Hurt feelings edition!
Pictures and Green welcome!
Not that w-we want them or anything!baka
Current Writefags:
http://pastebin.com/u/riggyrag
Some Anon that hasn't continued his story.
>>25375287
aw yis
Whatever Riggy decides on, it must end in sex.
>>25375287
But Pinkie is the exact opposite of tsundere. In fact, she'd probably carve her name in your skin so you'd always be hers.
>>25375410
I actually made Pinkie a tsundere in my story I'm currently writing.
You can read it here if you'd like:http://pastebin.com/yJKshQ4c
>>25375410
What are you new?
>>25375410
I'll be posting in an hour or so!
>>25375415
Lets get this thread going.
Riggy please continue.
>>25375613
I just need to do some college work, then I'm free for the day. I'll paint this place green.
>>25375657
just when i was about to get to bed.the pain of living on the other side of the world
>>25375657
pzl promise there will be sex
>>25375427
Not him, but to these threads yes.
How tsun is pinkie?
>>25375704
not to little and not to much
it's best to read it for yourself
>>25375595
Trixie Tsundereof Twilightgreentext when?
>>25375764
Seems like that's done a lot.
I'll put it on my swanky stories list anyway for future writing.
Yiss, oldfag from last thread here.
>>25375287
Praise the lord!
>>25375856
>that filename
I kek'd
Okay! Assignments done, currently writing.
Had to move to the library because my roomie had loud friends over.
>>25375833
>Seems like that's done a lot.
wait... there is actual greens of Tsunderexie x Twilight, anyone got any stories?
>>25376848
What was the assignment, by the way?
>>25377069
I have two essays, 3 3d Models, 400 pages of reading, and a presentation all due by this Friday, so I did the essays today.
It's hard balancing work you love to do with work you don't.
>mfw this much homework
>>25377098
Does this mean no >green?I'm worried to be honest family
>>25377175
No, no. I still dedicated today to green, I just haven't finished the upcoming update yet. It's a long one.
>>25377208
Goodthank the lordriggy
>>25375287
>The oven stops buzzing, and only the sound of the rain remains in the room between you.
>One might say it was inevitable, but you really did not expect him to be so direct about it all.
>Your heart throbs against your ribcage like a prisoner yearning to escape from this unpleasant circumstance.
>But it has no choice, and neither do you. You must face this unexpected challenge on your own.
>You try to kickstart your brain into action, coming up with something witty and off the cuff.
>Anon stares at you patiently, his smile reduced to a tired frown.
>Your mouth hangs on its hinge.
>Come on brain, make words.
"Uhhh~" you whimper weakly
>WORDS, MAKE WORDS. W.O.R.D.S.! WORDS!
"Whuhh.. Whaaat kind of question is that, d-dummy? Honestly!" you say dissmissively.
>You turn your head to stare at the floor instead of him, but you can feel his gaze as it drills through your conscience and mines your thoughts.
>"Pinkie, please." he beckons.
>You can't keep your eyes from being dragged back to his.
>"Please just answer the question." he quietly requests.
>His melancholy tone tears through your heart strings like claws through flesh.
>You wish an answer was simple.
>You wish you could say, 'I really really like you! You make me feel really happy, and I want to be with you! I want to talk to you! I want to love you!"
>But how could you? After all these months of damage? After all these weeks of hate? All these days of exclusion? How could you say such things?
>It was going along well, but now you have to face the music.
>"PInkie." he says again.
>You have to say something.
>>25377269
>"Do you really hate me?" he asks more slowly.
>You take a deep breath.
"N-no! I mean, not as much as- Erm, no what I mean to say is- Um, I didn't think you were, no, no. That's not right... I-I..." you stammer away.
>Anon's expression is as hard as stone.
>He doesn't look mad, or happy.
>It reminds you of a stare that Maudy would give you.
>But that expression doesn't belong on Anon's face.
"I-I... I don't think I do!" you finally let out.
>He turns away from you, looking at his feet.
>How weak can you get? He asked you if you HATED him, and the best you could do is 'I don't think so'?
>'I DON'T THINK SO'?!
"N-no, wh-what I meant to say was-"
>"Save it." he says sternly.
>The venom in his words seeps into your bones and sends a bolt of adrenaline through your veins.
>He's never spoken to you like that before.
>He's never spoken to anypony like that before.
>You instinctively reel back.
>He turns to look at you.
>His eyes peer from below lowered eyebrows, and his mouth remains neutral.
>The expression freezes your blood and cracks your soul as he looks at you with such cold and raw negativity.
>"You don't have to pretend anymore. You don't even know if you HATE me or not, even after all this you can't just give it to me straight."
>He shakes his head, his eyes never losing their gaze on you.
>"I'm sorry I bothered you so much."
>You can actually feel it as your heart begins to crush itself, as if the force of your guilt was compacting it into dust.
>Suddenly Anon stands once more without faulter, getting out on the other side of the bed.
>You stare up at his back.
>"I'm going home. I'm well enough to stay in my own bed." he says without turning.
>He grabs his jacket from the coat hook next to your bed and puts it on.
>"I'll get out of your hair now." he says with obvious sorrow, his facade of being unaffected crumbling.
>>25377281
>Your legs feel unstable, and your body starts to shake violently.
>You chew on your hoof as tears start to form at the corners of your eyes.
>This can't be how it ends.
>You can't have blown it.
>As soon as he walks through your doors, he'll never want to be friends with you.
>He'll never give you another chance.
>Your attention turns to the frying pan hanging off the side of the oven.
>He still hasn't turned around.
>You grab the frying pan and clutch it close.
>Maybe you can try again when he wakes up.
>You know it's risky.
>You know it's crazy.
>But you don't care.
>The tears flow down your cheeks and drip off your chin.
>The dam has been broken, and you sniff your nose as it leaks down your face.
>You grit your teeth and ready the pan, as you move around the bed.
>Suddenly he turns around.
>His stone expression looks confused.
>Your heart slams around your body, and you shake uncontrollably.
>He's seen you.
>But you can't give up now.
>THIS IS YOUR ONLY SHOT.
>YOU HAVE TO MAKE IT WORK.
>YOU HAVE TO KEEP HIM HERE.
>IT CAN'T END NOW.
>NOT LIKE THIS.
>>25377293
Why.
The feels
>>25377293
>>25377293
>Anon thinks Pinkie is trying to kill him
>Relationship forever broken
>>25375833
I don't see trixie as much of a tsundere, really.
>>25377293
Damnit, why do you make me feel this?
>>25377293
rip anonpie
you died before you lived
>>25375287
This shit's fucking gay.
>>25377293
>You're a little scared, if you're honest with yourself.
>But you're nowhere near as scared as you are sad and confused.
>As you turned around to find your shoes and head for the door, you see Pinkie brandishing a frying pan with a manic look in those beautiful blue eyes she has.
>She's shaking violently, and tears stream down her face in rivers that wet the floor.
>Her hair is deflated, and hangs limp from her head.
>At first you thought she was angry.
>But that simply cannot be the case.
>Before you can wonder her intentions, she lets out a yell and charges you with the pan.
>She's fast for something of her size, but you're still taller and stronger.
>She jumps at your head with the pan in tow, and you catch her just beneath her forelegs.
>She swings the pan wildly as she yells, missing your head by centimeters at best.
>You lean your head back with each swing, losing your balance and falling backwards onto the bed.
>Your back hits the bed, and she slams into your chest.
>The frying pan flies out of her hooves and onto the ground.
>Pinkie lays on your chest for a moment before sitting up.
>You still have her in your hands as she begins to kick and punch you in the chest.
>She may be small, but her hooves still hurt.
>You don't have time to think about what's going on.
>Something rises up from the depths of your mind.
"PINKIE!" you yell at her as she continues to wildly thrash, suspended by your hands under her shoulder.
>She kicks and flails wildly, trying to hit you.
"PINKIE! CUT IT OUT! PINKIE!" you scream at her, "PINKIE!"
>You feel rage as she continues to try and hurt you.
>As if she hasn't already done enough.
>Does she really hate you to the point where she hurts you?
>It's unfathomable how heartless she seems in this moment.
>>25377745
You sound like you'd have trouble poring water out of a boot with the instructions on the heel.
>>25377815
"PINKIE! PINKIE!" you continue to yell, trying to calm her down.
>Her futile swings suddenly slow down and subside.
>You slowly look up at her as you feel something wet drip on your chest.
>Her eyes are closed, and she sobs loudly in your arms.
"P-pinkie?" you stutter.
>She starts to cry viciously, but not out of frustration.
>These are the tears of someone who is hurt.
"Oh... Pinkie..." You say quietly.
>There's a part of you that is still confused, still mad.
>But that part of you would probably be the same that gets along so well with everybody else.
>The part that takes control now is that one that doesn't talk to anyone.
>And it isn't confused or conflicted at all.
>It feels like this is all so... familiar.
>You sit up, still holding Pinkie.
>Your injuries no longer occupy your mind as you draw her close to your heart and tuck her head beneath your chin.
>She loudly cries into your chest, soaking you shirt with her tears.
>With every sob her shoulders jump, and you clutch her tightly.
"Shhhh shh. It's okay Pinkie, it's okay." you say in a motherly coo, "Everything is going to be okay... I've got you..."
>You don't know what's bothering Pinkie, or why she's in this state.
>But you do know that you're doing the right thing.
>And for a moment, the words you speak feel like they're directed to more than just her.
"Everything is going to be okay."
>>25377745
opinion discarded
>>25377825
>Her sobbing slows, and she breathes carefully in your arms.
>You don't say anything. You wouldn't know what to say, anyway.
>The pattering against the window makes the room feel cozier than it did before.
>You're still recovering from the sudden burst of adrenaline you had experienced before.
>But now it's turned into a warm sensation that passes through your limbs like honey.
>She sits in your lap, burying her face in your chest for a long time as you slowly rock back and fourth.
>You feel her heart beat as it thumps against your own.
>She puts a hoof on your chest and pushes herself away slightly.
>You look down at her as she looks up at you.
>Her mane is still deflated, and her expression is unsure.
>You smile down at her, not because you feel like you must, but because you feel happy for some reason.
"I bet you feel a little better, don't you Pinkie?" you say with a smile.
>You close your eyes and chuckle a little, in the hopes to get her to join you.
>Suddenly a hoof wraps around the back of your neck.
>Something warm hits your lips.
>You open your eyes to see Pinkie's closed as she pushes herself into you.
>Your brain tries to comprehend the situation on a deeper level, but at the moment all you know is this:
>Pinkie Pie is kissing you.
>>25377615
Tsundere Trixie a qt
>>25377560
In light of my last update:No.
Pic related
>>25377854
It's not like I love your story or anything...b-baka...
>>25377836
Please continue, you based motherfucker
>>25377836
I am hitting f5 faster than I can jerk off
>>25378071I kek'd a bit too hard
>>25377854
I'm sorry I said that senpaiI just wanted you to notice me
what about anon? do you think he'd be a tsundere?
>>25378313
Anon is a Marty Stu, he can't be tsundere:^)
>>25377836
>You don't pull away.
>Not that you could, anyway. Pinkie has quite the grip.
>But you feel sort of like a deer in headlights at the moment, freezing up and not knowing how to react.
>Pinkie pushes her muzzle into you with great force, and her soft, wet lips feel tender upon your own.
>She kisses hard, but slowly. Her eyes remain shut during the entire thing.
>You push back a little, if only to stay upright as she thrusts herself into you.
>She starts off tame, if only for a moment.
>Soon she starts invading with her tongue, searching for your own.
>What's a guy to do when someone is kissing them like this?
>You haven't been kissed in a long time, and certainly not so passionately.
>And while you may be confused as you how you ended up here, that lonely voice in your head tells you to just relax.
>You push your tongue into hers.
>She exhales harshly as you do, and you feel her body twitch.
>She pulls you in with fierce passion, and her tongue invades your mouth with great lust.
>It feels... incredible actually.
>You can't return it in any capacity, she's in complete control.
>Her lips mash sloppily against yours in the most intense session you have ever experienced .
>Your blood pumps through your body with incredible heat, and Pinkie continues to hold you close as she tastes you even further.
>It feels like a full body experience, and even though she is small, she leans into you hard enough to make it difficult to stay upright.
>>25378330
>She breathes deeply, and gasps any time you push back into her.
>When you do return any kind of passion, her's is reignited and she comes back full force.
>After a few minutes of beautiful and intensely lustful kissing, it begins to slow again.
>Finally it winds down to your lips touching softly.
>Her eyes finally open and look into yours in the after glow of it all.
>You know you're wearing a stupid look on your face, a combination of pure joyful happiness, and unparalleled confusion.
>Her face turns the reddest you've ever seen.
>From a distance, Applejack might mistaken her for some of her crop.
>She stares into your eyes with an embarrassed look.
>She looks at your lips, then your eyes again.
"What... was that?" you say finally.
>She makes a weird face, like she's about to cry again.
>"Y-you really are a d-dummy!" she says
>She quickly gives you another peck on the lips before jumping out of your lap and off the bed.
>"I-I'm sorry... I'll just..." she says as she crawls under the couch at the other side of the room.
>She drags the blanket down off it to obscure your view of her.
>You can still see her flattened tail poking out from under it though.
>"I'll just, get out of your hair. I'm sorry." she says, muffled by the blankets.
>You stare at the ad-hoc blanket fort, still spinning from the kiss.
>You don't know how to feel.
>You don't know what to feel.
>You don't know what in the world just happened.
>And you certainly don't know what to do next.
>Yeah, you don't know anything.
>But you feel like you'll soon change that.
>>25378347
THE CIRCUMSTANCES HAVE CHANGED
>>25378347
>>25377615
>I don't see trixie as much of a tsundere
>>25378347
>Pinkie kissed you.
>That's a fact now, that DID happen. That was a thing that took place.
>Just because it is a fact does NOT mean it lines up with what she does.
>For all you know, she might just find arguing to be a major turn on or some shit.
>But... no that can't be it.
>There was the crying first, and the attacking and the screaming.
>It was all very hectic, and happened very fast.
>And now Pinkie is embarrassed by it all, which is unheard of.
>If there's one thing you know about Pinkie, it's that she NEVER gets embarrassed.
>She has no shame, at least, that's what everypony else has told you.
>But now she is literally hiding under a couch, hoping you forgive her for something you're not even sure of.
>What does all this mean? What the hell does she think of you?
>After all the arguements and exclusions, now she acts like THIS!
>It's maddening, it's confusing, and it swirls in your brain like a tornado blasting through farmland.
>An instinct takes hold that tells you the best course of action is to leave, and give her space.
>That, she needs time to calm down, and you need time to formulate.
>And all that sounds swell and dandy.
>But it's not right, and you know that.
>Leaving her like this is not only cruel, it's unproductive.
>You're not the sort to leave without making sure everything is okay between the two of you.
>So you're not going to just leave it like this, you're going to figure all of this out.
>>25378604
>And as you think of what to ask and how to ask it, a sudden thought emerges from the recesses of your mind.
>Why do you care so much about her?
>What drives you to continue this quest for friendship?
>And why do you, now, feel so at peace with your decision to persevere?
>That kiss awokened something inside you, something powerful.
>Something... happy.
>And now that you have felt it, you wonder whether PInkie feels the same.
>Happy, that is.
>After all, she chose to kiss you, and she seemed to enjoy it in the moment.
>So is she happy she did it, and if so why?
>Could it be that...
>Could she perhaps have...
>You heart thumps in your ears.
>You bite your lip as the ideas form.
>Could she perhaps...
>Like... you? As in, romantically?
>You sit with the thought as the rest of your mind falls silent.
>You need answers, and you're not getting them sitting in this bed.
>Your feet hit the floor as you stand from Pinkie's bed.
A damn good story.
Keep the pastebin updated, mang.
>>25377836
>>25378330
>>25378347
>>25378604
>>25378623
Page 8? Not on my watch.
>>25378623
>You messed up.
>You messed up so bad.
>Like, super duper bad.
>Why did you kiss him? Why couldn't you control yourself just a little longer?
>Your thoughts drift back to the kiss.
>You lick your lips as you do, still fresh with his taste.
>At least you can have that memory with him. At least you had one good kiss before he became to scared and confused to talk to you ever again.
>You sigh.
>That kiss was somehow everything you ever needed at this moment, and everything you shouldn't have done.
>You hope it was worth it, because it's all over now.
>His feet hit the floor in the direction of your bed, and you feel a tingle roll down your spine.
>You can't bear to here him walk through the door, but you have no choice. You're not going to intervene again.
>You place your hooves over your ears so his steps become low thumps that you can only vaguely hear.
>The thumps leave the direction of the bed and start to walk around it.
>But they don't go to the door.
>They grow louder and louder until they are right next to you.
>Then, a sudden, loud series of thumps all at once.
>Then there is silence, no other thumps, nothing. The only thing you can hear is your heart beat.
>You remove your hooves from your ears, making the rain outside clear once more.
>There's still no sound.
>You peek through a small crack in the blankets you made this tiny tent out of.
>You can see Anon's feet with their heels on the floor, and his legs laying down as well.
>He's directly next to the couch where you're hiding.
>"So that was different." Anon says suddenly, popping the silence like a bubble of tension.
>You don't respond. You can't respond. How are you supposed to?
>Through another crack, you see Anon place his hands on his stomach and twiddle his thumbs as he stares up at the ceiling from the hard wood floor.
>>25379729
>After a few more moments of terrible silence he speaks again.
>"Come on... talk to me Pinkie, I'm right here." he says softly.
>You mumble under your breath.
>"What was that?"
>You sigh
"You shouldn't be laying down on hard surfaces if you hurt your head dummy. It's not good for it." you say just loud enough so he can hear it.
>He chuckles.
>"What? And what went down on your bed was?" he retorts.
>You bury your face in your hooves and don't make a sound.
>You just don't want to exist right now.
>He sighs.
>"I think it was actually. I think it really did help." he confesses.
>You feel your ears perk up as he says it.
>"At least, I thought it was good. What about you?" he says delicately.
>A warmth starts to form in your chest, and you can feel it spreading carefully through your body.
"Mhmm." you mumble back.
>He hums in agreement.
>"Are you going to come out of there?" he asks.
>You sigh.
"No..." you say slowly in a defeated voice.
>He laughs.
>"Well I know you're going to at some point, and I'll be right outside when you do."
>You shake your head, and feel yourself smirk.
"What if I stay in here for days? I can do it you know. I'm super resilient." you say in a low voice.
>"Yes, but the cake has been baking for 20 extra minutes, and at some point it is going to catch fire."
>Oh yeah.
>You were baking a cake.
>A few minutes pass in silence.
>"Pinkie, I need you to answer something for me." he begins
>You stare at him through the blankets.
>"And I need you to tell the truth, okay?"
>You have nowhere to run, and the worst of it is over.
>You have nothing to lose at this point.
"Okay."
>>25379743
>You can almost feel him smile through the covers.
>"Do you really hate me?" he asks again with a simple tone.
>You sigh.
>Once again you're in a corner, but a very different corner than the one from before.
>But that warmth from your chest spreads to your tongue, and you speak without thinking.
"No. I don't hate you Anon."
>He sighs.
>"Do you want to be friends Pinkie?"
>You feel your lip quiver.
"Y-yes.." you stutter.
>Suddenly a hand slides under the covers without disrupting the rest of your little bunker.
>"Pinkie?" he beckons.
"Mhmm..?" you respond weakly.
>"Do you want to be something more than friends, Pinkie? Do you want to hug and cuddle and junk?" he asks slowly.
>Your breathing become erratic.
>You can't believe what he's asking you.
>Your lip quivers and tears form at the corners of your eyes again.
>Anon chuckles quietly.
>"You don't have to answer with words." he says in a whisper.
>You feel a smile grow across your face.
>You place your hoof into his waiting hand.
"O-okay..." you say between sniffs.
>He grasps your hoof tightly and fills you with a joy you've never felt before.
>"Okay." he responds.
>The two of you sit there for a few minutes, your hoof in his hand, his hand around your hoof, laying on the ground seperated by the blankets.
>And soon, you're going to come through those blankets.
>And give him the biggest hug you've ever given anyone.
>It'll as tight as it is warm. It'll be the best hug..
>A couple tears roll down your smiling cheeks.
>Ever...
>>25379755
BASED RIGGY
>>25379774
RIGGY IS A DUBS GOD
>>25379791
Riggy right now
>>25377825
>you say in a motherly coo
does he secretly have a vagina
did you mean fatherly
>>25379905
Fathers are strong and comfort you with pride and advice.
Mother's are tender and warm.
There's a difference, at least to me.
Would any of you read tsundere Rarijack?
>>25380029
I will read anything
>>25379986
WRONG
>>25379986
I gotcha friendo.
Great green btw.
I'd read any thing you'd write.
>>25379755
Is that the end?
>>25380366
Nah. I'm just eating dinner atm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nWEt_VgLOWY
This is the end
>>25379755
Wait... It's over?
Riggy you glorious fucker come back here and finish this story with amazing pinkieXanon sex!
...please
>>25380396
Oh, shit.
I thought it was over. I was about to flip out.
>>25380396
Thank goodness, this stuff is too good to end.
>>25378326
>marty stu
>not gary stu
Please.
>>25380685
same shit
I'm back. Gonna get back to writing soon.
>>25380493
Question:
Who here wants them to pork?
In other words, does everyone want Anon to bonk Ponk's badonkadonk with the hip game so stronk?
>>25380920
im game for some boinking
>>25380920
Maybe in an epilogue... I don't know. I guess if it is a sweet sexytime. That would fit the story ok I suppose
>>25380920
Maybe not right off the bat?
>>25380920
Is that a fucking joke?
ITT there are two types of people:
>those who want to see Anon and Pinkie pork
>those who have nigger semen in all of their orifices
I am in the former category.
>>25380920
No pls, ponks is too cute for that
>>25380920
As long as it flows well.
>>25380920
>That pic
U-unf
>>25380920
>That pic
I smell incoming sexual
>>25375856
Friendly reminder from last thread.
Alrighty. I just wanted to get a feel for what the crowd wanted.
I've got a plan to make it work. Don't worry everybody. Trust your friendly neighborhood Riggy.
>>25381359
Or, uh, not. I forgot about Satan.
>>25381359
>mfw I'm satan
>>25380920
FUCK HER HARD
>>25381385
RIGGY PLEASE LET US RAIL THAT PINK HORSE
>>25381406
Fuck off Dio, I'm gonna stay real enough to write this story whether you like it or not.
Riggy,
I've been using /mlp/ since its inception and before that I was on /co/ pone threads. You write anon x pony better than any drawfags I know. Additionally you make lots of Ponk related content. She happens to be my waifu so you just double it there. Thanks for all this based writefaggery.
>>25381471
YOU TELL 'EM RIGGY
>>25381699
dubs confirm Riggy is basedo-of course you'd need dubs to be based, b-baka
>>25381699
>You write anon x pony better than any drawfags I know.
>drawfags I know.
>drawfags
Oh.
But seriously, thank you OG poneman. You have great taste in pony, and I'm glad I impressed one of the elders.
It means so much to me, you have no idea.
Stick around, and I'll keep writing, drawing, singing, and loving for all of my family here on /mlp/.
>>25381716
NO TWO-BIT TWILIGHT VAMPIRE LOOKIN FUCCBOI IS GONNA STOP MY RIGGY TRAIN.
Also: Za Warudo isn't even cool!yes he is
>>25381853
Riggy your killin' me here, please write.
>>25381853
Wirtefags* you know I'd never do anything to hurt you riggy.
Please forgive medesu senpai
>>25381903
What do you think I'm doing brother?
I'm just taking my time so it comes out the way I want it to.
>>25382023
As long as you keep writing that's the main thing Riggy. I'm enjoying this story thoroughly. You better write some more.
>>25379755
>You hold her hoof as tightly as you can.
>She doesn't move very much, but you can feel her breath on your wrist.
>You stare at the ceiling again, just feeling the fur around her hoof.
>The throbbing in your head has disappeared, and the throbbing of your heart grows louder.
>It was quite the jump you just made, asking for Pinkie's hoof like that.
>After all, earlier today you were convinced that she still hated you.
>But you never thought about how you felt about Pinkie in general.
>You figured your obsession with being on her good side simply came from the frustration of her not acting like everypony else.
>As it turns out, you just felt like she was more real than her friends, and that she was a lot more like yourself.
>And after today's craziness, the cooking, the kiss... you realized a thing or two about that.
>You can't think of a single pony in this town that ever approached you about anything deeper than friendship.
>Maybe it was your species, maybe it was the way you were friendly with everyone.
>Whatever it be, there never was an opportunity to have a deeper connection.
>And now, as you hold Pinkie's hoof in your hand, you realize you've found someone to give you that missing connection.
>Someone here you can talk to about deeper things.
>About life, and death, purpose, and meaning, feelings, and romance, love and fear.
>All these things and more.
>And on rainy days like today, you can snuggle under the covers, quietly caring for one another without a word.
>Just the warmth of your bodies touching.
>>25382251
>You smile to yourself as you think about what you've gotten yourself into.
>Yeah.
>This adventure ended up better than you expected.
>When you walked in those front doors, with the help of Rarity, you thought getting Pinkie to be your friend would be a long shot.
>Now, the next time you pass through those doors Pinkie will most likely come with you.
>Mission successful.
>Your thoughts are interrupted by a nasty odor that offends your nostrils.
>You look over at the oven.
>It's billowing black smoke.
>You begin to sweat.
"Um.. Pinkie... about that cake-"
>At the last word Pinkie explodes through the blankets, jumps over you, and rushes to the oven.
>She quickly opens and closes the oven to retrieve the baked goods from inside, then turns on the ventilation within the oven to start getting rid of the smoke.
>You come up from behind her, shrouded a little by the dark smoke that hangs in the room.
>She quickly darts past you and opens a window to the rain outside.
>You pick up the charred remains of what was once a finely crafted cake.
>Pinkie trots up beside you.
"Well. I'm not sure the sprinkles made much of a difference after all." you say without looking.
>You turn and face Pinkie again, happily greeted by those springy pink curls that went missing a little while before.
>Though, you didn't mind it being down either.
>She looked great either way, you think.
>>25382268
>her mane
I think she's cute with it down
>>25376912
of course not. theres too much demand for green of either sucking a bald greed dudes penis.
>>25382539
But when it's down, usually she is sad :(
>>25382268
>Pinkie giggles at your joke, but not like you've seen her do with her friends.
>It's more reserved than what you've heard in the past.
>You crouch down to her height with the cake.
"What do you think, Pink?" you ask.
>She sniffs the cake and takes a big bite out of the blackened lump.
>She smiles through the whole thing as she chews and swallows it.
>Maybe the cake was as bad as you thought.
>"Wow! That was terrible!" Pinkie says, still smiling.
>You chuckle.
"Yeah... yeah I figured that.
>PInkie takes the cake from you and tosses it in a bin hanging off the side of the oven combo.
>"So much for that. Now I have a tub of icing and nothing to use it with."
>You boop Pinkie's nose, making her scrunch.
"That sounds like the opposite of a problem."
>She gives you a grin then nips your finger playfully.
>You laugh as you fan your finger.
>She giggles with you.
>The two of you are acting like a couple of children.
>And you love it.
>She puts her hooves on the counter with the frosting.
>"We could make some super-sweet-sugar-frosted-sugar-cookies if you'd like." she offers.
>You chuckle at the idea of cooking again after such a long day.
>But then again, you can't think of a better way to start this relationship.
>You nod.
"But only if we use the downstairs kitchen. I don't think this oven is good for another run..." you say, looking at the blackened oven.
>She gives you a big toothy grin and nods.
>"Okidokiloki!"
>And with that, the two of you head downstairs for another couple of hours of cooking.
>>25382929
>You made a lot more than cookies in the end.
>There were pies and cupcakes, cookies and scones, even some muffins made their way into the mix.
>All the while you two were chatting and cooking, bumping elbows and blushing.
>You handled all the handy things like chopping and kneading, but she handled a lot of the baking bits.
>The conversation remained light, with lots of jokes and puns.
>Lots of puns, like way too many.
>But in the end the two of you singlehandedly restocked the entire store, and the night came to a close as you clean the kitchen a final time.
>As the kitchen sparkled, the two of you stood in the hall before the stairs.
>The clock says 11:30 pm.
>You retireved your jacket, and your shoes are on.
>The door is only a dozen feet away from you.
>But somehow it seems like it's not far enough away.
>"You'll come to visit me soon, right?"
>You turn to the little pink pony at the bottom of the stairs.
>She looks awfully tired.
"Of course Pinks. I'll be back tomorrow." you say reassuringly.
>She smiles.
>"Okay."
>You look at the door, then back to Pinkie.
"Goodnight, PInkie."
>She nods at you with an exhausted expression.
>"Goodnight Anon." she says quietly.
>>25382942
>You nod at her one last time, and she starts to head up the stairs.
>You slowly approach the door and turn its handle.
>The rain is still coming down like as heavy as it can.
>It sure looks menacing out there.
>"Nonny?" beckons Pinkie from down the hall.
>Your newly aquired nickname sends shivers down your spine and into your fingers and toes.
>You turn around and face her.
"Yes Pinkie?"
>She plays with the carpet under her hooves, the small light from the kitchen only lighting her a little.
>"I... don't know if I can get to sleep with all this rain..." she begins.
>You think you know where this is going.
>"It makes me nervous, especially if you're going to be out in it, so..."
>She plays with the carpet some more.
>"Would you mind stay-"
>You close the door before she even finishes the sentence.
"I thought you'd never ask, dummy." you say to her with a grin as you throw off your shoes and leave your jacket by the door.
>She blushes and returns the smile.
>>25382929
>>25382942
>>25382957
Damn
>>25382957
Shit, nigga, I don't even need lewd now.
Just the thought of Anon and Ponks spooning all night to the sound of the rain puts such a great feeling of warmth deep down in my heart and crotch.
>>25383165
I mean.
Lewd doesn't hurt.
>>25382957
>The rain only got more ruthless over the course of the day, and the windows rattle whenever thunder bounds through the sky.
>You lay in Pinkie's bed, under the covers with her at your side.
>She snuggles up close to your bare chest.
>She insisted that she got to wear your t-shirt while the two of you slept.
>It's enormous on her, but somehow it makes her look incredibly adorable.
>You have one hand on the back of her head, scratching lightly behind her ears.
>She sighs as you find the sweet spot between her ear and her head.
>Her breathing becomes slow, and she feels calm.
>"I really need this sleep." she mumbles.
>You chuckle in the darkness.
"Yeah, you looked pretty tired this morning. Must've been a hell of a party." you whisper.
>She giggles to herself. You feel her laughter against your bare body.
>"No. I stayed up a little too late last night... looking after you, Nonny."
>You think about it for a second.
"I still don't understand why you acted so mean to me for so long." you confess.
>She sighs.
>"I was really confused dummy. I wasn't thinking." she responds.
>You pull her closer, and she does the same to you.
"You owe me for all the time wasted, you know."
>She leans up and kisses you on the cheek before resting her head on your shoulder.
>"I know."
>>25383217
>You think about the past couple nights.
>None of this would have happened had you deided to skip out on her party last night.
>Had you backed away at the first sign of adversity, you would never have found out the truth.
>You wonder how long it would have been before she confessed her feeling to you had these events not taken place.
>Would it ever have happened? Or would the two of you forever avoid eachother, never getting comfortable enough to realize how much you needed eachother?
>It's a scary thought, but you don't need to worry about it anymore.
>Now that you think of it, Rarity was the one who got you into the party.
"I guess I have to thank Rarity later for helping us get together, huh?"
>Pinkie giggles nervously.
>"Y-yeahh. But, let's not do that for a little while. I don't think I can handle the amount of jokes that will be made at our expense." she says queitly.
>You forgot about Rainbow Dash and Applejack.
>Yeah, you can see how their antics might get under your skin, especially if you do a total 360 on how you feel about a somebody.
>That definitely would warrant some teasing.
>"Nonny." Pinkie says without opening her eyes.
"Yes PInkie?"
>"I really really like you a whole lot." she says as she squeezes your torso.
>You sigh with a smirk
"I know, Pinkie, I know."
>She sighs one las time.
>"Just making sure."
>And with that she falls asleep on your chest, your heart acting as her lullaby.
>The rain outside invites you to close your eyes and join her.
>Your body feels warm and cozy, and Pinkie's hard grip on your torso makes you feel loved and wanted.
>There will be a lot of adventures in your future. Some good, some bad.
>But at least you'll always have Pinkie to tell them to, and in many cases get through them with.
>And she'll be glad to help.
>>25383228
>But, of course, i-it's not like you like her or anything.
>No, somehow it feels like it is something much greater than that.
>Your eyelids start to droop.
>The rain clicks against the windows.
>Pinkie breathes slowly on your chest.
>And you drift into a warm sleep that is only reserved for a lucky few: those who are in love.
fin.
>>25383244
Good show.
>>25383244
Even finishing on dubs. Well done Riggy. Well done.
>>25383244
Riggy you asshole, you're gonna come to my house right now and get this stupid grin off my face.
>>25383244
That sounds nice. Comfy even.
>>25383244
Fucking beautiful, 10/10.
>>25383244
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nWEt_VgLOWY
>>25383244
That's the end of the main story. I felt that sexual stuff would not benefit the ending.
Don't fret, however, to those of you looking for lewd.
I'm going to be writing a smutty epilogue involving the same Anon and Pinkie, just at a later time.
I didn't want to undermine the importance of caring for one another without sexual tensions getting in the way.
I hope you all enjoyed the main story. I'll be writing the epilogue tomorrow to be added on for those who want to read it.
This way, everybody can get the things they want, and nothing they don't.
As for now, I must go to bed. I need to get up early for the gym tomorrow.
Thanks for sticking with me anyone. I love you all. You're all part of my O'hana.
I'll be back tomorrow. But for now: Goodnight.
>>25383341
Perfect idea with the epilogue. Goodnight!
>>25383341
Good night Riggy, you're doing Celestia's work
>>25383341
Your fucking great love you too
No homo
b-baka
>>25383341
Thanks senpai. Keep getting /fit/
>>25383285
>>25383294
>>25383298
>>25383315
>>25383323
>>25383338
>>25383358
Thank you, all of you.
If you really want this to feel emotional, read the last part with these playing at a low volume in the background:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rj2CD5xgpNY
http://www.rainymood.com/
Thank you all again, and goodnight. I'll reply to the rest tomorrow.
>>25383394
please respond to the snake post tomorrow senpai
also amazing choice not having them get down and dirty immediately
just makes it even kinkier tomorrow
>>25383416
>>25383383I love you Anon.
I love you, and you're special.
Sometimes you may not feel like you're important.
Sometimes you might feel like you aren't much of anything.
I just want you to know that you're wrong when you think like that.
And you're a very important person to a lot of people.
Me included.
Stay Gold.
>>25378623
Not that i'm not loving this, but Awokened isn't a word
>>25383455
I fixed it for the pastebin. No worries.
Top tier green-text, and in a pretty fast pace. Well done.
>>25383244
So damn cozy.
>>25383191
Unless you like it when it hurts ;^)
>>25383217
Good shit, but
>She sighs as you find the sweet spot between her ear and her head.
>between her ear and her head
Is Plinko actually >pic related?
>>25383341
Truly one of the top writefagsOne day I will be at your power level...
>>25377745
faggot
>>25383341
Good job Riggy
If you wrote books I would buy them all.
N-Not because you're a writer....
>>25383532
>>25383341
That was some top tier green
Glad you ended it with feels
>>25383341
Thank you. You based legend.
May your dubs last forever.
>>25383439
Riggy, you're a saint. People like you are why I come here. I love you, motherfucker.
Bimpity bump
>>25384210
You know that area behind your ear where it connects? Ponies have a similar place on the inside of their ear as well.
I know I like being scratched there, at least.
>>25384637
I'm sure you will. I'm really not all that. You can craft a story twice as good, I'm sure of it.
>>25383513
Thanks friend! I aim to please!
>>25385341
Well, I d-don't want you as a reader or anything...
>>25385821
>>25386297
I'm glad you liked it. I'll be writing more stories for this thread in due time.
I just need to make sure I don't fall behind on my studies ha.
>>25386434
Thank you my anonymous friend. It's people like you that keep me motivated to write.And I love you too.
Okay, I need to get ready for the day and get some breakfast.
When I come back, I will have a very important question for all of you to discuss today regarding upcoming stories.
>>25387647
"I don't know what the question is, but I'm pretty sure the answer is anal" bump.
>>25387647
Okay!
The thread has slowed down like a mother-hubber, so everyone must be at work or busy or whatever.
Either way, I am going to supply you with several scenarios that I have ideas for, and you guys can choose the one you want to see next.
1. Two Tsundere Ponies going after Anon
2. One of the mane 6 going after another of the mane 6
3. One non-mane 6 going after a member of the mane 6 (Or vice versa)
4. Non-mane 6 character going after Anon
5. Two Ponies being tsundere at each other, with Anon there to help them figure it out.
You can say which one you want to see next, give an explanation, heck you can even say which characters you'd like to see in it.
Later today, when people have expressed their opinions, I'll put one at the top of the list to be written next.
I've gotta get to class, but I'll still be monitoring the thread.
>>25388297
Numbah Juan
>>25388297
first one with octavia and vinyl, for the drama
>>25388297
1, with Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash. They both play pranks on you; trying to one up each other. For some reason, Fluttershy is always in "assertive" mode around you.
>>25388297
Rainbow and Twilight going after anon
Twilight tries to woo you over with her science and other academic skills, Rainbow tries to do it through her athletics and "awesomeness"
They fight with each other often due to the competition "egghead" "jock"
>i-its not like I want him to be more impressed with me because of my smarts
>w-w-well its not like I'm trying to impress him with my sports skills either
>>25388297
1: An AJ vs Rarity Tsun off.
You get classic Tsun from Apul and a more sophisticated elitist style from Rarity.
Normal vs Royal Tsun
>>25388517
Like this?
>>25388600
Exactly like thatPlus it will make for extremely contrasting and simultaneously kinky 3 way sex laterEven after they know that you like both of them their personalities still contrast each otherThey compete during kinky time for who can get you off the bestI bet I can make him cum with my mouth in 10 seconds flat, eggheadNuh-uh rainBROdash, I have an incredibly complex medically verified method to make him cum in 3 minutes that will yield approximately 4 times the strength of orgasm
Fucking
Unf
>>25388643
also this
>>25388803
lol where did you find this?
this is exactly what I'm talking about
>>25388917
It was just in my mlp folder. You can reverse image search it for the creator I'm sure.
>>25388955
>tfw no qt 3.14 egghead gf to do science with you and then try to get you off but in a straight from a medical textbook style
>>25388297
I think what I'm looking forward to most is two tsunderes, thrown into conflict (especially the situation in which one or both don't necessarily recognize the other as a romantic rival, but just see someone who's being a bitch to Anon).
>>25388971
>"The book says to stimulate your clitoris..."
Twilight, males don't have clitorises.
>"But then, what's th- oh..."
>>25389255
life is pain
>>25389255
>>25389181
This sounds pretty good.
>>25389255
>not practicing what the book says on her
>>25389255
Dubs czeched
>>25389277
Your dubs have also been checked.
>>25389318
Inception.BWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Bumperino
>Just getting here
>Go on Riggys pastebin
>Anon and his Twimom book 2
>ohyes.jpg.png.gif
>coming soon
>MFW
Come to this thread for godly information
>>>/trash/29240
Just got back from a hike to clear my head.
>>25389852
Yeahh. Sorry m8, I haven't gotten around to starting what will most likely be a 100k+ story.
I WILL get to it though, maybe over my winter break in a month or so.
>>25389181
Okay fellas, looks like #1 won by a landslide, so that will be the next story I write in a day or so.
I won't be telling you who the ponies are JUST yet though.
You guys can debate the optimal combo if you'd like, I think RD and Twiglot is the current fan favorite.
I'll be doing assignments and occasionally writing when I have a break tonight, but for now I need dinner.
Be back in a half-hour or so.
>>25390611
You'll still do the epilogue to the Pinkie story, right?
Also, I actually think a Rarity Rainbow Dash combo might be interesting.
>>25390681
Yeah, this one sounds along the right lines.
Rarity makes an okay tsundere by herself, but I think she'd really shine when paired with another one.
Rainbow Dash is a little done-to-death as a tsundere, though, and AJ is always placed opposite Rarity.
Here's a thought - what about Fluttershy and Rarity - two best friends in a sudden-death tsunder-off?
>>25390681
I'm actually writing the epilogue between assignment-breaks.
>>25390708
That is an interesting combo for certain! I agree that RD is used a lot, but that doesn't mean I rule her out, it just might not be as unique of a story.
I had a funny idea for a pony tsundere story where Rarity is Tsundere for Pinkie Pie, and she gets ridiculously frustrated with Pinkie's lack of restraint while internally wishing she could let loose herself.
A lot of people say Rarity and Applejack are the tsun-tsun couple, but Rarity and Pinkie would be hilarious.
I scrapped it for now because I just finished a Pinkie story.
>>25390708
How about Fluttershy and Twilight? Twi, as mentioned before, would probably try to woo Anon using something from a book. Meanwhile, Flutters knows a lot about human anatomyshe's watched apes fuck beforebut she's too bashful to let Anon know that.
>>25390824
I still say I really want Rainbow and Twilight
See here for why
>>25388517
>>25388600
>>25388643
>>25388803
>>25390994
>>25388803
Jesus christ I know I've already linked to this twice but holy shit twily is so fucking cute in the lower left hand box in the corner fucking unffffffff i cant take it
help me
>>25383244
Um, hello, I just wanted to say that your story is beautiful.
Idea:
Mixing Tsun with my cougar-mare fetish.
Mayor Mare in a tsun-off with Ms. Harshwhinny.
Anon in the middle, or just kind of involved.
Either's cool.
>>25391053
Fuck off, nigger.
>>25391053
Hey, thanks Fapman! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I can't remember the thread, but I think I've seen you writing before.
>>25391110
Fap is muh waifu, fite me nigger
>>25391053
Holy shit are you in every thread or just the ones I'm in. It's getting creepy
>>25391529
Now you know my pain. Everywhere you go, Fap's probably there enjoying the story and/or thread.
>>25391602
I'm actually impressed, I was there when he started and everyone told him to "stop namefaging, newfag" and now he's the boards greentext meme. Well done Fapman, you surpassed namefag and became a fucking meme...
>>25391630
Honestly, Fap's good for the board simply because he provides the one thing writefags crave, at times:Feedback
If Fap's in a thread, chances are that he's reading stories. It may not be the most detailed criticism, but from what I've seen, he highlights the stuff he likes. He makes sure that the writer knows that their work is appreciated.
>>25391630
>>25391728
I'm not saying he's a bad thing as as meme. Just that he is... See
>>25391730
I agree, he brings a lot of feedback to writers and he kinda spreads a sense of community. I always forget people can be in multiple threads with different stories but he shows the board is closer than we like to believe
>>25391762
I didn't know I was getting complimented by a celebrity.
Wowie zowie
>>25391798
Yea Fapman is pretty much that now, he's good with constructive criticism and will stick around for your whole story to help you if he enjoys it.I'm making it sound like he's a god passing judgment
>>25391630
>encouraging him
fag
>>25391849
Clearly he's a better contributer then you sense your only original world is fag. Congrats on being a hipocrite
>>25391896fag
Something tells me that riggy is a ponkfucker.Outstanding taste
>>25392074
Nah man his GF has the good taste, she likes AJ and is a Riggyfucker
>>25392311I wish I was a Riggyfucker
>>25392074
>>25392311
If I was forced to choose between Ponk and Riggy I'd have to kill myself
>>25388297
For some reason the idea of Rarity being tsun for tomboy Rainbow Dash, angrily forcing her to try on dresses and getting more and more worked up sounds incredibly cute
Page 9 bump
Sorry I've been gone all day, these 500 pages of reading stacked with modelling and essay writing takes a lot out of ya.
I'll be back tomorrow with that epilogue, abd hopefully I'll get through at least SOME of my work.
But for now, it's late and I have a debate tomorrow. So goodnight my family. I'll see you again real soon.
>>25394623
Okidokiloki
>>25391079
seconded.Although I prefer mayor mare being aggressive rather than tsun and anon bbeing emplloyed as her sexcretery
Bump
N-not that I like this thread or anything
>>25393219
>dat pic
Hhhnhnnnggg
Tsunderarara
Flumpty Bumpty
>>25379986
Mine do neither
>>25399563
I feel for you.
>>25379986
nice to hear someone has a good experience with parentsor family in general
>>25399563
I know that feel
>>25392311
The double digits confirm it
>>25399563
>>25399634
>>25400015
I know not everybody gets a good family, or good parents.
But right here, in this thread we are a family of sorts. And if that doesn't suit you, just know you're always able to join the Rag family. The door is always open.
Homework is keeping me busy, I'm trying to keep up with everything, but this is the busiest week of the semester so far.
Thanks for being patient friends. I'll post things as soon as I can, I promise.
>>25400131
Riggy I'm down to be in your family but how come earlier you and another anon were asking me to fuck you like seriously man I'm no fag and don't you have a girlfriend anyways?
>>25400160
It's the /fit/ in me leaking out.
Homoerotic stuff is their schtick.
And come on Anon, you're on /mlp/We're all fags here, whether you fuck men or not.
>>25400202
I'm not gay.but i'd totally cuddle all poniesand fuck trap ponies
Boomp.
Page 9 bump
Page 9 bump again
Flumpty Bumpty.
More bumps than a toad's testicle here in this thread.
>>25405251
Where is this? Bronycon?
>>25405251
I'm troubled by this picture.. can an anon please give me a caption to go with this
>>25405251
>trap Pinkie
There go my pants
How am I supposed to get on with life after the doses of joy this thread has given me ?
Has there ever been a story where Anon is the one acting all tsun-tsun towards a pony?
>>25406000
Nice trips.
Also somebody suggested it earlier, but someone brought up the counter point that Anon is kind of a "Marty Stew" so he might be harder to relate to if you tamper with his simple character type too much.
I think It can still made to work very well though. Especially since Anon uses stronger language than ponies.
>>25406019
I also think the premise could work. Maybe it's just Anon's way of denying that he's becoming a horsefucker?"Of course I don't like you! I- I mean, I do like you, j-just not like THAT! That would be gross; we're different species after all... B-baka!"
It could be like you say too, as a human he acts differently from ponies, so he may just appear to be tsundere to them.
Page 9 bump
>>25406150
I can see that as Anon battles his own mind and pride and slowly descends down the horsefuckery path.
Or I can see anon as tsun in a reversed gender role way.
bumpo
>>25388297
THIS >>25388390 I want to belive.
>>25388917
AJ v RD is my favorite one.
>>25406150
>Maybe it's just Anon's way of denying that he's becoming a horsefucker?
Too bad it's not 2012 anymore.
>>25409050
>>25409050
I need more
(heres the prologue or whatever)
>>25409050
>"It's your favorite thing in the whole world."
>'Oh boy! I love that thing!'
>>25375287
No
is Yandere
>>25409050
Is there a continuation with Pinkie?
>>25406019
I come back after all this time and you're STILL writing based Ponk-inclusive stories,and we're still respecting the doubles tradition!Good on ya Riggy.
>>25405606
>trap
no
its a drunk chick pissing all over herself
>>25411120
>DoctorQuadsai
>DOCTOR FUCKIN' QUADSAI
I still owe you an enormous SSB4 picture featuring the cast of MLP.
How the hell are you?
>>25409201
Who the hell is this artist. GRIS, iqdb, TinEye,and SauceNao found nothing.
>>25412051
No idea thats what I wanted to know
its possible that it was just some random anon drawfag or something
>>25411913
I'm doing greatespecially since you remembered me and our promise~Pretty much just been lurking green threads, checked out /trash/not as horrible as it sounds, except it almost is,a friend of mine got me Undertale for no reasonlike everyone else says, pretty good game,and all around been a lazy bastard while still somehow being productive.
I'd ask how you're doing, but you're still diligent on keeping us up to date on all the work you always seem to have got piled up.But I'll ask anyway, how're ya Riggy?I like hiding things behind spoilers.
Riggy gib us sex with ponk now plz
>>25412964
this
>>25412051
>>25412365
It's redanon
>>25412909
I'm pretty well. I'm swamped by work as always, but that'll all change tomorrow when I hand in a lot of shit.
>>25412964
>>25413001
If I had the time to finish it, I would. Unfortunately for the time being I have to continue focusing on schoolwork. It's only for another day, please bear with me.
>>25414704
It's cool.I didn't know I am a living meme.
