Last thread was thrown out an airlock.
So lets take it from the top.
http://brorlandi.github.io/StarWarsIntroCreator/#!/K72HVSXGCu4G80o0Ko4
Previous thread: >>26478578
General pastebin: http://pastebin.com/P62yDcw1
>>26588419
This thread is ded.
>>26588850
Oh! Have some hope!
>>26588882
>>26588882
>>26588888
So close
>>26588882
>>26589996
Excuse me BUT HOW!
Dammit I leave to enjoy my meager social life and this is the shit i come back to?
>WHAT IN BLAZES WAS THAT? Announces a hysterical pone as a misshapen object hurtles over the quaint sleepy town of Ponyville.
>an unsettling boom washes over the onlookers as the mysterious meteor crashs into the everfree.
____
>Be Anon
>Admiral Anon
>Admiral of your Gymsnor-3 light freighter.
Ugh what hit me?
>You look around the cockpit.
>light is seeping in at an angle and half of the view port is covered in gunk.
>you were the Admiral of a Gymsnor-3
something tells me I'm not getting the security deposit back on that new turret.
>You mumble to yourself.
>looking back you really need to stop accepting strangely easy well paying jobs when you're drunk.
>Crash Landing may happen less that way.
>Unhooking your harness you drop from the what is now a wall of your once trusty freighter home.
Fuck me six ways to Sunday I never should have accepted Adagio's offer for a free drink at her casino.
>'Damn sexy Zeltrons and her enticing ways.'
>Grabbing your datapad from your torn smuggler garb you plug into a data terminal and assess damage...
>Great. Hyperdrive is destroyed, power generator is sporadic, comms are down, radar is out, main computer is fried. and the entire ship is wedged sideways in a bog.
Damn the air is breathable
>Welp time to rummage the ship for supplies.
>>26592077
sorry
this is just getting sad. Why do even keep bringing this thread back?
>>26594574
Isn't it obvious we just want the writefriends to resume their work. Because we have gotten invested in these great stories.
And on that note, get yourselves in here before it dies again...You glorious faggots.
Die bitch.
>>26590172
well I hope you enjoyed it
>>26594711
I'm sorry other glorious faggot, I was playing KoTOR because I thought I should do that before, hopefully, the remake comes out. Also, I'm never leaving the Ebon Hawk without this beautiful bastard.
Wub-a-lub-a-bump-buuuump.
Have the writefags abandoned us?
Has anyone here worked with PVC fabric/vinyl before?
>>26600673
I know one is playing XCOM 2 but the rest are certainly dead.rip sepnon
haha you autists and your stupid crossover is dying
>>26603787
Did this thread had any mention about most loyal trooper?
>>26603787
>on 4chan
>on /mlp/
friend where the fuck do you think you are? Everyone on this site is autistic you dip.
>>26604193
needs more 9s
Not dead, just resting.
>>26604193
Well, I finally came up with a story I'm satisfied with, but I'm buried in too much homework to post it this week.
Speaking of which, what do y'all think Twilight's favorite food is, assuming she's living on Coruscant? Some kind of fruit or melon that's sweet and easy to prepare? Pancakes maybe?
>>26600673
I finally caught back up on killer/b/'s story. Now I'm sad, because he's as busy with school as I am.At least he's almost done with highschool. College is a long tunnel, and I keep losing sight of the light.
>>26603104
I'm afraid not. Try /cgl/.
>>26606924
You.
Your story is next on my reading list.
>>26608236
Dang. I'm building a First Order TIE pilot and need to know about PVC fabric/vinyl/latex for the flightsuit.
>>26608248
/cgl/ always has a general Q&A thread. They will know.
>>26603104
I didn't see this post before. I'm in the process of making some Mando armor out of Sintra PVC foam right now.
G'night bump
bump for green
Slight impact from one body to another.
seeing this thread so dead makes me sad
>>26615254
Yeah. I just wish the writefriends would all come back. I have become too invested in too many stories for this thread to just die like this.
>>26616129
Don't worry. I, for one, still haven't abandoned this thread. I was busy last week with stuff and I couldn't be here as much as I wanted to. I wrote a little bit today and I'm gonna write a little bit more tonight. I'm not exactly sure when I'll update again, but it will be soon.
Good night faggots.
Guess who has the day off because juniors are taking standardized testing?
>>26620869
some namefag
>tfw this thread will never be what it use to be and be full of life again
>tfw drawfriend stopped coming here giving us glorius character drawings and lewds
>tfw sepanon will never come back
>>26620959
Read the following:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1w8LX8aUYL_hF0qbFIPOiCL9lUvaRPgCID6dmPlE2NOQ/edit?usp=sharing
Yes i know it's not pastebin but what can you eh.
>>26621056
Have hope brother...It's all we have.
>>26621056
why did the drawfriend leave? what happened to him?
>>26621182
>>26621056
Please do tell.
>>26621182
>>26621207
I know he started taking commissions and he also hasn't been in a Drawthread for a while. I don't really want to say it butmaybe his ride is over
>>26621423
Do I really have to say it.
I still live
I still have plenty to write
I stillneed more time to brainstrom/deal with life issues
>>26622933
Am going to say this now take all the time you need, JUST KEEP US POSTED! Because if there is one thing I truly hate in this world it's when you guys don't interact with us. I'm not asking daily green,but after three days with complete radio silence we get worried. FUCK!
Sorry for about that I just felt like it needed to be said.
>>26623031
Sorry m8, life's been a bit busy for me lately and after writing two updates in a row previously I felt just a little burnt out so I kind of dozed away from the thread for a while.
I don't plan on abruptly ending my story so long as there are still people here that are interested in reading it. I would still like to continue reading many of the other greens here as well.
come on guy we cant leave this place dead like this i mean there's gotta be stuf to talk about.
The next three rebels episdoes look fucking promising
>sith temple
>temple guards
>maul
come on we need something to talk about
also seventh sister a QT
>>26623171
I want to fuck this ship
Something about this military vessel speaks to me
Like it belongs in a modern TIE Fighter game
>>26623184
>Senses a disturbance in the Force
You are going to put that in the story ain't ya.
>>26623244
Now you are!
>we will never see kyle again
it hurts so much guys it hurts so much
>>26623171
Can we talk about some of the things that were never resolved?
Like how Hondo had like two dozen ships stowed away across several hidden caches?
What about Boba Fett?
All I know is that Ventressdied in the books/comics
So do you guys think Rey is a skywalker or that she just had really shitty parents?
>>26623339
I'm going to my best answer here
Yes.
>>26623330
Boba is probably going to appear sooner or later in the series, maybe in season 3?
and also filoni said that inky was in the clone wars but we just never saw him and that we are going to fin about about his origins in the show. Do you think maybe inky was a temple guard?
>>26623364
inky was in the clone wars but we just never knew it*
>>26623330
Also, what about the cross guard lightsaber? Where does that connect if the first one was Kylo Ren's?
>>26623244
Well now that you mention it, I bet I could find a way...Dubs willing
I mean, it's just such a cool design!
>>26623364
>Grand Inquisitor was in the Clone Wars
Whoa! That's news to me. Kind of reminds me how Grievous was canonically at one point a participant at the Battle of Geonosis
The reason they gave for why no one knew of him at that point was because he supposedly killed every Clone and every Jedi who saw him there
>>26623412
according to the wook Kylo's lightsaber lightsaber was based on an ancient design dating back thousands of years to the Great Scourge of Malachor
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kylo_Ren's_lightsaber
Ezra just found a really old lightsaber
>>26623330
Well Ahsoka's story isn't finished yet, and I think we all know what's going to happen, my body is not ready.
>>26623480
Fuck, wrong pic
>>26623031
Sorry.
it hasn't been that long since teh eu wipe but what do you guys think of the nucanon so far is it better than the old eu or worse?
>>26623171
>>26623330
Maul really made Clone Wars special for me and I am beyond hyped to watch his return
As for what happened to him, considering all that happened to him at the end of the Clone Wars and what happened to him in Son of Dathomir, I'm guessing he must still have a lust for vengeance against the Emperor and Kenobi keeping him going, though I also wonder if he might feel remorseful for what happened to his family and his people after all that's happened.
I'd be really surprised/intriuged if some passing reference was made to Mother Talzin or Savage Oppress in some manner by him. Maybe so many years of being on a permanent Dark Side high has worn off on him, or maybe he's as brutal as ever and is just waiting for a chance to go nuts.
In either case, I bet he's gonna be a Hell of a villain for Ezra and Kanan and everyone else to face
>>26623516
The Vader comics are prettty good.
That moment when he found out about Luke. Fucking epic.
>>26623516
Only strictly Nu Canon things in the EU that I really enjoyed were the Son of Dathomir comic and the Tarkin novel. It's still a bit early to tell how I feel about it all.
One thing that seems clear to me is that everything has been really focused around the Rise of the Empire era up until the new movies now. I'd really love to see and hear more about what the distant past has in store for the new canon.
I want to see what Darth Bane is like this time around
>>26623516
Haven't read much of the new canon. I might need to start.
Goodnight bump
This episode needs to happen sooner.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tpvAi5goOZg
>>26624761
>>26624761
GET HYPED
Is it just me or does his body shape look similar to Inky's...?
>>26625904
Very Inky like, in fact the armor is similar to his, the guard is fighting with his hand behind his back, and the helmet has the Pau'an ear things on the side.
Sidenote, that saber is like the balisong of the SW universe.
>>26626038
>Similar body shape
>Similar armor
>Pau'an ears
>Fights with an unusual saber staff
>Face is hidden and voice is muffledGUESS WHO'S BACK
A little more than a Bump
>>26626038
Saberchucks?
>>26626038
Called it!
Malachor. A place of the Force.
Great knowledge is stored there. Knowledge of weapons and powers thought to be lost.
From the Sith emerged three Lords. Pain. Hunger. Betrayal.
Could these lords rise again? Maul? Sidious? Vader?
>>26630721
bump
Appropriate background music: https://youtu.be/x2KRpRMSu4g
>Zeb and Callus on a frozen husk of a planet
Redemption arc when?
>>26637426
Did anyone give a shit about Kallus before that episode, because I love him now.
Fuccboi
So um... This happened
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s58TvG8V-0k
>>26638778
I somewhat liked him because him winning the bow-rifle duel with Zeb in Season 1 was probably the only time an imperial actually did a thing ever (I'm exaggerating but you get my point). But yeah, he was rather drained of a unique personality, and I really loved "The Honourable Ones" for basically having a villain as a co-star for once, and for developing him well without going full-on redemption. I mean, a redemption is definitely coming, but it wasn't rushedunlike a certain otherwise-best-villain
>>26640306
The project itself is nothing new here but the gameplay is something I hadn't seen before. Having just started KoTOR for the first time a little while ago I probably don't appreciate it as much as people that are drowning in nostalgia, but I must say, it looks great and I hope they get to finish it.
So
You guys want an update this weekend?For real this time
>>26642611
Oh my sith nipples! You're back, you are actually back.
We have all missed you so much.
Hope stay this time.
>>26642611
I would very much love an updatePlease don't tease my dick again
>>26642847
prepare switches
>10
>>26644559
Why do I keep coming back?
This thread is shit
>>26642611
I want to believe.
>>26642611
Good to know the blood ritual I performed to summon you worked. Hate to waste all those bodies.
>>26646109
George Lucas, is that you?
>>26647536
Favorite Star Wars companion?
bumping goodnight
>>26653064
You glorious, loyal Anons you
>>26654561
ara ara
>>26654561
>tfw Disney will never ask /swmlp/ to help write a script
New Inquisitor Anon hopefully tomorrow!
>>26608248
>first order tie pilot
Sounds cool. I'd love to dress up as Hux one of these days, get myself one of those badass military longcoats
>>26659079
First Sarg and now you, shit will be cash.
>>26659079
>>26642611
Bump for the green.
Unfortunately, I won't have an update for you this weekend. I've hit a little bit of a block. I'm going to focus on getting past it today and I will try to get a good update written for next weekend.
Also, just as an FYI, I'm making plans to finally introduceRainbow Dashsome time in the near future.No, she won't be a Gungan. She'll have a good, respectable role.
>>26661032
>Gungan Rainbow Dash
Oh my sides.
>>26661032
just do your best
>tfw still no coco and mando sunset crossover porn from drawfriend
>>26662842
Fuck you for reminding me.
If any one of you writefiends are having difficulties writing lightsaber duels than maybe these videos about the seven(And on duel blade fencing) forms of lightsaber duelling will help.
Form 1 Shii-cho:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n5ioDTd9Em0
Form 2 Makashi:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rh--fgseTlc
Form 3 Soresu:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iAumlKXXXlw
Form 4 Ataru:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=80wzzPkvbWQ
Form 5 Shien:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sfQOV_5re-w
Form 6 Niman:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OG-leP-81WU
Form 7Juyo:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w14Yz0mlCKU
Duel blade fencing:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8jbGjtAJrDA
brump
>>26663979
I need this for... reasons...
>>26663979
I can attest to this
I watched a couple of these to help give me ideas when writing combat
I will be updating in less than an hour. I'm sorry that it's been a few months since I've last done anything with my story, but I should be back on and off for a while.
Since it's been a while, here's a quick review of what happened in the recent past.
After being drafted into the Sith by Darth Pandem, Anonymous is forced into a team with two arrogant yet powerful apprentices. Though he is slow to accepting many of the Sith's more brutal philosophies, Anonomous has managed to improve himself without losing himself.
The more time he spends at the academy on Korriban, the more enemies and allies he makes. Anon struck a fellowship up with Spike, another apprentice that doesn't agree with many Sith philosophies, while also making enemies with Garble and his gang of Trandoshans and Saurin.
Will going through harsh training with three different Sith lords draw Anonymous into a darker path, or will he remain with his own morals? How many trials and lessons can he take?
>>26669064
>The next few weeks go by with striking similarity. Daily training with Ahuizotl reflect on physical conditioning, such as running laps, moving things both physically and with the force, and dueling.
>Gilda treats the whole thing like a game. She runs around, jumps off things, and shows no interest in the instruction.
>Trixie, on the other hand, struggles with almost everything you do. She’s always at the back during running, always lifting the least weight, and always falling off obstacles.
>This does nothing to change her attitude though. If she fails at a task, she ignores it. If she succeeds, she acts like she’s the best on the team.
>What she lacks in physical ability she makes up for with the Force. She can lift almost anything in the training rooms, and can project rather impressive bursts of lightning. Too bad she can’t maintain a storm.
>Over time you began to appreciate Darth Pandem’s endurance training, because Ahuizotl is making you do it at least once a week.
>Those days start early in the morning with a jog through Korriban’s predator-filled canyons. Some days it’s a challenge just to make it back to the temple.
>The next is followed by hours of continuous workout. Running, jumping, climbing, dueling, all is fair game in the eyes of Ahuizotl.
>Finally, he would make you duel him individually. You never managed to score another mark on him, and Trixie still hasn’t scored any.
>Gilda managed to get two more before being launched out of the arena.
>All the while Ahuizotl belittles the three of you, talking about how weak you are and how little potential he sees in you.
>There isn’t a single day that went by without a sore night following.
>>26669204
>On the bright side, you and Spike spend extra time training together. Any fights you do are usually one sided, as Spike has no balance or strength.
>Despite this, he tries his best and has been improving over the course of your sessions. His strength has improved, along with his ability to predict his opponents.
>He also managed to teach you a few things, like how to fight a larger opponent. And, though you won’t admit it, he made good practice fighting a smaller opponent.
>One day, Ahuizotl tells you, Gilda, and Trixie to meet him outside the academy. He says he has a special trial for you today, whatever that means.
>Gilda and Trixie are bickering about what challenge could be ahead and who will do better at it. You decide to take the smart approach and stay silent.
>Outside on Korriban’s desert terrain stands Ahuizotl, who is impatiently waiting.
>He notices you approaching and stops fidgeting. “You’re late.” he says. “No matter. Follow me.”
>Without waiting to see if you’re following him, he turns toward one of the paths leading away from the academy.
>A few minutes of walking pass silently. The temples of the deceased Dark Lords loom in the distance as you walk further from the various buildings.
>As you approach the top of yet another hill, Trixie becomes impatient. “What is the point of this trek? What is the destination?”
>Ahuizotl smiles, though not too kindly. His arms buzz and whirl as he outstretches his hand and sneers “Why don’t you take a look?”
>You reach the top of the hill and your heart sinks.
>>26669215
>Ahead of you is a valley that looks vaguely like an obstacle course, which starts and ends near where you stand now.
>The beginning is an extremely narrow, winding rock path with several gaps in it. These gaps shift from side to side, gliding along the surface of the cliff.
>Next is an open field of some sort. You aren’t quite sure what the challenge is… wait, there’s movement.
>From the shadows near the far wall of the canyon appear several cat-like shapes. A small pack of Tuk’ata.
>Across from them fly a small flock of Shyrack. The bat-like creatures swirl around each other, letting out high pitched screeches as they do.
>One of the Tuk'ata dash out across the open dirt. A few more follow. Several Shyrack break away and swoop down upon the Tuk'ata.
>Bestial roars are exchanged as the opposing flocks begin tearing into each other. Claws rip at fur and wing while fangs sink into pelts.
>After a few bloody moments the two sides retreat. A Tuk’ata and two Shyrack lie in the center, either dead or dying.
>A sudden pounding catches your attention. The final part is a normal looking two tiered rock wall. Only parts of the wall jut out and slam back into the wall, each motion with enough force to break bones.
>You break your gaze from the course ahead and glance at Gilda and Trixie. They stand there, just as awestruck as you.
>Ahuizotl, on the other hand, is revealing his wicked, fanged smile. “Welcome to Talacon Run.”
>Gilda breaks away her stare. “Th-this is Talacon Run?” she stutters out.
>”Yes, it is. And today you will complete it. The only way in is through the first challenge. The only way out is through the entire course and out the end.”
>His grin widens, his eyes stabbing through you. “Unless, of course, you are too weak, in which case I will pull you out.”
>>26669229
>Ahuizotl walks over and stands at the entrance. “You will come to appreciate that I have made the challenges easier than they normally are. Feel free to start your run when you work up the courage.”
>With that he motions toward the entrance. He looks down on you, waiting for your next move.
>Gilda starts walking into the course. “Well, I don’t plan on letting some moving parts and wild animals get in my way. See you on the other side, dweebs!”
>She sprints into the course, but Ahuizotl stops her at the entrance.
>”I forgot to mention something. No lightsabers. Hand them over.”
>Gilda’s eyes widen. “What?”
>”Hm hm hm… you heard me.”
>Slowly taking the lightsabers from her belt, she hands them to her master, then, with slightly less enthusiasm, follows the path down into the canyon.
>It’s going to be difficult to get past the beasts without a lightsaber, but it could be worse. Besides, you survived the caves of Ilum without any weapons.
>You shrug your shoulders, hand over your lightsaber, and enter yourself.
>The rocky path winds down to the canyon wall. The quiet sound of mechanical parts slowly grows louder.
>At first the wall is at a comfortable width, but over time it begins to narrow.
>The wall to your right takes a sharp turn outward as the path enters the canyon.
>Off to the right, the rest of the obstacle course stretches out in the canyon floor.
>Before you can worry about that though, you need to pass your first challenge.
>A faint hovering draws your attention to the ground ahead of you. Or rather, the lack of ground.
>Several stone slabs, about a square meter of rock, float adjacent to the wall on your left. The first is only a step away from you, with another every two or three feet.
>The slabs shift slightly in the air, most likely due to some form of repulsor lifts. You can see Gilda ahead of you, a mere half-dozen stones into the maze.
>>26669236
>Down below the slabs is a foggy drop into… nothing.
>That’s fine. It’s just an unknown distance to a painful drop. It’ll be no problem.
>No problem at all.
>The words of your master echo through your head. “Fear is a path to power, but like all power, it is useless without control.”
>The first slab is only a foot or so out, so it’s an easy step onto it. You test it a little and note that it’s a little wobbly, but holds your weight easily enough.
>You bring your other foot over and balance yourself. The slab rocks back and forward with your weight, but not enough to knock you off.
>Leaning forward for a better angle, you leap jump onto the next floating rock.
>The rock, though moving under your weight, holds you steady.
>The next rock is as easy to land on.
>You’re about to leap to the fourth rock when you hear a panicked cry ahead of you.
>Just a few jumps ahead of you, Gilda is holding on for her life to one of the slabs. Her eyes gape wide and her teeth clench; the stone sits tipped on its side at a distressing angle.
>She scrambles up the side of it as quick as she can, catching her breath at the top.
>It seems like some of the slabs are less stable than others. You’ll need to keep that in mind.
>Sizing up the next slab, you propel yourself forward, making sure to land squarely so you won’t tip.
>Leap after leap, jump after jump, you keep progressing through the floating slabs.
>Finally you make it to the slab where Gilda slipped.
>Taking a few breaths, you hurl yourself across the gap, landing on top of the stone.
>As you land, you feel it shake below you. The slab shutters and dips forward, forcing you to throw your arms back in an attempt to balance.
>You feel your feet about to slip as you find the proper balance. With some careful shifts, you set yourself upright.
>>26669248
>Deciding that slow is better than dead, you take it slower and evaluate your situation.
>You don’t know which rocks are sturdy and which are tipsy, so you’ll just need to make sure you land dead center.
>Focus… focus…
>Taking a moment to psych yourself up, you feel almost like your body acts on its own.
>You shift forward slightly and catapult yourself through the air. Taking aim for the next floating stone, you guide yourself directly on top of it.
>It holds your weight as you land, only bobbing slightly from the impact.
>Now there are only two more stones ahead of you. You’re almost there.
>The next stone is a little wobbly, but when you leap to the final stone, it holds your weight.
>You stand up on the last stone, and look around.
>So… what now?
>You can’t see any more stones around you, yet you are still dozens of feet in the air.
>That’s when your gaze wanders down.
>The fog that had been rolling around before is more dissipated below you. Down below, about 10 meters, is a platform that leads into the canyon.
>That answers that.
>There isn’t any way down though, unless you want to jump.
>Even with the force to augment your strength, you still don’t think you can land unharmed. You don’t want to be injured for the rest of the run.
>Unless… could you use the force to cushion yourself? Slow your fall?
>It’s worth a shot, seeing as you don’t really have a choice selection right now.
>Taking a few breaths and focusing on your own body, you jump off the slab.
>>26669260
>As you feel the pressure of the stone against your feet leave, you immediately begin applying pressure with your mind.
>You are the master here, and you will not bend to the will of gravity. Focus Anon, focus.
>You’re acceleration ceases, leaving you descending at a comfortable pace. Bracing your body, you stick the landing.
>Tucking into a roll, you hit the ground and tumble a little, though it is nothing compared to the force of the full drop.
>Not wanting to look back now, you take time to access your next challenge.
>The canyon down the earthen ramp is clear, with no more than 100 meters to the rockwall. Gilda is already about halfway there.
>You start sprinting after her when you hear a howling off to your left.
>A few Tuk’ata lurk in the shadows, growling at the passerby.
>As Gilda sprints through the center of the canyon, the predators leap out of their hiding places, moving in towards the Zygerrian.
>Gilda, seeing this threat, changes angle to move closer to the other side of the canyon.
>While she has the Tuk’ata distracted, you take your chance and start your sprint. As you do so, you hear a high-pitched shriek, this time off to the right.
>Several Shyrack launch themselves from their caves, ignoring Gilda and going straight for you.
>You reach out with the force as well as watch the swarm fly. Slipping into a focused combat form, you duck and weave through the swarm of beasts.
>Despite your efforts however, the swarm is forcing you to a standstill. All you can do is dodge between the half-dozen creatures.
>It’s disorientating, being surrounded by all the screeching animals. Each flying in a different direction, yet so coordinated.
>A sudden pain shoots down your arm as a shyrack digs it’s claws into it. You give it a swift punch, knocking the beast free and back into the sky.
>You can’t stay here, you need to keep moving. Now!
>>26669276
>Suddenly you notice something. A hole in the swarm.
>Mustering your strength, you charge into the breach, emerging from the circling beasts.
>Unfortunately, the quickly realize that their prey has escaped and begin to follow you.
>Still, you have an opening. Now you can get away as quickly as possible.
>And you think you have an idea as to how to lose them.
>Gilda, no more than 20 meters ahead of you, is still struggling with her Tuk’ata problem. At least six circle around her, trying to bite her with their venomous teeth.
>You charge towards the Tuk’ata, with the Shyrack hot on your tail. You push yourself faster, stronger.
>As you approach you one of your feet on one of the backs of the Tuk’ata, using it as a springboard to catapult you over the pack.
>The Shyrack, who were following you so religiously, collide with the pack of Tuk’ata. Every beast roars or screeches in surprise as their natural rivals hit them.
>Now that the Shyrack are off your back, you have a clear run to the rock wall. Not to mention you’re in first place.
>A shadow flies over your head, causing your attention to shoot upwards.
>Above you, levitating with the Force, glides Trixie. She sneers as she shoots over your head, landing at the base of the wall.
>She starts climbing as soon as she lands, and she’s halfway up the first segment by the time you get there.
>>26669293
>Wasting no time, you leap onto the wall and begin climbing. You can’t even feel the rough stone against your hands as you crawl, stone by stone.
>Even though Trixie has the lead, you are far stronger than her. It isn’t long before you begin closing the gap.
>You are mere meters behind her as she climbs to the halfway point.
>As you climb, determined to catch up, Trixie glances down with a smug grin plastered to her face.
>That smile quickly changes to fear as she realizes just how close you are to her. She swiftly turns back to the wall and begins the second segment.
>Finally you reach the halfway point. As you stretch you look over the second part.
>The second portion of the wall is the same height as the first, but throws in a new challenge. Small pillars shoot out of the wall then retract, each THUMP causing the wall to shake.
>At the top is Darth Immor, who watches the progress of his three pupils.
>And slowly crawling up the deadly spectacle is a certain Chiss.
>You crawl up onto the stone wall, taking each step as it comes.
>The constant pounding is unnerving. You almost jump off the wall as a pillar slams out less than a foot from your head. The BOOM causes a ringing in your ear.
>Don’t take it too fast. Plan a path, and you’ll be just fine.
>You take the chance to slow down and observe the path ahead.
>The pillars are arranged in a pattern, and there aren’t too many of them. Dozens of safe areas exist along the way.
>The pillars also stay extended and retracted for prolonged periods of time.
>You quickly plan a path in your head and spring into action.
>Each leap is like a monkey. Hands forward, feet next, before using your legs to launch up several feet.
>Trixie, halfway up and just a few meters above you, glances down again. She grits her teeth in frustration.
>Good.
>>26669311
>Unfortunately, Trixie doesn't like the idea of playing nice.
>She sweeps her hand down towards you right as you jump. An invisible force presses against your body.
>A shocked yelp escapes your lips as you go flying downward, bouncing off a pillar as you go.
>Sharp pains lance up your back as you slam into the ground. Your side aches where you hit the extended obstacle.
>What burns more is the small fire growing in the back of your head.
>She- she threw you down. She thinks her cheap tricks can make up for a lack of skill.
>You stare back up at the wall, red crawling over your vision. Your brain narrows in on a pattern in the pillars. Almost like…
>Like a path.
>Ignoring Gilda, who just climbed onto the platform, you leap onto the wall with a roar of anger and determination.
>However, instead of using the rockface, you grab hold of the nearest pillar.
>While the pillars are dangerous when they are moving, they are completely safe when still.
>The also make a hell of a hand hold.
>With each jump you let out a grunt of effort. But the effort is worth the time. Each anger filled leap sends you further and faster than you could ever achieve on the rockwall.
>You’re animalistic climbing may not be enough though. Trixie is almost at the top, despite you closing fast.
>She lurks near the end of the wall and throws her head back in a laugh. “Another round won by the Great and Powerful Trixie!”
>And as she grabs the top of the wall, your hand slams down right next to hers.
>>26669325
That's it for tonight. I'm going to try to have an update out this week, though I can't make any promises.
Hopefully I was able provide an appetizer to the main course here >>26642611
>>26669350
thank you!
One more day left for Sarge, I'm still eagerly awaiting.
Sarge bump
Wasn't Churros also going to post this weekend?
>>26674899
Dubs confirm! Working on it as I speak.
>>26674986
>>26676568
It's coming along well, but still not quite finished
>>26663979
https://www.slantnews.com/story/2015-12-16-heres-the-ultimate-guide-to-awaken-your-inner-lightsaber-master-force-awakens-star-wars-disney-jedi-sith
This article is also really helpful if you need tips on how to remember what styles are good at.
tick tock tick tock
>>26642611
Hopes he gets his shit kicked in soon.
>>26678466
Be patient anon writing takes time
>>26678616
B-but they will break their promise.
Sarge is my waifu.
>>26679549
Fuck you asshole I saw him first!
>>26679577
When you say that, it makes me think of the first thread we had for this.
Damn, that was a year ago or more already.
I am going to bed now and when I get back you two had better posted them greens.
And if not...Well, youll see.
>>26678657
This is a promise I'm going to keep
I'm afraid that I will need a few more hours first, as I am about to spend some time with some family
Expect an update in a few hours
>>26680048
it was about a year and a half ago... Long enough for this to be the only reason I visit this board.
>>2668018118 posts written at this point
Be back in a bit
>>26680452
I like where this is going
>>26680452
Damn son. That's a lot of green
>>26680601
IT BEGINS
>>26682089
>Be Anonymous
>”I put all my creds on that Mandalorian girl, she’s undefeated!”
>”Yeah but that little pipsqueak hasn’t been fighting that long. Watch this, that Wookiees’s going to tear her apart!”
>You raise your glass of Tarisian Ale up to your lips and sip it as the various bar patrons gather around the monitors
>It brings a small smile to your lips to see how confident Applebloom looks walking into the ring
>Her opponent, a burly eight foot tall Wookiee, doesn’t look nearly as happy as she does as he stomps forward with his massive sword
>You calmly watch as the two of them clash in the center of the ring, the Wookiee’s blade crashing down against Applebloom as she braces against his attack
>She blocks the blow with her own sword without moving an inch, and then shoves her weight forward as the Wookiee stumbles back
>The fight doesn’t last long
>Less than a minute later, Applebloom manages to knock aside the wookiee’s sword and slash him through his abdomen
>No one hears your chuckle as the cantina goes wild
>”Ah Hell! Look at all his guts flying out!”
>”I think I’m gonna be sick…”
>The camera zooms in on Applebloom, who wears a proud smirk as she stands tall over her fallen foe
“Well, someone looks like she’s gotten used to the sight of blood. What a difference a week makes.”
>One fight every day, for seven days straight, followed by more one on one sparring sessions with you
>Her skills with a saber are as sharp as ever, and it seems like her courage is growing as well
>Well, it SEEMS that way
>After today, you’ll know for certain if she has mastered her Fear
“I hope you’re ready.”
>”Ready for what?”
>>26682120
>You glance up from your drink to see Applebloom staring down at you with a curious look
>Leaving your drink unfinished, you stand up and smile at her
“I have a very special lesson in store for you today.”
>”Oh? What’d you have in mind?”
“I’ll show you.”
>Applebloom could barely contain her excitement behind that bright grin of hers as the two of you walked out of the cantina, back to the spaceport, and into your ship
“I’ll pilot this time.”
>”You sure?
“Yes, I think I’m starting to get the hang of these controls. It’s definitely not as simple as the Lambda was, but i’m getting used to it."
>Taking control of the Gauntlet Fighter, you steer the ship up into the sky and zoom over Taris’ skyscrapers
>”You know, ah really didn’t like it at first but that whole arena has kind of grown on me. Ah’m learning a lot."
“I’m glad. Someone once told me that you learn much more about fighting by genuinely experiencing it, rather than just training and practicing for it. I learned that personally during my first Inquisitorial Hunt.”
>Applebloom leans closer as she sits in the co-pilot chair beside you
>”Hey Anon, you’ve never really told me much about how your first hunt went. What was it like?”
“Well… I can explain it in detail once we’re done for today. I will say that my first mission left me with a very different perspective on life.”
>”How so?”
>Your sighed in contentment as you recalled all that followed your first mission, from your pact with Midnight to your rescue from the Emperor
“I started to believe that I could become something great, and I had a newfound appreciation for the people in my life.”
>Applebloom stared at you with rapt attention
>She always seemed very interested in anything you had to say
>It made her such a great pupil
“Ah, we’re here.”
>>26682149
>You lower the ship onto a landing pad connected with a huge structure that looms over the horizon
>Hundreds of smoke stacks and various spires jut out into the sky as you park the ship before the ruined looking building
>”Is this some kind of factory?”
“Yes, although for what I’m not sure. What I do know is that this place has been abandoned for a very long time.”
>Your expression darkens as you park the ship onto the landing pad and turn to face Applebloom
“Do you notice something strange about this place?”
>”Strange? Like what?”
>Applebloom stares out at the factory for several moments before her eyes widen in shock
>”w-What is that? I sense… the Dark Side. What is this place?”
>You gaze upon the tall ramshackle building before you, various black splotches upon it’s metal hull and huge gaping holes becoming more apparent the longer you took it in
“In ancient times, the Sith razed this entire world to the ground. Their fleet blasted everything with a huge orbital bombardment. Almost nothing survived, but this factory just barely did.”
>Applebloom cups her hand under her chin as she stares at the place
>”How come ah can sense the Force here like this?
“Some say that many of the Sith's own warriors died here during the orbital bombardment as they were caught in the crossfire. Many likely tried to find shelter here. Perhaps what we are sensing are their restless spirits, or the remnant of their hate."
>You hopped out of your seat and walked down the ramp onto the landing pad with Applebloom
“Your lesson today will test your courage. You will travel throughout this factory, and you will not return until sunset.”
>”Wait, that’s it? That doesn’t sound so—“
>Her words trailed off as the two of you approached the ominous steel structure
>The Dark Side of the Force was strong here, and you knew exactly why
>>26682178
>”So… ah’m going in alone?”
>You nod your head, placing a hand onto her shoulder as you gesture to the factory
“There are things in this place that are going to confuse and terrify you, but as long as you remember what you are fighting for then you will overcome.”
>”What ah’m fighting for…”
>Applebloom gives a deep sigh and takes a precarious step forward toward the factory as she brandishes Aay’han
>She grips her saber tightly as she walks forward, a cold wind breezing by as you watch her approach the dark entrance into the building
“Applebloom.”
>She stops and glances back at you
“I will be here waiting for you no matter how long you take in there. Remember that the Force is strong in you.”
>Her lips curl up into a smile as she turns back toward the ancient factory
>”Thank you Anon.”
>She marches inside and disappears into the shadows
>Walking back into your ship, you take a seat within the cargo hold and force away your restless thoughts with meditation
>Being honest with yourself, you freely admit that you are concerned
>She would either come out of this stronger, or she would die
“I know you can pass this. Do no fail me…”
>>26682226
>Be Applebloom
>You ignite Aay’han and raise her in front of you as you walk along through the empty hall way
>Your lightsaber does a good job of illuminating the place as you stride onward
>After making your way through the hall, you find yourself inside a massive chamber
>It looks to be a long way down from where you’re standing, though you can’t tell how deep the chasm goes
>Rusted catwalks as well as various conveyor belts stretch over the abyss around you
“This place looks like a maze. How could anyone have ever worked here?”
>The echo of your footsteps and the hum of your saber resounds as you slowly walk along the catwalk
>You still have this funny feeling, the same you had ever since you laid eyes on the place
>There was something about this factory that Anon thought would put you to the test
“Test my courage…”
>You come to a halt as you notice a sound echo to you
>Twisting back, you stare behind yourself
>The room is so dark that you can’t see too far behind you, though you swore that you heard a second set of footsteps just now
>Your eyes narrow as you sense through the darkness
>Try as you might, you don’t sense anything
“Huh.”
>You slowly turn around, only to immediately glance back down the way you came
>Even though you can’t see or sense anything, you’re positive that someone, or something, is there
“Anon? Is that you?”
>All remains silent now save for the hum of your lightsaber
“Who’s there? Show yourself!”
>You are thrown off balance as your body smacks against the catwalk’s railing and the entire walkway shakes
“w-What the—!?"
>A deafening and monstrous roar greets you from behind
>Your heart sinks as you stare back into the darkness behind you
>It is the same roar you heard from the beast in your visions
>>26682270
>You stand there draped over the railing as a second roar, louder than the last, bellows toward you
>A chill runs down your spine as your saber accidentally slices through the floor
>The railing gives way
“AAAAAHHH!”
>Tumbling aside off of the railing, your body plunges into the abyss
>You wildly flip through the air before gritting your teeth and staring down
>Another catwalk becomes apparent as you raced downwards
>Pushing your body forward with the Force, you propel yourself over to the catwalk
>With a loud clank, your body rolls against the floor and nearly shoves itself through yet another railing as you come to a stop on top of the catwalk
>Just as you begin to think you might be safe however, the roar bellows after you
>It sounds even closer than before
>Without wasting another second, you stand up and sprint down the walkway as fast as you can
“c-Can’t be—! This can’t be happening!”
>After a full minute of running, you leave the chamber and step into another hallway
>You come to an abrupt stop in front of a set of elevators
>To your surprise, the ancient machine lights up as you approach
“These things still work?”
>You glance behind yourself as you smash your fist against the elevator button
>A set of doors opens up and you rush inside, randomly slamming another button as the doors close shut
>Collapsing onto the dim elevator’s floor, you back yourself up against the wall and slowly regain your breath
“t-That… that couldn’t have been real.”
>That bestial roar was indistinguishable from anything but the monster you had heard and seen in your nightmares
“Why? How?”
>As you ask these questions, the elevator doors open up
>These rooms appear to be slightly less dark, and when you glance at exactly what button you had hit you realize that you’ve gone up
>Over a hundred levels up
>>26682298
>You wince in pain as you step out of the elevator
>It appears you bruised your thigh when you made that rough landing onto the catwalk, though you’re just noticing it now
>Grunting, you ignore the pain as you walk down the hallway
>Though it’s no longer very dark in here, you still keep your saber lit
>Small rays of light pierce through holes in the ceiling as you march through and eventually enter a new chamber
>The tiled floor is cracked, several pillars are smashed up and lying across the ground, and a large metal table lies across the room
>It appears that this was once an opulent office for someone quite powerful
>You walk across the room and lean against the table as you take a short rest and try to collect your thoughts
>Your heart is still beating fast, but you’re finally getting a good chance to catch your breath now
>What was it that Anon told you before?
>’Remember what you are fighting for, and you will overcome.’
“Just what am I fighting for anyway…?”
>Are you braving all these terrible horrors just so you can make Anon happy?
>Do you want to honor your family, make your sister proud and do justice to your people?
>Is there more to it than that?
>As you mull over all of this, a new noise penetrates your thoughts
>It is a boom, like thunder
>At first you think that a storm might be starting, though the booming is constant
>For some reason, a strange smell like ash or smoke is permeating now as well
>You turn toward the wall and notice that steel shutters line around the office
>Something is happening, though you aren’t sure what
>Stepping away from the desk, you walk up in front of the steel shutters
>After taking a deep breathe, you raise up your hand and use the Force to toss them open
>Nothing could have prepared you for what you saw
>>26682328
>It was apocalyptic
>Huge bolts of plasma rained down upon the planet before you as if fire was falling from the sky
>The world of Taris was awash in flames as massive explosions rocked the entire world
>You stared in complete horror and watched helplessly as the planet was destroyed before your very eyes
>Taking a step back, you raised your hand in front of your face as the light blinded you
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!"
>Then there was silence
>You opened your eyes and looked back
>The light of the flames and the barrage of the lasers was gone, leaving only the endless city of Taris before you
“w-What was that?”
>Then you remembered what else Anon had said, about the planet having been destroyed long ago through orbital bombardment
>That happened thousands of years ago, and the planet had long since healed itself
>Though, it immediately struck you how much smaller and grimier the skyscrapers looked now, compared to how they looked when you were watching them be destroyed
“Ah must be losing it, or maybe the Force is playing tricks on me?”
>You took in another deep breathe and shook your head
>This place was supposed to test your courage
“Ah can’t let this place get to me.”
>Glaring out at the city before you, with your lightsaber shaking in your hand, you defiantly stood proud against whatever it was assaulting your mind
“Ah won’t back down! You hear me?! None of this is real!”>”I am very real.”
>>26682355
>Quickly twisting about, you lay eyes upon the shadow lying within one of the few still-standing pillars
>Your jaw falls open as two glowing red orbs manifest in the darkness and a figure emerges
>Words fail you as the figure glides forward, her black cape billowing behind her as she regards you with a wicked smile
>As you stare into that evil grin of hers, you remember once more that very same figure you saw standing over Anon as you watched him meditating
“i-It’s you."
>Whoever it is reaches down to her belt and brandishes a blackened steel saber
>Her devious smile widens as the saber ignites and she angles her weapon over her head toward you
>”AH HAHAHAHAHAHA!"
>She cuts her laughter short and sprints so quickly that you almost have no time to react
>You grip Aay’han with both hands and raise her up
>A flash of red sparks lights the room as you block her slash
>Had you not already had your saber in your hand and ignited, then you would have almost certainly been decapitated
>Staring back into those malicious red eyes of hers, you almost feel as if her gaze is sapping away your strength
“GYAH!”
>You shove your weight forward and throw her back a few steps
>Your reprieve doesn’t last long as your opponent falls on you yet again
>Her saber strikes you wildly and relentlessly as you struggle to block her erratic onslaught
>Try as you might to fight back, her attacks move so quickly that as soon as you try to counterattack she is already striking back
>Her ferocity is unlike anything you have ever fought before
>So terrifying it is, that you find yourself forced to step back
>You manage to clumsily slash back and slice at her as you step away
>Your saber strikes at her, only for her own saber to block the blows as she pushes you back through where the shutters once lay and out onto the ledge
>>26682439
>An updraft blows past you, ruffling through your tunic as you are pushed back along the building’s ledge and away from the office
>You refuse to look down as you raise your saber above your head
>Remembering how viciously Anon had fought you when you two sparred together, you steel yourself for this monster’s next attack
>When she rushes out, you are ready
“HIYAAA!”
>You slash down at her with an overhead chop as she creeps closer
>Her saber blocks your strike but your attack manages to stop her in her tracks
>You strike again and again, finally finding your footing as you plant down and fight back
>Then, as you feel your confidence surge, your assault ends
>When you attempt to strike her down with a horizontal slash, Aay’han becomes lodged within the steel hull of the building
>Your eyes widen as you wrench your saber out only for your opponent to regain the offensive
“OOF!"
>You feel the wind get knocked out of you as your opponent slams her boot into your gut
>Stumbling back, you just barely raise your saber in time to knock aside one last stab before you are sent flying
>The last thing you see of her is her manic grin as she tosses her hand forward and blasts you off the ledge with the Force
>For a moment, you are left dumbstruck by it all as you yet again fall
“DAMMIT! ARGH!”
>Tumbling through the air, you right yourself and grasp hold of your saber over your head with both hands as you face the wall of the building
“AAAAAAARRGH!”
>With a fierce stab, you thrust Aay’han into the wall and slow down your descent
>>26682466
>In that brief moment of clarity, as if time itself is slowing down, you realize that unless you do something that you will fall to your death
>You jerk your head down and spot a catwalk that you just narrowly miss colliding with
>Glancing about, you see another catwalk that you are rapidly about to pass by
>Raising your legs up, you kick off against the wall and propel yourself through the air
>Deactivating Aay’han and slipping her inside your belt, you reach out with both hands as you speed downwards at the catwalk
>Your hands grasp hold of the railing just in time, though the railing barely holds
>The thin rusted metal breaks off on one end as your body smacks against the side of the catwalk
“AAH!”
>You flinch as pain shoots up through your side, your body dangling over the edge
>Fighting through the pain, you shimmy yourself over the ledge and roll onto your back
>Grasping your side causes you to cry out as you fight to stay conscious through the pain
>You might have just broken a rib or two
“Gotta… gotta keep awake…”
>Taking your hand off of your side, you reach up and grab the unbroken railing
>You prop yourself up and slowly regain your vision
“a-Anon’s waiting for me outside… sis is waiting for me back home…”
>Your hands tighten over the railing as your breath quickens
“Iron Will’s waiting for me on Dathomir… Clan Ordo…”
>Gritting your teeth, your grip over the railing tightens
>Then you sense her
>Twisting your head, you watch as the dark blue-skinned warrior floats downwards, her arms outstretched as her cape billows behind her
>She touches down over thirty meters away from you on the other end of the narrow catwalk
>The two of you stare each other down as she raises her off-hand to her mouth and lazily suppresses a chuckle
>Your anger grows as your tear the railing apart in your clenched fists and chuck the hunk of metal aside
“WHAT’S SO FUNNY?!"
>>26682518
>Your enemy reignites her blackened lightsaber and breaks out into a sprint as she angles her saber over her head
>Shoving your hand into your pocket, your whip out your mother’s gun, the custom Westar 35, and take aim
>Massive bolts of blue plasma barrel forward as you fire upon her
>She knocks aside your blasts almost effortlessly as she closes the distance, though you don’t let up at all
>Just as she lunges forward with her saber, you take your right hand off of your blaster and brandish your lightsaber
>You narrowly avoid being cut in half as you raise your saber up and block her slash
>She strikes with such ferocity that you nearly lose hold of your saber, but you manage to hold her back just in time for you to raise your blaster
>Her smile finally disappears as you pull the trigger
>A blue blast fires forth as you take aim for her heart
>”AH!”
>She twists aside as your blaster bolt pierces through her cape
>Raising up your saber, the two of you circle around each other
>You strike back with a wide slash that she narrowly blocks, only for you to take aim and fire just as she’s about to counterattack
>Fighting with saber and blaster, you take control of the battle
>Saber clashes against saber as you fire again and again with your blaster
>Then, just as she manages to stab forward and interlock her saber with yours, you raise up your blaster and take aim
>You pull the trigger and fire, but your bolt fails to find it’s target
>As a blue blast flies past her face, she reaches up with her non dominant hand and grasps hold of your wrist
>You gasp as her knee collides into your side
>Your ribs are definitely broken now
>Stumbling back, you struggle to breathe as your foe laughs at you
”u-Ugh!”
>Lifting your head up, you stare at her as she raises an open palm at you
>”Nice try.”
>A storm of lightning erupts from her fingertips and engulfs you
>>26682604
>Your vision is awash in a brilliant light as your entire body jolts in agony
>When it finally ends, you feel your singed body stagger back, your weapons lazily aimed at the ground as you stumble away
>The pain is so intense that you can think of little else
>It is a mystery to you how you can even still be standing now
>Then, you hear her again
>Her mocking laugher reverberates inside your head
>“Oh my! You don’t look so good.”
>A sigh gently breezes through her lips as you stare back at her
>”And just when things were getting interesting. How disappointing…”
>Your heart skips a beat as she takes a step closer
>Then you find your legs practically moving on their own as you sprint down the catwalk away from her
>”Was it something I said?! AHHAHAHAHAHA!!!”
>With saber in one hand and blaster in another, you run away back into the factory
>You swear you can still hear her laughter echoing over to you as you disappear inside the complex
>After running for what could have been several minutes, you find yourself stumbling inside what looks to be a derelict and empty hangar bay
>Half of the large chamber is awash in light from outside while the other is wreathed in darkness
>Sliding behind a pillar, you drop to the ground and deactivate your saber
“i-I gotta…. gotta get out. Find h-help… find Anon…”
>Your weapons fall out of your grasp as you bury your face in your hands
“Ah can’t do this. Ah don’t want to die!"
>”Applebloom~.”
>Your eyes widen in terror as you muffle a small scream with your hand
>She knows your name
>”I know you’re in here Applebloom. I can sense your fear… you reek of it.”
>>26682632
>You try to hide as best you can
>The Inquisitorius taught you about concealing your presence with the Force
>If you just stay quiet and concentrate, you think you can slip by her
>You think it may be your only chance
>Even so, you swear you hear her saber hum closer as her footsteps echo towards you
>”Is this really the best you can do? Can’t you stand and fight me? Poor girl… you’re weak!”
>A tear rolls down your cheek as you hug your knees
>All you want, more than anything else, is to have your family and your friends with you right now
>Applejack, Sweetie Belle, even Scootaloo…
>Anonymous… and—
>”Weak, just like your brother.”
>You gasp as you lift your head up
>”Heh, that’s right. I know all about your brother. Big Macintosh, he had such a big reputation in the Inquisitorius. So brutal, so vicious, he was feared and hated by many. But… you knew another side to him, didn’t you?”
>Your body begins to shake as you stare unblinkingly forward into the shadows of the hangar bay
>”There was a softer side to him, wasn’t there? Big Mac had a big heart, you of all people would know that…”
“s-Stop.”
>”Hahaha~. That fight of his, that last duel with Rainbow Dash. He had her right where he wanted her, and Rainbow Dash did what she had to do to win. She begged for her life, and your brother hesitated.”
“Stop it.”
>”It’s pretty unfortunate isn’t it? Maybe he just never had it in him to begin with, just like you. Your whole family is just one BIG mess!”
>Your chest begins to rise and fall as you grit your teeth
>You reach down and grasp Aay’han and your blaster pistol before rising to your feet
>”Maybe I should just put you out of your misery right now, then I can go pay your sister a visit next! I’m sure she’d be lots of fun TO KILL! HAHAHAHAHA!”
>>26682707
>Swerving your right arm, you slash directly through the pillar, your long saber slicing completely through it
“NOOOOO!!!!!!”
>Your scream bursts forward, cracking the pillar into pieces as huge chunks are sent flying outward
>Huge debris races across the entire hangar bay as the full force of your scream impacts your foe
>She is sent flying through the air as her body slams against the ground and rolls across the hangar bay
>You don’t let up, charging after her before she even hits the ground, as you close the distance whilst opening fire
>She hops up to her feet and begins charging toward you as well, deflecting your blaster bolts as she hurries over to meet you
>”PROVE TO ME YOU AREN’T WEAK! KILL ME!!!”
“AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!”
>Just before the two of you clash, you drop your blaster and grip Aay’han with both hands
>Your red sabers meet in a storm of sparks, washing the chamber in a deadly red glow as the two of you smash your sabers into one another
>There is nothing more that you want in the entire galaxy than to wipe that smile off of her face
>Your enemy raises her leg and slams her boot into your side yet again, though you feel no pain at all
>You slash down at her, your saber crashing into the ground and creating a small fissure where she once stood
>Wrenching your saber up, you sprint toward her just as she rushes to meet you
>Red sabers swirl about, and you swear her saber cuts into your flesh several times, yet the pain does not slow you down
>Then, as you feel your anger continue to explode, you throw all caution aside and slash into her with an overhead chop
>”ARGH!”
>>26682742
>Your foe hops back as her smile crumbles
>”Did you just…?”
>She glances down at her left shoulder
>It looks as if you had finally struck her, leaving a small burn on her shoulder from where your saber had cut
>This isn’t nearly enough for you
>You charge after her with your saber when—
>”Wait, enough!”
>You ignore her as she raises her hand up to you
>”Don’t make me destroy you!”
“SHUT UP AND DIE!”
>A torrent of lightning erupts from her hand and strikes you
>You’re brought to an abrupt stop as her lightning surrounds you
>Aay’han slips out of your hand as you take a step back, but just as you feel you are about to black out you remember all that she had said
>Her voice is joined by that of the Mandalorian that you brutally murdered on Ordo, and by Rainbow Dash’s voice as well
>You hear the a chorus of other voices, chanting at you in languages you have never heard before, as your eyes wrench open
>”What’s this?!”
>The Westar 35 in your hand shakes as you slowly lift it up and grasp it with both hands
“SEE. YOU. IN. HELL!”
>”MIDNIGHT! APPLEBLOOM!”
>The lightning ceases and your shot goes wild, leaving a hole in the wall several meters away from your foe
>With that, you fall to your knees as your smoking body fights to stay conscious
“a-Anon?”
>>26682790
>Be Anonymous
>You sensed that things might have been getting out of hand earlier, but as soon as you felt Applebloom’s anger you knew you had to step in for everyone’s sakes
>Marching down the hangar bay, a barely conscious Applebloom and a rather bemused looking Midnight compete for your attention
>Midnight turns away from Applebloom and walks up to you
>”a-Anon look out! Don’t let her—!“
>Applebloom’s warning is cut short as Midnight deactivates her saber and wraps her arms around you
>The chamber goes deadly quiet as she embraces you
>You return her hug as she nestles her head against you chest plate
>”Miss me?”
>You sigh as you smile down at her
“You have no idea.”
>Placing your hand over her soft and sweaty cheek, the two of you lock together
>Her kiss is more intoxicating than any ale, and to see her body in such a ragged state after a battle is enough to send you into a frenzy
>Even so, you realize that this is not the time for this
>You break apart from her
“Now you see in Applebloom what I have seen for years. Tell me you know it.”
>Midnight’s pleased smile transforms into an unamused frown
>”Yes, she has potential. I am… content with your choice.”
“Excellent.”
>You caress her cheek as you give her a warm grin which seems to dispel her sour mood
“Now then, let me speak with her. She needs to know everything.”
>”Fine then, let’s get it over with.”
>You break away from Midnight and step toward Applebloom
>Even with all the soldiers you’ve seen in your life, you can’t say you’ve ever seen a thousand yard stare quite like hers
>You get the feeling that this won’t be quite so easy to explain, but it will feel so liberating to finally get this all off your chest
>>26682851
“Applebloom?”
>You drop down on one knee in front of her
“Applebloom!?”
>”w-What was… WHO THE HELL IS SHE!?”
>You scowl as you hear Midnight giggle behind you
“Come on then, up we go.”
>You take hold of Applebloom by her shoulders and bring her to her feet
“This is Midnight Sparkle. A High Inquisitor, one of the most powerful warriors in the Empire… and the woman I love.”
>Applebloom’s face scrunches as she looks back at her, then at you
>”i-I… WHAT!? She’s insane!”
“Haha yes, well…”
>You let go of Applebloom and cough into your fist
>Midnight walks over ands stands just beside you, causing Applebloom to recoil from her
>”Let me make this very simple. I knew all about you, your family, and everything else because Anon told me. Those sounds you were hearing, and that vision of Taris in flames, were illusions that I created with the Force.”
>"The Force can create illusions?”
“Yes, it’s an ancient Dark Side power that I imagine only a few people are able to use anymore.”
>Midnight giggles once more as she leans next to you
>”You don’t know how long I’ve wanted to actually test that power on someone. All that theoretical work and I finally got a chance to put it into practice. And it WORKED!”
>”y-You crazy son of a—!”
“I said enough.”
>You can already tell that these two are going to be a joy to have around at the same time
>”Ah don’t understand! Anon, what was the point of all this?!”
>>26682898
>You narrow your eyes as you stare back at Applebloom
“You’ve known for some time now that I am different from most of the other Inquisitors, that I possess power that they do not have. Well now I am going to tell you something that the Inquisitorius doesn’t want you to know. You’ve purposely been trained wrong.”
>”What do you mean trained wrong?”
>Midnight Sparkle stepped forward and raised up a finger as she grinned down at Applebloom
>”We Inquisitors are trained to be able to fight Jedi, but our lords take great care to make sure we never surpass them in power. The truth of the matter is that many of us have the potential to become far more powerful.”
“Midnight has known this ever since she became an Inquisitor, and she revealed this to me not too long after we met.”
>”s-So, why are you telling me this now?”
“Because I care about you. I want to see you become stronger, more powerful than they ever intended you to be. I want you to reach your full potential, so you can serve by my side…”
>You step forward and place a hand over her shoulder
“… as my apprentice.”
>Her eyes widen as she understands the meaning behind your words
“Join us Applebloom, become my apprentice and together we will finish our journey to the Dark Side. We will become SITH!”
>”y-You mean, ah could become a Sith Lord? Like the Emperor and Vader?”
>You nod your head as Midnight stands off to the side and smirks
“Will you do it?”
>Applebloom looks down at the ground as you and Midnight loom over her
>The sun is now beginning to set as the last rays of sunlight begin to die out within the ruins of the hangar bay
>Your eyes, blessed a reddish yellow by the Dark Side’s influence, and Midnight’s naturally blood red eyes help illuminate the darkness of the chamber as you wait to hear Applebloom’s decision
>>26682940
>”I trust you.”
>There was no other answer she could have given that would have pleased you more
>Applebloom drops down to her knees and stares up at you with a look of pure determination
>You smile over to Midnight who gives you a nod of approval before staring back down at Applebloom
“From this day forth, you will walk down the path of the Sith. Together, we will avenge your family, slay our Jedi enemies, and one day we will turn on our masters and create our own empire.”
>The look of strength in her eyes is unlike anything you had ever seen from her before
>It excites you
>”Yes Master.”
>You plant your left fist on your waist as you reach behind your belt and ignite Sentinel
>Standing tall over Applebloom, you lower your yellow saber over her shoulder
“Repeat after us. Peace is a lie, there is only passion.”
>”Peace is a lie, there is only Passion.”
>Midnight stands tall behind Applebloom as she places a hand over her other shoulder and speaks down to her
>”Through Passion, I gain Strength.”
>”Through Passion, ah gain Strength.”
“Through Strength, I gain Power”
>Applebloom’s hands grip into fists as she stares deeply into your eyes
>”Through Strength, ah gain Power.”
>”Midnight’s smile widens as she speaks just above a whisper
>”Through Power, we gain Victory.”
>”Through Power, we gain Victory!”
“Through Victory, our chains are broken. The Force shall set us Free.”
>”Through Victory, our chains are broken! The Force Shall set us Free!
>You raise up your saber as Applebloom rises to her feet, with Midnight resting her hands over your apprentice’s shoulders as she smirks down at her
“Welcome to our little family Applebloom.”
>>26682981
Wew! There we go, one full update and just before the weekend ended too! I hope ya'll enjoy this!
This was a real fun one. A big turning point for Applebloom, and a surprise appearance by Midnight, a character I am very fond of.
As always, criticism and feedback is appreciated! My story sure has become pretty long by this point, and I wish I could have a bit more time to write it, but I am still overall fairly happy with it. Any thoughts ya'll have on Inquisitor Anon, then I'd love to hear it!
>>26683058
I lost two hours of sleep waiting for this. Two hours.
Worth it.
Good night.
>>26683122
Good night Killer /b/!I'll be sure to check out your latest update next
>>26683058
First I just got to get it out of the way, that was great.
The way it seemed like, to me, is that you made your own version of the scene on Dagobah when Luke goes into the cave and encounters "Darth Vader" but in your version Midnight was actually there, it just felt so good to read.
Your story grows more entertaining with every new update, one day it could even rivalSarge's.
I'm still writing a little bit. Should be done soon.
Won't be a very big update, but I hope to write more and more these next few weeks and get into the habit of regular updates.
>>26683211
Thanks man, I was inspired by a few different scenes from Star Wars, as well as a few other things, as I wrote this one out but Luke's Dagobah scene was definitely one of them. It was fun to write it from Applebloom's perspective in that she really didn't know what was going on until the very end.
Glad you enjoyed it!
>>26683309
Sounds good to me!
>It has been countless hours since your transformation.
>Time spent wallowing in darkness and despair, or tormented at the hands of your cruel master.
>Sometimes you are awake and others you are unconscious; though there is often middle ground.
>Your mind fogged, your senses dulled, your body poked and prodded and experimented upon.
>What few moments you have full consciousness are spent in the dark of your cell, kept away from any light.
>Your meals come in the form of tasteless slop you must feed into your mask with a straw.
>You have often attempted to pry it from your head but the pain is too great.
>In the dark of your cell, you feel your mind slipping away as Scorpan’s experiments rob you more and more of your humanity.
>Sensations like taste and touch seem meaningless; all you can hear in your cell is your own labored, forced breaths through the broken filter.
>But the worst feeling of all is the skin beneath your mask.
>You cannot touch it and you are possessed of an itch you cannot scratch.
>Every inch of the skin covered by the mask begs to breathe, to be released, but no matter how hard you try, you fail.
>Your mechanical limb burns some days, as though your body still rejects the augmentation.
>The same with your eyes; sometimes there is a terrible, stinging pain behind the white orbs that you cannot rid yourself of.
>It’s almost like your body is trying to tear itself apart, and your mind is no better.
>Your thoughts are like an ocean that you struggle to stay afloat in.
>One moment you may be passionate about revenge, about breaking out and killing Scorpan, and then another you are in the corner of your cell, crying.
>Sometimes you simply lay down for hours and hours, going over and over the thoughts in your head.
>About how you have failed.
>You failed Master Luna, your friends, your mission…
>>26683629
>You don’t even know if what you saw on Mestare is real anymore.
>Could you truly have found a way to balance the Force within you?
>Light and darkness together?
>No…
>It’s impossible, you know that now.
>And as Scorpan continually drugs you, feeds words into your mind, drains your body of its will, you know that the Dark Side will never let you go.
>You are being changed into something inhuman.
>Something like an automaton.
>Scorpan always taunted you about being a droid, and he still does, for he holds the key to your destruction in the form of the remote detonator.
>The few times he lets you out and does not have you on the surgery table, he is training you.
>One mistake and he tortures you with lightning, or threatens to blow your head into small, gory bits.
>So you don’t make mistakes.
>When you fight with your lightsaber, your moves are perfect and precise.
>When you use the Force, your power is great and controlled.
>Despite you being forced to follow every command and order like a droid, you are growing stronger.
>Because under all of this, beneath the black cloak and the mask burnt to your face, your core is still human.
>And it cries out for revenge, for blood, for horrible pain to be brought upon your tormentor.
>Scorpan has made himself the center of your world.
>You are not allowed to speak or think unless he allows it.
>And he knows that you hate it, that you hate what you have become.
>>26683637
>He wants it, encourages it, augments it and through his painful lessons you come to wield your hatred like a Sith.
>He is slowly moulding you into a weapon, a terrible power to be used to further his own agenda.
>By breaking you down, he now has the pieces in his hands to build you back up into what he wants.
>And at first, there is resistance, as to be expected.
>For a time, death seems preferable.
>But he never kills you, always stopping at just the right limit.
>Like waves crashing against rocks, he continually whittled away at your soul, at every defense, until it all crumbled.
>He made you tell him many things---about your life, your friends, your hopes and dreams.
>Every single thing that happened while you pretended to be someone you are not.
>But your true failure is at last complete when he makes you tell him of Mestare and your experience there.
>To your great shame, you confessed everything to him.
>He was pleased, of course, to have complete power and control over you and to have made you do so.
>And yet, he didn’t seem particularly interested in what you encountered on Mestare.
>As you were made to meditate, Scorpan stalked around you and spoke.
>”The Force is a great many things, Nito. It takes different forms to all who use it. Some see power, others see greatness, and many limit themselves and breed weakness, like the Jedi.”
>”You were once just as weak as they. But you strayed from that path. Why?”
“I… wanted to protect my friends.”
>”That is what you told yourself, yes.”
“I wanted revenge.”
>>26683649
>”Yes… That was the initial seed: the desire to strike out against the council, the Force Hunters, the galaxy itself that seemed to conspire against you… But this is not why you left, Nito.”
>You were silent as he continued to walk.
>”What you fail to understand is that everything, from your leaving the Jedi to your encounter on Mestare, was nothing so grand as what you imagined it to be. It was not an escape, a way out of the doctrines of academia or what you feared at the time would be darkness.”
>He stopped in front of you and looked down at you, smiling that same smile.
>”It was the Dark Side.”
>He knelt, getting on eye level.
>”The Dark Side drew you from the Jedi Temple. Made you fight your friends. Made you flee to an unknown planet and there it took the form it needed to take to convince you to come here.”
>You faltered a bit and looked away from him, but he grabbed your mask and forced you to look into his eyes with your mechanical, milk-white replacements.
>”There was never a middle path, Nito. Only one path, and it led you here, where the Dark Side would take you fully. I have often spoken to you of deception, but the Dark Side deceived you greater than I ever could. It made you believe that you were special.”
>He let go and stepped back.
>”It made you think you could come here and find some hidden path to a kind of ‘grey’ morality. But there is no such thing, Nito. There is light, and it burns brightly, but everything else surrounding it is darkness and shadow. You strayed from the light because the darkness called to you. You answered it, you just didn’t know it because it didn’t want you to know.”
>Your eyes slowly drifted to the floor as his words seeped in.
>At first, you wanted to deny it and he knows it.
>>26683655
>”Ah, I can see it now. You truly believed that there were spirits upon this planet, that they would guide you and transform you. But they never were and are not, other than what the Dark Side conjured up to make you fall even further.”
“No…”
>”Even now, your resistance shows just how truly you are blinded by its lie.”
>He grabbed your head with both hands to force you to stare up at him again.
>”But the truth lies in shadow, Nito. You were not brought here to balance the Force, to bring light into darkness and darkness into light. You were brought here to become Sith, to learn the ways of the Dark Side, to become its puppet.”
>His grip tightened and pain shot through your body, but you knew that if you retaliated, he would kill you.
>”You were brought here to be a tool, an instrument! You belong to the Dark Side just as you belong to me! The darkness is the fire in which you are forged, and I am your smith. You are no longer anything more than a blade to be thrust into the hearts of my enemies. You are Nito!”
>He let go and dropped you before composing himself and putting his arms behind his back.
>Slowly, you crawl up to a kneeling position, and you say the words he wants to hear.
“Yes, Lord Scorpan.”
>”Rise, Nito.”
>You stood before him, head bowed in defeat.
>”Soon, you will realize the truth as I have spoken it. You will accept your new life as my sword, my dagger. Through you, the Dark Side has found a powerful weapon, and I will sharpen you every day.”
>Since then, he has trained you in more traditional methods, but this did nothing to lesson the experimentation, nor did he ever allow you to leave your cell.
>>26683666
>The stone walls of your cell are covered in markings from your robotic hand.
>You have carved words into them---names, places, things, codes.
>Distractions.
>Memories that fade more and more every day.
>Perhaps you feel so compelled to write them into the wall because they are fading from you.
>Anon is fading from you…
>The more time you spend in this darkness, the more you become what Scorpan desires.
>As you sit now with your back against the wall, you feel the markings with your remaining hand.
>Your fingertips trace along the scratchings, spelling them out in your mind.
>Coruscant… Sunset… Coco… Yavin 4… Luna… Fluttershy… Twilight… Mestare…
>Jedi… and Dark Jedi, too.
>And then Sith.
>You know that Scorpan’s words are true.
>The Dark Side took you from the Jedi.
>It deceived you into deceiving yourself.
>There was never any true chance to achieve balance.
>As he says, there is no such thing.
>Now, you belong to the Dark Side, and are its weapon.
>An instrument of its will.
>With no thoughts, no feelings, no will of your own to go against it.
>That’s what he wants out of you…
>A slave, but a powerful slave.
>One who would never rebel out of fear of death.
>One who is strong enough to conquer anything in his master’s way.
>>26683677
>A slave to the Dark Side, shackled to a powerful Sith Lord.
>Slowly, you open your eyes.
>And as you sit in the darkness, resolve finds you.
>Not the resolve to reject the Dark Side, but to embrace it fully.
>Scorpan wants a tool, but you are not a thing to be used.
>You are human, despite his attempts to convince you otherwise.
>Blood still pumps in your veins and your heart still beats.
>And within you, anger, hatred and rage grow.
>He is teaching you how to exploit it fully, to wield the power of the Dark Side, to make you into his weapon.
>But one day, Scorpan will let his guard down.
>One day, he will make a mistake.
>And in that moment, you will not hesitate, you will not falter, you will not fear.
>You will strike him down with all of your might and hate, destroying him utterly.
>There will be no mercy, no quarter given, no hesitation or remorse.
>No peace.
>Using what he is teaching you, the passion he is igniting within your heart, you will destroy him with your great strength.
>Through his lessons since your capture, your power has only grown, though you have been afraid to admit it.
>No more.
>>26683684
>You will hone this power and use it, not to be a tool, silent and obedient, but so that one day you can repay him a thousand-fold.
>And when this happens, when the chains he has shackled you with are broken, you will be free.
>The Force shall make this so.
>And as the darkness creeps in and you make your vow, a frightening realization occurs.
>This is what it means to be a Sith.
>Slowly, your mouth opens and trembling lips whisper the words you truly begin to understand.
"Peace is a lie, there is only passion.
"Through passion, I gain strength.
"Through strength, I gain power.
"Through power, I gain victory.
"Through victory, my chains are broken."
"The Force shall free me."
>At last, now you understand.
>Now you can truly delve into the ways of the Sith and unlock the secrets of the Dark Side.
>He may have taken Anon away from you, but you will take Nito away from him.
>You will be Nito, and you will be powerful.
>Balance no longer matters; that path was a lie.
>There is only one path that remains: the Dark Side.
>You will become just what it wants---more than that, even.
>In time, you will become the strongest user of it than Scorpan has ever known.
>And on that fateful day, you will destroy him.
"The Force shall free me."
>It’s time to stop fighting it.
>It's time to become one with it.
>There is no longer any Anon.
>There is only Nito.
>>26683695
It's good to be back.
Expect more in the coming days as Nito begins to fully embrace the Dark Side and is sent on new missions.
I'm sorry this took so long, folks. I hope I haven't alienated my readers with this hiatus and that you're all still hungering for what comes next and the inevitable ending I'm building up to.
Thanks for sticking with me up to now; it might take some time, but I'll see this tale through to the end and give you the story you deserve.
>>26683724
Best birthday gift yet.
>>26683695
He hath returned
>>26683724
>I'm sorry this took so long, folks.
Don't be. You said you would see it through. I can wait however long that takes.
>>26683724
You're an inspiration to us all.
The more you update, the more I like this Scorpan guy. You know he's a good bad guy when you want to thoroughly kick his ass.
Sure is Dark Side in here
>>26683724
Nice work Sarge. I can't wait to see just what kind of monster Anon's become. I know it's gonna be sick!
I guess instead of Anon the Dark Jedi, we can start calling this chapter Nito the Sith now.
>>26669325
Glad to see another update from you too man. I'm a bit amused that Gilda came in last, and I'm looking forward to seeing what the aftermath of Anon and Trixie coming in a tie will be.
>>26689963
Right back at you! I can't wait to see not only how Applebloom handles Iron Will, but also how Applejack handles her very different sister.
This belongs here.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Djo_91jN3Pk
>>26691314
That was sweet
>>26691314
Holy Fuck this is amazing
I fucking love Darth Maul in pretty much everything he's in, but this is nuts.
>>26694888
>trips
Also, was that Shaggy and Bane that Maul killed?
>>26691314
That was amazing for a fan made video
What are your hopes for episode 8?
Bump
>>26696024
>>26696024
My dick
>>26695619
jedi removal
>>26696968
why?
>>26696974
Something something perspective.
>>26694899
Dubs confirm4uShaggy and Bane died at Maul's hand
>>26697854
>>26700578
I wish I had the energy/focus to write something about Sunsethaving betrayed the Order to join the Inquisitorius, later to be redeemed by Twilight Sparkle, now living in a sort of limbo between the dark and light, knowing she must fight the Sith despite once being one of their most powerful servants, but not feeling worthy to call herself a Jedi anymore, with all the blood on her hands.
She's great for exploring that kind of dichotomy.
Ok, so I have a bit of a discussion topic here, if you were some sort of lightsaber wielder, what form(s) would you favor?
Going off >>26663979 I think two that I would want to do are Form 2, Makashi and Form 5 Shien/Djem So
>>26701058
I'm kinda a form 6 guy. I like the versatility to throw in some Force action, as well as the ability to fight with one or two blades.
>>26701058
I'd go for Form VII. I just find the raw power inherit in this form to be really appealing.
>>26700578
Was there ever a part 2 to this?
>>26703099
>>26701773
Not yet, although there might be. It was only released three days ago, so the group might do something again in the future.
I think it's time for a new thread.
And i have the perfect pic for it.
>>26703713
Wait, three days ago? I could have sworn that came out a few months ago.
>>26703099
>>26705089
There was a similar one that the same people made a long while ago, but it was a two minute combat sequence instead of a 15 minute short film.
>>26704418
Patience Anon, we still have 256 posts to go. Also pic related could be good for Easter.
>>26701058
I'm pretty fond of Form VII as well. I really like the idea of a purely offensive style, and it seems the most well suited to defeating your foes as quickly as possible.
However, I like Form II a lot as well. Seems perfect for fighting other foes in melee, and it being a primarily one-handed style allows you to be more versatile. You can use your off hand to wield the Force in battle, or you could even use a second weapon if you're creative enough and train yourself to do so.
It's difficult for me to choose, but I imagine with going for either of these
>>26700725
Sunset really is one of the best characters for those kind of stories.I'd totally read it
>>26698366
Dubble Dubs confirm
Poor Shaggy
>>26708574
It's moments like that that make me wonder how many Jedi actually went out like that.
>>26709385
Too many
>>26707548
form v dual weild.
Good night Thread. See you in the morning.
I'm back fellas. Finally.
After a month of having a dead computer I finally caved and bought myself a new hard drive.
With that said spring break starts this weekend for me, so I'll try to get back into the swing of things.
It's good to be home again.
>>26711283
Night Killa
>>26711548
Awesome! Welcome back man
>>26710376
Many of those deaths were probably younglings.
>>26711548
Hype
>>26714569
>>26717825
supreme
>>26718434
meme
Was there no Rebels on last night?
>>26719656
Nope
>tfw I won't be able to watch the season finale until a week after release
>>26719855
There wasn't?
Fug, they didn't go on ANOTHER hiatus did they?
>>26719888
Nah they just took a week off, also nice trips.
>>26719954
Oh well sweet!
Didn't want to have to wait too long for Maul AND Malachor
Progressively later each night good night bump
Bamp
Progressively earlier each morning good morning bump.
Are we going to get any green this weekend?
