>You are a Homonculus. you are not yet aware of this fact but none the less, that is what you are.
>You lay, curled-up and asleep upon a smooth, cool surface.
>Your gentle breaths and the occasional small squeak, are the only noises that fill the room you are in.
>wat do?
>>25666695
>You are a Homo
>>25666707
pffft, thank you for participating in homonculus quest. good night and sweet dreams. thats it quest done go home
>>25666695
WAKE THE FUCK UP ASSHOLE
>>25666777
>Startled by a flash of numbers in your dreams you are stirred into consciousness
>Groggily you begin to open your eyes, wincing a little at the light.
>You smack your dry lips together and look, blearily, at your surroundings.
>The room you are in is dark, a small light overhead being the only source of illumination.
>Squinting you look around you for anything of note.You can just about make out a few features of the darkened room.
>Faint, pale markings seem to be etched into the floor around you, a dark-brown patch of...something rests just outside of the marks.
>
>Wat do?
>>25666790
Welp, time to get up and walk around.
>>25666790
Call out.
>>25666826
>>25666849
>You , slowly, rise to your hooves.
>Taking a few cautious steps forward you , fall flat on your face.
>The impact shocks you, making you grab at your face.
>Strangely there is no warm gush of blood like you'd expect
>sitting on your haunches you release your grip on your muzzle and look around.
>You call out, but stop when your voice catches in your throat.
>You cough a little, your throat feeling coarse and dry, almost like sand.
>After clearing your throat a little you again try to call out, you cough again and in a hoarse voice let out a small call for anyone to hear
"H-hello?"
>There is no response
>You try again, louder this time
>But again there is no response
>>25666884
Time to start walking
>>25666695
ARE YOU A COLT OR A FILLY
>>25666884
>>25666897
>You decide to again attempt to walk, making sure to take it slowly this time
>Your efforts are fortunately rewarded, you practice a few times, walking in a small rotation to get the hang of it.
>Now standing you again get a look at the room
>Faint markings are etched into the floor and a dried patch of something, lies just at the edge of your vision
>>25666929
Does the dry patch smell?
>>25666929
>You instinctively sniff at the air.
>Only the smell of sleep and stone greet your nasal passages.
>You wrinkle your snout in vague disappointment.
>You move over to the patch to get a better look at it.
>The patch catches the light ads you move closer to it, taking on a deep red coloration.
>You lean in to sniff at the dried red.
>You reel back a little in disgust as the coppery smell of it fills your nose.
>Wat do?
>>25666968
Well there has to be a way out of here somewhere. Time to start following the walls.
>>25666968
Curl up and try to sleep again
>>25666990
>>25667004
oh dear. what a dilemma in choice we have. dubs or 7, 6 will decide the construct's course of action.
>>25667026
Walls
>>25666990
We need food and stuff. Time to leave this place.
>>25667037
The number wills it.
>Gulping a little, the inky blackness sending a small chill along your spine you begin making your way up the passage
>After what feels like forever, you eventually make it out of the passage and step into another small room.
>The room is certainly better lit, pale sunlight streams in from a crack in the all to your right,Giving the room a cool glow and highlighting some old furniture nearest to it.
>The furniture , a sofa, an wooden table and a decrepit bookshelf is old, dust, cobwebs and the stains of time marring its surface.
>The furniture, despite the wear and tear looks quite posh, as though it would have belonged to a rich person.
>Turning your gaze , you notice an open door up ahead of you, the wooden surface is splintered and looks as though something had rammed through it.
>Beside the door, resting upon the floor is a dusty mirror, partially reflecting small streams of sunlight in front of it.
>>25667089
Door time
>>25667089
*A wooden table, excuse me.in fact i'm just gonna get this out of the way now, im not a very good writer.
>>25667100
>Not wanting to stay in the room any longer than you need to, you begin to head out the door.
>But you stop as you pass the mirror.Your reflection catching your eye
>What do you see?>>25666912
y'see doc? just wait a little before ya start pulling our pants down
>>25667134
A hairless affront to equinity.
>>25667147
i think this is the character creation part yo
>>25667134
Closely check between hind legs. Very closely.
>>25667160
And that's what I want to create.
>>25667165
>A small blush creeps its way onto your face as you make a realization.
>You twist your neck round to peek between your legs.
>Your sheath stares back at you.
>Lifting your head back up you examine yourself further , is there anything else about your appearance you notice?
>Perhaps yourcoat color, mane style, mane color, tale style, racial features?
>>25667219
How about a crystal pony? They need more love.
Wish a shiny translucent blueish coat and a still short, purpelish mane because we are apparently young and it just recently started growing?
>>25667264
well i need food. im gonna leave the thread alone for a little bit, decide amongst yourselves. bye now babies
>>25667219
ERF
ill name myself.here
http://strawpoll.me/6184253
>>25667264
>>25667309
Erf crystal sounds good
>>25667336
oooh.i-i cant make him crystal. sorry.
>>25667385
make him look like the middle one
>>25667385why
>>25667396
>even number
>"the middle"
Anon pls
>>25667219
can we look like ponigg
>>25667396
we are male
>>25667406
story/lore reasons darlin
>>25667410
explain.
>>25667396
the green one? ah yes anon filly
>>25667423
we could make him feminine.
>>25667428
this is ponigg
>>25667467
oh right that thing. yea nah
>>25667219
Orange coat, pink mane
>>25667428
Though crystal ponies are literally the same as earth ponies, only with a more shiny coat. But it's your story, OP.
How old is the character anyway? Looks like fresh out of a clone tank. We could make him a Pegasus who can't, due to his age and underdeveloped body only being able to fly through short hops.Like a chicken or something
>>25667264
This but unicorn.
http://strawpoll.me/6184494
http://strawpoll.me/6184253/r
http://strawpoll.me/6184494
>>25667518
hes a wee babby. jus born
>>25667517
>>25667518
Scootabloo-bloo colors, as a young pegisi sounds nice.
>>25667595
Yes, this
>>25667518
And I though being a Pegasi who can only fly for a few moments gives a interesting character. He can't avoid problem by just flying away and out of reach, but he still is able to reach certain places with his short flight ability.
Plus it's cute to see him hop around like a bird.And perch on high structures like one.
>>25667659
2 is good.
>>25667659
Coat? Wings? Tail? Mane?
C2 also, for whatever body part.
>>25667670
>>25667683
c2 it is
>>25667688
the poll voted for erf. what , mane and tail colors you guys want?
>>25667750
Either green or pink.
>>25667750
How about striped/alternating C1/C3?
Also what race is Erf now? Or is that the next poll?
>>25667768
Erf = Earth Pony
>>25667768
wha? dude erf means earth pone.
>>25667758
you sure? what shades u thinking
>>25667750
Go with green.
>>25667777
Oh f, I'm an idiot
>>25667786
okay, forest, emerald, pale, radioactive?
>>25667792
How bout this?
>>25667796
sure
do we want long or short hair?
>>25667840
Long hair because we can just get a hair cut if we want it to be short.
>>25667840
Long
something like this okay? i can color it potentially but then i have to leave
>>25667992
forgot pic because im a fucking retard
>>25668005
Das fine.
>>25668005
>>25668056
She kind of looks like a carrot.
Works for me.
Quest is over, it was shit, get out we're closed.
>>25668076
>She
>>25668079
It's a combination of the hair/muzzle. Looks pretty effeminate.
>>25668079
We a souless trap now? I'm good with that.
>>25668079
>>25668088
get that girly hair out of his face maybe?
![ComeInWereOpenClosed[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/PiBtnWG.jpg "ComeInWereOpenClosed[1].jpg")
>>25668108
>>25668088
this didnt turn out how i wanted it to. threads gettin deleted, ill be back next year with better writing and art.
>>25668108
Yeah, if you want him to look like a guy, the hair can be long in the back, but don't have it go past his forehead and over his eyes.
Unless you're okay with girlystallion, then it's fine.
>>25668125
Oh come on, you shit.
>>25668125
>deleted
Well. You can certainly try.
>>25668125
not sure why you asked us what we wanted in terms of aesthetics if you're just gunna shut us down like you weren't expecting us to criticize you. you could of just gone with the base design and i doubt anyone would of given a shit
>>25668223
we criticized him? where?
>>25668125
Do you really think a game involving even 10 4chin posters will ever turn out as expected?
>>25668125
>this didnt turn out how i wanted it to
What do you mean by this? I don't see what went wrong.What were your expectations, anyway?
>>25668420
I'm morbidly curious too, what happened that was so unexpected?
>>25668431
maybe op hates carrots
If he didn't want us to design the horse then he should have just had it premade.
>>25668477
>>25668431
i think op has bad self-doubt issues. that or something else happened?
>>25668440
What a faggot.
>>25668532
>this didn't turn out how i wanted it to
OP's moral fiber is still flawed
Gingers confirmed for soulless..
also OP is a faggot who can't into dungeon mastering.
>>25668691
forgot pic, shit crackers.
>>25668079
>>25668125
>ill be back next year with better writing and art.
I think your problem is that you're a fag.
No matter how good your writing and art is, you're still going to be treated exactly the same way.
So either nut up or shut up.
>>25668569
>OP's moral fiber is still flawed
OP needs to have his central nervous system for the benefit of the both of them
>>25668858
Maybe thats why he left? to meat the human
>>25668858
>>25669021
Where was his skellington during all this?
>>25669064
in the war
>>25669092
#bringourskellingtonshome
I think he ran away because he wanted the mc to be a stallion. I went back and didn't see any prompts for gender.
masturbate
I hope some other QM hijacks this
Telll us what you were planing to do, i want to know what happens next
>>25671180
>wake up
>Explore old ass castle
>Find spoopy alchemy shit and blood
>Hear spoopy armor noises
>Choose to confront armor noises or not
>Optional boss fight
>you cant win it though
>Make luck roll, if you succeed other homonculus will show up
>Other homonculus acts as distraction for you to get away if you want
>Can either fight along new pone, or flee into the everfree
>Flee into everfree
>Wander round, explore, forage, do survival bullshit
>Meet black dog in fork of path
>Dog talks
>Tells you to come with him
>Either go with dog or go down path towards village
>End of chap 1
>>25671938
>"Hey kid like follow me"
