>Previously
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/26767232/#q26767232
This is the superhero general, mainly starring Sunset Shimmer as Spider-woman.
Go crazy with your greens, art, and other mlp related superhero stuff.
http://youtu.be/WIkH3V3wUiM
>>26817866
Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Expect more green in the morning.
>>26817866
Is that art from that one time IDW artist who ships herself with Rarity? She really should have done more in the comics.
>>26817906
Do you think you might be able to recreate this scene at some point?
http://youtu.be/o0aHNnWghe0
>>26817944
>who ships herself with Rarity?
I...what?
>>26817954
Will do.
>>26818000
im diggin the story
lookin forward to more
>>26818000
>I...what?
Well she does.
>>26818022
I guess I can't judge...I mean, we technically all ship ourselves with our waifu...
>>26818000
Just a suggestion, you don't have to
Spidey's Roommate Anon reporting in.
Threw up a pastebin for my story.
http://pastebin.com/crUhxGkS
More to come tomorrow.
>>26818135
>>26817906
Btw I hope to excelsior that Shocker-anon makes an appears a in this thread
>>26817906
>>26818135
Like these greens, and hope for more soon.
Also still wish to see the small funny green of Shocker Anon and his GF, Spider Shimmer
>>26817866
jesus fucking christ, this Spiderman cancer is spreading fucking everywhere
Do you think Spider-Sunset would stalk Anon? Not the Shocker Anon but a regular Anon.
Spider-Shim, Spider-Shim,
Through the tower she will skim
Spins a web, any size,
Catches thieves just like flies
Look Out!
Here comes the Spider-Shim.
Is she strong?
Listen bud,
She's got radioactive blood.
Can she swing from a thread
Take a look overhead
Hey, there
There goes the Spider-Shim.
In the chill of night
At the scene of a crime
Like a streak of light
She arrives just in time.
Spider-Shim, Spider-Shim
Friendly neighborhood Spider-Shim
Even gym
She can't afford
But still wants no reward.
To her, life is a great big bang up
Wherever there's a hang up
You'll find the Spider-Shim.
>>26818874
*town
well fuck
>>26818887
Its ok bruv
I liked it anyway
Continuing from >>26817363
Pastebin updated to the latest green:
>http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
>You unzip it’s biggest pocket first and…
>...Nothing.
>Just books, materials, her phone…
>You sigh.
>Nothing weird, nothing important.
>You wrap yourself in bed and go to sleep peacefully.
>After masturbating, of course.
>...You’re so lonely.
>Morning had gone by quickly, and you’re here waiting at your usual spot--the statue that lead to the steps of the school.
>The weather was not as nice as yesterday’s but a little cloudiness never hurt anyone, right?
>Like the day before, the TARC bus comes to a stop across the street, Sunset crosses, and then sits next to you.
>One difference though...she’s very worried.
>“Anon, what did Flash do to you!?”
>Oh…
>She must have heard…
“He, uh, crammed me into my locker. Luna got me out though and he’s going to be in trouble, so I don’t think we need to--”
>She grabs your wrists and looks at you dead in the eye.
>...You feel your non-existent womanhood tremble at her gorgeous green eyes…
>She pulls you into sudden hug very tightly, fixing her head into the crook of your neck.
>Whoa, what?!
>You stand there flabbergasted as students passing by stare awkwardly at you.
>Then you feel wetness where her head is…
“Sunset, what’s going on? You ok? Do you need to talk about something?”
>She silently sobs as you remained unanswered.
>You decide to just be there for her and…get out your phone from your pocket.
>You know what will cheer her up.
“Hey Sunny?”
>She releases from your hug with the makeup on her eyes running.
>Despite how much her sadness hurts your heart, you smile.
>You tap a button on your phone, and the greatest song in the world starts to play...
“She can kill with a smile
She can wound with her eyes
She can ruin your faith with her casual lies
And she only reveals what she wants you to see
She hides like a child
But she's always a woman to me…”
Will do more after school.
Shocker anon here. Might have an idea, but too tired right now. Well probably post in the morning-ish. Or noon. Depends on when I wake up and manage to flesh out my idea.
When you bump the original these from page 10 when it's only a babby and come back to glorious sunny green.
>>26818535
Your mom
What's a TARC bus?
>>26817866
>Superior Spider Shimmer
Oh god I don't think it's possible for me to be more erect right now.
>>26818874
Spider-Shim Spider-Shim,
She's a Superior Spider-Shim
Spins a web, any size,
Her whole life, built on lies
OH NO!
Sunset is Spider-Man!
Is she strong?
Listen bud,
She's got... Twilight Sparkles blood.
Twilight got death and pain,
Sunset gets to fuck Mary Jane,
Oh No!
Sunset is Spider-Man!
>>26819455
getting interesting, and can't wait to see who/what Anon becomes
>>26820038
Now that and the Spider-Man theme are stuck in my head
>>26820389
inb4 green goblin anon
>>26819455
Wait so are we in The Marvel world including S.H.E.I.L.D & Hydra?
A funny green were Shocker Anon and Spider Shimmer meet Sunset`s clone or another Spidergirl.
>>26821394
isn't he already a green goblin?
>THESHOCKER has entered the chat
>THESHOCKER: It finally happened.
>Teh Rhino: Yer' dick snapped off ?
>Teh Rhino: 'Cause I am REALLY sick of hearing about your dick.
>RockYouLikeAHurricane: Yeah, shit's kinda getting old, like the garbage I forgot to take out last week.
>RockYouLikeAHurricane: Oh shit, I gotta take out this week's garbage too! brb
>THESHOCKER: Against all odds, no, my dick remains intact.
>Teh Rhino: Figures.
>THESHOCKER: Despite hell apparently freezing over.
>Teh Rhino: ...No.
>Teh Rhino: Don't you say another goddamn word.
>THESHOCKER: I, against my better judgement...managed to bed both of them.
>THESHOCKER: At once.
>Teh Rhino: FUCKYOUFUCKYOUFUCKYOUFUCKYOU
>Teh Rhino: FUUUUUUCCCCKKKK YOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
>Teh Rhino has left the chat
>THESHOCKER: Huh. And here I thought the saltiest it got was at Sodom.
>ZapZap: Aw, shit. We're never going to hear the end of how you banged both Mysterio and Spiderwoman at once, are we?
>THESHOCKER: I wouldn't worry, nothing really happened.
>The King of New York: It is my duty as one of the most influential and powerful men in New York to tell you that you are, in fact, spewing what is known as "bullshit".
>The King of New York: One does not simply just "bed" two woman with "nothing" happening.
>THESHOCKER: Well, that's what happened.
>THESHOCKER: We just all cuddled together and slept the night away.
>THESHOCKER: It was actually a nice change of pace from the near constant sex.
The King of New York: I believe I speak for everyone here when I say BULLSHIT.
>>26818022
unf...
need more of her OC
>>26822026
Fucking Kingpin
>>26817944
Yes, she's basically a female version of us, if you know what I mean. She waifus Rarity super hard and apparently has been trying to get one of the writers to pick her for a Rarity comic.
>>26820389
Callingbatman beyond
>>26819455
>You stand her up and hold her in the way a man would for a slowdance.
“She can lead you to love
She can take you or leave you
She can ask for the truth
But she'll never believe you
And she'll take what you give her as long as it's free
Yeah, she steals like a thief
But she's always a woman to me...”
>You hold her close and smile warmly.
>“Oh god you're blushing too...” She says giggling semi-sadly.
>She’s right though.
>You’re blushing harder than you ever had...but Sunset seems to be blushing as well.
“Oh, she takes care of herself
She can wait if she wants
She's ahead of her time
Oh, and she never gives out
And she never gives in
She just changes her mind…”
>Your heads rest against each other’s comfortably.
>You both have a dopey smile.
“She will promise you more
Than the Garden of Eden
Then she'll carelessly cut you
And laugh while you're bleedin'
But she'll bring out the best
And the worst you can be
Blame it all on yourself
Cause she's always a woman to me…”
>With that, you turn your phone off, and you hold Sunset.
“Let’s skip school. We don’t need to do shit today.”
>Shimmer nods.
>“...Yeah. I like that.”
>>26822546
Song link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kI3MwwWYC3Q
>>26822546
>You drive in your van with Shimmer in the passenger seat.
“So what’s wrong, Shim-Sham? You were acting strange yesterday, and you straight-up cry on me today...I’m worried.”
>Sunset sighs.
>“I don’t know. I’ve just been going through some changes recently...You think we can go get something to eat? I never get to eat breakfast and I’m reeeallly hungry.”
>You’re ok with that.
“Sure, no problem. But still, do you need to talk about it? Clearly something’s wrong and you’re not telling me.”
>She tries to block you off.
>“Anon, seriously, I’m fine.”
>...Maybe you should lay off.
>It’s a sensitive subject you guess…
>...a subject that has her coming to school every day with bruises, limping, and crying on you before school starts.
“Shimmer, I’m going to be honest with you...you’re literally my only friend. Everyday I see you and your friends hang out and have fun. You’re the closest I have to that. If something’s wrong with you, I wanna help.”
>She considers this.
>“...What do you think about Spider-Woman?”
>The question gets you off guard.
“Spider-Woman? You already know what I think about her.”
>“Yeah, just barely. You find her mysterious, want to know more about her, and you creepishly gloat on her hips...”
“...Well, they /are/ nice hips.”
>“...but you never told me why you’re fascinated by her. Is it something with how she uses her powers? Maybe you’re curious about why she does whatever she does?”
>You sigh as you turn into a cafe’ called “Cafe’’”.
>This city has problems.
>>26822508
That would require Anon's dad to die
(Or be Bruce Wayne)
>>26819457
I also have an idea I'd like you to try out,,,
>>26822751
I almost did this to be honest. When ANon comes home and finds his dad sleeping on the counter, he was supposed to be dead. In the morning, he founds out his dad was sniped in the forehead. An officer named Stan and his friend Kirby take him to the current Commissioner Gordon, where then shortly after he is adopted by an elderly and retired Bruce Wayne. I wrote it out, but it started to take away from the tone I wanted. Plus, as I said before, I've already written Anon as Batman.
I have bigger plans, anyways involving something fast.
>>26822802
>always involving something fast
You sneaky fook
>>26822802
This is gunna be fast.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cF3-fgk_LwI
>>26822026
Please make more green. This stuff made me laugh and I wanna see more Spider Shimmer doing stuff to Shocker Anon
>>26822802
Ok now I really want Flash-Anon
http://youtu.be/k9jZ_qcxivc
i just realised since anon is normaly green from head to toe wouldnt he make atleast optical a good green lantern?
>>26822590
>As you park you think of your answer.
“...I want to know her. I wanna see why she has her powers and chooses to help others despite her being labeled as a menace. She’s very…I don’t, but I want to see if she understands, you know? What it’s like to be weird and isolated…”
>She nods in understanding and lays a hand on your shoulder.
>“I’m sure she does.”
>Your face becomes rather florid from the compliment.
>Hiding the blush is impossible, and letting go of your smile is too.
>You don’t know why, but that really resonated with you.
>You cough awkwardly, and unbuckle your seatbelt.
“Well, uh, let’s get some grub then, eh?”
>“Right, I’m starving.”
>You exit your car as she loses the seat belt.
>Before she opens the car door, however, you open for it her with a mock-bow.
“M’lady…”
>She grins.
>>26823114
http://youtu.be/N-PYuGYkdyM
>spider-shim
>not drider-shim
/mlp/ confirmed shit taste
>>26818022
>>26822135
I had no idea Maximus had a sister.
>>26822802
"I had a father"
"His name is Ben Parker
>>26823009
>not flash sentry as flash
>>26823260
Beans already said he's not gonna do it
>>26820389
Scarlet Spider, but with Miles' powerset.
Alternatively, he becomes Venom, but, y'know, not fucking psychotic. So, like... USM Agent Venom?
>>26823506
Or pat with toxic
>>26823522
Toxin, but yeah I know what you mean.
>>26823506
Noice
>>26823506
He could even be Anti-Venom
>>26823506
>Scarlet Spider
But what costume does he get? Classic Ben Reilly Scarlet Spider, or Kaine Scarlet Spider? Or do we give him the Iron Spider costume because the three clones of Michael Van Patrick all used the moniker?
Or if you really wanted to reach, we could always give him Felicity Hardy's second Scarlet Spider costume.
>>26823650
Ben Reilly
>>26822135
I dont know that Tomoko managed to cross over to 3D land. She's totally looks like what we're picturing a female neckbeard lookslike.. I mean, going with that one picture alone as a reference
>>26823911
>anon did a 911
>>26823506
>Anon becomes the Scarlet Spider
>Gets better press from the Daily Bugle
>Has a better powerset
>Has better quips
And that's how you get a Venom, errybody.
>>26824041
>Sunset acquires Venom Symbiote
>Amplifies her emotional states
>Can't decide if she wants to kiss Anon or strangle the fucker
>Tries to ignore the voice in her head telling her to>rape the unsuspecting Anon. Rape of the tentacular variety.
>>26824184
>Compromise
>Kiss anon while strangling him
>>26823260
that requires him to have a good personality
>>26824353
This guy gets it.
>>26823114
WARNING--PIC RELATED IS SOME LEWD SHIT
>“Thanks, ‘good sir’,” she responds with as much playfulness as your own little tease.
>She steps out of your van, her neat boots landing on the old pavement of the parking lot.
>You walk through the entrance and see a stand with a woman occupying it in a uniform.
>Taking you to a booth, you and her Sunset realize the cafe is relatively empty.
>Literally just you and her--other than like, you don’t know, two employees?
>As you sit across your friend, the waitress smiles.
>“Would you two like any drinks to get started?”
>You look at Sunset who shrugs.
“...Do you have any hot tea?”
>The waitress smiles.
>“We certainly do.”
>Sunset seems to approve, so you nod your head with a smile.
“I think we’ll have some then, please.”
>The waitress leaves chuckling to herself, then whistles “Can You Feel the Love Tonight?”
>Shimmer rolls her eyes at that playfully.
>“I wonder if she got the wrong idea…”
“Does it matter?”
>She relaxes her shoulders as she lets the quiet and empty cafe relax her.
>“Suppose not,” she says, “...thanks Anon.”
>You clasp your hand over her’s assuringly.
“If you ever need anything, Sunny--”
>“Sunny? On to nicknames now?”
>You try not squirm in your seat.
“Just...I got your back is all, ok?”
>She smiles affectionately.
>“Ok.”
>You recoil your hands back.
>>26824184
So who'd get the Venom symbiote after Shimmy discards it? Trixie would be too fucking obvious, so... SciTwi for yandere yuri shenanigans?
>>26824674
I think Glim Glam....
>>26824701
Do we even HAVE an EqG GlimGlam?
>>26824714
WE CAN BUILD HER
>>26824669
God damn Beans why did you post that pic?! Do you even care about the man-children browse here?
>>26823650
>But what costume does he get?
Are you straight up ignoring this beauty?>>26822751
>>26824041
>>Anon becomes the Scarlet Spider
Hey, I suggested batman beyond before, but what if we actually come up with our own super hero?
Like manipulating metal like a liquid? Like he carries a few vials of metal and makes his costume at will. He gets his powers after an incident involving Spiderwoman.
>>26825013
I might do this. I plan to make a vote on what to do with Anon
>>26824669
>Sunset seems very comfortable now.
>Good.
>You like it when she’s relaxed.
>...Why not put a little more icing on the cake?
“Just so you know, this meal’s on me.”
>“Whoa, you don’t have to do that, Anon. I can pay for myself, y’know.”
>You smile smugly.
“I’m three hundred dollars richer from selling my photo of Spider-Woman. I’m paying and that’s final.”
>Her eyes widen.
>“Wait, what? The Bugle bought your photos?”
“Yeah, also interviewed me on my encounter with her too. It’s was the front page.”
>Sunset seems alarmed by this much to your consternation.
>“Y-you’re encounter with Spider-Woman? They interviewed you?”
“Uh, yeah, something wrong.”
>She exhales deeply.
>“No, no, just, kinda dangerous, y’know? I knew you took a photo, but I didn’t know you were that close…”
“...Caring about my safety? That’s new.”
>“It’s called caring, and friends do that.”
>The footsteps of the waitress signal the approach of the tea.
>The tea cups are tiny and so is the teapot, but you don’t mind.
>“Alright, here you go! Some freshly brewed tea. Are you all ready to order?”
>Oh snap, you forgot about the menu…
“Uh, one more minute please?”
>The waitress nods and walks off…
>Sunset resumes.
>“...You’re a nice guy, Anon.”
>Your lips purse in confusion.
“And I wasn’t before?”
>She laughs at your little quip.
>“No, I mean, you always check in on me in the morning, after school…”
>She carries a thoughtful glint in her eyes.
>“...In fact, you should sit with my friends tomorrow at lunch! How about it?”
>>26824948
Sorry I meant this.>>26822775
>>26825218
But that's a Spider-Man costume, not a sidekick or partner costume.
>>26825247
How about Spiderman Noir?
>>26825247
>>26825288
Even better The Bombastic Bagman!
>>26825060
>You're taken aback by the offer.
>Sitting with her? And her friends?!
>That’s the biggest honor for any guy at Canterlot High!
“I’d love to!”
>Her face grows cheery.
>“Oh my gosh, I just know you’ll love my friends! They’re pretty odd, but once you get to know them, you’ll love ‘em.”
“...Do they bite?”
>Sunset is about to laugh…
>But freezes for a millisecond.
>“...DUCK!”
“Wait, wha--hwooaaa!”
>She yanks your under the booth’s table before you can register anything.
>That’s when the entire entrance of the cafe is obliterated by a FUCKING CAR.
“HOLY SHIT!”
>“Calm down, Anon!”
“Bitch, a car just got thrown at us and you’re telling me to calm down!? YOU CALM THE FUCK DOWN!”
>She slaps you.
>“Focus!”
>Ow...that...that was really strong…
>That slap felt more like a massive punch.
>Jesus, Sunset must be stronger than Brad!
>She grabs you by the shoulders.
>Dat grip…
>“I said calm down! I’m gonna see what happened…stay here.”
>Before she leaves, you grab her by the arm.
“Uh, what!? Are you out of your mind!?”
>>26825288
Seconded. Get a good old snubnose revolver and we are in business
>>26825013
Seconding this.
>>26825376
>>26823144
Called it
What about miguel o'hara? Spidey 2099?
>>26825421You really did you little shit.Fuck you.B-but fuck me first...
>>26825438
No. He's too based for my writing to do justice on.
>>26825448
Makes sense. Honestly i am perfectly content with your green. Great work thus far.
*in Rarity voice*
Ideaaaaa!
How about, Anon gets captured by some mad scientist bad guy (dock ock, goblin, whatever) and they end up experimenting on him with the super soldier serum, then boom
Captain Amerinon
>>26825023
hmm
let us begin the decision for Anon's freak accident related superpower:
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Special:Random
>>26825509
Utterly useless in New York
>>26825509
>http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Special:Random
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Dance_Combat
>>26825531
>create a valley in the middle of New York
>it's deeper than the marina trench
>enemies fall by the dozens
>granted, their's collateral damage
>BUT YOU WIN
>>26825498
That's uh...totally not what I had planned...
>>26825542
Hilarious possibilities, but no.
>>26825555
how about we give that power to rarity, I mean really, who the fuck else would pull off Dance Combat.
>>26825509
Well this is...scary
>>26825555
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Demonic_Power_Immunity
>>26825578
...I've seen this power once beforeMemories, man, memories
>>26825581
and then I rolled :
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Benefic_Force_Manipulation
>>26825509
Every anon wishes they had this power
>>26825596
>EOH grow EVEN STRONGER
>>26825544
Don't need to worry about casualties anymore
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Tableware_Weapon_Proficiency
>I shall attack you, WITH A SPOON!
Anon is, the amazing....
RICOCHET
>>26825509
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Juggernaut_Momentum
I'm okay with this
>>26825555
>After being struck by electricity while saving sunset from electro, anon awakes, discovering that he is now the fastest bloke alive
>Anon is...The Flash!
>>26825683
>everyone thinks it's Flash Sentry
>the perfect cover
>>26825669
>I'm the Juggernon, bitch!
Pretty badass no lie
>>26825498
Then who was the winter soldier?
>>26825555
Anonymous is gone
There is only...
CARNAGE
>>26825013
Why don't we flesh this out a bit? To manipulate metal like a liquid he needs to be in contact with it. and to maintain his power he needs to concentrate.
He can control the metal enough to create tools, claws, or even extend his own reach.
He may team up with electro from time to time and"fuse"
>>26825768
Are you saying we turn anon into the T-1000?
>>26825780
No, he's not made of metal. More like discount Magneto.
>>26825509
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Morality_Manipulation
A power fitting for the EQG universe.
>>26825509
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Nonexistence
Pretty overpowered honestly
Best choice
>>26817866
>Derpy as the amazing bagman
happy laughs are being had!
>>26825509
Oh fuck yes.
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Remote_Possession
>>26825509
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Sexual_Instinct
Oh god
Sunset is gonna kill him
>>26825509
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Life-Force_Empowerment
Oh god, Anon gets possessed by the Phoenix Force. Is he a late blooming Empath/Telepath Mutant?
>>26825509
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Omnicompetence
Anon becomes the hero of Canterlot "Gary Stu".
>>26825555
so have you decided between hero, anti-hero, or villain yet?
When is beans coming back?
>>26826342
Idk.
Here's a picture of Sunny when she's not web slinging
>>26826246
The ultimate sidekick
>>26826396
She's making me sling web
>Beans right now
http://youtu.be/MFYHMfF4oIY
>>26825509
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Sex_Magic
Anon is gonna fuck you up.
>>26826538
>>26826120
DEATH BY SNU SNU!
>>26826572
This is death by Snu Snu
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Death_By_Sex
>>26826582
Or Sunset wearing the venom suit.
>>26826582
"Toxic Dick" was the first thing I thought after reading that article. Probably not the best power to have.
>>26826396
>>26826414
>pic related
>>26826613
more like "Intoxicating Dick"
>>26826582
>Known users
>Spider-Man not mentioned
>>26826538
Anon advertises himself as a magic dick
Keeps being hired as a private investigator
>>26826710
>>Daredevil not mentioned
FTFY
>>26826718
Mr. Invisible pls.
>>26826801
but only his penis
Anons big dick is invisible
>>26826960
God damnit KH
>>26827053
Anon gains the power of a keyblade master?
(Here's a pic of sunset as Superior Spiderwoman)
>>26827065
Well Disney owns Marvel now..
R.i.p
Ultimate Comics
>>26822135
>Literally Tomoko
It's hard to hate her.
>>26827426
The ultimate series should if been kept alive in a separate universe like spidergwen. There were still plenty of stories to tell
>>26822135
>she
I can see the manly chin and nearly 5 o'clock shadow they are sporting
Haven't seen Beans or Shocker-non in awhile
>>26827495
Oi vey goyim, are you saying you don't want to enjoy cultural enrichment?
Are you an evil NRA KKK trump supporting nazi Anon?
>>26827718
Assume death to all.
>>26828379
>>26827718
>That feel when you're trying to come up with ideas, and possibly incorporate Carnage Shimmer in a way that won't destroy the mood that you've set up
>That feel when you've instead blew most of your time reading Worm fanfics, despite not having actually read the original material itself
"Ugh...can't believe I just got my ass handed to me by the dollar store version of Storm..."
>"Oh screw you! I'm totally better than her in every way!"
"I stand corrected."
>"Damn straight!"
"Store brand."
>"...You have officially entered 'the list'. I gotta go after your buddies, so don't go anywhere!"
"...Did...did I just trip a flag?
>AND THUS SHOCKER ANON TOTALLY TRIPPED RAINBOW DASH, AKA ZAPP'S FLAG.
"OH GOD DAMN IT!"
Surprised no one has done the 60's spiderman cartoon shit with spider shimmer.
>>26825509
this sounds interesting
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Fext_Physiology
>>26828969
Does Anon trigger the others flags? And what does Sunset do when she finds out?
Xd
>>26826293
Been up literally all of last night trying to write different pathes for Anon...no progress :_;
>>26825376
>The sound of cars colliding outside the building are loud, and with loud, heavy steps...
>“Whoever’s in this building, SHOW YOURSELF!”
>That voice!
>So familiar, but...it’s all robotic sounding….
>You see the shadow of a figure casting it’s way down the cafe’.
>Four long legs eem to be holding something.
>Or someone…?
>You hear police sirens arrive outside that seem to catch the attention of the attacker you’ve yet been brave enough to catch a glimpse at.
>...You peak out just a little and…
>HOLY SHIT
>What the hell!?
>A green trench coat covers most of the attacker, but it seems there is no shirt underneath it.
>The coat does, however, conceal the upper body of the maniac.
>The waist is wrapped in this weird metal thing, and out from her back are these...arms?
>They move around like mechanical tendrils of a kraken, but seem much more deadlier.
>Did you mention they were massie, too? Cause they are.
>In fact, the person’s not even touching the ground!
>The long arms just walk for her like some type of gigantic daddy longleg of hell.
>If you were to be honest, it looked pretty metal, but also dangerous.
>But aren’t all good things in life?
>The head of the attacker was concealed behind thick, black lab goggles, and her hair...was very pretty.
>Yes.
>Her.
>You can tell by when she moves, you see her breast bare and naked under her trench coat.
>Unf…
>That smooth, gray skin….
Be back later today. School sucks; would rathr write.
>>26830064
You guys get it--r-right? Doc-Ock kinda sounds like Doc-Octavia so I...you know...
>>26830097
There's already fanart of this, so I does make sense. Also good going with the story. Like the pacing but hope you're not going to write the whole plot of Spiderman 2.
>>26830124
I'm literally making it up as I go, and that's weird for me, but expect a turn of events soon...hopefullyin a Flash
>>26830139
That's good. Hope to see some good stuff from you
>>26830064
>>A green trench coat covers most of the attacker, but it seems there is no shirt underneath it.
this is a wardrobe malfunction just waiting to happen.
inb4 Anon saves poor naked maniac from sunset
Maniac, in turn, helps anon become a supervillain (whether he wants to or not)
>>26830139
>mfw anon discovers his powers in front of Sunset
>now you have Flash-Anon and a very confused Sunset
>Should she tell him her true identity or should she keep it a secret till the final moment when it would matter
U-unf all this possibility plot
>>26830509
I don't quite see the appeal of superspeed
no, an anon must have an useless power
or one with a catch
like invisibility, but only as long as he's able to hold his breath
>>26830564
inner god but his alter ego is copmpletly nuts? (kinda ruthless in the use of its powers making things anon actually doesnt want to)
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Boundless_Inner_World
>>26830581
hmm, yes... but I don't quite see it working
anons only play support orteemo
>>26830615
what do you mean by that?
>>26825509
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Violence_Aura
I am become /v/
>>26830633
a crazy inner god might be fun, but from a storytelling perspective I don't know where it would go.
I also don't want for more wish fulfillment fantasies like some strong superpower.
the possibility of having sexytimes with sunset is the prospect I'm looking forward to, even if it doesn't happen
>>26830675
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Omni-Communication
sounds fun
>>26830564
>>26830139
What if Anon had a seemingly very useless power...like growing hair faster or hormone control...but it turns out he's an idiot with biological manipulation that hasn't explored his abilities.
Shocker-Anon and Spider-Sunset flirt whenever they banter
Bystanders are very confused
>>26831311
so he can make people extremely horny? doesnt sounds THAT useless
>>26831519
He only uses his power to keep up with Sunset's stamina
And slowly make her bust bigger
Anon should have no real super-power. The only 'power' he should have is the ability to see somebody's ass and to mesmerize it's shape, firmness, and softness with only a single glance
>>26831555
While your trips are very convincing I must disagree
I would prefer either a support powersets or something that doesn't overshadow Sunset
Like daredevil or ironfist
>>26831820
How about techno kinesis?
>>26831891
I dont think moving techno music with his mind would probably be very useful
but I'd like to see his reaction to figuring out what his power is
Does Spider Shimmer wear her spider suit when she has sex with Shocker Anon? And does she web him in a cocoon when she wants to cuddle?
>>26824765
EQG: Civil War
I want dad vandal savage to have unrealistic expectations for superhero gf
>>26831945
I think he means control technology with his mind
>>26831952
Yes
And when he's too tired to perform he uses the special vibrations
>>26831982
I know
That was my horrible try at humor
>>26831820
>Not wanting to be the Ass-man.
>>26832015
Twilight: How did you know I was Ms Fantastic
Anon: I'd know that Ass anywhere
Twilight: ........
>>26832045
Anon was once a hero using his ass based detective abilities to find out the identities of super villains. But became a villain himself once his sister got super-cancer. He had little success at first, but then the government and corporations started to use 'Ass' based security systems.
>>26832085
Chrysalis: Damn you Anon! how do you always know!
Anon: That Ass always gives you away babe
>>26832139
Who would Chrysalis be anyways? And the princesses for that matter?
More funny Shocker Anon stuff when?
>>26832154
chryssalis is mystic (or how the name is written of that blue shapeshifter mutant)?
>>26832173
Ok I know who you mean. Now the princesses? Would one of them be Nick Fury?
>>26832221
Yes.
>>26832235
Which one though? And is Shocker Anon affected by it in any way? Use this idea for a funny green
>>26832274
Luna is Fury
Celery is Professor X
>>26832284
So secretly evil?
i just thought of something why not make anon nightcrawler (or was it nightscrawler?) or atleast give him teleportation as superpower
>>26832306
BAMF
>>26830064
Lewd aside, why would Doc Octave show up wearing just a trenchcoat over her naked body? The arms don't grant her any damage resistance. Even in the marvel comics, Doc Ock eventually ended up wearing an Iron Man-esque suit to compensate for his human fragility.
>>26832318
so is the idea good or bad?
>>26832284
Ok now Cadence and the CMC?
>>26832284
Wait are they still the principal and vice principal?
Is luna jealous?
Does Anon daydream that Celery acts like Emma Frost?
>>26832361
CMC would be best as Green Lanterns
>>26832357
Well I like it but am not in charge
>>26817866
How long has Spider-Shim been a thing? I've seen the art of the Mane Six as Spider-Men before but I didn't know there was green here about it.
>>26832306
Melikes
>>26832437
Recently a thing. Started last week to tell the truth
>>26832453
Yeah started as just another Shimmer shitpost
>>26832468
>A shimmer shitpost actually produced something good.
I almost can't believe it.
>>26832518
I'm proud of myself too
>>26832173
>Mystic
>not the skrull queen.
>Not considering changelings staying changelings.
>>26832759
>Changelings = Skrulls
I can dig that.
So who are HYDRA?
>>26832774
Starlight?
>>26817866
>saw the first thread before it hit 30 posts
>assumed it would die another shimmer shitpost thread and glossed over it
>get to reading it since this is the second one and the OP caught my eye
>mfw the whole time
I'm sitting here giggling like a child when I'm not popping boners over spiderhips.
>>26832774
Let's have Flash Sentry as Ward
I request Snowdrop as Daredevil
What role do the sirens fit in this universe?
>>26832899
Not sure yet. Idon't even like human pone and hate the movies.
>>26832805
>jl8
Nice taste m8
>>26832899
Are they a group of people with similar goals/ personalities? If so we got a Lantern Corp for that
>>26832972
>hate the movies
>>26830064
>She starts to speak loudly in an admittedly cute British accent...
>“I’m looking for the one they refer to as Spider-Woman! Whoever hands her to me may live to see tomorrow!”
>She waits for a response.
>She sighs.
“I know she’s here! I placed my tracker on her as of last night. Now I ask again...WHERE IS SHE!?”
>Shit, you and Sunset need to get outta here fast…
>...Oh my god, where did she go?
>WHERE THE FUCK DID SHE GO!?
>You peek your head out a little more and hope to spot her…
>No luck…
>...Did she just abandon you here?
>...After that heart to heart?
>...
>Ok, stay calm, Anon, you’re ok!
>You...You need to focus on escaping first.
>...or wait for this weird daddy long-leg freak to either walk away or find you.
>You sneak out from under the table as the long-armed attacker looks under the booths on the opposite side of the room.
>Slowly you tip-toe away and...
>...You step on the shattered glass of a window.
>Fuck.
>The long legged menace whirls around and growls through gritted teeth.
“Uh, hi?”
>You throat is met with the terribly cold metallic arm around your throat.
>You start choking as it lifts you closer to her face.
>She cracks a toothy grin.
>There’s a glint of perverse satisfaction in it.
>“Hello...handsome,” she says as another metal arm nears close to your face.
>It produces a long blade from it’s “palm,” ready to impale itself into your forehead.
>You proceed to fight for air and a way to escape.
>>26832991
If I did/do write them, they'd work together, but not as Lanterns. I have something more obscure in mind if I get to them...which I might not.
>>26833063
>if I get to them...which I might not.
don't overload your story, keep it small and finish it. Then maybe make a continuation, but finish at least one story
>>26832993
Eh, I shouldn't say HATE...but I watched the first 10 minutes of Equestria Girls and turned it off in disgust--and this was before people raved on it. I haven't seen it since and I keep as far away as I can from knowing about it. I only know how the first movie plays out and that's primarily on speculation.
Should I watch them? I could then post green, and when I finish the movies, give my thoughts as a screenwriter. I promise it wouldn't take away time from me posting green so it'd still be frequent as usual...
>>26833063
Still the Lantern Corps are a good cop-out for super heroes
>>26833107
meh, who cares about people being in character as long as sunset has amazing hips
>>26833128
I love hips...but I love character too....
OH GOD WHAT DO I CHOOSE!??!?!?
>>26833107
Seriously, though. What do you guys think of this?
>>26833150
just write her however, you surely be able to come up with an actual personality for her
pic related if anon gets powers
>>26833150
I say continue what you're doing. It's working out so far.
Also Octavia doesn't know Anon right? She's trying to get Sunset time comes out right?
>>26833150
HIPS
I
P
S
>>26833168
>>26833177
>>26833178
>People not wanting to see their waifu portrayed accurately
I'm ashamed of youBesides, how can you have hips if you don't have a waifu
>>26833159
I think you're doing pretty good for going on 10 minutes of the movie and if you think you don't need to watch them, then go ahead and keep doing what you're doing.
They're all pretty generic and boring or the most part, the only thing I'd even remotely miss is zest and she's just rock!Vinyl
>>26833214
>Thinking she has a personality in the movies.
>>26833214
>Mysterio leaked origin
>>26833214
>implying sunset is mai waifu
>>26833214
I never said character over hips. Do both
>>26833226
>Thinking anyone in the show has a personality
>>26833168
>Implying Sunset doesn't have a personality
>>26833107
>>26833128
>>26833150
>>26833164
>>26833168
>>26833177
>>26833178
>>26833214
>>26833223
>>26833226
>>26833242
Where did I say specifically that Sunset doesn't have a personality?
I mean, I don't know her character's personality because I haven't watched the movies, but I never said she didn't have one...did I?
>>26833270
I just wanna see how Sunset acts when she's SpiderWoman
>>26833270
I want to web inside Phoenix horse
>>26833270
I never said she didn't have a personality.
I just want more photos of Spider hips.
>>26833270
no, I did
>>26833270
I wasn't trying to imply you said she had no personality. You've just got post EqG sunset down because she's generally pretty "safe" as a character goes. Some things you could touch on more is her being intelligent or having some of her "bad bitch" attitude flare up when she's mentally stumped on something, or her slightly lingering guilt complex.
This is just shit off the top of my head I remember vaguely. I gave the movies one shot.
>>26833063
http://youtu.be/Psdl5xRmrZ0
>THESHOCKER has entered the chat
>THESHOCKER: gais
>THESHOCKER: halp
>THESHOCKER: I've apparently become an MC for a shitty quest thread, and I'm practically drowning in ass and titties!
Teh Rhino: Have you considered suicide?
Teh Rhino: But out of sheer morbid curiosity, who'd you bag this time?
>THESHOCKER: Try the whole Power Ponies crew.
>Teh Rhino: ...If I didn't know you any better, I'd swear you were fucking with me.
>Teh Rhino: Honestly, I'm torn between feeling as salty as the ocean, and laughing my ass off at yer' predicament.
>Teh Rhino: So, how'd that happen?
>THESHOCKER: Well, it started when I mouthed off to Zapp, and only snowballed from there....
>THESHOCKER: Actually, before I go on, how come no else is commenting on my situation?
>The Great And Powerful Trixie: Well, you tend to spin such wondrous tales, that the audience has no recourse but to sit there and listen, sweetie.
>THESHOCKER: Well, that makes se--
>THESHOCKER: Oh fuck.
>>26833294
Already written. Be patient like a man waiting to hear if has cancer.
>>26833299
Drawfags, please?
>>26833321
I already have her guilt complex down. It's an important feature to her story and other things...
>>26833226
You just obviously just don't give a shit about her, Anon
She's intelligent
She's ambitious
She likes to get out into the field rather than sit around reading books like Twilight
She's observant so is usually the first one to notice when crazy shit is going down and is also the first one to look into it
She's a motherfucking magical unicorn in a human body for crying out loud
>>26833330
More when and how did Anon get the others?
>>26833344
Also love the story and can wait
>>26833063
>“Now you wouldn’t happen to know where that wretched Spider-Woman is, would you? If you tell me now I’ll consider making you...” she nears your face to her own with her mechanical arm and licks your cheek seductively, “...my pet.”
>...Boner.
>Boner, stop please.
“I-I don’t know…” you croak.
>She frowns.
“...Pity.”
>The arm with the blade is about to pierce you.
>You wince as you legitimately think this it it.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pkDRwiueWb4
>A thick, strand of some sort of web yanks the arm away from you.
>Distracted by this, your attacker drops you.
>“Spider-Woman…”
>You look to see where the webbing came from and…
>Oh my god…
>That’s her…
>Spider-Woman stands with her hands on her heavenly hips.
>Good lawdy them hips....
>Your heart beats longingly rather than out of fear…
>She folds her arms and takes a sassy stance at the mechanical armed terror.
>“You know, I’m familiar with the term “crashing in” but this is kinda ridiculous, Doc-Ock.”
>Her voice is a lot smoother than you thought it’d be.
>Younger sounding too.
>A bit higher and faster than Sunset’s own, but just as nice to hear if not a bit more feisty.
>The trench-coated villain growls.
>“I told you my name is NOT ‘Doc-Ock’ you insufferable welp! It is Doctor Octopus!”
>Spider-Woman scoffs.
>“Pssh, Doc-Ock, Crockpot--it’s all the same, right? Huh. Kinda like your outfit. You know, I’d reeaaallly invest in wearing a shirt under that jacket because right now, I can see your boobs. Just sayin’. Like, feel free to keep not wearing one either, ‘cause I’m totally cool with that too. Probably as cool as him.”
“...me?”
>“Is there anyone else left in this restaurant?
>‘Doc-Ock’ yells in frustration.
>“STOP IGNORING ME!”
