Previous thread: >>25986190
>What is this thread about?
Pretty much this thread is about anon owning a pony as a slave. He can do whatever he wishes, be it white-knight or an abusing master.
If you're going to be writing some green, please tripfag yourself. It will be easier to keep track of your story.
>Don't know what is a tripfag and how to be one?
Check out: http://4changboard.wikia.com/wiki/Tripfags
>Want to write your own story but you're new to it?
Check out these guides:
http://pastebin.com/V1ujiyJt
http://pastebin.com/bnMmZ2T3
Info about thread maintenance + thread template: http://pastebin.com/ny0npNFS
Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/u/SlavePonyAuction
ALL Stories: http://pastebin.com/cqLCYveb
COMPLETE Stories: http://pastebin.com/82rCVh4j
WIP Stories: http://pastebin.com/mfmaWQDc
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Popular/Recent Stories:
Geologic Assistant (Maud) by RM-Writing -- COMPLETE
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Changing lifestyle (Changeling) by Fireking -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/CndZXCih
No title (Twilight) by VADKRAM -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/8fkha0Qs
Broken Princess (Luna) by Jingle Jangle -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/NLP6dcMr
Fire and Sky (Spitfire) by Lurkernon -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/KDF26gwp
Coming out of you cocoon (Chrysalis) by BugFag -- WIP
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Anon Buys an Applehorse (Applejack) Strumstar Hammer -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/VHK1Pjtf
A deal is a deal (Applebloom) by twiligh/tg/ame_night -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/DK21fjWz
>>26000675
get out
>>26000690
Strong as fuck first post, I have a good feeling about this one.
>>26000705
vadkram is in my thread
>>26000705
>>26000735
Well fireking and I are here.
>>26000752
A THREAD DIVIDED
I lost my parents and I don't know where to go
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>>26000782
stand with me
>>26000675
JESUS CHRIST WE ONLY NEED ONE THREAD AND NOW THERES 3
I'M SCARED
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>>26000808
They're all heretics and traitors.
>>26000782
I'd go with this one as it has a topic, making it easier to find in the catalog.
>>26000832
i hope you get banned you bastard
>>26000808
Meh. It happened a thread or two back as well. There ended up being like 6 threads.
I stick with the thread of the dude who manages the archive.
>>26000835
The popular/recent stories are more up to date too
>>26000832
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>>26000852
That would be meaint got nothing on my hermann
>>26000868
Screw this, Ill make my own thread. With blackjack and hookersim not going actually, fooled you
>>26000876
As the person who manages the changeling story pastebinI feel your pain, and respect the work you do for it.
>>26000893
fooled me there
Ling goes to the spa and meets the spa pones, yes or no
>>26000899
Thanks m8.
I don't understand why others can't just let one individual handle it. I mean if the thread is kill and i havent made a new one go ahead. Like we end up with fucked threads like >>26000664 with no title and no updated stories.
Seriously let the motherfucker do his jobme
>>26000899
>Managing bugpone pastebin
Oooh, boy. My sympathies; I tried managing a thread archive once and it was rough.
>>26000876
i may or not may be the winner, but you will fall
>>26000939
everyone on this thread, let this nigger fall
Skittles sucking her master off in his sleep when?
>>26000939
I JOIN THE CONFEDERATES! SLAVES SHOULD BE SLAVES!
>>26001001
>autism
>>26000977
As long as she empties his bladder for him first.
>>26000960
Considering that a good majority of Anon's who frequent this thread filter you to avoid your shitpost and cancer it probably would be best if you didn't make the threads. I mean unless you literally want a circlejerk of only people who like you completely divorced from any semblance of being 4chanbut in that case just go to the fucking IRC
>>26001014
>Jingle Jnigger detected
CRASHING THESE THREADS WITH NO SURVIVORS
>>26001001
maybe if you'd named that thread correctly
>>26001001
As a man from the American south I find it insensitive that you think the civil war had anything to do with slaves. The only reason slaves were even freed by Lincoln was because he was looking for a way to help cripple the financial base of the confederacy (farming mostly) and freeing the slaves was a free easy method that he could use to strike at the south while also pleasing the abolitionist movement that helped get him into office.
tl;dr: The succession of the confederate states had about as much to do with slavery as the revolutionary war.
>>26000960
>everyone on this thread, let this nigger fall
That thread is full of fags sperging out, no thanks.
>>26000943It's not a thread archive, its a paste of all the stories that involve changelings. I lurk many threads to try to grab up all the relevant green. I probably need to go through and adjust all the tags for stuff that hasn't been updated in forever, but a good chunk of the list I inherited from the previous archiver, and checking dates on last updates for stories is... bleh.
>>26001029
Am I the only one that wouldn't have stopped her from drinking my piss and wouldn't have withheld sex from her?
>>26001048
Aint me
>>26001108
then get out ya filthy white nigger
>>26001107
I don't agree with the piss thing, but I'd have fucked her sideways.
>>26001107
>wouldn't have stopped her from drinking my piss
Sorry not into watersports
>wouldn't have withheld sex from her
Yeah I would probably have given in pretty quickly.
>>26001106
>Monitoring multiple threads
Man, that's even worse than I did. All I had to do was monitor the content (text and pictures) being produced by one thread.
>>26001106can I get a link?
I want to force Skittles to pee in my mouth.
>>26001214>>25962751 is the mainish thread right now. http://pastebin.com/ggkHTVqc is the story paste.
>>25978822 is another thread with 1 person writing changeling green.
>>26000461
You have fun, and when you feel you can not go then let it, but've left something of your own inspiration so that others can read it, I prefer for now these stories of characters who hit bottom or were lost doing something they enjoyed and now only they feel shame and guilt and seek ways to correct it, rather than those that focus on patethic and empty fantasies of sexual power by abusing a pony
>>26001123
>tells me to get out of my own thread
It doesnt work like that
>>26000154
> I ship spitfire and that rod she has jammed so firmly up her ass.
kek
>>26001297
you're*
>>26001297
>Winning
>4chan
Pick one.
>>26001329
you are a useless piece of shit
>>26001252
I'm the one posting the lewds in that thread.
>>26001372
>>26001297
you two are so cute!
Posting in all threads until concensus arrives
continuing from >>25996099
>You reach for the brush with your mouth
>You're able to brush most of the front of you off
>your legs and your belly are mostly clean of the gunk that coated your fur
>You can barely reach your back, the brush is too short
>You could ask for help
>Could being the important word
>You've had bad experiences, but you're still stubborn as a...
>Human phrases were starting to catch on to you. It bugged you
>This shower was really putting you in a better mood
>The steam from the shower was opening your pores and really relaxing you
>You needed this, like a lot
>It's better than you've felt in a long time
>You managed to get some of your back, not all of it, but a majority of it
>You put the brush between your hooves, getting a better grip of it as you brush your hair
>Not after you use the water to wash off the gunk. gross
>Pulling out all the knots is painful
>You never knew hair could be so knotty
>Thats a word, right?
>You hear the tears of your hair as each strand is straighted out after so long
>Previous owners tried to brush your hair, naked
>They didn't get very far, kicking and yelling until the eventually gave up
>You feel your main and shake your head to sample its smoothness
>You end up shaking too hard and your hair whips your eyes
>That's a good sign, You supposed
>Your tail was a bit more work but you managed to straighten that out
>You could finally shampoo your hair
>Their wasn't many products to choose from, just two of the same shampoo a conditioner that looked full from non-use and a body wash
>You pop the cap up and grab the body in your mouth
>Luckily the cap wasn't one of those dumb twist ones
>You apply a generous amount of shampoo to your hoove and begin to lather up
>>26001420
there's like two or three idiots doing this shit, and a few anons making a shtpost or two for the hell of it, and the thing they're going to change the whole thread or something.
>>26001440
This is the thread made by the archive manager.
>>26001491
do you mean the one made by the shitposting namefag, or the random anon?
>>26001530
no, thread by random retards usually end up being deleted by said retard to troll or derail, I learned that lesson a long time ago.
>>26001372
>like you've ever contributed to the thread in a good way
Kill yourself
Bugger it,
>>26001440
>Be Anon
>She's been in there for quite some time
>You wonder if she needs help
>That brush was pretty short
>You consider asking if she needs a hand
>But the thought quickly passes
>You didn't really want to help
>She should be able to do things herself
>You hear a slip and an 'eek' followed by a thud
"Doin alright in there?" you asked, the noise cutting off your thoughts
>"Just peachy!" she reponds
>You notice the change in her voice, it sounded a bit brighter
>That shower must be a welcome change to what she was used to
>You have a lot to explain to her about what will happen in the coming days
>After a few more minutes, you hear the shower turn off, followed by slapping noises
>You assume that her shaking the water off
>Hopefully she didn't open the curtain before she did that
>"Good to go! Can you come dry me off a bit more?"
>You grab a towel from the closet right next to the bathroom and head inside
>The first thing you notice is the wall of steam that pours out of the room
"Was the shower alright?" you ask her as you see how noticably cleaner she is
>You take your towel and wrap it around her, then begin to rub it around her
>She tries to blow the hair out of her nose and eyes and you bring the towel to her hair
>You make sure to get under those wings too
>You finish off drying her and snap the towel up and down to get the loose hairs off
>Just a habit of when you dry off
>Unfortunatly the towel wips your leg and you let out a small grunt in suprise
>Twilight giggles
>"smooth moves, Hoss."
"Like silk" you retort.
>You always hoped to say that at least once in your life
>Her coat shines with a bright purple color that reflects the light from the bathroom window
>"Yeah, You would NOT beleive how much I needed that"
"Good to know, you seem to be in happier spirits, come on I'll show you around."
>He attitude starts to wear off on you
>It's finally nice to have someone around this quiet house
>You almost crack a small grin. Almost
>>26001561
i am the one who deposed you
>>26001530
You are about 19 and a half threads too late.
>>26001567
Now doesn't seem like the best time for a new writefag to be posting, however I am reading, and I am interested
I'm staying here (lovely character limit dividing my posts)
>>26001567
>The bathroom was in a small hallway to the left of the front door you have her note the bathroom closet and the small coat closet next to it
>Exiting the hallway was the living room, a large room that had it's ceiling raised to make the room seem bigger
>In it was a couch, recliner, and a coffee table that had books you've read long ago on it along with a few coffee mug stains
>"You should've used a coaster." She notes
"Hold on a sec." you tell her and she sits down
>"What, whats wrong?" she tilts her head, not knowing what was going to happen
"I didn't remove your collar, not sure why I didn't
>You took off the chain before she got in the shower, but for some reason you neglected to remove the collar as well
>It was one of those weird snap collars that always pinched your fingers when you pushed the sides in
>Not this time, thankfully
>When you pull it off, Twilight rubs her hooves around her neck
>"I've had that on for so long I forgot it was there, thats much better."
>Sort of like how you feel wierd when you take your watch off when you shower
"Well, you won't be needing that here, but I hope you don't decide to fly away at the moment"
>"They numbed my wings with a drug they injected into them, I won't be flying in a while if I wanted to until it wears off"
>You didn't have any drugs or those magic supressants, you hope they are not addictive
"Wing numbing drugs combined with the magic supressants arn't addictive, right?
Fuckit, it's almost 11 here, and I have work, hopefully the edgefags leave and this sorts itself out by morning.
>>26001592
like it
>>26001580
Doesn't matter, doing it anyway!
Someone's gotta post something instead of refreshing all the threads in hopes that one would be victorious
>>26001592
>"Thankfully not, They felt really wierd at first, but my body got used to their effects. But I don't know when they wear off."
>You walk away from her and head to the kitchen and Twilight follows you
>The kitchen was connected to the living room, with a passthrough so those in the kitchen could watch TV too
>You pull out a drawer near the sink and throw the collar in the trash can
"Well that's good to know, hopefully you'll be back on your fee- your hooves in no time."
>Twilight nods in agreement
"Ok, well, obviously this is the kitchen, I hope you don't mind the dishes I leave on the table and everything"
>"I'm sure I'll be cleaning it up one way or another, I can't stand messes. Unless It's an organized mess but I don't see anything like that around here"
>Ok, your not THAT much of a messy person
>You just wait until later to put things away
>While Twilight was talking you look down at the collar you threw away
>You noticed a small flashing red light out of the corner of your eye when you turned your head
>You grab the collar and inspect it
>>26001631
>The light was coming from a small LED in a black translucent box labeled 'PONY AUCTION INC. PONY TRACKER'
>Below it in smaller letters, read 'COIN CELL BATTERIES NOT INCLUDED'
>She was still being tracked. Most likely from the auction house.
>You drop it on the floor and crush the box with the heel of your foot
>It sorta hurt, with small plastic points poking your feet
>But your foot was mostly callused which nulled most of the pain
>"What was that for?" Twilight asks, moving her head closer to the collar's remaing
"Turns out you were being tracked still by the auction house"
>"Huh, I figured, that explains many failed escape attempts, couldn't get the collar off myself."
>You hear a buzz from your phone that was on the table
>You never had the sound on, they annoyed you
>You open your phone expecting it to be another annoying ad from the phone company
>That what it usually is
>Instead, it's from the auction house
>You read it out loud
"'DEAR LOYAL CUSTOMER, IT SEEMS YOUR GPS TRACKER FOR YOUR PONY AS WENT OUT, PLEASE CHECK TO SEE IF YOUR PONY HASN'T INTENTIONALLY DISABLED IT, OR IT RAN OUT OF BATTERIES. IN CASE OF DESTRUCTION OF COLLAR, A NEW ONE CAN BE SHIPPED TO THE BELOW ADDRESS WHEN YOU CONFIRM IT. WOULD YOU LIKE TO ORDER A NEW ONE? TYPE 'Y' FOR YES AND 'N' FOR NO. THANK YOUR FOR YOUR CONTINUED SUPPORT TO THE PONY AUCTION HOUSE INC. HAVE A LOVELY DAY WITH YOUR PONY."
>>26001631
Guess this one wins by default then.
>>26001617
Maybe if you weren't NEET you wouldn't be shitting up threads, why don't you stop being useless anon?
>>26001643
>You read the listed address, it isn't yours
>You thought you gave them the proper address when you filled out your order when you bought Twilight
"Huh, this address is not mine, you know it by chance?"
>You hold the phone to her, her eyes scan the small screen
>"I'm not entirely sure, but if I had to guess, I'ts the address to the man who gave me to you. I assume they have him transporting collars and other 'goods' to the customers"
>What a coincidence
"How do you supposed that happened?"
>"Good question, seems like some mess up of info back at the auction house"
>You honestly don't know what could have resulted in it, but however, you can use it in the future
>You head to a small desk by the kitchen table and begin to scribble the address on a notepad
This is all for tonight
I'll write more tommorrow for those who desire it
Good night, morning, wherever the heck you guys are.
This better be sorted when I come,
In the mean time , pic related
>>26001643
>no one told him about the tracker
spooped
>>26001631
>>26001643
>Actually providing content
You're good people, writefag. Only criticism for now is Twilight flip-flopped between 'humans are evil' and 'I can trust and joke with this person' pretty quickly. Even so, continue please.If she's lying and tries something and gets caught, I will be very pleased. Doesn't have to end in cruelty, just want to see Anon realize how fucked up she is.
>>26001661
And here muh pastebin
http://pastebin.com/8fkha0Qs
GOOD DAY, SIRS
>>26001657
Mommy and Daddy buy that for you?
Wonder how they'd feel if they knew about your fetish for abusing and raping animals?
>>26001666
Will keep in mind
>>26001696
That's neet man, if you're near Eureka CA let me know, I'll come show you what working a blue collar job does for your gains, nothing like manual labor to build upper body.
>>26001696
>>26001782
Stop acting like a nigger, Mr. 20 year old virgin who is gonna either rape a girl and end up in jail, or off himself.
I don't know which thread is canon, but here is bluefast being forced to drinkcider
>>26001814
To anyone else, that's an inciderjoke. But thanks for the draw.
>>26001727
>not staying up even after saying you're going to bed.
>also .gif related
>>26001736
That bastard
I bet his parents are dead, too. The faggot
>>26001814
This thread is canon
>>26001661
I'm sorry but i have already realized the entire premes of your story.Twi is in complete control of the auction house' she sets herself up to be the pony of any veteran of the pony wars so she can kill them. That address is anon c.o's
Sorry
>>26001814
l..lewd
the real deal
pastebin.com/0rmywwyB
>>25992285
>“I-? I used... o-oil...”
>She got really quiet at that.
>Once you covered the cast properly with the plastic you nod her towards the tub.
“I assume you can clean yourself, but take this as a training exercise of me touching you.”
>If you have to say 'touch you' one more time you believe it ceases to sound real.
>After the third time it already lost it's kinkiness.
“Hop on into the tub.”
>You order after she still hasn't moved into position.
>She gave a small whine at your raised voice and quickly obeyed.
>But that was necessary, wasn't it?
>To keep up your master-ish-ness?
>It's not an unreasonable demand.
>She should have figured it out by the simple situation of her about to be cleaned and you nodding to the tub?
>You sigh.
>Are you already to hard on her?
>No, you've been unreasonably more demanding to girls at times.
>But they agreed to bdsm beforehand.
>You shake your head.
>Life isn't fair and you have to play the hand you were dealt.
>You're blind, and she's a slave.
>She can't stand being touched and needs some trust building.
>The whole scenario is practically asking you to be a master to her the only way you are familiar with.
“So, PTSD... post traumatic stress- uhh.. disorder?”
>As you explain it to her as best as you could you, aim the shower head at the wall of the tub and adjust the water.
>After you're done, she remains quiet, and just lets herself be rinsed off.
>From what you've seen, ponies tend to have really long manes, but thankfully Fluttershy's was relatively short, and it didn't need long to be completely damp.
>Huh... 18 months on Earth. Someone must have cut her mane at some point.
“Fluttershy? I think I'll have you get a new mane style for me, what do you think?”
>Differentiate her from her previous life and give her a new style as a marker into a new life.
>>26003309
>“Wha- What do you want me to have, Master?”
“Something cute but practical, I'm not really going for looks, but I want you to be happy with your hair. You have full bathroom privileges, and I expect you to use them.”
“As my slave you need to keep your physical appearance neat and clean. I'll have to be seen with you, and the condition of my property reflects back upon me.”
>“Y-yes, Master.”
>Is she quivering in fear?
“Don't be afraid, Fluttershy. Take this as a good thing to you.”
“Maybe you shouldn't take a full hot bath every day, or use too much shampoo, but the bathroom should be a place for relaxation.”
>“mhm.”
>She only hums in agreement.
“I'm washing you, this is a wellness service to you. I like to show you that I take good care of...
>...my property.
“...you.”
>You need her to start trusting you, that won't happen if you continue to objectify her too much.
>She needs to know her place, of course, but you also want her to be happy as your slave.
>“Th-Thank you, Master.”
“We still need to establish some ground rules, Fluttershy. This is just part of it. I won't punish you for anything you did not yet know. Unless it was something severe.”
>Just how could you punish her?
>You said you weren't going to use pain...? Or did you just say you won't use it without reason?
>You won't let her hunger, deprive her of sleep, or...
>Well, you DO know some punishment methods, but...
>You shake your head clean of thoughts again and begin to apply shampoo.
“Tilt your head back, look up at the ceiling or close your eyes.”
>You begin to massage her scalp with the shampoo.>You feel some stuff which has gotten stuck in her mane, and don't like to imagine what it could be.
>At least you don't think it was bugs.
>Again you have to shake your head.
>You feel yourself stalling with her mane, doing it too carefully and taking your time, to relish in the feeling.
>>26003310
>You'd like to claim you're just thorough, but you like it
>There was something peaceful about the act.
>From the way she leans her head back into your fingers you can tell she liked it too.
>You rinse off your hands and then move to her head.
“Close your eyes now.”
>Giving her a second to do so, you then move on, and wash the shampoo out.
“Your hair feels silky again.”
>You say with a smile as you finish.
>“Thank you... Master.”
“Thanks for the compliment or the service?”
>You chuckle as she tenses up again.
>”The s- both. For both, Master.”
“You don't have to constantly call me Master, okay.”
>She pauses a moment.
>“Okay...”
>You know she wanted to add a 'Master' to it, and for comic relief it would be clishee, but she could control herself.
“You're a smart mare, aren't you, Fluttershy?”
>“No I- ahh... hnn..”
>The rest of whatever she presses out was incomprehensible.
“It's okay, this isn't some kind of test.”
>She tilts her head.
>Does that mean she's confused?
“I mean, take the compliment. I'm content with your performance as my slave so far.”
>“Oh... Thank you, hn-”
>She swallowed the last word, probably a 'master'. It only came out as a gasp.
“Now, I have also bought some shampoo for your coat, and I'd like to wash your face as well.”
“You have to allow me to feel your features again, not that I get anything into your eyes then.”
>She nods. “Of course, Master.”
>You rinse your hands off with clean water once more before laying hands on her.
>Like you did just before you found out about her wing you begin to feel her facial features and try to memorize them better.
>With her coat wet, it was an entirely different feeling.
>At least her face doesn't have any blemishes.
>Only the cigarette burns behind her ear, and the scar on her neck, but those don't count as 'face'.
>>26003322
>Disfiguring someones face is still a hard line to cross.
>There's no scale up fucked-up-ness to place broken wing to compare it to facial disfigurement.
>Ah well, slavery isn't that dandy either.
“Okay. As pretty as I remember.”
>You take your hands of her and reach for the bucket you had placed next to the tub as it arrived with instant delivery. (living in a big city has it's perks)
>Opening it and taking a small scoop with your index and middle finger, you place your left hand below her jaw again for a reference point, but find she had retreated her head back.
>She's quivering again.
“Fluttershy, what's the matter?”
>As you could have guessed she didn't respond, at least not immediately.
>“P-p-p-p... p-pretty? Y-You think I'm... I'm p-pretty?”
>She's very near tears.
>You're very near confusion.
“What?”
>“Y-you called me pretty.”
>She covers her face with her hooves, moving your hand out of the way in the process.
“Fluttershy?”
>“I'm not... I-I-”
>Yeah, she's about to cry.
“It was a joke. I have no reference point as to what people consider pretty on a pony.”
“Quite frankly, you all looked the same to me, besides having different colors, back when I could see them...”
“I mean... I could see different body types as well, but facially?”
“Fluttershy, please. I don't know if you're pretty or not. Your face is... nicely symmetrical. But that's really all I can tell you about your prettiness.”
>Your explanation came out quite fast. You don't want her to cry.
>And it seems to have worked.
>You assume that she has thought about something way different, but you can't possibly grasp it.
>She's quite the crybaby, it seems.
“Hey...”
>You move her hooves away from her face, with her immediately obeying and not putting up a resistance.
>“I-I used to have a longer mane. I- I used to h-hide behind it.”
“Oh...”
>You don't really know what to say to that.
>>26003328
“You want to grow it back then?”
>She gasps a little.
>”I- I ca-?”
>but you interrupt her.
“Of course you can, Fluttershy. I want you to be happy.”
>“Oh, thank you, Master. Th-thank you.”
>You notice her wanting to go in for a hug, but she stops.
“I don't care if you make me wet, if you want to hug me, hug me.”
>“Thank you master, thank you...”
>She puts her hooves around you and continues to thank you.
>You can only awkwardly pat her back with your left hand as the right has the goooey shampoo on it, and carefully not touching her wing.
>Wait... the goo is for her coat anyway.
>You return the hug, as best as you can.
“No problem... no problem.”
>You had no idea that getting her hair back to the way she wanted it, or had it, was such a big deal.
“But you know that eventually hiding behind your mane won't do you any good from my piercing gaze, right?”
>She lets out a broken chuckle.
>A sound so entirely unfamiliar from her it made you smile and tune in on it, chuckling as well.
>To which she only begins to laugh for real.
>You wonder how long it must have been since she laughed.
>The joke wasn't funny, but she's laughing.
>Her happiness and made you smile broadly.
>You're more a laughing-on-the-inside kind of guy.
>>26003333
quads get short mane flutter
>>26001123
Why are you still alive? For the good of the world, just stop breathing.
>>26003891
get out ya nigger
>>26003333
This green is a good green.
I want to green inside this green.
>>26002132
Ha, as if... It's not like I have to change my entire story now to make you wrong, right?
But nah, man, nah
>>26003333This is one of the stories I look forward to.
>>26001580
There is no better time than when you want to do anon.
Tell your story, leaves the work of unification of Threads to Mods
>>26002132Perhaps it is all part of an elaborate plan of Twiligth to meet the human responsible for the murder of one of her friends (or even Princess Celestia) and kill him, (in other words a suicide mission but she has nothing to lose) and after enduring the abuse of various owners finally find it, only to discover that the monster who destroyed his life and his world is really a sad person ashamed by his actions, and seeking peace and redemption he save the lives of at least a pony
>>26001679
>Wonder how they'd feel if they knew about your fetish for abusing and raping animals?
Perhaps hunting enthusiasts are or think it's better than you do that to an animal that makes a person
>>26004244
dubs confirm
>>26004244
>>26004261
Oh shi-
shows over
deleting pastebin
goodbyenot even dubs could make you right, on the right track, In a way. Probably
>>26001333
Someone needs to draw this.F-for science...
>>26003333
>>26003333
Quads confirm, this is a good story. Them feels when he finally got Fluttershy to laugh again are real; I genuinely look forward to where you're going with this.
>>26004465
Well, you could always go poke the Spitfire thread and see if they'll do it. They have a couple of drawfags there.
>>26000935
I'm going to bump this post because I'd like ot know opinions on it
I'll be doing a time skip to actually progress my story, and I'd like to know what people think about a spa day with Ling and meeting the spa ponies
post time skip I'll be dealing with Chrysalis and the plan she had before hand. Lings molting, the return of twilight and cadence (not that they're going to have an uprising, but just having them show up again) and maybe if something else comes up
I'd like feedback and peoples own suggestions to help me along with this before i write though
>>26003662
look cute, very cute, she look good with long or short mane
>>26003662
Thanks hasbro
>>26004913
>>26004338
>not even dubs could make you right, on the right track, In a way. Probably
upp....
Don´t worry, I'm sure your idea is much better
>>26004932
is cute too
>>26004944
this one?
a cute?
>>26004932
and
>>26003662
both are, since they belong to the third prettiest pony
>>26001661
Small update for those who like it so far
>Be Twilight
>This human is too trusting
>He obviously hasn't had anyone in his life for a while
>You could use this
>He's giving you too many freedoms
>He's trying a bit too hard to earn your trust
>Best you can do is try to joke around to seem like your doing better
>Anon puts the pen down and walks back over to you
>You wonder what he intended to do with the man's address
>Maybe the two were working together for something?
>You push that thought out of your mind
>No way Anon, from what you can tell from him so far, would ever willing work with a creep like that
>Anon an apparent loner, his skin is slightly pale from lack of sunlight
>His muscles are toned, so he must still do some sort of exercise
>You were still a little bit weak from the small rations you got from your previous owner
>Along with numb wings and no magic, you can't try to overpower him
>Anon also seems to have some sort of military background, you did see the picture that fell when you knocked it over
>Only for a second though
>Your belly growls
>"Are you hungry?" He asks
>You nod your head in agreement, hoping for something better than table scrap.
>"I could probably see what I have for you after I finish showing you around, not much left to see anyway. Not sure what you eat anyway"
>You follow him to the other side of the kitchen to a door
>"This stair way leads to the basement, nothing much down there except boxes of old... stuff"
>He pauses then begins to walk away and leads you out of the kitchen and to an ajar door on the opposite end of the living room
>"This is just a spare bedroom, you'll be sleeping here if you want."
"Better than the floor or a garage"
>That bed looked very tempting
>Along the wall opposite of the bed is a large bookshelf with books scattered along its shelves and on the floor
>Now you're talking
>>26004975
>"Excuse the mess, never really found time to organize this room either. You're welcome to do as you please with it"
"Just what do you do all day?" You ask him, wondering how his house could be in such a state
>"Nothing really, I don't have a job, the previous job I had paid me a lot for my work, and I didn't really feel the need to spend it on a lot of stuff. I eventually stopped, couldn't take the work load"
"Here, I'll find you something to eat and we can call it a day, it's starting to get late."
"What time is it? I haven't been given the luxery of knowing what time of day it was."
>"it's seven-thirty" he looks down at his watch, which was on his right hand and on the underside of his wrist
>He was right handed, from what you saw when he wrote on the desk.
>Most humans who were right handed wore watches on the left hand facing up
>Just small details you notice in pictures and the like
"Why do you wear your watch like that?" You say as you both walk back in the kitchen
>There wasn't any real reason for asking, just trying to find things to say instead of the silence of the empty house
>Anon opens the pantry door and heads inside. You wait outside as he scrounges for food
>"I ran back in high school I could see my watch better during runs so I didn't have to twist my arm."
>You hear rustling bags and other noises
>"I became used to it that way and it's uncomfortable wearing it the 'right' way"
>He comes out of the pantry with a small handful of food
>"Um, I have some potato chips, some fruit thats kind of old and some fig newtons. Have bread and stuff for sandwiches If you'd like"
>He sets the assortment on the table, the fruit tries to roll away, but Anon cuts off their escape
>Looks like you and the fruit have something in common
"I suppose I could take the fruit out of your hands"
>Chips like to leave a mess of your fur
>Celestia knows what the hell fig newtons taste like
Should do a story about the auction and buying a pony instead of what happens after purchase, the opinion of buyers to see the goods and how they wish to acquire
>>26004984
>He takes a wide plate from a cabinet and begins to slice the fruit with a small knife
>Two apples, an orange and a kiwi lie perfectly sliced on your plate
>He sure is good with a knife
>He sits the plate on the breakfast table and you take a seat on the chair
>Wasn't the most comfortable position but you didn't want to complain at the moment
>Anon puts bread in the toaster and as it heats, takes out a butter knife and a spoon
>You take a bite of an apple slice, a little soft, but still retained some juiciness
>You observe Anon as he takes the very lightly toasted bread and begins to spread peanut butter first with the knife on one, and the jelly with the spoon on the other
>Both slices of bread have a generous amount of ingredients on them
>A true master of his craft
>He pours himself a glass of milk and sets his sandwich creation on a smaller plate and sits across from you
"You forgot to put the milk away, it'll get warm"
>You point to the still open milk gallon on the table
>Anon gets up from his seat again. "Oh right, I always do that"
>Anon sits back down once his task is completed
>You've already finished most of your fruit when he begins to much on his sandwich, he alternates with one bite per sip of milk
>You notice Anon hasn't said anything
>You see that his eyes are stare staring down at the table, he hasn't blinked or really moved them at all
>You try to snap him out of it, you wave your hoove, lower your head to see if he can see you in his peripherals
>He isn't budging, half of his sandwich is already gone
>So you speak up
"So how was your days at school? Any good memories?"
>>26004995
>He looks up at you, didn't move his head, just his eyes
>"Was different, never made any close friends. Had some buddies that I talked to when I ran, but we went our seperate ways after I graduated. Never was able to keep anyone close, stayed silent."
>You were that way when you were in the academy
>But it was your choice to push others away, ignored their invites for social gathering
>Anon never really had that pleasure
>You almost feel bad for the guy
"How long ago was that?"
>"About a decade ago"
>So he's been living like this for almost ten years?
>You weren't sure what humans did when they finish school, you supposed most had a special talent
>They didn't have cutie marks so you didn't know
>You know somewhere along the lines, anon became a solider, but you didn't want to bring it up
That's all for now, I'd have a bit more, BUT I have a teeth cleaning scheduled at 3
Tah tah for now, readers, all two of you
>>26005001
I would say that the mood of Twiligth change very fast, but after a shower the mood of a person or pony may change.
I read you later
>>26004975
>>You could use this
I don't like this cunt.
Continued from http://pastebin.com/CndZXCih
Ling has climbed into a warm dryer
------------
“Ling seriously get out”
>“No”
>God damn it Ling
>You are anon
>You drunkenly bought a changeling
>The changeling is currently in the form of a super model pony by the name of Fleur
>She has also decided to climb into the warmth of the drier
>And you’re deeply confused
>The fuck are you doing to do about a large white pony sitting in a drier
>Well you could turn it on
>No brain that’s a bad idea, you’d scare her
>Then again…
>No
>Yes
>You shut the door
>Ling ignores it, curled up contently
>You poke the glass
“I swear I’ll start it”
>“You wouldn’t”
>You reach up
>She gasps out and pokes at the door attempting to get out
>You aren’t having any of that
>You lock it
>“O.. okay anon, I’m sorry, now let me out”
“Hey, you wanted it warm”
>She gulps
>“S.. seriously let me out”
>When you go to press a button
>Honestly it was the stop button, but can’t let her know that
>She panics and stands up, bonking her head on the top of the machine
>You laugh and open it up
>She tumbles out and grabs onto you
>“That wasn’t funny!”
“Yes it was”
>“No it wasn’t”
>You put your hands on your hips and cock your head looking down at her
>“Maybe a little”
“That’s the spir-”
>You are cut off by the howl of the wookie
>Wait no, that’s the pissed off asian lady
>Hory sheit she speak Engrish
“YOU PUT PONY IN DRYER NO PONY ARROWED IN DRIER YOU REAVE”
>You look up and look at her
>She’s fucking glaring at you
>Even Ling is wincing from it
“GO NOW”
>>26005461
>You grab your shit and pick Ling up under your other arm
>Huh, she didn’t gain weight by changing form
>Neat
>You casually walk past her, ignoring her telling you to leave, as you already are going
>Once out side to hurry your walk and make your way to your truck, quickly hopping into the safety of the vehicle
>Ling is giggling like a mad mare and sticking her tongue out at the lady
>She it pointing her finger and yelling
“Ling, quiet”
>She looks over to you
>“I didn’t say anything”
“You wanted to”
>“You bet your flank I do! Her accent is hilarious!”
>You put the key in the ignition and grin at her
>You put your hands to the sides of your head
>You use your thumbs to tug your eyelids into a slanted shape
>We racism now
“YOU GO NOW PONY NOT ARROWED IN DLIER”
>Ling cracks up and you do to, the both of you laughing your asses off as you make the great escape
>Wew, she understands comical racism!
>+1 for the shape shifter!
>Well at least your cloths are clean
>Well, off you go back home
>The journey, while short, is quiet as can be
>Ling has gone back into her little trance
>You can see a bright smile on her face though, seems she’s sharing what happened with her changeling friends
>What you wouldn’t give to know what’s going on in a hive mind like that
>Oh look you’re home
>You really need to stop with the internal monologue
>Naw
(Just a small update for now)
>>26005053
Have you ever had a nice hot shower after not bathing for an extended period of time?
It is literally magic.
>>26005001
Its all good, the story is pretty good sp far, keep it up
>>26005461
>>26005467
IS IT LING TIME?
>>26005467
>>You use your thumbs to tug your eyelids into a slanted shape
>>We racism now
lel
>>26005728
There's a reason they call us White Knights.
Id like to know why my updates on this thread magically appear in the other slave thread
Strange
>>26005843
You aren't using a tripcode. Someone is copy-pasting your stuff there, because they want it to look busy. They arebadlyimpersonating JohnColt as well.
>>26005862
You're telling me I have to track two threads to see which one the glorious Aj story continues in?
Fuck.
Which of these a NSFW? and good
>>26005909
This one has more posts.
No.
>>26005953
Which of the stories involes sex?..
>>26005953
Which of the stories involves sex?..
>>26005843
The scoundrel
>>26005950
>>26005992
>>26006001
Reguards, Anon has sex.
A Deal is a Deal has some wincest raep.
Hunter Anon has an orgy.
Some other ones probably do as well, but I can't think of them offhand. All those should be in the all stories past at the top of the thread.
>>26006004Maybe if you weren't an angsty angry newfag to the thread, you would see quite a few of the stories have in fact had sex scenes, bro.
>>26006004
With these tendencies we might as well split into a dozen threads with barely any content and get merged with SiM. Do you really want that?
>>26005001
thanks for the words
>Yesterday's Applejack writer got banned for pornz, will be back on the 7th
i was asked to post this here
>>26006175
>>26006175
I can wait.
This thread turned into shit thanks to retarded tripfags fighting over skype for the ''ownership'' of the general.
Literally nobody cares who makes the threads.
Thanks for ruining a good concept, attentionwhores.
>>26006443
more green when
>>26006483
>be skittles
>drink some pee
>try to fuck master
>get a spanking
There's some green for you, Anon.
>>26006636
>I said gg
>but it wasn't gg
>it was bg,
>but no bm
>gg
>>26006636
get here for the resistance >>26000711
>>26006636
>hahaha
>GG
I want underage b& to go back to /v/.
>>26006443
>>26006636
>>26006659
>>26006670
christ just give it a rest
nobody was shitting on your rapefics until the shitstorm, which could now end if you let it
now please just let it go back to business as usual
>skype
Do you really think there is a dedicated skype grou for this?
>>26006636
>>26006706
>>26006710
There is no skype group you fucking retards.
>>26006706
no
he just decided he wants to destroy the thread because people tried to stop arguing with him
>>26006734
Yall a bit desperate aint ya, we got the green here why fight?
>>26006734
>>26006734
if you want rapefics go ahead and do rapefics
nobody cared before all this, there was 3 and nobody batted an eye
>>26006794
I understand you are mad but seriously, this can end now and the shitposting can stop if only you'd let it
>>26006734
I'm staying on this thread. Sorry, Anon. Oops, I meantraitor
>>26003333
I so glad you didn't strip all the cute from it.
Anon was starting to be somebody i didn't like rather than somebody I envy.
You know you're doing it right if others would trade places with anon and give up their eyesight just to be with a pony that isn't even their waifu.
Ever they have a story about the relationship between a Equestrian pony and a horse from Earth how property of Anon?
More than anything focused on whether the two creatures can communicate with them and understand
>>26006908
>anon with a pony breeding farm
>breeds horses too
>ponies can get along well with horses, can understand their feelings and such
>good ponies get to lend a hoof with the horses
>bad ponies have to get bred by a horse
>>26006957
that got darker than i expected
>>26006710
Give a few days, i already saved a lot of stuff. This chatlogs are golden kekeronis.
>>26006975
>give a few days
no, post it
I want proof and if it's true I want to who took part
>>26006975
Post it now, or you are a filthy liar.
>>26006968
It's like the beginning of the applebloom story but with an actual breeding farm
I want someone good at writing to do this, pony slaves being forced to breed and anon's place in all of it, not exactly totally dark, but not cheery either
>>26006975
>i already saved a lot of stuff
Then why not post it now?
>>26006986
>>26006997
>>26007011
No, guys, he needs a few days todoctor some fake screenshotsintelligently compile the gathered evidence.
holy shit what a nice way to derail the whole fucking thread
>>26007005
Fucking write it yourself if its something you want to see. Even if you suck at writing, the only way to get better is to fucking do it.
>>26004870
I timeskip reasonably often in my green, so as long as it's done in a coherent fashion it's perfectly fine.
Ling at the spa sounds interesting... if it's done with her in her actual form, rather than just a pony disguise. Don't know if that'd be possible or not.
Post time skip stuff definitely sounds neat, especially the molting and Twi/Cadance returning. That sounds more like what you have more ideas about, and I'd certainly be interested.
>>26005467
>“YOU PUT PONY IN DRYER NO PONY ARROWED IN DRIER YOU REAVE”
kek
>>26006045
Vinyl story had the best sex, in my opinion.
>>26006975
Give us a reason to trust you. Post the skype caps now, or we'll assume you're just in photoshop doctoring up some nice "evidence".
>>26007024
There was no actual content for a while. There was nothing to derail really.
>>26007054
What do you suggest? a purge? Once its over those fags wil move into the next general to destroy it from inside out
>>26007005
I think there was a green where ponies were reduced to nothing but breeding animals
>>26007103
you have it? or a link?
>>26007089
Just report the posts.
Janitors will show up eventually and delete them all.
>made a massive update of story in prev thread
>vector as well
>come check next day
>nobody gives a shit
>new thread already as well
>not even in recent list
>mfw
Tell me honestly, is the story getting boring by it's lenght? Or is the quality going down?
>>26007198
I don't know about the story, but stuff has been a bit unkempt thanks to the recent shitstorm.
>>26007198
Just don't stop writing everyone is just being a shit.
>>26007198
Probably got lost in the shitstorm.
>>26007198
what story are you writing, again?
its hard to keep track of who writes that.
>>26007120
I guess this
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/25827806/#q25827984
And to a lesser extent this
http://pastebin.com/BG2s2fnX
>>26007198
I liked it
>>26007198
I actually do give a shit about your story. Sorry that it hadn't been included in the recent list.I must of completely missed it. I'll make sure to include it next thread.
What's the most popular story in this general?
>>26007377
I don't there really is one
they're all pretty good
>>26007423
this. my personal favorites are "Deal is a deal" and "Fire and Sky" but their all pretty good
>>26007446
those are my favorites, blindanon story too
also skittles was pretty good but its dead I think
>>26007511
Skittles got an update last thread, i thought.
>>26007538
This.
>>26007544
>Official thread?
>The person who's been doing the threads the whole time and owns the official pastebin is here.
>Not there.
>>26007005
I support it
I was thinking of an idea for a story.
hobo anon (former nurse?). scavenging for aluminum in dumpsters of the rich. (why did he leave his old life behind?) finds half dead discarded pony. broken leg/s. empathizes. tries to save. no one would help because it's only a pony... Begs for the supplies to do it himself.(hopefully he can do it at least part right so she can hobble around)
travels around talking and taking care of broken pony in scrap wagon talking about the past. Ponies could still be a fairly high end thing and dealing with thugs or thieves trying to steel his pony could be interesting.(oh fuck what if their meat was valuable)
I was thinking Minuett because of the cheerfulness despite the dark situation. and because other mini writefag is still missing. though whatever your bliss if anyone writes it.
A real "do it for her" "don't need money just each other" sort of deal. pic highly related
It could end with him getting the fuck out of the city and into a small town where the people are actually reasonably nice. Get some new cloths from a church donation box or something and a place to sleep after he explains he's not banging the pony(or is he?). With his reason to continue living finds a job bagging groceries or something before going back into medical field.
>>26007824
Write your heart out
>>26007824
please, continue..
>>26007824
I would like this
>>26007824
That sounds really nice. I support you, Anon.
>>26007824
I'm heavily interested in this.
>>26005001
Having trouble finding how to progress the story to the next segements
Small update in hopes to get things back on track
c'mon guys we're better than this
>Anon finishes his sandwich and gets up and puts his dishes in the sink
>He grabs your and throws the peels and cores in the trash
>"I'm going to go brush my teeth, I have a dental appointment tommorrow. You're free to go to sleep, i'm sure you are tired"
>You have been getting deprived of sleep for a while
>You nod your head and head for your room
>You see Anon go inside the bathroom and close the door
>In your room, you look back at the bookshelf, a towering structure
>Anon must like to read
>You hop on the bed, the springs giving in to meager weight
>Been a while since you've been in a bed
>The ones at home were much better, but this will do
>You miss home, you're not entirely sure what happened to it when the humans came
>The war lasted years and many settlements were torn to pieces by the human's advanced weaponry
>Your kind's spears and arrows were little match for human's ballistic weapons
>Not to mention the planes that were faster than any pegasus
>Even Rainbow Dash
>You miss her
>You miss all of them
>You'll make it prioity number one when you get out of here
>'But what about Anon?' a small part of your mind says
>Sure, he seems nice enough but
>He's just a means to an end right now
>You will find your friends
>>26007912
>Be Anon
>You are brushing your teeth and thinking
>You do that a lot
>Overthink
>You think of how exactly you want to proceed
>It would be too wierd if you outright said you wanted to help find her friends
>You knew the six of them had some strange supernatural power that your race was unable to understand
>It's why they were so quick to keep them away from each other
>You knew after you find them youd bring them to equestria and close whatever gate held your worlds together
>By no means was it the best plan, you never were known for your ideas
>You usually take things as they
>You're sure the gate was still there
>Twilight would probably think your crazy
>You finish brushing and spit out the paste
>You enter your room and slip into your sleep wear
>You sleep shirtless and with plain grey pants
>You grab your old ipod classic off the small night stand and slip your headphones on
>You didn't usually like ear buds unless you're running
>You shimmy yourself under the covers and look at the cieling
>You prefer laying on your sides, but the headphones make that hard
>Small sacrifices, Anon
>Sacrifices
>You always liked to listen to music before you go to bed
>It's one of the few things that calm you down and clears your mind
>You flip the ipod off its lock and turn on the song you left it on
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7oday_Fc-Gc
>You always found this song rather calming
>Besides the subject matter, you found her voice to be rather calming
>A nice little song to listen to
>You feel a bit better
>You skip the next few songs and come to one of your favorites
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Whr61HeQrHo
>You're not sure why you find this so alluring
>>26007198
I DO love your story dude pls never stop
>>26007824
A good idea, but your English leaves me skeptical.
>>26007943
>You daydream your in a meadow under a tree
>Its dark, cloudy and lightly raining
>But the rain is soothing
>You see a city in the distance
>Lights of rooms in the buildings light up in the distance, as street lights and cars illuminate the streets
>Away from the hustle bustle of the city
>Alone in the dark meadow
>You're... calm
>And the song ends
>You figure thats enough for tonight
>You put your ipod back on the nightstand
>You roll over a few times to become comfortable and fall into a deep sleep
>>26008003
I'll have more in a little bit, just thought I'd put something out to green up the thread.
Pastebin as usual http://pastebin.com/8fkha0Qs
>>26008056
>Twi and Anon playing elaborate mind game, trying to outsmart each other.
>They dont realize their end goal is the same
>Hilarious hijinks happen
>>26008056
Good work Vadkram
>>26005603
No, is Ring time
>>26008287
Crothes onry, no pony.
>>26008287
pick up or derivery?
>>26008056
Ooh, parallel goals but neither trusts the other? Yeah, this could be good.
>>26005467
We need ling finding Anons porn stash!
>>26008308
CROTHES ONRY NO PONY IN DLYER
>>26007952
The sad part is that English is my only language. And I still suck at it. i have never written anything before and it would take 1=2 hours to write each post. Who the fuck has that kind of time?
>>26007849
>>26007852
>>26007872
>>26007883
>>26007888
I really wish I could but after 34 years i still can't do spelling/grammar good. I was just hoping for someone not half retarded to get inspired.
>>26008866
Practice helps. You'll only get better if you actually stretch your writing muscles, so to speak.
>>26008866
Gave the summary of your idea was pretty good, and so can start the practice will acquire more skill, you do not get discouraged, the worst you can do is have an idea and not try to make it happen
>>26008866
You can start with something simple, like everything starts with Anon-hobo feeling some kind of recurring nightmare of his previous life, or tremor in his hands as a result of trauma tries to ease and forget with cheap alcohol that is too afraid to try again (being a nurse, doctor or whatever you want) on any part of your day to find food and shelter to sleep is the pony between garbage bags and cardboard boxes, perhaps abandoned by a abusive owner boring from he or she, or the victim of a sadist who enjoys attacking the weaker beings.
it's just a suggestion
Or maybe Hobo-IAnon what was victim of an attack by some fag who likes to attack homeless, record their deeds and put them on the net, then there is a previous victim, a pony
>>26008866
>The wind starts picking up
>you bring the blue pony closer in your coat
>She instinctily burrows her head in your chest, shuffling her legs that are tucked in the sweater wrapped around her
>She needed it more than you did
>It warms your heart more than any clothing could
>It's going to be a harsher winter than last year
>You bring your body closer to her as a gust of wind blows around into the alley way you call home
>You pick up your cup to inspect the days 'earnings'
>A dollar bill and some change
>Your belly growls ferociously
>Your pony's belly growls in response
>you pick up your pony and trudge the nearby Mcdonald's
>You stagger across the street, buffeted by the wind
>Cars honk at you for interrupting their routine
>The door gives a little *ding* signifying your arrival, you receive informal santions and nasty looks for your apperance
>You wait your turn in line quietly
>You step forward and order a hambuger
>You and the cashier $1.01 and ask for a cup of water, water's free.
>You walk back to your little alley, out of the eyes of on lookers
>You unwrap the sandwich and pick out the onions
>She doesn't like onions
>You nudge her awake and hold the little hambuger to her mouth
>She sniffs it and begins to nibble on it
>She starts to hum
>She finishes the burger and you eat the small handful of onions for your self
>It's not much but you manage
>You always manage
>The pony starts humming more in tune as she pushes herself closer to you
>You whisper to her
"I think i'll call you 'Minuette'"
>She rubs her head in her chest
>You think she likes it
>You think you can go on. Just a little bit longer
>For her, anything
I need an image of a changeling holding a sign for reasons
>>26009303
H-how's this, santee?
>>26009303
Gotcha covered
>>26009303
>>26009495
And this one.
>>26007943
>>You knew after you find them youd bring them to equestria and close whatever gate held your worlds together
holy shit adventure incoming and my body is ready
>>26009495
>>26009513
I should be able to work with these
>>26009389
Sorry, I needed the sign facing the viewer.Changeling lives matter
>>26009238
I like it, keep goingdo not feed the ponies meat
>>26009513
how the fuck do you 'take out' a hole?
>>26009762
magic
>>26009495
There we go
>>26009238
Good begin
>>26009303
google only found this
>>26009951
wow i fucked that up pretty good
>>26009951
Well, so it begins ...
>Damn it's cold. It's really cold.
>You role over to try and maneuver the rags and paper you have covered yourself with.
>The pounding in your head is not as loud as it usually is.
>That's bad.
>Without the noise in your head. Other things creep back in.
>You need your fix.
>But sadly the bottle is still empty no matter how many times you try to drink from it.
>At last the desire for warmth is outweighed by your desire to forget.
>Finally getting up you part the tarp you have hanging over your humble abode.
>That in itself is just a few scraps of wood roughly tied into a >box shape covered by a tattered blue tarp.
>But it keeps the wind off.
>you need to find some scrap to tern into money for booze.
>Slowly making your way out of the ally you know a spot that should be ripe for the picking about this time.
>8 blocks later.
>With your trusty cart in tow you head around back of a large fancy looking building.
>Ignoring the embellishments around the windows and the balconies. You head to where you know there's treasure.
>You can smell it.
>Gonna drink well today, and maybe eat a little too.
>Peaking your head over the rim of the
neck high dumpster you see that it's over half full.
>Ignoring the smell you climb in and start tearing open bags.
>Grabbing any cans and glass bottles you can find stuffing them into a grocery bag.
>Reaching over to the far corner and grabbing anther sack.
>You notice something strange hanging behind it.
>A blue furry... hoof?
What the fuck is that?
>>26009949
cute
>>26010092
take you time, enjoy you work and continue
>>26009740
Only those on the brink of starvation, know the value of taking what you could get
>>26009904
I-I sorta planned on it being a one post 'feelsy' post
I suppose If I come up with anything other small scenarios, Ill write a little more
>>26010092
>inb4 hobo anon contemplates 'thems good eatins'
>>26010140
>I suppose If I come up with anything other small scenarios, Ill write a little more
The small stories are handkerchiefs with which we clean the tears from FEEL
>>26010140
I know I knowI was a bum for 3 yearsbut I was a teen so it was fairly easy
and I can't really think of any ideas but I like the story I feel like you could do a lot with it
>>26010092
you know if the pony turns out to be rainbow dash then i started writing this exact story about a year ago. how odd
>>26010315
Hope things are better for you, Anon
>>26008003
>You find yourself in the grass
>Not green grass
>This grass is rather tall, but brown and tan and easily broken
>You are on your stomach and you lay motionless as you've been for the past 3 hours
>You look down at the steep ledge that descends far to the canyon below
>You are overlooking a settlement, mostly covered by another steep cliff wall
>There is zero chance of you being spotted
>The ponies call this area 'The Badlands'
>You had to fight off some bizarre creatures before you came across the settlement
>Your C.O. gave you orders to find this settlement, It is holding high-tier pony officials, and await further instructions
>You hear the radio from the earbud in your ear spark to life
>"Anon, orders have arrived"
>With your wait finally over, you dig your sniper rifle buried under the grass next you you
>You depoly the bipod, flip up the lens caps on the scope up and begin to focus on the settlement
>You keep both eyes open
>One to look through the scope and another to alert yourself of any movement in your peripherals not in the Line of sight of the rifle
>The man from control speaks up again
>"You are to watch the settlement, wait for the signal, and open fire on any pony in your view, is this understood?"
"Yeah, I understand. What is the signal?"
>"Sigh, Anonymous, you DO know protocol states you are to respond with 'roger'?
"I'm well aware of the protocol, you do know I hate that whole 'roger that' commando stuff"
>"We are well aware. Don't worry, you'll know the signal when it arrives with the payload"
"Payload? What payload?" You ask in a loud whisper
>The radio cuts off, you return to laying in the silents of the night sky
>You are more uneasy, but you ignore the feeling
>Only you can do this
>You are the best, after all
>They laughed at how young you were, you made them put their money where their mouth was
>You had extra rations for the next week or so
>>26010092
>Seing dead animals in dumpsters is not all that uncomon for you.
>hell you once even found a dead girl.
>Well. Part of one.
>But there was something strange about this.
>did someone paint a horse-like animal?
>after moving a few more sacks you realize the leg you first found was hanging in a really unnatural way.
>After digging it out completely you realize it's not an animal you have ever seen before.
>And it's still breathing.
>Anger washes over your face as you realize what has transpired.
How could someone j-jsut-
>no time for that. those bags were probably all that was keeping it warm.
>You pile up trash so you can get it as close to the edge of the rim of the dumpster as you can and climb out.
>you reach over and grab it by two of its good legs and lift it out onto your shoulder.
>then sat it gently as you could down into the wagon.
>Straightening it's mangled leg as best you can.
>probably best it was not awake for that.
>covering it with any spare rags and paper you can find you takeoff for the free clinic.
>2 hours later.
>you arrive exhausted.
>and the line is crazy this time of year.
>you walk in pulling your cart
>the lady at the front desk she seamed rather irritated and asks
>"sir? can i help you?"
>between heavy breaths
ya. I found this in a dumpster.
It's leg is broken.
>"sir this is not a veterinarians office"
>"we don't treat ponies"
ponies?
listen lady i jogged 18 blocks to the only place i new people could help me. i'll do what ever i can just please help.
>the noise you were making must have caught the attention of a doctor in the back because a young man came from the back room.
I can't go on that's all i can do
>>26010802
come on man you can do it
if you have to leave it here for now that's fine but this is good so far
>>26010802
Keep it up and write more later. Remember practice makes perfect.
2 months ago, I was convinced I couldn't do creative writing worth a damn, and experience has now shown that to be not be the case.
Even if you don't continue your story here, keep it up. It's a good outlet.
>>26010953
does Anon ever cum inside rock horse?
>>26010802
keep goin faggot!a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step
>>26010996No. Maud and Geologist Anon had a professional relationship. Sorry if you wanted that, it wasn't where I wanted to take that story.
>>26011047
>maud without her smock
l..lewd
>>26011047
He hooks up with one of her sisters, doesn't he?
>>26010434
>You wait for another half hour
>You hear something loud in the distance
>It was actually rather quiet, but you could hear very well
>You spot two black dots in the distance
>No
>Oh no
>They weren't actually going to...
>They were
>The black dots form into black bomber jets when the come into view
>The noise was clearly waking up the settlement, from the few windows you could see
>They weren't even trying to be covert for this
>The jets whiz past you, and you watch them go
>You turn back
>Two long streams of Red, Orange and A black darker than the night form a straight line from where the jets flew
>Napalm
>You hear the crashing of wood and the rising volume of screams in the distance
>You look through your scope to focus
>To look clearer, You close your left eye
>You listen as screams of terror and pure agony echo through the canyon
>You see a group of ponies begin to run into your view
>The group consists of mostly mares and fillies
>Some of the children are painted black, streaks of fire melting their flesh
>Some already have exposed bones
>Some fall to the ground and writhe in the dirt, instinctivly to put out the flames
>Some ponies avoid the others in their sprint, hoping to not get the sticky, flammable substance on them as well
>Some abandon the children to get out as fast as possible
>Your eyes widen in horror
>You've seen combat, but this was not combat
>'Put them out of their misery, Anonymous' the demon says
>You hesitate
>Your radio snaps you out of your trance
>"Take the shots Anonymous"
>You don't answer, you keep looking
>"Anon, Take the shots." The man at control raises his voice
"I can't"
>You hear a new voice
>"ANONYMOUS, LISTEN TO ME. YOU WILL TAKE THE SHOTS OR IT'S YOUR ASS!"
>It's your C.O.
>"ANON! I AIN'T HEARING ANY FIRING MECHANISMS, FUCKING FIRE!THAT'S AN ORDER, PUT THOSE ANIMALS DOWN!"
>You take the earbud out
