>*gluk* *gluk* *gluk*
Current writefag: Crossroad
http://pastebin.com/u/X-Roads
Let's start off the new thread with a discussion, Who else would be addicted to cum and why? Also, would any cum do or only Anon's?
Is that Lilith?
>>21545247
I'm not sure who else would be, possibly it's those with horns only?
Also this story reminds me of Love, Sweat, and Tears and it's sequel. Very similar premise.
>>21545261
Would that, by any chance, be a rule 34.2 version of this Lilith?
>>21545202
>using my drawing as OP pic
shit op, thanks. Only second time i ever have that happening.
Sorry for being inactive people, custom pc cables and LoE have been taking all day, and it's currently 4:30 am. I'll get drawing!captcha: atatawhat the fuck, captcha?
>>21545310
Fuck your complementary trap, this is still a chick! Can't you leave me at least some fap material for one last load before all women wear dicks?
>>21545310
Oh no. No where close.
>>21545484
My apologies.
>>21545485
Ah, is it just an OC?
>>21545556
Yes.And he is hot.
>>21545632I thought it was a herm/futa
Finished my drawing
>pic rel8ed
This thread is now dedicated to gangsta hoars.
For those new to this thread, see the previous thread;
21440057
>>21546245
>tfw i forgot to remove reference twi
>>21546280
I was wondering about that.
Last thread became An Hero. I want to trip code to have an identity here. Just so people can be like "I remember you!"
>>21546680
Tripcodes only if you're posting green or art.
>>21546162Zajice's oc Lilith is a futa. Lilith from Borderlands, to my knowledge, is strictly female.
>>21546245
I thought that was supposed to be RD. Welp, gotta go change that tag now.
>>21546680
What are you talking about? If you're not contributing, don't bother with a name/trip.
>>21546844
This
>>21547564
wat
I think you're in the wrong board, let alone wrong thread.
>>21545276
Would Scootaloo drink cum.Would she like a Cum Omlette *Because she's a chicken?
>>21545247
Trixie, because she thinks its what keeps her sexy voice sexier and her coat shining.Rarity prefers cum baths to keep her mane and coat in that pristine perfect condition.
>>21545247
Not sure how anyone would get addicted to cum. Unless they had it associated it with pleasure or lack of pain. As an example: pleasuring a pony to the edge until they drink the semen, then giving them the orgasm they were denied when they do drink it.
>>21547774
I want Seth to go to bed.
>>21547609
Wrong thread, sorry.
>>21547897
Another example: Constantly causing pain of some kind over time, while presenting the option of drinking cum to make the pain stop. Then when they do, the source of pain stops.
>>21547905
No seth here, not even a big trixiefag
But I do think she would be likely to swallow as much stalion cum as she can, often being in gloryhole stalls just waiting for her nasty kinky fill enjoying the stallions never really knowing such a strong and beautiful magician as the powerful Trixie was the one who willingly drained their balls.
>>21547897
maybe it could be treated as a form of nymphomania?
Try feeding her through her other end.
>>21547990
But that's the compulsive desire to participate in sex acts, not specifically cum drinking.
page 9 bump
>Anon sucking on Twilight's horn until she gets off
>>21550225yes please, sometime, somewheredo this.
>>21550325
>that pic
Muh dick
Good day anons
Expect updates this afternooneuro timesince I'm most probably busy in the evening.
>>21546245
Good job mate
Could you remove the reference, so I can save it?
>>21550225
>>21550325
Already on the list. Maybe in the next clop scene? Who knows? First some cuddles and feels.
>>21550483
Hype
>>21550483
>>21550483
Welcome back, hope you had a good day. will there be more mind-imagery by the ways of words about twilight pigging out? because I crave more cute induced heart failures
>>21550865
Thanks, I had a pretty good day so far.
And yes, she is eating hayburgers later after all. Gonna start writing in an hour or so.
>>21550483
Good morning, anons.
>pic rel8ed, fixed drawingi'd wish a proper drawfag would join us.
>>21550955
I wouldn't keep your hopes upwe already have oneYou
>>21551005
T-thanksthough in every thread, other drawfags are usually waaaay ahead of me. Only really a matter of time, here.
>>21551200
I've got a friend who's a drawfag, just like him you have too keep practicing, you'll get better and better over time.
>>21551200
m8 the only way for you to stay ahead of everyone else is to keep practicing and all thatI believe in you anon, you can be the best drawfag on this board if you keep at it <3
>You are Twilight Sparkle and you are still sitting in anon's kitchen.
>Wow... that kiss rippled from your horntip through your whole body.
>Perhaps you can ask him later to do it again...
>Would he be comfortable to suck on it?
>Oh this would be so hot.
>That was always a fantasy of yours
>But your former coltfriends, as few as they may be, weren't pleased when you asked them to do it.
>Silver Lining even laughed at you and asked if he looked like a colt cuddler.
>He said other things too, but you don't want to remember them.
>...
>Stallions can be assholes.
>”You should be grateful that I even put up with a boring librarian like you!”
>You shake your head and suppress some tears.
>No.
>Anon is different.
>Even if he wouldn't like to do it, he wouldn't insult you like that.
>He is nice.
>He cares for you.
>Regaining your composure, you get up and grab the pan and the bowl with the whisked eggs, using your magic.
>The pan is beyond rescuing, but anon and you could still eat the eggs tomorrow morning.
>So you put the pan into the fridge and throw the mix away.
>Wait, what?
“Ponyfeathers...”
>Calm down, Sparkles.
>This was in the past.
>What's important now is the present.
>And the future... your future with anon.
>You inhale and exhale deeply a few times, your hoof following your breathing.
>Just like Cadence taught you.
“Ok... all better now.”
>You wrap the grated cheese in some foil and lay it in the fridge.
>The pan joins the eggs in the thrash can.
>>21551200
But anon... you area proper drawfag
I like your style, just keep practicing mate.
>>21551005
>>21551228
>>21551244
Haha, thanks anons. If i had time, i would. Although for now, building computers and college is taking up too much of my time for practice, and i only drawfag a little to entertain myself every once in a while.
>Somewhat satisfied with your cleaning, you leave the kitchen and enter anon's living room.
>He said that you should pick a movie while he was away.
>You still don't understand how a whole film fits onto such a small disk.
>To be honest you don't understand most of the stuff that came with anon, when he arrived in equestria.
>Like his magic picture box he called television.
>...
>Ah his arrival, what a magical and strange day.
>Anon claims that he doesn't remember it any more.
>Fluttershy found him on the edge of the Whitetail forest, covered with burns and his stuff scattered around him.
>He was unconscious for nearly a week.
>Anyways.
>His “electronics”, how he likes to call them. didn't work without electricity.
>But you managed to get them working again with a fusion crystal, that you charged with a lightning spell.
>He was so happy when you showed him the crystal and explained what it was for.
>Maybe a bit too happy since he grabbed it with his bare hands and nearly electrocuted himself.
>You giggle.
>After some care and burn ointment, he found a way to hook them up to the fusion crystal.
>It now floats in a grounding bubble, safely next to his TV.
>You turn your head around and scan the shelf with his movies.
“Hmmm...”
>A particular night-blue box caught your eye.
“The last Unicorn...”
>This sounds interesting.
>Reading the text on the back, you decide that this would be the right flick for tonight.
Okay I'm off now. I may start writing again later tonight, depending on how long I'm away and how drunk I are then.
Stay fresh.
>>21551405
>thrash can
Metal.
>>21551580
>last unicorn
>impending drama intensifies
keep at it you glorious bastard.
>Page 9
NOT ON MY WATCH
>>21545202
>new general/repeating thread
And the cancer continues
Yo I'm back.
I rewrote the last two parts the last to parts for the pastebin, since I wasn't happy with them. Check them out.
Going to start writing again in a few, so stay tuned.
>>21555678
It's been a bit too long since her last cum drink.
>>21555701
Maybe for you since I write so goddamn slow, but for anon and twi maybe two hours have passed since he came inside her
But don't worry, I didn't forget about clop. Its either going to happen when they go to bed or the mornign after.
>>21555701
For us yeah it's been days, but story wise it has only been a few hours at most so it would make sense. Sometimes what you want is not what you need.
>>21555746
>when they go to bed or wake up
pls write pls write pls write pls write pls write
Archive of the previous thread if anyone's interested in making a screencap of the first part.
http://4archive.org/mlp/thread/21440057
>>21556500
I'm also waiting formy fix. But he should take his time.
aslo
>checked
>You put the Deeveedee next to the television and think what else you could need.
>Maybe a blanket?
>It is quite warm today but...
“Cuddling isn't the same without a blanket!” you state.
>Humming a happy tune, you walk to anon's cabinet and pull a blanket out of it.
>You lay it neatly folded on the couch.
“Hmm what else...”
>There are still cookies left, even after your snack attack, so you won't need any other snacks.
>An idea comes to your mind.
>Maybe some wine?
>Sharing a bottle of wine and watching a movie together, while the two of you cuddle under a blanket.
>It's so romantic, you could squee.
>So you do.
>Now you just have to hope anon has a bottle in his house.
>After a short search through his kitchen you finally found one, hidden behind a box of cornflakes.
>You blow the dust from the label.
“Uhh.”
>Quite a fancy one at that.
“Domaine Romanêigh.”
>Sounds expensive... like something Rarity would buy.
“I will just ask him if its OK to drink this.” you say to yourself.
>Floating the bottle back to the living room, you put it on the coffee-table, along with two glasses.
>Perfect.
>You would light some candles but you don't know where anon keeps them.
>But this should do nicely.
>Did you forget something?
>No, you don't think so.
>You climb on the sofa and take a look at the clock.
>Anon should be back any minute now.
>”Aaahhh! I can't wait!”
>This is going to be the best night of your life.
>Somehow this sounds familiar.
>>21556657
>>This is going to be the best night of your life.
>>Somehow this sounds familiar.
Oh god.
Last update for tonight.
Pastebin is updatedhttp://pastebin.com/u/X-Roads I even corrected most of my mistakes there!.
As always feel free to leave critique and suggestions how to improve the story.
>>21556829
Too cheesy?
>>21556657
>>This is going to be the best night of your life.
>Somehow this sounds familiar.
Incoming tears and sadness.
>>21556847
No.
>>21556899
This.
>>21556899
>>21556920
Just wait and see. You may also want to prepare your feels.
>>21556939
I await the feels good sir, keep at it, I've been enjoying this story greatly.
bumpin'
>>21556657
>This is going to be the best night of your life.
>Somehow this sounds familiar.
I'm primed and ready to feel,sir.
page 9 bump
The thread goes bump in the night.
>>21545202
You all fucked up.
>>21551851
New Band Name
Page 10 bump
Bump for the night
>>21545202
>Anonymous
>A cumtastic adventure
bamp
>>21558309
>>21556899
>>21556829
I don't get it, what's feels - inducing about this aside from the fact that it's probably not going to happen?
>>21562742
The Grand Galloping Gala was The Best Night Ever.
Except it wasn't.
And then it turned out to be a pretty good night after all.
It's the "wasn't" part that worries me.
>>21562757
Holy shit, it's been so long since I saw that episode I complete forgot about that.I need to go rewatch the show.
>>21561359
>>21559432
>>21554492
Le ebin new maymay
Just got done reading the whole story and catching up.
Jesus Christ these feels man...i wasn't sure if I should be erect or in tears...or both.
It was more tears.
>>21561359 >>21559432 >>21554492
>what is hiding a thread
>>21563913
>hide cancer
Won't remove it
You cut away cancer at the first sight of it
>>21561780
I saw the full size version of this pic, and I just wonder: Why the hell would they put their tits there? It doesn't look right at all.
>>21564350
Can you link the full pic?
>>21564308
Well have a seat there and let me tell you something. You see, this may be cancer, but you're not really doing anything about it. You're just sitting there complaining instead of trying to improve board quality, which is also cancer. You're also showing how such a simple thing as a thread on an imageboard website on the internet can upset you, which is sad. You have really two options here that could actually solve these problems of yours.
1. Make a thread that will produce content and/or an interesting discussion.
2. Stop being so sensitive and learn to control yourself so that you don't have to announce every single time something upsets or displeases you.
Now run along little one and enjoy yourself while you're here.
>Fifteen more minutes pass.
>The hayburger restaurant isn't too far away from his house... he should be back by now.
>You start to worry, your hooves nervously pawing the soft fabric of the couch..
>What if something happened to him?
>Ponyville is a safe town, isn’t it?
>Nothing does ever happen here...
“Aargh! This place is a magnet for disasters!”
>Panic begins to well up in your stomach.
>And the proximity of the Everfree forest doesn't make it better.
>All kinds of dark and bloodthirsty creatures leave their bone ridden caves at night, in search for prey.
>Nononono... stop agitating yourself!
>Everything will be fine.
>You are sure of that.
>The clocks strikes eight.
“If he isn't here in five minutes, I start looking for him!”
>Just as you finished your sentence, the front door opens and anon enters through it.
>Carrying two large paper bags under his arms.
>You jump off the couch and run towards him.
“Anon!”
>He puts the bags on the cupboard next to the door and kneels down, his arms open.
>You leap into his embrace.
>Feeling him so close and smelling his scent again, calms you down instantly.
“You're back...”
>>21565091
>”Twi... what’s the matter? Did something happen?”
>His hand slowly runs through your mane.
“Mmhhh...”
>You look up into his eyes and shake your head.
“N-No.. I was just worried that something happened to you... You were away for so long!”
>He kisses your forehead.
>”Sorry Twilight. I just had to wait in line. Some crazy blue unicorn mare didn't stop yelling at the poor clerk, demanding a “great and plentiful” refill. And she didn't leave, until she got it. She even wanted to talk to the manager.”
>This elicits a laugh from you.
“Yeah. I know her. She can be quite troublesome.”
>You rest your head on his shoulder.
“I'm just glad you're back.”
>”Hey Twi.”
“Yes?”
>”Don't work yourself up so much, ok? It's not good for you.”
>Anon boops you on the muzzle.
>”I'm really touched that you care for me, but don't fill your cute little head with dark thoughts.”
>He presses you closer to his chest.
>”I rather see you smiling when I come home.”
>You can feel tears start to form in your eyes.
“I-I won't...”
>He and you enjoy the embrace for a few moments more.
>Anon breaks it and wipes a tear from your face, stroking your cheek..
>”Wanna eat something now? I brought your favourite!” he says, beaming you a smile.
>You smile back and nod.
Today's updates are going to happen slower then usual, since I'm not feeling all too well. Enjoy anyways.
>>21565134
Personally speaking, I'm okay with this. I enjoy the cuteness more than the clop in this story, so it's no trouble anyway.
And get well soon, buddy.
captcha: ofhen
>>21565107
>demanding a “great and plentiful” refill
I giggled.
>Now sitting at the kitchen table, anon spreads the food on it.
>Four hayburgers with haybacon and cheese, along with two bags of fries.
>And is this...
>It is!
>Your favourite!
>The Hayonator! With onions, lettuce, tomatoes and three different kinds of cheese.
>The smell invades your nostrils and your mouth begins to water.
>You can almost taste the secret sauce.
>A shudder runs down your spine.
>Anon chuckles and pulls the soda cans from the bag.
>Putting one next to you, he sits down again.
>He claps his hands together.
>“Let's begin then! Before it gets cold.”
>This snaps you back to reality and you give him a slight nod.
>”Bon appêtit!”
”Bon appêtit!”
>>21565932
>You pull the hayonator to you and float it out if it's box.
>Oh Celestia yes... It's been so long since you had one of these.
>It's so big, so fatty, so unhealthy… so perfect.
>You are tempted to devour it as fast as you can. But...
>Anon is directly looking at you, a smile on his face.
>So you just take a small bite. Chewing carefully.
>Don't want to embarrass yourself in front of him again.
>This time there will be no vegetables to save your sorry flank.
>The taste washes over your tongue like wave of greasy bliss.
>Everything blends together perfectly, The haypatty, the veggies and of course the secret sauce.
>It gives just the perfect hint of spiciness to the composition.
“So good...” you moan.
>He giggles.
>”Glad to hear that.”
>He takes a bite out of his own burger.
>”You know, normally I don't like hay. But when it's deep-fried and put in a bun, with some sauce and lettuce, it's actually pretty tasty.”
>You swallow.
“Did you have hayburgers on your planet too?”
>”Yep. But we didn't use hay for the patties.”
>He winces, like he just said something wrong.
“What did your people use then? I can't think of anything better than deep-fried hay.”
>You smile and take another bite, slightly bigger this time.
>Contenance Sparkle.
>”Eh you see... How do I put this. You know Molly, right?”
“The cow? Yes. She is quite nice. Always lends out books about birdwatching.”
>You take a sip of your soda.
“Why? Are they made out of milk or cheese?”
>Anon winces again. His fingers nervously twitching.
>”No... They are made out... of … Molly.”
>Oh.
“Oh.”
>You know that anon used to eat meat back on his planet, his canines are proof of this.
>Does it bother you?
>No. Not really.
>Consuming the flesh of other living beings is a taboo in equestria.
>Gryphon’s are... tolerated. But still their eating habits are frowned upon.
>But it's not his fault that he is a carnivore, or strictly speaking, an omnivore.
>You put your hoof on his hand to reassure him..
“It's okay. I'm not bothered by it.”
>He seems relieved.
>”Thanks Twi. I know this is frowned upon here. Some ponies already gave me the stink-eye when they saw my teeth.”
“You should know best, that I'm quite glad you have these.”
>Anon chuckles.
>”Yeah you're right. Pretty kinky for a pony to have a biting fetish.”
>Your cheeks burn up.
>>21566505
“Y-Yeah it's quite rare... and I didn't even know that I had it before … today.”
>Fiddling with your hooves you take another bite out of your burger.
>He mockingly throws his arms up in shock.
>“Oh the humanity! I corrupted the innocent librarian with my dangerous teeth and nails! What would your parents think?!”
>You shake your head, but you can't suppress to laugh at his silliness.
“Firstly it's: “Oh the equinity!” and secondly...”
>”You ponies and your horse puns.” he says, finishing his first burger.
“I'm sure that my paren'ts won't think that you are planning on eating me any time soon, once they get to know you and see how nice you are.”
>”Oh but I am planning on eating you.”
>His lips form a devious grin.
“W-What?”
>”Out, that is.”
>He gives you a wink.
“Oh you!”
>You grab a few fries and throw them at him.
Sorry if everything takes so long. I know that some anons want to see some clop soon, so I tried to speed up things by cutting some stuff. But somehow I can't bring myself to do it, I doesn't feel right to me, dunno.
>>21566628
take your time, if it feels right, then do it. Its your story after all
>>21566648
Yeah but still...
Maybe I'm going to write a quick Rainbow intermissiion in which she fantasizes about Anon, since she has nothing better to do.
Maybe anon can be a prison guard or something.
To be honest 'm in the mood to write some clop.
>>21565932
>secret sauce
I know it's nothing kinkyyet, but I can't help myself with the idea that thinking about the secret sauce will make Twerklight suffer withdrawals againand ask Anon for more of his sauce
>>21565944
>You pull the hayonator to you and float it out if it's box.
It should be "out of its box" and not "out if it's box". No apostrophe when using the possessive pronoun, in the 3rd singular person, that refers to objects.
Also
>He winces, like he just said something wrong.
I'm not sure about it myself, but I think it should be "as if he said something wrong". Anyone can confirm?I'm gonna be namefagging for these spellchecks for the Pastebin version, so you'll know who to insult
>>21566522
>”Oh but I am planning on eating you.”
>”Out, that is.”
Oh goodness, we're in for another treat in no time!
>>21566723
You're still not feeling well? Take some rest, buddy. The story itself has started literally 10 days ago, I'm sure the anons can wait an hour or two more.
>>21566808
Thanks! I will correct the mistakes on the pastebin,
I've started to wonder where my spellcheck minion has run off to:^)
And eh I'm feeling ok right now. Maybe I overdid it a bit yesterday.
>>21566723
>To be honest 'm in the mood to write some clop.
Then write some, yo, you never know, maybe drawings will emerge from it.
>>21567077
Sounds good. I will just finish the eating scene so I can start tomorrow with the movie and cuddling stuff.also feels
>>21567124
Feelings from below today
Feelings from the heart tomorrow
You're sadistic, Cross.
And I'm okay with that.
>>21567124
>I've never seen TLU
>Seen it today for reference
>feels set to defcon 2>I'm ready
>After a few relentless potato-based artillery strikes, you cease your fire.
>Laughing you two shake hooves and hands respectively.
>Peace returned to the kitchen soon after.
>”Let's finish our food, ok? It starting to get cold already.”
>You nod and get to business.
>Aww. It's really a bit cold.
>And if you keep eating at this slow speed, the rest of the burgers will be ice cold by then.
>Maybe you can slowly increase your pace without him noticing.
>He seems pretty engrossed with his food...
>Okay then.
>You take a few quick bites and check if he saw something.
>No. His eyes are still on his food.
>Perfect.
>He reaches for his can and you seize the opportunity.
>With three more bites, the hayonator is no more.
>Victory at all levels.
>At least you thought so... Anon is staring at you, his can in his hand and a grin on his face.
>”Got. Ya. “
>He points at you.
>“I knew, I just had to wait.”
>You can feel your face getting hotter.
“Uh...I...”
>Anon leans forward and ruffles your mane.
>Just like he did countless other times this day.
>”Twi, really. You don't have to be embarrassed around me. Just be you, ok?”
>Wow. You really don't deserve him.
>”I will even cast the first stone.”
>He grabs another burger, along with a handful of fries and shoves all of it into his mouth.
>”Phsee?”
>>21568028
>He swallows hard.
>”Phew. This one was pretty dry.”
>How could you be so lucky?
>Pushing the two remaining burgers towards you, he smiles reassuringly.
>”Come on.”
>This goes completely against everything you know.
>All your books, and Rarity, told you to act as proper as possible around the stallion you wanted to woo.
>But anon is different, isn't he? He isn't even a stallion.
>Hesitating you levitate the food to your face.
>”Come on.”
>You close your eyes.
>Screw it.
>With five big chomps, you devour the greasy treats. Splattering ketchup and lettuce all over the table.
>”Woohoo! Go Twilight!” anon cheers.
>After a few seconds of chewing, you swallow.
>They really were a bit dry.
>Gulping the rest of your soda down, you open your eyes again.
>Only to see anon, smiling softly
>”See? Wasn't that hard, was it?”
>You shake your head.
“No...”
>His hand reaches forward again to scratch behind your ear.
>You coo.
>”Don't distort yourself around me. I won't think any less of you, just because you enjoy your food a bit much.”
>The hot feeling in your cheeks returns.
>Shyly you look at the floor.
“T-Thanks....It's just that...with my former colt-....”
>”Mmhhh?”
>You don't feel quite ready to talk with anon about your former experiences with stallions.
“Let's talk about that some other time, okay?”
>”Whenever you are ready”
>>21568037
>You smile at him.
>He gets up and begins to collect the wrappers and bags, throwing them into the trash can.
>”Did you already decide on what movie you want to watch?”
“Yes. I put it next to the teevee.”
>”Wonderful.”
>Grabbing a wet towel he wipes the table with it.
>”I will just clean up here a bit. How about you already cuddle up on the couch? I will join you in a few.”
>You hop of your chair and walk over to nuzzle his leg.
“Thanks for everything.”
>Anon kneels down and cups your chin in his hand.
>Gently he plants a kiss on your lips.
>Your mouth opens to let his tongue enter.
>Slowly it teases your own tongue out, inviting it to dance.
So this concludes the eating scene. Tonorrow is movie and cuddle time.
Will start on the Rainbow thing in about one hour.
>>21568076
This is some quality shit man, keep it up.
>You are now Rainbow Dash.
>And there are two things you can't believe right now.
>The first thing is that this bitch BonBon called the guards on you.
>You are so going to show her what seagulls do to statues, when you get out. That’s for sure.
>The other thing is that you are still sitting in this bucking cell.
>Why hasn't anon come by already and talked with the guards?
>Usually the guards hang a notice at the regarding pony's, or in this case humans, house when something happens.
>Maybe they forgot this time?
>Or maybe he is still busy getting blown by Twilight.
>By Celestia's beard, those two performed a pretty hot show.
>This was easily your best self achieved orgasm.
>You wonder what else they are going to do or already have done.
>Just thinking about all the possible scenarios gets you going again.
>Phew...
>Eh might as well masturbate again, its not like you have anything better to do.
>They don't even have books here.
>But better make sure that you don't get disturbed.
>Don't want to give the guards the impression that they can join the fun.
“Hey!” you yell.
>No answer.
“Grrr....”
“HEY!”
>The door to your cell opens.
>”Be quiet!” the guard hisses.
>”What do you want?”
“I'm going to bed soon, or whatever you guys like to call this hard bench, so please don't disturb me any more tonight, okay? Once someone wakes me, I have trouble finding sleep again.”
>You give him the puppy eyes.
>Better hope this works.
>He sighes.
>”Okay. I will instruct the night-guard of this.”
>>21568766
>The guard turns around to leave.
“Wait !”
>Stopping in his tracks, he sighs again.
>”Yes?”
“Could you bring me a glass of water, and maybe a small lamp? I can't sleep when it's pitch black and the ceiling lamp is too bright.”
>”How old are you? Five?”
>You glare at him.
“I can't help it, ok?!”
>”We don't have lamps, since inmates tend to set the cells on fire, but I might find a flashlight somewhere. Will this suffice?”
>Uhhh perfect.
“This will do nicely. Thanks.”
>”No problem.”
>The guard leaves and closes the door behind him.
>Your lips form a grin.
>>21568784
>This is going to be so good.
>Nothing is better than a nice and intense orgasm right before you go to sleep.
>A few minutes pass and the guard returns.
>Floating in his magical grip are a glass of water, the flashlight and a thin cloth.
>He levitates the three things into your cell.
>”Here you go. You can lay the cloth over the torch, if it's too bright for you.”
>Aww how sweet of him.
“Thanks!”
>You beam him a smile and he nods in return.
>”Good night.”
“Good night!” you chirp.
>The door closes again.
>Taking the flashlight into your hooves, you inspect your lover for tonight closer.
>It's not as big as anon's but it will do.
>You hop onto the bench and lie down on your back.
>Now you need a setting... masturbation is twice as enjoyable with a good fantasy.
>You think for a bit, your left hoof already caressing your teats.
“Aaachh...”
>Ponyfeathers... you can't think of anything.
>This cell is an imagination killer!
>Or.... you take a look around.
>Or maybe it isn't.
>You close your eyes and indulge in the fantasy you just created,
>>21568557
Thanks!
Expect anonguard X rainbowprisoner clop in about an hour.
How about a story with the MILFs/mature mares?
>You are still Rainbow Dash.
>But this time you have cool scars all over your body from all the fighting you did.
>Also you are currently sitting in the isolation cell of the Trottingham high security prison.
>One guard threw your food on the ground and you couldn't let this sit on you.
>What would the other prisoners think of you?
>Exactly.
>They would think that you are weak, and this would mean the death of you.
>So you bucked his fucking face in!
>He won't be able to eat any solid food for a while, that’s for sure.
>You laugh deeply and menacingly.
>Yeah just like a real criminal.
>*creak*
>!
>The door to your cell opens and the light is switched on.
>You have to shield your eyes from the incoming light.
>After a few seconds your eyes adjust to the sudden brightness.
>Ughh its the strange monkey guard.
>You hate him, he always looks creepily at you.
>”Well, well, well... who do we have here?”
>He steps closer to your cell.
“What do you want, you two legged freak?!”
>Shaking his head, he strikes his baton against one of the iron bars.
>”No need to get so passive-aggressive Dashie.”
>He kneels down.
>”I just heard, what you did to my buddy Hard Lesson.”
>His baton points at you.
>”That wasn't really nice, his whole face is ruined now... poor lad.”
>You back up a bit.
>>21569504
“This asshole had it coming!”
>”Oh, I know.”
“W-What?”
>He laughs.
>”I know what he did to you and the other prisoners. I just couldn't do anything about it, since he is, well was, higher ranked than me.”
>The monkey stands up again.
>”To be honest I, and the other guards, are pretty glad that you smashed his head in. Opened his position, you know. And guess who got it?”
>A bit dumbfounded of his sudden openness and friendliness, you shakily point a hoof at him.
>He never was like this... Be careful Rainbow, he has something planned.
>”Exactly.”
>His grin grows wider.
“Y-You want something! Why are you here?!”
>Another laugh.
>”Oh you are a quick one. Yeah... I'm here for something.”
>He kneels down again to face you.
>”I'm here to propose you a small deal.”
>His eyes glare at you, piercing a hole through your head.
>”I know you don't like the isolation cell. It's so small and so narrow, you can't walk around propely
let alone fly. So how about we make a deal. You give me something, and I give you something. Your normal cell back and more time in the flying cage, to be exact.”
>More flying time!? You could finally stretch your wings properly again.... But...
>This sounds good... too good. What might he want?
>You sit down on your haunches.
“And what do you want in return?” you say, shooting him an angry glare.
>He leans his head sideways. The grin still on his face.
>”You.”
>>21569521
“W-What?!”
>”You heard me right. I want you.”
>Retreating to the back wall you take a defensive stance.
“N-Never! If you want some flank go to the whorehouse or something!
>The monkey guard shakes his head.
>”But I don't want some filthy whorse, I want you and your tight little ass there.”
>What?
>No words manage to leave your mouth, you are too shocked.
>”You can either stay here for three more weeks, alone in the dark, or you just accept my offer and feel the wind in your mane again. Your decision.”
“....”
>”Ok then. Have it your way.”
>He rises again and turns around to leave.
>His hand is already on the door handle.
“No! Wait!”
>He looks back to you.
>”Yes?”
>You can't believe you are doing this...
“I will do it...” you say, defeated.
>The turning of a lock can be heard.
“And you promise that I will get my old cell back and more flying time?”
>The monkey chuckles.
>”Of course. That's the difference between me and Hard Lesson. I'm not here to make your life more miserable than it already is. And my new position opened new possibilities to handle things. If you catch my drift.”
>You nod.
>”Good girl.”
>He opens the door to your cell and steps inside. His form now towering before yours.
>>21569946
>tfw anongaurd uses Dash's wings against her
>tfw Dashie can't resist that offer
>tfw intense clop incumming
>mfw submissive Dashie is my fetish
>mfw I actually have a face
It's really happening this time, r-right guys?
>>21570211
>At least this will be over soon, if he is like any other stallion.
>Kneeling down he takes your face in his hand and plants a rough kiss on your lips.
>His tongue pries your mouth open and invades it.
>Exploring every inch of your mouth it finally finds what it was looking for.
>Your own tongue.
>You try to evade his but its no use.
>Complying you let him have his prize.
>It sloppily and greedily snakes around and you try to match its movements.
>You feel a warm feeling building up in your lower abdomen.
>After a good minute he breaks the kiss and looks into your eyes.
>His face still sporting this smug grin of his.
>”Wasn't this nice?”
>A click can be heard as he unbuckles his pants.
>They fall down to his ankles revealing his already erect member.
>You gulp.
>It looks so different from a stallion...
>He grabs the back of your head and forces you closer to it.
>”Come on now. Don't be shy,”
>>21570458
>Hesitantly you open your mouth and take the tip of his penis into it.
>You start to suck on it, which makes him inhale sharply.
>”That's the stuff, Dashie. Go on.”
>Your tongue travels down his shaft, lubricating it with your saliva.
>Feeling the pressure on the back of your head increase, you move your head further down.
>He's now nearly hilted and you have to suppress your gag reflex.
>In an effort to increase his arousal, your tongue now coils up and down his cock. Squeezing and massaging it.
>You begin to bob your head up and down, sucking on his glance every time you reach the tip..
>Why hasn't he cum yet?
>His breathing starts to get faster and shallower.
>Increasing the pace of your bobbing you use the tips of your wings to tickle and caress his balls.
>Another sharp inhale and he grabs your head on either side.
>You can feel his cock sliding in and out of your threat at a rapid speed, as he fucks your mouth.
>Tears start to form in your eyes and your nose begins to run.
>At the last possible moment he pulls out and lets loose.
>He grunts and several thick strings of his cum land on your snout, mane and face.
>Your tongue betrays you as it licks around your muzzle, trying to lap us much of his seed as possible.
>Exhausted and out of breath you collapse onto the floor.
>Out of the corner of your eye you can see him remove his shirt.
>Isn't he finished? Didn't he get what he wanted?
>He bows down.
>”You did good Dashie. But don't think we are finished yet.”
>You shake your head.
“Yes we are! You got what you wanted, now leave me alone.”
>His gaze wanders around your cowering form.
>”Oh my!”
>He scoops something up and holds it in front of your face.
>It's …your own arousal.
>”Somepony got exited!” he states with a chuckle.
>One hand travels along your side and gropes your flank.
>”You enjoyed this? Didn’t you?”
>This fucking smug grin returns.
>Ashamed you look away.
>”If you want more, you just have to say it.”
>Anon's fingers trace your cutie mark.
>You don't want this.
>Then why are you so bucking turned on right now?!
>”Come on.”
>You feel his hot breath on your ear.
>”Say it.”
>He gives it a slight nibble.
“Aaach...”
>His hand moves around your thigh, now hovering mere millimetres above your soaked marehood.
>”I can give you so much more...”
>You shudder.
“F...”
>”Yes?”
>A finger flicks your clit.
“Sssssshhhhh......Fu...”
>No...please...
>Another nibble.
>”You're so close...”
>You can't take it any more.
“Fuck me!”
>”Good girl.”
>>21570844
Based writefag.
>>21570844
preemptive bumpgood night from central europe
This is goodnight for me. I have a test in the morning - the pones can wait.
I hope we have more content when I get home tomorrow.
>He grabs you by your hips and turns you on your back. Your hind legs spread wide.
>”You're going to enjoy this, believe me.”
>The tip of his cock teases your winking entrance. Your clit desperately trying to draw it in.
“Just do it already...”
>”Don't worry, you won't have too wait much longer. Just one more thing.”
“W-What?”
>He reaches behind him.
>H-His baton?
>You inhale sharply as you feel it's length rubbing against your lower lips. Lubricating it with your nectar.
“W...What are you up to?!”
>His finger shushes you.
>”This should be enough. Don't want to hurt you.”
“Hurt me?”
>He doesn’t answer you.
>Something presses against your black ring.
>No... he wouldn't.
>”This is it, Dashie.”
>He strokes your cheek.
>”Just say it one more time.”
>A-Again?
>Buck it...
“Fuck me...please.” you whisper.
>”Good girl.”
>>21571649
>Saying these words he thrusts his hips into yours, his cock sliding into you.
>At the same the baton is forced into your rectum.
>A immense wave of pleasure ripples through your body and you climax nearly instantaneously
>Your head jolts back and you feel your vagina spasm and contracting around his dick.
“Mmmmhaaaa!”
>”You already came?”
>He pulls out a bit.
>”I'm far away from it, you better don't pass out Dashie.”
>Grabbing your front hooves he plunges back in again.
>The pace of his thrusting is getting faster and faster.
>Each time he hilts against your sensitive lips, another rush of ecstasy rocks your body and you scream out.
>Your tongue is lolling out and your eyes nearly rolled into their sockets.
>His breathing is getting faster again.
>Looks like he is close.
“Cuuuahhhhhhh!”
>He steadies your face and kisses you again.
>This time more gentle.
>Your tongue intertwines with anon's and you moan into his mouth.
>He breaks the kiss.
>”I'm cumming soon, Dashie.”
>You focus your gaze on his face and nod.
“Innnuuaahhh.... Inside me! Everything!”
>Your pussy is clamping down on and milking his cock so hard now, he nearly cant pull back any more.
>With one final thrust his whole body shudders and he releases inside you.
>You feel spurt after spurt of his hot seed hitting your womb.
>The world goes black.
Okay this is it for tonight.
I hope you all enjoyed it. I will conclude this tomorrow.
Good night mates.
>>21571692
I love you based CrossRoads. Goodnight.
>>21571692
>I will conclude this tomorrow
Godspeed writefriend, may we see more of you soon.
>>21571678
And then before Dashie goes to sleep after that fantasy the real guard outside yells "hey! you better clean up after yourself before you go to sleep, no need to leave the cell stinking of yourself like that!" And then it turns out she wasnt as quiet as she thought and the guard had just been standing there awkwardly having to listen to her moan about weird monkey dick.
Bump
bump for cute twie
This is fucking amazing, crossroads
bump for based crossroads.
bump for hungry twi
>>21564354
>not just looking at the filename
>562443
>http://derpiboo.ru/562443
>Original link in source
https://derpiboo.ru/561656
Lazy.
>>21564568
Holy shit, fucking this.
>>21566808
>>He winces, like he just said something wrong.
>I'm not sure about it myself, but I think it should be "as if he said something wrong". Anyone can confirm?
Pretty sure you can do either.
>>21567077I wouldn't hate this
>>21571678
>”I'm far away from it, you better don't pass out Dashie.”
Correct it to 'you better not'
Also,Muh dick
>>21565944
>eating hay
wot
>Dash fantasizing about Anon
>Realizes she can't fantasize about anything but Anon
>Thinks she's addicted to his cum now after drinking it from Twilight's bottle
>Enlists Pinkie's help in tying Anon down and getting her "fix" personally
>Ponka accidentally drinks some
>Under some pretense or another, (Panko accidentally gets some in the punch because lolrandom?) all of mane 6 are convinced they're addicted to Anon's cum
>(gang)rape
>Twilight finally reveals that Anon's cum was never actually addictive, she was just lying in order to make him have sex with her, and they're all suffering mass hysteria, and need to GET OF HER BOYFRIEND.
>>21576161
>>Twilight finally reveals that Anon's cum was never actually addictive, she was just lying in order to make him have sex with her, and they're all suffering mass hysteria, and need to GET OF HER BOYFRIEND.
......
Well.....If they are addicted to his cum of course they need to.
>>21575273
>year 1000 after lunas banishment
>not eating hay
>...
>You're awake again.
>By Luna's glorious full moon... did you pass out?
>Looks like it.
>Reaching for your glass of water, you gulp it down.
>Wow... You've to correct yourself.
>THIS was the best and most intense masturbation session you ever had.
>Like you said before... a nice fantasy makes it twice as good.
>You wipe the sweat of your face and take a look around.
>There is quite a large puddle beneath your bench.
>The bench itself is also pretty drenched.
>Buck...
>Better open the small window.
>You'll just wait for the stench to air out a bit, and then ask for more water.
>It's already drying.
>Curling up on the dry end of the bench, you yawn.
>You feel so relaxed and satisfied right now.
>Just a small nap and then you will call the guard...
>Yes...
>Your eyelids fall down and the world goes black again.
----
This concludes her fantasy. I uploaded it to pastebin, where I also fleshed it out a bit more. Check it out!http://pastebin.com/u/X-Roads
>>21577203
gonna be interesting to see which way the guards react. or if they already checked up on her or heard her.
>>21577231
They will certainly not forget about this "incident" when they talk to anon about rainbow.
bump
just to be sure
>You are now purple, cute and horned again.
>And you are sitting on anon's sofa, the blanket draped across your shoulders, waiting for him.
>To kill some time, you rearrange the items on the coffee-table.
>You are so absorbed in your readjustments that you didn't notice anon sneaking into living room.
>The bottle goes there and … perfect.
>All of a sudden something pokes into your sides and you whinny in surprise.
“Neeiiighhaaa!”
>Jolting you head around you see anon with a goofy smirk on his face.
>”Did... Did you just whinny?”
“No.. I didn't.” you say embarrassed, the pillows suddenly becoming very interesting.
>”Aww, come on.”
>He leaps over the backrest and plops down next to you.
“Whoa!”
>Pulling you onto his lap, he begins to lazily rub your back.
>”Don't be embarrassed. I thought it sounded very cute. In fact almost everything you do is adorable.”
>Don't blush... don't blush...
>Its no use. You can already feel it creeping up your face.
>He chuckles and leans down to plant a kiss on your snout.
>”So what movie did you choose?”
>You float it over to anon.
“The last Unicorn.”
>>21578327
>He grabs it out of your magical grip.
>”Good choice I've seen it countless times as a child.”
>You look up to him.
“If you don't want to watch it, we surely will find something else.”
>”Nah. It's alright. It's been a while since I've watched this bitter-sweet piece of animation.”
>Huh bitter-sweet?
“There are sad cartoons?”
>He nods.
>”Yeah. Quite a few, at least on earth. If you are still interested in this genre after tonight, we can watch Grave of the Fireflies next time. That's a real tear-jerker.”
>You lean your head onto his stomach.
“The title alone sounds already really sad.”
>”Mmhhmm... it's fuc... really depressing.”
“What's it about?”
>He strokes your cheek.
>”Mostly showing the atrocities of war from the perspective of a child.”
“Ohh...”
>Anon told you a bit about his world, but never went to deep into its history.
>You only know that there were many wars.
>Something that is completely unknown to Equestria.
>Grabbing the remote, he boops you on the muzzle to get your attention.
>”Mind putting the dvd in and turning the tv on?” he says, smiling.
“Of course not.”
Rewatching a few scenes from the last unicorn now, so I know what I'm writing about.
>>21578361
>actually caring enough to watch a movie just that you can write about it
You really are based.
>>21578526
Heh thanks.
And deciding on which scnenes to include is really fucking diffiicult... there are too many good scenes.
>>21578339
OH GOD DON'T MAKE HER WATCH GRAVE OF THE FIREFLIES!
>Anon pulls the blanket over your two bodies, tucking you both in nice and comfy.
>Snuggling closer to his chest, he presses something on the remote to skip the advertisements.
>With a quick spell you turn the lights off.
>Now it's perfect.
>He scratches behind your ear and whispers a soft “Thank you” into it.
>Just as you were to ask him about the wine, he reaches forward and uncorks it.
>Filling the two glasses about one third of their height, he hands you one.
>You grab it with your magic and clink glasses with him.
>”To us.”
>Your cheeks burn up again.
“To us.”
>Taking a small sip of the wine, you take your time to relish the taste of it on your tongue.
>Yeah.
>It's good.
>You are not a connoisseur like Rarity.
>Smiling, you give him a nod to show that you like it.
>He returns the smile and starts the movie.
---
Quick update, since I'm still figuring out how to include the movie into the story properly.
>>21578903
OH BUT I WILL, AND YOU WILL ENJOY IT!
>>21578706
Well, I don't want to put too much pressure on you, but if you would possibly taken your time, and detailed anons/Twilights reactions, on most of the scenes, should it take day or seven to write, that could be really something.
I know a lot people are waiting for clop, it could be really long, and you have your pace, which only you should decide.
Just I thought it has so much potential to alter/twist/influence their relationship.Or Im just overthinking stuff like usual ... oh well.
>>21579068
I thought about that too... but I thinkI will focus on some key scenes like the side-show caravan, the bandits, the transformation and such things. With some bits of reactions to other scenes thrown here and there.
It would simply take too much time, rewatches of the movie and rereads of summaries.
Clopwise you guys have the rainbow fantasy I wrote yesterday. That should keep you satisfied for a whileatleast I hope so
Eh back to writing.
>>21579153
Or... or... just thought that you don't need to include all the scenes "now", but if in the future in your story, Anon/Twi run into some ethical, existencional or identity questions, you can reference it as flashback, if needed.thus you can just detail sevreal most important parts now, without worrying about "not covering enough"
>>21579272
I think I found a good middle ground now. I found a goodgermansummary of the plot, which I will summarise again a bit in my head and work the outcome part for part into the story.
Your idea is neat though, I will keep it in my head for the future.
>The movie begins with two humans, who appear to be hunters, riding through a forest.
>Are these horses on what they ride on?
>Anon never told you that humans do this.
>”Before you ask, yes they are riding on horses. And no I'm not going to ride you, at least not outside of my bedroom.”
>He winks at you.
“O-Ok” you stammer out, taking another sip to hide your blush.
>You focus your attention back to the movie.
>The two humans are arguing with each other. One states that a unicorn must be nearby since the forest here seems magical, while the other is sceptical and claims that there are no more unicorns left in the world.
>Interesting.
>They leave the clearing and the camera shifts to a white mare.
“Wow...”
>She looks so different from you... her snout is much longer, as well as her legs.
>Her eyes are a beautiful blue colour, like sapphires, and her mane is light blue.
>It reminds you a lot of freshly fallen snow.
>She is also a lot broader than you, barrel-wise, but still breathtakingly gorgeous.
>”That's the classical human depiction of a unicorn.” you hear anon whispering.
>A butterfly approaches the unicorn and she asks him if he has ever seen another unicorn.
>He tells her that a fiery Red Bull has taken them all away and flies away singing.
“Oh no...”
>Anon presses you closer to him, his hand idly running over the coat on your shoulder.
>Hesitant the unicorn decides to leave the forest she calls home and search for her kin.
---
Is this ok so?
Looks good, keep going
>>21579593
>The next few scenes show her running through the beautiful drawn landscape.
>You are engrossed by the quality of the animation and art.
>Worlds better than what they produce here in equestria, where cartoons are merely a thing for foals.
>She comes to a series of farmlands where a old farmer tries to tame her.
>Apparently he does not recognize her as an unicorn, since he cannot see her horn, which angers her greatly.
>You float your glass over to your lips and drink from it.
>It's nearly empty now, so you fill it again.
>Oh looks like you missed a bit.
>She's sleeping now and what seems like a caravan comes along, led by an ugly old hag.
>”Mommy Fortuna.” anon whispers.
>”She's a witch.”
>To be honest you could tell, but you wonder what she's going to do.
>The witch talks to her hunchbacked henchman and puts a spell on the white unicorn to keep her sleeping.
>Then they put her in a cage.
“H-How mean!”
>Be careful Sparkles. The alcohol is already making an impact on you.
>Anon chuckles.
>His hand runs down your spine, massaging around it in small circles.
>Aahh... feels heavenly.
>You shudder a bit.
>In the next scene the lackey, who's called Ruhk, shows a group of spectators what the caravan has to offer.
>Introducing them one by one to the witches abominations.
“Uggh...”
>Those are some really horrible things.
>Lastly he shows them the unicorn, who has a fake horn on her head so the group can actually see it.
>You feel sorry for her and take another sip.
>>21580239
good work, keep going
>>21580239
Twilight keeps drinking. Odds are she's a lightweight and is already starting to feel it...odds are she's gonna get a tad buzzed and get all rubby rubby on Anon.
>>21580362
drunk sex is best sex.
>A thin human male with brown hair and a pretty big nose, dressed in a blue robe and hat approaches her.
“Hah! He looks like you dressed as Trixie!” you state, giggling.
>He pouts.
>”My nose is not /that/ big... And who is Trixie?”
“She's the mare you met, who demanded the great and plentiful refill.”
>”Ah I see. I'll give you that.”
>Snickering again you stretch your fore-legs over his thighs and turn your attention back to the movie.
>It feels nice being so close to him.
>Apparently the thin one's name is Schmendrick, and he can see her real horn.
“Is he a magician?”
>Anon nods.
>Uhhh... magic humans.
>Lets drink to that!
>He asks the unicorn to point out the other creatures, and she reveals their true form to him
>But the creepy bird thing is seemingly also a magical being.
>It's name is Ceaeno.
>Schmendrick uses his magic to free the mare who in return frees all the poor animals.
>Even the harpy.
>Who promptly attacks the unicorn.
“Zap her!”
>Anon gives you light pat on the head.
>”She can't use magic like you, Twi.”
“But she's an unicorn!”
>”Yeah but a non-equestrian unicorn.”
>A bit in disbelief, you nod.
>>21580717
>Fortuna comes outside to investigate the commotion, along with her lackey and Ceaeno turns her attention from the unicorn to them.
>You wince and press your body closer to his as she brutally kills both of them.
>Another thing you would never see in an equestrian cartoon...
>Schmendrick an the white mare seize the opportunity and escape.
>You see the witch one last time as she states that the harpy will always know that she got caged by her.
God, sorry for being inactive.Stress and shit, getting ready for gaming college, and it's fucking hard.I'll see if i can draw some lewd scenes soon!
>>21580844
No problem mate. Some stuff is more important than pone.
Looking forward to it.
>>21578339
>Grave of the Fireflies
"Although I justified my actions, thinking it was the only appropriate course of action at that time... Ias best humanshall bear responsibility and submit myself to the scrutiny and reprimand ofMy LittleHuman history."
>The next scenes show Schmendrick accompanying the pearl-coloured mare in her quest to find the other unicorns and he tells her what he knows about the Red Bull.
>It's owned by king Haggard, though his very existence is shrouded in mystery.
>Now its really getting interesting.
>You wonder if something romantic between them will happen.
>Just like with you and anon..
>He takes a drink and you clink glasses again with him.
>The clopping of hooves can be heard.
>Something is happening.
>A group of very dangerous looking humans rides down the road.
>The unicorn manages to hide in time but they capture poor Schmendrick.
“He's going to be fine, or...?”
>Anon pets your mane instead of answering your question.
>They take him back to their camp where he meets their leader, Captain Cully, and his maid Molly.
>In an desperate attempt to escape, Schmendrick casts a powerful illusion spell.
>Summoning a green clothed man and his followers.
>”That's Robin Hood, a famous legendary thief. Who steals from the rich and gives it to the poor.”
“How nice of him!”
>You lift your glass.
“To Robin Hood!”
>”To Robin Hood!” anon says, chuckling.
>Taking a rather big gulp, you feel a hiccup incoming but you successfully manage to suppress it.
>Intimidated by Schmendrick's magic, Captain Cully catches him again and ties the magician to a nearby tree.
>>21581601
>He tries to free himself with magic, but accidentally brings the tree to life.
“Ohhh...”
>The tree is rather well endowed, breast-wise.
>You giggle like a schoolfilly.
>She falls in love with Schmendrick and nearly smothers him to death with her assets.
>Luckily the unicorn arrives in time and saves him with her own magic.
“Shee! She can do magic too!”
>”I never said that she doesn't have magic. But she can't shoot laser beams out of her horn.”
“For what ish magic good if you can't shhood lasers...” you say wiggling one hoof to emphasize your point.
>He laughs and ruffles your mane.
>”Getting a little buzzed here, eh?”
“Am not...”
>You turn your attention back to the film.
>The bandit's captains maid joins the scene.
>Apparently she can see the unicorn for what she really is too, and begins to cry.
>She curses the mare for coming to her as an old woman rather than a young maid.
>That’s sad...
>A few tears start to form in your eyes.
>>21581428
Heh nice.
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So thats it for today. Pastebin is updatedhttp://pastebin.com/u/X-Roads
Did you enjoy the movie part so far, or is too boring/slow or whatever?
As always feel free to leave critique and suggestions on how to improve the story.
>>21581670
It's amazing man!, not too slow, not too fast I would say.
>>21581670
I enjoyed it. It's nice to read some sweet stuff every now and then. I think the movie scene is paced fine, not too rushed and not too slow.
Also, buzzed Twilight. Called it.
>>21581723
>>21581739
Okay then. i will continue at this pace for the rest of the film, tomorrow.
Also buzzed Twi is cute Twi.
>>21581886
Any Twi is cute Twi
Bump
>>21583621
What the actual fuck? Who made that, and is there more?
>>21583699
Andywilson92 on youtube. He has a whole fucking series parodying the Simpsons, called Snospis Eht. Very surreal, and has one of my favorite animation styles (intentionally shitty/bizarre). He has a few videos with ponies, but only a passing reference, really.
Was going to post this anyway, figured I'd save a post: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QFnOf9200rc
>>21581942
Wise words were spoken on this day.
page 9 bump
>>21578339
>Grave of the Fireflies
>>21578339
>grave of the fireflies
>>21580239
>where cartoons are merely a thing for foals.
kek
Anon could theoretically be a head producer and brainstormer for animations of all kinds, considering all the cartoons he's watched over the years.
>>21583896
>intentionally shitty
Just like your taste.
Bimp
Brap for tolot
Bumping for some feels
![the-iron-giant_o_1767307[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/TAfJBC9.jpg "the-iron-giant_o_1767307[1].jpg")
>>21587166
>>21587934
I haven't seen this film... My usual source of feels is the Iron Giant, so if we use that as a benchmark, where is this?
>>21590618
Likely a whole lot more fucked up.
It's about a war story told by the point of view of kids.
Oi mates.
Gonna start writing in a few, stay tuned.
>>21590618
Pretty fucking depressing animated drama. Based on a semi-autobiographical novel. I highly recommend you watch you it some time.
>>21590618
Its... Interesting.
Some say its about the travesties of war, others say, as here>>21591189
I say its a coming to age story.
Its about growing up and coming into your own in being your own man.
About realizing that sometimes, a part about being a man is realizing when to bite the bullet and just deal with the suck.
And realizing that your actions can have huge consequences, and that its better to be a humble but alive man than to be a proud but dead one.
All laid out with WW2 Japan post Hellfire, as a backdrop for the actions of the characters and the source of their strife.
>Molly joins the group in their quest, much to the disapproval of Schmendrick.
>The party continues their journey.
>You are still fascinated by how beautiful the unicorn mare is, despite her different form.
>She's only a drawing...but still...
>Why can't you be like her?
>The glass finds it's way back to your lips.
>Urgh.. it's empty.
>Floating the bottle over to you, anon grabs it mid-flight.
“H-Hey!”
>”Don't you think, you should slow down a bit?” he says, with a concerned look on his face.
“I can handle myshelf! Itsh not like that I have to go shomewhere else today.”
>You point a hoof towards the door.
“Alsho I don't get the chance to just relax and drink a bit often... with Shpike always home and shuch things.”
>He sighs.
>”I guess you're right. But please don't overdo it, okay?”
>You nod and beam him a smile.
>He fills your glass again.
“Thanks anon.”
>”No problem, Twi.”
>Turning on your side, your head resting on his lap, you shift your attention to the TV again.
>A castle is now in sight of the group.
>>21592474
“Ish this Haggards castle?”
>”Yep.”
>Suddenly they are attacked by the Red Bull, who ignores the two humans and attempts to herd the unicorn towards the castle.
“No...”
>Urged by Molly to do something, Schmendrick uses a great deal of magic to transform the unicorn into a human girl.
>The bull is confused by her new form and retreats.
>Wow...
>Even her human form is gorgeous.
>Skin pale as the moon and hair golden as the sun.
>Are all human females so pretty?
>The maid and the unicorn are equally upset about the magicians decision to turn her mortal.
>”I can feel this body dying all around me.” the now transformed mare says.
“Poor filly...”
>Anon puts a hand on your hoof and squeezes it, running his thumb over the thin fur there.
>Nevertheless they continue to the dreary castle and are welcomed into Haggard's decrepit hall.
>They intoduce themselves as Haggard's new magician and cook, accompanied by the Lady Amalthea.
>Fitting name for such a beautiful creature.
>Haggard is intrigued by Schmendrick's potential to please him, so he dismisses his current mage, who's name is Mabruk.
>Mabruk laughs at him and tells the king the he just let walk doom right through his front door.
>King Haggard as well as his adopted son, Lir, show interest in Amalthea.
>And who could blame them?
>Her beauty is so dazzling, that any male would fall for her
>Unlike yours.
>Another gulp of wine flows down your throat.
>But she ignores their advances and spends her days wandering through the castle.
>Slowly forgetting what she really is and what she is here for.
>This brings memories of your first encounter with discord back.
>Your friends too forgot who they really were...
>These were dark days.
>...
>Schmendrick and Molly realize that they are losing time and that Amalthea is becoming more and more human.
>So they do their best to discover where the lair of the Red Bull is, while still keeping the king entertained, so he doesn’t grow suspicious.
>In the next scene Molly finally finds out that the lair is located at the base of an old clock, from a cat that only speaks in riddles; while Amalthea and Lir fall in love with each other.
>>21592968
>You groan.
>You hoped that Schmendrick would be her love interest.
>Anon continues to pet your side as he silently sips from his wine.
>Haggard suspects her of her true nature.
>Apparently he once saw a unicorn and it gave him such joy that he sought to keep it for himself.
>So he commissioned the Red Bull to gather up all the unicorns of the world and drive them into the sea below his castle, so that he may look upon them every day.
“Bastard!” you state angrily.
I wonder what Anon is thinking about right now...
>>21593537
We will come to that when the movie is over.
>>21593537
I think Anon's thinking why hasn't Twilight asked for her fix yet when she said she could go without it throughout the entire day.
>>21593699
Because the addiction was clearly just a lie designed to get into his pants repeatedly.But Rainbow doesn't know that, and totally gargled his spunk earlier...
>”He will get what he deserves, Twi.”
>You groan again and anon looks at you.
>”Is something the matter, Twi? You seem tense.”
“N-No... maybe it'sh the alcohol.” you murmur, avoiding his eyes.
>Rising your glass again, you take another sip of the dark red liquid in it.
>He stays silent, but you can still feel his gaze on you.
>The maid tells Schmendrick that she knows where the Bull's lair is and thy gather Amalthea and head to the old clock in the main hall.
>Uh... is this a crowned skeleton across the clock?
>Creepy.
>And it speaks too?
>Even creepier.
>It laughs at their failed attempts to open the lair.
>The cat told Molly before that she should get a bottle of wine but she couldn't find one, so she just filled a bottle with water.
>Schmendrick feigns turning the water into wine and this peaks the skeleton's interest.
>It offers them the secret to enter the beast's lair in trade for the “wine”; now an empty bottle.
>They agree and hand over the glass vessel.
>The skeleton tells them that they just need to walk right through the clock, before gulping down the invisible liquid.
>>21594336
>At least your wine is real, and you decide to utilize this fact right now.
>Anon stopped his petting, seems he is too engrossed in the movie.
>So you gently poke him with your horn and he starts rubbing your your back again.
>Ahhh.. nice.
>However, when he catches sight of Amalthea, he recognizes her as an unicorn and cries out to Haggard.
>The king runs down the hall and swings his sword at Schmendrick, just as Molly and the transformed mare enter the real between the clock and the lair.
>The magician follows quickly and Haggard destroys the portal.
Taking a break now. The movie is always over, then feels will happen and after that clop.
>>21593699
>>21593879
She got her fix twice on this day already. The latone maybe three or four hours ago. But don't worry she will feel it again sometime soon.
>>21594389
It's okay do what ya must also those dash bits inc that impreg fetish
>Nigga status is now at level "muh" I repeat nigga status is at level "muh"
You should write just a bit of that in the preg general you would be loved long time.
>>21593537
>rape
>>21594704
Impregnation is a major fetish of mine, and cumming inside rainbow dash is obligatory anyways.
Never visited the preg generals though. I find pregnant mares cute but not sexydem rubbable bellies. Maybe I will visit them some time and write them a one shot.
Going to start writing again now, stay tuned.
>>21595184
You n me both brother always needs more impreg of top cunt/best pone
>The kings adopted son follows them too, as they search the lair for an exit.
>Schmendrick explains to him the whole situation, but he doesn't care who or what Amalthea is, he loves her anyway.
>Aww... how cute.
>Inspired by his words, Amalthea claims that she wants to remain human and die with him.
>But much to your surprise the prince objects.
>”I know when things should happen, and what should happen is that Amalthea continues her quest and save the unicorns. Even if that means that she must become one again. Unable to return my love.” Lyr states, a determined look on his face.
>You hear anon quietly repeating his words.
>Somehow this makes you smile.
>Suddenly the Red Bull appears and recognizes the pale lady for what she really is.
>Schmendrick manages to transform her back into an unicorn and she leads the Bull out of its lair, onto the beach.
>With the magician unable to do anything, Lir steps forward but is trampled by the bull.
“No!” you scream out.
>Anon presses you closer to him.
>Enraged the unicorn turns to face the bull.
>It's intimidated by her sudden fierceness and is pushed back into the sea, where a large wave appears.
>Hundreds of unicorns emerge out of the foam.
>Your can only watch in awe, mouth agape.
>They envelope the Bull in sea water before storming the beach, towards the castle.
>Releasing it from it's rocky base.
>Haggard tumbles to his death into the sea.
>”I knew you were the last!” he shouts, before the waters engulfs him.
>>21595650
„Sherves him right... ashhole...“
>Anon chuckles.
>Feeling that the movie is nearing it's end, you decide that your wine should share the same fate.
>So you gulp the rest down.
>Maybe a bit too fast .... your head starts spinning.
>Well it spins faster than before.
>Now you really have to concentrate on the movie if you want to know how it ends.
>Amalthea returns to Molly and Schmendrick and revives Lir with her magic, before saying her farewells and departs.
>No... this can't end like this.
>Didn't she at least retain some of her feelings and emotions?
>The remaining trio returns to the countryside where Lir says his goodbyes, before leaving to find his own way.
>Schmendrick asks Molly to go with him and she agrees.
>They set up a camp and go to sleep.
>You thought this was the end but much to your relief the unicorn returns.
>She expresses her thanks to Schmendrick, even if she is the first unicorn to feel the sting of mortality and the pain of regret,
>He apologizes but she tells him that she also learned love, and that thanks to him there are unicorns in the world again.
>For that, she is grateful even if she must feel regret for leaving.
>The film ends with her returning to her forest as Molly and Schmendrick look on after her.
>The last Unicorn.
>...
>>Wow... that was just …
>You wipe a tear from your eye.
>>21595879
Here comes them feels.
So this ends the movie scene. I hope you all enjoyed it. Also this was the last update for today.
Pastebin is updatedhttp://pastebin.com/u/X-Roads
I hope I didn't bore you too much. Tomorrow we return to the "regular" story. Feels inbound and maybe clop, depending on fast I write.
>>21595924
sorry again for being so fucking slow on drawfagging, still pretty busy. Put "Sleeping twi//CrossRoads" on top of my to-do list for tomorrow.
>>21595987
>sleeping twi
as in, "draw sleeping twi under blankets, possibly on Anon's leg".
>>21595998
Nice. Looking forward to it.
bump
>>21596566
>dundu status
made me giggle
>>21596581
R ya 'avin eh gigle m8?
There's no particular reason that I do this. I just go on the threads, see what's there, and, no matter how long ago a reply was posted, I just say bump. There's no purpose to it all! Here I am, sitting on my ass, only to bump threads. Why, some may ask. Why is it that I do this? Well, I have no answer for them. It's as if I was asked a math question in class, but wasn't paying attention. I choke, I look around... and no one helps me. They can't - they don't have the mental capacity to comprehend the uselessness of my actions. It eludes them! Right over their fucking heads. But ya know what? It doesn't matter. I’m a shameless faggot that just lurks these threads because I have no other ambition in life than to waste my once precious time on a website filled with others just like me. No life. No house. No gf. Shame is put upon us by normalfags who go outside and do ratarded things. Even my mom told me to become An Hero. But, there is hope. Even as small as it is, I have hope. Hope that the writefag isn’t died, that the goy keeps shilling, that OP delivers, that my waifu is not a shit, that my J-list account doesn’t get hacked, that niggers stop nigging, that the banana poster will be saved. But there’s one final form – the perfect form – that the thread will stay alive. I’ve found my purpose, my reason to live. Let’s keep the threads going, for it’s our final resting place until sage is upon us.
Also, bump
>>21597153
kek
bomp for toilot spakl
>>21597153
One could say that you finally found yourspecial talent
>>21597297
>>21597297
Getting real tired of your shit Carlos
Based yurofags, please keep this thread alive.
Your truly,
Anonymous.
Ps: Bump.
Based bump
>>21595879
Bookhoers is like my 4th favorite pone.
But this story is really good.
thanks cross roads
>>21594353
>that picture
HHNNNNNNGGGGGGGG
>>21595593
>topcunt
>best pone
>Not Twi or AJ
>You'reinthewrongneighborhood.png
>>21600225
I honestly used to not like Twi at all. But going back and re-watching the show (and this story of course) has really made me like her a whole lot more. I'd say she's number 2 if not my best pone now.
>>21597153
That wasbeautiful.
>>21602620>mfw I posted static gif>srsly?
>>21602631
I've noticed a number of those. Why does that happen?
>>21602657
Idk about others,but this time It was just my lazy ass, googling react gif then save-and-postwas just a static preview img.Better check that next time.
>>21602674
Bumperino
Good morning from Georgia, /mlp/. I wonder when the writefag will be back for us. I do find it strange, though, that s/he can write so much - basically all day long - and do nothing else. Does s/he even have a job?
Eh, whatever. Everyone knows the rules. Pone is above and beyond everything else in life.
>>21601844
Checked
>>21603107
In a hour or so I will start writing again,
Also I'm from europe, maybe this answers your question.
But yeah, writefagging and maybe one ot two hours of gaming are how I spent my freetime in the last days. Writing is fun.
>>21603217
Wie lange haben Sie geschrieben ? Sie tun gut , wenn Sie gerade erst begonnen .
>>21603217
Väldigt hypad inför detta!
>>21603217
Perustu kirjoitus homo :^)
>>21603314
Reading "based writfag" in another language is hilarious.
Topfuckingkek.psd
>kek
>>21603269
Meine erste wirkliche Geschichte, ausser einigen sehr kurzen Oneshots
>>21603289
>>21603314
Okay google translate gave me this ...
Very hyped before this!
and
Based on the writing gay :^)I don't know hot to feel about this one :^)
Anyways I kek'd
>>21603379
Dies ist Ihre erste Geschichte !? Süßer Jesus , weiterzumachen. Das ist außergewöhnlich gut - sogar besser als "professionell" Schreib Reisig , würde ich sagen .
Oh mien gott!
>>21603461
Cocainium...
I'm going to go wash some dishes. When I get back, there should be some more story.
Dubs demands it.
>>21603511
I'm a fucking god. I tried to aim for 511, too.
win- fucking- rar.
Be back inn 45 mins!
>>21603461
Thanks mate.
>>21603487
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TBy7jNR5tGI
>>21603511
Pic related
Shlach Li Malach!
>The credits roll and you flick the lights back on.
>But the TV's power button won't stand still..
“Uggh...”
>Come on, you stupid thing!
>You manage to focus your magic into a thin beam and hit it with it.
>At last the screen goes black.
“Hah! Lashers, what would I do without shem?!”
>Snickering anon pulls you onto his lap again.
>”Yeah, but be careful Twi. It's the only one I have.”
“What are you? The Lasher police?” you say, trying to look stern.
>Apparently this didn't work, since he laughs again.
>”Oh Twilight...”
>He runs his hand through your mane.
>”But say...”
>You lean into his touch.
>”Did you like the movie?”
>Like? You bucking loved it.
>You roll onto your back to face him.
“It wash the best movie I ever shaw in my life!”
>Pointing a hoof at his face, you continue.
“Everything was jusht sho beat- … byut- …
>”Beautiful”
“Yeah ecshactly!”
>>21603962
>Feeling that you are not being pet, you grab one of his hands and put it on your belly.
>Chuckling, he complies and begins to rub it.
“Ahhh... nishe. Where wash I?”
>”You just wanted to tell me what you liked about the movie.”
“Right! Everyshing wash perfect!”
>”What was your favourite part?”
>You think for a bit, scratching your chin.
>Wait how do you do that with a hoof?!
>Moving it closer to your face to inspect it, anon snaps his fingers.
>”Twi, focus.”
“Ah right. Shorry. I shink the part where all the unicornsh emerged from the shea! It wash just so epic to look at!”
>To emphasize your point, you begin to re-enact the scene with your hooves.
>You even try to make cool sea and battle noises.
>Anon's smile grows wider and wider.
“Ah yesh! And of courshe the animatshion and the art itshelf. Everything was sho pretty, especially the unicorn.”
>Oh yeah Amalthea, the beautiful and desirable...
>Your hooves come back down and all the joy and excitement you just felt, fade.
>You grow silent, your head turned away from him.
>And with that, his smile is gone too.
>”Twilight? Does something bother you?”
>He cups your cheek, and moves your face gently to meet your eyes.
>”You were just so happy and excited a second ago and now...”
“Anon...” you interrupt him.
“Can I ashk you a question?”
>”Of course”
>You take a deep breath.
“Do you think I'm pretty?”
A friend of mine just called and he needs helü exterminatingsome beers. So I have to go now.
Sorry mates.
But I will try to update later again tonight, since I don't have to work tomorrow.
Sorry again.
>>21604014
Ooooh cliffhanger. You dastardly devil you.
You write a cute drunk Twi
>>21603971
Incoming feels
Bumperino
>>21603971
"Do you think I'm pretty?"
Here's my personal take on this story so far (I've been here since the first thread, so I have a Ph.D in this field, according to 4chan logic)
Ok, so the question "Do you think I'm pretty?" is a great spot to start off some clop. Anon could just answer the question through actions. But the problem I see here is that this story is about Twilight having a DEPENDENCE on his jizz, yet almost a full day has passed and Twilight hasn't had the addiciton-type urge to have sex with him. If it's an addiction, it should maybe seem that way with her getting uncomfortable and itchy and all of those other symptoms of withdrawal. She should, somehow, beg and plead anon for sex, or even rape him. (Definition of rape in this context: have sex without his consent to do so)
That's not to say that I know more than you on how the story should or shouldn't be, but I'm starting to feel that this story is going farther and farther away from it's original purpose.
>>21605985
She's still in the early stages of addiction; she doesn't necessarily need to shoot up every couple of hours.
>>21605985
It's actually only been a few hours and still the same night. Try and read all the posts instead of just the story posts.
Where is writefag?
