>writer uses too many adjectives
>implying your aren't a right winged dimwitted tryhard postmodernist pesud-pleb /lit/izen
>the majority of of adjectives used are used to describe color
>writer uses too many metaphors/similes
>>8272544
Checked.
>>8272515
How do I break out of that habit? I'm bad at describing things and I don't know how to paint a clear picture without going overboard and fucking up the flow of the writing with too many adjectives
>>8272584
> I don't know how to paint a clear picture without going overboard
sorta had the same problem when I spoke (mainly when I tried to explain something, recalling a memory, etc.) someone recommended Aristotle's Oreganon. Haven't gotten to it yet but you can see for yourself if you want.
>writer uses a big word
>>8272593
I looked it up and I don't see how Oreganon could help with that problem at all.
The Greeks are important, but people are too busy jacking off to them to give actual advice sometimes
>melville's godly word variation
>except for "monomiac" which he uses literally every 2 pages
t-thanks herman
