Writefagging, Pictures, Discussions
Current Writefags:
Church !v.pI7t5q/w
http://pastebin.com/u/Churchpastebin
Rosenkreutz
http://pastebin.com/u/Rosenkreutz
Past writefags: http://pastebin.com/usz0kvna
Previous thread >>27575487
>>27663129
New writefags from the previous thread:
mobius !9PEUyNz5zw
http://pastebin.com/u/mobius_
Without_Aname !Zm/HdH8Fq2
http://pastebin.com/u/Without_AnameDid I miss someone?
i want to pull her tail hard and hilt inside her taut ponut
>>27663209
A-anon! That's... that's l-lewd...keep going
>>27663209
>eight months after taking your rightful position
>the pony is collared and chained to your open-air throne
>those who seek audience, or to plead, may do so: you are not unreasonable
>those who do, however, are careful to avoid eye contact with the pony at your feet
>hushed whispers, spoken between four walls and dead of night, tell tales of the one, now thoroughly broken, used as an example to the rest
>words of the spectacle are common. another speaks of the 'volunteers', sought from the audience and invited to enjoy the gift.
>this is what happens to bad ponies. good ponies go about their lives, dull their ears and eyes, and never - ever - cause a fuss
>>27663209
Dashie is not for sexual.
>>27663354
which is why you use the hole she poops from, and can't be bred from
jeez anon get a clue
>>27646557
That's one of my favourite ones yet
Great work mobius
>>27661969
Still waiting for Anon punching Zephyr
>>27646575
>Every morning.
>Every damn morning you were woken up at the same exact time, by the sun light beaming right on your face.
>You're almost sure Celestia's doing it on purpose by now.
>You try to roll over to protect your face, but are stopped by something in your arms.
>You look down to see a familiar blue object, wrapped in between your arms.
>In an instant, all of the memories from last night come flooding back to you.
>Dash checking in on you, all of the time you two spent together, and that other thing.
>Rainbow Dash's confession.
>You were still stunned about that.
>Stunned that she picked you, of all people.
>You weren't a terrible option or anything, but you would have thought that she would go for someone more.... similar to her.
>As in, the same species as her.
>You certainty weren't going to say anything though, this was like a dream come true for you.
>Almost as if on cue, the bright blue bundle in your arms started to stir.
>You remove your arms, and she stretches her self out completely, and lets out a small yawn.
>She opens her deep magenta eyes, and greets you with a beaming smile
>"Mmm, good morning Anon."
"Morning Dash. You sleep alright?"
>"Best sleep Ive ever had. And thats coming from a napping veteran."
>She plants her head back on your chest, and you squeeze her tight for a moment, just taking in her warmth and softness.
>Just then, you could hear a slight rumbling coming from underneath the covers.
>Rainbow Dash sheepishly grins at you.
>"Heh, you got any food in this place?"
>Come to think of it, no, you really didn't.
>The snow had been pretty bad out the last few days, so you didn't get many chances to leave.
"You wanna go get some breakfast? My treat."
>"Alright! Now we're talking! Lets go."
>The both of you make your way out of bed and out of the house, Rainbow admittedly much faster than you.
>After getting all suited up in your winter clothes, you and Dash make your way outside, taking advantage of a break in the heavy snow.
>>27663720
>As soon as you get outside, you're immediately hit by a large gust of wind.
>When you go to shield your face however, your exposed face is immediately hit by something with a bit more weight.
>As you wipe the large amount of snow off of your face, you see Rainbow Dash, trying to look as inconspicuous as she can, while trying to hide a snow ball reload behind her back.
>"Uhhh, whats wrong Anon?"
"Oh, so thats the way its gonna be?"
>"What? It wasn't me, honest!"
>You grab a handful of snow, and ready it for throwing.
"Uh huh, sure."
>As quick as you can, you reel back, and lob a snowball back at Dash.
>Before the ball even leaves your hand, another snowball hits you square in the face.
>Not even trying to hide it this time, Dash is grinning at you, with yet another snowball in hand.
>"Ha! Gotcha ya!"
>You mold another ball in your hand, ready to launch.
"Oh, its on now."
>You chuck the snowball, but it misses Dash by a wide margin.
>"Bring it, monkey-boy!"
>You reach down to make another snowball, but before you even make one, you're already pelted by a volley of snow.
>You shake the snow off of your face, but are greeted by Dash, who already has a bunch of snowballs, ready for another volley.
>Damn, she's fast.
>"Ha, still to slow for me, huh Anon?"
>Taking advantage of her boasting, you chuck the ball in your hand right at her, but only manage to graze her on the shoulder.
>That seems to push her over the edge into full blow warfare, because she redoubles her volley, absolutely covering you with snowballs.
>You're clearly out matched, and you need to think of something, fast.
> You wait till she once again hits you in the face, then you take a dive.
>You hit the soft snow, and remain as motionless as possible.
>"Ha, got you Anon!"
>You still don't move.
>"Anon? You alright?
>You hear a slight pang of concern in her voice
>She flies closer to you, trying to wake you up.
>"Ha ha, very funny. Get up Anon."
>>27663722
>You only let out a pitiful moan, pressing on her concern.
>"Oh buck, sorry Anon. I forgot how fragile you guys are. You alright man?"
>She moves slightly closer to you, right within your range.
>You spring up from the snow, catching her off guard.
>As soon as you grab hold of her, you slam her down on the soft snow, and cover her in in the stuff.
>"ANON! Alright alright, you win!"
>She thrashes a bit under the snow, but you can still hear her giggles from underneath it all.
>You go to move a bit more snow on her, but quick as lightning, she flips you off of her.
>"Ah! Got you now!"
>Clearly outmatched, you raise up your hands in surrender.
>Expecting her to dumps some snow on you in return, she gives you the usual slug on the shoulder, but this time it was much harder than usual.
"Hey, what was that for?!"
>"For pulling that dumb trick on me! I got kinda worried, you jerk."
>Genuine concern wasn't really something you were used to seeing from Dash.
>Then again, you were seeing alot of unusual things from Dash lately.
"Sorry Dash, I didnt mean to freak you out."
>"Anyways, looks like I win, like always."
"Alright Dash, you got me."
>"Thats right! You know the rules, loser has to buy the winner breakfast!"
"Wait, when did we establish that rule?"
>"Right now. I'm the winner, so I get to make the rules."
"In case you forgot, I was all ready going to us buy breakfast."
>"Oh, thats right. Well then, what are we waiting here for? Lets go!"
>Dash helps you up off the floor, and you shake off all the snow on your coat.
>The two of you just walk in comfortable silence, enjoying each other’s company, enjoying the moment.
>This is nice.
>You and Dash make your way into town, dodging strong winds and a few "wayward" snowballs.
>When you get to town, "the both of you" decide on Sugar Cube Corner for your morning meal.
> It doesn’t take long for you two to reach Sugar Cube Corner.
>>27663730
> You were looking to treat the mare, and what better place then Ponyvilles best bakery?
> Mares like sweets right?
> Meh, you’re probably right.
>You can hear the bell above the door ring as Dash speeds in the door.
>You enter the mostly empty cafe, and are greeted by a cheerful Mrs. Cake.
>"Good morning honeys, what can I get you?"
>Wasting no time, Rainbow Dash blurts out her order.
>"I'll take the XL Triple Coated Chocolate Supreme, with sprinkles!"
"Is that all Dash?"
>"You're paying, right?"
"Yea, of course."
>"Alright, then I'll also tak-"
>You cut Dash off before she has a chance to stab your bit sack in the heart a few more times.
"I'll just take a chocolate donut, and a black coffee."
>"Alright honey, that'll be 20 bits."
>You reluctantly fork over the bits, completely emptying out your bit sack.
>Whelp, there goes your food money for the rest of the week.
>You really don't mind too much, as long as Dash is happy.
>You and Dash pick out a table, and wait for your food.
>This place has the fastest service you've ever seen, because you hadn't been sitting long before Mrs. Cake brings over your orders.
>As she pours your coffee, she starts up some small talk.
>"I haven't seen you around in a while deary, how have you been lately? Are you keeping warm with all this snow?"
"Oh yea, Rarity made me all new winter gear. Plus, I've had lots of company keeping me busy."
>You look over at Dash, who looks slightly redder than before, but that might just be your imagination.
>Mrs. Cake looks at you knowingly, although you're not quite sure what she thinks she knows.
>"And what about you Rainbow Dash?"
>Rainbow Dash lowers the donut in her hooves, and swallows a mouthful of chocolate.
>"Awesome, like always. Its been kinda hard to practice my stunts with all this snow, but a little snow never stopped me before!"
>You put down your coffee and give her a shit eating grin.
"I dunno Dash, you vs the snow, I'll put my money on the snow storm."
>>27663735
>"No way! I'm the best flier in Ponyville, no, in Equestria! A little snow wont stop me!"
"The best flier? What about Spitfire? Or Wind Rider?"
>"Ha! I could beat those old ponies with one wing tied behind my back!"
"Really? Is that so?"
>Mrs.Cake smiles at your bickering.
>"You two are so cute together, you know?"
>Taking it in stride, you laugh it off awkwardly, while Rainbow Dash hides herself behind her donut.
>If you weren't sure about the blush before, you're sure now.
>Mrs.Cake finishes serving you, and leaves you and Dash alone.
>The silence at the table was broken by Rainbow Dash speaking up.
>"Soo, yours looks pretty good."
"Yea, its alright. I'm sure its no Triple Chocolate whatever that thing is though."
>"Oh yea, this thing is pretty awesome."
>"You wanna try a bite?"
>You look up from your coffee to see Dash sticking out her donut, close to your face.
>You hesitate for a moment, before reaching out your hand to take the donut.
>Might as well, seeing as how much you paid for it.
>Before you can grab it however, Dash yanks the donut back.
>"Ah ah ah, I don't want your weird hands all over my donut!"
"How should I eat it then?"
>"Duh, with your mouth!"
>She cant be serious.
>Damn, you knew that earlier conversation would come back to bite you.
>She reaches out the donut again, giving it a little wiggle.
>Ah fuck it.
>You lean forward, taking the donut in your mouth.
>You bite off a small chunk, then lean back to your spot.
>You chew it up a bit, tasting all three different chocolates.
>As you chew, you can hear Mrs.Cake giggling from behind the counter.
>Not even realizing that she was back there, Dash turns about ten shades darker.
>"You almost done yet? Lets get outta here."
"Alright alright, lemme finish."
>You quickly finish your donut, then you stand up from the table and put all of your winter gear back on.
>After saying your goodbyes to Mrs.Cake, you and Dash leave the restaurant.
"Well what do you wanna do now?"
>>27663739
>"Hmmm, wanna go to the park? Looks like the snows stopped for a while, so I could show you my new trick!"
"Alright, sounds like fun."
FIN
(For now.)
>>27663746
That's a very sweet way to spend the morning
>>27663746
Oh shit, Church is moving on from one shots. Good on you, this update is almost as cute as the last one. My only thing is that Anon seems like kind of a blank slate, it might be a bit better for the story. I think I like the continued story better though, so keep it going!
>>27663746
>playing in the snow with Dash after an all night cuddle session
>this entire story
Jesus, my heart. What a time to be a dashfag.
>>27663209
Not for sexual purposes pls.
>>27663354
>>27665752
I'm sorry, but you people are wrong.
>>27663746
>She reaches out the donut again, giving it a little wiggle.
unf.
please tell me this ends in
>horse pussy
I agree with this anon >>27664797, I feel like anon in the story could be a bit more of a fleshed out character. Good shit though, update when?
>She made you so happy, you just couldn’t imagine how you managed before she came into your life.
>Your gaze shifts to the darkening sky across the pond. The sun was already below the horizon, but the residual light was just enough to navigate by if you left now.
>You signify the conclusion of her belly rubbing with a few pats.
“I think it’s time to go Dash.”
>She says nothing but her body complies.
>Her tail flicks up over her belly to cover herself up.
>Her wings had returned to her sides, making it possible to roll off your chest onto her hooves.
>As she moves you hear some wet schlicking noises coming from below.
>You look down as she rolls off your chest and see some of her ejaculate stringing between the base of her tail and the crotch of your shorts.
>Damn that was a lot. She must’ve been really pent up.
>Your dick makes a final throb in protest before you push the idea from your mind.
>She rolls a bit farther and the strings snap back, some to her rear, others to the sizable wet spot on your clothing.
>You climb to your feet as blood rushes back to your slightly tingly extremities.
>She looks up at you with the same hazy smile she’s had since her orgasm, then she stands shakily on her hooves.
>You move next to her, allowing her to lean the side of her face into your dangling hand. Then you start walking back to your apartment.
>She follows next to you for a few paces before one of her hind legs bucks and her butt slumps to the ground.
>You look down with concern and she looks back with a slight blush.
>”Heheh, uhh…it might take me a bit to find my hooves.”
>She looked like she’d just run a marathon, but you let her give it another shot.
>She hops to her hooves again and keeps walking.
>>27667512
>It looked funny, she was sort of hopping each leg as if she was walking on hot concrete.
>That was officially the first time you’ve seen her uncoordinated like that.
>She hop-steps another three paces before her hind legs give out again.
>You decided that was enough torture.
>You walk up to her and crouch down, scooping her legs out from under her.
>She flips into your chest and immediately finds a place for her fore legs around your neck.
>”H-Hey! What’s the big idea?”
>You snicker a bit at her hypocrisy, she was protesting while already holding onto you.
>You stand up and readjust her in your grasp. You were holding her bridal style with her hind legs and tail draping over your arm.
“Just taking care of my mare.” You reply.
>You crane your neck down and peck her lips which she sheepishly tries to return.
>She makes no rebuttal, but instead tucks her blushing face farther into your chest.
>Taking that as a ‘thank you,' you start your short walk back to the apartment.
>But when you make it to the forest's edge, your spidey sense begins tingling.
>Whipping your head around, you spot an all-too familiar lime green pegasus staring at you from behind a cluster of bushes.
>And from the look on his face, he’d been there for some time.
>His hooves covered his nether regions, and a shocked blush covered his face.
>His wide eyes were locked onto yours.
>Holy mother of fuck.
>Your blood begins to boil as full realization of what happened hits you.
>>27667523
“What the fuck is this!”
>Dash’s eyes shoot open and she looks over at the silent voyeur.
>”Zephyr! What’re you doing out here!”
>Her tail swishes up and across her belly again as she pulls all her hooves to her torso in an effort to cover up.
>One of your arms moves subconsciously across her soft underbelly in a protective gesture.
>He knows he’s in deep crap now.
>”I…uh…um…”
>He’s shuffling backwards, trying to make it to a clearing so he can use his wings.
>He’s gonna learn today.
>You gently place your precious cargo down on the soft grass before launching yourself at him in a full sprint.
>His fight or flight kicks in and he chooses to flee from the alien predator.
>As all little bitches should.
>He looks back mid-scramble, his face locked in terror.
>You grab a handful of tail hair and pull.
>He doesn’t stop, even when you yank it out.
>But he did slow down a bit.
>You time a kick and deliver it to the side of his rear leg. The force from the kick pushes his rump into the path of a quickly approaching pine.
>It happened too quick for him to do anything about it, and he hits the side of the tree.
>Pine leaves gently rustle as a gentle thud is heard and the energy from his body travels throughout the wood fixture.
>You approach the wheezing creature as he bucks his legs at you in defense.
>You swipe the first blow away, but catch a second hoof to the gut.
>It hurt…bad. But you did your sit-ups. And you were betting he did not.
>>27667580
Hell yea! Beat the green out of him! Make fluttershy hate you!
>>27667580
Time to teach him the price of that little peep show, kick his hide to Cloudsdale
>>27667523
You write Dash so damn cutely, holy shit.
Would you guys be interested in the hoofbump compilation being like this?
https://youtu.be/p_ZO81bYDFQ
I've made the WebM short as could be because muh filesizes, but on Youtube I can make it longer and it also has the added benefit of sound.
If you're up for it, any feedback thus far or is it looking good? Like I said I have no video editing skills so if it looks a bit iffy and not really joined together well, I'm not sure how much I can do about that
As per before there's no guarantee I'll actually get this done so don't get your hopes up
>>27668360
More dash is always a good thing
>>27663746
Damn, watching Dash do tricks, especially on the snow, is one of my favorite fantasies. Good one Church, you should definitely continue this one.
>>27668750
You're fucking adorable, Dash.
>>27668360
For myself, I'd like it longer and with the added benefit of sound on youtube. Looking forward to it.
Also, were there other hoofbumps that didn't include Dash, or is she that awesome?
>>27668750
Holy shit I found working internet in this backwater and yes I'm still alive update:
pastebin.com/u/rosenkreutz
-oO(Hell Hath Furies)Oo-
>You follow the ghostly trail left behind as Rainbow streaks across the speckled shardscape.
>It's a little annoying to maintain your following distance as she continuously changes speed and direction.
>She's either mimicking the real spirit orbs in the most bombastic way possible, or she's having trouble flying slowly enough to prevent her colors from showing.
>As you pass from one teeming mass of ethereal essences to another you both begin to fall into an easy pattern.
>Rainbow seems to have picked up their seemingly random rhythm, and by following her trail you are both able to swim with the others almost naturally.
>At first the nearness of the pony souls all around you was incredibly unnerving.
>You'd secretly hoped you wouldn't have to go near them even as your curiosity threatened to leave you burned from the inside out.
>Orb Rainbow had initially hitched around the outside of the first cluster and led you around the outside, but soon enough she almost languidly led you into them and began to fly smoothly again.
>You were a bit concerned, but as you followed you realized that these...souls...don't seem in any way sinister.
>In fact, upon closer inspection the vast majority of them seemed to be giving off a feeling of, hmm, contentedness? Yes. Comfort and serenity.
>Occasionally a whisp of fear or uncertainty or dread and a few other complex negative emotions would touch you, but then they'd peel away in the wake of more good.
>"This is Awesome!"
"Mmhmm..."
>Even Rainbow's usually ecstatic descriptors were calmer and more laid back.
>You pan your eyes back and forth across the endless crystal studded blackdrop.
"Where's a castle? One of these is supposed to be...hum..."
>>27669201
>The thrum of good vibes envelopes you like a warm blanket. You feel like you've just woken up after a long night of study and you have that warm, cozy, hyper-comf-snooze feeling all over.
>Thanks to your athletic pegasus friend you have no trouble following along in the complex spirals and swirls that gently carry you around and through the shards.
>You just have to follow the group, or Rainbow...whatever. You don't even really have to pay attention.
>It's like floating on a cloud down the Warm Bath River and just soaking beneath-"
>"TWILIGHT! Snap OUT of it!"
-SPLACK-
>A wing catches you across the face. For what you suddenly realize is at least the second time.
"Huh? Wha-?"
-SPLACK-
"Gah! STOP! Rainbow! I'm okay!"
>You peer through your crossed forelegs at a nearby orb. The only one that, like you, is no longer swarming with the rest.
>"Oh, thank Luna! Are you sure you're alright?"
>You hear a gentle rustle as though her wing were being readied...
"I'm fine! Don't smack me again! What just happened anyway?"
>"I dunno..."
>You swear you can hear the blush.
>"I just started to feel all woozy and happy and stuff. Then I thought that all I wanted was to fly around with the other orbs and just, I dunno, chill I guess."
>The Shrouded Dash slowly bobs and dips sheepishly.
>"But then, I remembered I have to help you get us out of here, so I tried to find you...but you weren't behind me anymore. I thought I'd lost you."
>"Then I found your trail, but you wouldn't listen to me so I, well, I maybe sorta...overreacted..."
>Her story makes you feel like a total mule for letting yourself get schmoozed by the orbal vibes. You give her an apologetic look, but quickly realize she can't see you so you just grab her into a hug.
>>27669216
"You didn't overreact. It creeped up on me so slowly that it just didn't register. I'm sorry, and you shouldn't be."
>Rainbow returns the hug warmly for a moment before thumping your shoulder with her hoof and pushing away.
>"Lucky for you, you've got a Wonderbolt watchin' your back, huh?"
"Wonderbolts *Reservist*"
>You grin as you stress the second word.
>"HEY! You know good and well that I'll be first string in NO time. I'm as good as any of those ponies! Better than most!"
"I know, Rainbow. One of the nice perks of being a Princess is that I get to see your team fly up close so often. I'll be front row for all of your exploits."
>"Heh, yeah. Try to hold back your obvious favoritism though. No one could blame you, of course, but it'd be bad for morale."
"Okay, okay, lets try to focus Rainbow Dash. We've gotten sidetracked, but we still have to find that Castle."
>"Oh yeah, I almost forgot. When I freaked out and went all around trying to find you I spotted it."
"You what?"
>"Yeah, it's over this way. You can see it after you get around that big shard. C'mon, I'll show you."
>Struck dumb for the umpteenth time by Dash's in-flight hyper observation you mutely follow along.
>Back to following the semi-transparent trail that only the two of you can see, you gently peel away from your current cloud of souls and around a large floating shard.
"Sweet Celestia!"
>"I know, right?"
>Far off in the distance you can clearly see the largest shard you've yet come across in the expanse of Erebus.
>The sheer size of the thing makes judging its exact distance a difficult prospect.
>And high atop the angular monolith sits a carved (or maybe grown?) castle whose design looks like it came from King Sombra's most lascivious dreams.
>Edges, spikes, spires, spindles, facets, towers, bridges, the building is a testament to the concept of dangerously sharp.
>"Get down here, quick!"
>>27669229
>You snap your jaw shut as you see the Rainbow nightlight speed down to stop behind a bit of jutting crystal on the nearby shard.
>She becomes recognizable again as she tosses back her hood and motions you with her hoof.
>You swiftly fly down next to her and mimic her hood removal with a questioning glance.
>"Keep low. I saw something bright moving around out there."
>You nod and sling your body low to peek out from behind your cover.
>Sure enough, four bright lights shine outside the castle's sinister parapets.
>As you watch they float slowly in a circle before breaking away and streaking off in different directions.
>Thankfully none of them head your way.
>You let out the breath that you hadn't realized you were holding and hear Rainbow do the same.
>"Whew, where do you think they're going?"
"Probably to act as psychopomps and collect souls according to their contractual domains."
>Rainbow clears her throat slightly and you suppress a sigh.
"Each of the Furies should be corralling souls to take to their proper place in the underworld."
>"Oh. Hey, wait. Does that mean that they wont be back for a while?"
"You're right! This may be our best chance to get inside and find the Oracle!"
>"What're we waiting for?"
>Rainbow slaps her hood over her face and shoots off into the distance. You're forced to follow suit or be left behind.
"Slow down, Rainbow!"
>You hiss the reprimand as loudly as you dare.
>Rainbow immediately drops her speed and the colorful blaze behind her fades from view.
>"Sorry...Ugh! I Hate this!"
>You're still approaching pretty rapidly, but some amount of haste is appropriate since you don't know when your hosts will return.
>At least Rainbow is taking a circuitous route around and over the nearby shards surrounding your destination.
>As you close in and begin to get better glimpses of the enormous castle shard you notice what looks like a fine mist surrounding it on all sides.
>>27669251
>It looks like it may be some sort of magical defense, but its hard to say since there are a few clouds of circling souls even here. They're flying into and out of it quickly with no seeming difficulty.
>Dash whispers something back to you that sounds like some sort of military tactics reference, but you are focused on the strange mist.
"Just give me a second. I need to check exactly what this is..."
>You come to a gentle hover and power up a pulse of unbound magic energy.
>Dash whips off around the side of a nearby shard. Probably acting as a watchpony. She's good at that kind of thing.
>You let the burst of magic loose at the mist and attune your sensitive horn to catch the parts that reverberate back.
>Sort of like a magic sonar, this technique allows a Very knowledgable mage to understand something magical without disturbing it.
>The soft waves of lavender light wash outward and begin to return.
>Confirming your visual appraisal, the mist appears to be a physical fog, but it's tinged with complex patterns of dark magic that flows and ripples.
>The sensation tickles something in your memory, and you try digging for it with zeal.
>"NOW!"
>A seven colored streak of light explodes past you and into the mist barrier causing it to cascade and ripple before beginning to violently contract around the invader.
"RAINBOW DASH!"
>"Wha...? Twilight! Why didn't you...ack! Get off me! HELP!"
>The memory slides into place as your wings beat frantically and all too slowly to get you to your friend for the second time in recent memory.
>Light flares around your horn as you try to call up everything you can remember about combating dark magic.
>You know this magic now. He had to have learned it somewhere. You'd just thought of him a few minutes ago.
>Sombra.
>You have to save Rainbow Dash.
More to come. Thanks for reading. Sorry for the cliffhanger. It was necessary, swearsie realsies. Comments and criticism are appreciated as always.
>>27667580
>The next frantic kick is caught by ready hands and you throw his legs to one side, falling and pinning them to the ground with a knee.
>You wind up and deliver a heavy blow past his defensive fore hooves, straight into his exposed underbelly.
>A satisfying thud echoes through the forest and he clutches his gut in agony. He couldn’t cry for help because he was still out of breath from his first impact.
>You had felt anger like this before, but never really had an excuse to act upon it. The fact that he violated yours and Dash’s special moment made you incredibly mad. Not to mention how many times he watched her in the shower or whatever without her knowing it.
>Everyone is going to know this dude is a pervert by the time you’re finished.
>You wrap a hand around his muzzle, squeezing his jaws together with painful force, before punching him straight on the nose with an audible pop.
>You reel your hand back, shaking it painfully.
>Bone on bone contact was never painless, especially for the one getting punched in the face.
>His nose, presumably broken, immediately gushed blood.
>He manages to find some air left in his lungs to let out a yelp.
>”AAH!”
>His fore hooves immediately shoot to his face to cover his nose, and you weren’t punching through those.
>You reel back and bring an elbow across his cowered form. It drove his own hooves into his face with tremendous force, exacerbating the bleeding.
>Finally realizing he couldn’t mitigate any of his pain defensively, he switches tactics and begins flailing and swinging his hooves in a panic.
>Pegasi were very strong for their size, but Zephyr hadn’t been working out with the most athletic mare in Equestria.
>And Zephyr wasn’t a predator.
>You may have been breed into civilization over thousands of years, but you still had the innate appetite for provoked violence that ponies lacked.
>You catch his fore hooves and pin them to his own chest before landing blow after blow to his face.
>>27669562
My boner remains and has only achieved its second form. Kill dat foo.
>>27669649
Whoa. Tried to put an emoji in my name and got a trip. Weird.
>>27669562
>You avoided knockout points. You wanted him to feel everything.
>Finally coming to his senses and regaining his breath, he reaches up and bites down on your hand holding his hooves.
>That was easily solved by pushing his broken nose back with an open palm.
>”GAAAAAH!”
>You’re about to shift your attention back to his soft stomach when he throws his fore legs up.
>”OK! STOP STOP!”
>You relent your assault when he surrenders, but you still keep his hind legs pinned.
>His hooves move to hold his nose, and he chokes on a bit of blood before spitting it out.
>He catches your enraged eyes before looking away.
>”I’m sorry ok! I won’t do it again!”
>That’s it?
>Your hand is instantly around his throat in a vice grip.
>He scrapes pointlessly at them, without fingers it was difficult to get under your hold.
>You can hear a strained inhale before you correct your mistake, cutting off what was left of his esophageal passage.
>His eyes are open wide in pure shock, he’d never experienced another creature interfering with his crucial life processes before.
>You lean closer to him until you lock eyes.
“If I see you anywhere within her line of sight ever again, I will tear your throat right out of your neck. Do you understand me.”
>Realizing his life might very well depend on a timely answer. He nods his head.
>Your iron grasp releases and he sucks in a big breath before wheezing it out.
>Figuring you got your point across. You pick yourself up and return to the shocked mare sitting ten yards behind you.
>Part of you felt good doing that. But another part hated yourself for doing that in front of her.
>>27668495
Ain't that the truth.
>>27668991
There are plenty of others, the CMC members for one hoofbump each other quite a bit. The first hoofbump in the show is between Pinkie and Rarity. I might move on to those next.
>>27668360
https://youtu.be/teOanXkg8jI
There's the first attempt, I rushed it a bit since I'm heading to sleep but let me know what you think. Any clips you want lengthened or shortened and the like or just feedback, I'd like to hear it
>>27669658
Presumably the ASCII text that replaced it started with a parentheses and two hashtags.
>>27669687
The maidens's honor has been withheld!
>>27668360
Pmv would be righteous. I like it a lot as it is though.
>>27669687
>You weren’t sure how she’d take it, you’d talked to her about hunting and other human endeavors before, but she’d never really seen you be violent.
>Above all, you feared she would feel afraid of you, or think you were some predatory monster.
>To your surprise she takes off in a wobbly sprint.
>You look down at your hands and see that they’re a bit bloody. You didn’t want her to have to see that.
>You make an effort to roll them into your shirt…which also had a few specks of blood on it.
>It wasn’t quite a murder scene, but the closer she got the more guilty you felt.
>Then, she surprised you.
>She slows down before hugging around your legs.
>A bit of relief washes over you until you realize she hasn’t seen your hands yet.
>She peeks her head out from around your waist and spots a recovering Zephyr lying in a small pile of his own feathers and hair.
>She steps past you and flares her wings in an attempt to shield you.
>She falls into an aggressive athletic stance and growls.
>”Get lost already! Can’t you see we’ve had enough!”
>We. She said we.
>That simple word hit you like a pile of bricks.
>In that moment, it seemed to embody your favorite part of her as a pony.
>Her loyalty.
>Even after the really weird and awkward past few days, even in the surprise revelation about her stalker and subsequent beatdown, even though you were a lone creature from another world who had very little to offer her overall…she never once considered leaving your side.
>>27669807
>Her angry gaze holds until he shamefully limps into a clearing a short distance away and takes off.
>She follows him until his form is lost behind the trees before turning to you.
>Her expression goes from angry to fearful in a second.
>”Dude you okay?”
>Her wings switch from the deterrence role to a caressing one.
“I’m fine…”
>You reply in a thoughtful daze as you pull your hands from your shirt.
>She spots the damage immediately.
>”Anon you’re hurt!”
>She stands up on her rear legs and gently takes your hands in her hooves. Her wings wrap around your back protectively.
>She inspects the minor cuts and abrasions before visually checking the rest of your body for injuries.
>Her face was stricken with pain…almost like her puppy just died.
>Her eyes return to your hands. She holds them against the soft fur of her chest before swiveling her head to your surroundings.
>The fine fuzz and warmth of her chest adds a level of comfort to your stinging appendages, but it didn't fix it.
>You knew she was looking for something to wrap them with.
“Dash…”
>She stops her panicked searching and looks up at you.
“…I’m fine, let’s just get back to the apartment.”
>Your comment seems to make her concern worse.
>”B-but you’re in pain.”
>She sniffles a bit and her eyes well up.
>Damn she was actually crying…over you.
>>27669932
>Just as you think you’re heart is going to stop, she spots something out of the corner of her eye.
>”W-wait here big guy I’ll be back in a snap.”
>She gently releases your hands and takes off flying into the distance.
>A moment later she returns with a leafy branch in her teeth. How she spotted it in the evening light, you have no idea.
>She drops it into her hoof. She looks much better now, whatever her plan was, she knew it was going to work.
“Ok I need you to wipe the dirt off with your shirt and hold them out.”
>You resist the urge to say ‘yes ma’am,’ you didn’t think whatever she was doing was going to help much, but you also didn’t want to be patronizing.
>You didn’t want to embarrass your mare for trying to help you. It was actually kinda nice to see her this concerned.
“Ok.”
>You do as she asks.
>Then you watch with growing interest as she does something unexpected.
>She eats the leaves off one side of the branch.
>They’re small, like fern leaves, so she can fit a lot in her mouth.
>She chews them thoroughly but doesn’t swallow anything.
>She walks up to you and stands on her hind legs again to reach your outstretched hands.
>Her eyes inspect the cuts, trying to find all of the sources of pain.
>After a few more chews, she leans over and spits out a glob of the green mush onto your skin and rubs it around slowly with the tip of her hoof.
>It stings at first and makes you draw your breath.
>She makes sure to rub the slob into each cut and over every abrasion, spitting out more where necessary.
>You almost question the sanitation aspect of it all, but you figure she knows what she’s doing.
>>27670030
>You realize she does know what she’s doing when the pain starts to decline. Then it disappears completely.
>You inspect your hand and see that even the redness and swelling around the cuts has all but disappeared as well.
>It was like magic.
>The same process gets repeated with your other hand, and when she’s satisfied, she spits out the remainder into the grass next to you.
>”Bleh! That stuff is bitter!”
”Uhm, Dash. What just happened?”
>She looks up at you like she’s surprised you asked that question.
>”Oh, I made a salve with that…uh…plant. It numbs the pain and cleans the cuts!”
>She looks so proud of herself.
“Well, they definitely feel better…”
>She just beams at you.
>You decide not to ask her if she’s sure it’s the right plant. That would ruin her pride.
>You were sure you weren’t going to die though. You trusted Dash.
“Wow…I never thought you could do that, it feels amazing!”
>She blushes lightly, happy for the opportunity to take care of her stallion.
>”We should probably head back now.”
>You look at the almost dark skies.
“Yeah…”
>You look at your salved-up hands.
“…you can ride on my back if you want.”
>Remembering her orgasm induced handicap, her blush deepens.
>”I should be fine now, I just got a bit warmed up.”
>You smile.
“Ok Dash.”
>You start the walk back to the apartment and she explains to you how Fluttershy taught her about the salve.
>By the time you reach your front door, it’s already dark and she still hasn’t manage to walk normally for more than a few steps at a time.
>>27670066
This is one of the best Dash stories I've ever read. When you finish this you should write one about an overly edgy Anon who goes to Equestria and hates everyone there and Dash still tries to hook up with him
>>27670066
Yus
>>27668360
>>27669700
The sound doesn't really add that much to it, the webm without sound was already perfect for what it was. Although the YT version looks better thanks to the HD, so it's appreciated. Great work, Anon!
Also, I'm liking the PMV idea, but I reckon finding some music easy to sync with all those bumps could be extremely difficult. I don't know.
>>27670066
Please tell me dash's friends learn of their relationship at some point. Not enough stories do that imo.
>>27670066
That's so sweet, this is awesome
Bump for more green
>>27669700
>>27669793
>>27670555
Thanks for the responses, appreciate the opinions. A PMV's beyond what I know how to do though unfortunately.
What do you guys think of the length of the clips in the video? I thought making them longer so as to give them each a bit of context would be nice, but looking at it some of the clips seem a bit too long for what should be a "Hoofbump compilation". Don't know if that's just me though
>>27670066
Man after you finish this story you should rewrite this with Dash's POV.
Mobious is the best dashfag writefag we've had in years.
Cheers!
>>27671559
Not the requester, but I think both versions are great. The soundless version was more "dynamic", and the version with sound is better with that context, so I like them both. As for your concern, the only scene that I think that might be too long, if any, is that scene with Pinkie from Pinkie Pride, but it isn't a big deal. I'm a terrible critic though, so probably someone else can give you better advice.
>>27671965
Yes, and we also need a family-friendly version, a politically correct version, a CYOA version, a sing-along version, and all combinations thereof.
>>27670066
truly dash is a fine waifu
I need diz pone like water needs rain and flowers need the Bs and the Cs. I want her to be my luv filly, so I can pet her and spank her when she iz bad, because she wud be so bad with me, I insist. I share my groin urges with pleazure for her ponut. Dash you get big kiss and much bum play from my girly fingers. Don't ever change, even if you need to. Luv, Crazy Olaf.
>>27665574
This is how I cuddle my Dash.
>>27673902
lik if u cry erry tim
Dashie rubs butter all over my naked body, I smear jam all over her equine form, and we roll around in a room full of Hovis brown sliced; all the while making mad passionate sandwiches.
>>27674060
New day, new fetish. Love this board.
>>27674151
...of course, with added dressing, and mayonnaise if you get my meaning.
I'd eat her pie.
>>27673915
This is how I cuddle mine.
Rainbow Dash always dresses in style.
...and in a slinky black dress, she is sex on wings. With the addition of seamed stockings, high hoofheels & lipstick, the sky's the limit.
>>27664715
>>27664797
>>27665574
>>27666451
>>27668748
Wow, thanks! I was running low on (You)s there for a while, so I'm glad you liked it. I'll be updating it every other day or so, so expect some more either tonight or tomorrow morning.
>>27669201
Awww yussss Rosen's still alive. Needed my awesome green fix for this week, good job Rosen.
>>27675090
Fauurrrkkk, trips are hard
>>27670395
Thanks! I'll think about it. The idea sounds cute, but I find it hard to write an abrasive personality for long.
>>27670801
There will be.
>>27671965
It's been bugging me because I couldn't figure out a good place to insert her perspective, so I just gave up. I might actually do this when I'm finished.
>>27670066
>Dash opens the door for you and flips the lights on before closing it behind you.
>You head over to the kitchen and go for the medical kit to get some bandaging for your hands, but she intercepts you.
>”I’ll get it stud.”
>Third time she’s used that…that was definitely a new nickname.
“Thanks, it’s…”
>”Gow ih!” She says through a mouthful of fabric.
>You forgot she knew her way around the house so well.
>She tosses the red bag on the counter and unzips it before sifting it for what you needed.
>Finding the white wrap, she bites one end and lets it unfurl.
>She goes to wrap your hands but stops when you speak up.
“Dash, I’d like to shower first, can we do this after?”
>Her eyes shoot to yours and she puts the gauze back on the counter.
>”Why? You smell fine?”
“Dash, I haven’t showered since this morning and I’ve been running around all day.”
>She looks a bit disappointed.
>”Oh, well if you want to I guess. Could’ve mentioned it a bit earlier though.”
>You let out a chuckle at her feistiness. You don’t want to touch her with your smothered hands, so you lean down and give her a peck on the top of her hair.
>She steps back and blushes slightly after you do it.
>God she was cute.
“Dash, we’re alone now for sure. You don’t have to worry about our little secret getting out.”
>She half-smiles at you before you step past her to move to the shower.
>Then you feel a hoof on your leg.
>>27669700
>>27672743
You think this fares any better or not? Any criticism is welcome really.
It's also worth mentioning I didn't include the wingbumps and a hoof-five sort of thing between Dash and Fluttershy in this video, but I'll be adding them in I think
https://youtu.be/sM2bBIOdHks
If you see ads, I swear I'm not after shekels, it's pic related
>>27675912
>”W-wait a sec anon.”
>You look down and see her move directly in front of you placing her nose to your crotch.
>She puts one hoof on your hip and touches her lips to your shorts fabric.
>It was still wet from her own cum.
>Your dick was now on FPCON Charlie—imminent threat of sexual activity anticipated.
>That correlated to a full hard-on.
>You step back until your butt hits the kitchen counter and you can’t move any farther.
>Her pointed muzzle follows you like a heat-seeking missile and gently bumps into your bulge when you hit the counter.
“W-w-whoa Dash!”
>She talks into your midsection.
>”Can’t expect you to undo buttons with hurt hands.”
>You weren’t expecting this, and you’re at a loss for what to do.
>Unable to manipulate the fabric with enough force, she pushes hard into your bulge to bring her teeth to bare on the edge of the fabric.
>The feeling is alien to you and a bit ticklish…and hot.
“Haha-ha w-hoah Dash, take it easy!”
>Finding the leverage she needs, she bites down on the fabric and pulls backwards.
>Your shorts come off your body a bit before the button gives way and pops through.
>Her muzzle goes straight back into your crotch. She puts both her hooves on your hips now and presses you against the counter.
>Then she starts digging around with her lips to find the zipper.
“D-Dash! Dash stop!”
>She snaps her head up, surprised at the objection.
“I think I got it from here…thank you.”
>She looks crestfallen at the turn off.
>Her previously happy form shrinks away from you, wondering what she did wrong. You can almost feel her disappointment.
>>27676283
>You’re heart was getting run through the gauntlet today.
“I’m sorry Dash, I just…can we take our time on this stuff? I want to savor it, not rush it, you know?”
>She seems to understand where you were coming from, but she still looked a bit deflated.
>”O-okay…sorry.”
>You kneel down to her level and move closer.
“Don’t be sorry, you did nothing wrong. I’ve known you as my best friend since forever ago, and I know that sometimes it’s best to slow down and enjoy things…”
>She puts a hoof on your chest.
>”But we can still enjoy things if we do it now!”
>Her voice aches with yearning and her eyes plead with you. You wanted nothing more than to make her yours right there on the kitchen floor…but she deserved better.
>”Is it something about me? Am I doing something wrong?”
>You reach up and hold her hoof against your chest. You can feel your own stomach aching through empathy with her anticipation.
“Rainbow Dash, there is nothing wrong with you. You’ve done every single thing right because you made me realize that I love you with all of my heart.”
>Her features begin to soften.
“And to set the record straight right now, I think you are by far the most attractive mare I’ve ever seen. I have absolutely no reservations about being with you in any way that you want. Your body turns me on like crazy and I would like nothing more right now than to breed you on the floor until you can’t walk straight for a week.”
>Well don’t torture her dumbass.
>A blush covers her face and her wings begin to unfurl as her jaw drops a bit.
“But…”
>They stop.
“I want to save it for a special moment when we can both enjoy each other to the fullest extent.”
>She audibly gulps before retracting her wings, albeit with a bit of effort.
>She nods in agreement.
>”Okay dude…b-but don’t keep me waiting too long!”
>She pokes your chest with a hoof.
>>27676439
dawwnow he has to give it to her for a full 24 hours straight
I got some green. It's based off our age old sentiment: "IWTCIRD"
>”Wait. You’re serious?”
“Yes.”
>You are Anon.
>And you want to cum inside Rainbow Dash.
>The prismatic Pegasus had been harassing you for the past few months.
>After a while she’d started asking you for “favors.”
>Most of the favors consisted of “eat me out or I’ll make it rain on you for a week”
>You weren’t quite sure why she’d singled you out. After all you hadn’t really done anything to her, but for some reason she always got her jollies off by giving you a hard time.
>But today you’d decided to get her back...sorta.
>You’d basically asked for a sexual favor in return when she came for her bi-weekly set of orgasms.
>”Okay...so why should I let you rut me? I can get off just fine with your face.”
“Uhhh...maybe fucking will be better?”
>She raised an eyebrow at your flimsy argument.
>”What if it’s worse?”
“Umm...I don’t know? I’ll owe you?”
>She laughed at that
>”Wow you’ll owe me? I hope you get that I can already take whatever I want from you.”
>Well that was true. No one exactly stopped her.
>Ponyville hadn’t taken kindly to the big monster that lived in the abandoned house…
>In public, Dash had done her best to keep you away from most of the ponies, and as a result she was seen kind of as your keeper and a bit of a hero.
>Unfortunately they weren’t aware of what went on behind closed doors.
>Not as if anyone would believe you if you got the chance to talk to them anyways.
“Come on. I always do what you tell me. Why can’t I have this?”
>”Hey. You should be thankful. I get all your food, clothes and anything else you need. I deserve some recognition.”
“Yeah you do all of that after taking all my cash! And you don’t even give me the change! Do you know how hard Zecora works me for that money? Groceries don’t cost an entire week’s worth of pay!”
>>27676764
>Dash frowned at you.
>”Fine. I’ll let you cum in me.”
>Really? It’d worked? Just like that?
“Oh...w-well okay then...let’s do it.”
>She raised a hoof and pointed at your house.
>”Get inside. And loose the pants.”
>Only Dash could find a way to make sex sound like a chore.
“Right!”
>Turning around you marched inside.
>Once inside you quickly made your way to the couch, dropping your pants and shoes at the door.
>Dash trotted in behind you and kicked the door closed behind her.
>Plopping down on the couch you waited for your next set of instructions.
>As you waited you started to wonder...why had she suddenly agreed?
>There had to be some kind of catch…
>Oh god she wasn’t gonna just kick you in the balls and run away was she?
>Despite verbally abusing you, taking your money and playing pranks she’d never physically hurt you.
>This could be some sick segway into that….
>>27676771
>You stared as she trotted in front of the couch and scrutinized your manhood.
>Fuck this was a bad idea from the start.
>Time to back out.
“Uh...you know what Dash, on second thought I think I’m fine. Forget it.”
>”Forget what?”
“The whole cumming inside you thing. It was just a joke. Haha…You don’t really have to do it.”
>She raised an eyebrow at that.
>”You think I’ll just let you go?”
>Oh god….what is she gonna do to you?
“I thought you didn’t want to do this…”
>She scoffed at you
>”Oooo look at me. I don’t wanna fuck an exotic stallion. Jeez I wouldn’t be a mare if I didn’t go for this.”
>Is that supposed to be a compliment?
>Whatever. Considering it’s Dash it’s probably some kind of insult in disguise.
>She went back to staring at your manhood.
>After a few minutes she looked up at you.
>”Hey...why don’t you hurry up and pop a stiffy?”
>You tried your best to hold back a laugh.
>And failed miserably.
“Is that supposed to be dirty talk?”
>Her ears swiveled forward and she took a more aggressive stance.
>”How about you shut it with the wisecracks and do what I say?”
“Come on, Dash I don’t have anything to look at. How am I supposed to get in the mood?”
>Grumbling something about stallions being picky, she turned around and lifted her tail up, exposing her sex.
>To your surprise it was actually a bit moist.
>She then reached a hoof back and pulled one lip to the side, opening herself up.
>As you stared you felt a surge of blood to your dick.
>>27676779
>Dash then looked over her shoulder and spotted your “little friend” waking up.
>”Took you long enough, cunt licker.”
>Jeez. She’s amping up the verbal abuse today.
>Trotting over, she flapped her wings and propelled herself into the air.
>She then turned around and presented her hind quarters to you.
>”Come on. Get me a bit wetter.”
“Alright...”
>Leaning in you started by licking the outside of her pussy.
>To be perfectly honest...you didn’t mind servicing her.
>In fact you kinda enjoyed it.
>The only problem was once she’s finished, she always kicks you out of your room and takes a nap in your bed.
>and to top it off, she never returns the favor.
>>27676806
>As you continued to lick her lips, you started to feel moisture building up inside them.
>After about two minutes, you thrust your tongue inside.
>Dash gave a quiet “oh” as you started to push in and out of her, brushing against her clit every once in awhile.
>After spending so long eating her out you knew exactly how to make her tick.
>In fact you could make her cum in about a minute and seventeen seconds….
>Granted you only knew that because she timed you a few weeks ago.
>Deciding to speed things up you did what you considered a bold move, and grabbed her flanks.
>Then, you stopped licking and wrapped your lips around her clit and began sucking.
>The sudden burst of pleasure caused Dash to flap her wings erratically, and force herself back on your face.
>Crap...you maaay have overdone it.
>Deciding that it may be best to stop, you let go of Dashie’s butt, and stopped your ministrations.
>The prismatic pony sighed and slowly lowered herself into your lap, pinning your boner between her butt and your pelvis.
>Then she leaned back into your chest, and closed her eyes.
>She was breathing heavily...like..
“Dash! I thought you were gonna help me cum, not the other way around. “
>She opened one eye and looked up at you.
>”No. I’m not helping you cum. I’m just gonna let you cum inside me.”
>What the hell does that mean?
>>27676813
>Getting back to her hooves, she looked under her at your boner, which at this point could probably cut stone.
>”Oh nice! It’s ready!”
“Ready? Dash my dick isn’t a hot pocket.”
>”Your dick is whatever I want it to be. Now hold still.”
>Rainbow turned around so that she was facing you.
>Then, reaching her forehoof down, she lined you up with her entrance, and unceremoniously sat on your boner.
>You let out a groan as her walls squeezed you.
>Dash grabbed your face and turned it to look at her.
>Staring you in the eyes she gave you a devilish smile.
>”This is what you wanted right?”
>Then she clenched.
>If you didn’t know any better you’d swear you wouldn’t be able to move inside her.
“Y-yes!”
>She smiled up at you and gave her wings an experimental flap.
>The flap caused her to bounce up and fall back down onto your lap.
>She did this several times, all the while staring at your face.
>Suddenly she stopped.
“H-hey! Why’d you-”
>Then she kissed you.
>You totally didn’t expect it...but you didn’t mind either.
>She wrapped her hooves around your neck and pulled you into it.
>In response, you wrapped your hands around her barrel, just under her wings and kissed her back.
>As the both of you explored each other’s mouths, you felt Rainbow grinding against you.
>After what felt like an eternity, the two of you finally broke off the make out session.
>>27676830
>You were still trying to catch your breath when Dash really decided to start letting loose.
>She planted her forehooves on your shoulders and began lifting and dropping herself on you.
>As she rode you, you heard her making quiet squeaking noises.
>Each time you exited her, the urge to just grab her and go to town till she couldn’t walk straight grew.
>She had put all her effort into going fast enough to keep things interesting, but slow enough for you to not quite get off.
>Finally she stopped and looked up at you.
>”What the hell Anon! Why haven’t you cum yet?”
>Wait...WHAT?
>Is this a test?
“Because you won’t let me!”
>”What do you mean I won’t let you! Any stallion would have finished by now!”
>You stared at her a moment.
“Do I look like a normal stallion to you?”
>She frowned.
>”Fine then.”
>Letting go of your shoulders, she grabbed your hands and guided them to her butt.
>”You do the work, wise guy.”
>Test or not, Dash had just given you the go ahead to do exactly what you wanted.
>Smiling, you lifted her up so that just your head was inside her snatch.
>Then you bucked your hips, pushing yourself inside her.
>After a few seconds of trying to find a comfortable pace, you began fucking her as hard as you could.
>With each thrust you felt yourself get closer and closer to the edge.
>Dash was clinging to your neck as you hammered her and with each smack she’d give a quite “Ah”
>>27676848
>Finally as you reached the edge, you gave a groan.
“Dash! I’m gonna cum!”
>True to your word you hilted yourself inside her, and sent a jet of cum into her pussy.
>Feeling the first jet Rainbow flapped her wings several time, as hard as she could, ripping herself from your grasp and pulling herself off of you.
>The sudden lack of stimulation caused the rest of your cum to dribble out in a pitiful stream.
>You looked up at Rainbow Dash.
>She had her usual evil grin on.
>The same one she wore when she swore at you, or took your money.
>She’d totally ruined your orgasm.
>Suddenly she burst out laughing.
>”Ahah-Wow, look at you, you’re a mess! Aww look your little dick’s still hard!”
>You sighed.
>So that was the catch.
>You get to cum inside her...but that doesn’t mean you actually get to have fun getting off.
>Finally calming down she landed in front of you.
>”So? You got to cum in me. And I will admit: you really are fun to rut.”
“Thanks...I guess.”
>”Awww why so down Nonny? You got what you wanted right?”
>You frowned at her.
“You couldn’t at least have let me actually get off?”
>”Nope!”
>And with that she turned tail and began casually gliding towards the door.
>Fucking Rainbow Dash.
Aaaand there. That's my little diddle about Anon having hate-sex with Rainbow Dash.
Continue?
>>27676881
Not a bad read. You can go places with this story. I say give it a go.
>>27676881
Unf. Hate sex is Muh fetish. Bretty good, but it doesn't really seem like the kinda thing to continue, you might wanna try something else.
>>27676439
Don’t worry Dash, the last thing I want to do is let you down.”
>You lean forward for a reconciliation kiss and she meets you halfway.
>Her tongue flashes inside of your mouth and swipes your teeth a few times before she pulls out.
>She lowers her head and pushes the top of it into your chest, afterwards readjusting to rub the top of her nose across your pectoral.
>You move to complete the awkward embrace but she pulls away with a frustrated huff and trots out of the kitchen.
>That mare was flustered.
>”I’ll start the shower dude.”
>Her behavior wasn’t making it any easier for you to hold back either.
>Your shorts were reaching their design limit.
>Your face flushes when you realize exactly how apparent the bulge was in your shorts.
>Yeah, she pretty much could see it all through the stretched fabric.
>It wasn’t like she hadn’t seen it before. You’ve changed clothes with her in the room before, even showered together once in the locker rooms.
>But the nature of your relationship at the time was much more platonic, and thus, she’d only seen it limp.
>You push yourself to your feet and your head swims a bit at the loss of blood flow.
>You stop by your dresser on the way to the bathroom and pick out a change of clothes.
>The sound of running water draws you to the shower.
>You enter the room and drop your clothes on the ground.
>Dash is leaning into the tub with one fore hoof in the water.
>Her rear end is sticking up and her tail is swishing side to side…almost enough to catch a glimpse of what it covered.
>Don’t think about it man.
>The water soon reaches a temperature to her liking and she pulls the valve to turn on the shower head.
>She spins around with a woosh and dries her damp hoof on a towel before laying it out on the ground.
>>27676929
>>27676910
Well the idea would be it would be semi-slice of life-y and just focus on the day to day of dealing with her.
Who knows, maybe she'll even end up liking Anon?
>>27663746
>You reach the front door first by far, leaving Anon in the dust.
>You slam through the door, rocketing yourself inside the house.
>You start to take off your winter gear, while Anon shows up at the door next.
"Finally! You're such a slow poke, Anon."
>"I was knee deep in snow! How fast am I supposed to be?"
"Hey man, don't be mad at me just because I'm faster than you. Look, I didn't even shake off the snow in your house this time!"
>Anon rolls his eyes at you.
>"How generous of you."
>Anon strips off all of his soaking wet winter gear before heading down the hall, in to the living room.
>Hoping he's going to the fireplace so you both can warm up, you tag along behind him.
>When you get there, to both of your disappointments, the fire had long since gone out from last night.
>You shiver a little bit, and you can slightly see your own breath in front of you.
"Aww man, I'm freezing! Could you start another fire?"
>Anon squats down and pokes at the ashes a bit.
>"I could, but it'd take a while, so it wont really help us much now."
"Uggghh, this sucks."
>Anon stands back up and looks puzzled for a moment, then out of no where, sprints up the stairs to his bed room.
>You go to follow him, but before you reach the stairs, Anon comes stomping back down them, with a huge blanket in tow.
"What's that fo-"
>Before you can even ask, Anon reaches down and lifts you off the steps, carrying you with him.
"H-hey! Lemme down you jerk!"
>He just smiles at you and holds you a bit tighter.
>"Jerk? Now you're just being nasty."
>You put up a small fight, but in the end, you let him carry you.
>You could never tell him, you'd probably die of embarrassment or something, but you actually kinda liked it a little when he did stuff like this.
>>27677104
>A really good weird though.
>You got this strange feeling deep in your stomach, like when ever you're out flying and you start free falling.
>What ever it was, you really liked it, so you really liked him.
>Maybe it was the long arms.
>As soon as he gets there, Anon plops down on his couch, with you still in tow.
>He sets you back down and stretches himself out across the couch, taking up the entire length.
>"Come 'ere Dash, I got an idea."
>Taking the cue, you hop up onto his chest, unsure of what he means.
>"Come on Dash, lemme get you warm."
>You lay down on his chest, and he guides your hind legs on either side of him.
>You place your forelegs on his chest, and lay your head down on top of them.
>"Well? You warm yet?"
>Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh, you don't think you've ever been this cozy before, except for maybe during last nights cuddling.
>He's soooo warm, and his chest is so soft.
"Well, you're alright, I guess."
>Damn it, Dash.
>"Thats all? In that case, I guess I'll have to up the ante a bit."
"Huh?"
>Anon grabs the big blanket he brought from upstairs, and drapes it over you.
>He tucks the edges tightly underneath you, completely wrapping you in it.
>You don't think you've ever been more comfy in your entire life.
>Completely betraying your earlier statement, you let out a huge sigh of comfort.
>Anon chuckles at you, and ruffles your hair.
>You rally want to glare at him and tell him to knock that off, but you cant find the energy to do so.
>Instead, you decide to just close your eyes, and try to fall asleep.
>Just when you feel yourself nodding off, Anon starts to shuffle around, waking you back up.
"Ugghh, Anon, I was almost asleep."
>You're just about to open your eyes to see what he's doing, when you feel his hand rest on top of your head.
>Before you can figure out what he's doing, Anon digs his hand into the top of your mane.
>>27676764
>hes a wimpy loser pushover
wow i havent seen this before
>>27677110
>Starting at the very top, he runs his hand all the way down to the end, before bringing it back up to the top and starting again.
>He uses his fingers to split up your mane, and run down each an every part of it.
>As much as you hate it, you're pretty much like putty right now.
>You love it when he pets your mane, especially with those weird finger-things.
>Just when you're really getting into it however, Anon retracts his hand from your head.
>You're just about to protest, when you feel a familiar hand snake up your head and start scratching from behind your ear.
>As hard as you try to hold it down, you cant help but letting out a few coos.
>As soon as you let one out, you can almost feel yourself burning red.
>"Well Dash, I didn't know you were such a sucker for having your ear scratched."
"I-I'm not, shut up!"
>"Sure, of course not. Do you want me to stop then?"
"No! Or, i mean, keep going, i-if you want to, thats all."
>Smooth.
>Anon doesn't seem to notice or even care, because he just keeps scratching.
>You and Anon lay there for what seemed like hours before the silence was broken.
>"So Dash, what was up with that thing in the cafe this morning?"
>You perk your head up to look at him.
"What do you mean?"
>"You know, when Mrs.Cake said that, about us being cute together."
"Oh yea dude, that was kinda weird, huh?"
>"Thats not what I mean Dash. It was kinda awkward, but you looked really embarrassed, like, mortified. And then you were in a super big hurry to leave."
>You get a bit red again just recalling the memory.
"Yea, it was a bit embarrassing, huh?"
>"Why though? It doesn't have to be embarrassing, you know. Almost every one falls in love sooner or later, its really not that big a deal."
"Oh, you're that sure I "love" you?"
>"Considering how you've been acting the last few days, yea, I'm like 75% sure."
>>27677123
"I don't really know Anon. I pick on Rarity every time she has a crush on some stallion, so it seems kinda weird for me to be the same way, you know? Plus, it just seems kinda... uncool."
>"Dash, someone's bound to find out eventually, we cant really keep something like this under wraps for long. Plus, there's really no reason to."
>Anon reaches foreword with his hand and cups the side of your muzzle.
>He gives you that trademark beaming smile of his, that you love so much.
>"Its alright to be in love every once in a while, you know."
>You chuckle at his joke, and lay your head back down on his chest.
"Still though, could you just like, not say anything? Just for now?"
>"Of course Dash, I'd never do something to embarrass you. Not on purpose, that is."
"Thanks dude, I appreciate it."
>You rest your head down and try to fall back asleep, but you couldn't stop thinking about what Anon said.
>Your friends were probably going to find out about all of this sooner or later.
>You are extremely close to them after all, you don't think there are really any secrets in between you.
>You're not even really sure how to go about telling them.
>Or maybe you should just act normal and let them find out on their own.
>But then they might think you were lying to them!
>Ugggh, why was all of this so complicated?
>You decide to put all of it out of your mind for now, and just focus on getting in a decent nap.
FIN
I
Nor is it?DUN DUN DUN
>>27676943
Needy and affectionate Dash is my favorite Dash.
>>27677017
Up to you bro. If you think you can make it interesting I'll board the train for a while.
>>27677104
This is cute as hell.
>>27677151
Mine too. The colored, anatomically correct version of that photo is my favorite Dash.
>>27676943
>”I still don’t think you smell ya know.”
“Yeah, but I got blood on me so…”
>”Not enough in my opinion.” She mumbles.
“What?”
>She looks up with a smile motions towards the tub.
>”Well there go hotshot! Uhh…it might be a bit on the warm side so just be careful.”
>You weren’t exactly sure what you did to deserve it, but she was taking really good care of you.
>This mare was a definite keeper.
“Wow, thanks.”
>She trots past you and bumps your leg with her rump before closing the door behind you.
>You take the moment of privacy to look at yourself in the mirror and catch your breath.
>You honestly looked a bit mangey after the scuffle, but she seemed to like it.
>Dash an you were an item now, you hadn’t admitted it to each other yet, but that didn’t make your affection any less real.
>In the two hours you’ve been intimate with her, she’s already proven to be a handful.
>Two handfuls at times.
>But it was thoroughly enjoyable…because you were in love.
>You smile at yourself in the mirror, things had turned out alright.
>Time to clean up for your mare.
>A few minutes later, you were thoroughly cleaned and dried.
>The water was a bit warm, but it didn’t bother you enough to change it.
>What did bother you was the soothing salve on your hands got washed off and the stinging began to return.
>You head back to the kitchen for the first aid kit.
>>27677627
>”Enjoy the shower?”
“Yeah… thanks, you really outdid yourself.”
>”Pffft! A mare of my caliber outdid herself by setting a shower?”
“Well when you put it that way…”
>”I’m just kidding dude! Whaddaya need the aid kit for?”
“The stuff you put on my hands washed off, I was just going to wrap them up before I hit the sack.”
>Concern returns to her face.
>”They still sting?”
“…well, a little.”
>She grabs the first aid kit and pushes you towards your couch.
>At this point you weren’t even thinking of arguing, just enjoying the ride.
>You sit down and she sits next to you.
>She takes your hands in her hooves and immediately begins licking them.
“Uhh…Dash what are you doing?”
>She pauses her ministrations for a moment.
>”What? Humans don’t lick their wounds?”
“Not really, and I wouldn’t go as far as to call these bloody knuckles wounds.”
>”Sure they are…just stop overthinking things and let me do it. I’ve lived here longer than you ya know.”
>That was true.
>She gets another lick in before seeing you were unconvinced. With a huff she adds.
>”It helps clean them so they don’t get infected smart one.”
>She obviously knew it all so you stop arguing and lean back into the couch.
“I’m all yours doc.”
>>27677104
Goddamn this is fucking awesome, I knew you should have been doing a long one instead of one shots.
>>27677656
>You focus on the feeling of her felt-like tongue debriding your damaged skin.
>Her nimble, warm muscle seems to caress each aching knuckle, form-fitting around the hills and valleys. It was surprisingly soothing, you could easily fall asleep to this.
>But you don’t, that would be rude.
>She works steadily and for a few minutes, the only sound that fills the room is the one made by her smacking, wet tongue.
>Whether it was psychological or medicinal, her spit worked its magic and the stinging subsided.
>It barely surprised you anymore. Everything else about this mare was perfect to you, why wouldn’t her saliva numb pain?
>She finishes by placing eight wet, puckered kisses on your knuckles.
>You wake yourself from your daze and look down to see her preparing the gauze.
>She wraps it around your hands like a boxer before tying it off in an impressive display of dexterity.
>”They comfortable?”
“Not too loose, not too tight.”
>You wiggle your fingers to emphasize her professional job.
“You missed your calling, should’ve been a doctor.”
>”Hah! Not likely! I just have a lot of experience because I getta lot a injuries during training.”
>You sit back and look at her with a smile.
>She returns your expression and you both hold it.
>Until it gets awkward.
>”Sooo…”
“I’m pretty tired.”
>”Me too.”
Church, you have inspired me to come the closest I have ever gotten to AnonxDash.
>You fly the last few agonizing feet remaining between you and your cloud cottage.
>Your wings feel like lead weights made of solid SORE.
>With one last flap and a grateful sigh you slump to your hooves and sink into the wonderfully soft clouds that make up your 'lawn'.
>This winter has been one for the record books.
>You don't wanna second guess the technicians in Cloudsdayle, but a solid week of storms, flurries, sleet, hail, and snow Snow SNOW would leave ANY pegasus worn out.
>Even the greatest flier ever given -(YAWN)- wings...
>All the other ponies in Ponyville have spent the week frolicking in your hard-made weather, and cozying up in their cottages sipping hot cider and chocolate. All while you've been busting your flank making it all happen.
>The others on the weather team also helped. A bit.
>You nose open your front door and stop in the front cloakroom to drop out of your lined vest and boots. At these temperatures even weather ponies need a little boost.
>You raise your bleary eyes and notice that you'd apparently forgotten to close the door to the inside.
"Great...just what I need right now. A frozen solid house..."
>You let another yawn tear free from your straining jaws and wipe a sleepy tear from your eye with a hoof.
"Whatever..."
>You trudge wearily into your front room and are almost knocked flat on your back by a wave of warmth and spicy smells.
"Huh-wha?"
>Your bone deep tiredness momentarily forgotten you walk into the room and look around in surprise.
>There's a three log fire roaring in your skystone hearth. The flames crackle cheerily and dance with warmth, leeching the ache from your overworked muscles.
>As you walk eagerly toward the hearth, something much more spellbinding catches your eye.
>Through the archway on your left you can see your dining room table practically groaning under the weight of hot, steaming full course meal.
>mfw the writefags are so fucking active I can't keep up
>>27677936
>Roasted kingshrooms in cranberry sauce. Poached asparagus with sunflower seeds and fried dandelion crisps. Grilled leek and pine nut soup garnished with almond cream.
>A torrent to rival the Rainbow Falls gushes through your mouth as your jaw hangs open in sheer awe.
>Then your eyes fall on the thick, folded parchment standing at the edge of the table.
>You force your stiff limbs to creak forward and grab the card. 'Rainbow Dash' is printed finely on the outside. You unfold it and begin to read.
>"Hey, Dash. I thought you'd be getting off soon and I wanted to make sure your place was warmed up for you by the time you got back."
>"Everyone knows how hard you've been working lately, and I thought you could use a pick me up."
>"I grabbed all the girls and we came up here and put together some stuff to ease you into your off time."
>"There's food on the table. (I'm starting to get good at this pony food) The fire's lit and burning strong, and there's a hot bath upstairs-"
>You immediately whip up the stairs as fast as your hooves can carry you.
>You throw open the bathroom door and slump to the floor overcome with emotion at the sight of the tub filled with bubbles and your rubber Tank toy billowing steam into the room.
>You look back down to the letter still clamped between your hooves as you drag yourself toward the awaiting nirvana.
>"We barely got it all done before the cloudwalking spell wore off, but we did it all. We cleaned the place up a bit too."
>The scented candles burning around the tub's edge lull you into soft trance as you begin to slide into the steaming hot water.
"OuaaAaauughhh...."
>>27677948
>With the last guttering spark of your wits you read the last of the letter.
>"I'll come visit you tomorrow afternoon once I can get the spell cast again, and you're likely to be awake."
>"Twilight's magic will keep everything just like we had it until you walk through the door, so enjoy."
>"You may not hear it much from other ponies, and I know you claim to hate hearing it from me, but I love you Dashie. You really are the best."
>"-Anon"
>What a sap.
>Still, he can be a good guy sometimes.
>You may just have to surprise him tomorrow.
>You close your eyes with a smirk and sink into the soothing bubbles and comforting weightless heat.
>If he keeps this up you may just end up keeping him around.
[End]
>>27677947
The best sort of problem.
>>27677960
FFFAAAAUUURRRKKKK
Damn, this is cute as hell. I was having kind of a shit day, so this was awesome to read. Good job Rosen.
>>27677104
one of the comfiest/cutest greens I've ever read. Something about snow and Dash, it's just too perfect.
>>27676439
I wonder how she'd react If I said to my girlfriend "I want to breed you".
>>27676881
This is how murder/suicides happen
>>27676117
Better. I wouldn't change anything else, actually. I've watched the Twilight version too, I'm surprised she has so few bumps, is Dash the most "bumper" pony?
>>27671965
>you are dash
>holy mother of fuck your gonna fuck dis ape!
>you fuck the ape.
>pedos watching you anon beats the shit out of him.
>so you spit magic leaf jizz on his hands.
>>27677104
I feel like a bit of conflict between Dash amd Anon might help the story along a bit, because right now it seems like theyre always on the same page. That being said, this is one of the best greens ITT, and I really love your characterization of Dash, you were always really good at that, so keep it going.
>>27678743
Thanks for watching, any thoughts on the Twilight one or is it fine?
Scootaloo is up there in terms of bumps, Dash and her have the most. The CMC alone have around 20 and Scootaloo has around 10 separate from that. Dash has around 27, 30 if you include the Wingbumps and that Hoof-five with Fluttershy.
Twilight has far less than I thought too, it's essentially a Sunshine, Sunshine compilation. What I'm thinking is I'll do one each for the Main 6 which are lengthier due to context and then do one for all the hoofbumps in the show which are shorter like in the WebM version. I don't know though.
And since this is on Youtube, if there are any clips from the show or bits of dialogue you guys want that are somehow not on Youtube already, let me know and I'll see if I can upload them there.
>>27677656
Dash is a very licky little pone.
>>27679978
It's part of the headcanon I have for the story, it will get explained eventually.
>>27677695
“I have a lot of spare room…you know, for an apartment.”
>”And my wings are a bit…tired, thanks to you.
>She blushes, but manages to keep eye contact.
“So…if you can’t fly, you’re free to spend the night here.”
>She notices your nervousness and decides to poke some fun.
>”There you go stud. That wasn’t so hard was it?”
“Heheh…yeah I guess.”
>She scoots a bit closer to you.
>You scratch the back of your head in embarrassment.
“Sorry I guess I’m just not used to this stuff…”
>She moves to put her nose against yours, looking deep into your eyes.
>”I’m not either.”
*smooch
>You don’t think you’ll ever be able to get enough of her.
>You pull her into your chest and she willingly complies, keeping the tip of her nose against yours the whole time.
>She snorts and giggles, blowing some hot air against your face.
>Her hind legs wrap around your midsection and her tail hangs straight down as you stand up.
>You carry her over to the bed and gently lay her backwards on the sheets.
>She looks completely exhausted, but stares over at you with hungry eyes as you take your socks and shirt off.
>You smile and place a hand on her hoof for reference before turning off the lamp and climbing in bed next to her.
>Your world goes dark and immediately after you hit the mattress you feel her snuggle up to your chest.
>She still hadn’t showered so her unique odor was fairly pungent.
>Her hair tickled your face as she turns to face you.
>>27680164
>Your hand finds the soft fur behind her ear and you begin scratching.
“Dash, I’ve been wondering…I’ve never seen you with a stallion before. Did you have any prior relationships?”
>She leans into your comforting scratching.
>”A few…but, none like this. I’ve never…gotten this far before.”
>Her scratchy voice cracks and you move a bit closer until your noses are touching.
>”H-how about you?”
”Same here. To be honest with you I’m flying blind right now.”
>”Heheh. Then we can fly together.”
>She moves to kiss the tip of your nose.
“You know, before today, I never thought you could be this sappy.”
>”I-I’m just…I’ve liked you for a while, and I thought…well I don’t know, I guess it just kinda happened.”
“I’m glad it did Dash.”
>You scratch her jawline with your thumb.
>”It did kinda surprise me when you went straight for the wing job though.”
>Wing job? Was that what it was called?
“You mean when I rubbed your wings, and you…”
>”Yeah. You didn’t know about those?”
>Your face heats up.
“No…I…thought that they weren’t that kind of sensitive.”
>”HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”
>She pokes your chest with a fore hoof.
>”Wait…hahah…wait, so you’re telling me you thought you were working out a cramp or something!”
“Yeah…I don’t know, I just didn’t think you would come onto me like that I guess.”
>”Me? Come on to you? Dude! You straight up tongue twisted with me and got me all turned on with your…uhh…yeah. Then you offered to rub one out for me! That’s exactly what you said”
>Come to think of it that was true.
Loving all the green in this thread
>>27680187
“Oh gosh Dash, I never thought of it that way, I mean…I figured it out about half way through, but…I’m sorry.”
>”Don’t apologize! I’m not complaining about it.”
>She almost sounds mad that you said sorry.
“Well…you did still come onto me.”
>”When? Name one time where I’ve done that.”
>She sounds so confident in the face of obvious defeat.
>Your heart raced at the thought of where you were going to take the conversation. You were lucky she couldn’t see your flushed, nervous features in the dark.
“When you…uh…came.”
>”What’s that supposed to…oh.”
>You hear her feathers brush against the sheets as her wings begin to flare with increased blood flow.
“Yeah…and it was quite a bit if you don’t mind me saying.”
>”Well I couldn’t help it! You were just so…gah! What’d you think was going to happen!”
>She was so cute when she got all angry.
>You can tell she’s propped herself up on the bed to get a height advantage. It subconsciously made her feel less vulnerable.
“Hahaha. Don’t worry Dash I’m not blaming you. I knew something like that was going to happen, I was just surprised that you…had that much in you.”
>Your words diffused her and she sunk back down into the mess of sheets, still keeping her distance.
>”Oh…well, it kinda surprised me too, but then again I’ve never really had a…g-guy make me c-cum before.”
“Any girls?”
>You add a brow wiggle she can’t see.
>She smacks your chest.
>”Shut up dude you know what I mean!”
“Just messing with you Dash. Don’t worry I think it’s kinda cool actually.”
>”C-cool?”
“Yeah of course! I’ve never really heard of that happening before on my world, except in like porn and stuff. I don’t know if it’s normal here, but you got some serious range on your spurt.”
>Your bodies heat up in response to your descriptive wording; your heart races, hoping you hadn’t taken it too far.
>>27680229
>”Y-yeah, of course! Would you expect anything less than the best from the Dash?”
>You feign amazement.
“Wow, I bagged the fastet flier and farthest cummer in all of Equestria!”
>She shuffles a bit to adjust around her slowly inflating wings.
>She was too flustered to recognize the sarcasm and it flies straight over her head.
>”I…yeah! I mean it’s not like I practice or anything, but I’m usually the best at most things!”
>This was too fun.
“I don’t know, I guess I always thought my cum shot pretty far, I never though that girls…or mares could do it too.”
>”What? You think you’re better than me?”
“Like I said, I don’t know. It’s not like I ever measured my own cumshot before.”
>”Mine shoots farther and you know it! You said yourself you were surprised!”
>Only your Rainbow Dash could turn splooge-shooting into a competition. It was pretty humorous actually.
>She wasn’t flustered by the sex talk as much as she was by the prospect of not being number one.
“Yeah, but only because I didn’t expect it. I always thought it just…dribbled out or something.”
>”I wasn’t even trying! I was just…uh…enjoying the…what you were doing! You kept me from cumming farther!”
>That was a stretch.
“Oh now it’s my fault? I gave you the orgasm in the first place!”
>”I didn’t know it was a competition! If I had I would’ve hooved myself off!”
“So you think you can come harder with your own hoof than with my nimble, dextrous fingers?
>She stutters a bit at the mental images you were planting in her head.
>”Well…y-yeah…a-as long as you stick to my wings…”
“Either way I could still come farther than you.”
>Now you were just stoking the fire to see what it would look like.
>”Nuh uh! Lets have a competition! Then we’ll see who’s really the best!”
>>27680246
>Wow a cumming competition. That’s definitely original.
“A cumshot measuring competition?”
>”Yeah, and it’ll be all official with rules and stuff so you won’t be able to make excuses when you lose!”
“Don’t you think we’re taking this thing a bit fast?”
>She remembers your earlier conversation and she snaps out of her competitive demeanor.
>”W-well you just said you didn’t want me to get you off earlier…you wanted to…save it for the right time. With the competition, we’d keep our hooves to ourselves.”
>What she said made sense. Why not have a little fun while you get to know her?
>You almost feel guilty for turning her down earlier, she still sounded a bit disappointed.
“I just wanted to wait a bit before we…do it, you know, to get to know each other better.”
>”Dude we’ve been best friends for a long time, we already know everything about each other, that’s why things went as fast as they did.”
>She hit the nail on the head with that one.
>”I just felt guilty that you rubbed me out and I wanted to return the favor is all.”
“I thought you were going for…you know…sex.”
>She pulls herself closer to your chest and licks your chin.
>”If you wanted to I would’ve let you…stud.”
>Her sultry voice was almost too much to bear.
>”But when i said, ‘don’t keep me waiting long’ I was talking about licking you off.”
>Your heart and junk twinges a bit at the thought.
>You wrap your arms around her fuzzy shoulders and she licks your chin again.
“Dash, I’ve never met a girl as caring as you are.”
>She shuffles awkwardly at the compliment.
>”I just…I’ve been waiting for this for a long time.”
>You felt guilty for never noticing before.
“It’s ok, we’re together now.”
>She starts shaking in your arms.
>You pull her close so she tucks her head into your chest and you kiss her ears.
>>27680254
>You hold her for a minute before you hear a sniffle.
>Was she crying?
>You muster the most compassionate voice you can.
“Dash, what’s wrong?”
>”I-I’ve w-wanted this s-so bad!” She manages between sobs.
>She’s openly crying now, you’ve never seen her cry like this before.
>You start massaging behind her ears to calm her down.
>Feeling her body rack with sobs makes you feel like crying.
>This was worse than getting kicked in the gut by Zephyr.
“Shh shh shh. Dash…I’m all yours, you don’t have to worry anymore…okay.”
>You grab her fore hoof and place it around your waist before going back to her ears.
“See, I’m right here, and I’m not going anywhere.”
>You hold her close while she rides out the tidal wave of emotion.
>She must have really liked you for a long time. The only other reason you could imagine her crying like this is if a friend or family member died or something.
>What she said before was right, you’d already known each other inside and out for at least a year. You were best friends. Now you were something more.
>But that didn’t mean you had to wipe the slate clean and start over.
>She’s still the same Dash you know and love, now you just get to see another side of her.
>You get to be closer than a simple friendship would allow.
>And that’s exactly what you wanted.
>The brunt of her crying is over, only the occasional sob rocked through your bodies in the darkness.
“Rainbow Dash. I meant what I said earlier in the park.”
>You pause a second to let her think.
“I love you.”
>Those three words make her body twitch with excitement.
>She moves up and you wipe the tears from her cheeks.
>She puts a hoof on the side of your face and presses her nose to your upper lip before sniffling.
>“I love you too.”
>>27677960
That was sweet.
>>27680267
This is really cute, and this >>27677104 takes the entire fucking cake. Stop it, my heart can't take anymore.
Damn mobius, you're on a roll.
Oh shit page 10
What are you doing on this page?
So much great green, thank you writefags!
>>27680825
>accidentally left Sage in the name field
Oops.
>>27676117
>>27678743
I know you said nothing else really needed to be changed but I couldn't really help myself.
I think this might be the final thing, but I'm still open to feedback so if you think this is actually worse, just let me know.
Sorry I just keep linking Youtube videos here
https://youtu.be/JiH0XmBmgHo
>>27680229
>I don’t know if it’s normal here, but you got some serious range on your spurt
HAH
>>27680267
Aww
>>27680267
>You pull her mouth against yours and hold the kiss.
>You don’t pivot to deepen the kiss, you were both fully aware that doing something too drastic would lead you both down a path from which there was no return.
>Content with your simple kiss, you both smack back and forth with moist lips, enjoying every little sensation and taste.
>You carry on for a while until Dash yawns, blowing hot Dash-breath across your face.
>You snort a bit and she giggles.
>You kiss a few more times before she tucks her muzzle to the crook of your neck.
>Fingers still massaged behind her ears and you hear a content sigh.
>Her ears flicker across your jaw and her hooves gently knead your belly and arms as her system slowly winds down.
>Your hands find real estate on her lower back and shoulder, scratching lightly with your fingers.
>Nostrils take in the soothing scents of their partners and you are coaxed to sleep.
>Suddenly Dash’s belly gurgles lightly and she lets out a short burp.
>A smile crosses your face and you just hug her tighter.
>What a hell of a day.
>>27680999
Witnessed.
>>27681230
I didn't ask for these feels. Damn bruh, you're good. I'm jelly.
>>27680869
So this is like #2 but including wingbumps too, right? I like this version better, even though the title is less accurate now.
As for the other compilations, I don't think Rarity and Fluttershy's Pinkie Promise is a hoofbump (0:23 in Rarity's video, 0:14 in Fluttershy's). It just look like they are raising their hooves, they are drawn too close and the animators didn't bother to fix the scene. Other than that, I think all the videos are OK, I wouldn't change anything else.
>>27681230
Aww, cute
>>27681340
Yeah it's like #2 but with a few differences and those additions.
>they are drawn too close and the animators didn't bother to fix the scene
Yeah, that's something I was thinking too, but there's a distinct *clop* sound as they appear to touch hooves, so I decided to include it. If you still disagree I could pretty easily remove it desu
Thanks for watching them senpai, appreciate it
>>27681230
So cute, so comfy.
>>27681230
>You open your eyes to see your dimly lit ceiling.
>The first thing that you notice is that the soothing smell that coaxed you to sleep was still there, snuggled up on your chest.
>Her rhythmic breathing told you she was still in deep sleep.
>It takes you a moment to realize your covers are down at your feet.
>The warmth surrounding you was all thanks to your bed mate.
>At some point in the night, you shifted and she ended up laying across your chest, her wings spread over your body and thighs.
>One of her hind legs stuck out and hooked over yours
>You look down and steal a peak at the blue mass attached to you.
>Her eyelids fluttered in REM and her tail occasionally twitched and brushed across the matted sheets.
>Each exhale hot-blasted a small piece of sheet against the mattress, it popped back towards her nose upon inhale then repeated.
>You never thought it would be this interesting to watch a pony sleep.
>You look over at the clock and notice it reads close to 10 AM. You slept a lot longer than you normally did and had a good idea why.
>Luckily Dash had the weekend off and you didn’t have to wake her.
>Your hand slowly emerges from the sea of multicolored hair splayed out across your side.
>Careful not to wake her, you gently stroke the side of her exposed neck.
>She was facing away from you so you it made it a bit easier to go undetected.
>The pads of your fingers trace across her short fur, contouring along the skin underneath.
>You make your way from the base of her ear to the top of her shoulder, then repeat, careful to never stroke against the grain of her fur.
>You stroke a slightly different line each time, as if you’re plowing a field.
>The mare shuffled a bit and twitched her ear, subconsciously pleased by your touch.
>After a dozen or so strokes you feel something: a small bump under her hair.
>You graze over it again to narrow down the spot in her perfectly hued sea of fur.
>>27682126
your writing is going to kill me. I'm seriously just going to get nasal hemophilia and diabetes and die in my chair if I keep reading.continue please
>>27682157
That's why the word dashabetes is in the title
>>27682126
>you will never pet or cuddle a pone
>>27682126
A bump?
Investigate furtherturns out she was a Alicorn all along
>>27682318
No its her leftover testical
>>27682126
>It was really small, and if it wasn’t your sensitive fingertips brushing her, you would’ve easily missed it.
>Isolating the spot, you carefully spread her fur apart.
>Naked white skin stared back at you.
>It was a bit unusual seeing that color on her. Pegasi only shed hair or feathers when molting, and you hadn’t known Dash long enough to go experience that.
>Her blue fuzz so evenly covered her, you almost forgot it was fur.
>But there it was, white skin at your fingertips, plain as day.
>Your attention shifts to the slightly slick hair spanned between your index finger and thumb.
>Her hair was much a much deeper blue near the ends, and as it got closer to the follicle it got lighter and lighter in hue until it turned completely white a few millimeters from her skin.
>You do some math and figure the overlay of the two produced the azure color you came to love.
>Despite these interesting revelations, you didn’t find the one thing you were looking for.
>You make a dead reckoning and move up a bit on her neck, parting her fur again, this time revealing a small freckle.
>It was the diameter of a small pea and was slightly darker than the rest of her skin. Four wayward hairs sparsely populated the perfect blemish.
“Didn’t know you ponies had these.” You whisper to your unconscious companion.
>Upon closer inspection the hairs were in fact darker than their counterparts, they were just so thinly spaced you couldn’t see them in her smooth surface of fur.
>Your index finger snakes down and pokes it gently; the area turns whiter than its surroundings, then red from your pressure.
>It felt just like one of yours.
>>27682392
>The way you made connections in this alien world still boggled you.
>Withdrawing your finger, you smooth down her hair again and comb through it a few times with your fingernails to straighten it out.
>With all trace of your intrusion gone, you make a mental note of it’s location on her geography before leaning back into your pillow.
>Had to same some exploring for later.
>You bring your hand to your face and rub your fingers together, gliding them across an invisible sheen of Dash’s skin oil.
>It had been at least thirty-two hours since Dash had showered, so her fur wasn’t as fluffy as it normally was. Oil had greased it down a little, making it stick together in small clumps.
>It wasn’t enough to notice just by looking at it, but it sure felt different.
>Twilight told you that all pegasi produced a lot of body oil to keep their hair aerodynamic and feathers waterproof.
>Dash had told you the only pegasi who did that were the ‘wierdo-nature ponies’ that ‘smell like the backside of a manticore.’
>She told you she washed it sometimes twice a day like most pegasi so others wouldn’t turn a foul nose to her odor.
>The only time she didn’t was when she was preparing for a competition and she needed the extra streamlining.
>You bring your fingers to your nose and detect her spicy scent.
>Ponies were weird, you don’t really see why she needs to shower if that’s what’s concerning her.
>It actually smells kinda nice…wait. Didn’t she say something like that to you last night?
>Whatever. Too much thinking.
>Your fingers continue to gently stroke her until her heartbeat and breathing begin to lull you back to sleep.
>They finally come to rest on her frame, and you whisper a parting promise to your snoozing mare before you drift off.
“I’m going to find every one of those freckles…”
>>27681496
>If you still disagree I could pretty easily remove it
I still don't think it's a hoofbump, but better wait for a second opinion to break the tie before removing them.
>Thanks for watching them
Nah, thank you for doing them. I like this kind of compilations, so I'm glad you're doing them.
>>27682483
>You were running for your life.
>The forest path ahead was dark, but defined.
>Your legs sprinted over roots and rocks.
>One hand was up by your head to block wayward branches from putting out an eye.
>The other clutched a handgun.
>Your head was on a swivel, vigilant of the wolves that stalked you not far behind.
>The path straightened out and you relax your guard for a moment.
>A silent flash of glistening teeth launching out of the bushes to your right jolts you back to the moment as you fire the pistol at the attacker.
>He’s down in two shots, but you lose your balance and trip head over heels.
>Another wolf appears down the trail you came from, you level at him and fire.
>Nothing happens, your pistol stove piped after the last shot.
>You clear the jam quickly and put a bullet through the top of it’s head.
>Now, more wolves approached from all angles.
>You turned and fired at every one of them until only one remained.
>But the pistol was locked back on an empty chamber and you had no more ammo left.
>Your heart races as you see hunger flash through the creatures eyes. It lunges at you with a growl and you throw your arms up in defense.
>But instead of a crushing bite you feel a gentle nip.
>You lower your guard and it nuzzles your fingertips.
>What.
>In an instant you’re awake. You jerk your head up in a panic and catch Rainbow in the middle of…playing with your hands?
>She jumps at your sudden movement, but quickly freezes.
>She’s now laying on her back against across your chest.
>One of your hands had been placed on her belly and she was holding the other in her hooves, her muzzle was buried in your palm.
>Your eyes move up to meet hers and notice a blush form on her face.
>>27682953
“Dash. What’re you doing?” You say groggily.
>She’s obviously been caught with her hoof in the cookie jar, but she doesn’t release your appendage.
>”I…woke up a while ago and then your fingers started twitching…so, I…wanted to see how they worked.”
>You suddenly remember what happened in your dream and you become concerned.
“I didn’t flail around and hurt you did I?”
>She furrows her brow.
>”No…why would you?”
>Whew, that’s a relief.
“Weird dream is all.”
>She drops your hand to her chest and grins.
>”I’ll say dude! These little guys were trying to run a marathon or something!”
>Mhmm
“And, you thought you could get free belly rubs from it?”
>She looks guilty.
>”Ahh…well, that wasn’t exactly…”
“C’mere!”
>You launch up and wrap an arm around her rump and neck, pulling her closer to you.
>Your blank look morphs into a twisted grin.
“You’re gonna have to pay for those belly rubs Miss Dash!”
>She finally gets the gist of what you’re doing but it’s too late to escape.
>You bring your head into her belly and buzz your lips into the sensitive flesh.
>”BAWHAHAHAHAHA! STAAAP! STA-HAHAHAP!”
>Your head wiggles side to side, soaking her flexing abdominals with vibrations.
>She kicks wildly, but your’e too far past her defenses for her to leverage any strength.
>”HAHAHAHAHA! ANON! ANOOOOON! HAHA! STAAAAAAAP!”
>>27682981
>You pause for a second and look up at her.
>She’s trying to catch her breath and has the biggest playful smile you’ve ever seen.
>Her loving eyes warm you through and through.
>”Ano ha…Anon…stop! I’s not fair!”
>She moves her fore legs to the side of your head in an attempt to push you off.
>Your twisted grin just gets bigger.
“On the contrary my Dash…”
>”No no no no no no wait wait…”
“…I charge five seconds of tickling to rub a mares belly…”
>Her pleading falls on deaf ears.
>”…Anon Anon listen, hold on…”
“…five more seconds if the mare has wings…”
>”…please just…haha! Don’t! I’m not ready!…”
“…ten more seconds if she’s got beautiful eyes…”
>”…Anooooon! hahaha! I won’t do it again!…”
“…twenty more seconds if she’s got an adorable snout…”
>”…hahaha! I’m not..ahah! I’m not adorable! haha!…”
“…and an extra full minute if her name is Rainbow Dash…”
>…noooo! Anon! You can’t…hah! You can’t do that! Hahaha!”
>You wait for her to settle down and accept her fate.
>Her laughter had weakened her.
>She writhes and bucks, but your strategic position kept you firmly locked in place.
>She mikes one final push and grunt but doesn’t succeed in budging your head.
>Her hooves drop to her chest in defeat and her smiling eyes stare at you expectantly.
>Looks like she’s ready to pay up now.
“Because I love you I won’t charge interest.”
>You resume your belly tickling and struggle to contain the little fireball in your arms.
>>27682483
>>Twilight told you that all pegasi produced a lot of body oil to keep their hair aerodynamic and feathers waterproof.
>>Dash had told you the only pegasi who did that were the ‘wierdo-nature ponies’ that ‘smell like the backside of a manticore.’
Kek'd
>>27683047
It just keeps getting more adorable with every post.
Keep it up mobius
>>27682981
MY HEART
>>27682953
>>27682981
>>27683047
This sequence is pure gold. Well done, Mobius.
>>27682483
This utter amount of detail about dashes fur of all things is why this is my favorite fix of all time.
No one really goes into the kind of detail of how alien the ponies really are to us.
I hope to see more of this curiosity on dashes side too....
>>27683047
>”HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
>You lay her on her back and free your hands to attack other areas.
>They snake towards the pits of her forelegs, digging into the hot, sweaty fur underneath them.
>”NOOO! HAHA! NOT THERE! HAHAHA!”
>She wiggles her fore legs to try and throw you but has no luck.
>She resorts to clenching her pits shut in the hopes of immobilizing your hands.
>All it did was trap your wiggling fingers closer to her body.
>”HAHAHAHAHAHA ANON IT’S TOO MUCH!”
“About a minute to go.”
>You pull your hands from her heated pits and move them underneath her wings.
>”NNOOOOHOHOHO!”
>Your fingers start wiggling across the seldom-touched fur of her wing pits.
>She manages to trap one arm between her hind legs and pulls it from the battle.
>You put your mouth back on her belly to compensate.
>She explodes with laughter again and tries to roll out from under the torrent of tickles.
>You can’t contain her this time.
>She struggles to her feet before you can wrestle her back down.
>But you catch a single fore leg and halt her retreat.
>”Anon-ha! Lemme go!”
“No!”
>”I’m gonna get you back then!”
>She tackles your torso to the mattress and begins digging her muzzle into your neck, looking for her favorite ticklish spot.
>You feel her pinfeathers rake up your sides, attempting to infiltrate your armpits.
>Friction creates heat and sheets fly as you writhe around, neither allowing the other to gain the advantage.
>You finally manage to pin her back to the mattress and her forelegs above her head, coming to an impasse of strength as you put your nose on hers.
>You exchange hot breath at close range, you both could benefit from brushing your teeth.
>>27683519
“Stop struggling! You still owe me ten seconds!
>”Come and take ‘em hotshot!”
>Her more nimble form manages to get her hind legs on your abdomen and she pushes you off.
>She springs to her hooves in a flurry of white sheets with a confident grin.
>”Not so tough now are ya!”
>She starts walking towards you, now wise to all your tricks.
>Well…not all of them.
>In a risky gamble you dive for her foreleg and capture it.
>She springs her trap and digs her muzzle into your now exposed armpit, aligning her torso with yours.
>She purrs her lips and laughter racks your body.
“HAHAHAHAHAHA!”
>Attempting to move, you find that her hind legs are latched around with the force of a hungry alligator. One of her forelegs was wrapped over your shoulder, pulling herself in to chow down on your sensitive flesh.
>This was a critical situation, there wasn’t much you could do about it.
>Except that she seemed to forget about her other fore hoof.
>You shift control of her appendage to your unaffected hand and move the other to try and combat her wet muzzle.
“DAAAASH! HAHAHAHAHA!”
>You muster all your resolve and set your sights on your only chance of rescue.
>Fighting the laughter, you pull her hoof to your mouth and nibble on her soft under hoof.
>Her ministrations stop in an instant.
>You seize the moment and roll her over, clenching her fore hoof between your arms.
>”NOOOOO!”
>You start back nibbling and tickling on her frog. It was surprisingly clean for the pony equivalent of a foot.
>You succeed in immobilizing her before she can mount a counter attack.
>>27683534
>”HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!”
>She gasps for air in-between bouts of laughter.
>Her mistake. Shouldn’t have left a vulnerability exposed.
>She was out of commission now, just laying on her back, completely numbed by the sensation.
>It allowed your to climb out of your strategic position and lay next to her—as long as you kept constant pressure with your lips.
>”HAHAHAHA! ANON YOU SAID TEN HAHAHAHA! TEN SECONDS!”
>She’s right, but you’re going out with a finale.
>You snatch her bucking hind leg out of the air and shift to nibble on it, transferring control of her fore hoof to your fingers.
>”NOO-HAHAHA! IT HURTS! HAHAHAHA!”
>She stops bucking that leg out of fear of hitting you in the face.
>The courtesy isn’t lost on you and you buzz your lips in appreciation.
>A final massive wave of laughter racks her body, leaving her breathless.
>You relent, still keeping control of her two hooves.
>She looks over to you with a heavy-breathing grin and wild eyes.
>You smile smugly at her.
“Your bill has been paid in full Ma’am.”
>”*hugh…You promise?”
>Her eyes were wide, her body tense with anticipation.
“I promise.”
>She lets her guard down and rests her head on the mattress.
>She didn’t care that you still had two of her weak points under your control, you promised you wouldn’t tickle her any more and she believed you.
>You take the time to compare her hooves.
>Her rear hoof was slightly bigger with a deeper set frog, her fore hoof was narrow and had a puffy frog—probably for holding things.
>You let go of her hooves and they drop dead to the mattress.
DAMN MOBIUS
TAKE A BREATHER BEFORE YOU BURN YOURSELF OUT
>>27683553
I like these little moments with him just learning everything he can about her body.
>>27684196
I want tomake a family withRainbow Dash.
>>27684252
Same to be honest family
I finally got back into town and have real working internet celebratory storytime:
>Target aquired
>You move stealthily through the bushes on the outskirts of Sector Beta.
>No sentries are currently visible, but you know they're there.
>The doors leading to the underground entrance of the large red painted facility are suspiciously flung wide.
>No way you're falling for that.
>You tug gently on the side of the full body black spandex covering your lithe form to get the kinks out near your wings.
>Mission Start.
>You dive out from your cover and silently snap your wings open. You glide like a shadow mere inches off of the ground.
>Quicker than thought you tuck your wings back and roll behind the nutritional dispersal unit next to Animal Enclosure Alpha.
>You poke your head up, but then quickly duck back down as you catch a glimpse of a large bow bouncing above the fence across the enclosure.
>You KNEW they were there.
>You creep like a cat around the enclosure in the opposite direction and pop your head up again.
>You see the bow meet the top of a stetson close to where you were mere moments before.
>"Anything to report?"
>"Uhm, nothin' yet Sis. Ah'm gonna check 'round the back of the farmhouse again."
>"Ahffirmative. Keep yer guard up."
>The bow and the stetson move off toward the facility and Sector Foxtrot respectively.
"All too easy."
>>27684824
>You jump, tuck, roll, and dive away from the enclosure and shimmy underneath the, uh, Primary Chicken...no, Poultry Development Annex. Yeah.
>The next part's gonna be tricky.
>There's a large open space between your current hidey hole and the low window on the wall of the facility.
>You take a deep breath and shoot out into the open covering the distance as quickly as only you can...
-Clip Clop Clip Clop-
>Hoofsteps approaching fast! Heavy ones...you don't have time to reach the window!
>You stop near the outer wall and silently hop on your hooftips in frustration looking every which way for cover.
>Wait! There!
>Just as the hooves reach the near corner of the ba-er-facility, you squirt under a nearby brown box.
"I'm a GENIUS."
>The heavy hooves come into view through the hoof-slit on the box. The Red Commander.
>You hold your breath as the hooves stop right next to you.
>C'mon. Go ahead. Nothin' to see here...
>The hooves start to move again after a moment. Off around the other side of the facility.
>You wipe away some of the cold sweat seeping throught the cowl covering your mane and forehead.
>In one fluid motion you slip out from under the box, three feet to the side and then up and over the window sill.
>Buck yeah! You managed to minimize your visible profile as much as possible just like in the Daring Do books.
>The interior of the nefarious elixer production facility is dimly lit by a few hanging lamps. The smell of straw and dust lingers in the dry air.
>There. Across the main room in the back corner is the ground level entrance to the...the, uh...horseapples, what would A.K. Yearling call it?
>The Elixir Distillation Laboratory. Home of the infamous Dr. Jackhat!
>Your whole body quivers in anticipation of besting your greatest nemesis.
"The Elixir will be MINE! Your days of apple despotism are soon to end, Dr. Jackhat!"
>>27684841
>Whispering this pep talk gets your blood going, and you pick your way across the room on hooftip.
>Just as you're about to begin your way down the steps to the laboratory, you snatch your hoof back from the fine black string you almost didn't notice.
>Your eyes follow the string across the doorway, through an eyebolt and up to the roof of the facility where it's attatched to a large cluster of metal implements.
>That would've caused a huge racket if you'd tripped it. Nice try, Comrade Bowfilly. Better luck next time!
>After stepping over the tripwire, you roll quietly down the first few stairs and flip hooves up to squeeze in between the stair slats.
>You gently lower yourself into the welcoming shadows beneath the staircase.
>Your eyes adjust to the even dimmer light flowing from the singular lamp on the worktable across the way.
>A series of thumps fills the air as you watch Dr. Jackhat seal the lid onto the latest finished barrel of Elixer.
>Your heartbeat quickens and your mouth begins to salivate...at the thought of Victory, of course.
>"Whew, last one for today. Should be enough to be startin' with when we open the stand tomorrow. 'less that fool of a pony has 'em lined up 'round the town again."
>Your nemesis sighs and trots over to the ramp leading up and out to the open ground above.
>After a few moments you hear the large doors swing closed and a heavy padlock clunk into place between the handles.
>Every fiber of your being begs you to make your move, but you can't. Not yet. Gotta be patient.
>Your virtue is rewarded when only a few seconds later Comrade Bowfilly comes quickly down the stairs and starts to methodically check over the room.
>You flatten yourself on the ground as much as possible and watch her movements closely through almost closed eyelids.
>She'll never think to look over here. There's no physical cover, just the shadows collected beneath the staircase.
>>27684866
>Sure enough, she thoroughly checks around every nook and cranny formed by the objects in the room. Even under the table, in empty barrels, and even the ceiling.
>Heh, clever. But not clever enough!
>Finally she shrugs and trots back up the stairs followed by the sounds of the upper door closing and a bolt latch ramming home.
>Now. NOW is the time. Time to savor your sweet Sweet VICTORY!
>You stand and walk toward the elixer containment device. It's golden applewood exterior mutely reflecting the room's meager light in a sort of humble golden radience.
>You've waited so long. You reach your trembling hoof toward your prize and watch in frozen horror as a loop of rope falls around your hoof and cinches tight.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
>"GOTCHA YA THIEVIN' FLYPONY!"
>The room goes dark as somepony blows out the wick in the lamp behind you, and you get launched sideways as somepony (buck you Dr. Jackhat) tackles you from behind the nearby barrels.
>She must've come in while you were watching Comrade Bowfilly and hidden.
>Well, this is a bust. Still no reason for you to lose a wrestling match.
"YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"
>You bellow your war cry and thow yourself into the fray.
>War never changes.
FIN
>>27676881
I decided to show it from Dash's perspective this time.
>Be Anon
>And it’s finally the weekend
>After the events of last week you’re really looking forward to doing nothing
>Not that it really matters
>You can’t go out anywhere
>Most of the ponies are deathly afraid of you, so generally you just get kicked out of bars and stores
>Which means the cash that you don’t end up forking over to Dash for groceries and other necessities is essentially useless
>But hey at least you’ll be able to get a jump start on next week’s work
>You’re scaling up a sleeping potion to knock out a group of manticores.
>Zecora said they needed to be moved.
>The math was supposed to get pretty hairy due to the fact that reactants were consumed at varying rates.
>Giving a contented sigh you took a sip of your coffee and began reading through your reactants list.
>CRASH
>You gave a small start, nearly spilling the nectar of life in your hands
>Son of a bitch that was loud
>”Ohh Celestia, Somepony help!”
>Damn. That sounded like Rainbow.
>She probably crashed pretty hard.
>...well you could get up and do something about it
>Or you could just say fuck it.
>Yeah. Fuck it. Not your problem. One of her friends will handle it.
>>27684932
>Turning back to your work you began reading again
>”A-anon! Are you home?”
>You’re not listening.
>”Anon I need help! I can’t get up!”
>You’re still not listening.
>”Please!”
>FUCK.
>If you don’t do something you’ll feel like an asshole.
>And you hate feeling like an asshole.
“Yeah, hold on, I’m coming!”
>Getting out of your chair you made your way to the kitchen and grabbed a small first aid kit.
>Then you stalked over to the door
>Opening up you looked around and saw...a small crater?
>What the fuck? Did she hit the ground at mach 1 or something?
>Wait. Shit that’s actually possible!
>Hurtling down the stairs you approached the edge of the crater
>Peering into it you saw a bloodied Rainbow Dash at the bottom.
>She was holding a hoof to her thigh, sealing a pretty big gash
>Her wings seemed to have lost a few feathers, and her hooves and face were pretty cut up
>By the looks of it she was holding back tears
“Dash! Up here!”
>She looked up at you
>”You...you came?”
>Yeah you can’t believe it either.
>Carefully as you could, you hopped down into the crater
>Jeez. It was about as deep as your waist.
>That’s kind of impressive considering Rainbow’s size
>Kneeling down you opened up the small box and pulled out some gauze, alcohol and tape.
>>27684942
“Let me see the cut.”
>”I- I can’t! It’ll start bleeding again!”
“Yeah, and I’m gonna patch it up. Now move your hoof.”
>Nervously, Rainbow complied.
>True to her word, a small trickle of blood began flowing out.
>You deftly unscrewed the cap of the disinfectant and poured a bit on the gauze.
>Then you began wrapping it around her mutilated thigh
>As you worked Dash’s face contorted in pain, and the tears she was holding back actually started flowing
>Finally you taped it off, making sure to avoid sticking it to her fur
“Alright. Any other bad ones?”
>She shook her head.
“Can you fly?”
>”I..I don’t think so. My wings hurt if I open them.”
>Screwing the cap back on, you closed up the first aid kit, and tossed it out of the hole.
“Alright. Hold still then..”
>Reaching around her barrel, you pulled the prismatic pegasus close.
>Using your other hand you made sure to support her hind leg, and hoisted her up out of the small hole.
>Then you placed her on the grass, and jumped out yourself.
>Lifting her up once more you made your way back inside
>>27684950
>10 Minutes later
>Be Rainbow Dash.
>Celestia, this is by far the most embarrassing thing that’s ever happened to you.
>Not only did you crash, but you hurt yourself and had to ask Anon for help.
>ANON!
>Out of everypony on the planet why did it have to be him?
>God he’s just so...so...well you don’t even know!
>You just don’t like him!
>Well kinda.
>He does know how to give a good licking
>And he is taking care of you right now
>Oh and he lets you sleep in his bed
>Which is really comfy...
>But...you still don’t like him!
>His face just makes you wann-OW!
”Hey! Watch it with the burning stuff!”
>”Rainbow, I have to disinfect the cuts. Just deal with it. You’re a tough pony, right?”
>You ARE a tough pony.
>But that doesn’t mean you like getting hurt.
>As you watched him work you felt a mix of emotions build up in you
>A little bit of fear, mixed with anger.
>Lots of anger
>And maybe a bit of arousal?
>”There. You should be good. Staying off that hoof for a bit is a good idea. And I wouldn’t fly either. You probably wanna hit the hospital at some point when you’re feeling up to moving again.”
>Getting up he turned around and walked over to the small kitchen table.
>Plopping down in his chair he looked at you one more time
>”Tell me if you need something.”
>With that he turned and looked down at a bunch of papers
>Stretching your neck you tried to get a better look at what he was doing
>By the looks of it there was some math, and...a book titled “Reagents and Reactions” ?
>Was...he working?
>Who works on a Saturday?!
>And this wasn’t even logged time!
>Jeez what a nerd!
>>27684965
>...
>Okay you’re bored.
”Anon!”
>”Hm?”
“I’m bored!”
>He looked up from his papers towards you
>”Want a book?”
>A book?
>You...kinda didn’t feel like reading
“No, I wanna do something.”
>”’Do something.’ Right well when you figure out what, go ahead and tell me.”
>With that he turned back to his papers
>It’s like...like he’s ignoring you!
>He can’t do that!
>It's Anon! He’s not allowed to just ignore you!
>...
“My leg hurts.”
>”Want some ibuprofen?”
“Uh...no.”
>Damn.
>Oh maybe you could get him to carry you to the bedroom!
“I’m sleepy…”
>”There’s a pillow on the couch, Dash.”
“No! I can’t sleep here!”
>Anon sighed
>”Well where else are you supposed to sleep?”
“Your room.”
>He stared at you for a minute
>It honestly looked like he was getting kinda mad.
>”I’m not carrying you to my room. Sleep on the couch, Dash. I’m busy.”
>Wha...but he can’t do that!
“Will you please just do it? I can’t sleep here. Your couch sucks!”
>He just kept reading those stupid papers.
>>27684977
“Anon!”
>Silence.
“Are you even listening to me?”
>Huffing he turned to you
>”Yes! I’m listening! The entirety of Equestria is fucking listening! And I’m telling you to deal with it!”
“I...well. You’re a dick!”
>”I’m a dick!? Dammit Rainbow! I should have left you out there! I didn’t have to haul your ass out of that hole!”
>...
>Left you out there?
>In the hole…
>Bleeding.
>Alone.
>Sure you were surprised when he came out so quick, but he wouldn’t have just left you all alone right?
>He’d never just up and leave. He couldn’t! He had nowhere to go…
>You think...
“Wait..um. You wouldn’t really have done that. Right? Left me there?”
>Looking up from his work he turned and stared at you.
>Rolling his eyes he sighed
>”No, Dash, I probably wouldn’t have.”
>As you sat contemplating his response you felt a sort of empty pit growing in your stomach
>Each minute Anon spent staring at those papers made the pit grow larger and larger.
>And as it did, you felt yourself growing more and more frustrated.
>You weren’t quite sure why. You just knew you were mad.
>At Anon. And at those papers. And at everything here.
“Fine! Don’t talk to me! Like I care, you faggot!”
>Anon just turned a page in his book and kept reading
>Looking around the couch you noticed the pillow Anon mentioned.
>Grabbing it, you took aim and threw it at the stupid ape sitting across the room
>>27684991
>It smacked into the side of his head with a pathetic “pomf”
>Turning to you he raised an eyebrow
>”Need something?”
>Before you could respond you noticed something in the corner of your eye
>A projector!
>Oh yeah, you’d forgotten he’d asked you for one
“I-uh...wanna watch a movie.”
>”Which one?”
“I dunno. Something with action? Oh! Do you have any Daring Do?”
>”Yeah. You bought the box set with the rest of the money I gave you for the projector. Remember?”
>Whoops?
>Well DD is a classic. You have to have it.
“Great! Can you, ya know?”
>Anon got to his feet and began setting up the projector.
>And...for some reason that pit in your tummy seemed shrink.
>Finally finishing the setup, Anon closed the blinds and began making his way over to the table.
>But. No! He’s not gonna work!
“Anon!”
>”What?”
“You’re gonna watch with me.”
>”I need to get this done. Just watch on your own.”
>No! The papers aren’t gonna taking your Anon!
>Or...not your Anon, but the Anon.
>Just...him in a general sense!
>Yeah. That.
>Why are you justifying this to yourself?
“Can’t you do it tomorrow? Please!”
>He looked towards the papers and sighed.
>”Yeah. Fine.”
>Walking over, he went to sit in an armchair.
“Wait! Uh. You won’t be able to see from there. You should sit here.”
>>27684998
>Be Anon
>Goddamnit Dash is being annoying today
>”Wait! Uh. You won’t be able to see from there. You should sit here.”
>She gestured to the seat next to her.
>What the hell?
>Why can’t she just let you be and sulk in her corner?
>Might as well humor her, otherwise she’ll just pester you.
>And god forbid she start feeling better.
>Who knows what she might decide to do.
>Pacing over you sat down where she gestured.
>As you sat watching this movie for the...well who knows how manyth time, you noticed Rainbow staring at you with her usual look
>A mix of contempt, anger and detached interest
>...
>What did you even do?
>You patch her up, give her a place to relax for a while and she’s still giving you the stink eye
>And didn’t she wanna watch the movie?
“What happened to watching the movie, Dashie?”
>”Just..shut up!”
>Wow.
>Alrighty then.
>Looking back towards the screen you watched as Daring Do found a treasure map in a pawn shop.
>Honestly it would be pretty cool to go on an adventure.
>Maybe not one that dangerous but still…
>Glancing down you noticed Dash was still staring at you
>You could point it out again…
>Buuut it would probably just prompt her to yell at you again
>As you sat, you felt Rainbow shift and shimmy closer to you.
>After another minute or so, she pulled herself into your lap.
>...but y tho?
>Whatever. She’s happy, you’re tired and she’s got a fucked up leg
>You’ll let her have this
>Well it’s not like you don’t let her have anything but, whatever.
>>27685002
>Be Rainbow Dash
>That pit is gone now.
>And...you’re really warm
>Anon is warm.
>He smells like paper and ink and old books.
>This is nice.
>You don’t even care about the movie that much
>You’ve seen it like a thousand times anyways
>Looking at your ‘chair’ you noticed his hand.
>Hehe, that thing is so weird.
>But in a good way
>Like it’s fun to...uh...do stuff with.
>Reaching out your hoof you grabbed it
>Anon gave you a kinda freaked out look but other than that he didn’t stop you
>Bringing it up close to your face you took a long look at it
>The little digits coming off it looked like they had a little blood on em,
>Wait...that was probably yours.
>Jeez what happens if one of these gets hurt?
>Man it must be horrible!
>Pulling the thing close you gripped his ‘forearm’?
>Yeah that’s what he’d called it.
>As you held it, you felt Anon wiggle his fingers and...Oooh that felt nice!
>Leaning back into his chest...you felt an urge.
>He...he needed to hug you better!
>Gingerly moving your leg, you oriented yourself so that you could grab his other arm
>Reaching out, you took hold of it and maneuvered it so that laying on your tummy
>Taking the hint, Anon pressed you back into him
>And you felt fireworks go off in your chest
>Your face heated up and you gave a contented sigh.
>...you still don’t like him…
>Probably.
>>27685014
>Be Anon.
>This...actually wasn’t that bad.
>You basically spent the rest of the day watching stupid movies
>The two of you didn’t say all that much to each other.
>At one point Dash fell asleep.
>It was kinda cute
>Your pants have drool on them now…
>But still. It was cute.
>You wish she’d be like this more often.
>Oh well…
>Wishful thinking.
So there's that. Hope you guys like this segment.
>>27684932
'It' being the relationship.
It would be lame if I wrote the same sex scene from Dash's POV.
>>27685028
Fun stuff. Never thought of Dash as tsundere, but it's not bad. Thanks Anon.
>>27684885
Jesus Rosen, my sides.
>FIN
You thieving,talentedfuck.
>>27685147
Thought you'd like that. LOL
I'm curious, what's your guys' favorite dash-related song? My personal favorite hails from the days when I had gigs of pony music saved, and probably is one of the reasons she's my waifu today. The hard drive on which it was has since died, but it's still of youtube.
https://youtu.be/NYaQa0TpUNc
>>27686350
Would it be too obvious if I just said Loyalty? Because I'm saying Loyalty.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aaojFmFnNKE
But t-b-h I think even completely unrelated songs can be dash-related too if you listen to them the proper way.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3eT464L1YRA
>Baby, you're all that I want
>When you're lyin' here in my arms
>I'm findin' it hard to believe
>We're in heaven
>And love is all that I need
>And I found it there in your heart
>It isn't too hard to see
>We're in heaven
>>27687006
Same here. But unrealated song would be "Rainbow in the Dark"
>>27687582
WANT
>>27687596
I haven't heard Dio since forever, that was a good song.
>>27687006
exactly
I was listening to this song for nostalgia value and realized it worked for this thread.
https://youtu.be/VWSRtPTmRr4
bamp
>>27689628
>>27689615
I'll buy anything you want, Dashie.
>>27689910
Wake up, Dash, it's just a nightmare!
>>27690056
>Thank you, Nonny.
>>27689910
Jesus, that's fucked up. I get that DASH is tough and all, but it's im-fucking-possible that she ripped her own damn wing off, and doesn't have a single tear on her face, hell, she doesn't even really look like she's in pain at all. Fuck, that's badass. Kinda reminds me of when Raiden got his arm under a boulder and cut it off to free himself.
>>27690056
>Ow, my eye! What did you hit me for, you beetlebrain?
>>27690087
Why would she thank this 'Nonny' for giving her a shiner. And it's already starting to swell. This is not the Dash I know and love.
>>27690134
>>27690604
I DIDN'T HIT HER, YOU FREAKS. She's just blushing because she's embarrassed I woke her up from a nightmare like if she was a little girl.
>>27690752
This is the autism, of a Dashfag.
>>27690752
B-but just look at the first picture. It clearly shows otherwise. I know it can be really hard to wake Dashie up sometimes, but man, you do not punch her in the face.
>>27690752
>beating your waifu
Despicable, she's mine now.
>>27690604
Why are most of the abuse fetishists on this board Dashfags?
>>27690825
>>27690842
I'm mobilefagging, and the pic doesn't look at all like that here, but maybe I'm wrong. I can't delete it ("you cannot delete a post this old"). Now I feel bad. ;_;
>>27690879
That anon is just fucking with you, it's not a shiner. It's part of a whole huge image set, the mark is a blush, and she's rubbing her eye because she just woke up. Jesus, how can some people be so dense?
>>27690928
Thank you Anon, that's what I thought but without a better screen to check it myself I wasn't sure.
>>27683553
>She lays on her back, staring at you while she catches her breath.
>”I’m hungry.”
“Me too.”
>”You have some cereal or something?”
“Nope, all out.”
>”Nothing? No food at all?”
“Not unless you like raisins; gotta wait until the next paycheck.”
>”What the hay! You invite me over and don’t even have anything to eat!”
“You’re the one who ate my last granola bar Dash.”
>She thinks for a moment before moving over to you pressing her body against your side.
>She rests her muzzle on your shoulder and looks at you.
>”Well, then just…make more money or something.”
>You poke her nose with your finger.
*boop
>She scrunches it and and squints her eyes. Her mouth opens up reflexively.
*ACHOOOOO!
>She sneezes…right on your face.
>You wince and close your eyes as the aerosol blasts you. You blindly bring your hand up to wipe your eyes.
>”Heh sorry dude.”
>You open them to see a sheepish looking Dash with an apologetic smile.
“Now I know what that button does.” You return her smile.
>”Let’s go out, I’m buying.”
>You raise your eyebrows.
“Not like there’s much choice there.”
>”Be grateful I’m not leaving your butt here to starve.”
“Oh believe me I am.”
>She squints at your sarcastic tone.
“So is this a date Dash?”
>She blushes a bit and fondles your arm in her hooves.
>”A date?”
“Yeah. I mean we are kinda together now.”
>Her ears flop back and her eyes meet yours.
>”Y-yeah…we are.”
“So…you want to get off me now so I can get cleaned up?”
>Her blush deepens and she licks her lips.
>”You’re not going anywhere til’ ya kiss me.”
>Your playful smile returns.
“Make me.”
>>27691042
>Half an hour later you had both showered and cleaned up.
>Luckily you had a spare toothbrush on hand for her to use.
>It took you two thorough brushings to get the smell of your’s and Dash’s morning breath out of your mouth.
>You set a mental reminder to pick up more toothpaste when you get to town.
>The weather outside was nice as usual, and Dash trotted along in front of you, leading the way to the establishment of her choice.
>The bustle of the city went unnoticed as your eyes followed Rainbow’s Tail through the crowd.
>You walk into a building behind her and the waiter sits you two down at a family sized booth in the corner.
>You had recently been made aware of another luxury that had never occurred to you before.
>The realization hit you that mares could have attractive lines too.
>Of course, initially you had your kid in a candy shop moment; you couldn’t blame yourself, none of these mares wore any clothes.
>But as enthralled as you were, you lost the appetite for it quickly.
>It may have been due to your bias, but no mare seemed to be able to stack up to Dash.
>That wasn’t to say she had the biggest plot, because it was definitely on the leaner side.
>You just…had more of an appetite for her.
>”Whatcha gettin?
“Oh…uh…”
>You look at the menu in front of you and don’t immediately notice anything you like.
“…where are we at?”
>She looks at you like you’re stupid.
>”You mean you didn’t see ‘Haypatty Paradise’ in big red letters when we walked in?”
>You weren’t stupid, you just had a one track mind.
“I was…preoccupied.”
>With her butt.
>”Well you don’t need to know the name of a place to eat it’s food.”
“No you don’t, I guess I’ll…”
>”Howdy Rainbow, Anon! Whatcha doin in frilly joint like this?”
>You spin around and see Applejack and Rarity walking up behind you.
>>27691093
Oh my
>>27691093
things are happening
Boop
>>27691093
>”O-oh! Hey guys! haha, didn’t think you’d be here! Heh!”
>Dash was obviously less than thrilled to see them.
>”Oh of course darling! Today is the tenth anniversary of our weekly spa day and we thought it a marvelous idea to celebrate by stopping to dine here!”
>”You got that right Rarity! Ah never thought I’d take a likin’ to them pretty-fyin places, but ah just feel so refreshed after the spa, ah can’t wait for it errey week!”
>Dash makes no effort to contribute to the conversation, so you take up the slack for her.
“That’s great you two! It’s always good to set aside time for your friends.”
>”I see you and Rainbow seem to take that maxim to heart.”
>The last you heard, Dash wanted to keep your relationship under wraps, she was sensitive about that kinda stuff.
“Yeah, we always enjoy hanging out.”
>”Oh how nice! We rarely see Rainbow with company, especially when the weather is great for flying like it is today…Right Rainbow?”
>”O-oh y-yeah! You know me haha! I just looove practicing. Especially cuz I’m a Wonderbolt now! It’s just practice practice practice! Haha!”
>Applejack catches onto her nervous behavior.
>”Right…soo…whatcha doin’ here anon? Ah mean, no offense or nothin’ but you ain’t exactly the hayburger eating’ type.”
“No I don’t like those, but…”
>”Hey! Just cuz he’s an ahmivore doesn’t mean he’s a meat eating animal!”
>Dash was practically on the edge of her seat, she actually looked pretty angry.
>”Slow down there partner! Ah never said he was. Ah’m just sayin’ I didn’t think he’d like this place is all.”
>”Well he does! It has peanut butter and cranberry jam sandwiches which are his favorite!”
>It does? Nice!
>Applejack takes a step back with a confused look on her face, at a total loss for words.
>”Well Rainbow! There’s no need to get upset, dear Applejack is merely asking a question.”
>Dash finally catches herself.
>>27692632
Uh oh, I think they're onto you two.
Really enjoying this green
>>27692632
>”Sorry AJ, I just…uh…”
“…she’s been under a lot of stress since joining the Wonderbolts. She’s just too prideful to let anyone know, isn’t that right Dash…”
>You make eye contact and she picks up the story.
>”Oh dear, Rainbow why haven’t you told us? You know we’ll do anything to help.”
>”Shucks ah’m sorry. I didn’t know you were avin’ that hard uva time.”
>”Hehe, it’s ok guys, just part of being a Wonderbolt. I’ll get used to it.”
>That was kinda weird, she sounded really…defensive.
>She didn’t exactly look apologetic, but at least she wasn’t yelling anymore.
>”I’m sure you will darling. I’m sure you two won’t mind if we join you…seeing as you have the whole corner to yourselves.”
>Dash shuffles a bit.
>”Well, it was just the two…”
>”Yeehaw the day’s gettin’ better by tha minute! It’s been forever since we got to hang out!”
>”Umm…about that…”
>Dash looks at you pensively, you can tell she’s asking for your approval before she invites her friends.
>You wink at her and see her relax a bit.
>”…yeah, we’ve got room for two more.”
>Dash scoots over to sit next to you and bumps her rump against you behind the table.
>You glance down but she doesn’t make eye contact.
>A smallish unicorn mare finally swings by to take your drinks.
>”Good afternoon, what will you have to drink today?”
>She looks at you with a cold stare while she goes around the table.
>When it gets to your turn, she skips you and goes to Applejack.
>>27693675
>“Hey there, ah think ya skipped Anon over here.”
>”Oh…what does it want to…oopf!”
>Before she can finish her slur a fork launches across the table and bounces off her forehead.
>Dash is propped up on the table by her fore hooves. Her wings are threateningly half-folded and she has a look that could intimidate a hydra.
>”Rainbow! What’re ya doin!”
>You reach over and grab her shoulders, trying to coax her back into her seat.
>”He’s got a name you know!”
>Rarity uses her magic to hold her back by the tail. It doesn’t fare well against her strength.
>”Rainbow, darling stop! Calm down!”
>Dash points a hoof at the cowering form of the waiter.
>”APOLOGIZE TO HIM!”
>Everyone in the restaurant is looking at your table now.
“Dash!”
>She snaps her head to you in an instant, her demeanor completely changed.
“It’s okay, calm down.” You say in a calm voice.
>It looked like someone was twisting her insides with a red-hot poker.
>”No it’s not. You deserve better than this.”
“I know but she got the message.”
>She looks into your eyes to see if you had any reservations.
>If you’d given the word, she would’ve probably tore her head off.
>But you were feeling merciful. Your hands successfully guide her back into her seat next to you.
>The waitress scrambles to her hooves and mumbles and apology before turning tail.
>A blue aura surrounds her and holds her in place.
>”Waitress dear, I forget your name, if you do us the favor of sending another to attend to us we WON’T speak with your manager about your uncouth behavior.”
>She nods furiously before Rarity releases her and she trots off around the corner.
>>27693684
>The other customers, disappointed that it didn’t devolve into a full blown hoof fight, return to their usual banter and background noise returns.
>”You’re just going to her that…arrrgh!…just let her off like that!”
“Dash if Rarity didn’t cut the deal she did, there’s a chance we could get in trouble.”
>”Oh…”
>”Now howa bout y’all tell us what the hay that was ‘bout!”
>You weren’t sure your stress story would hold up this time.
>Dash fumbles her hooves and you place a hand on her leg invisibly under the table.
>She doesn’t acknowledge it openly, but you can tell she drew some courage from the gesture.
>”I’m…we’re…uhh…”
>Dash was blushing like mad.
>You wanted to help, but this needed to come from her.
>”…I love Anon.”
>Applejack’s eyes go wide and she leans back in her seat with a whistle. Rarity just nods.
>”Wheeeeeweeee! Ya told ‘em yet?”
>”What? Of course I told him…he’s right here!”
>”Ah mean of course he knows now, but did ya before…”
>”Yes! We spent all last night…”
>She stops mid-sentence, realizing the hole she dug herself into.
“She just wanted to spend the night because she couldn’t fly.”
>Oh shit.
>”Ahn why would er wings be tired?” She asks with a suggestive eyebrow wiggle.
>”Applejack dear, leave the two alone. It was quite obvious really, I’m surprised you can’t contain yourself.”
>Now it was Dash’s turn to look surprised.
>”You…knew?”
>”Oh for quite a while dear. You read like an open book.”
>>27693719
>You were a bit surprised too.
“It was really that obvious?”
>”Oh yes, right about when you started helping her with her airshow tricks.”
“…wow.”
>You look down at Dash and she still looks nervous as hell.
>Rarity moves to put a hoof on her shoulder.
>”It’s okay sweetie! Every pony falls in love eventually, but not all of them are quite as lucky as you are.”
>She looks at you and gives you a sultry wink.
>Oh…okay.
>Applejack recovers and chimes in.
>”Gosh Rainbow ah never thought ya were tha type, but if it wasn’t you, it woulda been some other mare…”
>Dash looks up at you with smiling eyes, her blush was fading.
>You weren’t used to all this attention.
“Well I’m the lucky one, Dash here is the national hero and Wonderbolt, I’m just a normal guy who wound up here by accident.”
>”Dude, don’t downplay yourself, you’re smarter than Twilight and almost as cool as me! That’s one in a million!”
>Getta room ya two!”
>Dash’s blush returns and so does yours.
>But you could tell she was relieved to get her secret off her chest.
>Your group got another waiter and you finished lunch without further incident.
>After your parting goodbyes, Dash leads the way back to your apartment.
“Dash, I’m glad you told your friends about us.”
>>27693723
>She slows down to trot next to you, leaning against your leg.
>”Yeah…I was nervous, but I think it was for the best.”
>You reach down and ruffle her hair.
>She just looks up and smiles.
>You expected something more violent.
“You just want to move your stuff into my apartment or something?” You ask sarcastically.
>”Probably.”
>Oh. That might be fun.
>She looks up at your before nuzzling your thigh.
>”Don’t forget we still have a bet on!”
“A bet on what?”
>”Our competition.”
>Competition? Oh the one you talked about last night.
>Your face goes red and you readjust your collar.
“O-oh, I don’t recall b-betting on that.”
>”No but we should.”
“Oh really?”
>You raise an eyebrow at her.
>Her face is pretty red too, but no pony was around and she wasn’t trying to look cool.
>”You wanna know why?’
>Your face gets redder as she flies up next to you.
>She stick her muzzle next to your ear and whispers.
>”Because I’m gonna win.”
mobius <3
>>27693730
http://empalu.deviantart.com/art/Rd-flying-609955880
For the relaxation of dashfags.
>>27693950
It's all I ever wanted...now I can finally rest.
And dream.
>>27677135
>*BEEP BEEP BEEP*
>You can practically feel the crust on your eyelids part as they snap open.
>You reach over and shut off the alarm on your watch, stopping the sound.
>Thankfully, the noise didn't wake up Dash, who was still fast asleep on your chest.
>Something about seeing her usually totally active body lying so still was captivating.
>You could feel her light breathing on your arm, and the weight of her light frame on top of you felt extremely satisfying.
>You ran your hand all the way from her head, down to her lower back, just taking in the feel of her.
>However, as much as it pained you to do so, you had to get up eventually.
>You had set that alarm for a reason, you really needed to by some food for your house today.
>As this mornings breakfast had proved, your kitchen was sorely in need of replenishment.
>You gently shook Dash, and spoke as softly as you could, trying not to startle the sleeping pegusai.
"Dash,..."
>All that seemed to do was make her snore a bit louder, but definitely didn't wake her up, even in the slightest.
"Hey Dash?"
>This actually seems to wake her up, because she starts up with a snort.
>"Huh? Wha, whas goin on?"
>Her a part of her hair is stuck straight up, and she has a small bit of drool in the corner of her mouth.
>As soon as she actually wakes up, she looks slightly worried for a second before turning to look at you.
>As soon as she looks into your eyes, a big relieved smile splits across her face.
>"Oh, hey Anon."
>She rest her head back down on your chest and closes her eyes again.
>"Is it time to get up already?"
"Already? We've been asleep for a few hours now, Dash."
>She looks at you with a holier-than-thou look.
>>27695216
>"Are you kidding me? You're talking to Rainbow Dash, napping extraordinaire. A few hours is nothing, I could do this all day.
"Well, there's no denying that you're a napping pro, Dash. The problem with that though, is that you're going to be the hungriest napping pro in Ponyville if you don't let me get up."
>Almost if on cue, Rainbow's stomach lets out a small whine.
>"Well, I guess you're right."
>Rainbow Dash sits up on your lower chest, smacking her lips a few times.
>She stretches her limbs all the way out, with her wings completely unfurled.
>She lets out a small yawn, and rubs her eyes a few times.
>As soon as she's done, she starts to dismount your chest.
>Before letting her leave however, you reach up and pull her close to you, catching her off guard.
>You wrap her up in a huge bear hug, holding her as close as you can.
>Reluctant for a moment, she returns your embrace, burying her head in your shoulder.
"You wanna come with me to the store Dash? I just need to pick up a few things."
>"Nah, if you're only gonna be gone for a bit, I think I'll stick around here, maybe hop in a shower."
"Alright, your loss."
>You slowly rise from the couch, leaving a grumpy Dash in your wake.
"You want me to pick up anything for you while I'm out?"
>"Oh yea! Make sure you pick up some protein mix, and don't forget my Wheaties!"
"You got it Dash."
>After putting on your several tons of winter gear, you grab your bit bag and open the door.
>Just before you step out, you can hear Dash calling from down the hall way.
>"Hey Anon, where do you keep your towels?!"
"Under the bathroom sink!"
>"Oh, sweet, thanks!"
>"Hurry back Anon, we still need to fit in a few more hours of naps before bed time!"
>Damn, you must have one hell of a comfy chest to make her want to sleep on it this often.
>Chuckling to yourself, you shut the door, and start on your way.
>While very peaceful in the falling snow, the walk to the store was very lonely without Dash.
>>27695217
>While you two had been very close friends for a while, it never ceased to amaze you just how quickly things had moved in the last few days.
>You had been together almost non-stop for the last year, but after the events of last night, this was the first time that you had actually really resented her absence.
>It just felt like there was this huge hole in the air, that could really only be filled by Dash.
>Before you know it, you're walking through the front door of the local grocery store.
>This store had only been set up recently, but it had practically been a godsend for you.
>You had been adjusting to Equestrian culture just fine, but one of the harder things to get used to was having to go to a bunch of unnecessary booth and stands, just for a short grocery list.
>Apparently it had been doing very well, because despite the weather, the store was still packed with a decent amount of ponies.
>Getting started on your list, you grab a basket and head over to the breakfast isle.
>As soon as you round the corner and enter the isle, you're greeted by a very familiar voice.
>"Nonny! Hi Nonny! What are you doing here?"
>You look up from you list to see your favorite pink party pony, pushing around a cart filled to the brim with what appeared to be the most sugary cereals she could find.
"Hey Pinky Pie, funny running into you here. Just picking up a few things that I'm running low on at home."
>"Okey dokey! Mrs.Cake told me you came over to Sugar Cube Corner earlier today with Dashie."
"Yeah, we didn't see you though, I guess we missed you."
>"No, today is one of my days off! Thats why I wasn't at the counter today."
>"I wish I was though, Mrs. Cake said Rainbow Dash looked really with her new coltfriend."
>Pinkie leans over her cart and elbows you, with a sly grin.
"Heh, yea I gu-"
>You freeze up completely, registering what she said.
"Wait, she said what?!"
>>27695219
>"Oh, nothing. She just said that her new coltfriend,-that's you Nonny- took her out for breakfast, and you guys were super, adorably cute and awkward together!
>Oh shit.
>Oh shit oh shit.
>If Pinkie Pie already knew this, there was no telling how many other ponies knew about you and Dash too.
>Pinkie Pie wasn't exactly known for having the tightest of lips, and you cant imagine Mrs. Cake was much better.
>If Rainbow Dash found out about this, she'd be mortified.
>Even worse, she might even think that it was you who first spilled the beans, even when you promised not to.
>You doubt she could trust you at all if she ended up at that conclusion, and it could definitely mess up this awesome thing you and Dash had going.
>You had to make sure that this was all kept in containment.
"Listen Pinkie Pie, I need you to Pinkie Pie promise me that you wont tell anyone, anyone at all, about Dash and I."
>"Oh, OK! No problem Anon. Why though?"
"Well, you know Dash, she likes to keep things like this close to the vest. I kinda promised her I'd keep it just between us, and it might hurt her feelings if it got out."
>"Alright Nonny, no need to worry, I Pinkie Pie promise."
"Great, thanks Pinkie."
>"No problem Nonny! Buuuuttttt......."
"But what?"
>"You might wanna tell that to Fluttershy, because I told her just a few minutes ago before she left the store. You just missed her."
>Ssssshhhiiitttt.
>Great, that now thats another thing you had to add to your to-do-list.
>You say your goodbyes to Pinkie Pie, and continue on getting your groceries.
>Thankfully for you, Fluttershy was a bit of a homebody, especially during this extreme cold weather.
>She usually stayed at home, taking care of her many animals.
>You'd have to be sure to stop by her place later today, to stop this thing from spreading any further.
>As for right now, you just want to get back to your home.
>>27695222
>You were staring to feel kind of odd, all of the sudden, what you could only assume where symptoms of cuddle withdraw.
>You thought this kinda thing only happened to ponies, but you guess it was just rubbing off on you.
>However, along with thoughts of cuddling, another strange kind of thought poked its way into your head.
>This recurring picture of Dash taking her shower, the water running down her slick mane, the room all hot and steamy, the soap making her coat slick and smooth all over.
>She was beckoning you in, and you had no intention of denying her.
>This was a new kind of thought, something that had never even occurred to you before.
>You had never even considered any kind of sexual relations with any of the ponies, much less with your best bro, Rainbow Dash.
>You didn't even really know if ponies even had sex.
>You knew that they could be pregnant, but you had never even heard any mention of any kind of sex at all since you arrived here.
>Maybe it was all magical or something, who knows?
>Shaking your all this stuff from your hea, you decide that these thoughts were best saved for later, so you push them out of your head for now.
>After purchasing all of your items, you head out of the store, braving the strong weather.
>You start towards home, and back to Dash.
FIN
>>27695225
Whenever you say FIN do u mean fin for now? Or fin for forever?
(Only asking cuz ur such a good writer)
>>27695225
Oh shit, things are happening now! I hope you don't mean that this one is done, because this is my favorite green ITT.
>>27695225
>This recurring picture of Dash taking her shower, the water running down her slick mane, the room all hot and steamy, the soap making her coat slick and smooth all over.
U-unf. Please tell me you're going to write some clop somewhere in here, it already sounds boner-teir.
>>27693730
>>27695225
Great green guys!
>>27693719
>Pegasai are incredibly territorial and defensive of their mate
This is fucking awesome.
This is literally the best story I've read on here, in all my 4 years of lurking and actively searching. I've finally found it. This is fucking awesome. This story has everything in it. It has characters, world building, lore, etc.
Fucking A+.
>>27695225
oh shit, Anon's fucked!
>FIN
Please don't tell me this is over, most interesting green right now.
>>27695225
Damn church, you're easily one of the best writefags I've ever seen when it comes to writing characters. Your Pinkie Pie is really good, and your Dash is phenomenal.
>>27626782
>>27627018
>>27627229
Anon?
>>27696665
Oh hey it's you.
Yeah I'm not responding to anything you say. I just don't care enough about your opinion on the cartoon horse to type up a massive essay of Dash's character progression, when you can easily just go back in the archives to see what others have said. I'm tired of arguing with people over Dash. It's annoying. It's also pointless. If you don't like her then whatever.
>>27696752
>If you don't like her then whatever.
hardly an argument, more a discussion if you ask me. Posted a question, there's nothing to suggest I dislike Dash there.
>>27680869
>>27682601
I'll ask around, ta lad.
In case any of my Hugbros are wondering what's going on on that front, I still have them recorded but it's still unclear what counts and what doesn't. Took around 200 caps on things I was unsure on but it's not really plausible to ask you to go through them all and give your opinions. I need to skim through S1 again too.
Sometimes Ponies have their hoof around another and it seems like a hug, other times it doesn't. I don't really have a set criteria either
>>27692632
>>”Hey! Just cuz he’s an ahmivore doesn’t mean he’s a meat eating animal!”
ya wot
>>27695219
>>"I wish I was though, Mrs. Cake said Rainbow Dash looked really with her new coltfriend."
>looked really with her new coltfriend
Looked really what?
>>27696906
Great! I'm really looking forward to your video. Btw,
>around 200 caps
So that makes almost two hug-like things per episode. Even if some of those aren't actually hugs, that's still a lot of physical contact. Man, ponies are really affectionate.
Anyway, in a previous thread you posted a few images and I remember we couldn't agree on some of them, so I'd say the definition of a hug is loose enough to not try too hard to classify them. Don't bother too much, it was supposed to be something nice, not a tedious chore.
>>27696752
>>27696857
Also, I really wasn't trying to start shit. I legit just wanted to spark a decent discussion rather than having another empty bump so I just gave my opinion hoping others would give theirs and see different viewpoints
-oO(Hell Hath Furies)Oo-
>Your hooves clack loudly on the expensive looking tiled floor as you cross the lobby and approach the receptionist.
>The bored looking pony looks up from a stack of notes and a rather thick appointment book and grazes you with a disinterested look.
>"Name?"
"Um, Rainbow Dash."
>"Just a moment, please."
>She flips several pages back and runs her hoof down a list of entries in the ledger, and then looks back up at you curiously.
>"Do you have an appointment?"
"N-no, I didn't make one...But I'm one of Rarity's closest friends! Just tell her I'm here. She'll want to see me."
>"Ms...Dash. I don't want to sound difficult, but Ms. Rarity is a very busy pony and can't be bothered by every-"
>"Rainbow Dash! How delightful! How ever have you been, Darling? Memo! Bring us some coffee and make a little room in my schedule for my visitor, please."
>The receptionist pony only looks slightly bothered and nods.
>"Wrapping up that brunch today gives you about fifteen minutes of wiggle room, Ms. Rarity."
>"Perfect. Come along, Rainbow. I feel as if we haven't seen each other in AGES."
"It HAS been ages..."
>You grumble and follow behind her.
>Through a set of ornate double doors you find yourself in the lavishly decorated office/workspace of the premiere fashion designer and CEO of Equestria's most popular clothing brands.
>Huge picture windows on three sides give you breathtaking views of the Manehattan skyline from your position nearly eighty stories in the air.
>Having an office in the sky didn't impress you as much as it might other ponies, but Rarity's taste had appointed the place in a unique style that even you could appreciate.
>Rarity trots over to a circle of overstuffed silk cushions with a small wooden table all carved from a single piece of wood and sinks into the nearest one.
>>27697636
>"Have a seat, Rainbow. I wish you'd told me you were coming so that I might have made more time for you. As it is even this small window will be cutting things rather close."
"So, things are going well then?"
>"Oh, it's far beyond anything I'd ever dreamed! Who'd have guessed in a few short years I'd go from opening a few satellite boutiques to the fashion guru of Equestria! But, I'm far more interested in how YOU are doing, Rainbow Dash."
>Memo enters from the double doors and levitates a tray bearing a steaming coffee pot with fixings and mugs down onto the table before inclining her head and leaving.
"Um, yeah. Everything's going great, y'know? The Wonderbolts are here in Manehattan for a show, and I was on rotation with the Reserves as a back up flyer. Fleetfoot pulled a muscle earlier, so I actually got to fly with them again."
>"Oh dear, that's horrible for Fleetfoot, but I'm ecstatic you got a chance to show your stuff again. Any word on moving up out of the Reserves?"
"Well, unless somepony gets a major injury or retires their team is pretty set. There's also a waiting list based on merit, but I've been doing well..."
>You busy yourself mixing some cream and sugar into a cup of coffee and try to act nonchalant.
>"Rainbow, darling. I may not live in Ponyville anymore, but I can still tell when something's bothering you. What's the matter?"
>You look up and see the genuine concern in her eyes. Maybe you can still talk to her like you used to.
"Uh, I sent...um, invitations. And tickets, y'know? To todays exhibition. I sent 'em to all of you. I just thought...how come nopony showed up?"
>It's Rarity's turn to shift uncomfortably on her cushion and not meet your eyes.
>"Oh, Rainbow. I'm terribly sorry. Memo showed me the invitation and the tickets, but I thought it was just the Wonderbolts courting my company for possible business so with my plate so full right now I didn't schedule it. I'm so sorry."
>>27697648
"Oh, it's cool. I know how busy you are now...but...what about the others? I haven't really heard anything from them lately..."
>Rarity takes a sip of her coffee with her ears still drooped low.
>"Well, let me see. Twilight has spent the last several weeks in a summit with the new Dragon Lord trying to hammer out her Friendship Accords...she probably won't be back in Equestria for a couple of months."
>"Applejack was just here last week and we were planning out a series of caravan routes to quickly distribute Sweet Apple Acres product across all of Equestria and expand her customer base. She had to go back to begin the harvest."
>"Pinkie Pie has the ribbon cutting ceremony for her new Trottingham Party Palace tomorrow morning, and Fluttershy went with her to experience the huge menagerie they have there."
>"It's just bad luck, darling. I'm sure they all wanted to come, but things have just gotten so busy lately."
>You just nod with your nose buried in your coffee. Everypony is doing so well. They're all accomplishing their dreams...
>"Rainbow, there's no need to look so down. Everypony will be back soon, and I'm sure we can compare schedules for a lunch together or something.
"Yeah, lunch..."
>It's impossible to keep the bitterness out of your voice.
>"Rainbow Dash! I'm surprised at you! Everypony has been working their hooves to the bone to get where we are today. We may not have as much time to socialize as we used to, but that's no reason to be crass."
"Look, I'm happy for you guys. Really. I just, sometimes I wish things could go back to how they were."
>"You're too focused on the past, Rainbow. This jealousy really is unbecoming. Perhaps if you'd spent a little more time working toward your goals instead of napping and partying you wouldn't be stuck in the Reserves."
>You feel like you've taken a lance to the gut. Your ears sweep back as you try to push yourself through the cushion and into the floor.
>>27697668
>Maybe she was right. Maybe you don't take things seriously enough, and now everypony is leaving you behind...
>"I think that's quite all the time I have this evening, Rainbow Dash. Please feel free to contact my personal assistant if you want to come by again..."
>The uncharacteristic coldness in Rarity's voice makes you certain that her schedule would likely be too full.
>You get up and begin to slowly walk back out of the office, your head hung low.
>Rarity has changed. She'd never talked to you like that before. Maybe they'd all changed...maybe you should just leave Equestria and try to make your life far away...
>Their faces flash through your mind. Your chest feels empt and painful as you think of maybe never seeing them again.
>Fluttershy, with her innocence and her love of all things great and small. Pinkie Pie with her crusade to make the whole world smile. Applejack's true and unshakeable faith in other ponies. Twilight's love of knowledge and eagerness to solve any problem.
>And Rarity. Her openness and giving nature that lets her spread beauty and light to everypony no matter how high or low.
>That Rarity would never have said those things. She would know how hard you'd worked. She'd KNOW that you weren't jealous of their success. That you just wanted to see your friends.
>You stop right before you reach the double doors.
>"Is there something else you need, Rainbow Dash? I really must return to my work. I'm sorry, but I just don't have anymore time for you today."
>Something's not right here. This isn't the Rarity you know.
>"Rainbow, either say something or please show yourself out. I'd hate to have to call security..."
>A tiny bookish voice seems to echo through your mind..."-ld on! Don't let it consum-"
"You're not Rarity."
>>27697678
>The flat certainty in your voice shatters the silence and makes the mare across the room jump a bit.
>"I beg your pardon? I-"
"No. You can't have my pardon."
>Your head is starting to hurt
"You're not Rarity. She'd never act like that. Never say those things. She'd give everything she has to anypony who needed it. Time, bits, clothes, whatever."
>Her voice comes across dripping with snark.
>"Rainbow, you're delusional dear. I suppose even being a Reservist is too much stress for somepon-"
"Shut UP! I'm done with this. I don't know what's going on here, but I'm done."
>"-just a little...bit...more."
"Twilight?"
>You heard her voice, but where is she?
>Wait, weren't you just somewhere else? How are you in Manehattan right now? No, no everything's wrong. And your head HURTS so MUCH.
>Twilight's triumphant voice crashes through your mind and the whole world around you explodes into fragments.
>"GOT IT!"
