
>"You could." Umbra says "So long as DD doesn't mind."
>"Oh wow! This is absolutely beautiful!" You hear Rarity call out
>Turning around, you see Rarity coming down the tunnel with DD
>She has a little bag filled with a assormant of different colored gems
>>27210665
>That was fast
>"I must say, Queen Umbra, he's really efficient." Rarity says "And look at these gems!"
>She shows you all the bag
>"Oh I can just imagine what I can make with these!" Rarity says
>"I take it you want me to put it on your bill, Queen Umbra?" DD asks
>Umbra nods her head
>"I'm tempted to go down there..." Sombra says as he eyes the springs
>"Later." Umbra says "There's still a few places I want to show the girls, before I take Twilight to see my study."
>Sombra sighs before nodding his head
>"Well then I suppose we should be off." Umbra says "Thank you, DD."
>"Anytime, my Queen." DD says as he walks off "Back to work for me."
>You follow right behind him
>When you get back to the main hall you head out of the cavern and continue on
Bump
>>27210728
>After exiting The Grotto, you all followed Umbra as she continued to show the girls around the empire
>Things seemed to be going well as the girls continued to chat it up with Umbra
>Hell, they were even starting to engage Sombra in conversation
>You arrived at the park and sat down while Fluttershy walked around and interacted with the birds
>Umbra walked around with her and talked with her about animals
>She had told her she liked to hunt, but only large threatning beasts
>While that was going on, Lance and Ariadne showed up
>Looks like they were on a date
>You don't even remember how it happened as Rainbow Dash and Lance started to argue over who was faster
>Next thing you know, the two are racing around the wall of the empire
>Ariadne just chatted it up with Pinkie
>Rainbow won the race, but barely
>After they were done, Lance and Ariadne went on their own way and you all head to The Emerald Cafe for another small bite to eat
>You all got one big strawberry cake and each of ha just gotten a piece
>After your little snack you exited the cafe to see that the sun was going down
>Really there was only one stop left
>To take take Twilight to Umbra's study
>As it started to get colder, you agreed it was best to head home
Work soon so this might be the last part for now
Yeah, off to work bump. also a question for later.Should Umbra give the girls Sombra's map to the empire?
>>27213848
Nah.
>>27213848That would be incredibly stupid on her part. After all, she tried to stay hidden, isn't she. Why give Sunbutt more chances to get to her than necessary?
>>27213848
Yaaaaa nop that would be stupid.
>>27213848
But she can gives them a crystal or thamthig to contact her or something like that
>>27213848
Surely she wouldn't be that silly.
Just let discord teleport them to and fro
>>27213848
Didn't she say she was tempted to give the map to them so she could fight celestia at last?
>>27213925
>>27214018
>>27214173
>>27214460
Yeah, I was thinking about it at work and it did seem pretty dumb. I think of a better way for Celestia to find the empire though.
>>27215608
That's why I was asking, I wanted to see how Anons thought about it
>>27213848
Maps enchanted so when Celestia touches it the words "come at me bitch" form
Fuck me, I need to get to bed,
I got you guys first thing in the morning!
Bamp
Bamp
>>27213733
>When you arrived home you went upstairs to the study
>Opening the doors, you walk inside
>"Twilight Sparkle, welcome to my study." Umbra says
>Twilight's eyes go wide as she looks around the room
>"Wow..." Twilight says "Look at all these books!"
>Twilight begins to walk around and look at the spines of the books
>The girls take their seats on the cushions
>When Twilight reaches the book case with the lock on it, Umbra walks up beside her
>"These are the scrolls Star Swirl gave me." Umbra says "He said that he would entrust them to me."
>"C-Can I see one?" Twilight asks
>You see Umbra's horn light up before the lock disappears
>Umbra levitates one of the scrolls over to her
>"Go ahead, I just need it back." Umbra says
>Twilight opens the scroll and begins to read through this
>"This is amazing!" Twilight says "I can't believe he gave these to you!"
>"He had told me that he trusted me with them." Umbra says "He said he would have left them with Celestia, but he felt she wasn't ready to hold on to them."
>When Twilight rolls up the scroll, she hands it back to Umbra
>"I don't know what to say..." Twilight says "Queen Umbra, I think we misjudged you."
nnnn
we'll see
>>27220831
>The rest of the girls nod their heads
>You smile
>"I'm glad." Umbra says "I hope you all had fun today."
>"We did!" Rarity says "I never expected your empire to be so amazing."
>"For once, I agree with her." Applejack says "I reckon this empire is something special."
>Twilight turns to look at Sombra
>"We're not really ready to say we trust you, Sombra." Twilight says "But I do think you have changed a bit."
>Sombra bows his head
>"Thank you, Princess Twilight." Sombra says "I'm happy to hear that."
>"He does seem a lot nicer." Fluttershy says
>"He won't answer my question about if he likes parties!" Pinkie says "If he says no, he is not okay!"
>"I like parties, but only certain types." Sombra says
>Umbra takes a seat on some of the cushions
>"So what happens now?" Rainbow Dash asks
>"I don't know." Twilight says "It's up to Queen Umbra."
>You walk over and take a seat next to Umbra
>Umbra smiles and scoots up next to you
>"Well, I must say it's been wonderful having you all here." Umbra says "I would love for you all to stay, but I feel like that's impossible."
>"Well, Darling, if you have homes available..." Rarity says
>"Rarity, no." Twilight says "We do need to head back to Ponyville."
>You see Umbra deep in thought
"What are you thinking?"
>"I think I can give them a crystal that holds a teleportation spell." Umbra says "For the girls to come and go if they want."
>>27202418
bump
>>27225706
>"Are you sure that's a good idea?" Sombra asks
>Umbra nods her head
>"It would be better than giving these girls your map." Umbra says "If Celestia found out they were there she would try to take the map from them."
>Sombra nods his head
"Didn't you say you were tempted to give Celestia a map?"
>"I was just angry at the time. Something about that solar that get my temper running!" Umbra says "Beside we need time to prepare."
>"You and Princess Celestia really don't like each other, huh?" Rainbow Dash asks
>"Only because she keeps trying to take Anonymous from me." Umbra says as she nuzzles into you "You have no idea how much we despise each other just because of this human."
>She kinda making it sound like it's your fault
>Umbra notices this and give you a quick kiss on the cheek
>"But I never really cared much for her in the first place." Umbra says "So don't think you ruined anything."
>You smile before shaking you head
"They could always use Discord too."
>Umbra nods her head
>"Oh yes, I forgot about him." Umbra says "He could just teleport them in and out."
>"I guess that solves that." Sombra says "You may want to tell the guards that they'll be coming and going."
>"Don't worry, I will." Umbra says "Now there's something I want to ask the girls..."
>You see Umbra sit up and look over at them
>"It seems Princess Cadance has decided to keep out of this situation with Celestia." Umbra says "I want to know if you six will do the same."
>>27232662
>The girls look at one another
>You can tell that this is difficult for them to decide on
"Listen, I'm not asking you to betray her." You say "I'm only ask that keep out of this and let Umbra and I deal with Celestia and Luna."
>"This started with us and the sisters." Umbra says "And I want it to end with us."
>The girls remain silent
>"Twilight, dear, I don't think I can stand against Queen Umbra." Rarity says to break the silence "Now that we've seen what she's really like, I think you feel the same way too."
>"I agree with Rarity." Fluttershy says "Princess Celestia told us she was evil like Sombra, but Anon told us another story and we've seen it today."
>Twilight still looks conflicted
>"But it's Princess Celestia..." Twilight says
>"But Twi, you've seen how she's been acting..." Rainbow Dash says
>"I think it's for the best." Applejack says "We should just stay out of it."
>Twilight continues to think about it
>"She wasn't mad at Cadance when she said she wanted no part of this..." Twilight says
>You see her think it over before she sighs
>"Okay." Twilight says "We won't get involved when the time comes."
Work time, be back in a bit
>>27234440
>>27232886
yes! go and fuck yourself fagestia
So who will Celestia rely on now?
>>27232886
>Umbra looks over to you before smiling
>"We did it, my love!" Umbra says "Now we have a fair battlefield."
>"This is excellent news." Sombra says "Now that Celestia doesn't have her Elements of Harmony to harm you, you should be able to hold your own now."
>You look over to your friends
"Thank you." You say to them "This means a lot to me."
>Twilight smiles
>"We'll come with Princess Celestia when the day comes." Twilight says "Maybe we can help you calm her down in the end."
>"I wouldn't count on it." Umbra says "She's as stubborn as a mule."
>"So are you." Sombra says
>Umbra glares at her brother
"We should head back down to the main hall." You say "We can call Discord from there."
>Umbra nods her head before you all head downstairs
4chan wouldn't let me post
>>27240209
>Returning to the main hall, Fluttershy called for Discord
>A moment later he appeared in front of you, along with Eris
"Did you two have fun?"
>Discord huffs, while Eris smiles
>"We're getting there." Eris says "It's still a rocky road."
>Eris quickly hugs her brother before heading over to Umbra
>You notice Fluttershy looking at her with a confused look
>"Well I suppose this is it..." Twilight says
"For now." You say "At least until everything is normal."
>"Remember that you all can visit us whenever you want." Umbra says "Just make sure Celestia doesn't know about it."
>"What will you do, Queen Umbra?" Twilight asks
>"We're going to prepare for the inevitable." Umbra says "Tomorrow I'm taking Anonymous and Sombra to check on some things."
>You raise an eyebrow at her
>You wonder what she's talking about
>Before you can even react the girls all rush up and hug you
>After they each say their goodbyes to you, the stand next to Discord
>"Until we meet again." Umbra says
>As the girls wave goodbye to you, they teleport away, leaving you alone with your group
Work time!
Maybe when I get back we can maybe get toTartarus
>>27243004
>>27243559neat
>>27238405
Who indeed
board is weirdly fast
>>27243559
Bump
>>27243559
>Sombra is the first to break the silence with a yawn
>"Well today was interesting." Sombra says "But I say it has left me tuckered out."
>Umbra looks back to him
>"Go to bed then." Umbra says "Anonymous and I are going to return to our chambers so we can get up early tomorrow."
>She turns around and smiles at you
"So where are you going to take us?"
>"To the Icy Gem Cavern." Umbra says "We need to talk to Rodin."
>Sombra groans
>"I really don't understand why you let him in the empire." Sombra says "Or why you let him open up a bar."
>"You'll see tomorrow." Umbra says "Now why don't you and Eris head to bed."
>"Come on, Sombra." Eris says "I'll teleport you there."
>Sombra tries to tell her no, but she ends up picking him up and going anyway
>You chuckle before you feel Umbra pull at you
>"Come on, Anonymous!" Umbra says "Time to sleep together again!"
>Heading back upstairs, you enter your room and you and Umbra begin to get undressed
>Umbra beat you to the bed
>She laid there waiting for you with a big smile on her face
>Climbing into bed with her she immediately nuzzled into you
>"I love you, Anonymous." Umbra says
>You smile and kiss her
"I love you too, Umbra." You say "Goodnight."
>"Until tomorrow, my love." Umbra says "Goodnight."
>Sharing one more kiss, you fall asleep with Umbra in your arms."
Day off tomorrow, so there should be more parts
>>27249396
Hope so
Emergency bump
>>27249396
enjoy your day
Random bum
bmup
>>27253529
>>27249396
>You are Celestia
>And you can't sleep
>Tossing and turning in your bed, you can't shake this feeling of anger
>Anger for Umbra
>And for Anonymous...
>What does he see in her?
>You let out another groan and you turn in your sheets
>You hear the doors to your room open
>Looking up, you see Luna staring at you
>"We know this must be difficult for you, sister." Luna says "But you need to get some rest."
"My emotions are making that difficult."
>"We understand." Luna says as she looks out the window "We're trying everything we can to try and find her empire."
>You sigh
>"We might have a plan to find her empire." Luna says "Just give us some time."
>You look up at her
"Do you have something in mind?"
>Luna nods
>"If we can't get the location out of them, perhaps we can get it out of a citizen." Luna says "Goodnight, sister."
>You watch as Luna exits your room, leaving you alone
aw shit, here we go
>>27255189
>You are Anonymous
>When the sun came up, your morning went along as usual
>You and Umbra woke up
>Cuddled for a bit
>When Ariadne showed up, you both got dressed and grabbed Sombra
>And after eating some breakfast, you all headed out into the empire
>It's about ten now as you head to the Icy Gem Cavern
>It's snowing a little, but it's nothing too bad
>Walking down the street into the High End District, you and Sombra follow right behind Umbra
>"This is going to be an interesting day." Umbra says
>"What exactly are we going to be doing?" Sombra asks
>Umbra looks back to you two before looking forward
>"I-I just want to check on something." Umbra says "And someponies..."
>"Someponies?" Sombra asks "Who?"
>"You'll see." Umbra says "For now let's get to The Icy Gem Cavern."
>As you continue to walk, you end up coming up to the restaurant
>You head up and open the doors for Umbra and Sombra, before following them inside
smoke smoke Smoke Smoke SMOKE weed everyday!
>>27256296
>As soon as you step into the building, a familiar song hits your ears
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ERahqrn3Ah4
>Walking up to the podium, the pony sitting at it doesn't look up at you
>"Sorry, sir or madame. We're closed right now." He says "Come back later on tonight when we're done cleaning..."
>He looks up and sees Umbra and Sombra
>"O-Oh Queen Umbra and Lord Sombra!" He says before hopping off his podium "How rude of me, please forgive me!"
>"It's alright." Umbra says "Is Rodin here?"
>The pony nods his head before standing up
>"Follow me, my Queen." He says before opening the velvet rope
>Heading into the main area of the restaurant, you see ponies cleaning up
>The band isn't on stage either
>They must have recorded this for them to work to
>As you approach the bar, you look up at the neon red sign
>The Gates of Tartarus
>"Sir, you have a visitor." The pony says
>You see the large stallion standing behind the bar, cleaning some glasses
>"What did I tell you?!" Rodin asks "I told you not to let anyone in!"
>"But, sir! Queen Umbra and her brother are here." The pony says
>Rodin stops what he's doing and looks back
>"Well I'll be dammed, Queen Umbra has graced me with her presence again!" Rodin says before looking at Sombra "And look at who she brought along."
>Sombra looks away before Rodin looks at Umbra
>"So what can I do for you today?" Rodin asks
>"Hello, Rodin." Umbra says "I'm here to go to you know where."
>tfw Overwatch Beta
>>27257129
Oh shit 5 hour bump
>>27257129
>Rodin looks at his employee and dismisses him
>The pony nods and leaves you all alone
>"You need to go to Tartarus?" Rodin asks "All right, but you mind giving me a reason as to why?"
>"You kept Rodin here just so you could have a convenient portal to Tartarus?!" Sombra asks
>Umbra shushes him
>"Keep your voice down!" Umbra says
>She looks back to Rodin
>"Something is looming on the horizon." Umbra says "I need to make sure I can rely on someone for help, if I need it."
>"Are you talking about the Queen herself?" Rodin says "Because if I remember correctly..."
>You see his horn light up before a scroll appears
>"You two are still in good standing..." He says as he unrolls the scroll "Yep, it says right here."
>"I still want to talk to her if possible." Umbra says "Also I was wondering if we could visit...Them."
>Rodin looks at Sombra and you
>"Because you have these two?" Rodin asks
>Umbra nods her head
>"Alright then..." Rodin says "Follow me to the back."
Work time
>>27260239
and the plot thickens
>>27260608
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>>27260239
Bump for 2kool 3dgy demon horse.
>>27260239
>Following Rodin he leads you to a door
>When he opens the door, you see a long staircase leading down
>Heading down the steps you come to another door
>Rodin quickly opens this door and you all enter the room
>Looking around the large room, you notice that it's pretty empty
>Well except the weird platform in the middle
>Umbra and Rodin climb on top of it before Rodin looks at you and Sombra
>"Well?" Rodin says "Get your candy asses over here!"
>"Don't speak to them like that!" Umbra says
>You and Sombra both start heading up the steps
>Reaching the top, you watch as Rodin's horn begins to glow
>The platform begins to glow a dark red, before you're all teleported
>The feeling goes by so quick
>Opening your eyes you take a look around
>You seem to be standing on another platform in a very large extravagant room
>"Welcome to Tartarus." Rodin says
Day off tomorrow
>>27265315
You've successfully gotten my interest, now I can't wait to see what happens inhell
Bump.
>>27267250
>>27265315
>Looking around the room, you see that it's made of black rock
>The ceiling hangs high above your head
>A red carpet leads from the platform all the way down to a set of GIANT golden doors
>What the hell is supposed to be in there?!
>Looking over you see a open window
>Really it's just a hole in the wall
>Walking over to the window, you look out to get a view of Tartarus
>So this is what pony hell looks like...
>You see a bunch of towers with what looks like cells on top of them
>So this place is like a prison
>Oh hey, they have a Cerberus too
>It's guarding a cell that hold an old and sickly looking... Centaur?
>"Come now, Anonymous." Umbra says
>Turning around you start to follow Umbra, Sombra, and Rodin
"So Umbra... How come you never told me about this?"
>"You never asked." Umbra says
"Really?"
>Umbra sighs
>"It's because I didn't want you to ever come here. I can barely stand being here for so long myself" Umbra says "But you are my beloved, and I felt you like you should see this."
"You're full of surprises, you know that?"
>Umbra winks at you with a smile on her face
>Coming up to the door, you realize you have no idea how to open these doors
>"We can just walk through it, my love." Umbra says
"Oh okay that makes things easier."
>"You sure you want to bring these two along?" Rodin asks
>Umbra nods
>"I want them to meet her." Umbra says
>Rodin places his hoof on the door
>In the center it looks as if a portal is forming
>"Then step on in." Rodin says
bumo
How long does it take for the pastebin to update. Just finished reading part 4 and want to keeping reading the story in order.
>>27270002
http://pastebin.com/PEVVbQHu
I keep forgetting to put part 5 in the OP
>>27268773
>Looking at Umbra, she nods and you all enter the portal
>Coming out on the other side, you look around this room
>It's huge!
>Not only that, but this place is filled to the tee with decorations
>Paintings, rugs, banners, you name it!
>That's not all that's in here
>Looking up a set of stairs you see a very large woman like thing laying on a bed before you
>Is she sleeping? You can't really tell
>She's definitely not human, or a pony for that matter
>She's wearing a very long black dress that covers her legs and feet with white streaks in it
>You see that her eyes are red behind that little mask she has on
>On her hands and wrist she has little accessories on them
>On her head is a crown with little skulls in it
>Can you even call those strands behind her head hair? They look like they're apart of the crown
>You just stare at her
>You're not one for sensing power, but you can feel hers
>It's immense...
>"Sheba, you awake girl?!" Rodin yells
>You see her start to stir
>"Who dares disturb me?" She says as her voice echos around the room
>She looks down at Umbra and Sombra
>"Could it be?" She says "Umbra and Sombra? Is that really you?"I actually went through with it. No turning back now
>>27272336
Well fuck
>>27272336
Rager, if you need a break just say so, if you keep throwing animu and vidiya references in you're going to eventually jump the shark and turn this into a shitshow.
>>27272336
>The weird woman, demon, goddess thing looks down at them
>"Hello, Sheba." Umbra says "It's been sometime since you've seen Sombra, hasn't it?"
>"It has." She says "Where have you've been, Sombra? It seems like only yesterday you two stumbled in here to find your parents."
>Must have been when they were exploring Equestria at first, before they made the empire
>Sombra looks away
>"I was away, doing my own thing." Sombra says "I just returned to my sister recently."
>She looks over to you
>"And who are you?" She asks "A better question would be what are you, strange creature? A denizen of this place perhaps?"
>Being the size of a house makes this lady too damn intimidating
>Before you can open your mouth, Umbra steps forward
>"Actually he's not from here, he is my beloved." Umbra says "My special somepony."
>Sheba actually looks surprised
>"You actually found a lover?!" She asks before she looks you over "He must be quite something if he captured your heart..."
>She's so intimidating, you can't even come up with something clever to say
>Sheba rest her arms on her bed again
>"So Umbra, what do you need from me?" Sheba says "It must be dire if you've come to me."
>"It is." Umbra says "My empire is in danger and I was wondering if I could ask for your help if it comes to it."
>Sheba thinks to herself
>"Of course I can, but I have a question." Sheba says "Can you actually summon me? Or is it still too much?"
>Too much?
>"Umbra, what does she mean?" Sombra asks
>Umbra looks down at the ground
>"I've never been able to summon Sheba." Umbra says "To summon her puts too much stress on my body, so much that I actually think I could perish from it."
>>27272875
This was planned when we first talked about BayoUmbra and DanteAnon. I was only debating on whether to pull the trigger. But this is a one time thing so don't worry.
Passing out, freindos
Tomorrow morning we'll get right too it
>>27272336
Pack it up boys, we're done here.
>>27273037
>this is a one time thing
Yeah but there are a lot of "one time things" in the story as is.
>>27273037
"What?!" You asks "Then why the hell are you even thinking of trying it?!"
>Umbra jumps
>"My love, I can explain!" Umbra says
>"I agree with Anonymous." Sombra says "This is foolish, you don't need to go that far to defeat Celestia!"
>"Will you two let me speak!" Umbra says "You two always do this!"
>You and Sombra look at each other before shutting up
>"I could never do it before because I was alone, and the amount of magic I needed to summon Sheba is astronomical." Umbra says "But now..."
>She looks dead at Sombra
>"Oh no! No! No! NO!" Sombra says "Umbra, you cannot be thinking what I think you're thinking."
>"I think I can do it if I have your help!" Umbra says "Eris gave you some of her magic and that's more than enough!"
>You shake your head
"I still don't want you doing this!" You say "The risk is too great!"
>Umbra looks at you
>"Anonymous..." Umbra says as she walks up to you
"Listen, I know you want to win this, but I don't want you killing yourself over it." You say "What the hell is the point of winning this if we both don't come out of this?!"
>Umbra sports this sadden look on her face
>"I know that, but I feel like Celestia is going to throw everything she's got at us." Umbra says "I feel like I need to do the same."
>You look over to Sheba who is only watching you both
"Besides, didn't we say we were just gonna beat her?" You ask "It feels like if you use her, you're going to end up destroying Celestia."
So I have to go to work, but I'll leave you all that are feeling unsure about this situation with this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5YjGmTI_fPU
I'm not sure if I'm going with the whole summon yet, that's what the last part is supposed to be for. I'm trying to come up with a way for the battle with Umbra and Celestia to be a great read for all of you. I have most of it all planned, but I'm still deciding on an ending for it. I also want you all to know that Umbra isn't going to start summoning Infernal Demons left and right, it's just would be Sheba an that's it. If you have some worries about it still then let me know. When I get back I'll try to address them.
>>27276060
If and that is a big if you do right than I think it would be god but I can't really say if you can it work out because I m not you.
I read in the Succubus Thread one or tow storys most of them are shitty but there are one or two god ones so.....
Mäh can I lat that stay as a comand mäh
>>27276202
Harkel harkel?
,,,,
>>27277434
>destroying Celestia
Is that a bad thing?
>>27279767
Yes, because then the whole kingdom will come after umbra's empire.
>>27275421
>"Anonymous..." Umbra says
"We can beat her if we all work together." You say "I don't need you doing something that can kill you."
>"Anonymous is right." Sombra says "I don't really think it's necessary."
>Umbra looks at both of you
>You and Sombra keep your serious looks on
>You love this mare, you wouldn't want her to do anything like this
>Even if it is to protect you or her empire
>The question is if she'll relent
>After a moment of silence, Umbra sighs
>"Fine." She says "I won't do it. I won't summon Sheba."
"Umbra look me in the eyes and say it."
>You see Umbra look up at you
>"I... I won't do it." Umbra says before she quickly looks away
>Damn it
>You know she can't decide on it either
>This will have to continue this tonight
>You're not gonna let her do this! Why can't she get that?!
>You shake your head
>Fuck
>You two are going to argue tonight
>"Girl, you need to make up your damn mind!" Rodin says "I got a business to run and I can't stay down here all day!"
>>27281832
>"It is still your decision to make." Sheba chimes in "These two did not make your empire what it is today, you did. If you truly feel that your empire is in danger, then you may still call upon me for assistance."
>Dammit!
>You want to tell her to shut it, but you don't want to die
>"Though I feel if you summon me, it'll be at your most dire moment." Sheba says "Your last resort."
>Umbra looks up at her
>"And if even though they both are against you, they both have the magic to help you summon me." Sheba says "You all may be running on your reserves by then, so I feel one punch is all I can give."
>You could help?
>That's right you have your own magic now
>You look down at your right hand before balling it up into a fist
>Looking at her fist, you feel like one punch from that would end any fight
>The only problem is that you could easily dodge it if you could fly
>"Thank you, Queen Sheba." Umbra says as she bows to her "I only hope it does not come to that."
>"May good fortune favor you, Umbra." Sheba says as she lays her head back down
>Umbra walks away before looking at you and Sombra
>"There." Umbra says "I got what I needed out of the way."
>Umbra meets your eyes
>"Now we can go to our next destination." Umbra says "Lets get back to the portal."
>"We're going to see them, correct?" Sombra asks "Who is 'them'?"
>Umbra looks at her brother before whispering something in his ears
>Sombra's eyes go wide
>"You can't be serious!" Sombra says "You must be kidding!"
>Umbra shakes her head
>"I want Anonymous to meet them!" Umbra says motioning to you "And they haven't seen you in so long!"
>You are so lost
>"I'm telling them about you and him." Sombra says
>Umbra gets in his face
>"You keep your mouth shut!" Umbra says "I'll tell them!"
"W-What exactly are we doing?!"
>Umbra and Sombra look at you
>"U-Uh we're just going to see some ponies." Umbra says "Come on."
>Umbra grabs your wrist with her magic before pulling you towards the portal
>>27283441
>Coming back to the portal, Rodin's horn glows before the portal turns a cool blue color
>Again you teleport to another platform
>Looking around this time, you notice that this place look much different than the previous location
>It looks like your outside in the wastes
>The only difference is that there's no storm going on
>It's nice and peaceful
>The sky is still covered in clouds
>Looking down the steps you see a little trail leading up a hill
>At the top of the hill you see a medium sized house
>"The portal all set to take you back to The Icy Gem Cavern." Rodin says "When you're all done here just step through it."
>"Thank you, Rodin." Umbra says
>"Anytime." He says as he steps through the portal
>You look at the house
>"W-Well, we should get moving." Umbra says "Let's get moving."
>Stepping down the steps, you start walking up the hill
>The siblings are too quiet
>"I don't want to do this." Sombra says "I'm nervous."
>"I'm the only one that should be nervous." Umbra says
>Coming up to the door. Umbra takes a deep breath before knocking on it
>A little bit later a mare the size of Celestia opens the door
>"Yes? Who is i-" She stops when she see Umbra and Sombra
>"H-Hi mommy." Umbra says "I-I found Sombra!"
Work time!
>>27283658
>Inb4 Anon cucks Umbra with her mom.
>>27284121
this
>>27283658
I have the feeling this will be a bit crazy
>>27283379
